(共23张PPT)
考情分析
1
写作指导
2
实战演练
3
考情分析
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·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2019 福建］假定你① 是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件② ，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容③ 给他回复④ 。词数 80 左右。
第一步 细审题 定要点
①审人称：第二人称、第一人称
②审文体：应用文
③审主题：对机器人的看法和机器人的用途
④审时态：一般现在时
To: Lihua 2019@
From: Harry@
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the first place in a robot-making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun.
⑤定要点：对机器人的看法、是否想有一个机器人及原因。
What do you think of robots Do you want to have your own robot Why
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Harry
参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺
注意事项
1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Harry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：祝贺对方（congratulations）。
中间段： 回答对方在邮件中提到的三点。对机器人的看法、是否想有一个机器人和原因(helpful)。
结尾：表达祝愿。希望对方取得更大进步（make progress）。
【易错句】 Congratulation! I am glad share your good news!
【一般句子】 Congratulations! I am glad to share your good news!
【美化句子】 1. _______________________________________
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第三步 扩句子 润加工
首段
Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news!
对机器人的看法
【易错句】 Robot is helpful. They’ll play a important role in our daily life.
【一般句子】 Robots are helpful. They’ll play an important role in our daily life.
【美化句子】 2. ___________________________________
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中间段
I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they'll play more important roles in our daily life.
是否想有一个机器人
【易错句】 I wish have a robot of my own one day.
【一般句子】 I wish to have a robot of my own one day.
【美化句子】 3. ___________________________________
中间段
I'm dying to have a robot of my own.
原因
【易错句】 They can help us do some housework like cook, clean the house and so on.
【一般句子】 They can help us do some housework like cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
【美化句子】 4. ___________________________________
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中间段
Robots can help my grandparents do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
【易错句】 I hope you make many progresses.
【一般句子】 I hope you’ll make great progress.
【美化句子】 5. ___________________________________
结尾
Hoping you'll make greater progress.
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
Dear Harry,
Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news! ①
I think robots are helpful in many ways. And ② in the future they’ll play more important roles in our daily life. What’s more, ② I’m dying to have a robot of my own.
I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
Hoping you’ll make greater progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点点评: ①过渡句，引出下文。②用And 和What’s more 分别引出机器人在人们日常生活中的作用及作者的态度。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
随着智能手机的逐渐普及，人们可以用手机做的事情越来越多。很多人喜欢玩手机，尤其喜欢用免费 Wi-Fi 上网。用手机上网的确能做很多事情，比如聊天、查询信息、购物等。但是手机上网也存在一定的弊端和风险，比如个人信息泄露，遭遇网络攻击或者网络诈骗。请你结合自身经历，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对用免费Wi-Fi 上网的看法。
实战演练
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注意事项
1. 词数80 左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
It’s true that many people like getting online by using free Wi-Fi.
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It's true that many people like getting online by using free Wi Fi. It's very convenient. However, there are many risks of using free Wi Fi.
I used to use free Wi Fi when I was out. But later, many useless messages came to my phone. And one day, I was told that I won a prize that was worth 5, 000 yuan and they needed my bank account.
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Of course I didn't believe it. But it was clear that some of my personal information had been exposed to someone.
So we should learn to keep ourselves safe online. First, we'd better not use free Wi Fi in public places especially in strange places. Second, we shouldn't put too much personal information on the Internet. Finally, we should be careful when we lend our mobile phones to others.(共24张PPT)
人与自我
话题二
兴趣与爱好
话题写作
考情分析
1
写作指导
2
实战演练
3
考情分析
1
·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
英语课上，同学们做了一次关于个人兴趣① 的调查活动。下表是一小组“个人兴趣”调查结果② ，假如你是小组组长③ Li Fang，请根据表格信息用英语写一篇调查报告④ 。词数80 左右。
第一步 细审题 定要点
①审时态：一般现在时
②审主题：Li Fang(I) 做的小组“个人兴趣”调查报告
③审人称：第一、三人称
④审文体：说明文
Name Personal interests Reasons Your opinions on interests
Emma watching movies bring a lot of fun ...
Tony listening to music ...
Bob travelling ...
Li Fang doing sports ...
⑤定要点：Emma、Tony、Bob、Li Fang(I) 的兴趣及其理由；概述对小组“个人兴趣” 的看法
注意事项
1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Recently we did a survey about personal interests in our English class. Here are the results of my group.
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第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：引出主题，英语课上，我们做了一次关于个人兴趣的调查（开头已给出）。
中间段：详细介绍Emma、Tony、Bob 和Li Fang(I) 四个人的兴趣及其理由(favourite, be interested in)。
结尾： 概述健康兴趣的意义(not only...but also)。
【调查一】 Emma 的兴趣及其理由
【易错句】 Emma like watching movies. She thinks it bring her lots of happy.
【一般句子】 Emma likes watching movies. She thinks it brings her lots of fun.
【美化句子】 1. __________________________________
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第三步 扩句子 润加工
中间段
Emma is crazy about watching movies which brings her lots of fun.
【调查二】 Tony 的兴趣及其理由
【易错句】 Tony is interesting in listen to soft music. It make him comfortable.
【一般句子】 Tony is interested in listening to soft music. It makes him feel comfortable.
【美化句子】 2. __________________________________
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中间段
Tony is interested in listening to soft music that sounds comfortable.
【调查三】 Bob 的兴趣及其理由
【易错句】 Bob is fond in travelling because travelling can bring him lots of pleasant.
【一般句子】 Bob is fond of travelling because travelling can bring him lots of pleasure.
【美化句子】3. ___________________________________
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中间段
As for Bob, he is fond of travelling. In his opinion, travelling can open his eyes to the world and bring him lots of pleasure.
【调查四】 Li Fang 的兴趣及其理由
【易错句】 Doing sports are my favourite. Sport make me health and relax.
