外研版（2019） 必修第一册 Unit 3 Family Matters Developing ideas Writing 课件(20张ppt)
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B1U3 Family
matters
Period 6 Writing
Writing about a family memory
family matters
What family memories have you got
warming up
Have you ever felt that there are a lot of things in life that you just bottled up within yourself
Want to keep your daily memories safe somewhere but not sure what to do
Always wanted to talk to someone or a secret companion about your life but you are too shy to do so
A journal is a place where you can be honest with yourself and put down your thoughts and things that happened around you.
When and where, who did what for what purpose
Read the journal entry and answer the questions.
Read for the main idea
Ten years ago, the author cooked the scrambled eggs（炒鸡蛋） in the kitchen at home for her mother to celebrate her birthday!
time lines
basic
elements
who
when
where
what
why
Time
Tense
Read for the elements
Work in groups, discuss the questions.
mother and daughter
at the mother’s birthday ten years ago
The author wanted to surprise her mother with home-made scrambled eggs on her mother’s birthday. Unluckily, the eggs were burnt, but they ended up laughing about it and eating them all anyway.
at home
Because it shows the love between the author and her mother.
Read for the plot.
Para1:The big day eventually came, and I rushed into the kitchen early in eagerness to surprise my mother.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para2:Everything went smoothly(平稳地). Unexpectedly, I didn’t realize my mum had gazed at me leaning against(斜靠在) the door.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Continuation writing
1. 衔接句1：冲去厨房接下来做什么？——动作描写
2. 心情如何？——情绪描写
3. 衔接句2：如何体现进展顺利？——成品(样子，香味，形状等描写)
1. 衔接句3：接下来母亲会做什么或说什么？——动作+语言
2. show, not tell——能用动作描写就减少语言描写(语言描写要加上情感支撑)
3. 衔接句4：圆满结局+主题升华
Family love makes life happy, and we should treasure it and show gratitude to our family members.
How to make your description vivid（生动的）
Action description动作描写
open the fridge打开冰箱
fetch the food取食物
turn on the stove扭开炉灶
pour …into…把…倒入…
add the scallion to..把葱花加到…
stir the eggs搅打鸡蛋
scent the air使空气弥漫香味
动作链
pan平底锅
salt盐
apron围裙
plate盘子
dish碟子
bowl碗
cupboard碗橱
参考名词
How to make your description vivid（生动的）
Emotional description 情绪描写
Joy welled up inside her.
她心中涌起喜悦。
She gave me a warm hug with a smile of happiness on her face.
她给我一个温暖的拥抱，脸上洋溢着幸福的笑容。
Laughter lingered around the room.
笑声在房间里萦绕。
She laughed with delight as the birthday gift was carried in.
她看到生日礼物拿进来时开心的笑。
She said it was the best breakfast she had ever had .
她说这是她吃过的最好的早餐
The big day eventually came, and I rushed into the kitchen early in eagerness to surprise my mother. I first opened the fridge and fetched two eggs and some scallion. Next, I broke the eggs in a bowl and cut up the scallion. And then I mixed them with some oil and salt and stirred them together hard. Afterwards, I turned on the stove and put the pan on it. When the pan got hot, I poured some oil into it , and when the oil boiled I put the mixture into it and scrambled the eggs . After a while, it scented the morning air. Looking at the scrambled eggs in the pan, my heart was filled with joy and pride.
衔接句1：冲去厨房接下来做什么？
衔接句2：如何体现一切进展顺利？——成品(样子，香味，形状等描写)
Everything went smoothly. Unexpectedly, I didn’t realize my mum had gazed at me leaning against the door. “What are you doing here, my dear “ she asked softly. I put the scrambled eggs on a plate, showed it to her and said, “Happy birthday ,my dear mother! Hope you will enjoy the breakfast made of love! This time, the scrambled eggs are not burnt !”. Hearing my words, she gave me a warm hug with a smile of happiness on her face. I woke father up and we sang a birthday song for my mother while having breakfast. Laughter lingered around the room and she said it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Family love makes life happy, and we should treasure it and show gratitude to our family members.
