读后续写：八步创意模板写作
Part1:八步法详解 1
Part2:高考真题实战演练 5
实战演练1：读后续写浙江卷（2016年真题） 5
实战演练2：读后续写浙江卷（2018年6真题） 8
Part1:八步法详解
（1）情绪：消极情绪
（2）细节：进一步解释描写
（3）转折：个人的努力或借助外界
（4）转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
（5）失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
（6）新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
（7）结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折
（8）总结：点题，呼应前文
详述：
（1）消极情绪
典型表达是：
感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）
1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一阵...
2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb
因...颤抖
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
（2）进一步细节描写
典型是：流泪；心里想……
流泪：
1. Tears blurred one's eyes.
2. One's eyes got misty.
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
心里想
1. An inner voice told sb that 从句内心的声音告诉某人...
2. ...thought/said to oneself
（3）转折（个人努力或借助外界）
典型是：鼓起勇气或另外一方的鼓励；毫不犹豫
pluck up/take/gather/one's courage (to do...)
毫不犹豫：
1. sb could hardly wait to do sth
2. without a second thought
3. without even thinking
4. without delay
5. without hesitation
（4）事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
典型表达是：
似乎：
1. It was like doing sth好像...
2. It seemed as if/ that...好像...
希望：
1. hoping that 从句抱着一丝希望
2. see/feel a glimmer of hope看到一丝希望
3. trying hard to do sth
欣慰：
1. ...breathed a sigh of relief松了一口气
2. ...sighed with relief松了一口气
3. (A wave of) relief flooded through/washed over sb
4. to one's relief, .. 使人欣慰的/放心的是
（5）但是还是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
典型是：不幸的是；不知道做什么
不幸的是：
1. But bad luck for sb, ...但是某人真不走运
3. , but in vain
4. , but without success
5. , but no use
不知道做什么
1. Sb did sth, wondering what to do next.
2. Sb did sth, not knowing what to do next.
3. Sb did sth, unsure of what to do next.
4. Sb was at a loss what to do.
5. Sb was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.感到难以决定...
（6）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法
典型：某人想到/明白...; 有了主意
1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句
2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind
3. One's mind began to race
（7）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ...
2. for an instant/moment一瞬间
有了结果
1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句
2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，...
3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
皆大欢喜：参考（1）
（8）最后总结，点题
典型是：
直到...才意识到...
1. 倒装句：Not until 时间状语 did sb realize/notice that 从句
2. 强调句：It was only时间状语 that sb realized that 从句
还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中
1. One's words (echoed/rang out) in one's ears.
2. One's words(voice/song) lingered/whispered in one's mind/head.
3. One's head was still full of...
经历与教训
1. What a/an...lesson sb taught me(sb learned from sb)! (valuable/useful/great/painful)
2. What a/an...experience sb had!
(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)
3. Down deep in one's heart, ...在某人的内心深处
Part2:高考真题实战演练
实战演练1：读后续写浙江卷（2016森林遇险）
夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，述路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。她感到很失望，
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! ”she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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第一段：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.(但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。)
读后续写 续写
1.A wave of terror swept over her. 一阵恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。 1.情绪
2.Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place. 她的心剧烈地跳动着，手心冒汗，一个内在的声音告诉她，她必须找到一个安全的地方。 2.细节：详述情绪
3.Tired and terrified as she was,Jane plucked her courage to feel the way. 虽然她很累，也很害怕，但简鼓起勇气去感受这条路。 3.转折∶ 个人努力
4.Luckily, it didn't take long before she found a cave. 5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of hope, saying to herself."Tomorrow is another day." 4.幸运的是，没过多久她就找到了一个洞穴。 5.松了一口气，她感到了一丝希望。 对自己说。 “明天又是新的一天。” 转机：成功、希望来了。
With that, she went to sleep, in whose dream her husband kept her company. 说完，她就去睡觉了，她丈夫在梦里陪伴着她。 衔接句
第二段：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.简醒来的时候天已经亮了。
读后续写 续写
1.Hungry and disappointed, she found not any helicopter overhead,at a loss what to do. 1.饥饿和失望，她发现头顶上没有任何直升机，不知所措。 再度失望（出现新问题）
2.It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first. 3. Having gobbling down some blackberries, she can't wait to set off. 4. After what seemed a century,such an area did come into sight. Her face brightened up. 2.她突然明白，她应该先找一个大的空地。 她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出发了。 4.好像过了一个世纪之后，这样的地区确实出现了。 5.她的脸变亮了。 突然有了办法
What a coincidence that meanwhile, a helicopter was flying towards her. Upon its landing, out dashed her husband who hugged Jane tightly, tears welling up in their heart. 6.与此同时，一架直升机正朝她飞来，真是巧合。 7.她的丈夫紧紧地拥抱着简，眼泪涌上心头。 结果解决问题，巧不成书，皆大欢喜
It was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise. 8.就在这时，他们决定不再争吵了，而是学会了妥协 （总结）
实战演练2：读后续写浙江卷（2018年6月）
父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
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Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
读后续写 八股文思路
1. A wave of nervousness swept over me especially when the horse ran like crazy. （情绪）
2. My heart pounding and my palms sweating, an inner voice told me that I had to calm down. （细节详述）
3. Though in a panic, I plucked my courage to pull on the reigns. （转折：个人努力）
4. Luckily, it didn’t take long before I settled down the horse. （转机：成功，希望来了）
5. Just at that moment, Dad ran over, gasping for air. （衔接句：新问题来了）
6. “Boy, we are way off the track.” He said seriously, a look of concern spreading across his face.
Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
1. Hungry and frustrated, we tried to find a way out but in vain. (努力，失败)
2. It suddenly dawned on me we could rode down the river nearby. （突然有了办法）
3. Unexpectedly, the river brought us to the familiar track at last. （开始做）
4. After what seemed two hours, Uncle Paul’s farm house did come into sight. （成功了）
5. My father’s face brightened up, so did mine. （感受）
6. Upon our arrival, Uncle Paul couldn’t wait to asked us, “Where have you been I am just calling 911.” （幽默对话）
7. “To Alice’s Wonderland” my father answered, winking at me with a big grin.
8. What an unforgettable experience we had! (总结)
读后续写
场景描写分类速记
【场景1】表示"感到...情绪与情感" 2
【场景2】表示"(因为紧张、害怕)心跳" 2
【场景3】表示"流泪" 2
【场景4】表示"因...颤抖" 3
【场景5】表示"好像..." 3
【场景6】表示"不知道做..." 3
【场景7】表示"某人想到/明白...; 有了主意" 3
【场景8】表示"直到...才意识到..." 4
【场景9】表示"迫不及待做...; 毫不犹豫" 4
【场景10】表示"一..., 就..." 5
【场景11】表示“发出......（声音）” 5
【场景12】表示"转折" 5
【场景13】表示"心里想" 6
【场景14】表示"时间" 6
【场景15】表示"跑；冲；奔" 6
【场景16】表示"鼓起勇气" 6
【场景17】表示"希望" 7
【场景18】表示"感到欣慰，放下心来" 7
【场景19】表示"还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中" 7
【场景20】表示"经历与教训" 8
【场景21】对话模式 8
【场景1】表示"感到...情绪与情感"
1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一阵...
2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb
仿写：1) 当他看着自己的孩子时候, 一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头(十分自豪)。
A flush of pride swept over him as he watched his children. He felt a flush of pride as he watched his children.
2) 我感到高兴极了。A wave of happiness flooded over me.
3) 他感到非常恐慌。A flush of panic spread across one's face/cheeks. A flush of fear flooded/swept over him.
【场景2】表示"(因为紧张、害怕)心跳"
1. ...could feel one's heart pounding wildly in one's chest.
(pounding/beating/racing)(wildly/loudly/hard)感到心在胸中砰砰直跳
仿写：1) 上台领奖时我感到心砰砰直跳。I could feel my heart pounding as I went on stage to collect the prize.
2) 我的心开始咚咚跳，嘴里发干。My heart started to beat, and my mouth was dry.
3) 他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。He unfolded the letter, his heart racing
【场景3】表示"流泪"
1. Tears blurred one's eyes. 2. One's eyes got misty. 3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
仿写：1) 当得知我被重点大学录取时，我妈差点儿就哭了。
My mother was close to tears when she heard I was admitted to a key university.
2) 他站在一个角落里，泪流满面。He stood in a corner with tears rolling down his face.
【场景4】表示"因...颤抖"
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
仿写：1) 她双唇颤抖着，泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。Her lips shivered and big tears rolled down her cheeks.
2) 他握紧拳头，气得发抖He clenched his fists, trembling with rage.
3) 他躺在那里很长时间，害怕得发抖。He lay there for a long time, shivering with fear.
【场景5】表示"好像..."
1. It was like doing sth好像...2. It seemed as if/ that...好像...
仿写：1) 我似乎觉得所有的希望都破灭了。It seemed to me that all hope faded/died.
2) 我们聊呀聊呀，就像遇到了久别的朋友一样。We talked and talked, and it was like meeting a long-lost friend.
3) 好像进入了另一个世界。It was like entering another world.
4) 我丢了工作，感觉我的世界崩溃了。I lost my job and it was like my world collapsed.
I lost my job and it seemed as if the world was at an end.
【场景6】表示"不知道做..."
1. Sb did sth, wondering what to do next. 2. Sb did sth, not knowing what to do next.
3. Sb did sth, unsure of what to do next. 4. Sb was at a loss what to do.
手足无措5. Sb was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.感到难以决定...
仿写：1) 他吃惊地站在那里，不知道接下来做什么。He stood there in shock, unsure what to do next.
2) 老师突然出现，他不知所措。The teacher suddenly appeared, and he was at a loss what to do.
【场景7】表示"某人想到/明白...; 有了主意"
1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句
2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind
3. One's mind began to race
头脑开始快速转动
仿写：我突然意识到我并不需要这些东西来让自己快乐。
It suddenly dawned on me that I didn't really need these things to be happy.
2) 突然他想到一个好主意。Suddenly a brilliant idea flashed into his mind.
3) 他的头脑开始快速转动，试图想出办法。His mind began to race, trying to think of a way out.
4) 我突然想到我没有锁门。It struck me that I had left the door unlocked.
【场景8】表示"直到...才意识到..."
1. 倒装句：Not until 时间状语 did sb realize/notice that 从句
2. 强调句：It was only时间状语 that sb realized that 从句
仿写：1) 直到那时他才意识到有什么不对劲。Not until then did he realize that something was wrong.
It was only then that he realized that something was wrong.
2) 他这才恍然大悟，他哥哥想为他买圣诞礼物。
Not until then did he realize that his elder brother wanted to buy a present for him.
It was only then that he realized that his elder brother wanted to buy a present for him.
3)直到那一刻，他才注意到包里什么也没留下。
Not until at that moment did he notice that there was nothing left in his bag.
4)直到那时她才感觉到他的肚子在咕咕叫。It was only then that she felt that his stomach was growling.
【场景9】表示"迫不及待做...; 毫不犹豫"
1. sb could hardly wait to do sth 2. without a second thought
不假思索;毫不犹豫地3. without even thinking 4. without delay 立即；毫不迟延地5. without hesitation毫不犹豫
仿写1) 他迫不及待地要赶回家将一切告诉他的He could hardly wait to get back home and tell his parents everything.
2) 水冰冷冰冷，可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。
The water was freezing cold, but without a second thought the young man jumped in.
她迫不及待地想见Colin，把早上的一切都告诉她。
She couldn't wait to see Colin and told everything about her morning.
4) 他毫不迟疑地迅速爬上树去摘树叶。Without delay, he climbed up the tree quickly to reach for the leaf.
【场景10】表示"一..., 就..."
1. Upon (doing) sth, ...2. The moment/instant 从句, ...3. Hardly had sb done..., when...did...
仿写：
1) 听了这个滑稽的故事，大家都哈哈大笑。Upon hearing the funny story, everybody burst into laughter.
2) 我一看见他, 就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。
The instant I saw him, I knew he was the policeman who had helped me carry the box.
3) 我刚走进房间就听见了巨大的声音。Hardly had I entered the room when I heard loud noise.
4) 一听到"救命"的喊声，他冲出了房子。Upon hearing shouts of "help", he dashed out of the house.
【场景11】表示“发出......（声音）”
1.. There were loud shouts and cheers (from...) when...从...传来喊叫与欢呼声。
2. let out a cry/scream(of horror/fear/terror/shock/surprise/pain....)
3. let out a howl/growl/yell/sigh/yelp发出...的声音
仿写：1.当他登上讲台时, 现场传来了雷鸣般的掌声。There was a storm of applause when he went on the platform.
A stormy applause broke out in the hall when he went on the platform.
2.她看见他时吓得大叫一声。When she saw him, she let out a cry of horror.
【场景12】表示"转折"
1. But bad luck for sb, ...但是某人真不走运
2. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句
3. , but in vain 4. , but without success 5. , but no use 6. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，...
7. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
仿写：1) 使我们高兴的是，结果所有的人收到了礼物。To our delight, it turned out that every one of us received a gift.
2) Jack真不走运，他绊了一脚，摔在地上。But bad luck for Jack, he tripped and fell to the ground
3) 她朋友想劝她和他一起回家可只是白费唇舌Her friend tried to persuade her to go back home with him, but in vain.
【场景13】表示"心里想"
1. An inner voice told sb that 从句内心的声音告诉某人... 2. ...thought/said to oneself
仿写：1) 心里的声音告诉他，他所做的错了。An inner voice told him that what he had done was wrong.
2) 当他回家时，他心里想道，"这会是谁呢 ","Who could it possibly be " he thought to himself as he walked home.
【场景14】表示"时间"
1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ... 2. for an instant/moment一瞬间
仿写：1) 不久以后，我们到达一流动的小溪。Not long after this, we reached a running stream.
一时间，他站在那里一动不动，几乎不相信发生的事。
For an instant, he stood still, hardly believing what had happened.
【场景15】表示"跑；冲；奔"
1. dart/dash/rush/hurry 2. run like the wind飞奔仿写：
1) 他突然放开我以惊人的速度冲出了门。He suddenly let go of me and darted out of the door with surprising speed.
【场景16】表示"鼓起勇气"
pluck up/take/gather/one's courage (to do...)
仿写：1) 我终于鼓起勇气登上了舞台。Finally, I plucked enough courage to go on stage.
2) 我鼓起勇气，径直向那个人走去。Gathering (up) my courage, I walked straight towards the man.
【场景17】表示"希望"
1. hoping that 从句抱着一丝希望 2. see/feel a glimmer of hope看到一丝希望
3. trying hard to do sth
仿写1)她眼睛扫过大厅望Richard会在那里等She glanced about the hall, hoping that Richard would be waiting for her.
2) 我注视她，感到了一线希望。I looked at her and felt a glimmer of hope.
3) 他转过身来，想忍住眼泪。He turned around, trying to fight back his tears.
【场景18】表示"感到欣慰，放下心来"
1. ...breathed a sigh of relief松了一口气 2. ...sighed with relief松了一口气
3. (A wave of) relief flooded through/washed over sb 4. to one's relief, .. 使人欣慰的/放心的是
仿写：1) 飞机安全着陆，我顿时放下心来。I breathed a sigh of relief as the plane landed safely.
A wave of relief flooded through me as the plane landed safely. To my relief, the plane landed safely.
2) 没有人受伤，我们都松了一口气。No one was injured, and we all breathed a sigh of relief.
【场景19】表示"还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中"
1. One's words (echoed/rang out) in one's ears.
2. One's words(voice/song) lingered/whispered in one's mind/head. 3. One's head was still full of...
仿写：1) 老师鼓励的话还在她的耳边回响。 Her teacher's encouraging words still echoed in her ears.
Her teacher's encouraging voice still lingered in her head.
2) 我的脑子里仍然充满奇怪的想法与忧虑。 My head was still full of strange thoughts and worries.
Strange thoughts and worries crowded into my mind.
【场景20】表示"经历与教训"
1. What a/an...lesson sb taught me(sb learned from sb)! (valuable/useful/great/painful)
2. What a/an...experience sb had! (enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)
3. Down deep in one's heart, ...在某人的内心深处
仿写：1) 格林先生教给我们多么宝贵一课啊，我们会永远记得他的恩情
What a valuable lesson Mr. Green taught us! And we will always remember his kindness to us.
2) 在他的内心深处，他知道他会永远记住Mr.Green给他上的多么宝贵的一课。
Down deep in his heart, he knew he would remember what a valuable lesson Mr. Green taught him.
The valuable lesson Mr. Green taught him will be rooted in his memory forever.
【场景21】对话模式
1. "....," he said, doing ... --say后接分词作状语
1) "I didn't know what I was doing," she said, laughing at the memory.
2) "I'll get us some coffee," she said, heading for the kitchen.
3) "That's nice," Alex said quietly, focusing on his plate.
4) "Very clever," said the teacher, nodding his head as if pleased.
5) "Uncle, forgive me, I did that... unintentionally," he said, pointing to the broken glass.
6) "We don't do any harm," said the boy, evidently frightened by my words.
2. "...," he said, as/when/before/as if... --say后接时间状语从句
1) "Watch out!" she shouted, as the car started to move.
2) "What a beauty!" said the nurse as she came to the door.
3. "....," he said, and (then he) did....--say后接and, 先后动作或构成并列句
1) "Good morning, children!" said the minister; and he kindly shook hands with both.
2) "Yes, I think so," he said reluctantly(无奈地), and left the study.
3) "Come here," said the little man, and took her to one of the corners of the building.
4. "....," he said, “...”--say后接要说的另一句话
1) "There was a letter from Prince Andrew today," he said to Princess Mary "Haven't you read it "
2) "Well, well!" said the man; "are there really people in this room "
3) "Since you love him so well," said the king, "I will tell you something.
4) "She is a very admirable and excellent young woman," said she, "and you must go and call on her."
5. ...did.., did, and said, “...”--say前有并列关系的先后动作
He paused, looked straight into her eyes, and said in a quiet voice,"that's true."
6. "....," said the man, who... --用定语从句补充说明说话的人
1) "I don't know," said Zeb, who was still confused.
2) "To your health!" said Mr.White, who also emptied his glass, and wiped his mouth with his handkerchief.
7. "....," he said +方式副词(-ly)或短语, --作状语修饰say
1）"Of course," Nacy replied with a smile.
2）"I'm sorry," she said with a sigh.
3）"But they don't understand our talk at all," said the dancer with a puzzled smile.
4）"Natasha, you love me " she said in a soft trustful whisper.
5）"Come to your Papa at once, please!" said she with a strange, excited look.
6）"If only I had known..." she said through her tears.
