外研版（2019） 必修 第一册 Unit 6 At one with natureDeveloping ideas—读写·体现学以致用PPT(共77张PPT)
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Developing ideas—读写·体现学以致用
课时目标
1.通过阅读课文各段内容，准确把握各段主题句，归纳段落大意，理清文章结构。
2.了解概要写作的文体特点和内容要素，能够运用所学内容进行概要写作，总结文章大意。
3.深入了解英国人对园艺的热爱和饮用水果茶及花草茶的传统，并引导学生联系自身实际，对中外文化都崇尚与自然和谐相处形成跨文化的理解，最终形成亲近自然、崇尚自然、合理利用自然、与自然和谐相处的意识。
一、背阅读单词——会认就行
1．sunflower n． 向日葵
2．branch n. 树枝
3．rooftop n. 屋顶
4．herb n. (用于调味)香草
二、背重点单词——写对才行
1． adj. 内行的，专家的
2． v. 租用，租借
3． n. 味，味道
4． n. 系统
expert
rent
flavour
system
三、背拓展单词——活用才行
1． v .出版→publication n．出版→publisher n．出版人(社)
2． adj.有限的→limit v．& n．限制→limitation n．限制
3． n．好处，益处→beneficial adj.有益的，有利的
4． adj.令人愉快的→pleasure n．愉快；快乐
5． n．力量，活力→energetic adj.精力充沛的；充满活力的
publish
limited
benefit
pleasant
energy
四、背短语、词块——多积更行
1． 可能做某事
2． 数以百万的
3． 参加比赛
4． 把……变成……
5． 和……一样；除了
be likely to do sth.
millions of
enter into competitions
turn ...into ...
as well as
6． 对……有益
7． 花点时间
8． 认真思考；仔细考虑
9． 对……有效/有作用
10． 助……一臂之力，对……有帮助
be good for
take a moment
reflect on
have an effect on
give ...a helping hand
五、背重点句式——不背不行
1.
悟原句 And while many Brits like nothing better than spending their Sunday cutting the grass, some are happy just to sit under the branches of the trees and enjoy the beauty of the world around them. (“nothing better than”是“否定词＋比较级”表示最高级的含义)
虽然许多英国人认为锄草是周日最棒的活动，但也有的人只要能坐在树下享受周围世界的美丽就心满意足了。
写佳句 As far as I'm concerned, .
就我个人而言，身体健康最重要。
nothing is more important than health
2.
悟原句 As well as being good for the environment, gardening is also good for the soul. (“as well as＋doing sth.”，意为“除了做某事外，还有”)
除了能改善环境，园艺还能净化心灵。
写佳句 (2021·浙江6月高考写作) ____________________________________
_______________,the exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings can also improve our ability to appreciate art.
除了弘扬中国传统文化，这次学生国画作品展还能提高我们欣赏艺术的能力。
As well as promoting the traditional
Chinese culture
第一遍 泛读通文意
A Love of Gardening
“If you look the right way, you can see that the whole world is a garden.” These words come from the author of the book The Secret Garden, first published in 1911. At that time, only the very rich in Britain had gardens. Very soon after this, homes with gardens began to be built. This is what started the British love of gardening! Today, millions of Brits like to say that they have “green fingers”， with around half the population spending their free time gardening.
For many people in the UK, their garden is their own private world. Each spring, children plant sunflowers and wait to see which one is the tallest. Expert gardeners know just the right corne(*&r for roses, and others spend hours trying to grow perfect vegetables to enter into competitions. And while many Brits like nothing better than spending their Sunday cutting the grass, some are happy just to sit under the branches of the trees and enjoy the beauty of the world around them.
But in cities, limited space has led to people looking for new solutions. Those without outside space can rent small pieces of land on which to grow things. Today, there are over 4,000 people in London waiting for such pieces of land. One recent idea has been to turn rooftops and walls into private gardens. These gardens have helped make the cities greener and improve air quality.
As well as being good for the environment, gardening is also good for the soul. What other free-time activity allows you to be at one with nature and create more beautiful living things And if you're in any doubt about this, take a moment to reflect on this line from The Secret Garden: “Where you tend a rose ... A thistle cannot grow.”
[参考译文]
热爱园艺
“如果从合适的角度去欣赏，你会发现整个世界就是一个花园。”《秘密花园》的作者曾这样说。这本书1911年首次出版，在当时的英国，只有富豪才拥有花园。不久之后，人们开始建造带有花园的房子，英国人对园艺的热爱就此开始！今天，数以百万的英国人喜欢说他们有“绿手指(意为擅长园艺)”，约有一半的英国人都把空闲时间用在打理花园上。
[句式释解]
句 if引导条件状语从句；that引导的是宾语从句，作see的宾语。
句 what引导的是表语从句。
句 with around ...spending ...是“with＋宾语＋现在分词”形式的复合结构，它在句中作状语。 其中spend ...doing sth.意为“花费……做某事”。
对于许多英国人来说，花园就是他们的私密世界。每年春天，孩子们种下向日葵，满怀期待地看谁种的长得最高。高明的园丁对于花园里哪个角落最合适种玫瑰都了如指掌，其他人则花费大量时间力图种出最完美的蔬菜参加竞赛。虽然许多英国人认为锄草是周日最棒的活动，但也有的人只要能坐在树下享受周围世界的美丽就心满意足了。
[句式释解]
句 while引导的是让步状语从句，while意为“虽然，尽管”。该句中“nothing better than”结构属于“否定词＋比较级”表示最高级含义的用法。
但在城市里，有限的空间促使人们寻找新的解决方案。住宅外部没有空间的居民可以租用小块土地种植作物。现如今，伦敦有四千多人在等待租用这样的土地。近期的一个理念是将屋顶和墙壁改造为私人花园。这些花园可以增加城市绿化面积、改善空气质量。
[句式释解]
句 on which是“介词＋关系代词”引导的定语从句，先行词是land。
句 waiting for ...land是现在分词短语作定语。
除了能改善环境，园艺还能净化心灵。还有什么其他业余活动能让你在享受自然的同时创造出更美丽的生物呢？如果你对这一点有任何疑问，请停下片刻，回味一下《秘密花园》中的这句话：“当你种下玫瑰，蓟草就不会生长。”
[句式释解]
句 if引导的是条件状语从句。 in doubt about意为“怀疑……”。
第二遍 精读提素养
步骤一|先明文章主旨大意，知写了什么
What's the main idea of the text
A．History of gardening.
B．Skills of gardening.
C．Benefits of gardening.
D．Brits' love of gardening.
答案：D
步骤二|再逐段精读文章，看怎样写的
阅读文章第1、2段，完成下列题目
1．文意的理解
(1)When did Brits start to love gardening
It started after the year 1911.
(2)What does “green fingers” mean in the first paragraph
A．The fingers painted with green color.
B．The poor skills of gardening.
C．The fingers cut by green knife.
D．The super skills of gardening.
答案：D
(3)What does the writer want to tell us in Paragraph 2
The writer wants to tell us .
