Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7 单元作文（思路点拨+写作实践）

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Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.
单元主题写作
一、话题分析
本单元以 “校园时光”为话题，让学生回顾初中三年的学习生活并展望未来，叙述对自己有较大影响的某个人或某件事。
写作方法
“三步法”对自己影响最大的人或事“类作文
引出话题
人物/事件介绍
表达感激/感想
素材积累
“对自己影响最大的人或事”类作文常用词汇：
person//influence //encourage// overcome//thankful // caring //take on new challenges// have problems with// advice // day by day // the importance of// help me with ...
“对自己影响最大的人或事”类作文常用句型：
The person who has influenced me most of ...
He encouraged/helped me to do better in ...
When I face difficulties in my daily life , his spirit ...
I am sure I will grow up better with ..
写作任务
最近你市正举行以 “The person who has influenced me most”为题的中学生英语征文活动。 Spud Webb深深地影响着你，请根据表中的内容要点完成征文。
基本情况 个头矮小，梦想进入NBA一直为梦想而奋斗1985年成为NBA球员
成功原因 永不言弃把握每次机会.....
对我的影响.... ......
注意：100词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The person who has influenced me most .
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb. Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963.
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The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.
Spud Webb was born in the USA , He was very small , but he had a big dream -to play in the NBA. He was fighting for his dream . As a saying goes , “Where there is a will , there is a way .”In 1985, he became an NBA player .
What led Spud Webb to success First , he didn’t lose heart or give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height . Second , he was able to take every chance.
Spud Webb has influenced me a lot . When I face difficulties in my daily life , his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges.
五、高分作文
愉快的初中生活即将结束，回顾过去的三年，哪些人、哪些事让你难忘，对你影响深远？请根据下面要带点提示写一篇英语短文，纪念那些过去的时光。 （15分）
要点：1. 描述人或事。
解释你对这个人或事的感受；
描述这个人或事对你生活的影响；
要求：1.短文必须 包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
要求语句通顺、语义连贯、书写清楚；
词数： 80-100词。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
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Over the past three years , I remember many people , but the most unforgettable person would be Mrs. Li , my head teacher in Grade 7.
I can still remember the first time I met her . She was standing in the front of the classroom to welcome us with a gentle smile , which relaxed me a lot . I used to do badly in schoolwork . Later , it was Mrs. Li who found my problem and helped me out . She always spent time explaining things to me whenever I could not understand something . I was moved by her effort and began to put more effort in study . Now I am a top student .
I will be thankful to Mrs. Li forever , whose kindness and care changed my study life.
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