【一般句子】 Doing sports is my favourite. It makes me healthy and relaxed.
【美化句子】4. ___________________________________
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中间段
Doing sports is my favourite, because it makes me healthy and relaxed.
【概述】 健康兴趣的意义
【易错句】 Having healthy interests make us happy. It also increase our knowledge of the world.
【一般句子】 Having healthy interests can make us happy. It also increases our knowledge of the world.
【美化句子】5. ___________________________________
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结尾
In a word, having healthy interests can not only bring us happiness but also increase our knowledge of the world.
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
Recently we did a survey about personal interests in our English class. Here are the results of my group.
There are four students in my group. ① Emma is crazy about watching movies which brings her lots of fun. And ② Tony is interested in listening to soft music that sounds comfortable. When he is too tired, he listens to it to relax. As for ② Bob, he is fond of travelling. In his opinion, travelling can open his eyes to the world and bring him lots of pleasure. My interest is very different from theirs. Doing sports is my favourite, because ② it makes me healthy and relaxed.
In a word ③ , having healthy interests can not only bring us happiness but also increase our knowledge of the world.
亮点点评 ①本段的总领句，说明这个组有四名学生。②用And, As for, because 串联，具体说明各人不同的兴趣。③ In a word 总结健康的兴趣不仅能给我们带来快乐而且能增进对世界的了解。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
健康的兴趣爱好不仅给我们带来快乐，还能帮助我们增长见识，学习技能，甚至会成为我们未来的工作。某英文杂志想了解这方面的情况。假设你是陈科，做了一个有关兴趣与理想职业的调查。下表是调查所得到的信息。请用英语写一篇调查报告，向杂志投稿。词数：80 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
实战演练
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1. 包含表格内所有信息，可适当拓展，需总结兴趣与理想职业的关系;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
注意事项
A survey about interests and dream jobs
Name Interests Dream jobs Reasons
Zheng Yang Writing Writer Bring her pleasure and success
Xia Tian Travelling Guide Experience life and learn about different cultures
Chen Hui Looking after animals WWF worker Help animals live in peace
I(Chen Ke) ... ... ...
Recently I did a survey about personal interests and dream jobs in our English class. Here are the results.
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Recently I did a survey about personal interests and dream jobs in our English class. Here are the results.
Zheng Yang is interested in writing and she expects to be a writer when she grows up. That's because it can bring her pleasure and success. And Xia Tian is crazy about travelling because he can experience life and learn about different cultures around the world.
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So he dreams of being a guide after he leaves the college. As for Chen Hui, he enjoys looking after animals. He hopes to be one of the WWF workers to help animals live in peace. My hobby is doing sports. It makes me healthy. I hope to be a PE teacher in a middle school in the future.
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It's known to us that having healthy interests can not only bring us happiness but also increase our knowledge of the world. What's more, personal interests will probably influence our dream jobs.(共26张PPT)
人与社会
话题九
文学艺术与体育
话题写作
考情分析
1
写作指导
2
实战演练
3
考情分析
1
·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
福建省第十七届运动会①将在南平举办，现在组委会(organizing committee) 正在招募志愿者，假如你是王晓乐，你②希望成为其中一员，请阅读以下招聘信③ ，并作应聘回复④ 。
第一步 细审题 定要点
①审主题：福建省第十七届运动会招聘信的回复
②审人称：第一人称
④审时态：一般现在时
③审文体：应用文
Dear friends,
The 17th Games of Fujian will be held in Nanping in the year 2022. Lots of guests are coming to Nanping during the big events. Are you willing to be a volunteer Do you know a lot about Nanping Are you good at communicating with others …
Please introduce yourself to us and let us know what you can do. Many thanks!
Organizing Committee of the 17th Games of Fujian
⑤定要点：是否愿意做志愿者；是否很了解南平；是否擅长交流；要补充的内容。
注意事项
1. 词数80 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 回复时可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Wang Xiaole. ________________________
Please consider my request and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Wang Xiaole
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：自我介绍，回复愿意做志愿者。
中间段： 介绍自己适合做志愿者的优点：外向、善于沟通、了解南平、喜爱运动、乐于助人。
结尾：请求考虑并期望答复（已给出）。
【易错句】 I’m junior high school student. I would like be a volunteer at the 17th Games of Fujian.
【一般句子】 I’m a junior high school student. I would like to be a volunteer at the 17th Games of Fujian.
第三步 扩句子 润加工
首段
【美化句子】 1. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
I would like to work as a volunteer for the 17th Games of Fujian. I'm studying at a junior high school now.
个人优点1
【易错句】 I am outgoing but I can communicate with other.
【一般句子】 I am outgoing and I can communicate with others.
【美化句子】 2. __________________________________
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中间段
I am outgoing and I am good at communicating with others.
个人优点2
【易错句】 I know many about Nanping, and I can introduce the city for the guests.
【一般句子】 I know a lot about Nanping, and I can introduce the city to the guests.
中间段
【美化句子】 3. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
I know a lot about Nanping. And I can introduce the city to the guests and show them around.
个人优点3
【易错句】 I like sport. I’m glad to help other people in need.
【一般句子】 I like sports. I’m glad to help other people in need.
【美化句子】 4. ______________________________________
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中间段
I like sports. I'm ready to give help whenever it is needed.
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Wang Xiaole. I would like to work as a volunteer for the 17th Games of Fujian. I am a boy of 15 and I’m studying at a junior high school now.
I believe I can do a good job for the games. First, I am outgoing and I am good at communicating with others. Second, I know a lot about Nanping.
And I can introduce the city to the guests and show them around. Third, I like sports. I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed.
Please consider my request and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Wang Xiaole
亮点点评： 正文的主体部分用First, Second 和Third 分别介绍三个优点，使文章具有层次感，条理清晰。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 泉州质检］假如你是李华，你即将在学校英语角活动中分享一则童话故事（fairy tale）。请你根据提示，用英语简要介绍故事内容，并谈谈自己的感想。词数：80 左右。
实战演练
3
Title The Ugly Duckling
Writer Andersen
Introduction look different, dislike, play with, …
Hello, everyone! I’m so glad to share my favorite fairy tale with you all.