Brits' love of gardening
2．表达的技巧
借代修辞法
借代是说明文或记叙文中一种常见的修辞手法。借代是指不直接说出所要表达的人或事物，而是借用与它密切相关的人或事物来代替的修饰方法。恰当地运用借代可以引人联想，使语句具有形象突出、特点鲜明、文笔精炼、具体生动的效果。文章第一段最后一句中的“green fingers (绿手指)”就是这样一种用法，它其实是对喜欢园艺的人的一种称赞，意思是植物在他们的精心照料下能够茁壮成长。如果说某人有 green fingers，就意味着这个人有高超的种植技能。
指出下列句中黑体部分指代的是什么：
(1)She has a ready tongue.喻指“ ”
(2)I had the muscle and made money out of it.
喻指“ ”
伶俐的口才
力气
阅读文章第3、4段，完成下列题目
1．文意的理解
(1)Why do over 4,000 people wait for the small pieces of land
(2)What do you think the last sentence in this article mean
A．A thistle cannot grow because of the roses.
B．A thistle is less important than the roses.
C．Gardening can make the environment more beautiful.
D．Gardening can cost you a lot of time and money.
答案：C
Because they want to turn the land into gardens to grow things.
(3)According to the passage, which of the following is NOT the meaning of gardening
A．It enriches people's spiritual worlds.
B．It improves environment quality.
C．It provides people with a wonderful time.
D．It enables expert gardeners to enter competitions.
答案：D
2．表达的技巧
引用 (quotation)
引用也叫引语，它是直接或间接引用他人的话来说明自己的立场或观点的方法。引用可用于各种文体，它能有效增强文章的说服力和感染力。本文的开头和结尾均引用了《秘密花园》的相关语句，这种首尾呼应的写作方法让文章结构更加紧密，内容更加完整，进一步突出文章主题，加深读者的印象，引发读者的共鸣等。
把下列引语翻译成汉语：
As Victor Hugo once said, “Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face”， and up to now nobody has been able to do this better than Charlie Chaplin.
正如维克多·雨果曾经说过：“笑容如阳光，它驱走人们脸上的寒冬”，到目前为止，还没有人能比查理·卓别林做得更好。
步骤三|读后理层次结构，析有何逻辑
本篇文章是说明文。它以递进式的结构行文，按照说明事理的逻辑性进行介绍：英国人是何时开始喜欢园艺的→英国人喜欢园艺的原因→英国人是怎样打理自己的花园的→英国人做园艺的好处。递进式说明文的主旨大意多在尾段。
步骤四|最后知选文意图，思有何价值
“崇尚自然、与自然和谐相处”的文化观
大自然是伟大的，它无私地为人类奉献着一切。花草树木可以为人类提供美丽的风景，给人们一个美好的心情。但是，它们需要人类的尊敬与呵护。只有人们崇尚自然并与自然和谐相处，人类才会有更加幸福美好的生活。本文的作者通过对英国人对园艺的热爱与做法的说明，让人们意识到中西方在对待自然方面的文化观是一致的，文章启示人们要亲近自然、崇尚自然、合理利用自然，树立与自然和谐相处的文化意识。
试体会下面的句子：
Nature never deceives us; it is always us who deceive ourselves. —Rousseau
大自然永远不会欺骗我们，欺骗我们的往往是我们自己。 ——卢梭
第一板块 单词和短语——点点清
1．But in cities, limited space has led to people looking for new solutions.
但在城市里，有限的空间促使人们寻找新的解决方案。
★limited adj.有限的
[用法感知]
①Time is limited and let's come straight to the point.
时间有限，我们开门见山吧。
②(以文化人助写作)Our life has a limit, but knowledge is without limit.
生命有限，知识无涯。
③We should limit the number of dogs.
我们应该限制(养)狗的数量。
[归纳点拨]
(1)limit v． 限制，限定
n. 界限，限度，限定，限制
set a limit to ... 对……设限
put a limit on 限制
there is a/no limit to ... 对……是有限的/无限的
(2)limitless adj. 无限制的；无界限的；无限度的
unlimited adj. 无限制的
[应用融会]
(1)词汇升级
④We must limit the expense of the trip. ________________________
(2)用limit的适当形式或短语填空
⑤A man's life is but there is serving the people. I will devote my life to the job of serving the people.
一个人的生命是有限的，可是，为人民服务是无限的。我要把有限的生命投入到无限的为人民服务当中去。
set a limit to/put a limit on
limited
no limit to
limited
limitless
2．And if you're in any doubt about this, take a moment to reflect on this line from The Secret Garden：“Where you tend a rose ... A thistle cannot grow.”
如果你对这一点有任何疑问，请停下片刻，回味一下《秘密花园》中的这句话：“当你种下玫瑰，蓟草就不会生长。”
★in doubt about对……有疑问；怀疑
[用法感知]
①He said that very clearly so that nobody was in doubt about what he meant.
他说得很清楚，所以没有人怀疑他的意思。
②Without (a/any) doubt, his marks will be top of the whole class.
毫无疑问，他的成绩将在全班名列前茅。
③(2020·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)There is no doubt that there are many things that I can learn from him.
毫无疑问，我可以从他身上学到很多东西。
[归纳点拨]
(1)without (a/any) doubt 毫无疑问
no doubt＋从句 无疑，很可能
there is no doubt that ... 毫无疑问……
there is some doubt whether ... 尚有疑问……
have no/some doubt about (不)怀疑
(2)doubt sth./that ... 怀疑；不相信
don't doubt that 相信
doubt whether/if 怀疑，不确定
[应用融会]
(1)单句语法填空
④There is some doubt they can complete the work on time.
⑤There is no doubt hard work is the key to improving your results.
⑥ doubt, many companies wish that there are fewer and weaker competitors around.
(2)词汇升级
⑦I believe that he can finish the task on time. ____________
whether
that
Without
don't doubt
3．What are the benefits of gardening
园艺的好处是什么？
★benefit n．好处，益处；效益；救济金；津贴 v.使受益，得益于
[用法感知]
①(2020·新高考全国卷Ⅰ写作)The race was of great benefit to the participants, physically and mentally.
这次比赛对参赛者的身体和精神都有很大的好处。
②I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity.
我相信大家都会从这个活动中获益良多。
③Therefore, students should learn how to share their feelings, which is beneficial to their growth in the future.
因此，学生应该学会如何分享他们的感情，这有利于他们未来的成长。
[归纳点拨]
(1)be of benefit to 对……有益
(2)benefit from 得益于
(3)beneficial adj. 有益的；有利的
be beneficial to 对……有益/有利
[应用融会]
(1)单句语法填空
④There are many (benefit) of singing in a choir.
⑤Doing morning exercises benefits our health and we benefit it.
⑥Reading a lot is (benefit) to improving your English.
(2)词汇升级
⑦Keeping a balanced diet is beneficial to our health. ____________
benefits
from
beneficial
is of benefit
第二板块 句式和语法——句句通
And while many Brits like nothing better than spending their Sunday cutting the grass, some are happy just to sit under the branches of the trees and enjoy the beauty of the world around them.
