（广州、深圳）沪教牛津版九上期末复习讲义——常考话题作文【话题二：问题与建议】（含答案）
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（广州、深圳）沪教牛津版九年级上学期期末复习讲义
期末常考话题作文
话题二：问题与建议
※案例演练※
假如你是学校的心理咨询老师Miss Wang，你收到一封学生来信，根据信件的内容和下面的提示给他回信。
要求：1. 内容完整；表达准确；语意连贯。
2. 字数80字左右，信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
提示：1. 多和父母沟通，告知他们你的担忧；
2. 放松心情，不要有太大的压力；
3. 认真备考，尽量考好；
4. 课后多做运动，保持健康；
5. 睡前喝杯牛奶；
6. 补充一条你的其他建议。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student of Grade Three. You know we’ll have mid-exams next month. And my parents hope I can be one of the top students, but I don’t think I can. I am worried about my courses so much that I can’t sleep well at night. What can I do Please help me.
Best wishes,
Love from
Jacky
Dear Jacky,
I got your letter this week. And I know your trouble now. ________________________
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
Hope it can help you. Good luck to you.
Love from
Miss Wang
※写作思路※
Step1：确定时态、人称和分段
时态：_______________
人称：_______________
正文分为_______________段。每段内容安排分别是:
第一段：_______________
第二段：_______________
第三段：_______________
Step2：遣词造句
1. 词汇
沟通 准备
担忧 获得好结果
放松心情 做运动
压力 保持健康
2. 造句
1. 多和父母沟通，告知他们你的担忧。
基础翻译：____________________________________________________________
升级翻译：____________________________________________________________
2. 放松心情，不要有太大的压力
基础翻译：____________________________________________________________
升级翻译：____________________________________________________________
3. 认真备考，尽量考好
基础翻译：____________________________________________________________
升级翻译：____________________________________________________________
4. 课后多做运动，保持健康
基础翻译：____________________________________________________________
升级翻译：____________________________________________________________
Step3：成文
Dear Jacky,
I got your letter this week. And I know your trouble now.
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
Hope it can help you. Good luck to you.
Love from
Miss Wang
※实战训练※
假设你是李华，初三的第一学期即将结束，你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上帮助了你。在这个学期即将结束前，请你给Sam写一些感谢的话，要求包括以下内容要点：
你在学习英语上曾遇到的困难；
Sam对你的帮助及建议：
（1）多听多读；
（2）多看英语电影、多唱英文歌曲；
（3）把错误写在笔记本里并且改正它们；
（4）……（请补充1个以上的建议）
3. 你的收获。
注意：
1.词数80左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Sam，
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye this term.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your help and best wishes for you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
话题二：问题与建议
※案例演练※
Step1：确定时态、人称和分段
时态：一般现在时
人称：第一人称、第二人称
正文分为三段。每段内容安排分别是:
第一段：开头（介绍背景）
第二段：描述问题及提出建议
第三段：结尾（祝福）
Step2：遣词造句
1. 词汇
沟通 communicate with 准备 prepare for
担忧 worry 获得好结果 get good results
放松心情 relax yourself 做运动 do more exercises
压力 pressure 保持健康 keep healthy
2. 造句
1.多和父母沟通，告知他们你的担忧。
基础翻译：Communicate with your parents more often and tell them your worries .
升级翻译：You can try to communicate with your parents more often and tell them what you’re worried about.
2.放松心情，不要有太大的压力
基础翻译：Relax yourself, and don’t get too stressed.
升级翻译：Be relaxed, and avoid giving yourself too much pressure.
3.认真备考，尽量考好
基础翻译：Carefully prepare for the exam, and try your best to do well in the exam.
升级翻译：Work hard on the preparation for the exam, and try to get good results in the exam as possible as you can.
4.课后多做运动，保持健康
基础翻译：Do more exercises after class and stay healthy.
升级翻译：In order to keep healthy, you’d better take more exercises after class.
Step3：成文
Dear Jacky,
I got your letter this week. And I know your trouble now.
I suppose that you can try to communicate with your parents more often and tell them what you’re worried about. And they will surely give you support. Besides, be relaxed, and avoid giving yourself too much pressure. Meanwhile, work hard on the preparation for the exam, and try to get good results in the exam as possible as you can. In order to keep healthy, you’d better take more exercises after class. Also, I think it’s a good choice to have a glass of milk before sleeping, which can help you sleep better. Sometimes, when you are getting too stressed, you can listen to some light music.
Hope it can help you. Good luck to you.
Love from
Miss Wang
※实战训练※
Dear Sam，
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye this term. I still remember the beginning of this term, I had difficulties learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize English words and understand what people were saying. My spoken English was poor too. However, I was so lucky that I met you, a kind-hearted and smart boy.
Firstly, you taught me to listen more and read more. Secondly, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing English songs. Also, you should write down your mistakes in your notebooks and correct them. In addition, you told me to form the habit of reading aloud in the morning. And it really helped me a lot.
