外研版（2019） 必修 第一册 Unit 3 Family mattersDeveloping ideas—读写·体现学以致用PPT（共84张PPT）
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Developing ideas—读写·体现学以致用
课时目标
1. 理解课文内容，复述Brownlee兄弟的故事，掌握新闻特写的基本特征和常见的阅读方法。
2. 联系自身实际，加深对单元主题意义的理解，正确认识家人之间的亲情与相互支持的关系。
3. 通过文本学习和复述，初步了解回忆类故事的基本内容、文体特征和写作手法，能够运用所学知识简单记述一段难忘的家庭往事。
一、背阅读单词——会认就行
1．triathlon n. 铁人三项运动
2．million num. 许多，无数
3．disqualify v. (因犯规而)取消……的资格
4．athlete n. 运动员，田径运动员
二、背重点单词——写对才行
1． n. (报纸或杂志的)特写
2． adv. 一般，通常
3． adj. 独特的，与众不同的(一般含褒义)
4． n. 风格
5． adj. 额外的，另外的
6． n. 细节，细微之处
7． n. 系列比赛
8． prep. 到……上，向……上，朝……上
feature
typically
individual
style
extra
detail
series
onto
9． n. 跑道
10． n. 新闻媒体，传媒
11． prep. 尽管，虽然
12． prep. 在整个期间，自始至终
13． adj. 好的，积极的
14． n. 奖牌，勋章
15． adv. 用某种方法，不知怎的
16． adv. 当然，确实(用于强调陈述或回答)
track
media
despite
throughout
positive
medal
somehow
indeed
三、背拓展单词——活用才行
1． v．钦佩，赞美，羡慕→admiration n．钦佩，赞赏，羡慕→admirable adj.令人羡慕的，值得赞赏的→admirably adv.令人羡慕地，值得赞赏地
2． v．认为，判断→judgement n．意见；判断力；判决
3． v．和解，结束(争论)→settler n．移民；殖民者→settlement n．协议
4． v．包含，含有→container n．容器
admire
judge
settle
contain
5． n．总结，概要→summarize vt.总结，概要
6． adj.强有力的，有影响(感染)力的→power n. 力量；权力；能力
7． adv.明显地，显而易见地→obvious adj.明显的，显而易见的
8． adj.全部的，整个的→entirely adv.完全地；全然地；整个地
9． adv.非常，极其→enormous adj.巨大的，庞大的
enormously
summary
powerful
obviously
entire
四、背短语、词块——多积更行
1． 领先
2． 即将，正要……
3． 处于困境中
4． 偶尔，有时
5． 把……抛在后面；超过
6． 不再
7． 赢得比赛的机会
in the lead
(be) about to do
in trouble
now and then
leave ... behind
no longer
a chance to win the race
8． 终点线
9． 医疗区
10． 一件很酷的事情
11． 互相鼓励
12． 在我的一生中
13． 一种非常积极的动力
14． 比赛的结局
the finish line
the medical area
a cool thing to do
encourage each other
throughout my entire life
an enormously positive force
the ending to the race
五、背重点句式——不背不行
1.
悟原句 But for Alistair, his decision was easy to explain：“Mum wouldn't have been happy if I'd left Jonny behind.” (主语＋be＋adj.＋to do sth.)
但是对阿利斯泰尔而言，他的决定很容易解释：“要是我撇下乔尼，妈妈肯定会不高兴的。”
写佳句 This machine . Anybody can learn to use it in a few minutes.
这台机器很容易操作。任何人学习几分钟就会使用。
is very easy to operate
2.
悟原句 At that moment, he was no longer an athlete aiming for a medal — he was just a brother. (现在分词短语作后置定语)
在那一刻，他不再是一名想赢得奖牌的运动员——他只是一位兄长。
写佳句 (2020·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达) There is a small river ____________
__________________.
有一条小河穿过农场。
flowing
through the farm
第一遍 泛读通文意
Just A Brother
It was the final part of the 2016 World Triathlon Series in Mexico. With just 700 metres to go, Alistair Brownlee was in third place and his younger brother, Jonny, was in the lead.Alistair pushed himself towards the finish line in the burning heat, but as he came round the corner, he saw his brother about to fall onto the track.Alistair had to choose — brotherly love, or a chance to win the race
For Alistair, the choice was clear. His brother was in trouble. He had to help.Alistair ran towards Jonny, caught him and started pulling him towards the finish line. Alistair then pushed his brother over the line. The move put Jonny in second place and Alistair himself in third. It was an unexpected end to the race, but Alistair did not want to discuss it with the media. He just wanted to see his younger brother, who had been rushed to the medical area.
The Brownlee brothers have been doing triathlons since they were children. “Obviously, when your older brother is doing it, you think it's a cool thing to do，” says Jonny. Alistair says that they encourage each other as much as they can when they train.
Despite arguments over “stupid things” now and then, Alistair agrees that having a brother is an advantage. “Throughout my entire life, I've had my brother trying to beat me at everything I do. It has been an enormously positive force.”
Watched by millions, the ending to the race has divided opinions: should the brothers have been disqualified or highly praised for their actions But for Alistair，his decision was easy to explain: “Mum wouldn't have been happy if I'd left Jonny behind.” At that moment, he was no longer an athlete aiming for a medal — he was just a brother.
[参考译文]
只是一位兄长
这是2016年在墨西哥举行的世界铁人三项系列赛的最后一程。距终点还有700米，阿利斯泰尔·布朗利位列第三，他的弟弟乔尼处于领先地位。阿利斯泰尔在酷热中奋力奔向终点。但就在他转过弯道时，却看到弟弟摇摇欲坠地要摔倒在跑道上。阿利斯泰尔必须做出选择——是要手足之情，还是要赢得比赛？
[句式释解]
句 with 复合结构，其中to go是不定式作后置定语。
句 but连接并列复合句，as引导时间状语从句。
对阿利斯泰尔来说，如何选择显而易见。弟弟遇到了麻烦，他必须施以援手。阿利斯泰尔跑向乔尼，抓住他，并拖着他跑向终点。接着，阿利斯泰尔把乔尼推过终点线。这一举动使乔尼获得第二名，而他自己则位列第三。这是一个意料之外的结局，但阿利斯泰尔并不想与媒体讨论此事。他只想去探望被紧急送到医疗区的弟弟。
[句式释解]
句 who引导的定语从句，修饰先行词his younger brother。
布朗利兄弟从小就接触铁人三项。“显然，当你的哥哥参加铁人三项时，你会觉得这很酷。”乔尼说道。阿利斯泰尔称，他们在训练的时候尽可能地互相鼓励。尽管偶尔会为一些“蠢事”争吵，阿利斯泰尔仍然觉得有个兄弟是种优势。“在我的一生中，我的弟弟总想在各个方面打败我。这对我来说是非常积极的动力。”
[句式释解]
句 since引导的时间状语从句，从句中用一般过去时，主句用现在完成时或现在完成进行时。
句 that引导的宾语从句，动名词短语having a brother作主语。
句 定语从句I do修饰先行词everything，省略了关系代词that。
有数百万人目睹了这场比赛的结尾，但对此也是众说纷纭：兄弟二人是应该因他们的行为被取消比赛资格，还是应该被高度赞扬？但是对阿利斯泰尔而言，他的决定很容易解释：“要是我撇下乔尼，妈妈肯定会不高兴的。”在那一刻，他不再是一名想赢得奖牌的运动员——他只是一位兄长。
[句式释解]
句 过去分词短语作时间状语。
句 本句使用了虚拟语气，表示对过去情况的推测。if从句用过去完成时，主句用would have done。
第二遍 精读提素养
步骤一|先明文章主旨大意，知写了什么
What's the main idea of the text
A．People's different opinions about the Brownlee brothers.
