中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 4 Amazing art
Period 5 Writing
1.Peking Opera, which is distinguished as the essence of Chinese culture, has a long history.
京剧,被誉为中国文化的精髓,有着悠久的历史。
2.Regarded as one of the four classics in Chinese literature, the book possesses great wisdom and the essence of the Chinese language, which makes it worthwhile to read.
作为中国文学的四大名著之一,这本书包含巨大的智慧和中国语言的精髓,值得一读。
介绍一件艺术作品
文体感知
用英语介绍一件艺术作品,属于说明文。说明文是一种常见文体,它以简明的文字介绍事物的形状、构造、变化、功能、特征等。介绍一件艺术作品时,一般可分为三部分:
第一部分:作品简介。包括创作者、创作背景、材质、特点等。
第二部分:具体描述。在描述这件艺术作品时,我们要注意从作品的细节入手,按照空间顺序进行描述。要让读者通过描述,在脑海中呈现对作品的感知。
第三部分:评价。这一部分发表对这件艺术作品的评价,两至三句即可。
增分佳句
一、作品简介
1.It is an old painting/a sculpture...drawn/made by...in...
2.It was completed in...
3.This painting was a masterpiece by...
二、具体描述
1.It measures.../It is...in length/width/height.
2.The picture describes an imaginary place, using...so that...
3.On the top of the..., you can see...
4.At the bottom of the..., there is a(n)..., which...
5.This painting describes...so vividly that...
三、评价
1.It has a great influence on...
2.It is regarded/considered as...
3.Visitors all sing high praises for it.
4.You can't miss it when you pay a visit to the museum.
5.It is regarded as one of the precious treasures to the study of Chinese history.
6.As far as I'm concerned, this painting represents...
写作要求
为了锻炼同学们的口语能力及增加对艺术作品的了解,口语课上老师要求同学们用英语介绍一下梵·高创作的《向日葵》(画作见课本P47)。
要点如下:1.作品及创作背景;2.画面介绍及作者表达的思想;3.你对该作品的看法。
注意:词数80左右。
审题谋篇
第一步:审题构思很关键
第二步:核心词汇想周全
1.masterpiece n. 代表作
2.extend__one's__welcome__to 对……表示某人的欢迎
3.range__from...to... 从……到……变动
4.passion__for__life 对生活的热爱
5.a__sense__of__beauty 美感
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.《向日葵》是梵·高的一件代表作。这幅作品于1889年创作于法国阿尔勒。
Sunflowers is one__masterpiece__by Van Gogh.This work was completed in Arles, France in 1889.
2.《向日葵》现已跻身于全球最著名、最珍贵的艺术作品的行列。
Sunflowers is now among the__world's__most__well known__and__precious__works__of__art.
3.《向日葵》以黄色调为主。
Sunflowers is mainly yellow__in__tone.
4.这些花的颜色从亮黄色到褐黄色不等,说明这些花处于不同的生命阶段。
The colors of the flowers range__from__bright__yellows__to__brownish__yellows,__which shows that the flowers are at different stages of life.
5.作品以饱满而纯净的黄色调,展示了画家内心对好朋友保罗(Paul)的欢迎及对生活的热爱。
With a full and pure yellow tone, the work extends__the__painter's__welcome__to his friend Paul and shows__his__passion__for__life.
6.总之,梵·高的《向日葵》带给我们美感和希望。
In__short,__Sunflowers by Van Gogh shows__us__a__sense__of__beauty__and__hope.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用非限制性定语从句升级第三步中的句1
Sunflowers__is__one__masterpiece__by__Van__Gogh,__which__was__completed__in__Arles,__France__in__1889.
2.用现在分词短语作状语合并第三步中的句3和句4
Sunflowers__is__mainly__yellow__in__tone,__ranging__from__bright__yellows__to__brownish__yellows,__which__shows__that__the__flowers__are__at__different__stages__of__life.
第五步:过渡衔接连成篇
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One possible version:
Sunflowers is one masterpiece by Van Gogh, which was completed in Arles, France in 1889.Sunflowers is now among the world's most well known and precious works of art.
Sunflowers is mainly yellow in tone, ranging from bright yellows to brownish yellows, which shows that the flowers are at different stages of life.With a full and pure yellow tone, the work extends the painter's welcome to his friend Paul and shows his passion for life.
In short, Sunflowers by Van Gogh shows us a sense of beauty and hope.
假定你是某中学学生李华,一天你和同学在参观卢浮宫的时候,看到了著名画家达·芬奇(Da Vinci)创作的《蒙娜丽莎》。你的同学请你用英语介绍一下这幅画。
注意:词数80左右。
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One possible version:
Mona Lisa, one of the treasures in Louvre Museum in Paris, is a well known example of Da Vinci's extraordinary paintings.
In the painting, a beautiful woman is sitting elegantly with an unsearchable smile, which is considered to be one of the most mysterious smiles in the world.Some people thought she smiled because of her kindness while others thought she smiled because of sadness.In my view,whatever her smile means, the fact is that she's graceful and particular.
In conclusion, it was a blessing that we could have such a good painter and we could enjoy such a wonderful painting.
与“笑”有关的表达
1.laugh heartily/smile broadly 开怀大笑
2.force/squeeze a smile 强颜欢笑
3.smile with relief 宽慰地笑
4.flash a bright smile 绽放出灿烂的笑容
5.smile sweetly/faintly 嫣然一笑/淡然一笑
6.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
她脸上的笑容像钻石
一样闪闪发光。
7.Laughter lingered around the room. 笑声在房间里萦绕。
8.His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
9.A wild joy took hold of her. 一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
10.Joy welled up inside her. 她心中涌起喜悦。
11.I was wild with joy. 我欣喜若狂。
12.I was pleased beyond description. 我高兴得难以形容。
13.She wore a shining smile on her face.
她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
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