虽然许多英国人认为锄草是周日最棒的活动，但也有的人只要能坐在树下享受周围世界的美丽就心满意足了。
[归纳点拨]
“否定词＋比较级”结构表示最高级含义，意为“没有比……更……的了”。常用的否定词有no, not, never, nothing, nobody, hardly等。表示最高级意义的结构还有：
(1)the＋形容词或副词的最高级
(2)比较级＋than＋any other＋单数名词
(3)比较级＋than＋all the other＋复数名词
①That e-book is no larger than an ordinary book with a screen where you can read original book and film reviews.
那种电子书不比普通的书大，带有一个屏幕，你可以在上面阅读原版书籍和影评。
②The Spring Festival is the longest and the most important of all Chinese festivals.
春节是中国所有节日中最长、最重要的一个。
③Qomolangma is higher than any other mountain in the world.
珠穆朗玛峰是世界上最高的山峰。
[应用融会]
(1)单句语法填空
④No one can be more careful he is!
⑤The Sahara is the (big) desert in the world.
(2)完成句子
⑥This building, ,proclaims the character of the town.
这座建筑比任何其他建筑都能代表本城的特色。
⑦As a student, I can tell you that there is being praised by my teacher before my classmates.
作为一名学生，我可以告诉你，没有什么比在同学面前被老师表扬更好的了。
than
biggest
more than any other
nothing better than
写作项目——Writing a summary
本单元的写作任务是写一篇概要写作。概要写作是对原文的内容和思想进行浓缩，用精炼的词句概括出文章的要点、次要点等内容，再现原作者的思想、观点。主要包括阅读和写作两个过程。首先，要求考生能够读懂所给阅读材料的内容；其次，要求考生将原文的要点及所理解的内容用自己的语言准确地表达出来。
由课文学写作范式(写得“像模像样”)
(一)感悟经典范文
[教材P71参考范文] “总—分”式
Fruit and herbal teas
British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs (主旨句). Such a habit is so popular that many people plant easy-to-grow herbs in their own tea gardens. There are many flavours of fruit and herbal teas (要点1), including traditional lemon and ginger, as well as many flavours such as mango, strawberry, apple, pear, blackberry leaf and dandelion. Aside from the variety of flavours, herbal tea also has various health benefits. (要点2) Some can help people relax, and some like ginger tea, are good for the immune system, while others, such as mint tea, are beneficial for digestion.
范文正是从文章主题入手，然后用不同的连接词或短语将不同段落的内容连接起来，使文章衔接自然；除此之外，范文还对原文信息进行了适当地整合与重组。
(二)点拨写作步骤
1．总览全文，确定体裁和结构
体裁 结构
记叙文 使用“要素串联法”，明确记叙文的六要素(who, when, where, what, how, why)的内容，如果是夹叙夹议文，还要写出故事给读者带来的启示或寓意
说明文 使用“段意合并法”，找出文章要说明的对象、观点或建议
议论文 使用“主题概括法”，提取议论文的三要素(论点、论据、论证)
续表
2.找出要点，确定主题句
明确各段的主旨大意，略去次要信息和不必要的细节。
3．改写要点，灵活表达
灵活采用同义词或近义词整合每段大意，用不同的句式进行转换，并在必要的地方添加衔接词，使各要点之间能够通顺流畅。
4．检查修改，整理誊写
核对要点是否全面，检查语言运用是否准确，以及行文是否流畅；另外，还要注意词数限制和书写规范。
积素材充盈写作“语料库”
(一)背衔接词汇
转折：but, however, yet, nevertheless
结果：so, thus, therefore, consequently, in fact
原因：because, as, since, for, due to/owing to
对比：instead, likewise, on the contrary
让步：though, as, although, despite
列举：first(ly), next/later, then, finally/eventually
增补：also, besides, what's more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, above all ...
举例：for example, for instance
替代：alternatively
解释：namely, in other words, which means, refer to, that is to say, or rather
目的：aim to, mainly deal with, focus on
(二)背概要写作微技能
1．同义替换
①be good to有益于：benefit
②too much过多的：excessive
③the same as与……一样：likewise
④about关于：concerning, regarding，related to, be relevant to
⑤actually事实上：in fact, as a matter of fact, in reality
⑥aim at旨在：be aimed to, be aimed at, be intended to, be meant to
⑦appear出现：appearance, turn up, show up
⑧approach靠近，临近：come near, draw near，around the corner
⑨besides而且，另外：additionally, in addition，what's more, moreover, furthermore
⑩be pride of为……感到骄傲/自豪：take pride in
energetic精力充沛的：full of energy
have fun玩得开心：enjoy oneself, have a good time
hold举行：take place
honor/honour纪念：in honour of
intelligent聪明的：clever, wise, smart, bright, brilliant
in a word总之：all in all, in conclusion, in short, in brief, to sum up
finally最后：in the end, eventually, at the end of
in the beginning开始：at the start of, to begin with
2．反义转换
①sincere→insincere
②encourage→discourage
3．词性转换
①recognize your child→parents' recognition
②strongly against→strong opposition
4．句式变化
(1)主被动语态变换
It is widely accepted that more people use computers in the world today.
→It is widely accepted that computers are widely used in the world today.
(2)简单句合并为复合句
The weather turned out to be very good. This was more than we could expect.
→The weather turned out to be very good, which was more than we could expect.
(3)连词衔接法
He insisted on staying. He was not willing to go.
→He insisted on staying rather than going.
(4)固定结构转换法
We are sure to finish it in time because so many people are helping us.
→With so many people helping us, we are sure to finish it in time.
(5)特殊句式法(倒装句，强调句)
①Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests were present at the meeting.
→Present at the meeting were Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests.
②She hardly has time to listen to music.
→Hardly does she have time to listen to music.
③The beautiful scenery attracts the tourists from all over the world.
→It is the beautiful scenery that attracts the tourists from all over the world.
[应用体验]
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Growing coffee beans is a huge, making-money business.However, unluckily, full-sun production is replacing the industry and causes a lot of damage.The change in growing coffee from shade-grown production to full-sun production brings certain animals and birds in danger, and even breaks the world's ecological balance (生态平衡)．
On a local level, the damage of the forest that is required by full-sun fields affects the area's birds and animals. The shade of the forest trees gives a home to birds and other species which depend on the trees' flowers and fruits. Full-sun coffee growers destroy this forest home. As a result, many species are quickly in extinction.
On a more global level, the damage to the rainforest for full-sun coffee fields also does harm to human life. Medical research often makes use of the forests' plant and animal life, and the ruin of such species could keep researchers from finding ways for certain diseases. In addition, new coffee-growing methods are harmful to the water locally, and lastly the world's groundwater.
Both locally and globally, the continued spread of full-sun coffee plantations(种植园)could mean breaking the balance of the rainforest ecology. The loss of shade trees is already causing a little change in the world's climate, and studies show that the loss of oxygen-giving trees also leads to air pollution and global warming. Besides, the new growing methods are bringing about acidic (酸性) soil conditions.
