高中英语外研版（2019）必修三 Unit 5 Period 5学案

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Unit 5　What an adventure！
Period 5　Writing
1.Of all types of sports in the world, skiing is my favourite.
在世界上所有的运动中，滑雪是我的最爱。
2.Travel is a way to broaden our horizons, through which we can learn about different cultures of the world.
旅游能拓宽我们的视野，通过旅游，我们可以了解世界上不同的文化。
探险类记叙文
文体感知
探险类记叙文要求学生能够根据命题的要求，记叙发生在自己或他人身上的一次探险经历。该类记叙文写作步骤如下：
1．首段通常用两三句话，交代时间、地点和内容。
2．主体段应详细说明探险的经过或过程。
3．尾段应对此次探险做出评价并表达感受。
增分佳句
一、夺人眼球开头句
1．I went to...by train/bus.
2．That was my first visit to...
3．As I was eager to know about...，I went on an adventure...
二、亮点出彩篇中句
1．On the way to..., we...
2．After...hours' riding...
3．We did not stop enjoying ourselves until...
4．I felt so excited to see so many...
三、韵味无穷结尾句
1．We had a good time/enjoyed ourselves.
2．This is unusual/unforgettable...
3．I'll never forget...
4．I will remember...forever.
5．This was a real life changing experience that I would never forget.
6．From then on, I was becoming more courageous...
写作要求
假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你昨天参加了某旅行社组织的西海海底探险旅行。请用英语写一篇日记，记述这次探险旅行，内容包括：
1．时间、地点；
2．探险项目：深海潜水、观察海洋生物、海底古文明遗址探险等；
3．你的感受。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
参考词汇：探险(expedition)
审题谋篇
第一步：审题构思很关键
第二步：核心词汇想周全
1．take__part__in　　　　　　　　 参加
2．leave__a__deep__impression__on 留下深刻印象
3．ruins 废墟
4．ancient__civilization 古代文明
5．wonder 好奇；想知道
6．broaden__one's__horizon 开阔视野
第三步：由词扩句雏形现
1．昨天，我参加了一家旅行社组织的西海海底探险活动。
Yesterday, I took__part__in__an__underwater__expedition__organized by a travel agency in the West Sea.
2．它给我留下了深刻的印象。
It left__a__deep__impression__on me.
3．我们有许多令人兴奋的活动。其中之一是深海潜水。
We had many__exciting__activities. One of them was deep sea diving.
4．在潜水期间，我们享受海底之美并观看海洋生物。
During the diving, we enjoyed__the__undersea__beauty__and watched the marine life.
5．我们从未如此近距离地看到海洋生物。
We__had__never__seen__the marine life so close.
6．给我印象最深的是对海底古文明遗址的探索。
What__impressed__me__most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea.
7．当我看到那些废墟时，我不禁想知道古代人们的生活是什么样子的。
When I saw those ruins, I couldn't__help__wondering__what__the__ancient__people's__life__was__like．
8．这次旅行不仅帮助我们了解了更多关于海洋的知识，还拓宽了我们的视野。
This travel broadened__our__horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea.
第四步：句式升级造亮点
1．用which引导的定语从句改写第三步中的句1和句2
Yesterday,__I__took__part__in__an__underwater__expedition__organized__by__a__travel__agency__in__the__West__Sea,__which__left__a__deep__impression__on__me.
2．用定语从句合并第三步中的句3
We__had__many__exciting__activities,__one__of__which__was__deep__sea__diving.
3．用定语从句合并第三步中的句4和句5
During__the__diving,__we__enjoyed__the__undersea__beauty__and__watched__the__marine__life__which__we__had__never__seen__so__close.
4．用现在分词短语作状语改写第三步中的句7
Seeing__those__ruins,__I__couldn't__help__wondering__what__the__ancient__people's__life__was__like.
第五步：过渡衔接连成篇
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One possible version：
Yesterday, I took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea, which left a deep impression on me.
We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving. During the diving, we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life which we had never seen so close. What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea. Seeing those ruins, I couldn't help wondering what the ancient people's life was like.
In my view, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea.
假定你是李华，今年暑假去青岛旅游，第一次潜水的经历让你很激动。请你根据下面的提示，介绍你的这次潜水经历。
1．在海底你看到了很多美好的东西；
2．这次潜水带给你的感受。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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One possible version：
This summer holiday I went to Qingdao and went diving for the first time in my life, which became the most exciting thing I had ever done.
The first thing I became aware of was all the vivid colors surrounding me. What impressed me most were the fantastic corals which are shaped like fans, plates and the branches of trees. However, there were other dangerous creatures that I wasn't permitted to get too close to, such as sharks.
From the experience, I realize that the amazing underwater world is waiting for us to explore.
1．与“疑惑”有关的表达
at a loss　　　　　　　　　　　 迷茫
mind goes blank 脑子一片空白
be puzzled/confused 迷惑不解
with a blank expression on one's face 一脸茫然地
2．与“感激”有关的表达
be grateful to sb.for sth. 因某事感激某人
be overwhelmed with gratitude 感激不已
express one's gratitude/thanks to 向……表达某人的感激
appreciate 感激
3．与头部动作有关的表达
lower/bend/bow one's head 低头
wag/shake one's head 摇头
raise one's head 抬头
nod one's head 点头
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