高一英语人教版(2019)必修第二册 Unit 2 Wildlife protection 单元话题满分范文必背(word版附答案解析)

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Unit 2单元话题满分范文必背
(名校最新真题)
1.(2022·新疆·阿克苏市实验中学高一期末)假定你是李华,你们学校将举办以“Protect Wild Animals”为主题英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
1. 野生动物的现状(过度猎捕);
2. 保护建议(建保护区、提高保护意识等);
3. 美好愿景。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:自然保护区nature reserve 意识awareness
Good morning, everyone!
I’m very glad to give a speech today. The topic of my speech is…
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
2.(2021·全国·高一单元测试)最近,不少动物园都发生了动物袭击游客的事件。假设你是李华,请你就这一问题给某英文报社写一封建议信。要点如下:
1.没有受到威胁,大多数动物不会主动攻击人;
2.不要喂食或激怒动物;
3.……
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:激怒irritate
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to appeal to the visitors in the zoo to behave themselves there.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.(2021·全国·高一课时练习)以“Protect Wild Animals”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。要求内容包括下列要点,可适当增加细节,以使文章完整通顺。
1.意义:野生动物与人类的生活息息相关
2.现状:野生动物正在被过度捕杀
3.后果:a.生态平衡被破坏 b.人类受到大自然的惩罚
4.建议:a.严惩盗猎者 b.提高环保意识 c.建立自然保护区
参考词汇:自然保护区nature reserve;生态平衡the balance of nature
Protect Wild Animals
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4.(2021·浙江·高一课时练习)假定你是李华,你所在的学校正在举办“保护动物宣传周”活动,请你以保护野生动植物为主题,写一篇演讲稿,题目自拟,内容包括:
1. 目前存在的问题;
2. 保护野生动植物的意义;
3. 作为中学生,保护野生动植物的方法。
要求:
1. 词数100词左右
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数。
Dear Class
Today I’ll give a speech with the topic of
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening.
5.(2021·山东省实验中学高一阶段练习)为提高濒危野生动物保护意识,昨天你和你校部分学生参观了野生动物园。请写一篇英语日记记录此次活动。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动过程;
3.感想与评价。
要求:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thursday December 23rd, 2021 Windy
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6.(2022·江西·临川一中实验学校高一期末)假如你是李明,请给报社写一封关于拯救老虎的信,要点如下:
1. 老虎的现状(比如目前数量日趋减少等);
2. 问题出现的原因(比如人为、环境等因素);
3. 应采取的措施。
注意:1.书信必须包括所有要点,适度增添细节; 2.词数100个左右。
Dear editor,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
7.(2022·福建·高一课时练习)假设你是一名记者,采访某动物园负责人有关国宝大熊猫的情况。下面是你采访动物园负责人的谈话要点,请根据谈话要点为《中国日报》写一篇专题报道。内容如下:
1. 大熊猫是世界上的稀有动物,人们非常喜欢它;
2. 由于生态遭到破坏,加上气候变暖,大熊猫越来越少
3. 现在中国大熊猫的数量每年都在增加,其中一些已被送到国外供人们观赏;
4. 中国最大的熊猫自然公园在四川,那里有一个野生动物研究中心。科学家们希望有一天大熊猫重新生活在旷野中。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8.(2022·浙江·慈溪中学高一期末)假定你是李华,是校英文报的记者。你校在10月4日“世界动物日”那天组织了一系列相关活动。请你就此写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;2.活动内容;3.活动反响。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
ANIMAL PROTECTION ACTIVITIES HELD
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9.(2021·甘肃·兰州一中高一期末)众所周知,许多野生动物面临灭绝。请写一篇有关保护野生动物的文章。
主要内容:1. 野生动物濒临灭绝的原因;2. 拯救措施。
注意:1.词数100字左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.书写工整。
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10.(2021·河南南阳·高二阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校英语报将举办主题为“A Rare Animal in China”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文,介绍我国的一种珍稀动物。内容包括:
1. 描述该珍稀动物;
2. 该珍稀动物的现状。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Rare Animal in China
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Unit 2单元话题满分范文必背解析部分
(名校最新真题)
1.(2022·新疆·阿克苏市实验中学高一期末)假定你是李华,你们学校将举办以“Protect Wild Animals”为主题英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
1. 野生动物的现状(过度猎捕);
2. 保护建议(建保护区、提高保护意识等);
3. 美好愿景。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:自然保护区nature reserve 意识awareness
Good morning, everyone!
I’m very glad to give a speech today. The topic of my speech is…
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【答案】Good morning, everyone!