It is clear that the way much coffee is grown affects a lot, from the local environment to the global ecology. But coffee users do have a choice. They can buy shade-grown coffee whenever possible, although at a higher cost. The future health of the planet and mankind is surely worth more than an inexpensive cup of coffee.
第一步：总览全文，确定体裁
本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了全阳光咖啡生产虽然有利可图，但在当地和全球都造成了很多不良影响。作者建议消费者买阴凉种植的咖啡，因为地球和人类未来的健康肯定比一杯便宜的咖啡更有价值。
第二步：找出要点，确定主题句
1．主旨句：
The change in growing coffee from shade-grown production to full-sun production brings certain animals and birds in danger, and even breaks the world's ecological balance.
2．要点句：
①As a result, many species are quickly in extinction.
②The damage to the rainforest for full-sun coffee fields also does harm to human life.
③The continued spread of full-sun coffee plantations could mean breaking the balance of the rainforest ecology.
④But coffee users do have a choice.
第三步：改写要点，灵活表达
1．缩写主旨句(不超过15个词)
2．改写要点句(每句所补充词汇不超过8个词)
①(扩写要点句①)Many species are dying out owing to .
Some growers choose to plant coffee beans in the full-sun instead of in the shade.
the loss of the forest home
Some growers choose to plant coffee beans in the full-sun instead of in the shade.(要点1) Because of that, several terrible results have come up.(要点2) Many species are dying out owing to the loss of the forest home. In addition, human life and the rainforest ecology have been affected a great deal. (要点3) Considering the bright future of mankind and the world, people should make a wiser choice.(要点4)
②(整合要点句②和句③) have been affected a great deal.
③(扩写要点句④)Considering , people should make a wiser choice.
第四步：检查修改，整理誊写
Human life and the rainforest ecology
the bright future of mankind and the world
Ⅰ.单词拼写
1． (向日葵)always grows up towards the sunlight.
2．As an old saying goes，“ (美) exists everywhere.”
3．We stood on the (屋顶) and watched the parade on the street below.
4．This is the one major drawback of the new (系统)．
Sunflower
Beauty
rooftop
system
5．I think the (味道) of fresh strawberries is out of this world.
6．He was saving his (力量) for next week's race in our school.
7．Some companies might not let you (租借) a car unless you have a credit card.
8．And at the end of the lecture, you can consult the (专家) about your own problems.
flavour
energy
rent
expert
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1．My uncle is expert at repairing all kinds of cars.
2．Many willows bend their (branch) into the river.
3．I suggest the time when people dance on the square should (limit)．
4．I'm sure my hometown will become more and more (beauty) in the future.
an
branches
be limited
beautiful
5．Beautiful and neat handwriting is (benefit), especially for middle school students.
6．The first two days after arrival were spent in a school hall (prepare) our equipment.
7．The most (pleasure) thing of the rainy season is that one can be entirely free from dust.
8．Much time spent (sit) at a desk, office workers are generally troubled by health problems.
beneficial
preparing
pleasant
sitting
Ⅲ.选词填空
1．What you say or do will others.
2．Young teacher as she is, she her students.
3．The long hot summer has serious water shortages.
4．It's a rule for guests in the hotel to by 12：00 am.
5．She you is an English teacher in senior high school.
have an effect on， a variety of， be located in， as well as， reflect on， check out， lead to， separate ...from ...， in doubt about， be popular with
have an effect on
is popular with
led to
check out
as well as
6．When you are the meaning of a word, consult a dictionary.
7．The war him his family and sent him to fight in this area.
8．The skin can appear colours including brown, yellow, green or orange.
9．California the far west of the USA and has a long Pacific Ocean coastline.
10．Your performance as a student will be excellent if you develop a habit of
____________ how you learn.
in doubt about
separated
from
a variety of
is located in
reflecting on
Ⅳ.完成句子
1．除了刷墙外，我们还在修屋顶。(as well as)
, we are repairing the roof.
2．当你疲劳的时候，没有什么比好好休息更好的了。(否定词＋比较级)
There is a good rest when you are tired.
3．昨晚被邀请参加你们聚会的所谓的客人是谁？(过去分词短语作定语)
Who were the so-called guests last night
As well as painting the wall
nothing better than
invited to your party
4．他们通宵点着灯，假装在努力工作。(with复合结构)
They pretended to be working hard all night .
5．汤姆很擅长科学，而他的兄弟有“高超的种植技能”。(while)
Tom is really good at science .
with their lights burning
while his brother has “green fingers”
Ⅴ.课文语法填空
“If you look the right way, you can see that the whole world is a garden.” These words come 1. the author of the book The Secret Garden, first 2. __________(publish) in 1911.Today, millions of Brits like 3. (say) that they have “green fingers”，with around half the population 4. (spend) their free time gardening. And while many Brits like nothing 5. (good) than spending their Sunday cutting the grass, some are happy just to sit under the branches of the trees and enjoy the 6. (beautiful) of the world around them.
from
published
to say
spending
better
beauty
Those without outside space can rent small pieces of land on 7. to grow things. One recent idea 8. (be) to turn rooftops and walls into private gardens. If you're 9. any doubt about this, take a moment 10. __________ (reflect) on this line from The Secret Garden: “Where you tend a rose ... A thistle cannot grow.”
which
has been
in
to reflect
Ⅵ.概要写作
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Some years ago, writing in my diary used to be a usual activity.I would return from school and spend the expected half an hour recording the day's events, feelings, and impressions in my little blue diary.I did not really need to express my emotions by way of words, but I gained a certain satisfaction from seeing my experiences forever recorded on paper.After all, isn't accumulating memories a way of preserving the past
When I was thirteen years old, I went on a long journey on foot in a great valley, well-equipped with pens, a diary, and a camera.During the trip, I was busy recording every incident, name and place I came across.I felt proud to be spending my time productively, dutifully preserving for future generations a detailed description of my travels.On my last night there, I wandered out of my tent, diary in hand.The sky was clear and lit by the glare of the moon, and the walls of the valley looked threatening behind their screen of shadows.I automatically took out my pen ...At that point, I understood that nothing I wrote could ever match or replace the few seconds I allowed myself to experience the dramatic beauty of the valley.All I remembered of the previous few days were the dull characterizations I had set down in my diary.
Now, I only write in my diary when I need to write down a special thought or feeling.I still love to record ideas and quotations that strike me in books, or observations that are particularly meaningful.I take pictures, but not very often — only of objects I find really beautiful.I'm no longer blindly satisfied with having something to remember when I grow old.I realize that life will simply pass me by if I stay behind the camera, busy preserving the present so as to live it in the future.
I don't want to wake up one day and have nothing but a pile of pictures and notes.Maybe I won't have as many exact representations of people and places; maybe I'll forget certain facts, but at least the experiences will always remain inside me.I don't live to make memories — I just live, and the memories form themselves.
