人教版八年级上册 Unit4 What's the best movie theater?话题作文分析与汇总（复习）

U4话题作文分析与汇总
Unit 4 What's the best movie theater
本单元的主要话题是能使用最高级讨论个人喜好并进行比较，表达自己的观点并说明理由。写此类作文时应注意要会从多个角度进行比较，注意形容词与副词最高级的正确使用，结合前面学到的比较级，运用多变的句式使短文丰富多彩。
⑴ 那么首先要审题，确定时态为一般现在时，人称为以第三人称为主。
⑵ 正文从价格、服务、地理位置等方面介绍它的优点和不足。正确使用形容词与副词比较级和最高级。
⑶ 结尾要写自己认为最好的……。
1、范文一
你校做了"爱家乡 说特色"的大讨论．请根据下表信息，写一篇不少于80词的短文．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
The best Name Reason
Store Xinmate 你可以很便宜地买到衣服
Movie theater New Century Theater 有最舒服的座位和最好的服务
School Xinhua High School 有最有才能的老师和最大的校园 （campus）
Radio Station 970 FM 它播放最优美的音乐
【分析】
【高分句型】
It has not only the biggest campus but also the most talented teachers．
它不仅有最大的校园，还有最有才华的教师．not only…but also…不但……而且……
【范文】Yesterday our school had a big discussion about which place we think is the most special in our hometown．Here are the results．
The best clothes store is Xinmate clothes store，where you can buy clothes the most cheaply．【高分句型】It has the best service．The best movie theater is New Century Theater．It has the most comfortable seats and the best service．The best school is Xinhua School．It has not only the biggest campus but also the most talented teachers．【高分句型】The best radio station is 970 FM，and it plays the most beautiful songs．
If you want to come to our hometown，I'm sure that you can have a wonderful time．
2、范文二
假设你是汤姆，常到学校附近的三家快餐吃饭．你进行了一下调查，请用学过的比较级或最高级的句型描述三家饭
店．
写作要点：
1、三家饭店情况：Prizza Restaurants质量最好，服务比较友好，价格最贵；Ham Restaurants 质量比较好，服务不友好，价格最便宜；Billy Restaurants 质量好，价格不高也不贵，服务友好 2、说明学校周边情况，自己的喜好
3、介绍自己喜好的原因 4、介绍其他俩家的优缺点 5、结尾说明自己的结论．
写作要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名． 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯．
3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰． 4．至少80词．
【分析】【高分句型一】
Of all the three，I like Prizza Restaurants best because it has the best quality and service．
like…best最喜欢…；because引导原因状语从句；the best …形容词最高级的应用
【高分句型二】
Billy Restaurants has better quality , the price is neither high nor low．
better比较级的应用；neither …nor …既不…也不…
【范文】There are three fast food restaurants near our school．Of all the three，I like Prizza Restaurants best because it has the best quality and service． 【高分句型一】But the price there is the highest．The price in Ham Restaurants is lower than that in Prizza Restaurants，but is doesn't have good service at all．Billy Restaurants has better quality , the price is neither high nor low．【高分句型二】 （三家饭店的优缺点）So it is the most popular and I like eating there very much．（我最喜欢的饭店）
3、范文三
你居住的城镇里有哪些有趣的地方？假如今天的英语作业是介绍你们城镇里最有特色的一些场所，请你根据下面提
示写一篇短文．
提示：
1．Which theater is the best？
2．Which park do people usually go to？
3．Which school is the best？…
要求：
1．语句通顺、逻辑连贯，可适当发挥；
2．不少于60词．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
【分析】本篇是提纲作文．根据汉语及英语提示，主要要点包括：1．城镇里最好的电影院；2．人们最喜欢去哪个公园；3．哪所学校最好；也可以适当补充一个要点．根据所给要点及英语提示可知，本篇文章要用一般现在时，而且重点考查形容词最高级的使用．
Screen City is the best movie theater to go to because it has the biggest screens and the most comfortable seats．大屏幕城市是最好的电影院因为它有最大的屏幕和最舒服的座位． （高分句型，正确使用原因状语从句）
【范文】There are many interesting places in my town．Screen City is the best movie theater to go to because it has the biggest screens and the most comfortable seats．（高分句型，正确使用原因状语从句）You can buy the tickets the most quickly there．Water Park is the most crowded place on weekends．Parents and children like to take walks there．No.3 Middle School is the best school in town．They have fantastic teachers and an excellent sports center．Delight Restaurant is the most popular place to eat out．It has the most delicious food and the best service．（适当补充要点）