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Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.
Section B (3a-3b)
Writing
Let’s enjoy and talk.
It is a song that/which….
What kind of music is it
Country music.
Country music brings us back to the “good old days” when people were kind to each other and trusted one another. It reminds us that the best things in life are free---laughter,
friends, family, and the beauty of nature and the countryside.
It is a song that/which ____________________________.
brings us back to the “good old days”
reminds us that the best things in life
are free.
is about laughter, friends, family and
the beauty of nature and the countryside
What do you sense when you listen to country music
sense a strong sadness and pain
sense a strong love that the nature shows to us
sense a strong homesickness
sense a strong happiness/tiredness/ shyness…
sense bravery/energy/courage(勇气)/encouragement…
What kind of music do you prefer
What do you sense when you listen to...
What's your favorite song
Who was it sung by
dance music
country music
folk music
pop music
children's music
Writing Tip 1: before writing, ask some questions about details.(写作前，补充细节的问题)
My favorite music
What do you think of it
The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me. The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. The piece had a simple name, Erquan Yingyue (Moon Reflected on Second Spring), but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I've ever heard. The erhu sounded so sad that I almost cried along with it as I listened. The music was written by Abing, a folk musician who was born in the city of Wuxi.
Its sad beauty not only paints a picture of Abing's own life but also makes people recall their deepest wounds from their own sad or painful experiences.
Sad but Beautiful
Let's enjoy!
supporting details
(细节)
topic sentence
(主题句)
Supporting details can be examples, reasons, opinions or detailed information.
The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me. The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. The piece had a simple name, Erquan Yingyue (Moon Reflected on Second Spring), but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I've ever heard. The erhu sounded so sad that I almost cried along with it as I listened. The music was written by Abing, a folk musician who was born in the city of Wuxi.
Its sad beauty not only paints a picture of Abing's own life but also makes people recall their deepest wounds from their own sad or painful experiences.
Sad but Beautiful
Let's enjoy!
Attributive clauses
(定语从句)
Writing Tip 2: linking words and clauses can make the sentences more beautiful.
(使用连词和从句能让句子更加优美)
Passive voice
(被动语态)
The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me. The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. The piece had a simple name, Erquan Yingyue (Moon Reflected on Second Spring),
The erhu sounded sad I almost cried along with it as I listened. The music was written by Abing a folk musician who was born in the city of Wuxi
Its sad beauty not only paints a picture of Abing's own life but also makes people recall their deepest wounds from their own sad or painful experiences.
Write your own sentence:
Kung Fu Panda was one of the most interesting movies that I've ever watched.
Let's try!
but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I've ever heard.
Write your own sentence:
The book Harry Potter was so amazing that I lost myself as I read it.
so
that
Let's discuss!
I like… because …
It was...by...
When I watched it, I felt….
sensed….
I think you should watch it too because
My favorite movie is...
Movie
Director: James Cameron
Main characters: Rose and Jack
There is such a film that especially moved me a lot. It's called Titanic. The movie was strangely romantic but sad . Under the
romance and sadness I sensed a strong love and bravery. It was one of the most moving movies that I've ever watched. It was so sad that I cried as I watched the ending. It was directed by James Camera.
The movie is about a young poor artist called Jack who fell in
love with Rose in Titanic. But one night,Titanic hit an iceburg. They encouraged each other never to give up, and Jack told Rose to continue to live bravely in the face of danger.
When I watch it, I feel very sad and painful. I like the movies that have good stories. I think you should watch it too because it is a great movie that can touch the hearts of people.
topic sentence
(主题句)
supporting details
(细节)
There is such a film that especially moved me a lot. It's called Titanic. The movie was strangely romantic but sad . Under the
romance and sadness I sensed a strong love and bravery. It was one of the most moving movies that I've ever watched. It was so sad that I cried as I watched the ending. It was directed by James Camera.
The movie is about a young poor artist called Jack fell in
love with Rose in Titanic. But one night,Titanic hit an iceburg. They encouraged each other never to give up, and Jack told Rose to continue to live bravely in the face of danger.
When I watch it, I feel very sad and painful. I like the movies that have good stories. I think you should watch it too because it is a great movie that can touch the hearts of people.
linking words
Attributive clauses
(定语从句)
Checklist (评价表)
In the passage, you should
1.have a topic sentence.(中心句)
2.use details to support it. (facts,examples or feeling)
(使用细节描写:如事实，例子或情感)
3.use proper linking words(使用连词)
4.use beautiful sentences (句型多样)
5.have a good handwriting.
(书写规范， 80--100 words)
Let's remember!
话题写作:
某英文报正在举办主题为 “我最喜欢的一首歌”的征文活动，请你根
据以下提示内容，以 “ My Favorite Song”为题写一篇英语短文参
加此次征文活动。
提示内容：(1) the name of your favorite song;
(2) the reason you like it;
(3) the reason you advise others to listen to it
注意: (1) 短文要求包括以上所有提示内容，可以适当增加细节，
以使行文连贯；
(2) 词数: 80-100。短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。
审题谋篇
主题 My favorite song
内容 My favorite song is Never Say Never; it tells people never to _____ _____ whatever happens;
It is an English song ____ by a Canadian singer; his ______ is so wonderful and attractive.
I can sing _____ _______ the lyrics, and the theme(主题) of the song is good as well.
The song can often make me full of courage(勇气) and energy
目的 Learn to talk about your preferences
主要人称 第一人称、第三人称
主要时态 一般现在时
give up
sung
voice
along with
1). Is there such a song that impressed（使……印象深刻）/moved you
a lot
2) What is the name of the song
3) List your supporting details.
4). Who was it sung by
5). What is the song about
6). What can you learn from it
7). Why do you like it
8) Advise others to listen to.
Let's outline!
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Checklist (评价表)
In the passage, you should
1.have a topic sentence.(中心句)
2.use details to support it. (facts,examples or feeling)
(使用细节描写:如事实，例子或情感)
3.use proper linking words(使用连词)
4.use beautiful sentences (句型多样)
5.have a good handwriting.
(书写规范， 80--100 words)
Self-assessment(自我评价)
采分点 满分 自评分 同学
评分 需要改进的地方
1.内容充实，覆盖要点
(information) 7
2.用词适当，语法正确，句型多样
(Words/sentences) 7
3.结构紧凑，意思连贯
(linking words) 4
4.书写规范，词数适宜
(handwriting) 2
总分 20
1.Give scores. (打分)
2.Underline the beautiful sentences
3. Give some advice.
Let's share!
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