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I hope all of you can enjoy it. Thanks for listening.
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Hello, everyone! I'm so glad to share my favorite fairy tale with you all. The fairy tale, The Ugly Duckling, written by Andersen is very popular with young children.
As we know, the ugly duckling looks so different that his brothers and sisters dislike him. Nobody nearby likes to play with him. The poor duckling feels sad. Even after he leaves home, he is still lonely and helpless.
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But one day, he grows up and becomes a beautiful big swan.
Thanks to the tale, I become more confident and stick to my dream. Whatever difficulties we may face in our life, just keep going on!
I hope all of you can enjoy it. Thanks for listening.(共24张PPT)
人与社会
话题六
语言学习
话题写作
考情分析
1
写作指导
2
实战演练
3
考情分析
1
·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 南充改编］假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy 的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她①正在考虑是否选修汉语②，来信询问你①的建议。请你根据以下导图的提示，给她写封关于选修汉语的理由，以及其学习方法④的回信③ 。
第一步 细审题 定要点
①审人称：第一人称、第二人称
②审时态：一般现在时
③审文体：应用文
④审主题：提出建议
⑤ 定要点：建议Tracy 选修汉语；选修汉语的理由；学汉语的方法
Your advice:→ choose, course, ...
The importance of learning Chinese:→ popular, ...
Methods of learning Chinese: → read Chinese books, join a Chinese club, ...
注意事项
1. 必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80 左右( 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. ___________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：给出建议，是否应该选修汉语以及学习汉语的重要性(choose, course)。
中间段：结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法(useful, practice)。
结尾：呼应首段，提出希望：自己的建议能有所帮助（已给出）。
建议Tracy 选修汉语
【易错句】 You had better to choose the Chinese course.
【一般句子】 You had better choose the Chinese course.
【美化句子】 1. ___________________________________
第三步 扩句子 润加工
首段
I suggest you choose the Chinese course.
原因 学习汉语的重要性
【易错句】Chinese is becoming popularer. Learning Chinese help learn about Chinese culture.
【一般句子】Chinese is becoming more popular. Learning Chinese helps learn about Chinese culture.
首段
【美化句子】 2. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________
With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.
建议 结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法
【易错句】 You should read Chinese books and listen Chinese songs. You must join in a Chinese club and keep practice every day.
【一般句子】 You should read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. You must join a Chinese club and keep practicing every day.
中间段
【美化句子】 3.
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It's useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What's more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Keep practicing every day, and then it will bring something new.
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.
As a Chinese, I have been learning Chinese for many years. I have much experience to share with you. ① In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, ② you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Keep practicing every day, and then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点点评 ①过渡句：先从自身学习汉语的经历说起，然后引出下文对汉语学习方法的介绍。② What’s more 与上句巧妙衔接，语言流畅，思路清晰。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 河南］阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请你结合下面图示信息，以“How reading improves my English” 为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
实战演练
3
Reading improve my spoken English
make my writing easier
develop my thinking ability
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注意事项
1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How reading improves my English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.
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How reading improves my English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.
Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. It gives me confidence when I talk with others in English. Secondly, reading helps make writing easier for me. When I do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelt correctly.
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So I make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develops my thinking ability. What I've read enables me to think more. What's more, reading helps me develop a good habit of learning English.
In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also a great interest in English learning.(共26张PPT)
人与社会
话题七
传统文化与节日
话题写作
考情分析
1
写作指导
2
实战演练
3
考情分析
1
·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2020 福建］假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友David 对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示，用英语写一封电子邮件① ，向他②推荐即将③ 在你校举办的“传统中医进校园” ④的宣传日活动，说明推荐理由，并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80 左右。
第一步 细审题 定要点
①审文体：应用文
④审主题：推荐即将举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动。
②审人称：第一人称、第二人称
③审时态：一般将来时
⑤ 定要点：时间、活动、联系方式、原因
注意事项
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear David,
I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese medicine. ___________________________
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段： 引出主题，即“传统中医进校园”。确定“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动的时间和地点。
中间段： 介绍宣传日活动内容。介绍“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动内容：听报告、看展览和看一部《李时珍》的电影。
结尾段：活动的意义和联系方式。指出本次活动的意义，提供学校网址给David。
活动时间和地点
【易错句】 It is going to take place in July 31, 2020.
【一般句子】 It is going to take place on July 31, 2020.
【美化句子】 1. ___________________________________
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第三步 扩句子 润加工
首段
I'd like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, which is going to take place on July 31, 2020.
活动一
【易错句】 On that day, a doctor gives us a talk on Chinese medicine.
【一般句子】 On that day, a doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine.
【美化句子】 2. ___________________________________
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中间段
On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine.
活动二
【易错句】 There is going to have a show about its development.
【一般句子】 There is going to be a show about its development.
【美化句子】 3. ______________________________________
中间段
There will be a show about its development.
活动三
【易错句】 We will can watch the film call Li Shizhen.
【一般句子】 We will be able to watch the film called Li Shizhen.
【美化句子】 4. _______________________________________
中间段
The film Li Shizhen will be on.
活动意义和联系方式
【易错句】 The activities are very interesting. This is our school address www. .
【一般句子】 The activities will be very interesting. This is our school website www. .
结尾
【美化句子 】 5.
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I'm sure the activities will be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www. .
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
Dear David,
I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese medicine. Now, I’d like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, ① which is going to take place on July 31, 2020.
On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. And ② there will be a show about its development. Also, ③ the film Li Shizhen will be on.
