(新课标) Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to. Section B 3a-Self check 写作课优质课课件(共34张)

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Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.
Period 6 Section B 3a-Self check
写作课优质课
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Learning aims
1.复习词汇: lyrics, recall, dance to, folk music, sing along with. China’s national treasures
复习句型：1). ---What kind of music do you like ---I like music that I can sing along with.
2). --What kind of movies do you like ---I prefer movies that/ which give something to think about.
3).It was one of the most moving pieces of music that I have ever heard
2.运用“I like. . . because. . . I feel . . . I think you should listen to/watch it too because. . . ” 这些句式对自己看过的书籍，电影，听过的CD等进行简单的描述。
3.能让学生有意识的运用目标语言进行输出，同时启发学生从所学的目标篇章中吸取模仿写作的句型和表达，进而提高自己的写作能力。
4.通过写作训练，来展示自己的个人喜好，提高学生欣赏美的水平。
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Revision
Pre-writing
Ask and answer.
What kind of music do (you\they)\does she like
They like the music because they can ________to it.
dance
She likes the music because she can ______along with it.
sing
I like the folk music because its sad beauty makes people _______ their deepest wounds from their own sad or painful experiences.
recall
I love the song because the_______ are great.
lyrics
He likes/loves/prefers music that/ which ____________________
makes him happy/relaxed
makes them excited
They like/love/prefer music that/ which __________________.
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Revision
Pre-writing
Ask and answer.
What kind of movies do you like
I like the comedy because it is a good way to _____.
I like the cartoon because it is very _______.
funny
I like the science fiction film because it is very ___________.
imagination
I like the documentary because it is very
real and I can ________a lot from it.
learn
relax
I like movies that____________________.
have funny dialogues
I like movies that____________________.
have a happy ending
I like movies that___________________________________.
encourage me to face difficulties bravely
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Revision
Pre-writing
Ask and answer.
A: What kind of music do you like best
B: I like music that is sad.
A: Why do you like this kind of music
B: I think sad music is strangely beautiful.
A: How do you feel when you listen to this kind of music
B: I feel sad and want to cry when I listen to it.
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Group work
Pre-writing
Ask and answer.
假如你是一名小记者，请仿照以下的对话，对你身边的朋友进行采访尽可能多地使用 that, which or who引导的定语从句。
A: Excuse me, I’m a reporter from ...
May I ask you some questions
B: Sure!
A: What … do you like
B: I like … that/which/who …
bands/food/clothes/actor/music/teachers/movies/singers/books…
Report like this:
Hello , everyone！I’m a reporter from…
My friend A likes ... that/ who/which...
B likes... that/ who/which...
C likes... that/ who/which...
Useful expressions:is tall/ is beautiful/ is kind/ play different kinds of music/ write ones's own songs/ play different songs/comfortable/ nice/ cool/ warm/ expensive/ fashion(时尚)…...
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Reading
Pre-writing
First reading then writing.
Read the passage and complete the chart.
My favorite kind of music is folk music
My favorite kind of music is folk music. Because listening to folk music is a good way to relax.
Mom in the candlelight is my favorite song.I like it because it is beautiful. The lyrics are very great.It was sung by Mao amin. When I listened to it, I thought of my mom. The mother’s love is the greatest love in the world. I was moved by these lyrics.
I think you should listen to it, because it can help us love our mothers more.
Favorite kind of music
Why I like this kind of music
Favorite song
Why I like this song
How this song makes me feel
Why I think others should listen to
folk music
Because it is a
good way to relax
Mom in the
candlelight
it is beautiful. The
lyrics are very great
He thought of my
mom
because it can helpus love our
mothers more
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Pre-writing
First reading then writing.
分析本文的写作思路
1、本文运用的语言结构：
________________________________________________________________________________________________
2、本文的写作思路：
总（ ）----分（ ）
----________________
I like. . . because. . . When I listen to/watch it, I feel . . .
I think you should listen to/watch it too because. . .
具体写自己喜欢的及理由
推荐的理由
类型及理由
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Reading
Pre-writing
First reading then writing.
My Favorite Music
There are many kinds of music ,such as country music, rock music, classical music and so on. My favorite music is pop music.
On the one hand I like pop music because it is easy to learn, and this kind of music is often about our life. On the other hand They are very popular among people and it is sung easily by people. they are very interesting and when I listen to it, I feel very relaxed.
I think you should listen to it too because it is also a good way to learn English.
How to write
先审题,按点写, 分段写,注意开头和结尾
第一点: 你知道哪些种类的音乐？你最喜欢哪种音乐？
第二点：你为什么喜欢听音乐（至少三点）？
第三点：你向其他同学推荐的原因。
There are… such as, like, for example
I like …best./ My favorite music is…
表示顺序的单词：first , second, third, next, then, finally,
I think you should … too because…
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Make notes
Pre-writing
Look and fill.
What kind of music or movies do you like best Make notes in the chart by yourselves.