【背诵素材日积月累】
01. We watched him plough[pla ] on, northwards at incredible speed, until he vanished from sight.我们看着他以惊人的速度努力向北前进，直到他从视线中消失。
02. So there was nothing we could do but wait.所以我们只能等。
03. They were curious to know what he was doing alone in that desolate place - I was, too - but he was in no state to answer questions. So he rested there, barely able to move or speak, and two days passed before he was strong enough to respond.他们很想知道他一个人在那个荒凉的地方干什么——我也是——但他的状态不适合回答问题。于是他在那里休息，几乎不能动弹也不能说话，两天过去了，他才有足够的力气作出答复。
04. On hearing this he became agitated[ d te t d] and struggled to sit up.听到这话，他变得焦躁不安，挣扎着坐起来。
05. Eventually he calmed himself and began to speak.最后他冷静下来，开始说话。
06. For a moment I was too stunned to move.一时间，我惊呆了，动弹不得。
07. Then the truth dawned on me.然后我发觉了真相。
08. I remember the day she came to us. My mother told me she had a present for me, and then, to my surprise, introduced me to this little blue-eyed girl.我还记得那天她来我们的家。我妈妈告诉我她有一件礼物给我，然后，令我吃惊的是，她把我介绍给了这个蓝眼睛的小女孩。
09. One day, when I was about fifteen, a violent storm rumbled[ r mbl] out of the mountains and broke over our home. I stood amazed at the door, listening to the crashes of thunder and blinking at the great flashes of lightning which lit up the garden.我大约十五岁的时候，有一天，一场猛烈的暴风从山中隆隆而至，在我们的家上方炸裂。我惊讶地站在门口，听着阵阵雷声，惊愕地看着照亮花园的闪电。
10. As I walked, thunder rumbled in the mountains all around and rain began to fall in heavy drops. 我走着走着，山里雷声隆隆，雨点开始大颗大颗地往下落。
11. From that moment I was determined to find the answers to these questions, to discover the secrets of life.从那一刻起，我决心要找到这些问题的答案，去发现生命的秘密。
12. I stood there, clasping[klɑ sp] the door handle.我站在那里，紧攥着门把手。
13. Ingoldstadt was a place of great learning, a place where I realized I could at last tackle the questions which had fascinated me for so long. I threw myself into my studies of the sciences and over the next two years, barely wrote to my family and found no time to pay them a single visit.Ingoldstadt 是一个做大学问的地方，在那里我意识到我终于可以解决那些让我着迷了很久的问题。我全身心投入到科学研究中，在接下来的两年里，我几乎没有给家人写信，也没有时间去拜访他们。
14. I was appalled[ p ld] by what I was doing,but I couldn't stop. It was as if there were something inside driving me on.我被我所做的事吓坏了，但我不能停止。好像有什么东西在驱使我继续下去。
15. One dreary[ dr ri] night in November, with the rain beating against my window, I stood back from my work and knew that it was almost done.十一月的一个沉闷的夜晚，雨打在我的窗户上，我停止了我的工作，知道工作快完成了。
16. I felt a surge[s d ] of triumph, but it lasted no more than an instant. Then I was overcome with a feeling of disgust.我感到一阵成功的喜悦涌上心头，但它只持续了一瞬间。然后我感到厌恶。feel a sudden surge of anger/excitement 感到一阵愤怒/兴奋
17. Then he looked into my eyes and his face clouded with worry.然后他看着我的眼睛，他的脸布满了愁云。
18. As I made my way to my old home next morning, I knew I could say nothing of what I had seen.当我第二天早上去我的老家时，我知道我不能将我看到的说出来。
19. I could see the sadness in her eyes.我能从她的眼睛里看出悲伤。
20. In spite of this, he smiled to me and shook me warmly by the hand.尽管如此，他还是对我微笑，并热情地握着我的手。
21. All I could do was repeat that Justine was innocent.我所能做的就是反复说贾斯汀是无辜的。
22. For the first time in weeks I felt something like happiness in my heart. But the feeling was short-lived.几周来，我第一次感觉到内心的快乐。但这种感觉是短暂的。
23. All at once I charged at him, burning with anger.突然，我怒火中烧地向他冲去。
24. His anguished[ ɡw t] cry echoed over the valley.他痛苦的叫声在山谷中回荡。She let out an anguished cry. 她痛苦地大叫了一声。
25. However vile[va l] he was, he had the right to tell his story. So I suppressed[s pres ]my anger and prepared to listen.不管他多么卑鄙，他都有权讲自己的故事。所以我抑制住愤怒，准备倾听。
26. If I can master their language, I thought, I can perhaps speak to them one day.如果我能掌握他们的语言，我想，也许有一天我可以和他们说话。
27. She was a pretty girl and I thought I could see kindness in her face as she busied herself sweeping and tidying the cottage.她是个漂亮的女孩，我想当她忙着打扫和整理小屋时，我能从她的脸上看到善良。
28. The thought that I might speak to them and be happy one day filled me with hope, but it was a hope that did not last. While I was wandering alone in the forest, I came across a pool of still water, and knelt down to drink. There, suddenly, I saw my own face reflected and the sight of it made me shrink back in horror.一想到有一天我可以和他们说话并且很开心起来，我就充满了希望，但这种希望并没有持久。当我独自在森林里徘徊时，我碰到一滩死水，我跪下来喝水。在那里，突然，我看到自己的脸倒影，一看到它，我吓得缩了回去。
29. "What am I What creature am I " I cried aloud, but the only answers that came to me were my own groans[ɡr n] of despair."我是什么？我是什么生物 " 我大声喊叫，但唯一的回应是我自己绝望的呻吟。
30. Then, with my heart beating quickly, I went up to the door. I hesitated a moment, knowing that my future happiness depended on the next few minutes. I knocked on the door and, after a while, heard a voice call back.然后，我心跳加速，走到门口。我犹豫了一会儿，知道我未来的幸福取决于接下来的几分钟。我敲了敲门，过了一会儿，我听到一个回应的声音。
31. The room fell silent apart from the soft cracking of the fire.除了炉火发出的轻微的噼啪声，房间里一片寂静。
32. At this I became overwhelmed with happiness and fell to my knees. I clutched[kl t ] the good old man's hands.听了这话，我高兴极了，跪了下来。我紧握着那位老人的手。
33. I ran from the cottage, howling with frustration and fury, my hopes scattered[ sk t (r)] and broken.我从小屋里跑了出来，沮丧和愤怒地嚎叫着，我的希望破灭了。
34. I felt rage build up inside me at the thought of this and suddenly I could bear it no longer. Fierce anger shook my body.一想到这件事，我就感到愤怒，突然间我再也忍不住了。强烈的愤怒使我浑身发抖。
35. Days of loneliness and pain followed before I was able to continue my journey, and two months passed before I eventually reached my destination.几天的孤独和痛苦之后，我才得以继续我的旅程，两个月过去了，我最终到达了目的地。
36. On the morning I left, Elizabeth came to say goodbye, seeing her there made me even more determined to put an end to this ugly business once and for all.我离开的那天早晨，伊丽莎白来道别，看到她在那儿，我更加下定决心要彻底结束这桩丑事。
37. These thoughts turned over and over in my mind.这些想法在我的脑海里翻来覆去。
38. Shock and fear ran through my body at the sight.一看到这情景，我全身都感到震惊和恐惧。
39. I didn't know how long I sat there helplessly waiting, but eventually I heard the door flung open as he rushed into the hut.我不知道我在那里无助地等了多久，但最终我听到他冲进小屋时门猛地打开了。
40. I stood on the stony beach and his words rang through my head--I shall be with you.我站在多石的海滩上，他的话在我脑海中回荡——我会和你在一起的。
41. There was a moment's silence, and then one of them stepped forward and spoke in a rough voice.沉默了一会儿，他们中的一个走上前，用粗野的声音说话。
42. A murmur ran through the crowd when they heard this. I fell on the limp body of my dear companion and began to sob.他们听到这话时，人群中传来一阵低语。我倒在我绵软无力r的同伴身体上开始抽泣起来。
43. There were ominous[ m n s]dark clouds gathering overhead.不祥的阴霾在头顶上汇聚。
44. Darkness has now descended[d send] and the moon and stars shine hazily[ he zi] in the clear sky.夜幕现在已经降临，晴朗的天空里月影婆娑，星光朦胧。(night, darkness , a mood, etc) descend on/upon sb/sth 降临；来临
45. For an hour I paced about the corridors, looking in every corner where the beast might be hiding. I found no trace of him.我在走廊里踱了一个小时，到处寻找野兽可能藏身的每个角落。我没有找到他的踪迹。
46. I was about to return when I heard a piercing[ p s ] scream. A pause, and then another. It came from our room. A suddenly dreadful realization rushed into my mind.我正要回来，突然听到一声刺耳的尖叫。停了一下，然后又一个尖叫。它来自我们的房间。我突然想到一个可怕的念头。
47. I stood there a moment, in frozen terror, and then rushed back to the room. Flinging open the door I saw her there, thrown across the bed, her head hanging down, her pale face half covered by her hair.我在那里站了一会儿，惊恐万分，然后冲回房间。我猛地打开门，看见她倒在床上，头垂下来，苍白的脸被头发遮住了一半。读后续写：成长类
Part1：经典例文（街边按铃） 1
Part2：成长类故事构造“三部曲” 4
第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造） 4
第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造） 5
第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华） 6
Part3：成长类场景描写 7
一、学习知识而成长 7
二、发挥天赋促成长 7
三、追逐梦想而成长 8
四、克服困难促而成长 8
Part4：灵活应用 9
例1：一首歌改变了我 9
例2：柔道比赛 10
Part5：高考真题再现（我的第一份薪水） 13
【2021年6月浙江卷】 13
Part1：经典例文（街边按铃）
阅读下面材料。根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ring a Bell
Ms. Tracy looked up from her yellow notebook and cleared her throat. The noise in the class died down as we turned toward her. "We're going to help a charity to collect money by ringing a bell. Each of you will ring it for four hours," she announced. As the words left her lips, complaints could be heard around the room. Unwillingly, I dug for my planner and look notes. Four hours of ringing a stupid bell. Four hours that I could be studying for the SAT. Was this supposed to be a joke I joined the students around the table and signed up for 1he first day of break-to get it over with.
A few weeks later, I was standing next to the big blue-and-white Walmart. There was another guy holding a jar across from me. Great, I was going to be stuck here ringing a bell with a guy who was trying to get donations for another charity. To top it off, it was only about 4.4℃.
Slowly, I put on the red dress bearing the symbol of ow charity. I hoped that I already spent two minutes doing that, Ring! Ring! A group of older women came up with their walking sticks to drop in some change. А man with а broad-cimmеd bat came by and put some coins in. I checked my phone. Just 10 minutes had passed.
A strong bitterly-cold wind blew against my freezing face. I was starting to regret ignoring my mom's advice to wear a scarf. I looked up, wishing that time would pass more quickly. A few birds swept around the poles. The sky was gently blue. Palm trees waved in the cold wind. How comfortable it might be to curl(蜷缩)up with a hot cup of tea and a book on the cozy sofa. Then another ring brought me back to reality.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右；
From the parking lot stepped out a poorly-dressed man, walking with difficulty toward me.
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Inspired by his generosity, I continued to ring my bell happily.
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【答案】From the parking lot stepped out a poorly-dressed man, walking with difficulty toward me. I saw his unbalanced shoulders and awkward figure. His hair was a mess and his shirt was dirty. I stopped ringing the bell, wondering what he was going to do. He pulled some change out of his worn pocket and reached towards the bucket. I couldn't help but say, "Thank you, sir." He turned to smile. The money he donated was not a lot, but it was clearly a lot to him. This act of charity, though not much, was worth so much more than donations given by those who were better off.
从停车场从一个衣着不好的男人走出来，艰难地朝我走去。我看到了他那不平衡的肩膀和尴尬的身材。他的头发很乱，衬衫也很脏。我不再按铃了，不知道他要做什么。他从破旧的口袋里掏出一些零钱，伸手向水桶走去。我忍不住要说，“谢谢你，先生。”他转身微笑起来。他捐的钱并不多，但显然对他来说是很多的。这项慈善行为虽然不多，但比那些富裕的捐款价值得多。
Inspired by his generosity, I continued to ring my bell happily. The bell rang so merrily that it attracted more people. I broadly smiled at everyone who approached me, feeling me shameful inside about my unwillingness and resistance when given the task. It was still chilly but I was bathed in the sunshine of kindness. Many say that these days people are becoming more and more selfish. I say that whoever believes that needs to go and ring a bell for a charity as I did
受他慷慨的启发，我继续高兴地按铃。钟响得很愉快，所以它吸引了更多的人。我对所有走近我的人哈哈一笑，当我接受任务时，我的不情愿和抵抗感到可耻。天气仍然很冷，但我却沐浴在善良的阳光下。许多人说，现在人们已经变得越来越自私了。我说，那些认为需要这样做的人都会像我一样去为慈善机构打电话
【解析】
本文以态度变化为线索展开，讲述了作者一开始对于摇铃的任务很抗拒，在执行过程中感受到了人性的温暖与伟大，慢慢的开始接受并积极起来的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一个衣衫褴褛的男人从停车场出来，艰难地向我走来。”可知，第一段可描写作者通过这个男人的捐赠态度发生改变。
②由第二段首句内容“受他慷慨大方的鼓舞，我继续愉快地按门铃。”可知，第二段可描写作者感受到人性的温暖，反思自己。
2.续写线索：不情愿——后悔——感动——积极——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①向某人走过来：walk toward/up to
②掏出：pull out of/take/pick out
情绪类
①感谢：thank sb for/show one’s appreciation/gratitude/be grateful
②感到羞耻：be ashamed of/feel ashamed
【点睛】
[高分句型1]: I stopped ringing the bell, wondering what he was going to do.这句话运用了what引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2]：The money he donated was not a lot, but it was clearly a lot to him.这句话运用了省略关系代词的定语从句。
[高分句型3]：This act of charity, though not much, was worth so much more than donations given by those who were better off.这句话运用了who引导的定语从句。
Part2：成长类故事构造“三部曲”
第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）
1、孤独
I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. （2021年4月宁波二模）
伤心
我在口袋里什么也没发现，这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。
I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing into my heart which started to bleed immediately. （2021年4月宁波二模）
看了看周围，我焦急地几乎哭了起来。（2021年4月宁波二模）
Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying.
就在我崩溃的时候，克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过（2021年4月宁波二模）
Just at the time I broke down, a group of boys led by Crawley passed me.
3、惭愧
1. She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame (被内疚和羞愧淹没). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
2. Suddenly she came alive（精神就为之一振）,waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.（2021广二模）
3. A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.（2020届山东省滨州市高三第二次模拟英语试题）
4、嘲笑
他们大声地笑着，像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊！”（2021年4月宁波二模）
They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”
5、绝望
我妈妈不让我带，”我撒谎，绝望在我心中沸腾。（2021年4月宁波二模）
“My mother wouldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me.
6、紧张
1. Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed (她的手指交叉着). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
2. She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum(她的心跳得像打鼓一样). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
3. Having paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动) in front of the the teacher's office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
7、害怕
I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone because I was afraid they’d laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) . （2021沈阳市一模）
第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）
1、惊讶
Raising her eyebrows in surprise, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground（仿佛定格在那里）.（2021广二模）
2、希望
ked up to him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination（闪烁着希望和决心）.（2021年汕头一模）
3、教育与成长
1. “That’s not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a voice echoed in my ears (一个声音在我耳边回响)after the boys left.（2021年4月宁波二模）
2. “What was done was done,” thought I to myself. “What is important now is to do correct things next(现在重要的是下一步要做正确的事情).” （2021年4月宁波二模）
3. 尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。（2021年4月宁波二模）
Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys.
第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）
1、喜悦
1. Karie grinned(grin) as she read the label on the box.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
2. Dad looked at the paper, with his lips curving into a smile（他的嘴唇弯成了微笑）. （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
3. Hearing that, Karie grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her（幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头）. （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
2、感激
I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude(感动和爱的泪水)welling up in my eyes.（2021沈阳市一模）
3、升华句
1. 我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父的话。（2021年4月宁波二模）
I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather’s words.
2. 这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。（2021年4月宁波二模）
It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift --- patience.
然而，从那时起，我保证这只破表会一直提醒我耐心等待，直到真相出现。（2021年4月宁波二模）
Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake to realize my dream（实现我的梦想）.” Mrs Rossi held his hands, saying, “ It is you who teach me how to stick to my dream(坚持我的梦想).”（2021广二模）
4、It dawned on Aram that（Aram突然想到） “One should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.”（2021广二模））
Part3：成长类场景描写
一、学习知识而成长
知识就是力量！在改变的过程中，学习不同的知识，然后才能面对各种困难和挑战。比如屏幕前的你，不就是在学习读后续写的技巧吗？请看下面的例句，也是我送给正在学习的你。
It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。
【分析】individual这里表示“个人，个体”。make more attempts 做更多尝试。
二、发挥天赋促成长
认识自身天赋，并且发挥天赋，这是改变我们的现状的一个重要条件。请看下面的例句。
Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.
事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。
【分析】possess 拥有。create miracles表示创造奇迹。
三、追逐梦想而成长
永远不要忽视了梦想的力量！“做人如果没有理想,跟咸鱼有什么区别呢”。请看下面两个例句。
It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。
As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible.只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。
【分析】take full advantage of 充分利用， realize your dreams表示“实现梦想”
四、克服困难促而成长
只有克服各种苦难，才能改变现状。请看下面的例句。
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal (success) finally.
通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标（成功）。
【分析】smooth 表示“平坦的”overcome all the difficulties 表示“克服困难”；make every effort 表示“做出努力”；as long as，表示“只要”，引导条件状语从句。
Part4：灵活应用
例1：一首歌改变了我
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Where were you when you first heard My Heart Will Go On You know that love song that took over the world in the late 1990s, the one that ruled radios and television screens, that trilled through the air when you rang your neighbour’s doorbell, or rang out of a Valentine’s Day musical card—the song we love to hate now because it is almost shameful to admit how much we listened to it in 1998. I’m no fan of the song, but I’ll tell you one thing—it saved my life.
I remember where I was when I heard the song, 13 years old, only a few weeks away from receiving my class eight report card. When my mother and I went to collect it from school, the skies were grey. On the left side of the report card was the failure of my choosing—Maths, Physics and Chemistry—on the bottom of the right hand side it said Not Promoted(不升级) in red ink. My mother, an English teacher in another Calcutta school, was too proud to beg the principal for the three marks I needed in Chemistry to be promoted to class nine. I walked along, thinking of the last song I was watching on MTV before we left for school. It was Dion’s all & shy; knowing hit My Heart Will Go On: “You have come to show you, go on...”
I was a fool to have ever thought that I could get away with not studying and watching MTV for hours on end. Till class eight, my father had refused to get a cable connection on the grounds that my brother and I would forever be glued to the screen, not study and fail the exams. The year after he gave in to his desire to watch late night football, I proved him right. I failed class eight because I was in love with the Backstreet Boys and would watch MTV all the time so that I wouldn’t miss a single video. That’s the whole truth and the band will never know the price I paid for my love.
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Failing the year changed the world as I knew it.
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Some months later, when the talent competition was announced in school, I was picked for the final round.
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Failing the year changed the world as I knew it. Overnight, it seemed as though everything had changed. I lost my friends in school because every conversation was filled with pity, theirs, and shame, mine. I was stopped from watching TV. At school, some teachers ignored my raising hands because I’d already studied the text before but failed. I used to love singing, now my life was filled with sadness.
失败的这一年改变了我所知道的世界。一夜之间，一切似乎都变了。我在学校失去了朋友，因为每次谈话都充满了我的怜悯和羞愧。我已经不再看电视了。在学校，一些老师无视我的举手，因为我以前已经学习过课文，但失败了。我曾经喜欢唱歌，现在我的生活中充满了悲伤。
Some months later, when the talent competition was announced in school, I was picked for the final round. On the day of the contest, I stood before the entire school, closed my eyes and sang the song. In that moment, I realized what “You have come to show you” meant to me—I had come to show me to my classmates and my teachers, to show them that I wasn’t just a girl who got held back, that failed, that I was good for something, that I was enough the way I was. Sometimes, when you sing like you mean the words, chances are you might win.
几个月后，当学校宣布了比赛时，我被选中进入了决赛。比赛那天，我站在整个学校面前，闭上眼睛，唱着这首歌。在那一刻，我意识到“我要展示给你看”对我意味着什么——我来给我的同学和老师，让他们展示我不只是一个女孩。有时候，当你像唱歌的时候，你很有可能会赢的机会。
例2：柔道比赛
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Sometimes your biggest weakness can become your biggest strength. Everyone has his own weakness，but God always offers his unexpected strength in his misfortune. We’d make full use of it just like the girl below，we are certainly fortunate to be given other blessings from Heaven.
The story of one girl who decided to study judo(柔道) despite the fact that she had lost her left arm in a car accident.
The girl began lessons with an old Japanese judo instructor. The girl was doing well. So she couldn’t understand why，after three months of training，the instructor had taught her only one move.
“Instructor，” the girl finally said，“Shouldn’t I be learning more moves It isn’t far enough to learn just this.”
“This is the only move you know，but this is the only move you’ll ever need to know，” the instructor replied.
Not quite understanding，but believing in her teacher，the girl kept training. She didn’t dare to complain about anything and it was apparent that since her teacher said so，she had to follow without any unhappiness.
Several months later，the instructor took the girl to her first tournament. Surprising herself，the girl easily won her first two matches. The third match proved to be more difficult，but after some time，her opponent became impatient and charged. The girl skillfully used her one move to win the match. Still amazed by her success，the girl was now in the finals.
This time，her opponent was bigger，stronger and more experienced. For a while，the girl appeared to be over-matched. Concerned that the girl might get hurt，the referee called a time out. She was about to stop the match when the instructor interrupted.
“No，” the instructor insisted，“Let her continue.”
Soon after the match started again，her opponent made a critical mistake: she dropped her guard. Instantly，the girl used her move to hold her opponent tightly. The girl had won the match and the tournament. She was the champion.
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On the way home, the girl and her teacher reviewed every move in each and every match.
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“Two reasons account for that you won，”the teacher answered.
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On the way home，the girl and her teacher reviewed every move in each and every match. Then the girl took courage to ask what was really on her mind. “Instructor，how did I win the tournament with only one move？Is there any magic power about it Is my opponent much weaker than me？Please tell me the secret.” The judo instructor and his pupil talked excitedly as walking forward. She couldn’t wait to know the answer，but the instructor appeared unhurriedly. Finally he opened his mouth.
在回家的路上，女孩和她的老师回顾了每一场比赛的每一个动作。然后女孩鼓起勇气问她到底在想什么。“教练，我是怎么只花一步就赢得锦标赛的？”它有什么魔力吗？我的对手会比我弱得多吗？请告诉我这个秘密。柔道教练和他的学生兴奋地说。她迫不及待地想知道答案，但老师却急匆匆地出现了。最后，他张开了嘴。
“Two reasons account for that you won，” the teacher answered.“First，you’ve almost mastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo. Second，the only known defense for that move is for your opponent to grab your left arm. It is your biggest weakness that makes you win the match. As a proverb says，‘Every coin has two sides.’ Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. God is fair to everyone.”
“你赢有两个原因，”老师回答，“首先，你几乎掌握了柔道最困难的投掷之一。其次，唯一已知的防守是让你的对手抓住你的左臂。这是你最大的弱点，让你赢得了比赛。正如谚语所说，“每枚硬币都有两面性。”充分利用你的力量是你的成就。请记住，无论如何你都不会放弃，尤其是在麻烦中。上帝对每个人都是公平的。”
Part5：高考真题再现（我的第一份薪水）
【2021年6月浙江卷】
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and l thought that I would surpass（超过） anything he had accomplished by the time l walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earning might not be mine to do with as wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that l had to contribute my money.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: The pay day arrived at last.
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The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. While walking back home with an excited mind. I conceived many plans about how to dispose of it. I needed a new football because the old one we played had already worn out. I intended to purchase my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking sadly. It seemed as if something unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck ". asked my mother. Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.”
发薪日终于到了。我很高兴，在我努力工作了两周后，我终于得到了报酬。一边兴奋地走回家。我构思了许多关于如何处理它的计划。我需要一个新的足球，因为我们踢的旧足球已经用坏了。我打算买我最喜欢的巧克力。走近房子，我注意到我爸爸和妈妈站在旧卡车旁边，悲伤地看着。似乎发生了一些不愉快的事情。“我们想买一辆新卡车还得付多少钱？”。我妈妈问。300美元，但我们只剩下200美元了。”
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I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to buy a new truck but couldn't afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received for my work. I think it would help you a little.” A little surprised at what I said, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, l thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work, after all l grew up.
我立刻明白了我的父母在担心什么。真的，我爸爸开的卡车在路上经常坏了，这给我爸爸惹上了麻烦。我父母本来打算买一辆新卡车，但买不起。突然，我意识到我应该做什么。我走上前去，说：“爸爸，这是我工作的回报。我想这会对你有帮助。我说的话有点惊讶，妈妈紧紧地拥抱着我。那天晚上，在我睡觉之前，我想第二天我会告诉农夫，在我长大了之后，我将继续我的工作。
读后续写
动作改造公式
Part1 动作三连结构（A, B and C结构） 2
Part2 非谓语结构 3
Part3 时间状语从句 4
Part4 混合结构 4
Part5 高考真题句中的动作链 5
读后续写的写作过程中，成功的动作描写，可以交代人物的身份、地位，可以反映人物心理活动的进程，可以表现人物的性格特征。
相反，空洞、笼统的描写会使内容缺乏生动性，使人物形象不丰满。人物的动作或简单，或复杂，都不是一下子就能完成的，细心观察都能捕捉到最能体现人物特征的慢镜头。因此，在描写动作时，同学们要学会细化动作，把动作过程分解成一连串细微的动作，形成动作链，写出动作的连贯性，这样才能使描写具有画面感，使人物更立体。
读后续写作文中动作描写没有头绪？不知道如何下手？不如拆解动作，构造动作链，让你的动作描写既丰富又精彩！
举个例子，何为构造动作链？我们先看一句高考样题范文。
He stopped the taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and told the driver, “Go to the police station, please.”
这句话的意思是：他拦下了车，拿着箱子跳进了车里，然后对司机说，“请到警察局去。”
其实，这句话只是描写了“上车”的动作，然而通过拆解，细致地展现了一个动作下的组成部分。其本质是避免简单粗暴的使用一个动词概括整个动作，而是用2-3个动词组合进行描述。用一个公式进行总结以上例句，如下:
上车=拦车+上车+告诉目的地
再比如2017年高考真题中的一个优秀范文句子。
She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around.
这句话的意思是：她会兴奋地下车，又笑又跳。
这句讲的是一个比较粗线条的妈妈，动作描写完整地描述了这位妈妈下车时及下车后的表现，即：
下车=下车+笑+跳
这个训练过程，需要我们仔细观察，结合一丢丢的语文功底，并进行合理联想，并多多积累动词。同时，这也为我们提供了两种构造动作链条的句式：
1. A, B and C（连词连接动词们）
2. 使用非谓语
Part1 动作三连结构（A, B and C结构）
我们先看一下“A, B and C结构”。下面我用三个句子来说明这个结构，每个例子我将停顿三秒钟，正在听这个课程的你，你可以抓住这宝贵的三秒钟，快速思考，如果是自己来写，会怎么写？如果刚开始觉得有困难，可以先想中文思路。
第一句：“男孩们跳入湖中嬉戏”
想一想：跳入湖中，这个动作前面或后面会有哪些动作？
跳入湖里嬉戏 = 冲向湖边 + 脱掉衣服 + 跳入水中
The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water.
第二句，“她抱住儿子”
想一想：抱住儿子，这个动作前面或后面会有哪些动作？
抱住儿子 = 冲向前 + 蹲下 + 一把抱住
She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms.
第三句，“这个歌手唱歌”
想一想：歌手唱歌，这个动作前面或后面会有哪些动作？
歌手唱歌 = 扫视观众 + 深吸一口气 + 开始演唱
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
Part2 非谓语结构
下面仍然用三种方式和三个句子来说明这种描写动作的句子结构，每个例子我仍然停顿三秒钟。
第一种句子模式：-ing现在分词,凸显同一对象同时发生不同的动作。
第1个例句，“老人静坐”
老人静坐=坐在夕阳下 + 看报纸 + 听广播
The old man sat under the sunset, reading the newspaper and listening to the radio.
