（广州、深圳）沪教牛津版九上期末复习讲义——常考话题作文【话题一：人物传记】（含答案）

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（广州、深圳）沪教牛津版九年级上学期期末复习讲义
期末常考话题作文
话题一：人物传记
※案例演练※
根据以下提示，写一篇80-100词的演讲稿，介绍霍金（Hawking），开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
生平 1942年一月出生于英国，死于2018年。
职业 世界最著名的物理学家（physicist）之一
简介 1. 中学毕业后在牛津大学（Oxford University）学习物理（physics）;2. 20岁得了重病，医生预测他只能活到23岁。3. 他没有放弃自己，更加努力投身科学工作。
主要成就 做了很多重要的科学研究，写了著作，例如《时间简史》(A Brief History of Time)
你的感想 …
Ladies and gentlemen, it’s my great honor to make a speech here.
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That’s all! Thanks for your listening!
※写作思路※
Step1：确定时态、人称和分段
时态：_______________
人称：_______________
2. 正文分为_______________段。每段内容安排分别是:
第一段：_______________
第二段：_______________
第三段：_______________
Step2：遣词造句
1. 词汇
中学毕业 20岁
得了重病 预测
放弃自己 更加努力投身于
科学研究 著作
坚强的意志力 科学探索精神
2. 造句
第一段：生平+职业
霍金在1942年一月出生于英国，死于2018年。
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他被认为是世界最著名的物理学家（physicist）之一
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第二段：简介+主要成就
霍金从中学毕业后在牛津大学（Oxford University）学习物理（physics）
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不幸的是，他20岁得了重病，医生预测他只能活到23岁。
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然而，他没有放弃自己。
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他更加努力投身科学工作，并做了很多重要的科学研究。
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他写了很多著作，例如《时间简史》。
____________________________________________________________
第三段：你的感想
霍金为我们树立了榜样。
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我们从霍金中学到了很多东西，例如他的坚强的意志力和科学探索精神。
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Step3：成文
Ladies and gentlemen, it’s my great honor to make a speech here.
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That’s all! Thanks for your listening!
※实战训练※
张桂梅，丽江华坪女子高级中学书记、校长。她数十年如一日行善助学，爱生如子，被评为“感动中国2020年度人物”，并荣获“全国脱贫攻坚楷模”荣誉称号。现在请你根据以下信息提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍张桂梅老师。
姓名 张桂梅
生日 1957年6月
出生地 黑龙江
主要事迹 1990年，开始在云南一所中学任教；丈夫去世后，决定继续教书；2001年，计划兴建女子中学2008年，成立华坪女中——全国第一所全免费的女子高中；13年来，尽管身体每况愈下，但仍帮助了1800名贫困女孩子进入大学
要求：
1. 须包含所给信息，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总字数）。
Zhang Guimei was born in Heilongjiang in June, 1957. __________________________
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【答案】
话题一：人物传记
※案例演练※
Step1：确定时态、人称和分段
1. 时态：一般过去时
人称：第三人称
2. 正文分为三段。每段内容安排分别是:
第一段：生平+职业
第二段：简介+主要成就
第三段：你的感想
Step2：遣词造句
1. 词汇
中学毕业 graduate from high school 20岁 at the age of 20
得了重病 become seriously ill 预测 predict
放弃自己 give up on himself 更加努力投身于 devoted himself more to
科学研究 scientific research 著作 famous books
坚强的意志力 strong will 科学探索精神 the spirit of scientific exploration
2. 造句
第一段：生平+职业
1）霍金在1942年一月出生于英国，死于2018年。
Hawking was born in the UK in 1942 and died in 2018.
2）他被认为是世界最著名的物理学家（physicist）之一
He is considered as one of the most famous physicists in the world.
第二段：简介+主要成就
1）霍金从中学毕业后在牛津大学（Oxford University）学习物理（physics）
Hawking studied physics at Oxford University after graduating from high school.
2）不幸的是，他20岁得了重病，医生预测他只能活到23岁。
Unluckily, he became seriously ill at the age of 20 and doctors predicted that he could only live to be 23.
3）然而，他没有放弃自己。
However, Hawking didn’t give up on himself.
4）他更加努力投身科学工作，并做了很多重要的科学研究。
He devoted himself more to scientific work and did a lot of important scientific research.
5）他写了很多著作，例如《时间简史》。
He wrote many famous books such as A Brief History of Time.
第三段：你的感想
1）霍金为我们树立了榜样。
Hawking set an example for all of us.
2）我们从霍金中学到了很多东西，例如他的坚强的意志力和科学探索精神。
We’ve learnt a lot from Hawking such as his strong will and the spirit of scientific exploration.
Step3：成文
Ladies and gentlemen, it’s my great honor to make a speech here.
Hawking was born in the UK in 1942 and died in 2018. He is considered as one of the most famous physicists in the world.
Hawking studied physics at Oxford University after graduating from high school. Unluckily, he became seriously ill at the age of 20 and doctors predicted that he could only live to be 23. However, Hawking didn’t give up on himself. He devoted himself more to scientific work and did a lot of important scientific research. What’s more, he wrote many famous books such as A Brief History of Time.
Hawking set an example for all of us. We’ve learnt a lot from Hawking such as his strong will and the spirit of scientific exploration.
That’s all! Thanks for your listening!
※实战训练※
Zhang Guimei was born in Heilongjiang in June, 1957. In 1990, she started to teach in a middle school in Yunnan. When her husband died, she decided to continue teaching. In 2001, she came up with the idea of starting a girls’ middle school. She believes education is very important to the girls. She tried her best and never gave up in the face of difficulties. Seven years later, Zhang set up Huaping Girls High School, the first free high school for girls in China. In the past thirteen years, Zhang has helped 1,800 girls from poor families achieve their university dreams. However, Zhang is in poor health because of years of hard work.
Zhang is the greatest teacher I have ever seen. I’d like to be a teacher like her when I grow up.
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