八年级(上)英语(55) Unit10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time!
班级:_____________ 姓名:_____________ 学号:___________
Unit10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time!
Period5(Section B 3a-Selfcheck)
【学习目标】本单元的写作内容是描述自己在学业、人际交往中的一些烦恼以及生活中出现的一些问题,并针对这些烦恼和问题征求建议,或针对他人的烦恼和问题提出建议。
写此类文章时应注意以下几点:
1.关于征求建议和提出建议的文章通常使用书信体。
2.征求建议时要明确阐明自己面临的问题及自己的困惑。
3.建议信要给人真诚、亲切的感觉,建议要中肯、有针对性。
【学习过程】
Before class
一、英汉互译
1.寒假__________________________ 2.去旅行_______________________
3.至于……__________ 4.说到……_______________
5.假期愉快____________________________
6.You can/could… You’d better…____________________________
7.Why not…?/Why don’t you…?____________________________
8.What/How about…?____________________________
9.If I were you, I would…____________________________
10.It’s good for you to…____________________________
11.Doing sth. is a good idea.____________________________
12.I understand how you feel.____________________________
13.Don’t worry. I can help you.____________________________
14.I hope my advice can help you.____________________________
In class
假设你叫张明。寒假即将来临,你的朋友Mike正在为假期计划犯愁,主要有下列问题:
1.有很多作业要做,但又想去度假;
2.想购买一块自己喜欢已久的手表,但是没有足够的钱;
3.想帮助父母,但不知道该如何做。
请你给他写一封信,提出一些合理的建议。不少于70词。
思路点拔
1.使用书信体。
2.第一段要包含以下内容:寒暄、同感、安慰和过渡句。
3.第二段针对对方的烦恼和问题提出中肯的建议。
4.结尾要表达美好的祝愿。
高分模板
Dear Mike,
Thank you for writing to me. ①I can understand your feelings. Don’t worry about your problems. Here is some useful advice for you.
②First of all, ③if you really want to take a trip, you should finish your homework first. Then you’ll have a great time. As for the watch, why don’t you get a part-time job to make some money to buy it Finally, I think you can help your parents do some housework, such as doing the dishes and cleaning the house.
④I hope my advice can help you and you will have a wonderful holiday. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
After class
假如你是Tony,你的好朋友Mary 对即将到来的期末考试感到很焦虑,担心不能取得好成绩。请你给她写一封信,针对她的问题,提出你的建议。
提示词:final exam, be worried about, helpful, normal, believe in yourself, try one’s best
要求:
1.使用所给提示词,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,符合逻辑;
3.80词左右。
写作反思:___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
the winter vacation/holiday
take a trip/go on a trip
as for…
speaking of…
have a good vacation/holiday
你可以...你最好...
为什么不?
干...怎么样?
如果我是你,我会...
干什么对你来说很好
干...是个好主意
我理解你的感受
别担心,我会帮你的。
我希望我的建议可以帮到你。
作文范文:
Dear Mary,
I’m sorry to hear that you are worried about the coming final exam. I think it’s very normal to be nervous before an exam. I’ll give you some advice about it and I hope my advice can be helpful to you.
First of all, try your best to prepare for it. Go over all of the things you have learned and make sure you don’t miss anything important. Next, although this exam is important to you, I don’t think you need to worry. Worry may make things worse, so relax! All in all, believe in yourself! I think you can make it. If you are really nervous, do something interesting or relaxing, and you will feel much better. Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Tony