I’m sure the activities will be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www. and ④ have a better understanding of traditional Chinese medicine.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点点评： ①过渡句，引出本文的主题。②③用And 和Also 分别引出这次活动的具体内容，使文章条理清楚，逻辑性强。④用衔接词and 来升华文章的主题，与首句相呼应。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 三明质检］“中国红”在本次冬奥会中频频出现，让世界再一次感受到了中华文化的魅力。假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 对“中国红”很感兴趣，请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ 中给他留言，介绍“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，词数80 左右。
实战演练
3
注意事项
必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, Peter! I’m glad that you’re interested in Chinese red. I would like to tell you something about Chinese red.
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Hi, Peter! I'm glad that you're interested in Chinese red. I would like to tell you something about Chinese red.
Red is the favorite color of Chinese people. It stands for happiness, warmth, and we believe that it can bring us good luck. Chinese red is popular with us. We use many red objects in the important events or on special occasions.
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For instance, at a wedding, you can see the red wedding dresses. The wedding room is also decorated with red paper cuttings. During the Spring Festival, you can see Chinese red around you. The houses are filled with red lanterns and Chinese knots. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays an important role in China.
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I truly hope I can help you understand better about Chinese red. And I hope you can come to China for a visit one day!(共26张PPT)
人与自我
话题三
计划与愿望
话题写作
考情分析
1
写作指导
2
实战演练
3
考情分析
1
·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 丽水改编］假如你是李明，你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假①社会实践活动的计划② ，请结合下表内容写一封信③向他介绍你④的计划。词数：80 左右。
第一步 细审题 定要点
④审人称：第一人称
③审文体：应用文
②审主题：介绍暑假社会实践活动的计划
①审时态：一般将来时
Social Practice Plan
What to do Why to do so
have a graduation trip to...
make a survey about...
volunteer to do...
... open one’s eyes...
learn more about...
be helpful...
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⑤定要点：时间、地点（自拟）、活动、活动理由
注意事项
1. 文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：开门见山，提出分享这次暑假社会实践活动计划（开头已给出）。
中间段： 详细介绍这次社会实践活动的时间、地点、活动内容及其理由(have a trip, volunteer)。
结尾：概述这次暑假社会实践活动的意义(not only...but also)。
【活动一】have a graduation trip to...
【易错句】1. I and my classmates plan travel to Hangzhou this summer.
【一般句子】1. My classmates and I plan to travel to Hangzhou this summer.
第三步 扩句子 润加工
中间段
【美化句子】 1.
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Some classmates and I plan to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang.
【易错句】2. We will visit place of interests and enjoy colorful cultures there so that we could open our eyes.
【一般句子】2. We will visit places of interest and enjoy colorful cultures there so that we can open our eyes.
【美化句子】 2.
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By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there, we can open our eyes and bring home unforgettable memories.
【活动二】volunteer to do...
【易错句】In a city library, I will help sort out book and guide readers to the right bookshelves and talk with different peoples.
【一般句子】In a city library, I will help to sort out books and guide readers to the right bookshelves and talk with different people.
中间段
【美化句子】 3.
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After the trip, I will volunteer to help in our city library, sorting out books, guiding readers to the right bookshelves, and of course, communicating with different people.
【概述】实践活动的意义
【易错句】 This experience can my life rich and colorful. It also helps me understand the true meaning of learning.
【一般句子】This experience can make my life rich and colorful. It’ll also help me understand the true meaning of learning.
结尾
【美化句子】 4.
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I'm sure this experience can not only enrich my life but also help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing.
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
Dear David,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you.
As ① it will be the last summer holiday in our junior high school, some classmates and I plan to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang. By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there, we can open our eyes and bring home unforgettable memories. After the trip ②, I will volunteer to help in our city library, sorting out books, guiding readers to the right bookshelves, and of course③, communicating with different people.
I’m sure this experience can not only ④ enrich my life but also ④ help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
亮点点评： ① As 表示原因，即毕业之旅的理由。② After the trip 表示活动的时间先后。③ and of course 表示后面的动作与前面两个动作的顺接。④ not only...but also 表示递进关系，强调这次活动的意义不止一个。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 广元改编］近来，某英文报刊将举行以“如何做一名有理想的时代新人” 为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下表格的提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。词数：80 左右。
实战演练
3
My ideal
What is your ideal （选一个） A doctor A teacher An engineer ...
Why do you have the ideal （至少两点理由） patient, helpful , ...
How do your realize your ideal （至少两点做法） study hard, be confident, ...
注意事项
1. 文中须包含以上要点；
2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名；
3. 标题和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
My Ideal
It’s very important for us middle school students to have an ideal.
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My Ideal
It's very important for us middle school students to have an ideal. My ideal is to become an excellent doctor. I am patient and I would like to try my best to help the patients. To realize my ideal is not easy, so I must study hard all the time and never give up. I may meet difficulties, but I won't be afraid of them.
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Success belongs to the person who has courage to overcome the difficulty. As the saying goes, “Being confident is half of success. ”I will learn more medical knowledge. I must be a good doctor. I hope my ideal can come true.(共26张PPT)
人与自然
话题十二
环境保护
话题写作
考情分析
1
写作指导
2
实战演练
3
考情分析
1
·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 厦门质检］近年来，我国全面展开蓝天、碧水、净土保卫战。为了号召同学们参与环保行动，学校将组织一次主题为“Let’s Go Green”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇 80 词以上的演讲稿① 。内容要点：
1. 谈谈你②为环保做过什么③及感受；
2. 制订你的环保计划④ 。
第一步 细审题 定要点
①审文体：应用文
③审时态：
一般过去时；
审主题：
环保经历
④审时态：一般将来时；审主题：未来的计划
②审人称：第一人称
⑤定要点：环保的经历和感受、环保的未来计划
注意事项
1. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。
As we all know, China is making every effort to protect the environment. __________________________________
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：提出环保的倡议：我们应该负起责任，我们可以重新使用、减少和回收利用。
中间段： 环保的经历及其未来计划：先介绍自己的环保经历，然后规划自己环保的未来计划。
结尾：表达希望和呼吁：希望有一个更加美好的地球。
提出环保的倡议
【易错句】 As middle school student, we can reuse, reduce and recycle.