第二种句子模式：having done 表现动作先后关系
第2个例句，“没有买到票”
想一想：“买票”这个动作前面或后面会有哪些动作？
没有买到票= 排了很久队 + 被告知票卖完了
Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out.
第三种句子模式. -ed过去分词凸显被动
第3个例句，“孩子们哭了”
想一想：“哭”这个动作前面或后面会有哪些动作？或者因为什么原因让孩子哭
感动哭了= 被感动 + 哭了
Deeply moved by the story, the children began to cry.
Part3 时间状语从句
如when，while，as，before，after引导的时间状语从句
①When I arrived there, I walked to the door and knocked.
② As I waited at the stop, I heard a big noise.
Part4 混合结构
动作链可以和情感，环境，心理，语言等结合，形成动作面。
①Burning with anger, he glared at me with his big frightening eyes , yelling, “You’re such an idiot.”
此处的burning with anger是情感描写，glare和yell是动作链，同时将动作和语言描写结合在了一起，形成了饱满的动作面，属于高分表达。
②As night was beginning to fall, Jane saton the grass, staring at the vast sky, frightened and ravenous饥饿的.
此处将环境描写，动作描写以及情感描写结合在一起，形成了饱满的动作面。
Part5 高考真题句中的动作链
2016.10浙江卷
She ate some berries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. 她吃了一些浆果，然后沿着小溪走着，希望能找到一个合适的地方来引导直升机。
She struggled to her feet and headed for the stream. After having some barriers and stream water Jane walked slowly to an open area to wait for her rescue.
她挣扎着站起来，向小溪走去。在遇到了一些障碍和水流后，简慢慢地走到一个开阔的区域，等待她的救援。
2016.10浙江卷
In no timedid Jane rush to the rock,climb onto it and waver her yellow blouse madly.
简并没有冲到岩石上，疯狂地摇晃着她的黄色衬衫。
2017.6浙江卷
Seeing the car disappear, Mac and his friends got on the bicycles and continued heading for Alaska.
看到汽车消失了，麦克和他的朋友们骑上了自行车，继续前往阿拉斯加。
2017.6浙江卷
They jumped off their bicycles, took out the knives they had taken with and approached the wolf inch by inch.他们跳下自行车，拿出随身携带的刀，一寸一寸地走近狼。
2017.6浙江卷
It turned around and spotted Mac’s friends.它转过身来，发现了麦克的朋友们。
2017.6浙江卷
Facing the four strong men, the wolf might feel threatened, starting to withdraw.面对这四个强壮的人，狼可能会感到受到威胁，开始撤退。
2017.6浙江卷
Soon it ran off into the forest and disappeared in the distance.很快，它跑进了森林里，消失在远处。
2017.6浙江卷
Seeing the wolf and the bicycle lying on the ground, they instantly realized what had happened.
2017.11浙江卷
Calling out David and me, she got off the car，laughed and danced around. 她喊着大卫和我，下车，笑着跳。
2017.11浙江卷
Sitting under the dark blue sky around the camp fire, we talked and laughed. 我们坐在篝火周围的深蓝色天空下，聊又笑。
2017.11浙江卷
We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains and overlooked deep valleys. 我们穿过大河和广阔的平原，爬上高山，俯瞰着深深的山谷。
2018.6浙江卷
My dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.我和爸爸戴上新的牛仔帽，骑上马，慢慢地向群山走去。
2018.6浙江卷
He kept silent, listened very carefully ,took my horse rein and led the way. 他保持沉默，非常仔细地听着，抓住我的缰绳，领着路走了下去。
2020.1浙江卷 原文
He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions (情绪) get the better of him. 他站起来，拥抱着父母，微笑着，试图不让自己的情绪（情绪）战胜他。
2020.1浙江卷 原文
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. 男孩把最后一个包举到肩上，露出了灿烂的微笑。
2020.1浙江卷
That afternoon, the three played happily in the living room, tossing toys here and there. 那天下午，三人在客厅里愉快地玩耍，到处扔玩具。
2020.7浙江卷
We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. 我们对着熊大喊大叫，用力打花盆，然后向空中发射空弹。
2020.7浙江卷
I gave her the pepper spray, broke a branch from a nearby tree and held it tightly in my hand. 我把胡椒喷雾给了她，折断了附近一棵树上的一根树枝，紧紧地握在手里。
2021.1浙江卷
Dad rushed in, stood still, and then burst into laughter. 爸爸冲了进来，静静地站着，然后突然大笑起来。
2021.6新高考一卷
Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.杰夫把两个鸡蛋掰成一个盘子，并加入了一些牛奶。
Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.杰玛找到了面包，把鸡蛋里放了两片。接下来，杰夫打开了第二个炉子的燃烧器，给煎锅加热。
Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.
詹娜把烧过的面包扔进水槽里，放进另一片面包里。读后续写：动作与情感分类速记
Part1:“看”的动作描写 1
Part2:“笑”的动作描写 4
Part3：脚上动作描写 9
Part4：哭的动作描写 11
Part5: 手上动作描写 16
Part6: 情感描写 20
Part1:“看”的动作描写
1.She stared at him in disbelief, shaking her head.
她摇着头，狐疑地看着他。
2.I saw the deaf kid sitting there just looking at me as the bullies pulled me down from the wall.
当一群恶棍正在把我从墙上扒拉下来时，我看到那个聋哑儿童就坐在那儿并且看着我。
3.When he finished, he raised / lifted his eyes and looked out the window.
说罢，他抬起眼睛并望向窗外。
4.We all gather in front of the television, hoping to catch a glance / glimpse of his face.
我们都聚在电视机前，希望能看一眼他的脸。
5.I glanced back over my shoulder to make sure that no one was following me.
我回头瞟了一眼以确保没有人跟踪我。
6.Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded doorbell.
看到没有人注意到我们，我放下圣诞礼物并且敲了敲门铃。
7.There are two kinds of things in the world that can't be gazed at directly. One is the sun, the other is human nature.
这世上唯有太阳和人心不可直视。
8. The guard had orders to shoot on sight.
士兵接到命令，一看到人就开枪
9.We lost sight of the boat in the fog.
由于大雾我们看不见那条船了。
10.She had spotted a man pacing down the hall.
他看见一个大男人在客厅里踱步。
11.Jalil’s eyes lifted slowly, met Mariam’s, paused for a moment, then dropped.
贾利勒慢慢抬起眼睛，看见了玛利亚的眼睛，停了一会儿，然后垂了下来
12.A big leafy tree came into view at some distance.
远处有一棵枝繁叶茂的大树映入眼帘。
13.She turned her eyes to me when I tapped her shoulder.
当我轻拍她的肩膀时，她把目光转向我。
14. Then he jumped up, eyes twinkling as her ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars.
然后他跳起来，他眼睛闪闪发光着跑去拿他那珍贵的火柴盒车。
15. I watched helplessly, as the woman felt more and more frustrated and hopeless.
那个女人越来越沮丧和绝望，我绝望的看着她。
16. Her eyes fell on the photos of her and me at my fourth birthday party.
她的目光落在我和她四岁生日聚会上的照片上。
17.Our glances met briefly in the mirror and slid away.
我们的目光在镜子里相遇，然后快速闪躲开。
18. When the students stepped off the bus, James's eyes widened in surprise.
当学生们走下公共汽车时，詹姆斯惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。
19. We recognized the famous celebrity upon his arrival.
这名人一来我们就认出来了。
20.She fixed her pale blue eyes on her father's.
她淡蓝色的眼睛紧紧盯着他父亲的眼睛。
21.With her eyes glued to the phone, it was not until the teacher patted on her shoulder that she realized teacher stood in front of her.
她一直盯着手机，直到老师拍了拍他的肩膀她才意识到老师正站在他面前。
22.Sylvia climbed the stairs, and though she could spot Jalil out of the corner of her eye walking parallel to her, she did not look out of the window.
西尔维亚爬上楼梯，虽然她能从眼角看到贾利勒和她并肩而行，但她没有向窗外看。
23.Swallowing hard,I stared into Meghan's eyes for a long moment, wondering how I could cope with it.
我使劲吞咽，盯着梅根的眼睛看了很久，在想如何处理。
24.The student who had just been reprimanded by the teacher glared at his teacher.
那位刚刚被老师训斥的学生狠狠瞪着他的老师
25. It is impolite to stare at others.
直视别人的眼睛是不礼貌的。
26.My father looked at me straight in the eye and hold fast to my hands.
我父亲直勾勾地盯着我的眼睛并且牢牢抓住我的双手。
27.She was anxiously scanning the newspaper to see if her criminal history was spotted.
她焦急地翻阅报纸，看看他的罪行是否被曝光。
28.She is fed up with being ogled by strange men.
她已经受够了被那些图谋不轨的男人色眯眯地盯着看个不停。
29.She peeped at him through her fringe.
她透过刘海窥视着他。
Part2:“笑”的动作描写
1.smile v.&n.笑
(最普通也是最常用的)
smile at sb. / sth. 对..笑
smile with relief 宽慰地笑
smile sweetly 嫣然一笑
smile faintly 微微一笑
smile broadly 咧嘴一笑
give a faint smile 微微一笑
give a soft smile 莞尔一笑（等上）
give a charming smile 迷人（醉人）的微笑
give a flattering smile 献媚的笑
give a fawning smile 谄笑（也可以做wear a xx smile）
give an affected smile 装腔作势的微笑（诡笑）
give a false smile 皮笑肉不笑；假笑
be radiant with smile 笑容可掬（形容笑容满面，有时可以用褒义，有时候也可以用贬义形容人赔笑）
smile from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴
crack a smile 绽放笑容
force a smile 强颜欢笑
squeeze a smile 强颜欢笑
laugh a hearty laugh 开怀大笑
2.Laugh v.&n. 大笑
(比smile程度深；laugh虽然有名词意，但名词一般用laughter)
laugh a hearty laugh 开怀大笑
laugh heartily 开怀大笑（注意这里是heartily而不是heartly，heartly是衷心地，heartily是表示劲头十足，用来表程度）
laugh oneself to death 笑得要死
laugh oneself's head off 笑掉大牙
laugh people around into a better humour 笑的把周围人都逗得很开心
give a horse laugh 一阵狂笑
burst into laughter 突然大笑起来
burst into gales of laughter 突然狂笑起来
explode with laughter 哄堂大笑
roars of laughter 大笑
laugh it off 一笑而过
laugh in the breeze 迎风而笑
laugh behind their hands 用手捂着嘴笑
scream with laughter 笑的前仰后合
let out a loud laughter 大声笑出来
Roars of laughter exploded all around the common room, people clutched their cheeks and held on to nearby sofas for support.
休息室里爆发出一阵大笑，大家捂着腮帮子，纷纷笑倒在沙发上。
3.Grin 露齿而笑；咧着嘴笑
(笑口开得更大一些，裂开嘴笑)
grin amiably 亲切地微笑
grin with delight 高兴的咧嘴而笑
grin from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴
grin a welcom 咧嘴一笑以表欢迎
give a wry/sheepish grin 咧嘴苦笑；尴尬的笑
sheepish / i p / adj.尴尬的，难为情的
wry /ra / adj.苦涩的（也可以拿来修饰smile，表苦笑）
He replied with a wry smile.
他苦笑着回答道。
4.chuckle v.轻声地笑；窃笑；偷笑
(其实你们也可以理解为傻乐)
chuckle at sb. / sth. 对某事偷笑
5.snicker v.&n. 窃笑
(不太礼貌的笑)
a chorus of snickers 一阵嗤笑
6.Giggle v.&n. 咯咯笑；傻笑
a fit of the giggles 一阵笑声
7.roar v.放声大笑；喧哗
(有震耳欲聋之感)
set the table in a roar 使哄堂大笑
roar with laughter 哄然大笑
roars of laughter
8.beam v.笑容满面
(个人觉得这个是含义比较幸福的笑)
beam at sb. 对某人笑
beam from ear to ear 开怀大笑；笑容满面
beam with joy 笑逐颜开
beam with smiles 笑逐颜开
beam with satisfaction 满意地微笑
9.嘲笑
laugh at 嘲笑
sneer at 嘲笑；讥笑；嗤笑
jeer at 嘲笑；奚落
make fun of sb. 嘲笑某人
mock vt.嘲笑；（模仿）嘲弄
ridicule vt.嘲笑（及物动词，后面直接连嘲笑的物或人；也同时是ridiculous的词根）
deride vt.嘲弄；嘲笑
He sneered at people who liked wearing hat.
他嘲笑喜欢戴帽子的人。
Part3：脚上动作描写
1. In no time Mack jump into the car.
麦克飞快地跳进车里。
2.She paused suddenly and stared at me.
他突然停下来盯着我看。
3.He sprang to his feet and rushed to give me a bear hug.
他突然跳起来，冲过来给了我一个熊抱。
4.The cat shot across the garden.
猫飞快地穿过花园。
5.Steve keeps jogging around the garden on a regular basis.
史蒂夫经常在花园里慢跑。
6.He marched into the kitchen without knocking.
他没有敲门就大步走进厨房。
7.Sarah crawled desperately around in the circles.
莎拉在圈子里面拼命地爬来爬去。
8.My sister bought some ice-cream and strolled to home.
我妹妹买了些冰淇淋，然后慢悠悠地走回家。
9.The burglar sneaked into the kitchen and stole a dozen eggs.
窃贼潜入厨房并偷走了一打鸡蛋。
10.Jane always got home at midnight and crept back to her room.
简总是到深夜才回家，然后悄摸摸地回到房间。
11.We leaped over the stream.
我们从小溪跳过去。
12.Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.
丽萨在我面前稳稳地站着。
13.She managed to climb onto it and waited pationtly.
她尽力爬上去并且耐心地等待着。
14.A man in black is following behind bill.
一个穿黑衣男子正在尾随比尔。
15.She had twisted her ankle and was limping.
她扭伤了脚踝，一瘸一瘸地走着。
16.Wandering around the Central Park is not a bad way to relax us from heavy homework.
在中央公园逛一逛也不失为一个帮助我们从繁忙课业重放松一下的好方法。
17.I tried to edge away until I was clear of the crowd.
我试图躲开人群，直到我离开人群。
18.We were stumbling around in the dark looking for a candle.
我在黑暗中跌跌撞撞，四处寻找蜡烛。
19.She jumped to her feet when she heard this amazing news.
当她听到这个惊人的消息，她突然跳起来。
20.When the mother chatting happily with her customer, her daughter is stamping / tapping her feet impatiently to imply it's time to go.
当母亲高兴地和顾客聊天时，女儿不耐烦地跺脚，暗示该走了。
21.They dragged him out of the room with his feet kicking in the air.
他们把他从房间里面拖出来，他的脚还一直在空中乱踢。
22.She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents.
她缓慢地移动着他的脚步，当他不情愿地跟着他父母。
23.My feet slipped as I was about to shoot and I missed the ball.
我正要投篮时滑倒了，然后没投中。
24.Then her eyes widened in surprise as she saw Helen rise to his feet.
当她看到海伦站起来时，惊讶地睁大了眼睛。
Part4：哭的动作描写
1.tears n.眼泪
be in tears 哭了
burst into tears 放声大哭
have tears in one's eyes 热泪盈眶；哭唧唧
be close to tears 快哭了
be filled with tears 泪流满面
be brimming with tears 泪流满面
be wet with tears 泪流满面
be in floods of tears 大哭；泪如泉涌（超多眼泪）
be chocked with tears 失声痛哭
move sb. to tears 使某人感动至流泪
tears well up in one's eyes 泪如泉涌（well up 涌起；涌出）
mist n.薄雾; 水汽 vi.&vt. 泪水模糊
one's eyes be misted with tears 某人双银因泪水而模糊
His eyes (were) misted with tears.
(mist作动词是既可以及物也可以不及物，所以加不加be动词都算对)
blur vi.&vt. 使变得模糊不清
Tears blurred his eyes.
His eyes blurred with tears.
be dimmed by tears 眼睛因泪水而模糊
leave sb to one's tears 让某人独自流泪
He walked away indifferently and left me to my tears.
他冷漠的走开了，独剩我一人空流泪。
sb. melt into tears 某人开始泪流满面
tears roll down one's cheeks 眼泪从脸颊滑落
tears stream down one's cheeks 眼泪从脸颊滑落
tears run down one's cheeks 眼泪从脸颊滑落
bring tears to somebody's eyes 哭了
be on the verge of tears 快要哭了
reduce sb. to tears 使某人流泪
2.water v.眼含泪水
make sb. water 让某人哭起来
have a lump in one’s throat
turn on the water works
His eyes watered from thick smoke.
它的双眼因浓烟而充满泪水
3.cry v.&n.哭泣
cry one's eyes out 痛哭不止
have a good cry 好好哭一场
4.weep v.&n.无声地流泪(通常因悲伤)
began / start to weep uncontrollably 不由自主地哭起来
have a weep 痛哭一场
Sometimes you feel better after a good weep.
有时候你痛痛快快哭上一场就会觉得好受些。
laugh and weep all at once 哭笑不得
5.sob v.呜咽；啜泣；呜呜地哭
start to sob uncontrollably
sob one's heart out 痛彻心扉地哭
The room was silent except for her sobbing.
房间里静悄悄的，只有她的啜泣声。
6.whimper 啜泣；呜咽
She lay at the bottom of the stairs, whimpering in pain.
她躺在楼梯底部，痛得呜咽着。
7.mewl /mju l/ v.低声啜泣
The newborn baby is mewling in the Nursery.
新生婴儿在育儿仓里低声哭着。
8.snivel / sn vl/ v.(令人厌烦的)哭诉；一把鼻涕一把泪的哭
Billy started to snivel. His mother smacked his hand.
比利抽抽搭搭地哭了起来。妈妈在他的手上打了一下。
9.whine /wa n/ v.哭哭啼啼；哭嚷
‘I want to go home,’ whined Toby.
“我要回家。”托比哼哼唧唧地说。
10.squall /skw l/ v.嚎啕大哭；大声啼哭
There was an infant squalling in the back of the church.
有个婴儿在教堂后部大声啼哭。
11.wail /we l/ v.(因悲伤或疼痛)哭号;恸哭
'Now look what you've done!' Shirley wailed.
“看看你干的好事！”雪莉哭诉道。
12.blubber / bl b (r)/ v.大声哭
He start to blubber like a child.
他开始哭的跟孩子似的。
词汇辨析：
To sob means to cry noisily, taking sudden, sharp breaths.
sob意为啜泣、抽噎。
To wail means to cry in a loud high voice.
wail 意为号啕大哭。
To whimper means to cry making low, weak noises.
whimper意为小声啜泣、呜咽。
To weep ( literary or formal ) means to cry quietly for a long time.
weep（文学或正式用语）意为饮泣。
Part5: 手上动作描写
1.Pointed at by my math teacher, I was chocked.
我的数学老师指着我，我吓坏了
2.I galanced down at my mother's hands folded across her purse, which was resting on her lap.
我兴高采烈地趴在母亲的手上，手叠在她腿上的钱包上。
3.Mike was watching a horror movie when his trembling hands almost knocked over the coke.
迈克在看恐怖电影时，他颤抖的双手几乎把可乐打翻了。
4.He took a firm grip of my arm and marched towards the door.
他紧紧抓住我的胳膊，朝门口走去。
5.Tom knelt down and patted the dog.
汤姆跪下来拍了拍狗。
6.Make sure you keep hold of my hand when we cross the road.
过马路时一定要牵着我的手。
7.He tightened his hold, refusing to let her go.
他紧紧抓住她，不让她走。
8.He grasped the rope tightly with both hands.
他双手紧紧抓住绳子。
9.She smiled and held out / reached out a hand in wecome.
她微笑着伸出手来。
10.He slid his hands into his pockets and pull out some change.
他把手伸进口袋，掏出一些零钱。
11.When I got to the cafe, I was seeing Bob waving his arms towards me.
当我到咖啡馆时，正看到鲍勃在向我打招呼
12.He sat carefully with his head in his hands.
他双手抱着头，小心翼翼地坐着。
13.She shrugged and hold / spread out her hands.
她耸耸肩，伸出双手。
14.When I was about to leave, the deaf kid made one of those hand signs at me.
我正要走的时候，那个聋子朝我做了一个手势。
15.I make a dash for the wall and try to climb over in order to escape.
我冲向墙，试图翻越墙逃跑。
16.The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in my hand.
那人拿起麻袋，把手伸进口袋，把四枚硬币放在我手里。
17.The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and placed the parcel in my hands.
那人用牛皮纸轻轻地把礼物包好，然后把包裹放在我手里。
18.Stunned, I took up and gave her an awkward hug.
我吓了一跳，尴尬地抱住她。
19.Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.
然后，他紧握着铁罐朝商店走去。
20.He patted my head.
他拍了拍我的头。
21.She stroked my cheek gently with her hand.
她用手轻轻地抚摸我的脸颊。
22.He took the pen and stabbed the balloon.
他拿起笔刺向了气球。
23.Jack stood silently with his arms folded / crossed.
杰克双手交叉，一声不吭地站着。
24.The class clapped warmly as Mr.Lee presented me with the reward.
当李先生给我颁奖的时候全班轰然鼓掌。
25.He was squeezing my wrist so hard that it ached.
他使劲捏我的手腕，弄疼了。
26.She grabbed her briefcase and ran to the bus stop.
她抓起公文包跑到公共汽车站。
27.Please handle the goods with great care.
请小心搬运货物。
28.Stevie grasp the knob and yell at me loudly.
斯蒂夫抓住把手，对我大声喊叫。
29.Bob always keep his feet on the ground, so he can always seize the opportunity he encounter.
鲍勃总是脚踏实地，所以他总能抓住他遇到的机会。
30.Bob dragged a big box into the trunk.
鲍勃拖着一个大箱子进入了后备箱。
31.He push his mother away and back into home.
他推开母亲，并返回家中。
32.He wagged a disapproving finger.
他不赞成地摇了摇手指。
33.Steve shakes hands with others like a gentleman.
史蒂夫像个绅士一样和别人握手。
34.He catch my hand suddenly and pull me into his arms.
他突然抓住我的手，把我拉到他的怀里。
35.They walked arm in arm in the avenue.
他们手挽着手走在林荫道里。
36.I cupped my hand firmly over the phone so they couldn't hear me.
我用手紧紧捂住电话，这样他们就听不见我说话了。
37.The thief snatched her purse and ran away.
小偷抢了她的钱包逃跑了。
38.I held fast to the railing in case the strong wind blew me away.
我牢牢地抓住了栏杆以防这强烈的风把我吹跑。
39.Jack get a firm grip of Rose's hand and looks at her affectionately.
杰克紧紧抓住了肉丝的手并深情地望向她。
40.Then she threw her arms around his neck and really began to cry.
然后她搂着他的脖子，真的哭了起来。
41.Grab hold of the rope and pull yourself up.
抓住绳子爬上来。
Part6: 情感描写
一、开心
Her eyes twinkled with merriment.
她高兴得双眸闪闪发亮。
Mack went into raptures and burst into laughter.
麦克欣喜若狂，大笑起来。
A ripple of laughter went through the crowd.
人群中传来一阵笑声
Lily's laughter lingered in the room for a long time.
