北师大版（2019）必修第一册Unit 3 Celebrations Writing Workshop 课件（13张PPT）

(共13张PPT)
Writing Workshop
An Event Description
Celebrations
Unit 3
P62 1
You are going to write about a celebration event
that you have had before.
What details do you want to include
What celebration do you want to write about and why
Let's read an event description
and learn how to write it.
What did they
celebrate
How did they
celebrate it
How did they
feel
Look at the picture and answer the questions.
Reading
Read the description. Answer the questions.
1. Whose birthday was it
2. What did the family do to prepare for it
3. What gift did the writer make
4. How did Grandpa feel and what did he say
It was Grandpa's birthday.
Mum cooked special food. They invited Grandpa's friends.
The writer made a video of Grandpa's life story for him.
The event made Grandpa very excited. He said it was a “wonderful birthday celebration” and that he was “looking forward to his eightieth, ninetieth and even one hundredth birthdays already!”
P62 2
Read the description again. Place the phrases in the correct order.
Preparations before the event Feelings about the event
The best part of the event Introduction to the event
Introduction to the event
Preparations before the event
The best part of the event
Feelings about the event
Grandpa's 70th birthday
Then add details.
birthday lunch;
gift (video)
invitation to Grandpa's
old friends;
when Grandpa and his
friends appeared in an
old photo in their school
uniforms
excited
P63 3
Analysing
1. What tense is used in the description
2. How does the author describe the event
Can you list some examples
The simple past tense.
Read the description again and answer the questions.
The author describes the event in time order.
①Early in the morning，I woke up excited.
②After a quick breakfast，I checked the special gift I had made for Grandpa，
③Just before lunchtime，Dad came in with some guests.
④Towards the end of the party，Grandpa said excitedly，
2. Find the sentences that describe the mood of the characters from the article.
①Early in the morning，I woke up excited.
②Grandpa couldn’t believe his eyes and it took quite a long time for them to calm down.
③There was a lot of laughter in the room，and quite a few tears in their eyes.
④Towards the end of the party，Grandpa said excitedly...
⑤Now I am looking forward to my eightieth，ninetieth and even one hundredth birthdays already!
P63 4
Then, write 2-3 similar sentences for your writing. Use the Sentence Builder to help you.
Sentence Builder
Adverbs of Time and Manner
first/then/after that/finally
First I got dressed. Then I headed downstairs.
luckily/amazingly/surprisingly/excitedly
Surprisingly, they were Grandpa's best friends from secondary school.
Outlining Complete the outline of your event
description based on Activity 3.
Introduction to the event
Preparations before the event
The best part of the event
Feelings about the event
P63 5
Writing
Drafting Use your outline and the Writing
Help to write your first draft.
P63 6
Describing an Event
It's important to:
mention the reason why you want to describe the event;
write the place, time, occasion and people of the event;
use action verbs and linking words to put them in the right order;
describe your feelings at the end of the event.
Writing help
Editing Edit your description in pairs.
Does the writer show the main idea of the passage
Does the writer include the time, place of the event
Does the writer describe details of the event
Does the writer describe his/her feeling(s)
Does the writer use linkers to connect the series of
activities
·Mark any spelling, punctuation or grammar errors.
·Mark any unclear expressions. Give suggestions if you can.
·Underline the expressions you like.
Comments: ___________________________________________
Share what you have written in class.
P63 7
Summary
Introduction to the event
Preparations before the event
The best part of the event
Feelings about the event
the reason why you want to describe the event
the place, time, occasion and people of the event (using adverbs of time and manner )
your feelings at the end of the event
Finish your writing.