【一般句子】 As middle school students, we can reuse, reduce and recycle.
第三步 扩句子 润加工
首段
【美化句子】 1. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
As middle school students we should take the responsibility. We can reuse, reduce and recycle.
环保经历和感受
【易错句】 Last winter, I collect used paper and bottles. I turn them into a rocket. I give it to my brother. He feel amazing at my work.
【一般句子】 Last winter, I collected used paper and bottles. I turned them into a rocket. I gave it to my brother. He felt amazed at my work.
中间段
【美化句子】 2. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
During the winter vacation I collected used things like paper and bottles. I turned them into a handmade rocket. I gave it to my brother as a gift. He felt amazed at my work.
环保的三点计划
【易错句】 I reused things instead of throwing them away. I reduced the use of energy. I sort the rubbish to recycle it.
【一般句子】 I’ll reuse things instead of throwing them away. I will reduce the use of energy. I’ll sort the rubbish to recycle it.
中间段
【美化句子】 3. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
First of all, I'll continue to reuse things instead of throwing them away. Secondly, I can ride a bike to school instead of taking a bus and turn off the light when not using it. Lastly, I'll sort the rubbish and send the recyclable materials to the recycling center.
表达希望和呼吁
【易错句】 If everyone take part in protect the environment, the earth will become more and more good.
【一般句子】If everyone takes part in protecting the environment, the earth will become better and better.
中间段
【美化句子】 4.
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If everyone takes part in protecting the environment, the earth will be a better place for all of us to live on. Take action now!
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
As we all know, China is making every effort to protect the environment. As middle school students, we should take the responsibility. We can reuse, reduce and recycle.
During the winter vacation I collected used things like paper and bottles. I turned them into a handmade rocket. I gave it to my brother as a gift. He felt amazed at my work. I was proud, too. The waste was brought back to life with just a little creativity. Inspired by this experience, I plan to do more in the future.
First of all, I’ll continue to reuse things instead of throwing them away. Secondly, I can ride a bike to school instead of taking a bus and turn off the light when not using it. Lastly, I’ll sort the rubbish and send the recyclable materials to the recycling center.
If everyone takes part in protecting the environment, the earth will be a better place for all of us to live on. Take action now!
亮点点评：开篇点题，作为中学生，保护环境我们有着不可推卸的责任。衔接词和短语first of all, secondly 和lastly，给出环境保护的三点计划，使文章的层次感明晰。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 福州一检］假如你是康康，你的学校正在开展“节约用水”活动。经过调查，你了解了四个家庭的节水措施。请根据下表在英语课上做个汇报，并谈谈你对此活动的感想。词数80 左右。
实战演练
3
Students Ways to save water
Zhang Jie Turn off the water when brushing teeth
Li Jun Wash small clothes by hand
Wang Yue Reuse water…
Kangkang ....
注意事项
1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚，表达通畅，行文连贯，书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
It’s an honor to share the result of my survey with you. _________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
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It's an honor to share the result of my survey with you. We all take an active part in this activity. Zhang Jie and his family usually turn off the water when brushing teeth. In order to save water, Li Jun and his family always wash small clothes by hand. Wang Yue thinks reusing water works well. After washing vegetables she and her family use the water to clean the floor.
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In my family, we take a shower instead of a bath.
In my opinion, it's meaningful to have such an activity. It helps us learn more water -saving methods and take action to do our part for the environment.
That's all. Thanks for listening.(共24张PPT)
人与社会
话题十
社会热点与劳动实践
话题写作
考情分析
1
写作指导
2
实战演练
3
考情分析
1
·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 福建］假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食①” 为主题的实践活动。请你②结合以下图示，用英语给笔友John 写一封信③，分享活动过程④ 和感受。词数80 左右。
第一步 细审题 定要点
①审主题：热爱劳动，珍爱粮食
④审时态：一般现在时
③审文体：应用文
②审人称：第一人称
⑤定要点：活动的时间、地点、内容、感受。
One-Day Experience
in Rice Fields Date: June 18
Place: the community farm
Activities:
Feeling(s): ... learn to harvest
（收割）rice
help to carry rice
pick ears of rice
（稻穗）
注意事项
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear John,
How is everything going ________________________
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Have you had any experience of this kind
Yours,
Li Hua
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：开门见山，引出话题：用一句话说出自己在田间劳动的一日经历。
中间段：详细介绍活动的时间、地点、活动内容和感受。
结尾：用Have you had any experience of this kind 这句话来呼应首段（已给出）。
【易错句】 I’m glad tell you me experience in rice fields.
【一般句子】 I’m glad to tell you my experience in rice fields.
【美化句子】 1. ___________________________________
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第三步 扩句子 润加工
首段
I'm glad to tell you my one- day experience in rice fields.
活动时间和地点
【易错句】 In June 18, I and my classmates go to the farm.
【一般句子】 On June 18, my classmates and I went to the farm.
【美化句子】 2. ______________________________________
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中间段
On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm.
活动内容
【易错句】 Some learn to harvest rice. Some help to carry rice, others pick ears of rice.
【一般句子】 Some learned to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice, and others picked ears of rice.
中间段
【美化句子】 3. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
Some learned to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields.
活动感受
【易错句】 After one-day work, we were tired, and we felt happy. And I came to realize that we should save food from now on.
【一般句子】 After one-day work, we were tired, but we felt happy. And I have come to realize that we should save food from now on.
中间段
【美化句子】 4.
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Through the activity, I've got the pleasure of hard work and learned to value each grain.
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
Dear John,
How is everything going I’m glad to tell you my one-day experience in rice fields.
