北师大版（2019）选择性必修第二册Unit 5 Education Writing Workshop A Picture Description写作课件(共23张PPT)

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A Picture Description
Writing Workshop
Unit 5
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Learning
Objectives
To read for writing
02
To write an essay about a picture
03
To develop a proper attitude to
social media
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Look at picture B and read the essay and then answer the following two questions.
Task 1
1.From the writer’s point of view, what is the man’s personality
2.What lesson is the picture trying to teach
Read for Writing
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Task 1
1.From the writer’s point of view, what is the man’s personality
Read for Writing
From the writer’s point of view, the man obviously loves routines and doing without thinking.
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Read for Writing
2. What lesson is the picture trying to teach
.
It’s important to have routines and timetable , but sometimes routines can control us.
It’s important not to become too preoccupied with routines and schedules. Sometimes we need to be flexible and
adapt to changing circumstances .
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Analysis of the picture / person(s)
Description of the picture
Lessons from the picture
A
B
C
General introduction
D
Focus on Structure
Task 2. Complete the structure of the text by putting the different parts in the correct order
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Underline the linking words and useful sentences in the text.
Focus on Language
Task 3
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1.Linking Words:
2.to describe a picture:
a. In the picture, .... b. The drawing is entitled...
a. The overall message we can take from the picture
is that …
b. It is important to ... , because …
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however , because , for , as , but ,
even though , therefore
3.to analyze a picture:
Task 4 Practice
请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解，以Come Back to Reality为题，用英语写一篇作文。
你的作文应包括以下内容：
1. 简要描述漫画的内容；
2. 概述你对这幅图的理解；
3. 你的观点。
注意：
1. 可参照漫画适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右；
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outline
Para. 3 viewpoint
Para.1 description of the picture
Para.2 understanding of the picture
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Try to describe and analyze the picture with the help of the following five questions.
1. What is the woman busy doing
2. What can you infer from the look of the people
at the door
3. What do you think of the woman’s behavior？
4. What will happen to the woman if she keeps
doing like this
5. To come back to reality, what will you do
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Group Work
Get ready for Writing
1.What is the woman busy doing
She is busy chatting with on-line friends and trying to add
more on-line friends through social media.
2. What can you infer from the look of the people at the door
They are eager to make friends with her.
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3.What do you think of the woman’s behavior？
It is inappropriate because she ignores friends in reality.
4.What will happen to the woman if she keeps doing like this
She will be cut off from reality.
She will feel lonely when she is back to reality.
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5. To come back to reality, what will you do
I will interact more with friends and
try to find more pleasure in real life.
As a student, I will devote my full attention to study.
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Compose Your Writing
请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解，以Come Back to Reality为题，用英语写一篇作文。
你的作文应包括以下内容：
1. 简要描述漫画的内容；
2. 概述你对这幅图的理解；
3. 你的观点。
注意：
1. 可参照漫画适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右；
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PRESENTATION
要求 分值
清楚传达信息 4
语法正确 2
运用恰当连接词、过渡词和过渡句 2
有高级表达 1
拼写正确，书写规范 1
评分标准
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One possible version
As is shown in the picture, a woman is sitting in front of the computer and trying to add more friends to her facebook. Just outside the door, some people are eagerly watching her, hoping to make friends with her.
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One possible version
This picture reminds me of many young people who are computer addicts. They lost themselves in the virtual world and if it continues, they will eventually be cut off from reality. There is no doubt that the virtual world can be exciting, but that’s not the reason for us to go too far. Too much time and energy devoted to the Internet can lead to a disaster, mentally and physically. The real world that we live in is what counts.
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One possible version
As for myself, I’ll devote myself to worthwhile things in real life, from making friends to my studies. If necessary, I will seek information on the Internet, but I won’t be addicted to it. Only in this way can I make my life full and valuable.
Self-evaluation
Your Ability Your Score
1. I have been able to draw an outline for picture description writings
2. I have been able to use some sentence patterns to describe a picture and get some lesson from it .
3. I have been able to use linking words to make my essay coherent.
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Homework
Write an essay about one hundred words
to analyze the picture.
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THANKS FOR YOUR LISTENING
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