Unit 10 If you go to the party, you'll have a great time 作文复习课件

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八年级上册 Unit10作文复习
Unit 10 If you go to the party,
you’ll have a great time!
一、例文要求
Write about your friend’s first problem and the possible solutions. Use the structures below to help you plan your writing.
Hello, I am Amy. I have some problems. I need your help. As you see, I am fat. And I have few friends, I always feel lonely. At the same time, my grades are getting worse and worse. What should I do Could you help me
要求：1. 根据Amy的现状，给她写一封回信，帮她解决她的问题。
2. 字数80词左右。
3. 字面整洁工整。
一、例文要求
How to write your advice for your friend’s problems .
二、思路点拨
分析提纲，我们需写三方面的内容就能完成一篇小作文。
1.首先，写清楚朋友的名字及其现在存在的问题。
How to write your advice for your friend’s problems .
二、思路点拨
2. 然后，写自己给他的建议。用If从句进一步说明建议将起到的作用。
3. 最后,复读一遍来检查有没有错误。
Problem:My friend...
He/She....
beginning
Solution&Advice:I think he/she should...
Main body
Results: If he/she...,he/she will...
Ending
My writing
二、思路点拨
Beginning
My friend _______ has a problem. He/She______________________.
Main body
I think he/she should ________.
Ending
If he/she _________________________,
he/she will _______________________.
01
02
03
二、思路点拨
The Content of the Body Part(1)
Beginning
Dear Amy,
I am sorry to hear…
/ Don’t be worried about…
/ I am glad to …
Main body
Firstly, …… Secondly,…… Thirdly, ……
If you do so, you will solve your problems.
Ending
I hope…, and you will…
/I believe you can…
if you do as I tell you……
二、思路点拨
The Content of the Body Part(2)
2.Grammar
二、思路点拨
Other elements of a movie
by sb’s advice
依某人劝告
on sb’s advice
依某人劝告
follow sb’s advice
接受某人意见
ask advice of
向...征求意见
give advice
劝告，忠告
What else can we know about the advice
Grammar focus
Other elements of a movie
no problem
没问题；不客气
health problem
健康问题
financial problem
财政问题
solve a problem
解决难题
technical problem
技术问题
What else can we know about the problem
Grammar focus
Dear Amy,
I am glad you trust me so much that you share your problems with me, and I will try my best to help you.
Firstly, being fat itself is not a big deal, but your health is important. To be healthy, you should eat more vegetables and fruit and do more exercise.
三、参考答案（一）
Secondly, you don’t know how to make friends. It is normal to have this feeling. But you can always offer to help others so that you can make more friends.
Thirdly, it worries you that you can’t get a good grade.
三、参考答案（一）
To tell you the truth, nobody can succeed unless he works hard or finds a good way to study. And asking teachers for help is also a good way. Worries and problems are normal in life. As long as you solve them, they are not big deals.
Wish you happy forever.
Yours,
…
三、参考答案（一）
结尾祝福
3.Homework
Mike 是一位中学生,他沉迷于电脑游戏中,并因此影响了学习。你作为Mike的好朋友,你打算怎么帮助他呢？请用下面所给的提示写一篇短文。提示：give up; waste time; be interested in; have a great time
四、作业布置
Dear Mike,
WThanks for your letter. _______________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
要求：
1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。开头和格式已给出,不计入总词数。
四、作业布置
五、参考答案
Dear Mike,
Thanks for your letter. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now. Don’t worry. Let me help you. Now, I’ll give you some advice about how to do better in your study. Playing computer games is very interesting, but if you play too much, you’ll waste lots of time, and you’ll have little time to do your homework.
五、参考答案
I think if you give up playing computer games, you may be interested in other things, like study or sports. Then you’ll be interested in many other subjects. So you should give up the computer games and work harder. I think if you keep working hard, you’ll have a great time at school with your good friends.
yours,
XXX
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