B．Love and competition are equally important in the match.
C．The value of brotherly love.
D．Love is precious.
答案：C
步骤二|再逐段精读文章，看怎样写的
阅读文章第1、2段，完成下列题目
1．文意的理解
(1)Write T (true) or F (false)．
①Alistair Brownlee was in third in the end. ( )
②In the final part of the match, the weather was very cool. ( )
③With the help of Alistair, Jonny was in first place. ( )
(2)When and where did the story happen
In the 2016 World Triathlon Series in Mexico.
T
F
F
Alistair ran towards Jonny, caught him and started pulling him towards the finish line.
(3)What was Alistair's choice
(4)How did Alistair help his brother in the match
To help his brother/Brotherly love.
2．表达的技巧
采用精彩开头
课文以2016年世界铁人三项系列赛墨西哥站比赛尾声的一幕作为开篇段落，这是新闻特写的常见写法之一，其作用在于生动形象地呈现激动人心的一幕，吸引读者的阅读兴趣，同时为整篇特写奠定感情基调。
根据汉语提示补全下面句子：
①It was the final part of the men's Winter Olympic Figure Skating final. With the last five minutes, I suddenly .
这是男子冬季奥运会花样滑冰决赛的最后一部分。在最后五分钟，我突然开始紧张起来。
started to get nervous
②PARIS — whether the Tour de France can go ahead amid the coronavirus pandemic, but if it does it may be without roadside spectators in order to minimise infection risk, the French sports minister said.
巴黎——法国体育部长说，现在决定环法自行车赛能否在冠状病毒大流行的情况下如期举行还为时过早，但如果确实如此，为了将感染风险降到最低，可能不会有路边的观众。
It is too soon to decide
阅读文章第3、4段，完成下列题目
1．文意的理解
(1)Write T (true) or F (false).
①The Brownlee brothers argue over “stupid things” now and then. ( )
②Jonny agrees that having a brother is an advantage. ( )
T
F
(2)The Brownlee brothers start to do triathlons when .
A．they were children
B．they were at high school
C．they were at junior school
D．they left school
答案：A
(3)What does the first “it” in the second sentence of the third paragraph refer to
A．A cool thing. B．Triathlon.
C．A stupid thing. D．An advantage.
答案：B
2．表达的技巧
恰当运用形容词、副词
第三段最后一句中使用副词enormously修饰形容词positive，生动形象地描绘出了Alistair对有一个弟弟的优势的肯定。
根据英汉提示写出下面单词的修饰语：
① hot滚烫的 ② cold冰冷的
boiling
freezing
步骤三|读后理层次结构，析有何逻辑
本文是一篇新闻特写，行文脉络为：赛场上弟弟快要摔倒(起)→阿利斯泰尔助弟弟一臂之力(承)→布朗利兄弟之间浓浓的兄弟之情(转)→观众的评价(合)。
阅读技巧：新闻特写通常比常规新闻故事篇幅更长、细节和背景信息更详细，一般会有一个吸引人的开头，具有强烈现场感的主体和出人意料的结局。在阅读时重点关注故事结尾蕴含的深意，这往往是主旨大意或情感态度的命题角度。
步骤四|最后知选文意图，思有何价值
建立和谐的家庭关系
家庭建设不是小事，对于“如何与家人相处”的问题，应积极而艺术地对待。我们对家人、朋友、爱人和对自己的爱，是当我们需要被温暖包围时，我们能获取的一个最重要的光和力量的来源。文章第三段最后一句“这对我来说是非常积极的动力”就表达了这个观点。建立和谐的家庭关系，树立正确的家庭观，会对我们的工作和生活产生积极的影响，进而提高幸福指数，毕竟生活不易，我们需且行且珍惜。
请体会并记住下面的句子：
①I don't know what “home” is, but unhappiness and worries melt away once there. —Bing Xin
“家”是什么， 我不知道；但烦闷、忧愁，都在此中融化消灭。 ——冰心
②A comfortable house is a great source of happiness. It ranks immediately after health and a good conscience. —Sydney Smith
一个舒适的家园是幸福的主要源泉，它仅次于健康和一颗善良的心。
——悉尼·史密斯
③Home is the place where, when you have to go there, it has to take you in.
—Robert Frost
家是永远向游子敞开大门的地方。 ——罗伯特·弗罗斯特
第一板块 单词和短语——点点清
1．admire v．钦佩，赞美，羡慕
[用法感知]
①When I was young, I admired clever people.Now that I am old, I admire kind people.
少时羡慕聪明人，老来赞美仁厚的人。
②(以文化人助写作) I admire his bravery for saving the boy from the cold water.
我钦佩他从冰冷的水中救出那个男孩的勇气。
③Deeply moved by her performance，the whole audience gasped with/in admiration.
被她的表演深深打动，全场观众赞叹不已。
[归纳点拨]
(1)admire sb.for (doing) sth. 因(做)某事而钦佩某人
(2)admiration n. 钦佩；羡慕
with/in admiration 钦佩地
(3)admiring adj. 赞赏的；钦佩的；令人欣赏的
admirable adj. 可钦佩的；值得赞赏的；令人羡慕的
[应用融会] (单句语法填空/完成句子)
④I'm full of (admire) for those space heroes.
⑤His bravery is (admire) so we all like him.
⑥Lewis on the advanced medical research.
刘易斯因在先进医学研究方面所做的工作而受到钦佩。
⑦I watched his works, very carefully and .
我非常仔细地、怀着极大的尊重与钦佩观看了他的作品。
admiration
admirable
was admired for his work
with great respect and admiration
2．judge v．认为，判断
[用法感知]
①The economic impact of the arts is often overlooked and badly judged.
艺术的经济影响经常被忽视，而且评价很差。
②Judging from/by the look on his face, the news must have been terrible.
从他脸上的表情判断，这个消息肯定很糟糕。
③As far as I can judge, he should be responsible for it.
依我看，他应对此事负责。
[归纳点拨]
(1)judging from/by ... 根据……来判断
as far as sb. can judge 依某人判断/看
(2)judgement n. 判断；判断力；判决
make a judgement on 对……进行评判
[应用融会] (单句语法填空/完成句子)
④Can you make a (judge) on the game
⑤ (judge) from her last letter，they are having a wonderful time.
⑥ ,Li Ming is more confident.
据我判断，李明更自信。
judgement
Judging
As far as I can judge
3．The middle part contains the “meat” of the story, with the ending being a summary, a powerful quote or even a surprise for the reader.
中间部分包含了故事的“肉”，结尾是一个总结，一个有力的引述，甚至是给读者一个惊喜。
★contain v．包含，含有，容纳
[用法感知]
①He recommended that she do some research and talk to dentists about what a healthier candy would contain.
他建议她做一些研究，并向牙医咨询健康糖果包含什么。
②The hall can contain 3,000 people.
这座礼堂可容纳3 000人。
[易混辨析] contain, include
contain 侧重包含的内容或成分。另有“容纳”的意思
include 侧重“范围”，只能用来表示所含之物中的一部分。不作谓语时include的使用常见于including和included两种非谓语形式
轻巧识记
选词填空(contain, include)
③This little book all the information that you need.
④I have to prepare food for seven people me.
★powerful adj.强有力的，有影响(感染)力的
[用法感知]
①You're a powerful man — people will listen to you.