丽丽的笑声萦绕在房间里久久不能散去。
Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the letter.
当她打开信时，她的手激动得发抖。
After heard this satisfactory outcome, Steve felt a sense of joy and happiness surging through him.
在听到这个令人满意的结果后，史蒂夫感到一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。
Overwhelmed with gaiety, he jumped up and ran excitedly around the tree.
他欣喜若狂，跳起来并绕着那棵大树跑了几圈。
In his excitement he couldn't remember her name.
他兴奋得甚至把他自己的名字都给忘了。
Rose felt blissful as if she was in possession of everything.
罗丝感到很幸福，好像她拥有了全世界一样。
She was carried away by pleasure.
她被快乐冲昏了头脑。
I nodded, with a big smile spreading across my cheek.
我点点头，脸上露出灿烂的笑容。
She couldn't conceal the excitement and rushed home to tell her mother the good news.
她掩饰不住兴奋，急忙回家告诉母亲这个好消息。
She is always ready to help others in need and always wears shining smile on her face, so many classmates are willing to make friends with her.
她总是乐于助人并且脸上总是挂着灿烂的笑容，因此很多同学都愿意和她交朋友。
I'm over the moon.
我太开心了
It is easy to infer that he is in rapture through his big smile.
从他那灿烂的笑容很容易推断出他是兴高采烈的。
He woke up that morning with a feeling of excitement.
他一起床就感到很兴奋。
Her excitement grew as the day of the wedding came nearer.
随着结婚的日子越来越近，她越来越兴奋。
I am overflowing with happiness.
我洋溢着幸福。
Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom's face.
每次我们提到旅途中的趣事，妈妈的脸上就会浮现出愉快的笑容
A sudden wave of joy swept over her.
一阵喜悦突然涌上她的心头。
She gazed up at him, glowing with happiness.
她抬头看着他，脸上洋溢着幸福的光芒。
The children were filled with excitement at the thought of visiting Disneyland.
孩子们一想到要去迪斯尼乐园就兴奋不已。
My heart is as sweet as honey.
我的心甜的像蜜一样。
Pleasure welled up inside her heart.
她心中涌起喜悦。
Amusement gleamed in his eyes.
他眼中流露出愉快的深情.
Mother's eyes flash across the surprise, open smile ripples.
母亲的眼里闪过惊喜，笑容荡漾开。
She come up to me, with a smile shining like a diamond.
她带着灿烂的笑容走到我面前。
二、悲伤
There were tears in her eyes, but her voice was steady.
她眼里含着泪水，但声音依然很稳定。
I was seized with sadness.
我伤心欲绝。
A flash of grief came upon me.
一阵悲伤袭身而来。
His lip started to tremble and then he started to cry.
他的嘴唇开始颤抖，然后哭了起来。
He sigh with despair at the thought of all the opportunities he had missed.
一想到他错过的所有机会，他绝望地叹了口气。
Tears rolled down her cheeks.
泪水从他的脸颊滑落。
Charles was overcome with grief.
查尔斯悲痛欲绝。
He looked mournful, even near to tears.
他看起来很悲伤，几乎要流泪了。
There was a lump in my throat and I didn't speak because I knew I would cry.
我哽咽了，没有说话，因为我知道我会哭的。
It's no good turning on the water works. You can't stay home from school. 你哭也没用，因为你不能逃学.
I left quickly, not wanting to break down in front of the children.
我赶快离开了，因为我不想在孩子们面前大哭。
The heavy blow almost made her cry.
这沉重的打击几乎要把她弄哭了。
Cecil came round later, crying his eyes out, asking me to forigive him.
塞西尔后来来了，哭得很伤心，请求我原谅他。
Joe's eyes were watering from the smoke that filled the room.
乔的眼睛正被满屋的烟雾熏得淌眼泪。
His face was cast a cloud of gloom after heard this news.
听到这个消息后，他的脸上蒙上了一层阴云。
He nagged and complained, and reduced Louise to tears.
他唠唠叨叨，不停地抱怨，使路易斯不禁流泪。
Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears but Paul didn't realize that.
她的手在颤抖，她都快要哭出来了，但保罗一点也没有意识到这一切。
The old song always brought tears to my eyes.
那首老歌总是让我伤感得流泪。
Bill fought back tears and tried to comfort Sarah's mother.
比尔抑制住泪水，并试图安慰桑拉的母亲。
He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
她静静地站着，泪水顺着脸颊淌下来。
Jane turned to me with tears in her eyes, and begged me to help her.
简眼里含着泪水打转，恳求我帮帮他。
Most of us were in tears by the time he'd finished his story.
他讲完故事时，我们大多数人都已经泪流满面。
I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.
我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
Bob sat ther with glumy looks on his face.
鲍勃坐在那儿，带着一脸忧郁。
Carol is a bit down in the dumps because she failed her final exam.
卡罗尔很难受，因为她期末考不及格。
He got a face like a wet weekend.
他的脸像下了一周的雨，愁云惨雾的
Feeling down / upset / sad / blue, please just leave me alone.
情绪低落/沮丧/悲伤/忧郁，让我静静。
These days she is in a bad mood.
这些天她心情不好。
三、紧张
She laughed to hide her nervousness.
她笑着掩饰自己的紧张。
As he squeezed my hand tightly I got butterflies in my stomach.
他紧紧抓住我的手时，我好紧张。
He waited with baited breath for the test results.
他屏住呼吸等待考试结果。
His blood ran cold when she didn’t call.
他没有打电话过来，他非常害怕。
The magician had the audience on the edge of their seats by the end of the show.
直到表演的最后一秒，那个魔术师都紧扣观众心弦。
You shouldn’t have done that. My heart skipped a beat.
你不该那么做的，我吓得心都漏了一拍。
I become sweating bullets on the grounds that I heard a sound in the bush.
因为听到灌木丛里面有声响，我吓得汗像子弹一样大。
When I saw him passing by the teacher, I broke out for a cold sweat for him.
当我看到他从老师身边经过时，我真为他捏一把冷汗。
四、恐惧
I lay there quivering with fear.
我躺在那里害怕得发抖。
Frozen with fear, he was too scared to move an inch.
他吓得僵住了，吓得寸步难行。
Numb with a blank mind, they couldn't let out a scream anymore with palms sweating.
由于头脑一片空白，他们几乎发不出声并且手掌一直出汗。
I become spooked from ghost stories and scary movies.
我被鬼故事和恐怖电影吓坏了。
Last night, I dreamed about being chased by an angry dog. I really had my heart in my mouth.
昨晚我梦到被一条疯狗追，吓得我心都提到嗓子眼了。
That loud noise scared me out of my wit.
那声巨响把我的魂都吓没了。
With heart fluttering with terror, without hesitation they rushed to the door, opened it and slammedly shut the wooden door as promptly as they could.
他们吓得心怦怦直跳，毫不犹豫地冲向门口，打开门，尽可能迅速地关上木门。
That dog really scared the pants of me.
那条狗真的把我吓坏了。
The horror movie made my hair stand on end.
那部恐怖电影使我毛骨悚然。
I was almost scared to death when there were intermittent footsteps outside the window.
我差点吓死了当窗户外有断断续续的脚步声。
She trembled all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她浑身颤抖，如坐针毡。
Judy was scared silly, as she said.
朱迪被吓傻了，正如她所说。
It's really creeping me out, I can't sleep at all.
它真的让我毛骨悚然，我根本睡不着。
My face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
我脸色苍白，站在那儿舌头打结。
Judy said I should try Bungee, but I had cold feet.
朱迪说我应该体验一次蹦极，但我就是不敢。
Stop shaking in your boots, Bob. I'm not going to fire you.
别提心吊胆的，鲍勃，我不会炒了你的。
五、愤怒
A look of pure hatred flashed across her face.
她脸上闪过一种仇恨的表情。
His voice was quivering / trembling with rage.
他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
Sobbing with rage, Carol was taken to the hospital.
卡罗尔气得抽泣起来，被送进了医院。
His face was red with rage.
他气得脸都红了。
I was fraught with almost insupportable rage.
我心中充满了几乎无法忍受的愤怒。
The teacher flipped his lid when the student didn't know the answer to a very elementary question.
当这个学生连一个很基本的问题都不会时，老师大发雷霆。
I was seized by fury.
我勃然大怒。
I flew into a rage.
我勃然大怒。
His face was gloomy with anger.
他气得脸色阴沉.
He said nothing and left the room in a huff.
他啥也没说怒气冲冲离开了房间。
He got hot under the collar because he was framed.
他被人陷害了，所以很生气。
If you blow up at someone, you lose your temper and shout at them.
如果你对某人发火，你就会发脾气，对他们大喊大叫。
Mack suddenly blew his stack when he was teased by his classmates again and again.
麦克突然大发雷霆因为他被他的同学一次又一次地捉弄。
George's father will raise the roof when he hear what his son has done.
如果乔治的父亲知道乔治做了什么，他一定会大发雷霆。
I almost lost my temper when I saw the scene.
当我看到这幅景象我差点就发脾气了。
六、感动
Overwhelming with heartfelt gratitude, I coudn't utter a word.
充满感激，无语凝噎。
Your timely help touched the tenderness of my deepest heart.
你及时的帮助触动了我内心深处的温柔。
What made me impressive are those warm memories.
让我印象深刻的是那些温馨的回忆。
A sense of gratitude can acknowledging our interdependent existence.
感恩之心可以承认我们相互依赖的存在。
With tears streaming down her face, she....
泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，她.....
Moved / Touched deeply, we.....
被深深感动，我们....
Jane just like a dawn in my life, illuminating my whole world.
简就像我生命中的曙光，照亮了我的整个世界。
A sense of gratitude and indebtedness to others is and important wellspring of a generous and virtuous life.
对他人的感激和感激是慷慨和高尚生活的重要源泉。
The poet said: spring flowers to the door pushed open, I said: Thanksgiving to the door pushed open the living.
诗人说：春天的花朵把门推开了，我说：感恩把打开了生活的门。
七、嫉妒
She could see that all the other girls were green with envy.
她看得出来其他女孩都满含嫉妒
I felt a rush of envy when I saw them together.
只要看他他们在一起我就嫉妒地不行。
A rush of jealousy swept through / over her.
他被嫉妒冲昏了头脑。读后续写：救人型
Part1：经典例文（铁轨救婴儿） 1
Part2：救人故事构造三部曲 4
第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪） 4
第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负） 5
第三步：救人之后（感激+升华） 6
Part3：灵活应用 7
例1：河中救人 7
例2：海边救人 9
读后续写很多时候会涉及自然灾害与防范、安全常识与自我保护的话题，会经常涉及到危难之际，挺身而出救助他人的故事。在这个话题中有时会写到危难之际，利用所学急救知识，成功救人脱离生命危险的故事；有时会写到楼内突发火灾，警察/群众舍己救人的故事；有时会写到群众/路人遇到有人不幸溺水，鼓足勇气跳入水中施救的的故事。
Part1：经典例文（铁轨救婴儿）
It was 7 a.m. on 12 May 1998.Mohr had already scanned several packages listing dangerous materials aboard the train. The presence of gas would mean taking extra precaution when braking the 6,200-ton train. With explosive gas on board, it would be disastrous if the train came off the track. After a final inspection, Mohr jumped aboard. He was heading east, into a sun that promised a beautiful day for their 276-km run to Peru, Indiana.
At around noon that day, Marshall prepared to tackle some yardwork. It was a beautiful day for it, she thought, gazing past the houses across the street. Some 45 meters away, railroad tracks shone in the sun.
Marshall began working in a patch (地块） of soil. Sitting next to her, cheerfully running her hands through dirt, was her 19-month-old daughter, Emily. For a while, she kept turning to check on Emily, who played close at hand. Eventually, though, Marshall's absorption in her work became total.
Mohr approached the town where Marshall lived at about 1:45 p.m. and slowed the train to the 40-kmph speed limit. He activated the flashing lights and warning bell. Mohr had been through the town hundreds of times, but he grew extra cautious rounding the first curve.
As the train came out of the curve, Mohr noticed a small dot on the track about 200 meters ahead. He thought it might be a dog. Although it was against the rules to do so in the town, he began lightly tapping his horn. "Come on, puppy, move," he urged.
The toots (嘟嘟响） of a train whistle startled (使受惊吓） Marshall from her yardwork. That's odd, she thought. They don't usually blow the whistle through town. She glanced over to check her daughter, and her heart skipped. Emily was nowhere in sight.
Now, as the train approached within 100 meters of the object on the rail, Mohr narrowed his eyes, trying to make out what exactly was lying ahead. Then shock ran through him like electric current.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1
"My God!" he yelled as a tiny face turned towards him. “It's a baby!"
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Para 2
The child was now just 36 meters ahead.
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【答案】
Para 1
"My God!" he yelled as a tiny face turned towards him. “It's a baby!" Mohr had an instant decision to make, applying full emergency brakes with half the train still wrapped around a curve. He had to risk an emergency stop. Hard as he try, the train kept moving just as a cat saw a fish, whose enticing smell attracted the cat to approach the baby.Meanwhile, Marshall rushed towards her daughter, nervous but desperate, fearing the train would run into her beloved.
“我的上帝啊！”他像一张小脸转向他时大声喊道。“这是个婴儿！”莫尔立即做出了决定，实施了紧急刹车，一半的火车仍然绕在弯道上。他不得不冒着紧急停车的危险。在他的努力中，火车继续移动，就像一只猫看到了一条鱼，它诱人的气味吸引了猫接近婴儿。与此同时，马歇尔冲向紧张但绝望的女儿，担心火车会撞到她的爱人。
Para 2
The child was now just 36 meters ahead. Mohr pulled the brake with his whole efforts.The sound of wheels grinding against the rails rang through the sky. The situation was quite dangerous.As the train was almost stopped, he immediately opened the left door of the engine cab quickly and swiftly jumped from the moving train and ran back to the child. She lay crying by the tracks.A great relief sweeping over Mohr, he lifted her from the dirt hurriedly. It was only then that Mohr noticed the train had stopped and Marshall was just coming to her baby.With the baby in his arms,Mohr began to walk towards the mother.
这个孩子现在只有前面36米远。莫尔竭尽全力地拉下了刹车。车轮撞击铁轨的声音响彻天空。情况很危险。当火车快停下来时，他立即打开驾驶室的左门，迅速从行驶的火车上跳下来，跑回孩子身边。她躺在铁轨边哭泣。他使莫尔松了一口气，急忙把她从泥土里抬了起来。直到那时，莫尔才注意到火车已经停了下来，马歇尔正要来接她的孩子。莫尔抱着孩子，开始向母亲走去。
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了火车司机Mohr，在一次驾驶火车全速前进时，他注意到远处的铁轨上有个黑点，他以为是一条狗，后来证实这个黑点是一个婴儿。他要在保证火车安全的情况下，救下这个婴儿。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我的上帝! ”当一张小脸转向他时，他大叫起来。“是个婴儿！”，可知，第一段可描写火车司机Mohr的心理感受及其采取的措施，同时可以描写婴儿妈妈Mashall的现场反应。
②由第二段首句内容“这时火车距离婴儿只有36米了。”可知，第二段可描写火车司机Mohr努力减速火车直至火车停下，然后救婴儿，最终婴儿平安得救。
2.续写线索：看见婴儿——决定刹车——跳车救孩子——孩子得救
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.做决定：make a decision/make up his mind/keep in mind that
②.刹车：pull the brake/stop the train with effort
③.救孩子：save the child/ rescue the child/save the baby's life
情绪类
焦急：anxious/have one's heart in one's mouth
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Mohr had an instant decision to make, applying full emergency brakes with half the train still wrapped around a curve. （applying...为现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. Hard as he try, the train kept moving just as a cat saw a fish, whose enticing smell attracted the cat to approach the baby.（as引导的让步状语从句，whose之后为非限制性定语从句）
Part2：救人故事构造三部曲
第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）
1、恶劣环境
（1）一到晚夏，池塘就会被绿色的起泡浮渣覆盖。有时候，池塘里冒出一阵强烈的难闻的味道。In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）. Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it.
（2）在池塘中间，冰面忽然露出了一条裂缝。
In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack.
（3）空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。A thick burning smell filled the air.
2、负面情绪：害怕
(1) Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless(无力的) as if we were broken tiny boats at the mercy of strong waves.
(2) Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind，
which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright(难以控制地发抖)
Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body (在身体涌动)
第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）
1、.挣扎努力
Tom looked thoughtful(若有所思)
“We need to think out a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head.(绞尽脑汁)
...,We swam tooth and nail (
spared no effort to
) (
tooth and nail
) (
spared no effort to
)(全力以赴地).
2. 救人有关的惊险场面描写
(1) The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water.
(2) I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass(像玻璃一样破裂). （浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
(3)As the coat became completely wet, it dragged me down(把我拖下水). I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
3实施救援的过程
“帮我把西蒙斯弄下车！”诺伍德对惊慌失措的朋友们大声喊道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
“Help me get Simmons out of the car!” Norwood yelled loudly to her friends, who were left in a panic. 诺伍德和朋友们把西蒙斯从车里拉了出来，把他放在一个安全并且离车有点远的地方。
尽管紧张而焦虑，诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来，对西蒙斯进行了急救。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to Simmons.
诺伍德和她的朋友们把西蒙斯放到平躺的位置，打开了她的呼吸道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
4、如释重负
Ensuing their safety, I felt a surge of triumph .(感到一阵胜利的喜悦)
Hearing the news, I couldn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)
It thrilled us to hear the good news (听到新消息很高兴).
On hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气), grinning merrily at each other.
第三步：救人之后（感激+升华）
1、感激
如果我没有得到急救，我就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
“If I had not been given first aid, I would have dead.” Simmons said to Norwood gratefully. Simmons showed her gratitude to Norwood, saying “It was you who came to my aid and saved my life.” 西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感谢，她说：“是你来帮助我，救了我一命。”（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
“谢谢你进入我的世界，我会永远记住你为我所做的。” 西蒙斯对诺伍德说。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
“Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.” Simmons whispered to Norwood.
2、升华句
(1) 花点时间来学习急救和心肺复苏术。拯救了生命，而且很有效。
Take some time to learn the knowledge of first aid. It saves lives, and it works.
(2) 这个故事表明，良好的急救知识真的可以起作用。
The story shows that a good knowledge of first aid can make a real difference.
(3) 每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。
Everyone should learn something about first aid, for every second will count in an emergency.
(4) 了解基础的急救知识有助于你对紧急情况作出迅速的反应。Knowing basic first-aid techniques will help you respond quickly to emergencies.
Part3：灵活应用
例1：河中救人
Boys like to be considered to be brave, but what kind of things can be considered to be brave It is not a question that can be answered by words, but by the actual deed. A boy with the name Henry gave us a good example. Ronny and Henry were two friends in the same class. They always played together and went home together. One day as Ronny and Henry were going home after school, they saw some people fighting in the street corner. Ronny said excitedly, “Some people are fighting! Let's go and have a look!” But Henry refused, “It's none of our business. We'd better go home and don't get close to them. Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don't want them to worry about me.”
“You are a coward, and afraid to go,” said Ronny, and off he ran to the spot with some other boys. Henry had to go home alone and didn't think about it anymore.
But Ronny thought Henry was a coward and told all the boys that. They laughed at him a great deal. From then on, they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him.
Henry was sad but he wasn't angry with Ronny for his rude behavior, because he had learned that true courage was shown most in bearing misunderstanding when it was not deserved, and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong. Thus, he just ignored the other boys' laughter and continued to stick to his thought and go to school and study as well. However, Ronny didn't invite Henry to go home with him anymore. Instead, he had his new friends who also thought Henry was a coward. Every day after school, they didn't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had lots of fun.
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1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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A few days later, something terrible happened to Ronny.
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At that moment, Henry happened to pass by.
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A few days later, something terrible happened to Ronny. That afternoon after school, Ronny was bathing with some of his new friends in the river happily. Suddenly, he was stuck in the mud and couldn't get out. He struggled hard but he was still trapped. He screamed for help, but all in vain. The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could. They were so scared and did not even try to help him.
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At that moment, Henry happened to pass by. He heard the screams and ran to the river as soon as possible. Seeing Ronny was almost drowned, Henry took off his clothes immediately and jumped into the water without any hesitation. He reached Ronny just as he was sinking the last time. With great effort, and with much danger to himself, he brought Ronny to the shore in time. Henry was happy to help his friend, though he was extremely tired.
第1段
几天后，罗尼发生了一件可怕的事情。那天下午放学后，罗尼和他的一些新朋友在河里快乐地洗澡。突然，他被困在泥里，无法出来。他努力挣扎，但仍然被困住了。他尖叫着呼救，但都没有成功。那些叫亨利是懦夫的孩子们尽可能快地离开了水面。他们很害怕，甚至没有试图帮助他。
第2段：
就在那一刻，亨利碰巧经过了。他听到了尖叫声，就尽快跑到河里去了。看到罗尼差点被淹死，亨利立即脱下衣服，毫不犹豫地跳进了水里。他上次就在罗尼下沉时，到达了罗尼。他费了巨大的努力，对自己也很危险，及时把罗尼带到了岸边。亨利很乐意帮助他的朋友，尽管他非常累。
例2：海边救人
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
On July 8，2017，eight members of a family in total，were enjoying an evening together at the beach in Panhandle，Florida．As the sun sank lower on the horizon，the two boys Noah，11，and Stephen，8—swam into the waves without the grown-ups noticing．Soon they realized that the ocean had pulled them into the sea．After trying and failing to swim back，they started waving and screaming for help．But the lifeguards had been off duty for the evening．
The boys had been struggling for several minutes when Jacky and Tabatha，a couple from Georgia，heard them．They dived into the water and soon reached the two brothers．But after a few minutes，they were all trapped in a rip current(离岸流)—a powerful one that could sweep even the strongest swimmer out to sea! By then，some teenagers had heard the cry．One of the teens rushed into the water，grabbed Jacky，and pulled him back to shore．Meanwhile，Tabatha could feel herself being pulled farther out．She was already exhausted and beginning to feel desperate as she was trying to save both boys alone．
Onshore，Jacky was terrified．A man stopped．“What’s wrong ”asked Shaun，who was heading back to his car．“My wife is drowning!”Brittany said．Shaun immediately strode(大步跨)into the water．But several minutes later，a gaping 15 feet still lay between him and Tabatha and the boys．He knew that if he continued，he’d become another victim．He turned around to seek help．
It was about that time that Roberta，the boys’mother，returned from the bathroom and looked around for her children．She was shocked to spot them floating much farther out than they were allowed to go．She fought the waves to get to her screaming sons and the stranger who was trying to save them，but she quickly discovered it was nearly impossible to make headway in any direction．Looking around，Roberta sighed with relief to see some more people coming to help．
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When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha, a risky idea came to them.