Favorite kind of music/movie
Why I like this kind of music/movie
Favorite song/movie
Why I like this song/movie
How this song/movie makes me feel
Why I think others should listen to/watch this song/movie
3a
Historical drama
Makes me aware of some important historical events and how they affected people’s lives
Gone with the Wind
It has a very interesting storyline and an excellent cast.
Deeply moved-sad about the effects of war, but I'm hopeful for the human spirit.
It's one of the best movies of all time.
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Writing
3b
Use your notes to write an article for a newspaper or magazine
to tell people about your favorite kind of music/movie and
your favorite song/movie.
Useful the following expressions to help you：
My favorite kind of music/movie is…
I like… because …
It was…by…
When I listen to /watch it, I feel…
I think you should listen to/watch it too because …
While-writing
Look and write.
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
话题分析
本单元以“谈论个人及他人的喜好”为话题而展开，具体谈论了喜爱的音乐及其缘由。在生活中可供我们讨论的话题有很多，除音乐外，如喜爱的书籍、电影、老师、运动等。写这类作文首先要确定时态，多用一般现在时；其次写清楚自己的喜好，并说明自己喜爱的理由，同时也可谈谈自己的看法和感想。
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
审题
审题
人称
时态
注意
第一人称
一般现在时
词数
适当运用定语从句
写作要点
My favorite Music
Key points
kinds of music （音乐\电影类型）
why （推荐的理由）
importance of music （音乐\电影的重要性）
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写作框架
outline
Beginning
Main part
Ending
Make sure the body includes all the information provided.
It is also important to give reasonable details.
A good beginning is half done.Use sentences to give a brief introduction. e.g. Music is the language of the human. Everyone likes music. As for me, my favorite kind of music is …
A saying or your own opinion is a good choice. You can use the following phrases: In short, Generally speaking,
In a word, How adj./adv.+ S+ V!
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
扩展成句
kinds:
pop music, rock music, classical music, folk music, jazz, dance music, rap, hit-hop, quiet and gentle, loud, sing along with, dance to, has great lyrics
why: relax ourselves, learn some knowledge,bring different feelings, cheer me up...
importance of music: Life without songs...
连接词
Firstly, However, First of all, What’s more, Instead, Besides, All in all, In addition, Finally,
Furthermore, In my opinion,
As the saying goes, In a word,
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
句型荟萃
开头句
中间句
结尾句
经典名句
Music is the medicine of a troubled mind
音乐是治愈心灵苦恼的药
Great music can touch the hearts of people
好的音乐能触动人的心灵
My favorite is我最喜欢的是
The movie is about这部电影是关于
I like/love/prefer/don't mind... that/which/who...
我喜欢/喜爱/更喜欢/不介意.....
I like... because....我喜欢......因为......
It helps me...他帮助我......
When I listen to...,I feel...当我听......时，我感觉...
What's more,... 而且,......
In a world，the movie is...总之,这部电影是...
It's well worth watching.他值得一看.
It teaches sb. ...他教会某人...
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
范文欣赏 I
My favorite kind of movie is the historical drama. I like historical dramas because they are a relaxing way for me to learn history and the effects that a historical event had on people’s lives.
My favorite movie is Gone with the Wind. It was made in 1939, based on a prize-winning novel by Margaret Mitchell. The movie’s plot is set against the American Civil War and it has an amazing cast that helps bring the story to life. When I watch this movie, I feel deeply moved. It makes me feel sad about the effects of war, but it also gives me hope in the strength of the human spirit.
I think you should see this movie too because it is one of the greatest movies of all time.
具体介绍喜欢的电影，注意用到定语从句
将自己喜欢的电影推荐给他人
开篇点题，说明喜欢的原因
My Favorite Movie
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
范文欣赏 II
My Favorite Song
My favorite song changes depending on how I feel that day. Usually I like songs that have great lyrics or rhythm.
When I’m down and tired, I prefer songs which can cheer me up, songs like Big Big World are my first choice because they are delightful and easy to follow. The lyrics may be simple, but very cheerful, and the rhythm, too.When I sing along with them, I feel refreshed and relaxed.
If I’m stressed out or uneasy, I love to listen to songs that are gentle and quiet, Our Canon in D is my favorite, which is performed by two people, a guitarist and a singer. The guitar player is great, the lyrics are comforting and the singer sings perfectly. After listening to it, I’ll calm down and gain my strength again.
Life without songs will be empty and meaningless. If you feel like listening to something, choose a song that you like best.
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Writing practice I
While-writing
Look and write.
某英语报社正在向学生征稿，题目是“my favorite movies”。
假如你是张子涵，请你写一篇英语短文向该报社投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的电影《哪吒之魔童降世》（NeZha）并说明理由。
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，不少于80字。
参考词汇demon魔；fate命运；fight out以斗争的方式解决，辩论出结果
人称：第一人称
体裁：应用文
时态：一般现在时
审题立意
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
谋篇布局
总述
具体介绍
表达感情
My name is...
In my spare time, I like movies which...
My favorite movie is...
The story is about...
He is born to...
However, his tries his best to...
It makes me...
... influence me a lot.
What's more, the songs...