你是一个有影响力的人，大家会听你的。
②In the future all cars will be powered by electricity, solar energy or wind.
未来所有的汽车都将由电力、太阳能或风能提供动力。
contains
including
③The party aimed to come to power at the election.
这个政党意图在大选中执政。
④The party has been in power for eight years.
这个政党执政已经八年了。
[归纳点拨]
(1)power n． 力量；权力
vt. 给……提供动力，驱动
within one's power 在某人能力/权力范围之内
beyond one's power 超出某人的能力/权力
be in power 执政
come to power 开始掌权/执政
(2)powerfully adv. 强大地
[应用融会] (单句语法填空/句型转换)
⑤Body language is one of the most (power) means of communication.
⑥It's a play — painful, funny and (power) acted.
⑦I can't give you a refund — I'm afraid it's not within my power.
→I can't give you a refund — I'm afraid it's .
powerful
powerfully
beyond my power
第二板块 句式和语法——句句通
But for Alistair, his decision was easy to explain：“Mum wouldn't have been happy if I'd left Jonny behind.”
但是对阿利斯泰尔而言，他的决定很容易解释：“要是我撇下乔尼，妈妈肯定会不高兴的。”
[归纳点拨]
his decision was easy to explain是“主语＋be＋adj.＋不定式”结构，其中his decision和及物动词explain构成动宾关系。在该句型中常常使用不定式的主动形式表示被动意义。使用此结构须具备两个前提条件：
(1)形容词常常表示主语的性质或特征。常见的此类形容词有important, difficult, hard, easy, good, comfortable, pleasant, interesting, exciting等。
(2)不定式的动词和句子的主语之间构成逻辑上的动宾关系，但是形式上用不定式的主动形式表示被动意义。
①The bike was too heavy and difficult to control.
这辆自行车十分沉重很难控制。
②I like getting up very early in summer.The morning air is so good to breathe.
在夏天我喜欢很早起床。早上的空气呼吸起来真好。
[名师点津]
(1)若不定式中动词为不及物动词，其后应该加相应的介词。
(2)不定式有时会带自己的逻辑主语，并用for引出。
(3)如果作表语的形容词不是说明主语的特征或性质，且不定式中的动词和主语之间为动宾关系，此时不定式应该使用被动语态。
③The armchair looks rather hard, but it is very comfortable to sit in.
这把扶手椅看上去很硬，但坐上去很舒服。(句中sit为不及物动词，故其后应该加介词in)
④The question is too hard for her to answer.
这个问题太难了，她回答不上来。
⑤The task is ready to be started.
这项任务已经准备好了，可以开始了。
[应用融会] (单句语法填空/完成句子)
⑥The apples are hard (reach)．
⑦The boss is hard to get along .
⑧Mr Green realized that the task .
格林先生意识到这项任务是难以完成的。
★“Mum wouldn't have been happy if I'd left Jonny behind.”表示的是对过去情况的虚拟，主句谓语动词用了would have done结构，if条件句用了过去完成时。
to reach
with
was difficult to complete
[归纳点拨]
虚拟语气在if条件句中的用法为：
主句谓语动词 if条件句谓语动词
对现在情况的虚拟 would＋动词原形 动词的过去式(be用were)
况对过去情的虚拟 would have done had done
对将来情况的虚拟 would/should＋ 动词原形 动词的过去式；were to do; should＋动词原形
[名师点津] 主句中的would有时可换用should, could或might。要注意错综时间条件句：主句和从句的动作不是发生在同一时间，其动词形式要根据时间而定。
[应用融会] (单句语法填空)
①If the weather (be) better, we could have had a picnic. But it rained all day.
②—John went to the hospital alone.
—If he (tell) me about it, I would have gone with him.
③—The weather has been very hot and dry.
—Yes. If it had rained even a drop, things (be) much better now! And my vegetables wouldn't have died.
④If Newton (live) today, he would be surprised by what has been discovered in science and technology.
had been
had told
would be
lived
写作项目——Writing about a family memory
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于家庭记忆的回忆类故事，实际上是写一篇叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把握记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等要交代清楚。
由课文学写作范式(写得“像模像样”)
(一)课文范式提炼
(二)写作要点指津
一般来说，记叙文通常由三个部分组成：开头、主体和结尾。叙事类记叙文的写作需注意以下几点：
1．开头通常要写清楚事件的背景、发生的时间、地点、人物及人与人之间的关系。通过阅读开头，读者能对事件有大概的了解。
2．叙述故事一般可以从以下几方面展开：人物活动的时间顺序、空间位置变换或事件发生的顺序。
3．结尾通常会写出事件的结局，或者表达自我感慨，陈述对某人或某事的观点或态度。
由课文学亮点表达(写得“韵味十足”)
1．学亮点表达
(1)首段一共两个句子，均使用了“过去进行时”，形象、生动地描述了昨天正在打扫房间时发现了一张旧照片，强调了是“偶然”发现，并由此引出下文的家庭记忆。
(2)第二段第二句中的副词really和第三句中的副词never的使用，增强了语义表达的效果，强调起得特别早和第一次做饭。
(3)第三段首句中的“be about to ... when ...(正要做……这时……)”这一句型的使用非常形象，强调了throw everything away和my mother came in两个动作同时发生。
2．学情感表达
第三段最后三句“To my surprise, she tasted them ...ate them all.”饱含深情的表达了妈妈对作者的鼓励和爱意，尤其是I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.(我猜想爱的确是一种神奇的成分。)一句表达出作者感受到了母爱的温暖，这也是作者会继续做下去的动力。母女情深，溢于言表。
积素材充盈写作“语料库”
(一)背写作词汇
1．be amazed at/by ... 对……感到惊讶
2．be determined 决心
3．later on 后来
4．become confident 变得自信
5．how time flies 时间过得真快
6．enjoy the fresh air 呼吸新鲜空气
7．cheer with joy 高兴地欢呼
8．What a wonderful time! 多么美好的时光啊！
(二)背写作佳句
[常用开头句]
1．We set out/set off/started at 7：20 by bus/by bike/on foot/by plane/by train.
我们7：20乘公共汽车/骑自行车/步行/乘飞机/坐火车出发。
2．This morning I was busy preparing for my test when I heard ...
今天上午我正在忙着准备测试，这时我听到……
3．In order to encourage the students to do ... our school organised ...
为了鼓励学生们做……我们学校组织了……
[常用中间句]
1．由于大雨，所有的航班都被取消了，乘客们不得不改乘火车。
①All the flights had been canceled because of the heavy rain, so all the passengers had to take the train.
②All the flights had been canceled because of the heavy rain; as a result, all the passengers had to take the train.
③All the flights having been canceled because of the heavy rain, all the passengers had to take the train.
2．我们在桂林逗留的时间没有像我希望的那样长。
①We didn't spend so much time in Guilin as I had hoped.
②The time we spent in Guilin was not so much as I had hoped.
3．It reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best.
这使我想起了我的妈妈，她总是尽她所能给予我最好的。
4．After reading the passage, I was lost in thought.From my own perspective，however busy parents are，they should spare time to accompany their children.
读完这篇文章，我陷入了沉思。从我个人的角度看，不管父母有多忙，他们都应该挤出时间陪伴他们的孩子。
[常用结束句]
1．After visiting it, I've made up my mind to study harder than ever.
参观之后，我下决心要比以前更加努力地学习。
2．This is really an unforgettable experience.
这真是一次难忘的经历。
3．This experience has taught me that as long as I never give up and keep trying, I can succeed.