衔接句4：Happy ending 欢声笑语。
升华句：家人的爱，珍惜感恩。
动作公式1：动作，动作 and 动作
动作公式2：V-ing..., 主语+谓语
注意问题：
1. 想好四个衔接句。
第一句: 动作描写——接下来要做的事
第二句: 成品描述(可以是样子，香气，形状等)
第三句: 母亲动作或者语言描写
升华句: 开心场景或提升主题
2. 减少对话描写。能用动作就不要用对话。show, not tell
3. 不要增加分段。
4. 每段比重平均分配。
5. 注意把握时间。原则上30分钟包括读-思-写的过程。
6. 有意识地注意书写。
7. 时态：谓语动词+ed ；注意不规则动词的变形。
8. 对话之后要配上情感或动作。
was in the memory
did the family memory happen
did the family memory take place
happened (What did you see and do )
is it special or memorable
How to write a specel memory
Part1. by introducing the reason of writing
Part2. introdution (when, who, what, where）
first major event
second part of the story
third part of the story
Part3. by describing specialty of the memory
version2.
Elements of a family memory
Who
When
Where
What
Why
Write a story
Why is it special or memorable
Climax
Beginning
Build-up
Ending
What brought back the author’s memory
By describing specialty of the memory
When and where and what happened
By describing the sence
What happened then
How was the matter solved
By introducing the reason of writing
By presenting the moral
Frame of a journal entry (the thing we can see)
Para._____
Para._____
Para._____
1
2
3
Para._____
4
Read for the plot.
Weave a family memory according to pictures
a yellow shirt
On the ladder, I was ill.
Mum carried me upstairs, but the shirt tore.
Mum hanged it in her closet.
Love is indeed a magical power.
短篇故事首段常用句式:
I was doing...when I found an old photo.
The lovely memory came flooding back.
How time flies!
I couldn't wait to share them with you.
短篇故事中段常用句式:
It was a special day...years ago.
It happened...years ago.
I decided to...
I was about to...when...
When I ...,my eyes watered.
短篇故事尾段常用句式:
Love is indeed a magical ingredient.
I hope I will make/ do...for...
Useful expressions
There is a red shirt in my closet. This is not an ordinary shirt. Every time I see it, I can’t help thinking of that unforgettable thing in my life.
When I was nine years old, one night, I suddenly caught a high fever, and my father was out on a business trip. In a hurry, my mother took me to see the doctor. After the treatment, it was more than 2 o’clock in the morning the next day. When I got home, the elevator stopped and my mother decided to carry me upstairs. At first, my mother walked easily but later, she was tired and the shirt was wet with sweat. It was my father’s new gift for my mother, which she liked very much. But at this time, she forgot her own shirt. It made me feel so moved. I lied on her back and cried.
A few days later, my mother didn’t wear the shirt. After asking, I realized that my zipper tore the shirt. Since then, my mother never worn the shirt but I often see my mother open the closet to touch it. Four years later, we moved twice, but the shirt still hangs in my closet. Every time I see it, the warm memory of that day came back to me. I remember this because love is indeed a magical power.
Homework
假设你是李华,你在整理书架时偶然看到妈妈曾经写给你的一堆卡片。刚进入高中时,你的学习压力很大,这些卡片是妈妈为了鼓励你并帮助你摆脱压力而写给你的,最后你开始了快乐的学习。请你把这段美好回忆分享给你的好友Tom。注意: 词数为80个左右。
Dear Tom,
While cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend,I found a stack of cards.
When I read the words on each card,my eyes watered.It was these encouraging cards that helped me get through my frustration.
I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and I was afraid of falling behind every minute of the days.Mum was so considerate that she found my problems.From then on,I could find a special card on my desk every morning.Gradually,I became less anxious and began to find pleasure in my studies.Mum makes me understand that pressure can't be avoided.What counts is how to deal with it properly,and how to turn it into pleasure or challenges.