参考范文：
The author had made it a routine to keep a detailed diary of her/his everyday life to store memories.(要点1) That changed after a trip to a valley, where she/he realized breathtaking scenery was meant to be felt with heart rather than written down mechanically.(要点2) Thus, she/he has become selective about what to put in her/his diary, (要点3) focusing on the present instead of busying herself/himself with recording memories for the past or the future.(要点4)
“课时跟踪检测”见“课时跟踪检测（三）”
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Developing ideas—读写·体现学以致用
课时目标
1.通过阅读课文各段内容，准确把握各段主题句，归纳段落大意，理清文章结构。
2.了解概要写作的文体特点和内容要素，能够运用所学内容进行概要写作，总结文章大意。
3.深入了解英国人对园艺的热爱和饮用水果茶及花草茶的传统，并引导学生联系自身实际，对中外文化都崇尚与自然和谐相处形成跨文化的理解，最终形成亲近自然、崇尚自然、合理利用自然、与自然和谐相处的意识。
一、背阅读单词——会认就行
1．sunflower n． 向日葵
2．branch n. 树枝
3．rooftop n. 屋顶
4．herb n. (用于调味)香草
二、背重点单词——写对才行
1． adj. 内行的，专家的
2． v. 租用，租借
3． n. 味，味道
4． n. 系统
expert
rent
flavour
system
三、背拓展单词——活用才行
1． v .出版→publication n．出版→publisher n．出版人(社)
2． adj.有限的→limit v．& n．限制→limitation n．限制
3． n．好处，益处→beneficial adj.有益的，有利的
4． adj.令人愉快的→pleasure n．愉快；快乐
5． n．力量，活力→energetic adj.精力充沛的；充满活力的
publish
limited
benefit
pleasant
energy
四、背短语、词块——多积更行
1． 可能做某事
2． 数以百万的
3． 参加比赛
4． 把……变成……
5． 和……一样；除了
be likely to do sth.
millions of
enter into competitions
turn ...into ...
as well as
6． 对……有益
7． 花点时间
8． 认真思考；仔细考虑
9． 对……有效/有作用
10． 助……一臂之力，对……有帮助
be good for
take a moment
reflect on
have an effect on
give ...a helping hand
五、背重点句式——不背不行
1.
悟原句 And while many Brits like nothing better than spending their Sunday cutting the grass, some are happy just to sit under the branches of the trees and enjoy the beauty of the world around them. (“nothing better than”是“否定词＋比较级”表示最高级的含义)
虽然许多英国人认为锄草是周日最棒的活动，但也有的人只要能坐在树下享受周围世界的美丽就心满意足了。
写佳句 As far as I'm concerned, .
就我个人而言，身体健康最重要。
nothing is more important than health
2.
悟原句 As well as being good for the environment, gardening is also good for the soul. (“as well as＋doing sth.”，意为“除了做某事外，还有”)
除了能改善环境，园艺还能净化心灵。
写佳句 (2021·浙江6月高考写作) ____________________________________
_______________,the exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings can also improve our ability to appreciate art.
除了弘扬中国传统文化，这次学生国画作品展还能提高我们欣赏艺术的能力。
As well as promoting the traditional
Chinese culture
第一遍 泛读通文意
A Love of Gardening
“If you look the right way, you can see that the whole world is a garden.” These words come from the author of the book The Secret Garden, first published in 1911. At that time, only the very rich in Britain had gardens. Very soon after this, homes with gardens began to be built. This is what started the British love of gardening! Today, millions of Brits like to say that they have “green fingers”， with around half the population spending their free time gardening.
For many people in the UK, their garden is their own private world. Each spring, children plant sunflowers and wait to see which one is the tallest. Expert gardeners know just the right corne(*&r for roses, and others spend hours trying to grow perfect vegetables to enter into competitions. And while many Brits like nothing better than spending their Sunday cutting the grass, some are happy just to sit under the branches of the trees and enjoy the beauty of the world around them.
But in cities, limited space has led to people looking for new solutions. Those without outside space can rent small pieces of land on which to grow things. Today, there are over 4,000 people in London waiting for such pieces of land. One recent idea has been to turn rooftops and walls into private gardens. These gardens have helped make the cities greener and improve air quality.
As well as being good for the environment, gardening is also good for the soul. What other free-time activity allows you to be at one with nature and create more beautiful living things And if you're in any doubt about this, take a moment to reflect on this line from The Secret Garden: “Where you tend a rose ... A thistle cannot grow.”
[参考译文]
热爱园艺
“如果从合适的角度去欣赏，你会发现整个世界就是一个花园。”《秘密花园》的作者曾这样说。这本书1911年首次出版，在当时的英国，只有富豪才拥有花园。不久之后，人们开始建造带有花园的房子，英国人对园艺的热爱就此开始！今天，数以百万的英国人喜欢说他们有“绿手指(意为擅长园艺)”，约有一半的英国人都把空闲时间用在打理花园上。
[句式释解]
句 if引导条件状语从句；that引导的是宾语从句，作see的宾语。
句 what引导的是表语从句。
句 with around ...spending ...是“with＋宾语＋现在分词”形式的复合结构，它在句中作状语。 其中spend ...doing sth.意为“花费……做某事”。
对于许多英国人来说，花园就是他们的私密世界。每年春天，孩子们种下向日葵，满怀期待地看谁种的长得最高。高明的园丁对于花园里哪个角落最合适种玫瑰都了如指掌，其他人则花费大量时间力图种出最完美的蔬菜参加竞赛。虽然许多英国人认为锄草是周日最棒的活动，但也有的人只要能坐在树下享受周围世界的美丽就心满意足了。
[句式释解]
句 while引导的是让步状语从句，while意为“虽然，尽管”。该句中“nothing better than”结构属于“否定词＋比较级”表示最高级含义的用法。
但在城市里，有限的空间促使人们寻找新的解决方案。住宅外部没有空间的居民可以租用小块土地种植作物。现如今，伦敦有四千多人在等待租用这样的土地。近期的一个理念是将屋顶和墙壁改造为私人花园。这些花园可以增加城市绿化面积、改善空气质量。
[句式释解]
句 on which是“介词＋关系代词”引导的定语从句，先行词是land。
句 waiting for ...land是现在分词短语作定语。
除了能改善环境，园艺还能净化心灵。还有什么其他业余活动能让你在享受自然的同时创造出更美丽的生物呢？如果你对这一点有任何疑问，请停下片刻，回味一下《秘密花园》中的这句话：“当你种下玫瑰，蓟草就不会生长。”
[句式释解]
句 if引导的是条件状语从句。 in doubt about意为“怀疑……”。
第二遍 精读提素养
步骤一|先明文章主旨大意，知写了什么
What's the main idea of the text
A．History of gardening.
B．Skills of gardening.
C．Benefits of gardening.
D．Brits' love of gardening.
答案：D
步骤二|再逐段精读文章，看怎样写的
阅读文章第1、2段，完成下列题目
1．文意的理解
(1)When did Brits start to love gardening
It started after the year 1911.
(2)What does “green fingers” mean in the first paragraph
A．The fingers painted with green color.
B．The poor skills of gardening.
C．The fingers cut by green knife.
D．The super skills of gardening.
答案：D
(3)What does the writer want to tell us in Paragraph 2
The writer wants to tell us .
