北师大版（2019） 必修第三册 Unit 7 Art Writing Workshop 课件-（11张ppt)

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Writing Workshop: A Learning Reflection
2022/12/26
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Unit 9 Learning
What is a reflective journal
What are the common addition linkers
What does a reflective journal often include
A reflective journal is a written record of what someone has learnt.
Recalling
Reflections on one’s past knowledge about …
Reflections on what one has learnt.
What one can do to improve …
also, not only … but also …
what’s more/moreover, in addition
Figure out a thing that you have learnt recently/that has changed you the most recently. Reflect on what you have learnt from it.
What I’m going to reflect on
Why should I reflect on what I have learnt
What makes it special
What does it mean to me
What changes me the most
What have I learnt
Writing
Step 1 Brainstorm
Writing
Step 2 Outlining
Complete the outline of your reflection.
Exchange the outline with your partner. Check whether each paragraph is clearly organized.
Paragraph 1: 概述收获、今昔对比
Paragraph 2: 学到的内容+对此的理解
1) … 2) … 3) …
Paragraph 3: 今后计划/后续会发生的改变
1) … 2) … 3) …
Writing
Step 3 Drafting
Use the outline and the Writing Help to write your first draft.
Writing
Writing a Learning Reflection
It’s important to:
understand why you should reflect on what you have learnt;
choose one topic that you want to reflect on;
list what you knew about the topic before learning it, and what you know about it now;
include how you will use your new skill/knowledge in the future
Writing help
Writing
Step 4 Peer Editing
Form a small group (with 3 to 4 members)
Evaluate each other’s learning reflection according to the criteria on P93.
Point out each journal’s shining points and things that need improvement.
Summarize the common problems in those learning reflections.
1) content 2) coherence and cohesion 3) language accuracy (grammar & spelling)
Based on your peers’ feedback, revise/polish your writing.
Polish your topic sentences (sandwich paragraph & addition linkers).
Correct spelling, punctuation or grammar errors.
Revise unclear expressions.
Step 5 Polishing
Writing
Share what you have learnt with the whole class.
shining points of the learning reflections
common problems in the learning reflections
measures that can be taken to tackle the problems
Sharing
Summarize the things you’ve learnt in this writing process.
Design a bulletin board, displaying students’ essays.
Assignment
Goodbye!