I'm very glad to give a speech today. The topic of my speech is Protect Wild Animals.
As we all know, animals also play a part in keeping the balance of nature. Unfortunately they are being over–hunted, and some of them are dying out. So it is urgent to take some measures to protect them. First, we must build nature reserves. Second, we should raise our awareness of environmental protection. To harm animals is to harm ourselves. Therefore, let's take the responsibility and do what we can to protect them. I hope in the future we can live harmoniously and happily together with animals.
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇演讲稿,演讲内容包括:野生动物的现状(过度猎捕);保护野生动物建议(建保护区、提高保护意识等);美好愿景。词数80左右。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文——演讲稿。
要点:1.野生动物的现状(过度猎捕);2.保护野生动物建议(建保护区、提高保护意识等);3. 美好愿景。
结构:总分。
第二步:列提纲
一、框架1、演讲稿一开始就开宗明义,说明演讲的主题,然后谈由于过度猎捕野生动物的现状,接着给出至少两个保护野生动物的建议,最后展望美好的愿景。
2、详细谈保护野生动物的建议: 1)建野生动物保护区;2)提高人们的保护意识;3)出台更严厉的法律来制裁猎捕野生动物的行为。(题目要求至少给两个建议,这个是备选)
3、希望人和动物和谐共处,相互依存。
二、段落主题句
The topic of my speech is Protect Wild Animals.
It is known to all of us that animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.
But ,some of them are dying out.
We should take some measures to protect them.
I hope in the future we can live harmoniously and happily together with animals.
第三步:展开
用说明法将主题句展开。
第四步: 润色修改
【点睛】范文格式正确,完成了试题规定的任务,覆盖所有内容要点,应用了很多的语法结构和词汇:状语从句:As we all know, animals also play a part in keeping the balance of nature.,宾语从句:I hope in the future we can live harmoniously and happily together with animals.,形式主语:So it is urgent to take some measures to protect them.,非谓语动词:To harm animals is to harm ourselves.等,这篇范文的另一亮点是:句子间的承接词,First,Second,Therefore,它们的使用使整篇文章的层次分明,条理清晰,结构流畅。祈使句let's take the responsibility and do what we can to protect them.的使用符合演讲稿的特点,能够渲染气氛,使语言更有力。句子they are being over–hunted, and some of them are dying out.中现在进行时的使用突出了野生动物保护的迫切性,也给文章增色,完全达到了预期的写作目的。
2.(2021·全国·高一单元测试)最近,不少动物园都发生了动物袭击游客的事件。假设你是李华,请你就这一问题给某英文报社写一封建议信。要点如下:
1.没有受到威胁,大多数动物不会主动攻击人;
2.不要喂食或激怒动物;
3.……
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:激怒irritate
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to appeal to the visitors in the zoo to behave themselves there.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to appeal to the visitors in the zoo to behave themselves there.
Recently, there are often reports in the newspaper that visitors got hurt by the animals in the zoo. As we all know, most animals won’t attack people unless they feel threatened. In most cases, visitors are hurt by animals when visitors are making some improper behaviour. It’s obviously wrong that visitors imitate these animals, get too close to them or feed them without permission. Therefore visitors sometimes should be responsible for these incidents because they don’t know how to get on with animals.
I do hope visitors can keep in mind that they should obey the rules while in the zoo.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封建议信:最近,不少动物园都发生了动物袭击游客的事件。假设你是李华,请你就这一问题给某英文报社写一封建议信。要点如下:1.没有受到威胁,大多数动物不会主动攻击人;2.不要喂食或激怒动物;3.……。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:irritate(激怒),attack(袭击),threatened(受到威胁的),improper(不适当的),imitate(模仿),feed(喂食),permission(允许)及responsible(有责任的)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意该要的词数要求、主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。
本文内容完整,层次分明,结构紧凑,表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【点睛】范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有without permission(未经允许),be responsible for(对……有责任),keep in mind (牢记),obey the rules(遵守秩序)以及get on with(与……相处),而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As we all know, most animals won’t attack people unless they feel threatened.”,同位语从句“Recently, there are often reports in the newspaper that visitors got hurt by the animals in the zoo.”,宾语从句“I do hope visitors can keep in mind that they should obey the rules while in the zoo.”,状语从句“Therefore visitors sometimes should be responsible for these incidents because they don’t know how to get on with animals.”,形式主语“It’s obviously wrong that visitors imitate these animals, get too close to them or feed them without permission.”,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。
3.(2021·全国·高一课时练习)以“Protect Wild Animals”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。要求内容包括下列要点,可适当增加细节,以使文章完整通顺。
1.意义:野生动物与人类的生活息息相关
2.现状:野生动物正在被过度捕杀
3.后果:a.生态平衡被破坏 b.人类受到大自然的惩罚
4.建议:a.严惩盗猎者 b.提高环保意识 c.建立自然保护区
参考词汇:自然保护区nature reserve;生态平衡the balance of nature
Protect Wild Animals
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【答案】Protect Wild Animals
Wild animals are man’s close friends. They not only provide us with fun but also play a key role in keeping the balance of nature.