On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm. When we arrived, we visited the farm and watched videos on farming. Then we worked together with farmers. Some learned to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields. Through the activity, I’ve got the pleasure of hard work and learned to value each grain.
Have you had any experience of this kind
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点点评 when 和then 表示时间上的衔接，使文章更加紧凑。“Some...Some...others...” 展现不同的人开展不同的活动。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022怀化］国家提出将 “劳动教育（labor education）”纳入中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括：
实战演练
3
1. 你对劳动教育的看法 be good for health;
relax from the hard study ...
2. 你自身的劳动经历及感受 at home: do the dishes; sweep the floor ...
at school: clean the classroom; water flowers ...
3. 你对劳动教育课程的建议 offer different kinds of labor classes; hold competitions about labor skills ...
注意事项
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名；
2. 包含以上表格内所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 词数：80 左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think _____________________________________________
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It's reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it's necessary, because it is good for our health and we can relax from the hard study.
I usually do labor at home such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. At school I often clean the classroom and water flowers. I can not only keep healthy, but also develop good habits from it.
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As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer different kinds of labor classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What's more, the school can also hold competitions about the labor skills to see who is the best. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.(共25张PPT)
人与自然
话题十一
自然生态
话题写作
考情分析
1
写作指导
2
实战演练
3
考情分析
1
·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2017 福建］你的美国朋友John 计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ ① 中给他留言，介绍② 并推荐你的家乡福建③ ，词数80 左右。
第一步 细审题 定要点
①审文体：应用文
③审人称：第三人称；审主题：介绍家乡福建
②审时态：一般现在时
④定要点：位置、省会、人口、环境、名胜、其他。
注意事项
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Hi, John. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.
Fujian lies ____________________________________
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I’m looking forward to meeting you!
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：发出邀请: 我想邀请你来我的家乡福建游玩（已给出）。
中间段：全方位介绍福建：地理位置、省会城市、人口、环境、名胜和美食等。
结尾：表达期望（已给出）。
介绍地理位置、省会城市
【易错句】 Fujian lies to the southeast of China. Fuzhou is capital city.
【一般句子】 Fujian lies in the southeast of China. Fuzhou is its capital city.
第三步 扩句子 润加工
中间段
【美化句子】 1. ________________________________________________________________________________________
Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city.
介绍人口、环境
【易错句】 It has over 38 million population. It has also fresh air and beautiful mountain.
【一般句子】 It has a population of over 38 million. It also has fresh air and beautiful mountains.
中间段
【美化句子】2. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it's known as Refreshing Fujian.
介绍名胜和美食
【易错句】 You can visit many place of interests like Mount Wuyi. You can taste many delicious food.
【一般句子】 You can visit many places of interest like Mount Wuyi. You can taste many kinds of delicious food.
中间段
【美化句子】 3.
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Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides, you can taste various kinds of delicious food.
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
Hi, John. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.
Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it’s known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, the blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides, you can taste various kinds of delicious food.
I’m looking forward to meeting you!
亮点点评：通过which 引导的定语从句和if 引导的条件状语从句，展示了福建优美的环境，吸引了游客。同时从句的使用，使句式丰富多样。衔接词besides 承上启下，表示除了上文提到的相关介绍之外还有其他的介绍，使文章语义紧凑，层次分明。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
改革开放以来，中国发生了翻天覆地的变化。某英文网站正在开展以“家乡的巨变”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李洪，请你根据以下表格提示用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你家乡的变化，至少要有一条自己的观点。
实战演练
3
Great Changes in My Hometown
In the past Nowadays
Houses old, small tall
Means of transportation bikes trains, planes...
Classrooms old, dark bright, wide
…
注意事项
1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：80 左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
Great Changes in My Hometown
Since the reform and opening-up policy was carried out, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
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Great Changes in My Hometown
Since the reform and opening- up policy was carried out, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the old days, people used to live in small and old houses. But now most people live in apartments in tall buildings. People went to work or school on foot or by bike in the past, but now subways, high -speed trains and planes are very convenient to take you anywhere.
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In the past, students took desks and chairs from their homes to the school and the windows of the classrooms were broken, so the classrooms were old and dark. But now the classrooms are wide and bright. There didn't use to be any hospitals in the countryside, and people had to go a long way to see a doctor.
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Now doctors can come to every family to give physical examinations.
There is no doubt that my hometown will become more and more beautiful.(共23张PPT)
人与自我
话题四
饮食与健康
话题写作
考情分析
1
写作指导
2
实战演练
3
考情分析
1
·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 郴州改编］近段时间，某中学不少学生① 因感冒不能正常上课，影响了学习。为此，学生会主席李华准备利用“English Broadcast”时间建议② 学生养成良好的生活习惯和加强体育锻炼④ ，以提高身体素质。请你根据下面表格提示，为他准备一份英语发言稿③ 。词数:80 左右。
第一步 细审题 定要点
①审人称：
第二人称
②审时态：情态动词should/can
④审主题：一篇有关健康的发言稿
③审文体：应用文
⑤定要点：学生因感冒出现缺课的现象；李华的建议；李华的期望。
Situation（现象） Suggestions Expectation（期望）
absent, affect
living habits: eating, sleep, ... happier, healthier,...
exercise: run, ...
...
注意事项
1. 文中须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2. 文中开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Boys and girls,
Welcome to our “English Broadcast”! I’m Li Hua, the chairman of the Students’ Union. ______________________
That’s all! Thanks for your listening!
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：提出问题，不少学生因感冒不能上学，影响学习(affect)。
中间段：提出要有好的生活习惯和加强锻炼等建议(habit, exercise)。
结尾：期望同学们心情愉快和身体安康(happy, healthy)
学生因感冒出现缺课的现象。
【易错句】 Many students cannot come to school because they have cold.
【一般句子】Many students couldn’t come to school because they had a cold.