Yours,
Li Hua
B1U3 Family
matters
Thank you for listening!
是靖靖呀
B1U3 Family
matters
Period 6 Writing
Writing about a family memory
family matters
What family memories have you got
warming up
Have you ever felt that there are a lot of things in life that you just bottled up within yourself
Want to keep your daily memories safe somewhere but not sure what to do
Always wanted to talk to someone or a secret companion about your life but you are too shy to do so
A journal is a place where you can be honest with yourself and put down your thoughts and things that happened around you.
When and where, who did what for what purpose
Read the journal entry and answer the questions.
Read for the main idea
Ten years ago, the author cooked the scrambled eggs（炒鸡蛋） in the kitchen at home for her mother to celebrate her birthday!
time lines
basic
elements
who
when
where
what
why
Time
Tense
Read for the elements
Work in groups, discuss the questions.
mother and daughter
at the mother’s birthday ten years ago
The author wanted to surprise her mother with home-made scrambled eggs on her mother’s birthday. Unluckily, the eggs were burnt, but they ended up laughing about it and eating them all anyway.
at home
Because it shows the love between the author and her mother.
Read for the plot.
Para1:The big day eventually came, and I rushed into the kitchen early in eagerness to surprise my mother.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para2:Everything went smoothly(平稳地). Unexpectedly, I didn’t realize my mum had gazed at me leaning against(斜靠在) the door.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Continuation writing
1. 衔接句1：冲去厨房接下来做什么？——动作描写
2. 心情如何？——情绪描写
3. 衔接句2：如何体现进展顺利？——成品(样子，香味，形状等描写)
1. 衔接句3：接下来母亲会做什么或说什么？——动作+语言
2. show, not tell——能用动作描写就减少语言描写(语言描写要加上情感支撑)
3. 衔接句4：圆满结局+主题升华
Family love makes life happy, and we should treasure it and show gratitude to our family members.
How to make your description vivid（生动的）
Action description动作描写
open the fridge打开冰箱
fetch the food取食物
turn on the stove扭开炉灶
pour …into…把…倒入…
add the scallion to..把葱花加到…
stir the eggs搅打鸡蛋
scent the air使空气弥漫香味
动作链
pan平底锅
salt盐
apron围裙
plate盘子
dish碟子
bowl碗
cupboard碗橱
参考名词
How to make your description vivid（生动的）
Emotional description 情绪描写
Joy welled up inside her.
她心中涌起喜悦。
She gave me a warm hug with a smile of happiness on her face.
她给我一个温暖的拥抱，脸上洋溢着幸福的笑容。
Laughter lingered around the room.
笑声在房间里萦绕。
She laughed with delight as the birthday gift was carried in.
她看到生日礼物拿进来时开心的笑。
She said it was the best breakfast she had ever had .
她说这是她吃过的最好的早餐
The big day eventually came, and I rushed into the kitchen early in eagerness to surprise my mother. I first opened the fridge and fetched two eggs and some scallion. Next, I broke the eggs in a bowl and cut up the scallion. And then I mixed them with some oil and salt and stirred them together hard. Afterwards, I turned on the stove and put the pan on it. When the pan got hot, I poured some oil into it , and when the oil boiled I put the mixture into it and scrambled the eggs . After a while, it scented the morning air. Looking at the scrambled eggs in the pan, my heart was filled with joy and pride.
衔接句1：冲去厨房接下来做什么？
衔接句2：如何体现一切进展顺利？——成品(样子，香味，形状等描写)
Everything went smoothly. Unexpectedly, I didn’t realize my mum had gazed at me leaning against the door. “What are you doing here, my dear “ she asked softly. I put the scrambled eggs on a plate, showed it to her and said, “Happy birthday ,my dear mother! Hope you will enjoy the breakfast made of love! This time, the scrambled eggs are not burnt !”. Hearing my words, she gave me a warm hug with a smile of happiness on her face. I woke father up and we sang a birthday song for my mother while having breakfast. Laughter lingered around the room and she said it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Family love makes life happy, and we should treasure it and show gratitude to our family members.
