仁爱科普版八年级上册 Unit4Our World Topic1话题作文

Unit4Topic1话题作文
作文题目：
动物是我们的好朋友，但是目前，濒危动物的数量正在日益剧增，请以“How to protect animals”为题，写一篇不少于100字的短文，介绍我们应采取那些措施保护动物。
题型分析：
本篇写作是以保护动物为主的议论文。根据要求可以从动物的目前状况、动物的重要性以及我们应该怎么做这三个要点来写。时态是一般现在时。
行文思路：
本文第一段直接点出动物重要性，谈论重要性表现在那个/些方面。第二段写出我们保护动物的措施,要做到层次清晰。最后一段总结，呼吁人类保护动物，情感升华。
高分点拨：
写作时可借用以下句子，句型，词组等。
It’s important for us to protect animals.
We should protect them instead of killing them
First,… Second,…，Third,….（Finally/last but not least…）
as …as possible instead of with one’s help in danger die out
more and more … try one’s best to…
The same sky,the same home.
Love animals and cherish life. 爱护动物，珍惜生命
It’s one’s duty to live in peace/harmony and protect animals under the same blue sky.
写作： How to protecte animals
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How to protect animals
At present, more and more animals are in danger. So how to protect them has been important. It's wrong for people to hunt animals for their meat and fur. Because animals are our good friends.
We should protect them instead of killing them. First, we should tell everyone that it is important to protect wild animals. Second, we shouldn't eat the meat of wild animals or use the cloth made by the leather of wild animals.Third, to protect wild animals is also to protect environment of the earth.
I hope everyone can do something for animals, so that we can keep our world rich and colorful and full of interesting animals.
移花接木：遇到此类作文题目可以借用本篇部分内容或者句子来写。
Protecting forect/environment (根据本文思路来写) _____ is important