这次经历让我学到：只要我永不放弃并努力尝试，我就会成功。
4．Actually everyone should attach importance to family communication, which can strengthen the bond of the whole family and bridge the gap between children and parents.
实际上，每个人都应该重视家人之间的交流，这能增强家庭的凝聚力，消除孩子与父母之间的隔阂。
(三)背续写素材
读后续写微技能——人物心理描写佳句集锦
1．The last word went like a bullet to my heart.
最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。
2．A ripple of sadness welled up inside him.
他内心涌起一阵悲伤。
3．He felt the warmth surging through his body.
他感到温暖涌上全身。
4．The loneliness and grief comes in waves.
孤独和悲伤如波浪般涌来。
5．So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
她是如此羞愧以至于她能感受到血涌到脸上。
6．Her eyes misted over as she immersed herself in their good memories.
当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆中时，她的眼睛模糊了。
7．She thought of the flowers glittering in the sunshine and the mountains turning rosy in the setting sun. And every night she cried into her pillow as though her heart would break into pieces.
她想起了阳光下闪耀的花儿，夕阳下变成玫瑰色的群山。每一个夜晚，她把头埋在枕头里哭，肝肠寸断。
[应用体验]
假定你是李华，今天是2022年9月18日，星期日，天气晴朗。你去看望了住在乡下的爷爷奶奶。请你用英语写一篇日记。内容包括：
1．爷爷奶奶高兴的心情；2.帮助爷爷奶奶做饭；3.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文
September 18, 2022 Sunday Sunny
This morning, I went to see my grandparents. Obviously, ①________________
_____________________________(他们对我的意外造访非常高兴) that they took out fruits and snacks for me to enjoy.
they were so
happy at my unexpected visit
Next came the moment ② (他们问了我一系列的问题) on my life and study. Then, I ended up ③ _________________
_____________(帮助他们准备午餐). After the delicious lunch, I ④_____________ _______(向他们道别) and set off home.
Despite the short visit, I think it is quite meaningful. ⑤ ____________________
(不管我们有多忙), we should turn to them for a chat.
when they asked me a series of questions
helping them
prepare lunch
said goodbye
to them
However busy we are
Ⅰ.单词拼写
1．I wish I were as (苗条的) as you.
2．The room was even colder, (尽管) the fact that the heating was turned on.
3．The (整个的) family was staring at him.
4．No matter what you say, I shall stick to my (意见)．
5．There have been lots of (争论) about his drinking.
slim
despite
entire
opinion
arguments
6．He has a (积极的) attitude towards life.
7．Many (运动员) took part in the Olympic Games.
8．Their (意外的) arrival threw our plan into confusion.
9．She's so (明显地) cleverer and prettier than I am.
10．We should not (判断) a person by his appearance.
positive
athletes
unexpected
obviously
judge
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1．The girl went to pick up the basket (contain) many apples.
2．The school is widely admired its excellent teaching.
3．After supper my mother was observed (go) out，with a bag in her hand.
4．The bus company made an apology passengers for any inconvenience caused.
5． (judge) from what everyone says about him，I can say he is frightened of failure.
containing
for
to go
to
Judging
6．It's eleven o'clock now, but she cannot settle down work.
7．At that time people would starve if food was difficult (find), particularly during the cold winter months.
8．It's about time that I picked my little girl from senior high.
9．They are aiming (reduce) unemployment by 50% this year.
10．Because she was under age，her parents were still responsible her.
to
to find
up
to reduce
for
Ⅲ.选词填空
1．Her father died, and after that she went to school.
2．Just call me whenever you're .
3．He was running but unfortunately, he suddenly fell down.
4．Beijing has been suffering from choking smog recently.
no longer， focus on， turn to， as well as， calm down， jump in with both feet，praise ...for， in the lead， now and then， in trouble
no longer
in trouble
in the lead
now and then
5． for a minute and listen to me.
6．I have to my dictionary because there are too many new words.
7．Before you please think it over.
8．They visited some factories, hospitals the school.
9．People highly the medical staff their bravery.
10．The old man stood there with his eyes the picture.
Calm down
turn to
jump in with both feet
as well as
praised
for
focused on
Ⅳ.完成句子
1． of the hill, the city looks more beautiful.
从山顶看，这个城市显得更漂亮了。
2．The pinetree is too high for me and the pine cones .
这棵松树对我来说太高了，那些松果很难够到。
3．You should at once when you are late for class.
当你迟到时应立刻向老师道歉。
Seen from the top
are hard to reac
make an apology to your teacher
4． her accent, she must be from Sichuan.
根据她的口音判断，她准是四川人。
5．If he had followed my advice，he .
如果他听了我的劝告，他就不会失去工作了。
Judging from
wouldn't have lost his job
Ⅴ.课文语法填空
With just 700 metres 1. (go), Alistair Brownlee saw his brother about to fall onto the track. He ran towards Jonny, caught him and 2. (start) pulling him towards the finish line. The move put Jonny in second place and Alistair 3. (he) in third. It was 4. unexpected end to the race, but Alistair did not want to discuss it 5. the media. He just wanted to see his younger brother 6. had been rushed to the medical area.
to go
started
himself
an
with
who/that
Despite 7. (argument) over “stupid things” now and then, Alistair agrees that 8. (have) a brother is an advantage.
9． (watch) by millions, the ending to the race has divided opinions: should the brothers have been disqualified or 10. (high) praised for their actions But for Alistair, his decision was easy to explain. At that moment, he was no longer an athlete aiming for a medal —he was just a brother.
arguments
having
Watched
highly
Ⅵ.读后续写(基础性)
阅读下面材料，根据括号内的汉语提示补全所续写的文章，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The eight-year-old Carol lived with her father David, Mother May and elder brother Rob. The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature. The village was at the foot of a mountain, with beautiful views of the snowy mountain. The family survived on growing seasonal plants and trees. Their life is totally surrounded by nature and beauty.
While they lived a very happy life, Carol did not love the beautiful atmosphere of the village. She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life. She wanted to shop, move around the city, watch movies, and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes, etc.However, there was hardly any chance that Carol's family moved to the city as they had everything in the village.
One day, Carol fell asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep. Of course, she had a strange dream. She saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her deceased grandmother granted her a wish. Carol requested her that she should love to enjoy the city life as she always desired.
Grandmother understood the desire of Carol but still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life is better than the city life.
She told Carol, “Baby, you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home. You cannot breathe fresh air. You cannot play with animals. You can hardly find any trees. You will not find peace as you see here! Do you still want to go to the city？”
Without hearing the concerns, Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish. Grandmother granted her wish, but with a condition. Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city. Later, she would return to the village. Carol agreed.