衔接句4：Happy ending 欢声笑语。
升华句：家人的爱，珍惜感恩。
动作公式1：动作，动作 and 动作
动作公式2：V-ing..., 主语+谓语
注意问题：
1. 想好四个衔接句。
第一句: 动作描写——接下来要做的事
第二句: 成品描述(可以是样子，香气，形状等)
第三句: 母亲动作或者语言描写
升华句: 开心场景或提升主题
2. 减少对话描写。能用动作就不要用对话。show, not tell
3. 不要增加分段。
4. 每段比重平均分配。
5. 注意把握时间。原则上30分钟包括读-思-写的过程。
6. 有意识地注意书写。
7. 时态：谓语动词+ed ；注意不规则动词的变形。
8. 对话之后要配上情感或动作。
was in the memory
did the family memory happen
did the family memory take place
happened (What did you see and do )
is it special or memorable
How to write a specel memory
Part1. by introducing the reason of writing
Part2. introdution (when, who, what, where）
first major event
second part of the story
third part of the story
Part3. by describing specialty of the memory
version2.
Elements of a family memory
Who
When
Where
What
Why
Write a story
Why is it special or memorable
Climax
Beginning
Build-up
Ending
What brought back the author’s memory
By describing specialty of the memory
When and where and what happened
By describing the sence
What happened then
How was the matter solved
By introducing the reason of writing
By presenting the moral
Frame of a journal entry (the thing we can see)
Para._____
Para._____
Para._____
1
2
3
Para._____
4
Read for the plot.
Weave a family memory according to pictures
a yellow shirt
On the ladder, I was ill.
Mum carried me upstairs, but the shirt tore.
Mum hanged it in her closet.
Love is indeed a magical power.
短篇故事首段常用句式:
I was doing...when I found an old photo.
The lovely memory came flooding back.
How time flies!
I couldn't wait to share them with you.
短篇故事中段常用句式:
It was a special day...years ago.
It happened...years ago.
I decided to...
I was about to...when...
When I ...,my eyes watered.
短篇故事尾段常用句式:
Love is indeed a magical ingredient.
I hope I will make/ do...for...
Useful expressions
There is a red shirt in my closet. This is not an ordinary shirt. Every time I see it, I can’t help thinking of that unforgettable thing in my life.
When I was nine years old, one night, I suddenly caught a high fever, and my father was out on a business trip. In a hurry, my mother took me to see the doctor. After the treatment, it was more than 2 o’clock in the morning the next day. When I got home, the elevator stopped and my mother decided to carry me upstairs. At first, my mother walked easily but later, she was tired and the shirt was wet with sweat. It was my father’s new gift for my mother, which she liked very much. But at this time, she forgot her own shirt. It made me feel so moved. I lied on her back and cried.
A few days later, my mother didn’t wear the shirt. After asking, I realized that my zipper tore the shirt. Since then, my mother never worn the shirt but I often see my mother open the closet to touch it. Four years later, we moved twice, but the shirt still hangs in my closet. Every time I see it, the warm memory of that day came back to me. I remember this because love is indeed a magical power.
Homework
假设你是李华,你在整理书架时偶然看到妈妈曾经写给你的一堆卡片。刚进入高中时,你的学习压力很大,这些卡片是妈妈为了鼓励你并帮助你摆脱压力而写给你的,最后你开始了快乐的学习。请你把这段美好回忆分享给你的好友Tom。注意: 词数为80个左右。
Dear Tom,
While cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend,I found a stack of cards.
When I read the words on each card,my eyes watered.It was these encouraging cards that helped me get through my frustration.
I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and I was afraid of falling behind every minute of the days.Mum was so considerate that she found my problems.From then on,I could find a special card on my desk every morning.Gradually,I became less anxious and began to find pleasure in my studies.Mum makes me understand that pressure can't be avoided.What counts is how to deal with it properly,and how to turn it into pleasure or challenges.
Yours,
Li Hua
B1U3 Family
matters
Thank you for listening!
是靖靖呀