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By then, more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to join the human chain. _______________________________________________________________________________
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When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha，a risky idea came to them．To keep themselves from losing their footing in the rip current，they began holding on to one another to form a human chain extending from the beach all the way out to the struggling and Tabatha．They stayed linked tightly and managed to ensure they were safe by making their feet firmly planted in the sand．However，that required more links—probably dozens of them．Shaun spotted other swimmers on the beach and shouted，“Don’t just stand there! Come and help．”
当他们试图营救塔巴塔兄弟和塔巴塔兄弟时，他们想到了一个危险的主意。为了防止自己在激流中站稳脚跟，他们开始互相抓住，形成一条人链，从海滩一直延伸到挣扎中的塔巴塔。它们紧紧地联系在一起，并把脚牢牢地放在沙子里，以确保自己的安全。然而，这需要更多的链接——可能有几十个。肖恩发现海滩上还有其他游泳者，他喊道：“不要只是站在那里！”来帮忙吧。”
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By then，more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to join the human chain．One by one，link by link，total strangers walked into the waves and grasped one another by the wrists，determined that no one would die on that beach．At last，they made it and Tabatha and the two brothers were saved! “Those people on the beach are angels on earth，”said Roberta．“Whether it is the first person or the last person in the chain，they are all our heroes，who helped get our family out of trouble．
到那时，更多的游泳者也注意到这群人陷入了麻烦，于是冲去加入。一个接一个地，一个接一个地走进海浪，抓住手腕，决定没有人会死在海滩上。最后，他们成功了，塔巴塔和两兄弟得救了！“海滩上的那些人都是地球上的天使，”罗伯塔说，“无论是铁链上的第一人还是最后一个人，他们都是我们的英雄，他们帮助我们的家人摆脱了麻烦。读后续写：空间转化思维
在读后续写写作中，有的时候，主人公拓展情节的活动空间不足，比如主人公在车里。接下来，在车里这个小空间内去设计情节，的确有很大的挑战。解决方案很简单，就是：以心理空间弥补物理空间的不足。即拓展主人公的心理描写，以弥补情节的不足。
怎么做到呢？我们提供两个方案。
方案1：景物描写法
景物描写公式：（看一看，听一听）+ 心理情绪
2016浙江高考，Jane在森林里迷路了，天也暗了下来。按照常理，主人公Jane不能黑暗的森林里走来走去，不太审核设计太多的情节。于是可以描写周围的环境，比如黑暗带来的恐怖，远处的狼叫声等。我们来看看，官方给的句子。
【例5】2016年10月浙江高考： Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance.
方案2：回忆法
这个方案在野外和室内，或者更小的空间，如车内，都比较适合。我们经常用到的模式有三种：
方式1：回忆+懊恼
方式2：回忆+勇气
方式3：回忆+感激
从语法的角度，句子结构可以用两种形式，一种是普通的直接描写，一种是用虚拟句。请看下面的例子：
【例1】2016年10月浙江高考第一段：
Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarrelled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
【翻译】立刻，一片绝对的黑暗统治着森林。 简精疲力竭，又害怕，躺在一块石头附近，远远地想念她的家人。 所有奇妙的记忆都涌了进来，她忍不住哭了起来，“要不是我和汤姆吵架，走开，爬到高处，我就不会被困在这个可怕的地方，面对死亡的危险。”她带着无尽的焦虑后悔了，然后在她眼里闪着泪花睡着了。
【解析】划线部分就用到了“回忆+懊恼”，并且用的是“虚拟句”。
【例2】2021年八省联考
故事讲述了主人公“我”途中车坏了，一个陌生的墨西哥家庭无偿帮了“我”。第二段的开头，题目给到的提示句：After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag. （在他们离开后，我上了吉普车，打开了纸袋。）
既然在车中，也不太方便拓展更多的情节，于是就可以用到我们的“回忆法”。请看官方给的范文：
After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag. What surprised me a lot was that there was a sandwich,fruit and the bill given by me.Holding the paper bag tightly, I stood still, a warm current rising in my heart.How grateful was I to the family helping me. Although most of people I met on the road were indifferent, there were still some people like this family who was so helpful and thoughtful.From then on, I placed a jack and some common tools in my car.When meeting people in need on the road ,I would try my best to help them like the family.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.
【翻译】他们离开后，我上了吉普车，打开了纸袋。让我惊讶的是，有一个三明治、水果和我给我的账单。我紧紧地抱着纸袋，静静地站着，一股温暖的电流涌上心头。我是多么感激这个帮助我的家人。虽然我在路上遇到的大多数人都漠不关心，但也有一些像这一家人这样的人是如此乐于助人和体贴。从那时起，我在车里放了一个千斤顶和一些常见的工具。当我在路上遇到需要帮助的人时，我会尽力像家人一样帮助他们。只有这样，未来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
【解析】这里就用到了“回忆+感激”的方式，其中“Holding the paper bag tightly”（紧紧抓住纸袋）可以看做“回忆”的触发器。
读后续写日积月累：虚拟语气
虚拟语气主要用来表示假设，所陈述的是一个条件，不一定是事实，也有可能与事实完全相反。虚拟语气通过谓语动词的特殊形式来表示，常用来表达惊异、惋惜、遗憾、理应如此等含义，在写作中可以用来表达比较强烈的感情。
没有…的话，某人就……Without…，sb.would/ But for， sb. would
1. Without your advice, I wouldn't have succeeded.
2.But for your instruction,I would not have made such great progress.
讲解
第1句中，如果没有你的帮助，我就不会成功，为了突显前后逻辑关系，该句使用了
without 引导的虚拟语气。
第2句中，如果没有你的指导，我就不会取得如此大的进步，为了突显前后逻辑关系，该句使用了but for 引导的虚拟语气。
希望… wishing…
1.He sat there, wishing he had stayed at home then.
2.He turned over the photo album, wishing that he had joined the party last night
讲解
第1句中，他坐在那里，真希望自己当时待在家里，为了表达这种遗憾的情绪，该句
使用了 wishing 引导的虚拟语气。
第2句中，他翻看相册，真希望自己也参加了昨晚的派对，为了表达这种遗憾的情绪。该句使用了 wishing 引导的虚拟语气。
但愿; 只要;如果就好了lf only
If only I were as clever as you.
2. If only I would get the scholarship.
讲解
第1句中，要是我和你一样聪明就好了，为了表达这种渴望的情绪，该句使用了if
only 引导的虚拟语气。
第 2句中，要是我能拿到奖学金就好了，为了表达这种渴望的情绪，该句使用了if
only 引导的虚拟语气。
如果再有一次机会，我会Given one more chance，I would...
Given one more chance,I wouldn't let my parents down.
2.Given one more chance,I would definitely make it better.
讲解
第1句中，如果再给我一次机会，我不会让父母失望，为了表达这种渴望再来、。
情绪，该句使用了虚拟语气 Given one more chance，I would..。
第2句中、如果再给我一次机会，我一定会做得更好，为了表达这种渴望再来的情绪，该句使用了虚拟语气 Given one more chance，I would...读后续写：历险型
Part1：经典例文（森林遇险） 1
Part2：历险类细节描写 3
①海上遇难 3
②洪水 5
③地震 5
④火灾 5
⑤受伤 6
⑥丛林逃生 7
Part3：历险类故事构造“三大套路” 8
套路一：恶劣环境要烘托 8
套路二：转折思维技巧好 8
套路三：万能升华要牢记 9
Part4：灵活应用 10
例1：山洞遇险 10
Part5：高考真题再现 12
真题1：爸爸与我森林遇险【2018年6月浙江卷】 12
真题2：旅游途中遇狼【2017年6月浙江卷】 14
Part1：经典例文（森林遇险）
Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog.He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire.Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’ s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river…
Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.
Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back.
They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope（斜坡）. He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way.They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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“Where’ve you been ” Steve cried.
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Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.
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“Where've you been "Steve cried Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy's jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this Brady pulled again,urgently, “0K,big guy,” Steve decided...
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Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool,running water. “Brady, you did it!”
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“你去哪儿了？ 史蒂夫叫道，布雷迪直接停在他面前，开始把他推回他们刚爬上去的斜坡。 当史蒂夫仍然没有得到它，布雷迪抓住男孩的牛仔裤，并拉得更用力。 信息很清楚，但史蒂夫犹豫了。 他当然记得他叔叔说过布雷迪救他的命，但那是很久以前的事了。 他还能让他们度过难关吗？ 布雷迪又紧急地拉了一下，“0K，大个子，”史蒂夫决定......
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布雷迪带领他们回到斜坡上，进入树林。 这只大狗停了好几次，以获得他的逃跑路线。 他经常改变方向。 他们走了多久，史蒂夫不知道。 他只是用一只手抓住布雷迪的皮带，继续把一只脚放在另一只前面。 听到哗哗的水声，他几乎麻木了。 河流！ 孩子们大喊一声，摇摇晃晃地向前跑，直到他们跳进凉爽的流水里。 “布雷迪，你做到了！”
Part2：历险类细节描写
①海上遇难
天气
*The sky is darkened with gloomy clouds. Lighting flashed across the sky, followed by a clap of thunder. Minutes later, there came a downpour.
*The wind was howling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face.
海上
*The sea boiled in the storm.
*The angry waves crashed against the side of the boat, with water splashing here and there.
船
*Leaned sideways
*The ship was rocking up and down in the restless sea.
*The crashing waves filled their boat with water faster than they could empty it.
救援人
*But then, as I looked in the distance, I discovered a series of three or four big waves heading towards the shore.
*Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my body board on the way and shouted at a stranger to call the police.
*Patting their faces to wake them up, I continuously told them to be strong.
遇难者
*She calmed down to keep the rhyme of breathing so that she could breathe evenly.
*I felt extremely exhausted（apparently worn-out）
*Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body.
*Salt stinging my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.
*But I still shouted in my head: keep on.
*He saw an airplane flying overhead. But with no flashlight, he was invisible in the vast ocean.
*He took off his yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flagged them if they came back.
*In sheer desperation, I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us. Thank you, lord.
*Quite soon, I felt strong arms pull me out of the sea onto the board.
(摘自杭二中参考答案)
救援过程
*Then he dragged her upper from the water,.
救人未遂
*He held her hand tightly but a huge wave separated them.
*He fought the waves and strove to catch her, but failed, she was drifted away.
其他
*Energy returning magically, he rose to his feet and took immediate action.
*They waved the flag and screamed for help.
*Bear Grylls caught sight of the shabby boat and two men in rags.
*They were taken on board and thanked Edward over and over again.
*From them on, he made up his mind never to take any risks unless he could ensure tight safety. Because it was simply his stubborn conducts and his ignorance of...that...
②洪水
*The water kept rising. Two hours passed. He did not dare to move an inch for fear of slipping.
*Another two hours later, he noticed that the water level went down enough that he could try an escape.
*Stiff from keeping in one position for hours, he slowly unfolded his bodies.
*Cautiously and steadily, he made his way forward to the entrance.
③地震
*Deep cracks opened up in the streets.
*The wall caved in.
*Huge buildings collapsed, sending clouds of dust into the air.
*The animals grew restless as if in anticipation of a disaster.
④火灾
屋子
*Fanned by the wind, the house was bathed in an immense stream of flames.
*The house was bathed in an immense stream of flames.
*The roaring fire swallowed the whole house.
烟
*Dense smoke swirled and billowed and the fumes made her choke for a moment.
*The thick smoke caused him to stumble blindly around, burned his eyes, and made it impossible to breathe.
人的反应
*Through the office door, she saw flames climbing up the wall.
*Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging.
*She clung to her, terrified by the leaping flames.
*Turning, he fought through the smoke and ran out of the house.
*Shielding her noise from the smoke, she prompted him to run for safety.
*When he opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him.
*By then, with their mouths choked with smoke, both of them feel the heat engulfing everything.
⑤受伤
*She turned around, only to find Tim beaten to the ground in extreme danger.
*Afraid and merely desperate, she rushed towards him.
*With all her strength, she instantly seated him onto the car.
*He pulled her towards him with full strength.
*Her body was limp and she was not breathing.
*He scooped her into his arms and struggled to feet.
伤情
*He was attacked violently and covered with scratches.
*There was a trickle of blood from the wound.
治疗
*She applies a clean towel to the wound and press firmly on it to stop the bleeding.
*Wash and stitched the wound
*Apply some medicine to his wound
⑥丛林逃生
意识到不见了
*He scanned around the forest for her. “Eurus ” he shouted again.
*her heart dropped as he realized that she was gone.
*he spared no effort to find her, but it was all in vain.
*Thinking back to all of the good times that he had shared with her, he realized that he loved her and he wanted nothing more than for her to come back.
逃生
*He tried to get on faster, but he could not find the way out of the bush.
*He was getting tired because Ceil was too heavy to carry for a young boy.
*At last he came into an open space with a large pool in the middle.
*He quickly soaked his clothes, for the approaching smoke could choke them.
救援
*He immediately ran out for searching, sb running after him.
*My poor children, the flame could have burnt them to death.’ thought sb desperately.
*While they walked on without hope, there came a sweet voice. ”Dad!”it was from sb.
*Sb jumped with joy and hugged his kids.
*She could hear water tricking somewhere at a distance.
Part3：历险类故事构造“三大套路”
套路一：恶劣环境要烘托
1. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats， got on our horses， and headed slowly towards the mountains（慢慢地向山走去）. （17年11月浙江高考 ）
2. Never had I seen such a lovely creature in my life, so I followed its track without thinking twice（不假思索地追随它的足迹）.（17年11月浙江高考 ）
3. In the process of seeking for it, I was totally immersed in the charm of nature（完全沉浸在大自然的魅力中）. （17年11月浙江高考 ）
4. What's worse, he didn't have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies（更不要说他的手机和其他日用品）. （江苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试）
5. We were in the middle of nowhere, wearing only underwear, with our supplies burnt into ashes（把我们的物品烧成灰烬）, including our cellphones. （湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题）
套路二：转折思维技巧好
例如，故事中我们迷路了，正在想办法如何脱离困境。
Suddenly it occurred to us that we could keep to the track to guide us back.But it was getting darker and darker, thus making it increasingly difficult for us to make out the road.（突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。）
解析：这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。迷路后，想到了办法，属于“正向”，但是外在环境不允许：天色太晚。属于“负向”。
【素材积累】
1. Ultimately, we were back, safe and sound（安然无恙）. （17年11月浙江高考 ）
2. We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station（开车送我们去巡逻站）, where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents.（湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题）
套路三：万能升华要牢记
需要牢记，历险类的文章不要无缘无故拔高主题，一般的主题词是“勇敢”、“克服困难”，当然还有一个万能的表达“这是一次难忘的经历”。
万能句1：
That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。
遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了so...that的句式结构：如此......以至于。unforgettable是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。
万能句2：
Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。
【素材积累】
1. Sitting in the guestroom, I found it really blissful to be accompanied by our beloved ones（有我们所爱的人陪伴真的很幸福）.（17年11月浙江高考 ）
2. Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally in a good condition,and he was really happy as he was carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family（和他的家人团聚）.（江苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试）
3.As our van chugged((发动机缓慢运转时)发出突突声) down the freeway, I thought this trip might not be so bad after all. Good-bye, regular old summer vacation. Hello…Trip of a Lifetime（一生一次的旅程） （2021.03 十校联盟续写讲评）
Part4：灵活应用
例1：山洞遇险
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two months ago, my friend Lisa, Harry and I, planned to do something adventurous, so we decided to explore a deep cave in the outskirt of our city with some food, water, torches and most importantly our cell phones. But things were not going well. We could not find any vehicle to drop us there. At long last, we managed to find a taxi which took us to the outskirt of the city. Another evidence of bad luck was that Harry had left his cell phone at home.
After we got out of the taxi, some of the locals told us the way to the cave. The cave looked very attractive yet still mysterious: the cave was so dark, and the tiny sounds made by the insects and animals could be heard properly, pulling us into the cave with some unknown supernatural power. As we were moving forward we made marks on the rocks along our path to remind us of the exit of the cave. And we always kept our mobiles in switch on mode to contact each other in case we got separated and even worse, lost in the cave.
As we were moving forward, Harry felt that somebody was following our footsteps but he left his intuition to a joke. When we reached in the deep of the cave, we lost our way and gradually the fog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other properly. All of us got very scared of what was happening around us. Suddenly, we noticed that Harry was not with us and then we vaguely heard a shout from the depth of the cave and we thought it was Harry, so we started searching for him. But our torches were left no use in such thick fog.
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So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout.
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After we reunited with Harry, we tried to find the way out.
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【答案】So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry. Hardly can we see anything in the completely dark situation, so we had to feel our way to search Harry with all strength. Slowly and cautiously moving forward, we held our hands tightly in order not to be separated. With the voice approaching, we realized we would meet Harry immediately. Fortunately, when finding Harry sitting on the ground, we sighed with a relief.
After we reunited with Harry, we tried to find the way out. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before. “I get it!” Harry screamed. Looking up quickly, we found these clear marks easily. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit. When walking out of the cave, we knew we were saved. From this experience, what we learnt was that it was dangerous to explore the unknown word without a fully detailed plan.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者和小伙伴们一起去探索一个位于城市郊区的山洞。山洞里面太黑又有雾，所以Harry和我们走散了。当听到Harry的呼救后，我们一起找到了Harry，最终逃离了山洞。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“所以我们摸索着朝着呼喊的方向走去。”可知，第一段可描写我们是如何在山洞中寻找Harry的。
②由第二段首句内容“我们和Harry重逢后，我们试图找到出路。”可知，第二段可描写我们利用之前所做的记号逃离山洞的过程。
2.续写线索：听到声音——寻找Harry——找到Harry——寻找出口——逃离山洞——领悟感受
3. 词类激活
行为类
①寻找：hunt for/search for/ find
②大叫：scream/cry
③接近：approach/draw near
情感类
①小心：cautious/ careful
②害怕：scared/ frightened
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry.(运用了as引导让步状语从句时的倒装结构)
[高分句型2]. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit.(运用了强结构)
Part5：高考真题再现
真题1：爸爸与我森林遇险【2018年6月浙江卷】
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning. Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. “We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper.” I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.
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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.
真题2：旅游途中遇狼【2017年6月浙江卷】
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.
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A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could open the door, the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wolf back off, Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily. Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Soon after, the animal ran off.
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A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends. “It was really a nightmare and I thought I was going to die,” said Mac in a shaky voice, tears gathering in his eyes. For him, life could never be more beautiful. After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men continued their trip, agreeing never to separate again. (续写词数：158)读后续写：亲情类
Part1：经典例文（送花） 1
Part2：亲情类故事构造“三板斧” 3
第一板斧：冲突构造（误会、犯错等） 3
第二板斧：冲突化解（解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等） 4
第三板斧：亲情升华（诚实、珍惜等） 6
Part3：亲情类场景描写（七大关系） 7
一、母子关系 7
二、父子关系 9
三、 父女之间 12
四、 姐妹之间 13
五、 兄弟之间 14
六、 祖孙之间 15
七、 夫妻之间 16
Part4：灵活应用: 17
例1：圣诞节的礼物 17
例2：爸爸带我体验生活 19
Part 5： 高考真题再现：母亲节的惊喜 21
Part1：经典例文（送花）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Recently I graduated from high school, and as a gift I received a huge hunch of flowers, 40 to be exact! I had so many that I didn't know what to do with them. The next weekend my niece and nephew, Sue and Mike, aged 6 and 7, came and suddenly I had an idea. I might let them give out these flowers to people they met on the street, and in this way they could learn how to be friendly to others. So I told them about my plan and explained that these flowers would make people feel happy and smile. They loved the idea and were eager to have a try. So at once we took every single flower and tied a smile card to it. We then went to the street with the flowers.
The first flower went to a policeman. As soon as she saw the policeman, my niece ran up to him and handed him a flower. His smile was so big, but hers was even bigger!
In no time, we neared the end of our flowers. It was lunch time and we went to Subway for lunch. There the kids gave a flower to the waitress, who was really excited to receive the flower. As we were eating our lunch, the waitress came up to the kids with two big chocolate cookies! She said the chocolate cookies were for them and that she really liked the flower! As they ate the cookies, my niece and nephew looked at me with the biggest smiles I had ever seen.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With just one flower left, I said it should be given to the person who needed it most.
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It turned out to be a great day for us.
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【答案】With just one flower left I said it should be given to the person who needed it most. Just then, my nephew caught sight of an old woman in a wheelchair nearby. “I think she’s the very person for the flower. She lives a hard life because of bad health. She needs smiles most,” said my nephew. With these words, my nephew, followed by my niece, took the flower up to her. You can imagine how happy the old woman looked! She smiled, and gave each of the kids a big kiss.
It turned out to be a great day for us. We spread a lot of smiles by giving out flowers, and received a lot of smiles in return. The flowers not only made us feel good about ourselves, but also made 40 other people feel happy. I feel there is nothing more enjoyable than being friendly to people. Meanwhile, the kids learned an important lesson in the process. In fact, they can’t wait until next time they have such a chance again. They want to give out more flowers!
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，作者高中毕业时收到了很多鲜花，他打算让侄子侄女们把花送给别人，用这样的方式让他们知道如何对别人友好。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：只剩下一朵花了，我说应该给最需要的人……，所以应该写谁是最需要这朵花的人。要详细描述为什么这个人是最需要这朵花的，同时要刻画当这个人收到花时的感受与表现等。第二段开头是：这对我们来说是伟大的一天。本段应该写我和侄子侄女通过送花这件事的感受及明白的道理。
【点睛】续写部分描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：catch sight of；more…
than；can’t wait ；give out等高级词汇；With these words，followed by my niece复合结构作状语等高级句式。
Part2：亲情类故事构造“三板斧”
第一板斧：冲突构造（误会、犯错等）
只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代沟）、误会等。
1、生气
1. 我妈妈瞪着我，这是在我有一个重组家庭之前她从未做过的事。 “你可以捡起来的。”她说。“那才对。”（本可以，虚拟语气）
My mother glanced at me. Something she never did before I had a stepfamily. “You could have picked it up. ” she said. “That would have been the kind thing to do.”
他生气地握紧拳头，但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。
He folded his fist angrily, but his younger brother waved his hands excitedly.
3.Jackson试着说什么，但Carter太生气了，他一个字也听不进去。（对比，夸张）
Jackson kept saying something, but so angry was Carter that he couldn’t even hear a word .
2、后悔
1. 我意识到我裙子上的蝴蝶结打得很不好。我本应该请妈妈帮忙的。
I realized how poorly I tied the string on my skirt which was over leggings. I should have asked mom for help.
3、内疚
一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。
Thinking about what I had done to him, regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides.
每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会变红了。
Whenever I thought of Henry’s wet book, my face turned red.
4、烦恼
Watching Shirley’s smile fading away, Peter frowned.看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。（2020-2021年汕头市高三第一学期质量监测）
5、伤心
当她望过她三岁妹妹的桌子时，Amanda感觉她的心情像天空一样灰暗。（比喻）
Amanda felt as gray as the sky outside when she looked across the table at her three-year-old sister.
6、犯错
To cover his terrible action（为了掩盖他糟糕的行为，不定式作状语）, the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily and put the vase back to its place.（2021 广一模）
Fearing punishment（害怕惩罚，现在分词作状语）, the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbour’s cat jumped in from the window and he couldn’t drive it away no matter how hard he tried.（2021 广一模）
Glancing at the chocolates with hesitation,(犹豫地看着着巧克力,非谓语), the boy timidly raised his head before his mother. （2021 广一模）
第二板斧：冲突化解（解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等）
1、道歉
1.“对不起，”他说到，轻轻的摸摸Jackson的头。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
“I’m so sorry.”he said, gently petting Jackson’s head.
2.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter 一眼，然后低下了头。（动作链）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）He put down his hand, glanced cautiously at Carter and lowered his head.
3.To her surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her apology for ignoring my loneliness （为她忽略我的孤独道歉）as well as my difficulty with English communication.（2021年沈阳市一模）
2、原谅
1. 他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇让他停止说话，在他额头上吻了一下，然后走出了书房。（动作链）（2021 广一模）
His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips，gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study.
