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Unit 11
Sad movies make me cry.
人教新目标版 九年级上
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1. To read the story and understand Peter’s experience after he lost a game
2. To learn some new words and phrases
3. To have an optimistic attitude towards failure or disappointment
4.To write a story similar to the one in 2b.
Warming-up
Let’s read and find what information you can get from it
Revision
Fill in the blanks.
The Winning Team
Fact: Peter’s team lost the game.
Feelings:
★ He felt a heavy weight on his shoulders.
★ He felt angry because of his 1)______________.
★ He was really worried that he might be 2)______________.
stupid mistake
kicked off
Revision
Fact: Peter’s father had a talk with him and gave him some advice.
Reaction (反应): He said nothing, but 3)________________.
Fact: Peter said sorry to his teammates and communicated with them.
Feelings: He felt 4)_______ to be on a winning team.
thought carefully
lucky
When did it happen
1
Where did it happen
2
How did it make him feel
3
Why did it make him feel so
4
What happened
5
What did he learn from the experience
6
______________________
Who
______________________
Where
______________________
When
______________________
What
______________________
Why
______________________
How
The Winning Team
On the school soccer field
Peter
Soccer match day
Lost the game
Missed scoring that goal
Angry and worried
本单元的话题是“Emotions and feelings(情感与情绪)”，要求能根据文字提示或实际情况，简单描述某事物对人们的生活及情感所产生的影响。写作首先要把此事物介绍清楚，然后描述这件事对你情感或情绪的影响；最后也可得出结论，总结经验或表达自己的观点。
单元写作话题
Think of some experiences that made you feel very happy or sad. Tell your partner about them. Use the following ideas to help you.
3a
● winning/losing a competition
● getting good/bad grades on an exam
● performing something well/badly in front of a big group of people
● getting into a fight with your best friend
● your first trip outside your hometown
Winning a competition makes me happy.
Getting bad grades makes me feel upset.
Tell your partner about them.
Competition
Boys say experiences that made you feel happy while girls say experiences that made you feel sad. The winner is who can say more experiences.
Write a story similar to the one in 2b using your notes in 3a.
3b
In your story, try to explain the following:
●What happened
●When did it happen
●Where did it happen
●How did it make you feel Why
●What did you learn from the experience
【审清题目】
内容：你的一次……的经历
文体：记叙文
人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
时态：以一般过去时为主
【头脑风暴】
【提供素材】
语块
What How Why
winning a competition happy, excited, jump up and down with / for joy, be on cloud nine (极其快乐；乐不可支), walk on air (欢天喜地；得意扬扬), be over the moon (欣喜若狂) make me confident
helping others take pride in being a(n) ... person,
one of the greatest things in life
getting good grades on an exam inspire (激励) me to keep studying hard
your first trip outside your hometown increase my knowledge,
open up my eyes
your first volunteer work spend time with the children
your first cooking help Mom with the housework
What How Why
losing a competition sad, unhappy, down, blue, heartbroken, break sb.’s heart (使某人很难过；使心碎) make me embarrassed(尴尬的)
getting bad grades on an exam make my parents angry
getting into a fight / arguing with your best friend lose my best friend
句型
1. ... makes me (feel) ...
2. I feel ... when I ...
3. This experience taught me that ...
4. From the experience, I learned that ...
5. It helps me realize / understand that ...
【谋篇布局】
【点评范文】
1. 内容：该短文记叙了作者所做的一件好事——捡到物品后主动联系失主归还物品，是典型的记叙文，因此作者将记叙文的六要素(时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过、结果)交代得很清楚，使得故事完整、具体。
2. 语言：在叙述事情的经过时，作者使用了表示时间的词语at about 9:00 a.m., then和about 20 minutes later来连接上下文，将整个故事的过程清晰地呈现在了读者面前。
3. 不足：文章简单句居多，如果多些复合句则会使文章更加精彩。
An experience that made me very happy was winning the nationwide English speech competition last year.
At first, I didn’t know what to write for my speech, but after talking to my teacher and reading some books, I had some ideas and started writing. Then I practiced my speech many times.
Sample writing
主题是谈论事物对人的影响
时态用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主
按照事情发展的顺序
范文赏读
On the day of the competition, I saw many people there. This made me feel very nervous! I started to worry that I would forget my speech. Then I remembered what my teacher told me — close my eyes and take deep breaths. I did that and it made me feel much better. When my turn came, I gave my speech with confidence.
用本单元目标语言：sth. makes sb. + adj. / do
按照事情发展的顺序
I waited anxiously for the results, and when I heard that I was the first prize winner, I jumped up and down with joy.
This experience taught me that being well-prepared is very important. It helps to read a lot, and also to ask people around you for advice. Most importantly, have confidence in yourself!
事情的结果
表达感受
Exchange your composition with your partner and correct mistakes you made.
1. Put the words in the appropriate place in the chart.
nervous unhappy uncomfortable worried comfortable relaxed angry awful happy uneasy Positive Negative
comfortable
relaxed
happy
nervous
unhappy
uncomfortable
worried
uneasy
awful
Self Check
2 Write sentences using the words given.
1. sad movies / cry
____________________________________
2. speaking in front of many people / nervous
____________________________________
____________________________________
Sad movies make me cry.
Speaking in front of many people makes me nervous.
3. money and fame / not always happy
_________________________________________
4. soft piano music / relaxed
____________________________________
5. rainy days / stay at home and watch TV
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
Money and fame don’t always make you happy.
Soft piano music makes me relaxed.
Rainy days make me want to stay at home and watch TV.
3 Number the things[1-6](1=least important,
6=most important). Write a reason for each choice.
____fame ____power ____friendship
____wealth ____health ____family
1
2
5
3
4
6
e.g. Fame is not very important. It can make me nervous if too many people follow me around.
Power is not important to me. I don’t like to control others.
Wealth is not very important. I prefer to live a simple life.
Health is important. A healthy body makes it possible for me to do many things in life.
Friendship is very important. Spending time with friends makes me happy.
Family is the most important to me. My family makes me feel comfortable and happy.
初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈, 总有一些经历是令你难以忘怀的。学校英语报 English Learning 正在以 ”My Unforgettable Experience” 为主题向应届毕业生征文。请写一篇80—100词的英语短文，叙述你的一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你在其中的感悟和收获。 (短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实的人名和校名)
Homework
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