Unit4Topic2话题作文
作文题目:
如果突发火灾时我们在室内,这时我们应该采取哪些自救措施呢 请根据下面的提示,充分发挥自己的想象,写一篇作文。
提示词:keep calm, call 119,go out 熄灭, feel the door, wait for 等待,worryabout,towel毛巾
题型分析:
本篇写作是一篇描述在火灾发生时如何自救的说明文,根据提示描述所采取的自救措施。写作时可使用第一人称(we)或第二人称(you),主要时态为一般现在时。
行文思路:
根据文章的开头及所给的词语提示,依次描述自救措施的几个方面,如:keep calm,call 119,wait for。最后加以总结,说明在事故中保持冷静、积极自救的重要性。
高分点拨:
写作时要用到所有的提示词,描述自救措施时可使用 First..., Second..,Third..,连接上下文,使文章条理清楚。在遣词造句上应使用自己熟悉的词汇和句型,如:We/You should/shouldn't...,等等。
1. First..., Second..,Third.. We/You should/shouldn't...
2.try one’s best to do sth. as…as possible in danger go out
call 119 for help turn off keep away from… keep safe/calm
3. It’s important/necessary for sb. to do sth.
4. There is no doubt that…
5.As the saying goes:……
6.It’s one’s duty to cherish life. 珍爱生命,人人有责。
写作: How to protect ourself in the fire
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范文:
If a fire happens suddenly when you are in the room, you must do the following things.
First, you should keep calm. Don't be afraid. Try your best to call 119 as soon as possible .If you don’t have a telephone, you can open the window and put some colorful things out of the window to ask for help. Second,if the lights all go out, try to feel the door and open it. Third, you should find some water to make some clothes or towels wet.Cover your mouth and nose with them. Finally, you can wait for help.Don’t worry. Good luck will always be with you.
There is no doubt that remembering these followings are important.It can keep us safe.
移花接木:遇到此类作文题目可以借用本篇部分内容或者句子来写。
How to protect ourself in the earthquake/flood