In our world ,the movie...
It is well worth watching.
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
短语储备
sing along with跟着……—起唱
in spare time在空闲时间
cheer up（使)变得更高兴;振奋起来
plenty of大量;充足
depend on视……而定;取决于
be born in/on出生于
try one 's best to do sth.尽全力做某事
stick to坚持;固守
not only ... but also...不但……而且……
in this way这样;通过这种方法
remind... of .../ make... recall...提醒……;使……想起……
be full of/ be filled with充满;装满
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
开头句
中间句
结尾句
My favorite is我最喜欢的是
The movie is about这部电影是关于
I like/love/prefer/don't mind... that/which/who...
我喜欢/喜爱/更喜欢/不介意.....
I like... because....我喜欢......因为......
It helps me...他帮助我......
When I listen to...,I feel...当我听......时，我感觉...
What's more,... 而且,......
In a world，the movie is...总之,这部电影是...
It's well worth watching.他值得一看.
It teaches sb. ...他教会某人...
句型荟萃
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
范文欣赏
My Favorite Movie
My name is Zhang Zihan. In my spare time,I like movies which can cheer me up and relax my mind.
My favorite movie is Ne Zha. The story is about Ne Zha. He is born to be a demon. However, he tries his best to be the master of his fate. I Like the movie. It makes me stick to my dream and keep on fighting.“If the fate is unfair, fight it out.”These words from the movie influence me a lot. What`s more, the songs in this movie are great.
In a word, the movie is fun and gives me something to think about.
It is well worth watching.
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Writing practice II
While-writing
以My favorite music为题，写一篇短文，词数80左右。介绍一下自己喜欢的音乐类型，并说明理由。
本单元的话题是谈论“音乐和电影”，多以介绍音乐或电影的种类或形式为主，体裁多是说明文。
写作时，时态应为____________.
人称应为__________.
写 作 指 导
一般现在时
第一人称
Look and write.
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写 作 思 路 点 拨
The opening point
main part;
ending
引入话题：I love music and I often listen to music in my spare time.
介绍自己喜欢的音乐： I prefer music that isn’t too loud.
表达愿望：I hope I can become a singer and I can sing like the singers in “The Voice of China”
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
范 文 欣 赏 I
My favorite kind of music is old music. I’ll Never Forget My Mom is my favorite song.
I like it because it is beautiful. The lyrics are very great. It was written by Liu Zheng. Many famous singers like Cheng Lin, Liu Hegang, and Tan Jing once sang it. When I listened to it, I thought of my mom. The mother’s love is the greatest love in the world. I was moved by these lyrics.
I think you should listen to it, because it can help us love our mothers more.
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
My favorite kind of music folk music
My favorite kind of music is folk music because it is national feature and relaxing.
Erquan Yingyue is my favorite. It was played on a kind of instrument Erhu by Abing. I like it because I can recall Abing’s poor life and I’m proud of his amazing musical skills. I feel like crying when I listen to it. Its sad beauty makes people recall their deepest wounds from their own sad or painful experiences.
I think you should listen to it at your spare time because it was one of China’s national treasures.
范 文 欣 赏 II
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1. Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.
plenty of, suppose, war, electronic, actor, spare
1. The comedy has ________ dialogs which are very humorous.
2. Since you prefer music that is relaxing, I don’t ________ you
would want to buy this __________ music CD.
3. Christmas is a time for spreading joy, so you should find some
_______ time to spend with your loved ones.
4. Although he is an _____ who does not have much experience, he
did an excellent job in the new ____ film.
plenty of
suppose
electronic
Self Check
actor
war
spare
Post-writing
Look and fill.
2. Fill in the blanks with who, that or which. More than one answer may be possible.
A: Hi, Cindy! Would you like to see Sky High in 2050 this weekend
B: Hmm…no, I don’t think movies __________ try to describe the future are very interesting. Could we see City Danger instead
A: You mean, the new police story _________ was filmed in five countries
B: Yes, that’s the one. The actor ________ plays the hero used to be a schoolteacher!
A: OK, sure. It sounds like something _______ we both will enjoy!
that/which
that/which
who/that
that
Self Check
Post-writing
Look and fill.
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Self Check
Post-writing
Look and complete.
1. I don’t like music
_______________________.
2. I enjoy spending time in places
___________________________.
3. I have friends
______________________________.
4. I like movie stars
__________________________________.
3.Complete the sentences about yourself.
that/which is too loud
that/which are relaxing
who/that are friendly and helpful
who/that are beautiful or handsome
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Class test
Post-writing
用所给词的适当形式填空。
1. I work for a big (Australia) company.
2. Is your back still (pain)
3. (laugh) for two hours is a good way to relax!
4. They try their best (solve) their problems.
5. Now more and more people ride ________ (electricity)
bikes instead of ________ (drive)cars.
Australian
painful
Laughing
to solve
electric
driving
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Homework
1. Review the new words and expressions in Unit 9.
2. Polish your writing according to your group members’ advice.
3. Preview the new words and expressions in Unit 10.
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