(共22张PPT)
Writing guide for introducing a person
关于人物介绍的基础写作指导
I.Lead in
I.Lead in
Who do you admire most in the world Why do you admire him/her
1.Read for the writing type,tense and person
①体裁:记叙文
②注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般_____时,而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、重要经历、事迹时常用一般______时。
③人称:第三人称
现在
过去
II.Read and observe
It introduces Yuan Long ping to us.
2.Read for the basic structure:
read the text above and sum up the information.
Para.1. Lead in the topic of the person you admire and introduce some basic information(____________________)
Para.2. Introduce the person’s _____________________
Para.3. People’s____________on the parson and the __________of this person.(_________________)
出生日期/地点/兴趣/职业
main experiences or contributions
comments
influence
人们的评价/ 他的影响
Expressions and sentence structures:
Para. 1 Lead in the topic of the person you admire
句式参考:
①The person(that) I admire most is….,
②Of all the outstanding people, I admire…. the most.
③There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is....
2. Read for details
1)重要短语积累: 简单人物背景介绍 (出生日期/出生地/职业/兴趣)
①出生于:
②酷爱/对……有强烈的兴趣
③在……方面有天赋:
④从某大学某专业毕业
①sb. was born in 某地/某年某月
was born on+具体日期
②show great interest in (doing)
have a passion for sth.
③ be gifted in (doing) sth.
have a gift for (doing)sth.
④graduate from +学校 in+专业
2)重要句型积累及仿写:
1.The person I admire most is Yuan Longping, one of the most famous scientists in China.
仿写:我最钦佩的人是钟南山,中国著名的医学家之一。
The person I admire most is Zhong Nanshan, one of the most famous/ well-known medical scientists in China.
句型结构:主语+定从+ 主句剩下部分,同位语
2.Born in Chongqing, on September 7th, 1930, Yuan studied hard, showing great interest in agriculture.
仿写:钟南山,1936年10月出生于南京;他意志坚定,对医疗事业充满兴趣/热情。
句型结构. 非谓语结构,+主句+ 非谓语结构
Born in October, 1936 in Nanjing, Zhong Nanshan is strong- minded/ determined, showing great interest in medical care/ having a passion for ···
Para.2. Introduce a person’s main experiences or contributions
1)重要短语积累:
①做…工作
②把…奉献给…
③起关键性作用
④坚定的决心
⑤在……做贡献
⑥使某人能够做
① work as/ serve as+身份
② sb.devote ···to(doing) sth.
③ play a key role in sth.
④ strong will/ determination
⑤make a contribution to (doing) sth.
make contributions to (doing) sth.
⑥enable sb. to do sth.
2)重要句型积累及仿写:
1.After graduating from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953,Yuan devoted his life to researching on rice.
仿写:1960年毕业于北京医学院(Peking Medical College )后,钟南山留校任教。
After graduating from Peking Medical College, Zhong NanShan worked as a teacher there.
句型结构:连词+非谓语结构,+主句
2.With strong will and great determination, Yuan achieved great success in increasing rice harvest, which solved the problem of the lack of food for many countries.
仿写:2003年春,凭借坚强的意志和专业能力,钟南山在抗击“非典”(SARS) 中做出了巨大贡献,使人们找到治愈这种疾病的方法。
句型结构:With+名词,主句,(+定从)
In the Spring of 2003, with strong will and professional skills, Mr Zhong made a great contribution to fighting against SARS,
which enabled people to find the cure for the disease.
2)重要句型积累及仿写:
3.As a result, he is honored and known as “Father of Hybrid Rice”, rewarded with many prizes for his great contributions to the world.
仿写:结果,他在2004年被评为“感动中国”(Touching China) 十大人物之一,因为他对国家的伟大贡献获得了许多荣誉和称号。
句型结构5:主句,非谓语结构
As a result, he is awarded one of the ten figures in Touching China in 2004, rewarded with/ gaining numerous honors and titles for his great contributions to China.
4.Famous as he is, he leads a simple life and cares little for money and fame.
仿写:尽管很危险,他在2020年初决定再一次投身到新型冠状病毒的抗疫前线( the battle agrainst ···)。
Famous as he is=Though he is famous (把从句中的表语提前,引起部分倒装,as 在此结构中指 “尽管/虽然”)
句型结构: adj./ n. + as+主语 +be, +主句
Dangerous as it was, he was determined to take part in the battle against the new coronavirus again at the beginning of 2020.
Para. 3 Comments on the person and his/ her influence
1.重点词汇积累:
①为某人赢得好名声
②高度评价
③被授予/被称为……
④作为……而闻名
⑤树立好榜样
⑥值得我们崇拜和尊重
① gain/ win a good fame for sb.
② speak/think highly of ···
③be awarded sth. /be called···
④ be well known/ famous for ···
⑤ set a good example to sb.
⑥ deserve our admiration and respect
2).重点句式积累及仿写:
①Having set a great example to us, Yuan is really an excellent scientist who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
仿写:他给我们树立了好的榜样,他真的是一位爱国且有责任心的医生,值得我们崇拜和尊重。
句型结构:非谓语结构,主句,+定从
Having set a great example to us, he is really a patriotic and responsible doctor, who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
2).重点句式积累及仿写:
②.(其他句式积累) It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.
仿写:正是他的无私付出和伟大贡献激励年轻人投入到医学事业中。
句式结构:It is+强调部分+that +剩下句子
It is his selfless devotion and great contribution that inspire the young to devote themselves to the medical care.
Summary
在写人时,常用的句型积累总结如下:
① 主语+定从+ 主句剩下部分,同位语
② 连词+非谓语结构,+主句
③With+名词,主句,(+定从)
④ 非谓语结构,主句,(+定从)
⑤adj./ n. + as+主语 +be(部分倒装句), +主句
⑥It is+强调部分+that +剩下句子
It’s your show time!
III. Writing exercise
假如你是李华,某英文报正在举办主题为“A person I admire most”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇关于钟南山的短文并投稿。
写作要求:1.人物概况;2.主要的人物事迹和成就;3.人物评价和值得学习的地方。
注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Sample:
The person I admire most is Zhong Nanshan, one of the most well-known medical scientists in China.
Born in October, 1936 in Nanjing, Zhong Nanshan is strong- minded/ determined, showing great interest in medical care.After graduating from Peking Medical College, Zhong NanShan worked as a teacher there.In the Spring of 2003, with strong will and professional skills, Mr Zhong made a great contribution to fighting against SARS,which enabled people to find the cure for the disease.As a result, he is awarded one of the ten figures in Touching China in 2004, gaining numerous honors for his great contributions.In the early of 2020,
COVID-19 broke out. Dangerous as it was, Zhong Nanshan was determined to take part in the battle again. Finally, it was Zhong and his team’s hard work that made the epidemic situation under control in China.
Having set a great example to us, he is really a patriotic and responsible doctor, who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
句子间加入适当的连接词,保持上下文的连贯和逻辑
Homework
1. Review what we learned today and remember the language points.
2. Apply useful expressions and sentence structures to your writing task.
假如你是李华,某英文报正在举办主题为“A person I admire most”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇关于屠呦呦或者钱学森的短文并投稿。
写作要求:1.人物概况;2.主要的人物事迹和成就;3.人物评价和值得学习的地方。
注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。