Brits' love of gardening
2．表达的技巧
借代修辞法
借代是说明文或记叙文中一种常见的修辞手法。借代是指不直接说出所要表达的人或事物，而是借用与它密切相关的人或事物来代替的修饰方法。恰当地运用借代可以引人联想，使语句具有形象突出、特点鲜明、文笔精炼、具体生动的效果。文章第一段最后一句中的“green fingers (绿手指)”就是这样一种用法，它其实是对喜欢园艺的人的一种称赞，意思是植物在他们的精心照料下能够茁壮成长。如果说某人有 green fingers，就意味着这个人有高超的种植技能。
指出下列句中黑体部分指代的是什么：
(1)She has a ready tongue.喻指“ ”
(2)I had the muscle and made money out of it.
喻指“ ”
伶俐的口才
力气
阅读文章第3、4段，完成下列题目
1．文意的理解
(1)Why do over 4,000 people wait for the small pieces of land
(2)What do you think the last sentence in this article mean
A．A thistle cannot grow because of the roses.
B．A thistle is less important than the roses.
C．Gardening can make the environment more beautiful.
D．Gardening can cost you a lot of time and money.
答案：C
Because they want to turn the land into gardens to grow things.
(3)According to the passage, which of the following is NOT the meaning of gardening
A．It enriches people's spiritual worlds.
B．It improves environment quality.
C．It provides people with a wonderful time.
D．It enables expert gardeners to enter competitions.
答案：D
2．表达的技巧
引用 (quotation)
引用也叫引语，它是直接或间接引用他人的话来说明自己的立场或观点的方法。引用可用于各种文体，它能有效增强文章的说服力和感染力。本文的开头和结尾均引用了《秘密花园》的相关语句，这种首尾呼应的写作方法让文章结构更加紧密，内容更加完整，进一步突出文章主题，加深读者的印象，引发读者的共鸣等。
把下列引语翻译成汉语：
As Victor Hugo once said, “Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face”， and up to now nobody has been able to do this better than Charlie Chaplin.
正如维克多·雨果曾经说过：“笑容如阳光，它驱走人们脸上的寒冬”，到目前为止，还没有人能比查理·卓别林做得更好。
步骤三|读后理层次结构，析有何逻辑
本篇文章是说明文。它以递进式的结构行文，按照说明事理的逻辑性进行介绍：英国人是何时开始喜欢园艺的→英国人喜欢园艺的原因→英国人是怎样打理自己的花园的→英国人做园艺的好处。递进式说明文的主旨大意多在尾段。
步骤四|最后知选文意图，思有何价值
“崇尚自然、与自然和谐相处”的文化观
大自然是伟大的，它无私地为人类奉献着一切。花草树木可以为人类提供美丽的风景，给人们一个美好的心情。但是，它们需要人类的尊敬与呵护。只有人们崇尚自然并与自然和谐相处，人类才会有更加幸福美好的生活。本文的作者通过对英国人对园艺的热爱与做法的说明，让人们意识到中西方在对待自然方面的文化观是一致的，文章启示人们要亲近自然、崇尚自然、合理利用自然，树立与自然和谐相处的文化意识。
试体会下面的句子：
Nature never deceives us; it is always us who deceive ourselves. —Rousseau
大自然永远不会欺骗我们，欺骗我们的往往是我们自己。 ——卢梭
第一板块 单词和短语——点点清
1．But in cities, limited space has led to people looking for new solutions.
但在城市里，有限的空间促使人们寻找新的解决方案。
★limited adj.有限的
[用法感知]
①Time is limited and let's come straight to the point.
时间有限，我们开门见山吧。
②(以文化人助写作)Our life has a limit, but knowledge is without limit.
生命有限，知识无涯。
③We should limit the number of dogs.
我们应该限制(养)狗的数量。
[归纳点拨]
(1)limit v． 限制，限定
n. 界限，限度，限定，限制
set a limit to ... 对……设限
put a limit on 限制
there is a/no limit to ... 对……是有限的/无限的
(2)limitless adj. 无限制的；无界限的；无限度的
unlimited adj. 无限制的
[应用融会]
(1)词汇升级
④We must limit the expense of the trip. ________________________
(2)用limit的适当形式或短语填空
⑤A man's life is but there is serving the people. I will devote my life to the job of serving the people.
一个人的生命是有限的，可是，为人民服务是无限的。我要把有限的生命投入到无限的为人民服务当中去。
set a limit to/put a limit on
limited
no limit to
limited
limitless
2．And if you're in any doubt about this, take a moment to reflect on this line from The Secret Garden：“Where you tend a rose ... A thistle cannot grow.”
如果你对这一点有任何疑问，请停下片刻，回味一下《秘密花园》中的这句话：“当你种下玫瑰，蓟草就不会生长。”
★in doubt about对……有疑问；怀疑
[用法感知]
①He said that very clearly so that nobody was in doubt about what he meant.
他说得很清楚，所以没有人怀疑他的意思。
②Without (a/any) doubt, his marks will be top of the whole class.
毫无疑问，他的成绩将在全班名列前茅。
③(2020·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)There is no doubt that there are many things that I can learn from him.
毫无疑问，我可以从他身上学到很多东西。
[归纳点拨]
(1)without (a/any) doubt 毫无疑问
no doubt＋从句 无疑，很可能
there is no doubt that ... 毫无疑问……
there is some doubt whether ... 尚有疑问……
have no/some doubt about (不)怀疑
(2)doubt sth./that ... 怀疑；不相信
don't doubt that 相信
doubt whether/if 怀疑，不确定
[应用融会]
(1)单句语法填空
④There is some doubt they can complete the work on time.
⑤There is no doubt hard work is the key to improving your results.
⑥ doubt, many companies wish that there are fewer and weaker competitors around.
(2)词汇升级
⑦I believe that he can finish the task on time. ____________
whether
that
Without
don't doubt
3．What are the benefits of gardening
园艺的好处是什么？
★benefit n．好处，益处；效益；救济金；津贴 v.使受益，得益于
[用法感知]
①(2020·新高考全国卷Ⅰ写作)The race was of great benefit to the participants, physically and mentally.
这次比赛对参赛者的身体和精神都有很大的好处。
②I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity.
我相信大家都会从这个活动中获益良多。
③Therefore, students should learn how to share their feelings, which is beneficial to their growth in the future.
因此，学生应该学会如何分享他们的感情，这有利于他们未来的成长。
[归纳点拨]
(1)be of benefit to 对……有益
(2)benefit from 得益于
(3)beneficial adj. 有益的；有利的
be beneficial to 对……有益/有利
[应用融会]
(1)单句语法填空
④There are many (benefit) of singing in a choir.
⑤Doing morning exercises benefits our health and we benefit it.
⑥Reading a lot is (benefit) to improving your English.
(2)词汇升级
⑦Keeping a balanced diet is beneficial to our health. ____________
benefits
from
beneficial
is of benefit
第二板块 句式和语法——句句通
And while many Brits like nothing better than spending their Sunday cutting the grass, some are happy just to sit under the branches of the trees and enjoy the beauty of the world around them.
