高中英语外研版（2019）必修三 Unit 6 Period 5 学案

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Unit 6　Disaster and hope
Period 5　Writing
1.So far, the earthquake has killed about 100 people and has left about 30 injured.
到目前为止，地震已造成大约100人遇难，30人受伤。
2.No one will forget the Tangshan Earthquake in 1976, which caused extreme suffering to the people of the city.
没有人会忘记1976年的唐山大地震，它给这个城市的人带来了极大的痛苦。
安全指南
文体感知
安全指南要求学生根据所给的情况，为读者提出若干条实用建议。写此类文章时，通常要包括以下方面：
1．写作背景及写作目的；
2．具体建议(至少三条)。
由于此类文章陈述的内容都与现在的情况有关，因此，文章的时态应以一般现在时为主。
增分佳句
一、夺人眼球开头句
1．Natural disasters frequently take place on earth.
2．Therefore, I'm writing to offer some important tips to protect you from possible injuries.
3．Therefore, I'm writing to you for the purpose of telling you some practical measures to protect you in case of possible dangers.
4．Here, I'd like to offer you some advice/tips on how to...
5．Here is my advice on how to...
二、亮点出彩篇中句
1．Here are some measures for...
2．It is suggested that...
3．It is recommended that...
4．The first thing to do is...
5．We ought to/We'd better/We should...
6．It is high time that we did...
7．We are supposed to do...
8．Make sure that...
9．Stay away from...
10．It is important (not) to do...
三、韵味无穷结尾句
1．Therefore, we should realize the importance of...
2．Do remember (not) to do...
3．If we...we are confident that...
4．On the whole, we should try our best to do...
写作要求
假如你是李华，在“国际减轻自然灾害日”到来之际，学校英文版校报正在征集关于“地震逃生知识”的稿件，请你写一篇地震的安全指南并投稿。要点包括：
地震发生前要做的事情 1.平时多了解地震方面的知识；2．物品摆放有序，保障安全出口畅通
地震发生时要做的事情 同学之间要互相照顾，前后要保持一定距离，并在老师的指导下有序地撤离(evacuate)
地震发生时不能做的事情 切记绝不要匆忙地乱跑，尤其是不要急于涌向楼梯口，这样做容易造成踩踏事件(stampede)
注意：词数80左右。
审题谋篇
第一步：审题构思很关键
第二步：核心词汇想周全
1．learn__about　　　　　　　　　 了解……
2．keep__things__in__order 物品摆放有序
3．take__care__of 照顾
4．in__a__hurry 匆忙
5．the__stairway__entrance 楼梯口
6．cause v. 造成
第三步：由词扩句雏形现
1．假设我们正在上课，突然发生地震了，我们该怎么办？下面是一些地震安全技巧。
What should we do if an__earthquake__suddenly__strikes__when we are in class Here are some earthquake safety tips.
2．地震发生前，不仅要多了解地震方面的知识，也要注意物品摆放有序以保障安全出口畅通。
We should learn__more__about the earthquake knowledge and we should keep__things__in__order__to ensure a smooth exit before an earthquake.
3．同学之间要互相照顾，前后要保持一定距离，并有序地撤离。
We should take__care__of__each__other. We should keep__some__distance back and forth and evacuate orderly.
4．切记绝不要匆忙乱跑，尤其是不要急于涌向楼梯口，这样做容易造成踩踏事件。
Do remember not to__run__in__a__hurry especially do not be eager to__rush__to__the__stairway__entrance,__and this is__easy__to__cause__a__stampede．
第四步：句式升级造亮点
1．用“not only...but also...”及倒装句升级第三步中的句2
Not__only__should__we__learn__more__about__the__earthquake__knowledge__but__also__we__should__keep__things__in__order__to__ensure__a__smooth__exit__before__an__earthquake.
2．用分词作状语结构升级第三步中的句3
We__should__take__care__of__each__other,__keeping__some__distance__back__and__forth__and__evacuating__orderly.
3．用非限制性定语从句升级第三步中的句4
Do__remember__not__to__run__in__a__hurry__especially__do__not__be__eager__to__rush__to__the__stairway__entrance,__which__is__easy__to__cause__a__stampede.
第五步：过渡衔接连成篇
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One possible version：
What should we do if an earthquake suddenly strikes when we are in class Here are some earthquake safety tips.
Not only should we learn more about the earthquake knowledge but also we should keep things in order to ensure a smooth exit before an earthquake. When the earthquake happens，we should take care of each other, keeping some distance back and forth and evacuating orderly.
Do remember not to run in a hurry especially do not be eager to rush to the stairway entrance, which is easy to cause a stampede.
假设你是李华，你们学校的英语网站正面向全校学生征集有关安全指南的英文稿件。请你给该网站投稿，介绍交通事故的急救常识。
内容包括：
1．首先保持镇静；
2．检查伤者的呼吸情况，若呼吸困难要实施人工呼吸；
3．如果伤者有出血情况，要用布按压止血，然后等候救护车及警察的帮助。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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One possible version：
First Aid for Accidents
If you happen to witness an accident, what should you do to save other people's lives Here are some rules that you can follow.
Firstly, you must stay calm and call the police and an ambulance. Speak to the person to find out as much as you can about his injuries. Next, pay attention to the person's breathing. If necessary, use the mouth to mouth technique to give immediate assistance. Besides, if the injured person is bleeding, press a clean towel or cloth onto his wound. Finally, stay with the injured person and comfort him until the arrival of the police and ambulance.
1．与“愤怒”有关的表达
eyes burning　　　　　　　　　　 眼睛冒火
flush with anger 脸气得通红
anger boils over sb. 某人怒气冲天
glare at sb. 怒视某人
2．与“哭”有关的表达
tears spring to one's eyes 眼含泪水
tears break free 泪流满面
close to tears 快要哭了
hold back one's tears 忍住泪水
tears blur one's eyes/vision 泪水模糊了视线
be moved to tears 感动得流泪
3．与“看”有关的表达
stare at 盯着
glimpse at 瞥一眼
glance at 扫视
catch sight of 看到
look around 环顾
look down 俯视
look through 浏览
look into one's eyes 直视某人的眼睛
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