3、开心
1. “我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。（with结构）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
“I wanted to surprise you!” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes gleaming.
2.看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感觉到一种幸福感。（doing非谓语）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
Seeing his families sitting together and staying together harmoniously, Cater felt a surge of happiness.
欢快的歌唱飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美中。（独立主格）（2020.11温州一模）
Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the music.
4、感激
1. 如果没有亨利的帮助，我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了。（2021年南通市二模）But for Henry’s help, I wouldn’t have finished my performance smoothly.
2. I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude welling(well) up in my eyes.(独立主格结构)（2021年沈阳市一模）
3. Afterwards, it was my turn to give a small lecture,in which I expressed my sincere gratitude to my mom and friends, bowing(bow) to them several times. （定语从句，非谓语）
5、回忆
1. 在这时，毫无预料地，Carter突然想起Billy躺在地上哭的回忆，一直在他脑海回旋，提醒着他一些事情。（无灵主语句；doing非谓语；and连接两个同时进行的动作）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
At that moment, unexpectedly, the memory of the sight of Billy crying on the ground occurred to Carter, hovering in his mind and reminding him something .
2.看着Jackson，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那辆车的情景。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
Looking at Jackson, Carter couldn’t help imagining his little brother spending the whole day carefully painting the car.（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
3. “I just wish I knew how to help her,” Amanda said to herself, thinking of Li’s frightened eyes（想到Li害怕的双眼）. （2020.11温州一模）
第三板斧：亲情升华（诚实、珍惜等）
1. From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest提醒他要诚实(非谓语).（2021 广一模）
2. I nodded firmly, knowing a flower of kindness and friendship began to blossom（善良和友谊之花开放） in both of our hearts.（2021年南通市二模）
3.This experience transformed my attitude towards Henry and our relationship has also been harmonious（我们的关系变得和谐） since then.（2021年南通市二模）
4. 正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。（2021年南通市二模）
It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.
Part3：亲情类场景描写（七大关系）
一、母子关系
1.
Do you mean that eve flower has its own beauty asked my mother thoughtfully.I nodded without hesitation, as if a second wasted could deprive the dandelions of thei life."The same to you," she added, her voice soft""Not everyone can be a rose,and it is also an honor to be a dandelion." Knowing that my mother had realized my pain, I took off the mask that I had worn for the whole lunch time and poured out my unease heartily She listened to me patiently and patted me on the back tenderly.Suddenly she stopped, as if to say something.
“你的意思是那朵夜花有它自己的美丽吗？”妈妈沉思地问。 我毫不犹豫地点点头，仿佛一秒钟的浪费就能剥夺蒲公英的生命。 “你也一样，”她又说，“不是每个人都能成为一朵玫瑰，成为蒲公英也是一种荣誉。” 我知道妈妈已经意识到了我的痛苦，我摘下了我整个午餐时间戴的面具，尽情地倾诉我的不安。她耐心地听着我的话，温柔地拍了拍我的背。 突然，她停了下来，好像在说什么。
"But you will be a beautiful narrator." Mom said. She reminded me of how fluently I could deliver my part at home.It was at that time that I understood that maybe I was more suitable for a role back stage like a narrator. From then on, I practiced my lines heart and soul with my mother at lunch time for weeks. And the performance approached ultimately Standing backstage, nervousness came flooding in me.What encouraged me to overcome it was the inspiration from the beautiful yellow dandelions. The performance that night was eventually a big success.Hearing the thunderous applause, I took pride in my role and firmly believed that even a dandelion had its own beauty.
“但你将会成为一个美丽的叙述者。”妈妈说。她让我想起了我在家里可以多么流利地扮演我的角色。正是在那个时候，我明白也许我更适合像叙述者这样的角色。从那时起，我在午餐时间和母亲一起练习了好几周。演出最终站在后台，紧张情绪涌上心头。鼓励我克服它的是灵感来自于美丽的黄色蒲公英。当晚的演出最终大获成功。听到雷鸣般的掌声，我为自己的角色感到自豪，坚信甚至蒲公英也有自己的美。
2.
"Do you mean that every flower has its own beauty " asked my mother thoughtfully. My lips parted with nothing uttered, my eyes drooped to the ground. The dandelion blossom spread in the air, light and all silent. I felt a sinking in my heart, and my heart in my throat.A mixed sentiment of fear and desire clung upon my mind."Similarly, every individual has his own beauty," said my mother in a comforting voice. My eyebrows furrowed, my fists clenched, I murmured timidly, "but I failed playing the princess for the lines despite all the practice."
“你是说每一朵花都有自己的美丽吗？” 妈妈若有所思地问。 我的嘴唇张开了，什么也没说，我的眼睛下垂到地上。 蒲公英的花朵在空中蔓延开来，淡淡的，所有的寂静。 我感到我的心在下沉，我的心在我的喉咙。 一种恐惧和欲望混合在我的脑海里。 “同样，每个人都有自己的美丽，”母亲安慰地说。 我的眉毛皱了起来，我的拳头紧握着，我胆怯地喃喃地说，“但我没能在所有的练习中扮演公主。 “
"But you will be a beautiful narrator," mom said.My glance steadily resting on the blossom, when I raised my head, I hardly resisted the impulse to take a glimpse.In an instant our eyes met, and it was a reflective look. The tender breeze of early spring blew my cheeks flush. Mom lowered her lean shoulder, reached out and patted on my head. A gentle smile slipped from her lips."You are the dandelion blossom, the best narrator in our garden." A faint whisper came into my ear. The perfume of grasses and bushes and,all flowers scented the mellow atmosphere.
“但你将会成为一个美丽的叙述者，”妈妈说。我的目光坚定地停留在花朵上，当我抬起头来时，我几乎无法抗拒要瞥一眼的冲动。刹那间，我们的眼睛相遇了，神情也在沉思。早春的微风使我的脸颊红晕了。妈妈放下她瘦削的肩膀，伸出手来拍了拍我的头。她嘴里露出一丝温柔的微笑。“你是蒲公英的花朵，是我们花园里最好的叙述者。”我耳边传一阵耳语。草和灌木丛的芳香，所有的花朵都散发着柔和的气氛。
3.
Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she knocked at the door, she found the door was locked and her mother was not in.Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house."Where could my mother be " she wondered,"Was she stil angry with me " Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks.
走近门口，珍妮深吸了一口气。 当她敲门时，她发现门被锁着，她的母亲不在。 她又累又伤心，坐在房子前面。 “我妈妈在哪儿？” 她想，“她还在生我的气吗？” 再次，争吵的场景出现在她的脑海里。 她记得她对母亲的粗鲁。 意识到母亲所有的责骂都是因为她母亲真的很关心她，她感到相当羞愧，眼泪开始从她的脸颊滚下来。
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother."Here you come! I've been looking for you, she said, tired and relieved.Jenny couldn't help throwing herself into her mother's arms."Mum, I'm so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me." She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled patting her back gently.
她的头发上轻轻的一碰，使她的思想恢复了。 她抬起头，看到了母亲那张熟悉的脸。 ”“你来了！ 我一直在找你，她说，累了，松了一口气。 珍妮忍不住扑进妈妈的怀里。 “妈妈，我很抱歉，谢谢你为我所做的一切。” 她表示真诚的道歉和极大的感谢。 听到这话，妈妈笑着轻轻拍了拍她的背。
二、父子关系
1.
The man, seeing that the boy already had money started to get angry again."How can you be so selfish Why do you want more money since you already have these bills " the father could hardly hold his anger back and inquired with two eyebrows knitted into one. With held-back tears in his eyes, the little boy slowly and carefully counted out his money, and then looked up at his father, replying,"Because I didn't have enough before, but now I do." with big blue eyes]shining with tears.
那个男人，看到那个男孩已经有钱了，又开始生气了。 “你怎么这么自私？ 既然你已经有了这些账单，你为什么还要更多的钱？” 父亲几乎不能忍住他的愤怒，用两个眉毛编织成一个。 小男孩含着泪水，慢慢地小心地数出他的钱，然后抬头看着他的父亲，回答说：“因为我以前没有足够的钱，但现在我有了。” 带着蓝色的大眼睛]眼泪闪闪发光。
Not knowing what his son meant, the father just stood there, waiting for his boy's explanation.Wiping away his tears and an innocent smile appearing on his face, the boy requested in a relieved voice,"Daddy, I have $20 now. Can I buy an hour from you Please come home early tomorrow.I want to have dinner with you." Hearing the boy's small but sincere request, the father couldn't hold back his tears.Realizing he was too busy with his business to spare some time with his beloved ones, he gathered his son into his arms and apologized again and again,"Sorry., and I promise I'Il be back early tomorrow."
他不知道儿子的意思，父亲就站在那里等着儿子的解释。男孩擦去眼泪，脸上露出天真的微笑，用松了一口气的声音问道：“爸爸，我现在有$20了。我能从你那里买到一个小时吗？请明天早点回家。我想和你共吃晚饭。”听到男孩小而真诚的请求，父亲忍不住流住了眼泪。意识到自己忙了，没有时间和心爱的人在一起，他把儿子抱在怀里，一遍又一遍地道歉：“抱歉。我保证明天早点回来。”
2.
The bird dropped like a rock,one wing flopping behind as it fell.I heard it thump into the dirt.Before lowering the gun,I realized what I'd done~I'd killed my first animal. "Oh no," My stomach was tied in knots and I prayed,"Oh God, please don't let it be dead." The bird lay there with blood streaming from its beak, feathers large and small scattered about.I reached out and rolled it over, but its head drooped lifelessly to the side. After burying it,I hurried home, hiding my BB gun in the closet.
那只鸟像石头一样落下，一只翅膀在它落下的时候扑向后面。 我听到它砰的一声撞到泥土里。 在放下枪之前，我意识到我做了什么~我杀了我的第一只动物。 “哦，不，”我的胃结成结，我祈祷，“哦，上帝，请不要让它死了。” 鸟儿躺在那里，鲜血从它的喙流出来，羽毛大大小小散落在周围。 我伸手把它翻过来，但它的头毫无生气地垂到一边。 埋了它之后，我急忙回家，把我的BB枪藏在壁橱里。
When my dad got home that evening, he asked me how my day was.I hesitated, and was momentarily uneasy that guilt crossed my face. My dad,a man of keen perception, quickly went into confrontation mode, asking what really happened.I replied, as if I had to choke the words out of my throat, tears streaming down my face. He didn't say anything but just looked at me, hand resting on my shoulder. That evening, my dad made me vow to never kill a thing again, explaining that once I got bored of animals, thenext target could be something even more priceless.
那天晚上我爸爸回家时，他问我今天过得怎么样。 我犹豫了一下，一时感到不安，内疚掠过我的脸。 我的父亲，一个敏锐的感知，很快进入对抗模式，问到底发生了什么。 我回答说，好像我不得不掐住喉咙里的话，眼泪从我脸上流下来。 他什么也没说，只是看着我，手放在我的肩膀上。 那天晚上，我爸爸发誓再也不杀任何东西，解释说一旦伊戈特厌倦了动物，下一个目标可能是更无价的东西。
2.
The bird dropped like a rock,one wing flopping behind as it fell. A surge of excitement ran through me, as ifI were the king.Lowering the BB gun, I cameup to check my target. It was sill alive, with only one wing bleeding. "Why not take it home so that I can play with it " I picked up the little creature and went home. When I placed it on the desk, it was struggling to stand up but in vain. At the sight,I began to feel a little uneasy. With the night falling, I was on pins and needles.
那只鸟像石头一样掉了下来，一只翅膀在它掉下来的时候向后面。 一阵兴奋从我身上掠过，仿佛我是国王。 放下BB枪，我来检查我的目标。 它还活着，只有一只翅膀在流血。 “为什么不把它带回家让我玩呢？” 我抱起小生物，回家了。 当我把它放在桌子上时，它挣扎着站起来，但徒劳无功。 一看，我就开始觉得有些不安。 夜幕降临，我如坐针毡。
When my dad got home that evening, he asked me how my day was.I was dead silent.Dad merely rested his hand upon me and waited with a soft look in his eye."I.." my voice cracked and I cleared my throat."I shot a bird." "Oh " he replied, his expression unchanging. "Where is the bird now " I led him to the desk. Seeing the bird,dad smoothed its feathers with his gentle fingers and fixed the broken wing with a bandage. Several days later, the bird was fully recovered. Seeing it fly away,I realized I should use the real power to protect rather than hurt lives.
那天晚上我爸爸回家后，他问我今天过得怎么样。我沉默了。爸爸只是把手放在我身上，温柔地等待着。“我。”我的声音裂开了，我清了清嗓子。“我射杀了一只鸟。”“哦吗？”他回答说，他的表情始终保持不变。“这只鸟现在在哪里了？”我把他领到桌子前。看到这只鸟，爸爸用它温柔的手指抚平了它的羽毛，用绷带固定着折断的翅膀。几天后，这只鸟就完全康复了。看到它飞走了，我意识到我应该使用真正的力量来保护生命，而不是伤害生命。
父女之间
It was a long trip back to the office.I picked up the wastebasket and poured the contents on my desk.I was carefully sorting it all out.After was removing the dirt off and spraying the whole thing with breath freshener to kill the smell of food.I carefully smoothed out the bag and put the treasures inside.I carried the whole thing home gingerly,like an injured kitten. That evening,I returned it to Molly. After dinner,I asked Molly to tell me about the stuff in the bag,and so she took it all out a piece at a time and placed the objects in a row on the dining room table.Everything had a story, a memory, or was attached to dreams and imaginary friends J managed to say"I see" very wisely several time Ad_as a_matter of fact,I did see.
这是回办公室的长途旅行。 我拿起废纸篓，把东西倒在桌子上。 我仔细整理了一下。 在清除污垢后，用呼吸清新剂喷洒整个东西来杀死食物的气味。 我小心地把袋子弄平，把宝藏放进去。 我小心翼翼地把整件事带回家，就像一只受伤的小猫。 那天晚上，我把它还给了莫莉。 晚饭后，我让莫莉告诉我袋子里的东西，所以她一次拿出一块，把东西排成一排放在餐厅的桌子上。 每件事都有一个故事，一个记忆，或者依附于梦想和想象中的朋友J成功地说了几次“我明白了”事实上，我确实看到了。
To my surprise, Molly gave the bag to me once again several days later. The same bag and same stuff inside.I felt forgiven,and trusted and loved.And a little more comfortable wearing the title of father. Over several months, the bag with the note in went with me from time to time.In time Molly turned her attention to other things. She found other treasures,lost in new games, and grew up.I was left holding the bag.She gave it to me one morning and never asked for its return. And so I have it still.
令我吃惊的是，几天后莫莉又把这个包给了我。同样的袋子和同样的东西。我感到被宽恕，被信任和被爱。穿上父亲的头衔会更舒服一点。几个月多了，那个带着纸条的包不时地跟着我走。不久，莫莉把注意力转向了其他事情。她还发现了其他在新游戏中丢失的宝藏，然后长大了。我一直拿着袋子。一天早上，她把它给了我，但从来没有要求让它回来。所以我还在那里。
姐妹之间
Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead. Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could.He dashed across the finish line and won the fourth prize. Thinking he would let her sister down, Ali couldn't help sobbing.Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule.Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony, Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.
阿里抬起头，看到其他男孩冲在前面。 在这一点上，他拒绝放弃，他跳起来，跑得尽可能快。 他冲过终点线，获得了四等奖。 以为他会让她妹妹失望，阿里忍不住抽泣起来。 就在这时，他突然听到广播中宣布，他赢得了三等奖，因为与阿里相撞的跑步者因违反规则而被取消资格。 在颁奖典礼上，阿里把鞋子紧贴在胸前，感到欣喜若狂，松了一口气，因为他最终为他的妹妹赢得了鞋子。
Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly. He could not wait to see his sister and share the thrilling news. On his arrival, Ali found Zahra was waiting outside. She was really nervous whether her brother had brought her what she was expecting. "Zahra, see what I have got for you" he took the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands.The instant Zahra saw the shoes, her face lit up. So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali."Thank you! Ali." Tears of joy welled up their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.
充满喜悦，阿里快步走回家。 他迫不及待地要去看妹妹，分享这个惊心动魄的消息。 阿里一到，就发现Zahra在外面等着。 她真的很紧张，她哥哥是否给她带来了她所期待的。 “扎赫拉，看看我给你买了什么”他用颤抖的双手从包里拿出奖品。 扎赫拉看到鞋子的瞬间，她的脸就亮了起来。 她激动得扑向阿里。 ”“谢谢！ Ali。” 当兄妹紧紧地拥抱在一起时，喜悦的泪水涌上了他们的眼睛。
兄弟之间
There was no fence at all.It was a bridge! A bridge stretched from one side of the creek to the other!John was about to complain about everything,when he found the neighbor,his young brother,was coming across the bridge,his hands outstretched."You are quite a fellow to build this bridge after all I have said and done," said John's brother. The two brothers met in the middle,taking each other's hand and hugging each other.
根本没有栅栏。 是一座桥！ 一座桥从小溪的一边延伸到另一边！ 约翰正要抱怨一切，当他发现邻居，他的弟弟，正在过桥，他的手伸出。 约翰的哥哥说：“我说了这么多，你真是个造桥的好朋友。 两兄弟在中间相遇，牵着对方的手，互相拥抱。
They turned to see the carpenter lift the toolbox onto his shoulder."No,wait! Stay a few more days.We have more jobs for you," said the older brother."I'd love to stay on." the carpenter said."but I have many more bridges to build." Observing the carpenter leaving,the two brothers waved grateful good-bye to him.What a thought-provoking story! Every day we have the choice of building a fence or a bridge.One leads to separation and anger while the other leads to openness and friendship.
他们转过身来，看到木匠把工具箱抬到肩上。“不，等等！ 再呆几天。 我们有更多的工作要给你。 “我很想继续。” 木匠说。 “但我还有很多桥要建。” 看着木匠走了，两个兄弟向他挥手表示感谢。 多么发人深省的故事啊！ 每天我们都可以选择建造栅栏或桥梁。 一个导致分离和愤怒，另一个导致开放和友谊。
祖孙之间
When Christmas break came, Grandma got a chest cold, and I was afraid to leave her.I hadn't been home since Labor Day, and my mother was anxious to see me.I agreed to come home,but for two weeks instead of four, so I could return to Grandma and Grandpa.I said my good-byes,arranged for their temporary care and return home.As I was loading my car to go back to school, the phone rang."Grandma died last night,I'm sorry."I hung up the phone feeling like my world had ended.I had lost my friend, and that was far worse than knowing I would have to return to washing dishes.I went back at the end of four weeks, asking to begin the work-study program again.The financial aid advisor looked at me as if I had lost my mind.I explained my position, then he smiled and slid me an envelope. "This is for you, he said.
当圣诞假期来临时，奶奶胸口感冒了，我害怕离开她。 从劳动节开始我就没回家，我妈妈很想见我。 我同意回家，但两个星期而不是四个星期，所以我可以回到奶奶和爷爷身边。 我说了我的道别，安排他们暂时照顾，然后回家。 当我正在装货回学校时，电话响了。 “奶奶昨晚死了，对不起。 “我挂了电话，感觉我的世界已经结束了。 我失去了我的朋友，这比我知道我必须回去洗碗要糟糕得多。 四个星期后，我又回去了，要求开始勤工俭学。 财政援助顾问看着我，好像我疯了似的。 我解释了我的立场，然后他笑了笑，递给我一个信封。 “这是给你的，”他说。
The envelope was from grandma. She had known how sick she was.In the envelope was enough money to pay for the rest of my college year and a request that I take piano lessons in her memory. Moved to tears,I determined to learn piano lessons by heart and my memory of grandma motivated me to practice day and night.I don't think the piano piece was even played with more feeling than it was my second year in college. Now,years later, when I walk by a piano, I smile and think of Grandma. She is playing the piano smilingly in heaven,I am sure.
那个信封是从奶奶那里寄来的。她已经知道自己病得有多厉害了。信封里有足够的钱来支付我大学剩下的时间，并要求我为她上钢琴课。我哭了，决心用心学钢琴，对奶奶的记忆激励我日夜练习。我甚至不认为这首钢琴曲比我上大学的第二年更有感情。几年后，当我走过钢琴时，我微笑着想起了奶奶。我相信，她是在天堂微笑着弹钢琴的。
夫妻之间
The driver responded,"It must feel good to be taken care of and protected like you are every day." Confused by what the driver talked about,she asked,"What do you mean " The driver answered,"Every morning in the past week,a fine-looking gentleman in a military uniform has been standing across the street watching you getting off the bus.He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches until you enter your office building.Then he blows you a kiss, gives you a salute and walks away.You are one lucky lady."
司机回答说：“每天都像你一样受到照顾和保护，感觉一定很好。” 她被司机说的话弄糊涂了，问：“你什么意思？” 司机回答说：“过去一周的每天早晨，一位穿着军装的英俊绅士一直站在街对面，看着你下车。 他确保你安全过街，他看着你进入你的办公楼。 然后他给你一个吻，给你一个敬礼，然后走开。 你真是个幸运的女士。 “
Tears of happiness poured down Susan's cheeks.With tears of happiness in her eyes, she stood motionlessly facing the opposite side of the street, as if gazing at someone.Although she couldn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thought she was actually lucky,for he had given her a gift more powerful than sight, a gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little worried,he saw his wife break in to a radiant smile and blow a kiss to his direction. Finally she found back herself, blind but attractive and confident as she used to be.
幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。 她眼里含着幸福的泪水，一动不动地站在街道对面，仿佛在凝视着某人。 虽然她看不到他的身体，但她绝对感觉到马克的存在。 苏珊认为她实际上是幸运的，因为他给了她一份比视力更强大的礼物，一份爱的礼物，可以在黑暗中带来光明。 就在马克有点担心的时候，他看到他的妻子露出灿烂的微笑，朝他的方向吹了一个吻。 最后，她发现自己回来了，她失明了，但像以前一样有吸引力和自信。
Part4：灵活应用:
例1：圣诞节的礼物
Several years ago, I was living in New York and working for an airline, so I never got back home for Christmas. My Christmas was happy too with some other colleagues around. But in my heart I was sad because I couldn’t stay with my family. Sometimes my colleagues would say our Christmas was filled with tears. But this Christmas was different. I was lucky. I had the whole day off, which meant I could stay with my family on Christmas Eve.
When Christmas morning came, I awoke to a small hand rubbing my face. “Dad, Merry Christmas!”was all my younger son had time to say. He seemed to be racing against time. I knew he was hunting for gifts with his brother eagerly. I got down stairs just to see the two little boys’ faces as they looked at the pocket rockets Santa Claus had left them. I realized that the real Christmas was for the children who had deep belief in the amazing power of Santa Claus. At first,their fingers went almost shyly over their toys. When their inspection had been completed, the two boys ensured that the gifts were really delivered by Santa Claus and they dragged everything into the center of the living room.
Delight flooded the room. As their mother began giving out gifts, I smiled to myself, wondering how my unexpected gifts this year would be received. With so many Christmas spent outside, I had prepared so many gifts for my children and together with my wife. I hid them in several secret places. But the children were excellent detectives and they found all of them. They were happily opening packages constantly thanking considerate Santa Claus for his kindness and ability to know their desires. But I had not received a single one. I knew they had forgotten my existence with my absence from their Christmas these years.
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I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily.
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Suddenly my wife walked up to me.
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I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily. I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me, who was really kind enough to save my face. He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus. He said happily that he would share some of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them. I thanked him from the bottom of my heart, still feeling disappointed.