虽然许多英国人认为锄草是周日最棒的活动，但也有的人只要能坐在树下享受周围世界的美丽就心满意足了。
[归纳点拨]
“否定词＋比较级”结构表示最高级含义，意为“没有比……更……的了”。常用的否定词有no, not, never, nothing, nobody, hardly等。表示最高级意义的结构还有：
(1)the＋形容词或副词的最高级
(2)比较级＋than＋any other＋单数名词
(3)比较级＋than＋all the other＋复数名词
①That e-book is no larger than an ordinary book with a screen where you can read original book and film reviews.
那种电子书不比普通的书大，带有一个屏幕，你可以在上面阅读原版书籍和影评。
②The Spring Festival is the longest and the most important of all Chinese festivals.
春节是中国所有节日中最长、最重要的一个。
③Qomolangma is higher than any other mountain in the world.
珠穆朗玛峰是世界上最高的山峰。
[应用融会]
(1)单句语法填空
④No one can be more careful he is!
⑤The Sahara is the (big) desert in the world.
(2)完成句子
⑥This building, ,proclaims the character of the town.
这座建筑比任何其他建筑都能代表本城的特色。
⑦As a student, I can tell you that there is being praised by my teacher before my classmates.
作为一名学生，我可以告诉你，没有什么比在同学面前被老师表扬更好的了。
than
biggest
more than any other
nothing better than
写作项目——Writing a summary
本单元的写作任务是写一篇概要写作。概要写作是对原文的内容和思想进行浓缩，用精炼的词句概括出文章的要点、次要点等内容，再现原作者的思想、观点。主要包括阅读和写作两个过程。首先，要求考生能够读懂所给阅读材料的内容；其次，要求考生将原文的要点及所理解的内容用自己的语言准确地表达出来。
由课文学写作范式(写得“像模像样”)
(一)感悟经典范文
[教材P71参考范文] “总—分”式
Fruit and herbal teas
British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs (主旨句). Such a habit is so popular that many people plant easy-to-grow herbs in their own tea gardens. There are many flavours of fruit and herbal teas (要点1), including traditional lemon and ginger, as well as many flavours such as mango, strawberry, apple, pear, blackberry leaf and dandelion. Aside from the variety of flavours, herbal tea also has various health benefits. (要点2) Some can help people relax, and some like ginger tea, are good for the immune system, while others, such as mint tea, are beneficial for digestion.
范文正是从文章主题入手，然后用不同的连接词或短语将不同段落的内容连接起来，使文章衔接自然；除此之外，范文还对原文信息进行了适当地整合与重组。
(二)点拨写作步骤
1．总览全文，确定体裁和结构
体裁 结构
记叙文 使用“要素串联法”，明确记叙文的六要素(who, when, where, what, how, why)的内容，如果是夹叙夹议文，还要写出故事给读者带来的启示或寓意
说明文 使用“段意合并法”，找出文章要说明的对象、观点或建议
议论文 使用“主题概括法”，提取议论文的三要素(论点、论据、论证)
续表
2.找出要点，确定主题句
明确各段的主旨大意，略去次要信息和不必要的细节。
3．改写要点，灵活表达
灵活采用同义词或近义词整合每段大意，用不同的句式进行转换，并在必要的地方添加衔接词，使各要点之间能够通顺流畅。
4．检查修改，整理誊写
核对要点是否全面，检查语言运用是否准确，以及行文是否流畅；另外，还要注意词数限制和书写规范。
积素材充盈写作“语料库”
(一)背衔接词汇
转折：but, however, yet, nevertheless
结果：so, thus, therefore, consequently, in fact
原因：because, as, since, for, due to/owing to
对比：instead, likewise, on the contrary
让步：though, as, although, despite
列举：first(ly), next/later, then, finally/eventually
增补：also, besides, what's more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, above all ...
举例：for example, for instance
替代：alternatively
解释：namely, in other words, which means, refer to, that is to say, or rather
目的：aim to, mainly deal with, focus on
(二)背概要写作微技能
1．同义替换
①be good to有益于：benefit
②too much过多的：excessive
③the same as与……一样：likewise
④about关于：concerning, regarding，related to, be relevant to
⑤actually事实上：in fact, as a matter of fact, in reality
⑥aim at旨在：be aimed to, be aimed at, be intended to, be meant to
⑦appear出现：appearance, turn up, show up
⑧approach靠近，临近：come near, draw near，around the corner
⑨besides而且，另外：additionally, in addition，what's more, moreover, furthermore
⑩be pride of为……感到骄傲/自豪：take pride in
energetic精力充沛的：full of energy
have fun玩得开心：enjoy oneself, have a good time
hold举行：take place
honor/honour纪念：in honour of
intelligent聪明的：clever, wise, smart, bright, brilliant
in a word总之：all in all, in conclusion, in short, in brief, to sum up
finally最后：in the end, eventually, at the end of
in the beginning开始：at the start of, to begin with
2．反义转换
①sincere→insincere
②encourage→discourage
3．词性转换
①recognize your child→parents' recognition
②strongly against→strong opposition
4．句式变化
(1)主被动语态变换
It is widely accepted that more people use computers in the world today.
→It is widely accepted that computers are widely used in the world today.
(2)简单句合并为复合句
The weather turned out to be very good. This was more than we could expect.
→The weather turned out to be very good, which was more than we could expect.
(3)连词衔接法
He insisted on staying. He was not willing to go.
→He insisted on staying rather than going.
(4)固定结构转换法
We are sure to finish it in time because so many people are helping us.
→With so many people helping us, we are sure to finish it in time.
(5)特殊句式法(倒装句，强调句)
①Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests were present at the meeting.
→Present at the meeting were Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests.
②She hardly has time to listen to music.
→Hardly does she have time to listen to music.
③The beautiful scenery attracts the tourists from all over the world.
→It is the beautiful scenery that attracts the tourists from all over the world.
[应用体验]
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Growing coffee beans is a huge, making-money business.However, unluckily, full-sun production is replacing the industry and causes a lot of damage.The change in growing coffee from shade-grown production to full-sun production brings certain animals and birds in danger, and even breaks the world's ecological balance (生态平衡)．
On a local level, the damage of the forest that is required by full-sun fields affects the area's birds and animals. The shade of the forest trees gives a home to birds and other species which depend on the trees' flowers and fruits. Full-sun coffee growers destroy this forest home. As a result, many species are quickly in extinction.
On a more global level, the damage to the rainforest for full-sun coffee fields also does harm to human life. Medical research often makes use of the forests' plant and animal life, and the ruin of such species could keep researchers from finding ways for certain diseases. In addition, new coffee-growing methods are harmful to the water locally, and lastly the world's groundwater.
Both locally and globally, the continued spread of full-sun coffee plantations(种植园)could mean breaking the balance of the rainforest ecology. The loss of shade trees is already causing a little change in the world's climate, and studies show that the loss of oxygen-giving trees also leads to air pollution and global warming. Besides, the new growing methods are bringing about acidic (酸性) soil conditions.
It is clear that the way much coffee is grown affects a lot, from the local environment to the global ecology. But coffee users do have a choice. They can buy shade-grown coffee whenever possible, although at a higher cost. The future health of the planet and mankind is surely worth more than an inexpensive cup of coffee.