第三步 扩句子 润加工
首段
【美化句子 】 1. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
Quite a few students in our school couldn't have lessons as usual because they had a cold.
【建议一】Li Hua 的建议：早睡早起
【易错句】 Go to bed early is good for our health, so don’t stay up late.
【一般句子】 Going to bed early is good for our health, so don’t stay up late.
【美化句子】 2. ____________________________________
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中间段
You'd better go to bed early and not stay up late.
【建议二】Li Hua 的建议：锻炼健身
【易错句】 You should do more exercises, for example, run or walk.
【一般句子】 You should do more exercise, such as running or walking.
【美化句子】3. ____________________________________
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中间段
Do sports, such as running or walking, for half an hour every day so that you can keep fit.
【建议三】Li Hua 的建议：保持一个好心情
【易错句】 You should stay a good mood. It’s good for your healthy.
【一般句子】 You should stay in a good mood. It’s good for your health.
【美化句子】4. ___________________________________ ____________________________________
中间段
Staying in a good mood is also good for your health.
李华的期望
【易错句】I hope you to be happier and healthier from now on.
【一般句子】I wish you to be happier and healthier from now on.
【美化句子】5. _______________________________________ _______________________________________
结尾
I'm looking forward to seeing you be happier and healthier!
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
Boys and girls,
Welcome to our “English Broadcast”! I’m Li Hua, the chairman of the Students’ Union.
Recently quite a few students in our school couldn’t have lessons as usual because they had a cold. In order to make you stronger, I’ll give you some useful advice. ①
Firstly ② , it’s important to have a healthy eating habit. You should eat more vegetables and fruit but less junk food. Secondly ③ , you’d better go to bed early and not stay up late.
Besides ④ , do sports, such as running or walking, for half an hour every day so that you can keep fit. Lastly ⑤ , staying in a good mood is also good for your health.
I’m looking forward to seeing you be happier and healthier!
That’s all! Thanks for your listening!
亮点点评 ①过渡句，为前后文内容的连接，起到承上启下的作用。②③④⑤正文的主体部分，用Firstly, Secondly, Besides 和Lastly 给出四条建议，使文章条理清晰。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2021 宁德质检］你校英语俱乐部拟举办以“How to Be a Healthy Student” 为题的演讲活动。假如你是李华，请你从身体健康、心理健康两方面写一篇英语演讲稿。词数80 左右。
实战演练
3
注意事项
1. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名。
How to Be a Healthy Student
Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to give a speech here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student.
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How to Be a Healthy Student
Hello，everyone！It's a great honor to give a speech here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student.
We need to have healthy eating habits. Fruit and vegetables are good for our health. So eat the right food to keep ourselves healthy. Having a good sleep also makes us active. Do sports for an hour every day so that we can keep fit.
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We should not only care about our physical health but also our mental health. Try to be happy. If we are not happy, we can talk with our friends and teachers about our worries or sadness. Do something relaxing to stay in a good mood. If we can follow the advice, we can keep healthy and live a better life.
Thanks for listening.(共23张PPT)
人与社会
话题五
家人与亲友
话题写作
考情分析
1
写作指导
2
实战演练
3
考情分析
1
·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 黄冈改编］在你的成长历程①中，有许多值得感恩的人②，如父母、老师、同学……他们或帮助过你③，或影响到你③，你最想感恩谁④ 请根据以下导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文。
第一步 细审题 定要点
④审主题：描述你最想感恩的人
③审文体：记叙文
②审人称：第一、三人称
①审时态：一般过去时、一般现在时
⑤ 定要点：介绍想感恩的人；描述影响你的具体事例；表达你的感激之情以及如何报答
The Person I Want to Express My
Thanks to appearance（外貌）: tall, short, ...
character（性格）: friendly, patient, ...
an unforgettable thing: cared about（关心）, encouraged, ...
the feeling and wish: be grateful（感激的）, work hard, ...
注意事项
1. 词数80 左右( 开头已经给出，不计入总词数);
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
The Person I Want to Express My Thanks to
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to express my thanks to most is
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第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：开门见山，指出要感谢的人是谁，并描述其外貌和性格（用一般现在时）。
中间段：描述影响你的具体事例（用一般过去时）。
结尾：表达你的感激之情(be grateful)，以及如何报答(work hard)。
【要点一】 描述他( 她) 的外貌
【易错句】 He was tall and thin. He have black short hair.
【一般句子】 He is tall and thin. He has short black hair.
【美化句子】 1. ___________________________________
第三步 扩句子 润加工
首段
He is tall and thin with short black hair.
【要点二】 描述他( 她) 的性格
【易错句】 He is very friendly with us. He is also patient to us.
【一般句子】 He is very friendly to us. He is also patient with us.
【美化句子】 2. ______________________________________
中间段
He is always friendly and patient with us.
【要点三】 影响你的具体事例
【易错句】 Because Mr. Lee’s help, I get the first prize. My English improves a lot.
【一般句子】 Because of Mr. Lee’s help, I got the first prize. My English improved a lot.
【美化句子】 3. ___________________________________
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中间段
With the help of Mr. Lee, I got the first prize. My English improved a lot.
表达感激之情和愿望
【易错句】 I am grateful to he. I will work hard become better.
【一般句子】 I am grateful to him. I will work hard to become better. That will be the best gift.
【美化句子】 4. ____________________________________
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结尾
I am grateful to him. I will work hard to become better. I think that will be the best gift for my dear teacher.
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
The Person I Want to Express My Thanks to
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to express my thanks to most is my English teacher Mr. Lee. He is tall and thin with short black hair. He is always friendly and patient with us.
When ① I was in Grade 8, my English was very poor. One day, he asked me to take part in an English speech contest.
He said, “Your pronunciation is really good. Try your best. I believe in you.” With the help of Mr. Lee ②, I got the first prize. My English improved a lot.