Carol then found herself in the city with her friends. Carol and her friends went to watch movies. After that they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall. Carol ① _____________________________________________________
_____(很高兴有机会体验城市生活). Yet at the same time, she ②_______________ _________________________________________________(明白了祖母所说的一切在这个城市都是真实的). There was no peace and no silence; the city life was fast and rushing. The air quality was not satisfying.
was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the
city
understood that
everything told by her grandmother was true in the city
Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up. She recalled what happened just now in her dream and ③ _______________________________
___________________________________________________(意识到她和家人在村子里的生活远比城市生活精彩). Carol ④___________________________________
__________(明白她现在的生活更快乐了). She ⑤____________________________ (与家人分享了她的梦) while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables, and they laughed together.
realized that her life in the village
with her family was far more wonderful than the city life
understood that she was having a more
joyful life
shared her dream with her family
“课时跟踪检测”见“课时跟踪检测（三）”
(单击进入电子文档)
Developing ideas—读写·体现学以致用
课时目标
1. 理解课文内容，复述Brownlee兄弟的故事，掌握新闻特写的基本特征和常见的阅读方法。
2. 联系自身实际，加深对单元主题意义的理解，正确认识家人之间的亲情与相互支持的关系。
3. 通过文本学习和复述，初步了解回忆类故事的基本内容、文体特征和写作手法，能够运用所学知识简单记述一段难忘的家庭往事。
一、背阅读单词——会认就行
1．triathlon n. 铁人三项运动
2．million num. 许多，无数
3．disqualify v. (因犯规而)取消……的资格
4．athlete n. 运动员，田径运动员
二、背重点单词——写对才行
1． n. (报纸或杂志的)特写
2． adv. 一般，通常
3． adj. 独特的，与众不同的(一般含褒义)
4． n. 风格
5． adj. 额外的，另外的
6． n. 细节，细微之处
7． n. 系列比赛
8． prep. 到……上，向……上，朝……上
feature
typically
individual
style
extra
detail
series
onto
9． n. 跑道
10． n. 新闻媒体，传媒
11． prep. 尽管，虽然
12． prep. 在整个期间，自始至终
13． adj. 好的，积极的
14． n. 奖牌，勋章
15． adv. 用某种方法，不知怎的
16． adv. 当然，确实(用于强调陈述或回答)
track
media
despite
throughout
positive
medal
somehow
indeed
三、背拓展单词——活用才行
1． v．钦佩，赞美，羡慕→admiration n．钦佩，赞赏，羡慕→admirable adj.令人羡慕的，值得赞赏的→admirably adv.令人羡慕地，值得赞赏地
2． v．认为，判断→judgement n．意见；判断力；判决
3． v．和解，结束(争论)→settler n．移民；殖民者→settlement n．协议
4． v．包含，含有→container n．容器
admire
judge
settle
contain
5． n．总结，概要→summarize vt.总结，概要
6． adj.强有力的，有影响(感染)力的→power n. 力量；权力；能力
7． adv.明显地，显而易见地→obvious adj.明显的，显而易见的
8． adj.全部的，整个的→entirely adv.完全地；全然地；整个地
9． adv.非常，极其→enormous adj.巨大的，庞大的
enormously
summary
powerful
obviously
entire
四、背短语、词块——多积更行
1． 领先
2． 即将，正要……
3． 处于困境中
4． 偶尔，有时
5． 把……抛在后面；超过
6． 不再
7． 赢得比赛的机会
in the lead
(be) about to do
in trouble
now and then
leave ... behind
no longer
a chance to win the race
8． 终点线
9． 医疗区
10． 一件很酷的事情
11． 互相鼓励
12． 在我的一生中
13． 一种非常积极的动力
14． 比赛的结局
the finish line
the medical area
a cool thing to do
encourage each other
throughout my entire life
an enormously positive force
the ending to the race
五、背重点句式——不背不行
1.
悟原句 But for Alistair, his decision was easy to explain：“Mum wouldn't have been happy if I'd left Jonny behind.” (主语＋be＋adj.＋to do sth.)
但是对阿利斯泰尔而言，他的决定很容易解释：“要是我撇下乔尼，妈妈肯定会不高兴的。”
写佳句 This machine . Anybody can learn to use it in a few minutes.
这台机器很容易操作。任何人学习几分钟就会使用。
is very easy to operate
2.
悟原句 At that moment, he was no longer an athlete aiming for a medal — he was just a brother. (现在分词短语作后置定语)
在那一刻，他不再是一名想赢得奖牌的运动员——他只是一位兄长。
写佳句 (2020·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达) There is a small river ____________
__________________.
有一条小河穿过农场。
flowing
through the farm
第一遍 泛读通文意
Just A Brother
It was the final part of the 2016 World Triathlon Series in Mexico. With just 700 metres to go, Alistair Brownlee was in third place and his younger brother, Jonny, was in the lead.Alistair pushed himself towards the finish line in the burning heat, but as he came round the corner, he saw his brother about to fall onto the track.Alistair had to choose — brotherly love, or a chance to win the race
For Alistair, the choice was clear. His brother was in trouble. He had to help.Alistair ran towards Jonny, caught him and started pulling him towards the finish line. Alistair then pushed his brother over the line. The move put Jonny in second place and Alistair himself in third. It was an unexpected end to the race, but Alistair did not want to discuss it with the media. He just wanted to see his younger brother, who had been rushed to the medical area.
The Brownlee brothers have been doing triathlons since they were children. “Obviously, when your older brother is doing it, you think it's a cool thing to do，” says Jonny. Alistair says that they encourage each other as much as they can when they train.
Despite arguments over “stupid things” now and then, Alistair agrees that having a brother is an advantage. “Throughout my entire life, I've had my brother trying to beat me at everything I do. It has been an enormously positive force.”
Watched by millions, the ending to the race has divided opinions: should the brothers have been disqualified or highly praised for their actions But for Alistair，his decision was easy to explain: “Mum wouldn't have been happy if I'd left Jonny behind.” At that moment, he was no longer an athlete aiming for a medal — he was just a brother.
[参考译文]
只是一位兄长
这是2016年在墨西哥举行的世界铁人三项系列赛的最后一程。距终点还有700米，阿利斯泰尔·布朗利位列第三，他的弟弟乔尼处于领先地位。阿利斯泰尔在酷热中奋力奔向终点。但就在他转过弯道时，却看到弟弟摇摇欲坠地要摔倒在跑道上。阿利斯泰尔必须做出选择——是要手足之情，还是要赢得比赛？
[句式释解]
句 with 复合结构，其中to go是不定式作后置定语。
句 but连接并列复合句，as引导时间状语从句。
对阿利斯泰尔来说，如何选择显而易见。弟弟遇到了麻烦，他必须施以援手。阿利斯泰尔跑向乔尼，抓住他，并拖着他跑向终点。接着，阿利斯泰尔把乔尼推过终点线。这一举动使乔尼获得第二名，而他自己则位列第三。这是一个意料之外的结局，但阿利斯泰尔并不想与媒体讨论此事。他只想去探望被紧急送到医疗区的弟弟。
[句式释解]
句 who引导的定语从句，修饰先行词his younger brother。
布朗利兄弟从小就接触铁人三项。“显然，当你的哥哥参加铁人三项时，你会觉得这很酷。”乔尼说道。阿利斯泰尔称，他们在训练的时候尽可能地互相鼓励。尽管偶尔会为一些“蠢事”争吵，阿利斯泰尔仍然觉得有个兄弟是种优势。“在我的一生中，我的弟弟总想在各个方面打败我。这对我来说是非常积极的动力。”
[句式释解]
句 since引导的时间状语从句，从句中用一般过去时，主句用现在完成时或现在完成进行时。
句 that引导的宾语从句，动名词短语having a brother作主语。
句 定语从句I do修饰先行词everything，省略了关系代词that。
有数百万人目睹了这场比赛的结尾，但对此也是众说纷纭：兄弟二人是应该因他们的行为被取消比赛资格，还是应该被高度赞扬？但是对阿利斯泰尔而言，他的决定很容易解释：“要是我撇下乔尼，妈妈肯定会不高兴的。”在那一刻，他不再是一名想赢得奖牌的运动员——他只是一位兄长。
[句式释解]
句 过去分词短语作时间状语。
句 本句使用了虚拟语气，表示对过去情况的推测。if从句用过去完成时，主句用would have done。
第二遍 精读提素养
步骤一|先明文章主旨大意，知写了什么
What's the main idea of the text
A．People's different opinions about the Brownlee brothers.