Unfortunately, they are being over-hunted, and some species are dying out. If it goes on like this, man is to be punished.
To stay away from the seemingly faraway disaster, man has to do something. First, effective laws must be passed to give the illegal hunters proper punishment. Second, people’s awareness of environment protection should be raised to a higher level. Third, we must setup nature reserves to provide the animals with comfort-able habitats.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生以“Protect Wild Animals”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文,内容包括1.意义:野生动物与人类的生活息息相关;2.现状:野生动物正在被过度捕杀;3.后果:a.生态平衡被破坏;b.人类受到大自然的惩罚;4.建议:a.严惩盗猎者; b.提高环保意识;c.建立自然保护区。
【详解】词汇积累
提供:provide→supply
有效的:effective→valid
灭绝:die out→become extinct
远离:stay away from→keep away from
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Wild animals are man’s close friends. They not only provide us with fun but also play a key role in keeping the balance of nature.
拓展句:Wild animals are man’s close friends, who not only provide us with fun but also play a key role in keeping the balance of nature.
【点睛】[高分句型1] They not only provide us with fun but also play a key role in keeping the balance of nature.(运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] If it goes on like this, man is to be punished.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4.(2021·浙江·高一课时练习)假定你是李华,你所在的学校正在举办“保护动物宣传周”活动,请你以保护野生动植物为主题,写一篇演讲稿,题目自拟,内容包括:
1. 目前存在的问题;
2. 保护野生动植物的意义;
3. 作为中学生,保护野生动植物的方法。
要求:
1. 词数100词左右
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数。
Dear Class
Today I’ll give a speech with the topic of
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Thanks for your listening.
【答案】Dear class
Today I’ll give a speech with the topic of “Animals need our protection”. As we all know, wild animals have been killed for their fur, feathers and meat or just for fun. As a result many species have been extinct forever.
Actually wild animals play an important part in the balance of nature and biological diversity. We humans can’t survive without wildlife. Destroying one species of animals can bring about many problems. For example, when farmers kill large numbers of hawks, stores of corns and grains will be destroyed by rats.
Luckily it’s not too late for us to help save wild animals. What we students can do is change our way of life. We shouldn’t buy animals’ fur or other animal products because when the buying stops, the killing can too. Besides, we should raise public awareness of protecting wildlife. We should live in harmony with nature.
Thanks for your listening.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以保护野生动植物为主题,写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成时。
结构:三段式
第一段写目前存在的问题;第二段写保护野生动植物的意义;第三段写保护野生动植物的方法。
要求:
1. 目前存在的问题;
2. 保护野生动植物的意义;
3. 作为中学生,保护野生动植物的方法。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
give a speech, with the topic of “Animals need our protection”, for fun, play an important part in, can’t survive without wildlife, bring about, large numbers of, too late for us to do, change our way of life, raise public awareness of, protect wildlife, in harmony with.
第三步:连词成句
1.I’ll give a speech with the topic of “Animals need our protection”.
2.Wild animals have been killed for their fur, feathers and meat or just for fun.
3.Many species have been extinct forever.
4.Wild animals play an important part in the balance of nature and biological diversity.
5.We humans can’t survive without wildlife.
6.Destroying one species of animals can bring about many problems.
7.When farmers kill large numbers of hawks, stores of corns and grains will be destroyed by rats.
8.It’s not too late for us to help save wild animals.
9.What we students can do is change our way of life.
10.We should raise public awareness of protecting wildlife.
11.We should live in harmony with nature.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:For example, Besides
2.表因果关系:because, As a result
3.表衔接关系:As we all know, Actually, Luckily
【点睛】[高分句型1]For example, when farmers kill large numbers of hawks, stores of corns and grains will be destroyed by rats.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]What we students can do is change our way of life.(运用了what引导主语从句)
5.(2021·山东省实验中学高一阶段练习)为提高濒危野生动物保护意识,昨天你和你校部分学生参观了野生动物园。请写一篇英语日记记录此次活动。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动过程;
3.感想与评价。
要求:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thursday December 23rd, 2021 Windy
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【答案】
Thursday December 23rd, 2021 Windy
In order to develop a sense of protecting wild animals, yesterday some students of our school visited the wildlife park.