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Suddenly my wife walked up to me. It seemed that she had guessed how I felt. She asked me to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes. I think she was showing off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passed it to me smiling and saying it was for me. I opened it and saw a letter which read.“We will never forget you. Merry Christmas!”Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight.I was moved to tears.
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我不得不承认，我的失望正在稳步增长。 我在想，当我的小儿子跑到我身边时，我是否能得到一份礼物，他真的很善良，足以拯救我的脸。 他让我欣赏他的礼物，他深信这是圣诞老人精心挑选的。 他高兴地说，他将分享他的一些礼物，并允许我从他们中选择一个。 我从心底感谢他，仍然感到失望。
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突然我妻子走到我面前。 似乎她已经猜到了我的感受。 她让我看看装饰着这么多盒子的圣诞树。 我想她是在炫耀她在装饰上的努力，但她脱下了一个小盒子，微笑着递给我，说这是给我的。 我打开它，看到一封信，上面写着：“我们永远不会忘记你。 “圣诞快乐！”信下面是一只手表，它正高兴地咔嗒作响。 我感动得流泪。
例2：爸爸带我体验生活
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Doing things with my father was always fun due to his rich imagination. With his personality, it was amazing how patient Dad could be. I don't recall a time when he stood across my path; he always walked beside, guiding me with__his__own__steps. When, at 10, I announced that I was going to Africa to bring back wild animals, my mother and sisters pointed out my age, the problems of transportation and all such ordinary and unimportant facts.
But not Dad. He brought home books about Africa, train and boat schedules for us to study, and even some iron bars which we used to build cages for the animals I was to bring back. When the departure day approached and I was becoming anxious, my father brought home a newspaper that told of an accident on the railroad that was to take me to Baltimore. This postponed my trip and, by the time the train tracks were repaired, he and I were off on a new and more exciting project.
When a neighbor's dog killed my dog Bounce, I was determined to kill that dog. I thought it day after day,almost making myself ill with my own hate.
“Let's get it done，” my father stated unexpectedly in a whisper one evening after dinner. I followed him, to discover that he had tied the dog. He gave me a gun, and then stepped back for me to do my work. The dog and I looked at each other. He shook his tail to express friendship. Suddenly the gun was too heavy for me to hold and it dropped to the ground. The dog came up and kissed my hand. The three of us walked home together, the dog jumping in front. No word was ever said about what had happened. None was needed.
When President Harding died, the_funeral_train was scheduled to pass through a town about 20 miles from ours. I wanted desperately to go and see this train, but Mother pointed out that there would be school the next day and that it would be a long trip. That ended the discussion.
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But when the day arrived, Dad did not forget. He came to me and, in a voice as near a whisper as his nature would allow, said, “Jim, boy, it's time to see the funeral train．” We drove along to the town without talking much. When we came to the railroad station, a half dozen people were talking in soft tones and looking down the tracks. Suddenly the funeral train was coming!
但当这一天到来时，爸爸并没有忘记。他走到我跟前，轻声说：“吉姆，孩子，该看葬礼火车了。”我们不说话就开车去城里。当我们来到火车站时，六个人轻声说话，望着铁轨。突然间，葬礼上的火车开来了！
Dad put two pennies into my hand and asked me to put them on the rails. I did as told and jumped back to hold his hand as the train went past. I could hardly breathe. So exciting were the sight and sound. After the train had left, I got back the two pennies from the tracks. Dad put one in his pocket and I kept the other. For years, Dad and I carried those coins pressed by the weight of history. And the knowledge of what we shared made me feel very close to him.
爸爸在我手里放了两便士，让我把它们放在铁轨上。我照了，火车经过时跳回去握住他的手。我几乎无法呼吸。这种景象和声音是如此令人兴奋。火车离开后，我从铁轨上找到了两便士。爸爸把一个放进他的口袋里，我放了另一个。多年来，我和我都拿着那些受历史沉重的硬币。我们分享的知识让我觉得和他非常亲近。
Part 5： 高考真题再现：母亲节的惊喜
2021年6月新高考全国1卷：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
答案
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their discouraged faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had successfully made some French toast and chicken porridge as the children wished. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, added a card they had made, and then headed for their parents' bedroom.
当这对双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他看了一眼，他就知道他们在做什么。看到他们沮丧的脸，他让他们打扫厨房，同时帮他们为母亲做早餐。这对双胞胎高兴起来，照做了。不到一个小时，厨房就打扫干净了，父亲按照孩子们的意愿，成功地做了一些法式吐司和鸡肉粥。然后他偷偷溜回床上。双胞胎准备了早餐托盘，加了一张他们做的卡片，然后前往他们父母的卧室。
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. "Happy Mother's Day, darling Mummy!" thrilled voice yelling from their throat, the twins hugged their mom tightly. Moved and excited, mother held the twins with her warm arms as well. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook father who was pretending to snore. He whistled in astonishment when seeing the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said she had never tasted a better one. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each other secretly.
这对双胞胎把早餐带到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。“母亲节快乐，亲爱的妈妈！”激动的声音从他们的喉咙里叫喊着，双胞胎紧紧地拥抱着他们的妈妈。母亲感动而激动，也用她温暖的胳膊抱着这对双胞胎。一看到早餐托盘，她就睁大了眼睛。她摇着假装打鼾的父亲。当他看到早餐时，他惊讶地吹着口哨。妈妈咬了咬三明治，说她从来没有尝过比这更好的三明治过。杰夫立刻想咬他一口。詹娜抓住了她父亲的目光，他们偷偷地互相眨了眨眼。读后续写：趣事类
Part1：经典例文（姐弟重逢） 1
Part2：趣事类描写“两大核心技巧” 3
核心技巧1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张） 3
核心技巧2：快乐结局塑造（感激+开心） 3
Part3：灵活应用 3
例1：成功的“复仇” 3
例2：做家务 3
Part 4: 高考真题再现 3
【真题1】2021年1月浙江卷：万圣节南瓜卡头 3
【真题2】2017年浙江卷：健忘而可爱的妈妈 3
Part1：经典例文（姐弟重逢）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day, I found a wallet on the street. The wallet contained only three dollars and a very old letter. The envelope was worn and the only thing on it was the return address. I started to open the letter, hoping to find some information. Then I saw the date-1990, and the signature-Beatrice. The letter was written several decades ago.
Then I made every effort and found out that Beatrice was now working in a hospital. I showed her the letter. The second she saw the letter, she took a deep breath and said, “Young man, this letter was the last contact I ever had with Henry. He is my only brother. I loved him very much. I was only 16 at the time and my brother is two years younger than me. If you can find him, tell him I'm still looking for him,” she said and tears began to well up in her eyes. “Mother is waiting for him to come back home.”
When I walked out of the building with the wallet in my hand, the guard of the building recognized the wallet, and with his help, I finally found its owner, Henry. I handed the wallet to Henry and he said, “Yes, that's mine! It must have dropped out of my pocket this afternoon.”
“I read the letter in the hope of finding out who owned the wallet.” I said. The smile on his face suddenly disappeared. He asked, “You read that letter ” “Not only did I read it, but also Beatrice read.” I replied. He suddenly became excited. “Beatrice You know where she is How is she Please tell me,” he begged. “She's fine. She has been looking for you.” I said softly.
He grabbed my hand and said, “Sir, you know she is my only sister in this world. I've always missed her.”
Henry and I took the elevator (电梯) down to Beatrice's room. I walked over to her. “Beatrice,” I said softly, pointing to Henry, who was waiting with me in the doorway. “Do you know the man ”
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Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word．
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About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice．
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Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word．Henry said softly, almost in a whisper, “Beatrice, it’s Henry. Do you remember me ” She said excitedly, “Henry! I don’t believe it! Henry! It's you! My Henry! ” He walked slowly towards her and they hugged. The nurse and I left with tears falling down our faces.
比阿特丽斯调整了一下眼镜，看了一会儿，但一句话也没说。亨利轻声说，几乎是轻声说，“比阿特丽斯，是亨利。你还记得我了吗？她兴奋地说，“亨利！”我不相信！亨利！是你的名字！我的亨利先生！他慢慢地向她走去，他们拥抱在一起。护士和我离开了，眼泪流了下来。
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About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice．“Can you break away on Sunday to attend a party Henry and Beatrice are going to have a party in the home! ” It was a beautiful party with all the people dressed up to join in the celebration. If you ever wanted to see a woman and a man acting like two teenagers, you had to see this elder sister and younger brother. It was a perfect ending for a family affection that had lasted nearly several decades.
大约三周后，我接到比阿特丽斯的电话。“你星期天可以参加聚会吗？”亨利和比阿特丽斯将在家里举办一个聚会！“这是一个美丽的派对，所有人都盛装参加庆祝活动。如果你想看到一个女人和一个男人像两个青少年，你必须看到这个姐姐和弟弟。这是一个持续了近几十年的家庭感情的完美结局。
【解析】
本文以信封为线索展开，讲述了作者在街上发现了一个钱包，在里面发现一封破旧的信，通过努力找到信主人的姐姐，通过保安大叔找到了钱包主人，最后，姐弟重逢的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“比阿特丽斯扶了扶眼镜，看了一会儿，但没有说一句话。”可知，第一段可描写姐弟两人重逢的温馨场景。
②由第二段首句内容“大约三周后，我在办公室接到比阿特丽斯的电话。”可知，第二段可描写作者对重逢事件的感慨。
2.续写线索：发现信封——找到信封主人姐姐——找到主人——姐弟重逢——感谢——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
接电话：get a call at/put sb on to/pick up the telephone/answer the phone
抽出时间：break away on/take time off/spare one’s time
情绪类
兴奋：did excitedly/thrilled
泪流满面：tears bathe/stream down/one’s cheeks
【点睛】
[高分句型1]：The nurse and I left with tears falling down our faces.这句话运用了with的复合结构。
[高分句型2]：It was a perfect ending for a family affection that had lasted nearly several decades这句话运用了that引导的定语从句。
Part2：趣事类描写“两大核心技巧”
核心技巧1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张）
So nervous was he that （他太紧张了）he dropped the electric carving knife.（2021.04 台州高三调考）
I got into a panic（ 陷入惊慌之中）as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. （2021年1月浙江高考）
3. Sweating and nearly tearing（汗流浃背，眼泪差点流下来）, I could imagine how silly and strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason. （2021年1月浙江高考）
她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。
Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almost wreathed her entirely.
核心技巧2：快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）
1. 他们耸了耸肩，咧着嘴笑，这就驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰。
They shrugged and grinned, which dissipated all her distress and consoled her.
谢谢。她紧紧抓住打开的袋子，充满了感激和温暖。
‘Thanks.’ Clinging her hands to the bag opening, she was overwhelmed by a surge of gratitude and warmth.
这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。
The two strong strangers undoubtedly lit her day up.
3. We all jumped to our feet, dancing and screaming with joy（开心得欢呼雀跃）. （2021.04 台州高三调考）
4. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I brought to others（对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意）. （2021年1月浙江高考）
5. 她停了下来，心中洋溢着欢快的心情，拿出一把硬币，扭头把它们攥在他们的手里，尽管两个男人的表情都很惊讶。（2021嘉兴二模）
Brimming over with bright feeling and joy, she stopped, fished out a handful coins and tuned around to squeeze them in their fists despite two men's astonished expression.
Part3：灵活应用
例1：成功的“复仇”
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
“I will have revenge(复仇) on him, and make him regret what he did to me,” said Philip to himself, his face red with anger. Stephen, who happened at that moment to walk past and hear him talking to himself.
“Who is that you want to take revenge on ” asked Stephen. Philip looked at his friend and said, “You remember my new ball given by my father Look! It is punctured! It was farmer Robinson’s son who did this!”
Stephen asked him why young Robinson had ruined it. “I was walking and kicking my ball.” Philip replied, “By accident, when I was opposite the gate, my ball bumped over a bucket of water left in the pathway by him.”
“He came up and began to yell at me. I assured him that what I had done was an accident, and that I was terribly sorry for it. I also offered to fetch another bucket of water for him. But despite all I had said, he took a nail out of his pocket and twisted it into the ball, as you see. I will make him pay for this.”
“Honestly speaking,” said Stephen, “he is already punished for what he has done, because nobody likes him and he often walks around alone. He is just a lonely and miserable boy. This will be enough revenge for you.”
“But the ball is my favorite gift and I enjoy playing with it so much…” murmured Philip.
“Now Philip,” said Stephen, “I think you can act better than him in terms of getting revenge. I will tell you what happened to him not long ago.”
“A while ago he saw a bee hovering about a flower. He caught the bee and was going to pull off its wings for fun. The bee, of course, stung him. The pain made him so angry that, like you, he decided to get revenge. He got a stick, and pressed it into the beehive (蜂巢).”
“Immediately the whole swarm of bees flew out and stung him so badly that he had to spend a few days in bed.”
“So you see, he was not very successful in getting revenge. What if he could act better and forgive the bee for stinging him ” asked Stephen.
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“I must say,” replied Philip, “that your advice seems very good”.
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A few days afterward, Philip saw this young Robinson fall as he was carrying home a heavy log of wood.
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“I must say,” replied Philip, “that your advice seems very good. So come with me please, and I will tell my father what happened to the ball, and I think he will not be angry with me.” They went, and Philip told his father what had happened. He thanked Stephen for the good advice he had given his son, and promised Philip to give him another ball exactly the same as the first.
“我得说，”菲利普回答说，“你的建议似乎很好。所以请跟我来，我要告诉我父亲舞会发生了什么事，我想他不会对我生气的。他们走了，菲利普把发生的事告诉了他父亲。他感谢斯蒂芬给他儿子的好建议，并答应菲利普再给他一个和第一个完全一样的舞会。
A few days afterwards, Philip saw this young Robinson fall as he was carrying home a heavy log of wood. It was too heavy for him to lift up again. Philip ran to him, and helped him to put it on his shoulder again. The boy was embarrassed to be treated so kindly when he had ruined Philip’s ball the week before! He said that he was very sorry for his behavior. Philip went home quite happy. “This,” he said,“ is the best revenge I could take, in returning good for bad.”
几天后，菲利普看见这个年轻的罗宾逊带着一根沉重的木头回家时倒下了。它太重了，他不能再抬不起来了。菲利普跑到他跟前，帮他又把它放在肩上。这个男孩在一周前毁了菲利普的球，对这样友好感到很尴尬！他说他对自己的行为感到非常抱歉。菲利普很高兴地回家了。“这是，”他说，“这是我所能得到的最好的报复。”
解析：
通过阅读所给文章可知,Philip因为农夫Robinson的儿子用钉子刺穿了自己新买的球而非常生气,扬言要报复他。Stephen劝他说没有人喜欢Robinson的儿子,他经常一个人走来走去。他只是一个孤独可怜的男孩。Stephen还告诉Philip,几天前Robinson的儿子被蜜蜂蛰了,就去打蜜蜂巢,结果被一大群蜜蜂蛰了,不得不在床上躺了几天的事情。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:“我得说,” Philip回答说,“你的建议似乎很好。”所以后文应该是讲述Philip放弃了报复的计划,告诉了父亲实情,Philip的父亲感谢Stephen给他儿子的忠告,答应Philip再给他买一个球,和第一个一模一样的。第二段开头是:几天后,Philip看到Robinson的儿子在把一根沉重的木头搬回家时摔倒了。本段应该写Philip帮助了Robinson的儿子,Robinson的儿子为自己几天前的行为道了歉,Philip高高兴兴地回了家,认为以德报怨就是最好的报复。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:be angry with;good advice;the same as;too…to…;embarrassed等高级词汇;He said that he was very sorry for his behavior.宾语从句等高级句式。
例2：做家务
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分）
During lunchtime，Emma suggested going to the zoo to feed the animals and her mom agreed.
“We’ll stop by the bakery and pick some bread up. Now hurry and eat and then we’ll go. It’s going to be a lovely day. Grandma is coming with us. She’ll be here any minute，”mom said.
Emma ate her lunch and then ran into her room to get her shoes.The problem was that she could only find one of them. She looked under her bed, but all she could see were dirty towels and pants. She moved some of her toys out of the way，but still couldn’t find her shoe. After she’d checked everywhere in her room，she ran into the kitchen. “Mom，I can’t find my shoe.Will you wait while I look for it？”she asked.
Her mom thought about how many times she’d told Emma to clean her room up. She whispered something to Emma’s grandma and then said to Emma，“You will have to stay home.Your dad and I will take Ryan to the zoo. Grandma will stay here with you.”
“No！Please wait for me. I want to go to the zoo，”Emma cried. “I’m sorry, Emma. I’ve told you a dozen times to clean your room and you ignored me.You can’t find your shoe now. It’s your own fault for not doing as I asked.You will stay home.”
Emma ran into her bedroom, crying. Her mom came to the door and said，“Emma，clean that room of yours before I get home. I’ve told grandma not to give you any sweets until you finish the work.” She went out to the car with Ryan and Emma’s dad and then they drove away.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Emma and her grandma were sitting at the table，eating when her mom，dad，and Ryan came home.
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【答案】Emma sat on her bed and cried for a long time. And then she wiped her eyes and started to clean her room. It took her two hours to clean up the room.“I did it！”she said proudly. She even found her missing shoe. She ran into the living room.“Grandma！Come and see. I cleaned my room and found my shoe.” Grandma looked in Emma’s room. “If you had kept it this way, you wouldn’t have lost your e and have some sweets now，”she said.
艾玛坐在床上哭了很长时间。然后她擦了擦眼睛，开始打扫房间。她花了两个小时才打扫房间。“我做了！”她骄傲地说。她甚至找到了她丢失的鞋子。她跑进客厅。“奶奶！”来看看吧。我打扫了我的房间，找到了我的鞋子。奶奶看着艾玛的房间。“如果你一直这样做，你就不会丢鞋了。现在就来吃点糖果吧，”她说。
Emma and her grandma were sitting at the table，eating when her mom，dad，and Ryan came home.“Well，look at Emma’s room！It’s clean，”her dad said.“How was the zoo？Did you have fun？I wish I could have gone there with you，”Emma said.“If you keep your room clean，we may go and see animals again，”her mom said. From then on，Emma tried her best to keep her room clean.
艾玛和奶奶坐在桌边吃饭，妈妈、爸爸和瑞恩回家。“嗯，看看艾玛的房间！它很干净，”她爸爸说，“动物园怎么样？你玩得开心吗？我希望我能和你一起去，”艾玛说。“如果你保持房间干净，我们可以再去看动物，”她妈妈说。从那时起，艾玛就尽力保持她的房间干净。
Part 4: 高考真题再现
【真题1】2021年1月浙江卷：万圣节南瓜卡头
：阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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优秀范文1
It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer. The air inside the hollow vegetable was full of my anxious breath. I could hear my sister’s laughter and Jason’s muffled voice talking about cutting the giant thing open. “No! Not my precious pumpkin!” I protested. Eventually, Dad helped me adjust my body to a more relaxed position, and pulled the pumpkin gently off my head. Hair in knots, nose and chain covered in pumpkin flesh, I let out a sigh of relief. That’s when I realized the camera had been rolling the whole time!
The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.I looked just like a pumpkin head in it. Embarrassed and a little annoyed, I fled to my room, but Mom stopped me. “You haven’t read the comments yet.” I scrolled down the screen and marveled at the stories the viewers shared about Halloween. One girl recalled celebrating it with her brothers and sisters, and thanked us for “bringing her home”. The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes. I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet loving family. (171 words)
出彩表达积累（出自原文及范文）
1.hollow adj. 中空的；空心的
2.muffled adj.沉闷的；模糊不清的
3.sigh n.叹气；叹息
4.marvel v.感到惊奇；大为赞叹
5.mischievous adj.顽皮的；捣蛋的
6.scroll down 向下滚动
7.Eventually, Dad helped me adjust my body to a more relaxed position, and pulled the pumpkin gently off my head.
最后，爸爸帮我把身体调整到一个比较放松的姿势，轻轻地把南瓜从我头上扯下来。（对动作的生动描写）
8.The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes.
这些话温暖了我的心，使我热泪盈眶。（对神态的生动描写）
优秀范文2
It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.Jason suggested using a knife to cut the pumpkin open. I waved my hands wildly in protest at the plan. “Then you need to find a way of pulling yourself out.” My dad said in a calm, cool voice. His voice settled my nerves. I was conscious that my nose was acting as an impediment to my escape. With stretching out my face and biting into the pumpkin, I surmounted the large obstacle and managed to pull my head out. A ripple of excitement ran through us but the first thing I saw was the camera.
The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. In the space of a week, it had been viewed over a million times. It filled Mom with greater astonishment. Rarely had a pumpkin’s video had so many hits as this one. Dangerous as it is, some viewers’ curiosity was too strong to resist. They left messages describing the feelings they had while watching it. Some laughed at me, while others praised my parents, who remained calm throughout. Looking through these reviews, the sunlight peeking through our , Dad’s calm smile reflected his motto “All’s well with us, never fear”. (186 words)
出彩表达积累（出自原文及范文）
1. nerve n.神经质；神经紧张
2. conscious adj.意识到；注意到
3. impediment n.妨碍；阻碍；障碍
4. surmount v.克服；解决
5. obstacle n.障碍；阻碍；绊脚石
6. ripple n.波纹；细浪；涟漪
7. His voice settled my nerves. 他的声音使我安定下来。（无灵主语）
8. It filled Mom with greater astonishment.这使母亲尤为惊讶。（对情绪的生动描写）
【真题2】2017年浙江卷：健忘而可爱的妈妈
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dadslept:” You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids ” “What ! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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优秀范文
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tentwas left behind. Dad recommended buying a new one, while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it, saying "Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly, so it's unwise to give up the tent." Finally, we got back the tent and hit the road again. If Mom hadn't been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. One day, towards evening, we found a great campingsite at the foot of a high mountain. Davidand I helped Dad put up the tent, and Mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting around the camp fire, we talked and laughed. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom's face.