B．Love and competition are equally important in the match.
C．The value of brotherly love.
D．Love is precious.
答案：C
步骤二|再逐段精读文章，看怎样写的
阅读文章第1、2段，完成下列题目
1．文意的理解
(1)Write T (true) or F (false)．
①Alistair Brownlee was in third in the end. ( )
②In the final part of the match, the weather was very cool. ( )
③With the help of Alistair, Jonny was in first place. ( )
(2)When and where did the story happen
In the 2016 World Triathlon Series in Mexico.
T
F
F
Alistair ran towards Jonny, caught him and started pulling him towards the finish line.
(3)What was Alistair's choice
(4)How did Alistair help his brother in the match
To help his brother/Brotherly love.
2．表达的技巧
采用精彩开头
课文以2016年世界铁人三项系列赛墨西哥站比赛尾声的一幕作为开篇段落，这是新闻特写的常见写法之一，其作用在于生动形象地呈现激动人心的一幕，吸引读者的阅读兴趣，同时为整篇特写奠定感情基调。
根据汉语提示补全下面句子：
①It was the final part of the men's Winter Olympic Figure Skating final. With the last five minutes, I suddenly .
这是男子冬季奥运会花样滑冰决赛的最后一部分。在最后五分钟，我突然开始紧张起来。
started to get nervous
②PARIS — whether the Tour de France can go ahead amid the coronavirus pandemic, but if it does it may be without roadside spectators in order to minimise infection risk, the French sports minister said.
巴黎——法国体育部长说，现在决定环法自行车赛能否在冠状病毒大流行的情况下如期举行还为时过早，但如果确实如此，为了将感染风险降到最低，可能不会有路边的观众。
It is too soon to decide
阅读文章第3、4段，完成下列题目
1．文意的理解
(1)Write T (true) or F (false).
①The Brownlee brothers argue over “stupid things” now and then. ( )
②Jonny agrees that having a brother is an advantage. ( )
T
F
(2)The Brownlee brothers start to do triathlons when .
A．they were children
B．they were at high school
C．they were at junior school
D．they left school
答案：A
(3)What does the first “it” in the second sentence of the third paragraph refer to
A．A cool thing. B．Triathlon.
C．A stupid thing. D．An advantage.
答案：B
2．表达的技巧
恰当运用形容词、副词
第三段最后一句中使用副词enormously修饰形容词positive，生动形象地描绘出了Alistair对有一个弟弟的优势的肯定。
根据英汉提示写出下面单词的修饰语：
① hot滚烫的 ② cold冰冷的
boiling
freezing
步骤三|读后理层次结构，析有何逻辑
本文是一篇新闻特写，行文脉络为：赛场上弟弟快要摔倒(起)→阿利斯泰尔助弟弟一臂之力(承)→布朗利兄弟之间浓浓的兄弟之情(转)→观众的评价(合)。
阅读技巧：新闻特写通常比常规新闻故事篇幅更长、细节和背景信息更详细，一般会有一个吸引人的开头，具有强烈现场感的主体和出人意料的结局。在阅读时重点关注故事结尾蕴含的深意，这往往是主旨大意或情感态度的命题角度。
步骤四|最后知选文意图，思有何价值
建立和谐的家庭关系
家庭建设不是小事，对于“如何与家人相处”的问题，应积极而艺术地对待。我们对家人、朋友、爱人和对自己的爱，是当我们需要被温暖包围时，我们能获取的一个最重要的光和力量的来源。文章第三段最后一句“这对我来说是非常积极的动力”就表达了这个观点。建立和谐的家庭关系，树立正确的家庭观，会对我们的工作和生活产生积极的影响，进而提高幸福指数，毕竟生活不易，我们需且行且珍惜。
请体会并记住下面的句子：
①I don't know what “home” is, but unhappiness and worries melt away once there. —Bing Xin
“家”是什么， 我不知道；但烦闷、忧愁，都在此中融化消灭。 ——冰心
②A comfortable house is a great source of happiness. It ranks immediately after health and a good conscience. —Sydney Smith
一个舒适的家园是幸福的主要源泉，它仅次于健康和一颗善良的心。
——悉尼·史密斯
③Home is the place where, when you have to go there, it has to take you in.
—Robert Frost
家是永远向游子敞开大门的地方。 ——罗伯特·弗罗斯特
第一板块 单词和短语——点点清
1．admire v．钦佩，赞美，羡慕
[用法感知]
①When I was young, I admired clever people.Now that I am old, I admire kind people.
少时羡慕聪明人，老来赞美仁厚的人。
②(以文化人助写作) I admire his bravery for saving the boy from the cold water.
我钦佩他从冰冷的水中救出那个男孩的勇气。
③Deeply moved by her performance，the whole audience gasped with/in admiration.
被她的表演深深打动，全场观众赞叹不已。
[归纳点拨]
(1)admire sb.for (doing) sth. 因(做)某事而钦佩某人
(2)admiration n. 钦佩；羡慕
with/in admiration 钦佩地
(3)admiring adj. 赞赏的；钦佩的；令人欣赏的
admirable adj. 可钦佩的；值得赞赏的；令人羡慕的
[应用融会] (单句语法填空/完成句子)
④I'm full of (admire) for those space heroes.
⑤His bravery is (admire) so we all like him.
⑥Lewis on the advanced medical research.
刘易斯因在先进医学研究方面所做的工作而受到钦佩。
⑦I watched his works, very carefully and .
我非常仔细地、怀着极大的尊重与钦佩观看了他的作品。
admiration
admirable
was admired for his work
with great respect and admiration
2．judge v．认为，判断
[用法感知]
①The economic impact of the arts is often overlooked and badly judged.
艺术的经济影响经常被忽视，而且评价很差。
②Judging from/by the look on his face, the news must have been terrible.
从他脸上的表情判断，这个消息肯定很糟糕。
③As far as I can judge, he should be responsible for it.
依我看，他应对此事负责。
[归纳点拨]
(1)judging from/by ... 根据……来判断
as far as sb. can judge 依某人判断/看
(2)judgement n. 判断；判断力；判决
make a judgement on 对……进行评判
[应用融会] (单句语法填空/完成句子)
④Can you make a (judge) on the game
⑤ (judge) from her last letter，they are having a wonderful time.
⑥ ,Li Ming is more confident.
据我判断，李明更自信。
judgement
Judging
As far as I can judge
3．The middle part contains the “meat” of the story, with the ending being a summary, a powerful quote or even a surprise for the reader.
中间部分包含了故事的“肉”，结尾是一个总结，一个有力的引述，甚至是给读者一个惊喜。
★contain v．包含，含有，容纳
[用法感知]
①He recommended that she do some research and talk to dentists about what a healthier candy would contain.
他建议她做一些研究，并向牙医咨询健康糖果包含什么。
②The hall can contain 3,000 people.
这座礼堂可容纳3 000人。
[易混辨析] contain, include
contain 侧重包含的内容或成分。另有“容纳”的意思
include 侧重“范围”，只能用来表示所含之物中的一部分。不作谓语时include的使用常见于including和included两种非谓语形式
轻巧识记
选词填空(contain, include)
③This little book all the information that you need.
④I have to prepare food for seven people me.
★powerful adj.强有力的，有影响(感染)力的
[用法感知]
①You're a powerful man — people will listen to you.