We first enjoyed a wonderful video about safety rules and picutres of various wild animals. Later, we entered the wild area by bus to see wild animals, such as lions and tigers. For most of us, it was the first time we had been so close to wild animals. It was really thrilling.
Through this activity, we’ve learned more about wild animals and raised awareness of preserving endangered animals. I sincerely hope to live on this earth with diverse creatures.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语日记记录一下参观野生动物园的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
为了:in order to → in an effort to
通过:through → by way of
提高意识:raise awareness → enhance awareness
多样化的:diverse→ a variety of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:For most of us, it was the first time we had been so close to wild animals.
拓展句:For most of us, it was the first time to be so close to wild animals.
【点睛】[高分句型1]For most of us, it was the first time we had been so close to wild animals.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句以及形容词短语)
[高分句型2]Through this activity, we’ve learned more about wild animals and raised awareness of preserving endangered animals.(运用介词短语和动词短语相结合)
6.(2022·江西·临川一中实验学校高一期末)假如你是李明,请给报社写一封关于拯救老虎的信,要点如下:
1. 老虎的现状(比如目前数量日趋减少等);
2. 问题出现的原因(比如人为、环境等因素);
3. 应采取的措施。
注意:1.书信必须包括所有要点,适度增添细节; 2.词数100个左右。
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear editor,
I'm a student of Senior One in a middle school. I'm writing to you because I want humans to save the endangered tigers. It is said that there are only about 400 tigers left in our country.
As is known to us all, tigers are protected animals. However, some people kill them in order to make money. Besides, too many trees have been cut down, destroying their habitats. Therefore, I hold the viewpoint that the government should take necessary measures and pass laws to protect tigers and punish the hunters.
I do hope we all try our best to make our earth pleasant and peaceful, not only for the wildlife but also for our human beings.
Yours,
Li Ming
【分析】本题属于提纲类作文。
【详解】提纲要点已给出:假如你是李明,请给报社写一封关于拯救老虎的信,要点包括:1. 老虎的现状(比如目前数量日趋减少等);2. 问题出现的原因(比如人为、环境等因素);3. 应采取的措施。写作时要注意要点齐全,内容完整充实,不要直接翻译,适度增添细节。
【点睛】本文内容完整,充实,时态应用得当。文中采用了多种句型句式,如It is said that ….,not only… but also ….,I hold the viewpoint that…,I do hope…等;恰当的短语,如:take necessary measures ,try our best, to make our earth pleasant and peaceful等,以及连接性词汇和结构,如As is known to us all, However, Besides, Therefore等的使用,使文章条理清晰,连接紧凑。
7.(2022·福建·高一课时练习)假设你是一名记者,采访某动物园负责人有关国宝大熊猫的情况。下面是你采访动物园负责人的谈话要点,请根据谈话要点为《中国日报》写一篇专题报道。内容如下:
1. 大熊猫是世界上的稀有动物,人们非常喜欢它;
2. 由于生态遭到破坏,加上气候变暖,大熊猫越来越少
3. 现在中国大熊猫的数量每年都在增加,其中一些已被送到国外供人们观赏;
4. 中国最大的熊猫自然公园在四川,那里有一个野生动物研究中心。科学家们希望有一天大熊猫重新生活在旷野中。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】The panda is one of the rarest animals. People in the world like it very much. There used to be many pandas in China long ago. As the balance of nature is destroyed and the weather is getting warmer and warmer, the population of pandas has reduced sharply. But at present, the number of pandas in China is increasing due to the protective measures we have taken in the past decades. There are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.
Nowadays, the biggest nature park for pandas in China is in Sichuan. There is a research centre for wildlife there. Scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again.
【分析】这是一篇新闻报道。题干中较详细的列出了四点写作要点,同学们稍加发挥即可。
【详解】第1步:审题。确定时态和人称。由于这是一篇介绍大熊猫现状的新闻报道,所以人称以第三人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。
第2步:确定关键词(组),提炼写作要点。如:one of the rarest animals (最稀有的动物之一),the balance of nature(自然平衡),sharply(极速地),the protective measures (保护措施),nature park for pandas(熊猫自然公园)等。
第3步:对写作要点遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步: 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,段落清晰,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。全文还使用了不少高级词汇与句式。例如:第一段第三句使用了there be句型;第一段第四句使用了as引导的时间状语从句;第一段第六句使用了结果状语从句。第一段第五句中介词短语due to用来引导原因,使用的也很巧妙。第二段第三句还使用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。且全文语句间过渡自然,为文章增色添彩。
8.(2022·浙江·慈溪中学高一期末)假定你是李华,是校英文报的记者。你校在10月4日“世界动物日”那天组织了一系列相关活动。请你就此写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;2.活动内容;3.活动反响。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
ANIMAL PROTECTION ACTIVITIES HELD
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【答案】ANIMAL PROTECTION ACTIVITIES HELD
To raise our awareness of protecting animals, our school held diverse activities on October 4th, “World Animal Day”.