第一步：总览全文，确定体裁
本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了全阳光咖啡生产虽然有利可图，但在当地和全球都造成了很多不良影响。作者建议消费者买阴凉种植的咖啡，因为地球和人类未来的健康肯定比一杯便宜的咖啡更有价值。
第二步：找出要点，确定主题句
1．主旨句：
The change in growing coffee from shade-grown production to full-sun production brings certain animals and birds in danger, and even breaks the world's ecological balance.
2．要点句：
①As a result, many species are quickly in extinction.
②The damage to the rainforest for full-sun coffee fields also does harm to human life.
③The continued spread of full-sun coffee plantations could mean breaking the balance of the rainforest ecology.
④But coffee users do have a choice.
第三步：改写要点，灵活表达
1．缩写主旨句(不超过15个词)
2．改写要点句(每句所补充词汇不超过8个词)
①(扩写要点句①)Many species are dying out owing to .
Some growers choose to plant coffee beans in the full-sun instead of in the shade.
the loss of the forest home
Some growers choose to plant coffee beans in the full-sun instead of in the shade.(要点1) Because of that, several terrible results have come up.(要点2) Many species are dying out owing to the loss of the forest home. In addition, human life and the rainforest ecology have been affected a great deal. (要点3) Considering the bright future of mankind and the world, people should make a wiser choice.(要点4)
②(整合要点句②和句③) have been affected a great deal.
③(扩写要点句④)Considering , people should make a wiser choice.
第四步：检查修改，整理誊写
Human life and the rainforest ecology
the bright future of mankind and the world
Ⅰ.单词拼写
1． (向日葵)always grows up towards the sunlight.
2．As an old saying goes，“ (美) exists everywhere.”
3．We stood on the (屋顶) and watched the parade on the street below.
4．This is the one major drawback of the new (系统)．
Sunflower
Beauty
rooftop
system
5．I think the (味道) of fresh strawberries is out of this world.
6．He was saving his (力量) for next week's race in our school.
7．Some companies might not let you (租借) a car unless you have a credit card.
8．And at the end of the lecture, you can consult the (专家) about your own problems.
flavour
energy
rent
expert
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1．My uncle is expert at repairing all kinds of cars.
2．Many willows bend their (branch) into the river.
3．I suggest the time when people dance on the square should (limit)．
4．I'm sure my hometown will become more and more (beauty) in the future.
an
branches
be limited
beautiful
5．Beautiful and neat handwriting is (benefit), especially for middle school students.
6．The first two days after arrival were spent in a school hall (prepare) our equipment.
7．The most (pleasure) thing of the rainy season is that one can be entirely free from dust.
8．Much time spent (sit) at a desk, office workers are generally troubled by health problems.
beneficial
preparing
pleasant
sitting
Ⅲ.选词填空
1．What you say or do will others.
2．Young teacher as she is, she her students.
3．The long hot summer has serious water shortages.
4．It's a rule for guests in the hotel to by 12：00 am.
5．She you is an English teacher in senior high school.
have an effect on， a variety of， be located in， as well as， reflect on， check out， lead to， separate ...from ...， in doubt about， be popular with
have an effect on
is popular with
led to
check out
as well as
6．When you are the meaning of a word, consult a dictionary.
7．The war him his family and sent him to fight in this area.
8．The skin can appear colours including brown, yellow, green or orange.
9．California the far west of the USA and has a long Pacific Ocean coastline.
10．Your performance as a student will be excellent if you develop a habit of
____________ how you learn.
in doubt about
separated
from
a variety of
is located in
reflecting on
Ⅳ.完成句子
1．除了刷墙外，我们还在修屋顶。(as well as)
, we are repairing the roof.
2．当你疲劳的时候，没有什么比好好休息更好的了。(否定词＋比较级)
There is a good rest when you are tired.
3．昨晚被邀请参加你们聚会的所谓的客人是谁？(过去分词短语作定语)
Who were the so-called guests last night
As well as painting the wall
nothing better than
invited to your party
4．他们通宵点着灯，假装在努力工作。(with复合结构)
They pretended to be working hard all night .
5．汤姆很擅长科学，而他的兄弟有“高超的种植技能”。(while)
Tom is really good at science .
with their lights burning
while his brother has “green fingers”
Ⅴ.课文语法填空
“If you look the right way, you can see that the whole world is a garden.” These words come 1. the author of the book The Secret Garden, first 2. __________(publish) in 1911.Today, millions of Brits like 3. (say) that they have “green fingers”，with around half the population 4. (spend) their free time gardening. And while many Brits like nothing 5. (good) than spending their Sunday cutting the grass, some are happy just to sit under the branches of the trees and enjoy the 6. (beautiful) of the world around them.
from
published
to say
spending
better
beauty
Those without outside space can rent small pieces of land on 7. to grow things. One recent idea 8. (be) to turn rooftops and walls into private gardens. If you're 9. any doubt about this, take a moment 10. __________ (reflect) on this line from The Secret Garden: “Where you tend a rose ... A thistle cannot grow.”
which
has been
in
to reflect
Ⅵ.概要写作
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Some years ago, writing in my diary used to be a usual activity.I would return from school and spend the expected half an hour recording the day's events, feelings, and impressions in my little blue diary.I did not really need to express my emotions by way of words, but I gained a certain satisfaction from seeing my experiences forever recorded on paper.After all, isn't accumulating memories a way of preserving the past
When I was thirteen years old, I went on a long journey on foot in a great valley, well-equipped with pens, a diary, and a camera.During the trip, I was busy recording every incident, name and place I came across.I felt proud to be spending my time productively, dutifully preserving for future generations a detailed description of my travels.On my last night there, I wandered out of my tent, diary in hand.The sky was clear and lit by the glare of the moon, and the walls of the valley looked threatening behind their screen of shadows.I automatically took out my pen ...At that point, I understood that nothing I wrote could ever match or replace the few seconds I allowed myself to experience the dramatic beauty of the valley.All I remembered of the previous few days were the dull characterizations I had set down in my diary.
Now, I only write in my diary when I need to write down a special thought or feeling.I still love to record ideas and quotations that strike me in books, or observations that are particularly meaningful.I take pictures, but not very often — only of objects I find really beautiful.I'm no longer blindly satisfied with having something to remember when I grow old.I realize that life will simply pass me by if I stay behind the camera, busy preserving the present so as to live it in the future.
I don't want to wake up one day and have nothing but a pile of pictures and notes.Maybe I won't have as many exact representations of people and places; maybe I'll forget certain facts, but at least the experiences will always remain inside me.I don't live to make memories — I just live, and the memories form themselves.
参考范文：
The author had made it a routine to keep a detailed diary of her/his everyday life to store memories.(要点1) That changed after a trip to a valley, where she/he realized breathtaking scenery was meant to be felt with heart rather than written down mechanically.(要点2) Thus, she/he has become selective about what to put in her/his diary, (要点3) focusing on the present instead of busying herself/himself with recording memories for the past or the future.(要点4)
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