你是一个有影响力的人，大家会听你的。
②In the future all cars will be powered by electricity, solar energy or wind.
未来所有的汽车都将由电力、太阳能或风能提供动力。
contains
including
③The party aimed to come to power at the election.
这个政党意图在大选中执政。
④The party has been in power for eight years.
这个政党执政已经八年了。
[归纳点拨]
(1)power n． 力量；权力
vt. 给……提供动力，驱动
within one's power 在某人能力/权力范围之内
beyond one's power 超出某人的能力/权力
be in power 执政
come to power 开始掌权/执政
(2)powerfully adv. 强大地
[应用融会] (单句语法填空/句型转换)
⑤Body language is one of the most (power) means of communication.
⑥It's a play — painful, funny and (power) acted.
⑦I can't give you a refund — I'm afraid it's not within my power.
→I can't give you a refund — I'm afraid it's .
powerful
powerfully
beyond my power
第二板块 句式和语法——句句通
But for Alistair, his decision was easy to explain：“Mum wouldn't have been happy if I'd left Jonny behind.”
但是对阿利斯泰尔而言，他的决定很容易解释：“要是我撇下乔尼，妈妈肯定会不高兴的。”
[归纳点拨]
his decision was easy to explain是“主语＋be＋adj.＋不定式”结构，其中his decision和及物动词explain构成动宾关系。在该句型中常常使用不定式的主动形式表示被动意义。使用此结构须具备两个前提条件：
(1)形容词常常表示主语的性质或特征。常见的此类形容词有important, difficult, hard, easy, good, comfortable, pleasant, interesting, exciting等。
(2)不定式的动词和句子的主语之间构成逻辑上的动宾关系，但是形式上用不定式的主动形式表示被动意义。
①The bike was too heavy and difficult to control.
这辆自行车十分沉重很难控制。
②I like getting up very early in summer.The morning air is so good to breathe.
在夏天我喜欢很早起床。早上的空气呼吸起来真好。
[名师点津]
(1)若不定式中动词为不及物动词，其后应该加相应的介词。
(2)不定式有时会带自己的逻辑主语，并用for引出。
(3)如果作表语的形容词不是说明主语的特征或性质，且不定式中的动词和主语之间为动宾关系，此时不定式应该使用被动语态。
③The armchair looks rather hard, but it is very comfortable to sit in.
这把扶手椅看上去很硬，但坐上去很舒服。(句中sit为不及物动词，故其后应该加介词in)
④The question is too hard for her to answer.
这个问题太难了，她回答不上来。
⑤The task is ready to be started.
这项任务已经准备好了，可以开始了。
[应用融会] (单句语法填空/完成句子)
⑥The apples are hard (reach)．
⑦The boss is hard to get along .
⑧Mr Green realized that the task .
格林先生意识到这项任务是难以完成的。
★“Mum wouldn't have been happy if I'd left Jonny behind.”表示的是对过去情况的虚拟，主句谓语动词用了would have done结构，if条件句用了过去完成时。
to reach
with
was difficult to complete
[归纳点拨]
虚拟语气在if条件句中的用法为：
主句谓语动词 if条件句谓语动词
对现在情况的虚拟 would＋动词原形 动词的过去式(be用were)
况对过去情的虚拟 would have done had done
对将来情况的虚拟 would/should＋ 动词原形 动词的过去式；were to do; should＋动词原形
[名师点津] 主句中的would有时可换用should, could或might。要注意错综时间条件句：主句和从句的动作不是发生在同一时间，其动词形式要根据时间而定。
[应用融会] (单句语法填空)
①If the weather (be) better, we could have had a picnic. But it rained all day.
②—John went to the hospital alone.
—If he (tell) me about it, I would have gone with him.
③—The weather has been very hot and dry.
—Yes. If it had rained even a drop, things (be) much better now! And my vegetables wouldn't have died.
④If Newton (live) today, he would be surprised by what has been discovered in science and technology.
had been
had told
would be
lived
写作项目——Writing about a family memory
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于家庭记忆的回忆类故事，实际上是写一篇叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把握记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等要交代清楚。
由课文学写作范式(写得“像模像样”)
(一)课文范式提炼
(二)写作要点指津
一般来说，记叙文通常由三个部分组成：开头、主体和结尾。叙事类记叙文的写作需注意以下几点：
1．开头通常要写清楚事件的背景、发生的时间、地点、人物及人与人之间的关系。通过阅读开头，读者能对事件有大概的了解。
2．叙述故事一般可以从以下几方面展开：人物活动的时间顺序、空间位置变换或事件发生的顺序。
3．结尾通常会写出事件的结局，或者表达自我感慨，陈述对某人或某事的观点或态度。
由课文学亮点表达(写得“韵味十足”)
1．学亮点表达
(1)首段一共两个句子，均使用了“过去进行时”，形象、生动地描述了昨天正在打扫房间时发现了一张旧照片，强调了是“偶然”发现，并由此引出下文的家庭记忆。
(2)第二段第二句中的副词really和第三句中的副词never的使用，增强了语义表达的效果，强调起得特别早和第一次做饭。
(3)第三段首句中的“be about to ... when ...(正要做……这时……)”这一句型的使用非常形象，强调了throw everything away和my mother came in两个动作同时发生。
2．学情感表达
第三段最后三句“To my surprise, she tasted them ...ate them all.”饱含深情的表达了妈妈对作者的鼓励和爱意，尤其是I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.(我猜想爱的确是一种神奇的成分。)一句表达出作者感受到了母爱的温暖，这也是作者会继续做下去的动力。母女情深，溢于言表。
积素材充盈写作“语料库”
(一)背写作词汇
1．be amazed at/by ... 对……感到惊讶
2．be determined 决心
3．later on 后来
4．become confident 变得自信
5．how time flies 时间过得真快
6．enjoy the fresh air 呼吸新鲜空气
7．cheer with joy 高兴地欢呼
8．What a wonderful time! 多么美好的时光啊！
(二)背写作佳句
[常用开头句]
1．We set out/set off/started at 7：20 by bus/by bike/on foot/by plane/by train.
我们7：20乘公共汽车/骑自行车/步行/乘飞机/坐火车出发。
2．This morning I was busy preparing for my test when I heard ...
今天上午我正在忙着准备测试，这时我听到……
3．In order to encourage the students to do ... our school organised ...
为了鼓励学生们做……我们学校组织了……
[常用中间句]
1．由于大雨，所有的航班都被取消了，乘客们不得不改乘火车。
①All the flights had been canceled because of the heavy rain, so all the passengers had to take the train.
②All the flights had been canceled because of the heavy rain; as a result, all the passengers had to take the train.
③All the flights having been canceled because of the heavy rain, all the passengers had to take the train.
2．我们在桂林逗留的时间没有像我希望的那样长。
①We didn't spend so much time in Guilin as I had hoped.
②The time we spent in Guilin was not so much as I had hoped.
3．It reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best.
这使我想起了我的妈妈，她总是尽她所能给予我最好的。
4．After reading the passage, I was lost in thought.From my own perspective，however busy parents are，they should spare time to accompany their children.
读完这篇文章，我陷入了沉思。从我个人的角度看，不管父母有多忙，他们都应该挤出时间陪伴他们的孩子。
[常用结束句]
1．After visiting it, I've made up my mind to study harder than ever.
参观之后，我下决心要比以前更加努力地学习。
2．This is really an unforgettable experience.
这真是一次难忘的经历。
3．This experience has taught me that as long as I never give up and keep trying, I can succeed.
