1.7 Unit 1 Helping those in need Writing（课件）

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Unit 1
Helping those in need
牛津深圳广州版八年级下册
Writing
in need
voluntary work
in order to
take photos
have difficulty (in)...
raise one’s spirits
ask permission
suffer from
为了
报请批准
拍照
使振奋
需要帮助的
在…有困难
因…受苦
义务性工作
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课堂导入
Play a game! (短语积累）
Hold a book fair
clean the park
help disabled people
go to the Old People’s Home
raise money
organize a singing competition
plant trees
What kind of voluntary activity are you going to take part in
You are planning a money-raising activity to help children in need, how do you raise money Give your idea.
students sell old books.
Talent show
Book fair
Students give performance and audience pay for it
Art fair
Students draw pictures and sell them
Food fair
students and teachers sell food they have made by themselves
You and your classmates are planning a money-raising activity to help children in need. You need to write a letter to your head teacher to ask permission.
A letter to the headteacher
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课堂活动
In group, brainstorm some money-raising ideas.
Follow the example.
A
Money-raising ideas
Craft fair
Idea: make small decoration and sell them
Talent show
Idea: give performance and audience pay for it
Book fair
Idea: students sell old books
Art fair
Idea: draw pictures and sell them
Food fair
Idea: students and teachers sell food they have made by themselves
Why are you writing the letter
_________________________________________
How are you going to raise money
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When and where would you like to have the activity
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What would you like the head teacher to do
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Discuss how you will write your letter. Write down some notes below.
Because we need to raise money for children in need.
We are going to sell books/sell food/…
We would like to have the activity at … on …
We hope he can help us do some promotion …
B
A letter asking for permission from your head teacher
Matching to get the format
May 17, 2023
Mr. Li
No.6, Huanghua Road, Yuexiu District, GZ
Dear Mr. Li
We are writing to ask for your permission to hold a money-raising activity.
…
Yours sincerely,
Mike
Class 1
Closing
Date
Your head teacher’s name
School address
Greeting
Your names and class
Body
①
②
③
④
⑤
⑥
⑦
write the letter to your head teacher. Use the outline below and your notes in B to help you.
Date
Your head teacher’s name and school address
Greeting
Why you are writing the letter
How you are going to raise money
When and where you would like to have the activity
Mr/Ms
Dear Mr/Ms
We are writing to
In order to raise money for children in need, we are going to
We would like to have the activity at
What you would like the head teacher to do
Closing
Your names and class
Could you please give us permission to
Yours sincerely,
Class

Tips
full form
linking words
formal & polite
we are rather than we’re
first of all, after that, then, at last
We are going to ask for your permission
Could you please…/ Could we…
May 17.2023
Mr. Li
No.6. Huanghua Road. Yuexiu District. GZ
Dear Mr. Li
We are going to ask for your permission to have a money- raising activity.
In order to raise money for children in need, we are going to hold a food fair to sell food and drink. First of all. we are going to make a poster to help students know our activity. After that, we are going to prepare an attractive sigil so as to attract more students to come. Then we are going to collect and sort food and drinks in order to help students find them easily. Next, we are going to make a menu and price the food. And they can buy more to get a lower price. At last, we are going to prepare a donation box so as to encourage more people to help children in need.
We would like to have the activity at the school playground from 8 a.m. to 4 p.m. on Tuesday. At the same time, we will call oil all students or teachers to join us.
Could you please give us permission to have this activity Could we put up a poster on the school notice board Could we possibly have at least five desks and chair for showing our food and drinks We are really looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely.
Mike Class 1
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课堂小结
1. We have learned to write a letter to ask permission to raise money.
话题一 给校长的一封信
【短文写作】
假如你是学生会主席苏明，你校师生想在校内举办书展，为开展环保宣传活动筹集资金。请你根据以下内容提示，给王校长写一封信，征得他的同意。词数80左右。
内容包括：
(1)活动原因：全校师生打算在超市附近举办环保宣传晚会，但是资金不足；
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课堂训练
(2)活动内容：举办一次书展，筹集资金；
(3)时间和地点：下周三下午4点整，学校操场；
(4)参加人员：全校师生。
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【写作指导】
此篇作文以计划筹款帮助儿童征得学校同意为主线，主要内容是筹款的目的及方式。写作内容渗透着本单元的话题和语言目标——怎样帮助有需要的人。
在写作过程中要明确以下几点：
1. 人称：使用第一人称；
2. 时态：使用正确的时态——一般现在时态和一般将来时态；
3. 内容：把题目中所给的提示内容组句成文，不要遗漏要点。
【范文赏析】
Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing to ask for your permission to hold a book fair at our school. We plan to have a party near the supermarket to ask people to protect the environment. However, we are short of money. So we are going to hold a book fair to raise some money. We would like to begin this activity at 4:00 p.m. next Wednesday on the playground. At that time, all the students and teachers at our school will take part in it.
Could you please give us the permission We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Su Ming
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