A photo exhibition attracted a number of students, showing us many animals are becoming endangered species for various reasons like illegal hunting and pollution. More inspiring was a speech contest where participants eagerly talked about how we individuals could make a difference.
The activities turned out a great success. As one student put it, “It’s really distressing to see the animals dying out at such an alarming rate. It’s time we should spare no effort to protect them.”
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校在10月4日“世界动物日”那天组织了一系列相关活动。请考生就此写一篇新闻报道介绍活动目的,内容及反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
唤起: raise→arouse
各种各样的:diverse/ various→kinds of
比赛:contest →competition
令人担忧的:alarming→worrying
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To raise our awareness of protecting animals, our school held diverse activities on October 4th, “World Animal Day”.
拓展句:To raise our awareness of protecting animals, our school held diverse activities whose theme is “World Animal Day” on October 4th.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
More inspiring was a speech contest where participants eagerly talked about how we individuals could make a difference. (运用了where引导的定语从句和how引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
It’s time we should spare no effort to protect them.(it’s time句型使用了虚拟语气)
9.(2021·甘肃·兰州一中高一期末)众所周知,许多野生动物面临灭绝。请写一篇有关保护野生动物的文章。
主要内容:1. 野生动物濒临灭绝的原因;2. 拯救措施。
注意:1.词数100字左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.书写工整。
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【答案】Many wild animals are in danger of dying out, because the environment they are living in has changed greatly. For example, with the development of cities, the serious pollution affects their living areas, which have become narrower and narrower. Many of the wild animals, now are facing food crisis. At the same time, man is killing off species just for their fur, skin, horns, teeth and meat.
To protect wild animals, First, people should raise the protection awareness. Second, measures of the following should be taken: pollution standards are made to keep down poisons in the air; killing wild animals is prohibited; national parks should be set up as wild life’reserves.
Only when we take some measures can wild animals be preserved.
【分析】本文书面表达属于说明文,要求写一篇保护野生动物的文章。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文是一篇说明文:众所周知,许多野生动物面临灭绝。请写一篇有关保护野生动物的文章。主要内容:1. 野生动物濒临灭绝的原因;2. 拯救措施。
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:in danger of dying out(面临灭绝);with the development of(随着---的发展);become narrower and narrower.(变得越来越窄)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。Many wild animals are in danger of dying out, because the environment they are living in has changed greatly.句中使用原因状语从句和定语从句;with the development of cities, the serious pollution affects their living areas, which have become narrower and narrower.句中which引导非限制性定语从句;To protect wild animals, First, people should raise the protection awareness.动词不定式作目的状语;Only when we take some measures can wild animals be preserved.句中使用部分倒装。
10.(2021·河南南阳·高二阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校英语报将举办主题为“A Rare Animal in China”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文,介绍我国的一种珍稀动物。内容包括:
1. 描述该珍稀动物;
2. 该珍稀动物的现状。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Rare Animal in China
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【答案】 A Rare Animal in China
The most famous rare animal in China is the national treasure, the giant panda, which used to nearly die out. Happily, our government has taken timely measures to save it. We have set up giant panda research centers as well as reserves.
Giant pandas' bodies are black and white, moving heavily and slowly. They feed on bamboo. They look lovely and we like them very much.
There is a giant panda research center in Sichuan Province. A nature reserve has also been set up to ensure their safety in the wild. Giant pandas are also sent to many countries as ambassadors of friendship. May the lovely animals be with us forever.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,假定你是李华,你校英语报将举办主题为“A Rare Animal in China”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文,介绍我国的一种珍稀动物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
灭绝:become extinct→die out
建立:found→set up
采取措施:take actions to→take measures to
以……为食:live on→feed on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A nature reserve has also been set up to ensure their safety in the wild.
拓展句:A nature reserve has also been set up, whose aim is to ensure pandas' safety in the wild.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The most famous rare animal in China is the national treasure, the giant panda, which used to nearly die out. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Giant pandas' bodies are black and white, moving heavily and slowly. (运用了现在分词作状语)