Day by day, I have made great progress with your help. Thank you for your help and best wishes for you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
HYPERLINK "http://21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
" 21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
（广州、深圳）沪教牛津版九年级上学期期末复习讲义
期末常考话题作文
话题二：问题与建议
※案例演练※
假如你是学校的心理咨询老师Miss Wang，你收到一封学生来信，根据信件的内容和下面的提示给他回信。
要求：1. 内容完整；表达准确；语意连贯。
2. 字数80字左右，信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
提示：1. 多和父母沟通，告知他们你的担忧；
2. 放松心情，不要有太大的压力；
3. 认真备考，尽量考好；
4. 课后多做运动，保持健康；
5. 睡前喝杯牛奶；
6. 补充一条你的其他建议。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student of Grade Three. You know we’ll have mid-exams next month. And my parents hope I can be one of the top students, but I don’t think I can. I am worried about my courses so much that I can’t sleep well at night. What can I do Please help me.
Best wishes,
Love from
Jacky
Dear Jacky,
I got your letter this week. And I know your trouble now. ________________________
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
Hope it can help you. Good luck to you.
Love from
Miss Wang
※写作思路※
Step1：确定时态、人称和分段
时态：_______________
人称：_______________
正文分为_______________段。每段内容安排分别是:
第一段：_______________
第二段：_______________
第三段：_______________
Step2：遣词造句
1. 词汇
沟通 准备
担忧 获得好结果
放松心情 做运动
压力 保持健康
2. 造句
1. 多和父母沟通，告知他们你的担忧。
基础翻译：____________________________________________________________
升级翻译：____________________________________________________________
2. 放松心情，不要有太大的压力
基础翻译：____________________________________________________________
升级翻译：____________________________________________________________
3. 认真备考，尽量考好
基础翻译：____________________________________________________________
升级翻译：____________________________________________________________
4. 课后多做运动，保持健康
基础翻译：____________________________________________________________
升级翻译：____________________________________________________________
Step3：成文
Dear Jacky,
I got your letter this week. And I know your trouble now.
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
Hope it can help you. Good luck to you.
Love from
Miss Wang
※实战训练※
假设你是李华，初三的第一学期即将结束，你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上帮助了你。在这个学期即将结束前，请你给Sam写一些感谢的话，要求包括以下内容要点：
你在学习英语上曾遇到的困难；
Sam对你的帮助及建议：
（1）多听多读；
（2）多看英语电影、多唱英文歌曲；
（3）把错误写在笔记本里并且改正它们；
（4）……（请补充1个以上的建议）
3. 你的收获。
注意：
1.词数80左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Sam，
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye this term.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your help and best wishes for you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
话题二：问题与建议
※案例演练※
Step1：确定时态、人称和分段
时态：一般现在时
人称：第一人称、第二人称
正文分为三段。每段内容安排分别是:
第一段：开头（介绍背景）
第二段：描述问题及提出建议
第三段：结尾（祝福）
Step2：遣词造句
1. 词汇
沟通 communicate with 准备 prepare for
担忧 worry 获得好结果 get good results
放松心情 relax yourself 做运动 do more exercises
压力 pressure 保持健康 keep healthy
2. 造句
1.多和父母沟通，告知他们你的担忧。
基础翻译：Communicate with your parents more often and tell them your worries .
升级翻译：You can try to communicate with your parents more often and tell them what you’re worried about.
2.放松心情，不要有太大的压力
基础翻译：Relax yourself, and don’t get too stressed.
升级翻译：Be relaxed, and avoid giving yourself too much pressure.
3.认真备考，尽量考好
基础翻译：Carefully prepare for the exam, and try your best to do well in the exam.
升级翻译：Work hard on the preparation for the exam, and try to get good results in the exam as possible as you can.
4.课后多做运动，保持健康
基础翻译：Do more exercises after class and stay healthy.
升级翻译：In order to keep healthy, you’d better take more exercises after class.
Step3：成文
Dear Jacky,
I got your letter this week. And I know your trouble now.
I suppose that you can try to communicate with your parents more often and tell them what you’re worried about. And they will surely give you support. Besides, be relaxed, and avoid giving yourself too much pressure. Meanwhile, work hard on the preparation for the exam, and try to get good results in the exam as possible as you can. In order to keep healthy, you’d better take more exercises after class. Also, I think it’s a good choice to have a glass of milk before sleeping, which can help you sleep better. Sometimes, when you are getting too stressed, you can listen to some light music.
Hope it can help you. Good luck to you.
Love from
Miss Wang
※实战训练※
Dear Sam，
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye this term. I still remember the beginning of this term, I had difficulties learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize English words and understand what people were saying. My spoken English was poor too. However, I was so lucky that I met you, a kind-hearted and smart boy.
Firstly, you taught me to listen more and read more. Secondly, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing English songs. Also, you should write down your mistakes in your notebooks and correct them. In addition, you told me to form the habit of reading aloud in the morning. And it really helped me a lot.
Day by day, I have made great progress with your help. Thank you for your help and best wishes for you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
HYPERLINK "http://21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
" 21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)