这次经历让我学到：只要我永不放弃并努力尝试，我就会成功。
4．Actually everyone should attach importance to family communication, which can strengthen the bond of the whole family and bridge the gap between children and parents.
实际上，每个人都应该重视家人之间的交流，这能增强家庭的凝聚力，消除孩子与父母之间的隔阂。
(三)背续写素材
读后续写微技能——人物心理描写佳句集锦
1．The last word went like a bullet to my heart.
最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。
2．A ripple of sadness welled up inside him.
他内心涌起一阵悲伤。
3．He felt the warmth surging through his body.
他感到温暖涌上全身。
4．The loneliness and grief comes in waves.
孤独和悲伤如波浪般涌来。
5．So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
她是如此羞愧以至于她能感受到血涌到脸上。
6．Her eyes misted over as she immersed herself in their good memories.
当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆中时，她的眼睛模糊了。
7．She thought of the flowers glittering in the sunshine and the mountains turning rosy in the setting sun. And every night she cried into her pillow as though her heart would break into pieces.
她想起了阳光下闪耀的花儿，夕阳下变成玫瑰色的群山。每一个夜晚，她把头埋在枕头里哭，肝肠寸断。
[应用体验]
假定你是李华，今天是2022年9月18日，星期日，天气晴朗。你去看望了住在乡下的爷爷奶奶。请你用英语写一篇日记。内容包括：
1．爷爷奶奶高兴的心情；2.帮助爷爷奶奶做饭；3.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文
September 18, 2022 Sunday Sunny
This morning, I went to see my grandparents. Obviously, ①________________
_____________________________(他们对我的意外造访非常高兴) that they took out fruits and snacks for me to enjoy.
they were so
happy at my unexpected visit
Next came the moment ② (他们问了我一系列的问题) on my life and study. Then, I ended up ③ _________________
_____________(帮助他们准备午餐). After the delicious lunch, I ④_____________ _______(向他们道别) and set off home.
Despite the short visit, I think it is quite meaningful. ⑤ ____________________
(不管我们有多忙), we should turn to them for a chat.
when they asked me a series of questions
helping them
prepare lunch
said goodbye
to them
However busy we are
Ⅰ.单词拼写
1．I wish I were as (苗条的) as you.
2．The room was even colder, (尽管) the fact that the heating was turned on.
3．The (整个的) family was staring at him.
4．No matter what you say, I shall stick to my (意见)．
5．There have been lots of (争论) about his drinking.
slim
despite
entire
opinion
arguments
6．He has a (积极的) attitude towards life.
7．Many (运动员) took part in the Olympic Games.
8．Their (意外的) arrival threw our plan into confusion.
9．She's so (明显地) cleverer and prettier than I am.
10．We should not (判断) a person by his appearance.
positive
athletes
unexpected
obviously
judge
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1．The girl went to pick up the basket (contain) many apples.
2．The school is widely admired its excellent teaching.
3．After supper my mother was observed (go) out，with a bag in her hand.
4．The bus company made an apology passengers for any inconvenience caused.
5． (judge) from what everyone says about him，I can say he is frightened of failure.
containing
for
to go
to
Judging
6．It's eleven o'clock now, but she cannot settle down work.
7．At that time people would starve if food was difficult (find), particularly during the cold winter months.
8．It's about time that I picked my little girl from senior high.
9．They are aiming (reduce) unemployment by 50% this year.
10．Because she was under age，her parents were still responsible her.
to
to find
up
to reduce
for
Ⅲ.选词填空
1．Her father died, and after that she went to school.
2．Just call me whenever you're .
3．He was running but unfortunately, he suddenly fell down.
4．Beijing has been suffering from choking smog recently.
no longer， focus on， turn to， as well as， calm down， jump in with both feet，praise ...for， in the lead， now and then， in trouble
no longer
in trouble
in the lead
now and then
5． for a minute and listen to me.
6．I have to my dictionary because there are too many new words.
7．Before you please think it over.
8．They visited some factories, hospitals the school.
9．People highly the medical staff their bravery.
10．The old man stood there with his eyes the picture.
Calm down
turn to
jump in with both feet
as well as
praised
for
focused on
Ⅳ.完成句子
1． of the hill, the city looks more beautiful.
从山顶看，这个城市显得更漂亮了。
2．The pinetree is too high for me and the pine cones .
这棵松树对我来说太高了，那些松果很难够到。
3．You should at once when you are late for class.
当你迟到时应立刻向老师道歉。
Seen from the top
are hard to reac
make an apology to your teacher
4． her accent, she must be from Sichuan.
根据她的口音判断，她准是四川人。
5．If he had followed my advice，he .
如果他听了我的劝告，他就不会失去工作了。
Judging from
wouldn't have lost his job
Ⅴ.课文语法填空
With just 700 metres 1. (go), Alistair Brownlee saw his brother about to fall onto the track. He ran towards Jonny, caught him and 2. (start) pulling him towards the finish line. The move put Jonny in second place and Alistair 3. (he) in third. It was 4. unexpected end to the race, but Alistair did not want to discuss it 5. the media. He just wanted to see his younger brother 6. had been rushed to the medical area.
to go
started
himself
an
with
who/that
Despite 7. (argument) over “stupid things” now and then, Alistair agrees that 8. (have) a brother is an advantage.
9． (watch) by millions, the ending to the race has divided opinions: should the brothers have been disqualified or 10. (high) praised for their actions But for Alistair, his decision was easy to explain. At that moment, he was no longer an athlete aiming for a medal —he was just a brother.
arguments
having
Watched
highly
Ⅵ.读后续写(基础性)
阅读下面材料，根据括号内的汉语提示补全所续写的文章，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The eight-year-old Carol lived with her father David, Mother May and elder brother Rob. The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature. The village was at the foot of a mountain, with beautiful views of the snowy mountain. The family survived on growing seasonal plants and trees. Their life is totally surrounded by nature and beauty.
While they lived a very happy life, Carol did not love the beautiful atmosphere of the village. She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life. She wanted to shop, move around the city, watch movies, and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes, etc.However, there was hardly any chance that Carol's family moved to the city as they had everything in the village.
One day, Carol fell asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep. Of course, she had a strange dream. She saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her deceased grandmother granted her a wish. Carol requested her that she should love to enjoy the city life as she always desired.
Grandmother understood the desire of Carol but still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life is better than the city life.
She told Carol, “Baby, you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home. You cannot breathe fresh air. You cannot play with animals. You can hardly find any trees. You will not find peace as you see here! Do you still want to go to the city？”
Without hearing the concerns, Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish. Grandmother granted her wish, but with a condition. Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city. Later, she would return to the village. Carol agreed.
Carol then found herself in the city with her friends. Carol and her friends went to watch movies. After that they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall. Carol ① _____________________________________________________
_____(很高兴有机会体验城市生活). Yet at the same time, she ②_______________ _________________________________________________(明白了祖母所说的一切在这个城市都是真实的). There was no peace and no silence; the city life was fast and rushing. The air quality was not satisfying.
was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the
city
understood that
everything told by her grandmother was true in the city
Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up. She recalled what happened just now in her dream and ③ _______________________________
___________________________________________________(意识到她和家人在村子里的生活远比城市生活精彩). Carol ④___________________________________
__________(明白她现在的生活更快乐了). She ⑤____________________________ (与家人分享了她的梦) while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables, and they laughed together.
realized that her life in the village
with her family was far more wonderful than the city life
understood that she was having a more
joyful life
shared her dream with her family
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