Mr. Lee has a great influence on me. ③ I am grateful to him. I will work hard to become better. I think that will be the best gift for my dear teacher.
亮点点评 ① When 表示当时“我”英语不好的状态。②介词短语With the help of... 表示“我”英语成绩的提高得益于老师的帮助。③过渡句。它是对上文的总结，又是本段“我”很感激的原因。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 宁德质检］近年来，我们的生活里涌现出了许多可歌可泣的英雄，你心中的英雄是谁呢 是耀眼的明星，是见义勇为的市民，是恪守职责的公民，还是身边默默无闻的普通人 假如你是李华，你校将开展以“The Hero in My Heart” 为主题的征文活动。请你结合下面的思维导图写一篇征文投稿，词数80 左右。
实战演练
3
The Hero in My Heart his/her name and job
his/her appearance
reasons for being your hero
spirits for you to learn
注意事项
★开头已给出，不计入总词数;
★短文必须包括上述要点，可适当发挥; 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范;
★请勿在文中使用真实的姓名（除名人外）、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
The Hero in My Heart
Recently, many heroes like Zhong Nanshan and Zhang Guimei have appeared around us. Who is the hero in my heart
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The Hero in My Heart
Recently, many heroes like Zhong Nanshan and Zhang Guimei have appeared around us. Who is the hero in my heart She is my mother whose name is Zhang Li. She is a nice doctor with long hair, a pretty face and a slim body. Now she has become my hero because she helps me a lot and sets an example to me.
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As my mother, she always listens to me patiently, encourages me and gives me helpful suggestions when I am in trouble. With the help of her, I always succeed in solving problems. As a doctor, she works hard and tries her best to help the patients. In a word, she is successful both at work and in the family.
I hope I will be a person like her. I also hope she will care about her own health.(共22张PPT)
人与自我
话题一
学校生活
话题写作
考情分析
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写作指导
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实战演练
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考情分析
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·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
写作指导
2
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
[2021 福建] 假定你是学校英语报小记者李华，上周①学校开展了“English Day”活动② ，请你④ 根据下面的海报和学生参加活动的数据写一篇报道③ ，介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受② 。词数80 左右。
第一步 细审题 定要点
②审主题：介绍“English Day”活动的情况及同学们的感受
③审文体：说明文
④审人称：第一人称
①审时态：一般过去时
English Day
Time: 2:00 p. m.—4:30 p. m.
June 18th
Place: In the school hall
Learning by:
Singing Competition
Cooking Show
Storytelling
Join us!
⑤定要点：时间、地点、活动内容、参加人数比、同学们的感受
注意事项
1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Our School English Day
Our school English Day was a great success. _______
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第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：引出活动的主题 英语节的时间、地点(take place, from...to...)。
中间段： 介绍活动的内容及参加人数比 1. 活动内容：唱歌比赛(singing competition)、烹饪表演(cooking show) 和讲故事(storytelling)；
2. 参加人数比(...percent of )。
结尾：呼应首句 对活动的感受和期待(learn, hope)。
【易错句】 It
held in the school hall 2:00 p.m.—4:30 p.m. on June 18th.
【一般句子】 It was held in the school hall on June 18th. It lasted from 2:00 p.m. to 4:30 p.m.
【美化句子】 1. ___________________________________
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第三步 扩句子 润加工
首段
It took place in the school hall from 2：00 p．m. to 4：30 p．m. on June 18th.
活动一Singing Competition 50%
【易错句】50% students take part in the singing competition.
【一般句子】50% of the students took part in the singing competition.
【美化句子】 2. ___________________________________
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中间段
Half of us students took part in the singing competition to show ourselves.
活动二Cooking Show 30%
【易错句】30% students went the cooking show.
【一般句子】30% of us went to the cooking show and tasted dishes.
【美化句子】 3. ___________________________________
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中间段
30% of us went to the cooking show where we tasted many delicious dishes.
活动三Storytelling 20%
【易错句】There are 20% students like the storytelling part.
【一般句子】20% of the students had a good time in the storytelling part.
【美化句子】 4. ___________________________________
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中间段
20% of the students enjoyed themselves in the storytelling part because there were so many great stories.
【易错句】They learned a lot and thought learn English well is very important.
【一般句子】We learned a lot on the school English Day. We realized the importance of learning English.
【美化句子 】 5. ____________________________________
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结尾
We not only learned a lot, but also came to realize the importance of teamwork through practice. We hope there will be more colorful activities in our school.
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
优秀范文
Our School English Day
Our school English Day was a great success. It took place in the school hall from 2:00 p.m. to 4:30 p.m. on June 18th.
There were three activities on the day. ① Half of us students took part in the singing competition to show ourselves. 30% of us went to the cooking show where we tasted many delicious dishes. And ② the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in the storytelling part because there were so many great stories.
We spoke highly of the English Day. ③ We not only ② learned a lot, but also ② came to realize the importance of teamwork through practice. We hope there will be more colorful activities in our school.
亮点点评 ①概括句，起到承上启下的作用。② And 表示前后活动的顺接；not only...but also 表示两个感受的递进关系。③总结句，对上一段三项活动总的评价。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 陕西A 卷改编］ 学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以“School Is a Big Family” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求，从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。词数：80 左右。
实战演练
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School Is a
Big Family teacher(s) to me
（老师（们）对我）: be patient, encourage, ...
classmate(s) to me
（同学（们）对我）: be kind, help, ...
me to others
（我对他人）: care about, understand, ...
注意事项
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Good afternoon, everyone!
I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”.
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Thank you for your time!
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Good afternoon, everyone!
I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”．
First, my math teacher is patient with me. She always encourages me to study harder. Second, my classmates are kind to me. I'm not good at sports. My friend Li Yun helps me with running and I run faster.
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Also, I care about my teachers and classmates. One day my English teacher had a cold and I told her to drink more hot water. She felt warm and thanked me.
I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place.
Thank you for your time!