解析
文章中文大意：我的母亲很健忘（absent-minded and forgetful），一家四口去祖父母在的省自驾旅游，途中发生了有趣的事情，比如爸爸叫我盯住妈妈，以防她开车的时候睡着：
第一段开头句：我们拿出来新买的帐篷
第二段开头句：我们愉快地欣赏路边的景色
关键词： mom dad David （弟弟）, tent, camping, nice, trouble, forgetful, absent-minded
实战解析
首先，根据文章当中第二段内容比较开心的基调，第一段的故事情节应该比较偏向正面感彩，例如：我们在露营过程中一起搭建帐篷的开心时光或露营过程中的趣事（尤其是前文有铺垫妈妈是个forgetful的人，这一点也可以埋下伏笔来表达后面过程中由于妈妈健忘而带来的趣事）（也有同学在此处描述了露营过程中对其他陌生人提供帮助，来集中体现nice这一个点）；
其次，第二段开头说来描述欣赏风景： 此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托下氛围，但是第二段不能仅仅只有景色描述； 例如：这里可以实写和虚写结合的方式，看到景色（同时回忆往事），最终把故事的落脚点放在 "家人的感情" "亲情" "生活的乐趣" "与妈妈一起的趣事" 等等角度都可以的；当然也有同学描述与陌生人的相遇，引出了陌生人的善意这个主题；总之这次的话题比较开放，情节可以写的角度比较多；
再次，除了情节方面的内容以外，以下几个方面是考生需要着重关注的得分点：字迹清晰程度，语法多样性和句式丰富性，衔接成分的使用，语言的场景恰当程度；高考英语写作中，考生所采用的句型结构一定程度上影响了老师对考生写作水平的判断；说到语法丰富性方面，例如在作文中用到从句结构、强调句、非谓语结构等。尤其应该注意的是：避免句型单一化，如通篇使用定语从句，这样反而使阅卷老师觉得该考生对句型掌握的不够充分。应该在文章写作中有意识地多使用不同的句型结构。例如：They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.（such… that结构）。 由于阅卷老师在评卷时的时间十分有限，在作文中放入显耀的连接词可以帮助老师快速抓住文章结构，促使老师更好地理解文章主旨，同时清晰的连接词可以显示作者写作时严谨的逻辑。例如：upon one's arrival, then, however, besides, while等。读后续写：人与动物类
Part1：经典例文 （小狗救人） 1
Part2：人与动物故事构造套路 3
套路一：可爱型动物故事情节 3
套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节 6
套路三、主题升华句 8
Part3：人与动物场景素材积累 8
Part4：灵活应用 12
例1：人与麻雀 12
Part5：高考真题再现 14
真题1：:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】 14
真题2：拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】 17
从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）；人熊大战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）；人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021年3月临沂市一模）。
Part1：经典例文 （小狗救人）
Just as many families do at a point, Catherine chose to add a new family member by adopting a pet. Shortly after her daughter Kate’s birth, Catherine decided she wanted a close bond with a dog for Kate. Thus, Catherine called the dog shelter close by to inquire about adoption. After hearing about the available animals, she chose a Doberman Pinscher. Once they signed adoption papers, they named the dog Khan.
Catherine was hopeful this would provide valuable lessons for her baby, such as sharing, learning to love and responsibility to care for animals. She was looking forward to having the dog join the family.
Hearing of Khan’s rough background, Catherine immediately loved the dog. She was overjoyed to bring this special dog back to her family. Of course, she realized there were risks involved. Well, the obvious risks from bringing a large, potentially dangerous animal to her young baby, Catherine pushed them aside. If she had not adopted Khan, he would have been killed just a week later. So, this was his new life and second chance, and the family was hoping for the best.
Everything began smoothly. They trained Khan during the first few days. However, everything changed on that fourth day when the dog acted completely out of character.
The fateful day began with the usual playtime in the yard. Although baby Kate had her parents watching from a distance, they did not notice anything out of the ordinary. Kate and the new dog had been making a habit of playing out back like this. However, things were different this day.
So what was actually happening out there The two were not being loud or crazy. They began running through the backyard grass together. Again, Catherine watched the two closely. Surprisingly, things had changed within an instant!
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Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden,
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Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then fell down with dying eyes.
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Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden. With her mouth wide open, Catherine watched Khan dragging her child, hoping he would stop. Just as she was wondering how he could suddenly become this way, Khan put down Kate outside the yard. Catherine rushed to Kate and carried her to safety while Khan barked towards the yard wildly. Catherine returned, only to find a poisonous snake crawling in the yard and she drove it away.
可汗突然开始疯狂地表演起来。凯瑟琳张开嘴，看着汗拖着她的孩子，希望他能停下来。就在她想知道他怎么会突然变成这样的时候，汗把凯特放在院子外面。凯瑟琳冲到凯特身边，把她抱到安全的地方，而汗则疯狂地向院子走去。凯瑟琳回来了，结果发现一条毒蛇在院子里爬行，她把它开走了。
Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then collapsed with dying eyes. Khan protected Kate from the poisonous creature and was attacked. Although living with the family for merely four days, he became the protector as Catherine had hoped. Catherine rushed Khan to the vet. “May God bless you”, Catherine murmured. The vet tried his best to save him. Eventually, he made it and Catherine shed a tear of relief.
显然，是汗救了她的孩子，但他的吠声很微弱，然后瘫倒了，眼睛垂死了。可汗保护凯特不受有毒生物的伤害，并遭到了袭击。虽然他只和家人一起生活了四天，但他还是像凯瑟琳所希望的那样成为了保护者。凯瑟琳冲着可汗去看兽医。“愿上帝保佑你。”凯瑟琳喃喃地说。兽医尽力去救了它。最后，他成功了，凯瑟琳如释了一口气。
Part2：人与动物故事构造两大故事套路
套路一：可爱型动物故事情节
可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。
1、外貌
1. a pair of large watery eyes 一双水汪汪的大眼睛
2. two big round eyes 两只圆溜溜的大眼睛
3. beady/sparkling/twinkling eyes 小珠般圆亮的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的 眼睛
4. a nose like a small black gem 一颗黑宝石般的鼻子
5. long/muscular/skinny/spindly legs 长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/干瘦的 腿
6. fur is as white as snow 皮毛像雪一样洁白
7. a long little tail 一条长长的小尾巴
2、动作
wag the tail 摇尾巴
smell/sniff 嗅
bark/yap/yelp 狗吠
lick 舔
put the ears up 把耳朵竖起来
shake the whole body 抖动全身
bite the corner of the coat 咬住衣角
rub their necks and backs with their paws 用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部
hold it tightly with the paws 用爪子紧紧按住
fall on its back 摔得四脚朝天
run around me 围着我跑
keep scratching you with his front paws 用前爪不停挠你
raise its whole body on its hind legs 用后腿支起全身
leap to its feet 跳起来
rest the nose in its paws 把鼻子搁在爪子里
keep its fore legs doubled up 保持前腿弯曲
3、高兴
They were glad to see Poppy coming back to her usual self（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）, guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
Smiling ever so bright（笑得更加灿烂。）, he called out to his parents, who tugged him in for a long hug. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
Her parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief（轻松地笑了）–Poppy was back to her old cheerful self!（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3、常见动物
鹿：
1. A mother deer with a huge pair of deer horns （有一对大的鹿角）appeared in front of him, with a baby fawn(幼鹿) lying on the dry ground. （202103宁波十校）
2. The poor creature, apparently in desperate need of water, licked it up quickly with its shell-pink tongue（很快用它贝壳粉的舌头舔乾净）.（202103宁波十校）
3. The mother deer lowered her head and licked my boy’s cheek gently, as if expressing gratitude（低下头舔我的男孩的脸颊，好像在表达感激）. （202103宁波十校）
马：
1. At the pen, Gina saw the horse. It was of medium size. It had a fine, soft blackcoat and one white foot（它的毛细腻柔软,油黑油黑的,有一只脚是白色的）. There was a wide white patch (斑纹)that ran down the center of its face. Gina fell in love with it at first sight.“Wow! What a horse.” （英语周报高三第十期 2020.9.4）
2. The horse seemed to feel her kindness, sniffing her（闻了闻她）. （英语周报高三第十期 2020.9.4）
狗：
1.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self（不像往常那么快乐）. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
2. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging（她的尾巴开始摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. Poppy approached with caution, trying not to scare the puppy. Sure enough, it was only moments later that the ball of fur lifted its head out of the box（把它的头伸出盒子） to peek at its new home and its new friend. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
4. Hearing his bags unloaded on the driveway, Poppy’s ears pricked up（竖起耳朵） and suddenly she was on all fours（四脚着地）. The boy was greeted with a cheerful high-pitched bark. Then the front door popped open and Poppy darted to his embrace, followed by the little one who licked his fingers fondly. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节
凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。
1、害怕
Terrified（非常害怕）, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
Seeing the approach of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled, swallowing hard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
A numbing chill gripped me（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.（2020.11金华十校）
Thinking of the wolf’s bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright（几乎给吓死） （2017年6月高考浙江卷）
I was seized by a strong sense of horror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）, my palms sweating.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
2、求助与获救
1. At the sight of it, Elli waved her hands wildly（疯狂地挥手）, screaming, “Help!” （2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot （惊奇地发现）that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
3. Having pulled the massive body out of the stump, Brian cleaned the wounds （清洁伤口）and then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf（蹲下来照顾狼）together with Brian. （2020.11金华十校）
4. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy（擦干小狗） till he had become dry. （山东模拟）
5. Using a rock as the supporting point, I unlocked the chain and set the wolf free（放走这只狼）. （山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
3、熊：
1. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread（嗅着，闻着我们的大蒜面包）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs（用他的后腿站起来） and pushed at the wooden fence posts.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
3. The bear reared up ,attacked the fence and even desired to tear down us（想要撕裂我们） with flames blazing in its eyes（怒火在他的眼里燃烧）owing to the dreadful spray. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
4. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag（撕开他的帐篷袋）.（2017年6月高考浙江卷）
5. One of Mac’s friends picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf. Satisfied with what he got（对他得到的很满意）, the wolf ran into the woods. （2017年6月高考浙江卷）
4、狼：
1. Pale-yellow eyes narrowed. Black lips tightened. Double sets of two-inch sharp teeth were exposed（露出它那两排两英寸宽的利牙）. Suddenly the wolf trembled. Its teeth clacked, and a painful cry rose from its throat（它的牙齿咔嚓响，从它的喉咙里发出一声痛苦的喊叫）.（2020.11金华十校）
2. The wolf’s head sank to the ground, sad yellow eyes looking at us（黄色的眼睛悲伤地看着我们）. （2020.11金华十校）
3. So angry was the wolf that it kept roaring（那只狼的太生气了，一直咆哮） and smacking the window violently.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
套路三：主题升华设计
可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。
凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。
1. Elli and I learned our lesson（学到一个教训）: Be aware of a bear with a toothache.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion（充满爱和团聚的温暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. The rain that came that day was a miracle（那天下的雨是一场奇迹）, saving our farm, just like my boy saved a life.（202103宁波十校）
4. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s hand as if to express thanks（好像在表达感谢）. What a warm scene! （2020.11金华十校）
Part3：人与动物场景素材积累
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Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. “Wait for me! It won’t be long,” he exclaimed to me. Desperate and hopeless, I closed my eyes, praying this was all a dream. And even worse, the water was so cold it felt like millions of needles were stabbing me. How I wished that I could fly out of the icy water like a bird! After what seemed to be ages, Harry returned to the pond, with a long oak branch in his hand. As I grabbed hold of one end of the branch, my brother started to drag the other with every last ounce of his strength. Thank goodness, I was able to climb out of the ice hole and then we galloped home.
Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over. “Oh, my God! Where have you been ” she said in surprise. “You're completely wet.” “It’s Harry’s fault!” I complained to her through my chattering teeth. When I told her what had happened to me, her eyes were wide with horror. All of a sudden, she took my arm, pulled me into the bathroom and then gave me a warm bath. After that, mum dressed me in a warm coat, wrapped me in a blanket and poured me a cup of hot milk. She sat next to me, smiling, relieved that I was all right. Sure enough, my brother was criticized by mum for his lack of safety awareness.
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Paragraph 1：Sam arrived very early the next morning. He rang the doorbell and politely waited for Mrs. Proudfoot to answer. Then he could hear Roland barking and whining inside, frantic to get out. Sam stood by the door, debating with himself whether to walk the unfriendly dog to help his best friend. After a while, the door flung open and Mrs. Proudfoot came out, greeting him with a beaming smile. Surprisingly, the lazy dog grinned up at him and wagged his tail, eager to go out with him. Mrs. Proudfoot put a leash on the dog, stroked his glossy head and said, “Have a good time, dear!” Without saying goodbye, Sam and the dog danced around and then dashed out of the house.
Paragraph 2：A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic. Obviously, Sam’s efforts paid off—Roland was healthy and active. But what pleased her most was that Sam, together with the other kids, would stay with her on weekends, chatting and laughing. Besides, they would help her clean up the yard. From then on, laughter filled her house and she no longer felt lonely. Then came the moment Sam had been looking forward to—the day he was paid for his work. What a big surprise! Tears of gratitude welled up in Barry’s eyes as he knew what Sam had done for him. Sam just stood there, smiling, glad that he could wholeheartedly support his friend when he was in trouble.
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Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot. What was that She wondered. A sea fish Before she could get on the surfboard, it bumped her in the foot once again. She suddenly had the feeling that an enormous fish, bigger than her, was circling around her. A chill feeling crept up her spine as she thought of the joke Uncle Mark played on her. And then Betty saw it: a gray triangle fin sticking up through the water, heading right for her. It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her. For a split second, her heart practically skipped a beat.
Paragraph 2: “Help! Help!” Betty screamed in horror. Hearing the terrible scream for help, Uncle Mark instantly realized that something bad was happening. Without thinking, he swam as quickly as he could towards Betty and yelled, “Get out! ...” But Betty seemed stuck, too scared to move. At the very moment, the shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of razor-sharp teeth. With all his might, Uncle Mark stabbed it in the mouth with his surfboard, scaring the monster away. And then he grabbed hold of Betty’s arm and dragged her to the beach. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.
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Paragraph 1: He was sentenced to be torn by a lion in the public arena (竞技场). The terrifying day finally arrived. All the people in the city went there to see the brutal fight between the poor slave and a bloodthirsty beast. When Androcles appeared in the arena, they began to cheer and hoot. All eyes were on him, and time seemed to stop. Overcome by a stab of fear, he almost collapsed to the ground, his heart pounding and his knees shaking. And then came a furious roar and the great lion charged at him with its flaming eyes and gaping jaws. Desperate and hopeless, the slave closed his eyes and dropped his sword, thinking that he was done for.
Paragraph 2: However, the lion didn’t act as most had imagined. Much to their surprise, the savage beast stopped short , knelt down and then lickedthe slave’s hands and feet. He behaved like a pet dog. And then he let out a low roar, as if whispering to his friend, “Didn’t you recognize me ” Indeed, it was the very lion the slave had helped in the forest. Sighing with relief, the slave stroked his neck gently, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. So moved were people by the story that they begged the master to set free the slave and the lion. One good turn deserves another, and in the end, Androcles, the slave, became a free man.
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Paragraph 1: I entered the shop, and one of the salesmen came to me. I couldn't believe my eyes. Surely, it was my long-lost friend, Arthur, always wearing a warm smile. What a coincidence that Arthur would appear in front of me when I had trouble! I thought. For a second, I stared at him in disbelief, my mouth hanging open. In the meanwhile Tom instantly recognized me and he gave me a huge hug. “What brings you here ” he asked with a puzzled expression on his face. So I told him that my car got a flat tire and that considering the poor road condition, it might broke downon my way back home. Knowing what had happened to me, he said that he would be glad to give me a hand again.
Paragraph 2: After a while, they quickly drove a pick-up truck to my car and started it. After listening to the sound of the engine, Arthur told me that there was nothing wrong with it. And then they started to fix the tire and we chatted happily. Arthur told me that the thank-you note from me inspired him to live a meaningful life by helping others. Soon afterwards, he got the tire fixed. He got up, wiped the sweat from his face and wished me a pleasant journey. I couldn’t thank him enough. Many years have passed, but I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: Life is meaningful when you can give a hand to those in trouble.
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Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. He exposed his sharp teeth, snarling at us, as he ran forward. And again the furious creature stood on his back legs and began to snap at the fence like a demon. It seemed that his mouth was dripping with blood and his eyes were red with rage. At the sight of it, I could feel a flicker of fear flooding over me, and Ellis was stunned, her mouth hanging open. It was only then that my mind began to race. Once again, I plucked my courage to blast him with pepper spray, but without success. Then all of a sudden, came a crash of the fence falling down.
Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. It landed in a clearing, not far from our camp, and the loud noises from the rescue helicopter scared the bear. For an instant, he froze, but after a while, he started to charge at us again. "Ellis!" I shrieked, "Look out!" We immediately stepped aside, spun round and galloped towards the helicopter. The moment we were into the helicopter, we collapsed, gasping with relief. As it took off, we could see the bear was hungrily eating the bread we had made. What a hungry bear! After we returned home safe and sound, we realized that something should be done for bears.
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Paragraph 1: Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. A familiar figure leaped out, rushed towards me and waded into the water. Thank goodness, it was Joe who came to my rescue. However, the water was running so rapidly that he had to go back. Frightened and a little angry, I could hardly help shedding tears. How I wished that my husband were like a superman who could save me from disaster. But, after a while, it turned out that Joe returned with one end of a rope in his hand and the other end tied to the truck. He struggled to throw the rope to me and shouted, "Catch! Open the door!"
Paragraph 2: I screamed that I couldn't make it. At that moment, the sound of the raging water outside grew louder, and the car rocked more violently. Worse still, the water came up to Joe’s waist and he almost lost his footing in the water. After several vain attempts, Joe realized that there was no chance to make it. He put every ounce of strength into getting close to me and said soothingly, "Don't panic, honey! I'm here." With Joe's help, I burst the door open, and Joe immediately tied the rope around my waist. The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the car was washed away. What a narrow escape! I hugged Joe tightly, happiness and love welling up inside me.
Part4：灵活应用
例1：人与麻雀
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It's getting hot. It's time to put on lighter clothes and open up the windows. I can't wait to do so. Yesterday, an unforeseen visit to the kitchen happened during the brief time we were out. Two daring sparrows (麻雀) had risked landing on our territory to enjoy the freshness in our sink and some other breadcrumbs (面包屑) on our kitchen counter.
Actually, sparrows are everywhere. The tiny, gray -and brown birds are found on every continent except Antarctica, flying or jumping around cities, picking up leftover food on side-walks, and sometimes chasing with native bird species. These small creatures have adapted to living alongside humans- similar to pet dogs.
When you come across such sudden callers, you are likely to sense it as an unwanted visitor into your comfort zone, or you might receive it as a lovely angel of life. I chose the second option, with no hesitation while my husband preferred driving them away. After all, I've never come to stop to feel the relationship with sparrows.
I recalled when I was a little girl living in the city, I lived in an apartment with a flat roof viewed from our kitchen window. Every day my mom and I would go out to feed the sparrows. She taught me how to call them with a clicking sound she made with her tongue. I have loved sparrows ever since. So every day in my spare time, I can't stop observing and celebrating their dance from our window. I stuffed them with the leftovers on our tablecloth after every meal. And I have provided them with every kind of bases and stands of our house.
Undoubtedly, they feel at ease in our backyard. And that has led them to gather up courage and slide into our kitchen, bedroom or even reading room. Perhaps because they have the feeling that we don' t consider them trouble makers, but friendly neighbors. But I am slightly worried about their droppings (粪便).
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day, they left some droppings in my husband's reading room.
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About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God!”
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【答案】One day, they left some droppings in my husband 's reading room. They happened to dirty his important work reports on the desk. He was so angry that he asked me to close the windows. I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows can't break in again. My husband kept silent, and at last he calmed down. I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals.
About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God !” Thinking something similar happened again, I ran over to have a look. He was looking out of the window and said excitedly, “Look! What a surprise! There are three eggs in the sparrow's nest! They 're going to have babies of their own!” He was happy, like a child and unconsciously opened the closed window. After that, there are always breadcrumbs on the window platform of the reading room.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，在作者生活之处有许多麻雀，作者欢迎它们的到来，在后院为它们准备了食物和落脚处，作者将它们当成了友好的邻居，只是有点担心它们的粪便。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：有一天，它们在我丈夫的书房里留下了一些粪便，所以应该写粪便落在书桌上给丈夫带来的尴尬和懊恼，要详细描述丈夫的动作和心理，与作者的反应及应对措施等。第二段开头是：大约两周后，我听到我丈夫说:“哦，天哪!”本段应该写丈夫的感叹、作者的好奇，并描述事情的原委，以及丈夫对于麻雀态度的转变等等。要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：do a thorough cleaning，break in，run over，have a look等高级词汇；结果状语从句，如He was so angry that he asked me to close the windows；宾语从句，如I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows can't break in again；定语从句，如I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals等高级句式。
Part5：高考真题再现
真题1：:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions (情绪) get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay ” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit, Poppy didn’t.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, “What should we do to cheer Poppy up ” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.”
It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy
welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on
it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2
That video was posted the day before Halloween. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案1】
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer. With the box tipping over, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn’t take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。波比一看到这只小狗就高兴地跳了起来。她低下头，好奇地看着它。然后她变得非常兴奋，她不小心撞倒了盒子，试图靠近。盒子翻了过来，小家伙走了出来，他并不害羞，立刻熟悉了波比。没过多久，两人就在房子里玩耍，高高兴兴地互相跑着。
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. “Oh my god, who is this ” His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. “It’s Poppy’s new companion.” said Mom. (155)
几周后，这个男孩从大学走回家了。自从他第一次离家这么长时间以来，他就一直在想念父母和狗。当男孩看到波比时，他冲向狗，弯下腰给她一个大大的拥抱。突然，那男孩注意到了那只小狗。“哦，天哪，这是谁？”他的父母嘲笑他脸上惊讶的表情。“这是波比的新伴侣。””妈妈说。
【参考答案2】
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.It was hiding in one corner of the box, with a curious look in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried to climb out of the box, but it fell down on its back, unable to stand up. Upon seeing this, his parents could not help laughing. Gently, Mom picked it up from the box and put it on the floor. "Poppy, isn′t it a sweet dog It's for you!" Mom said in a soft voice."It's your companion." Cheerful and yet a little nervous, Poppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much to the relief of his parents, they were like peas and carrots soon afterwards, and it seemed as if Ropp had forgotten her old friend.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。它藏在盒子的一个角落里，眼睛里有一种奇怪的神情。它摇着尾巴，试图爬出盒子，但背部倒了下来，站不起来。一看到这一点，他的父母就忍不住笑了起来。妈妈轻轻地把它从盒子里拿起来，放在地板上。“这不是一只可爱的狗吗？”这是给你准备的！”妈妈用一种温柔的声音说。“这是你的同伴。”波比很高兴，但又有点紧张，不停地跑着新家庭成员吠叫。但让他的父母松了一口气的是，不久之后它们就像豌豆和胡萝卜一样，罗普似乎已经忘记了她的老朋友。
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. Poppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiously. It took the boy for a long time to notice that there was a cute puppy beside Poppy,growling and sniffing at his feet.Immediately, he bent down,stroked its head and asked,"What an adorable puppy! Whose is it " His parents smiled and replied,"We got it for Puppy because.." Knowing what had happened to Poppy when he was at the university, the boy was so moved that he took the old girl in his arms.Tears burred his vision as he murmured,"Poppy,I miss you, too." And quietly, Poppy raised her head and watched the young teenager like xWaby in his arms.
几周后，男孩从大学回家。 波比扑向他，兴奋地舔着他的手和脸，她的眼睛闪闪发光，她的尾巴剧烈地摆动。 男孩花了很长时间才注意到波比旁边有一只可爱的小狗，在他的脚边咆哮和嗅。 他立刻弯下腰，抚摸它的头，问：“多么可爱的小狗啊！ 是谁的？” 他的父母笑了笑，回答说：“我们给波比买的，因为......”他知道波比在大学时发生了什么很感动，把那个老女孩抱在怀里。 他喃喃地说：“波比，我也想你。” 然后静静地，波比抬起头，看着那年轻的少年在他怀里。
真题2：拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ___________________
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Para 2:
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. _____________________________
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One possible version:
Para 1:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.
Para 2:
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear!
几分钟后，这只熊回到了我们的营地。然后我们意识到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因为这次他似乎更凶狠了，而且像疯了一样猛烈地推了推篱笆。我的心狂狂，不知道该怎么办。在这个关键时刻，埃利抓起几块蒜蓉面包，扔过了栅栏。它已经成功了！熊阻止了进攻，跑到面包边。但没过多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回来了。
第2部分：
就在那一刻，直升机来了。“谢天谢地，我们得救了！”埃莉喊道。直升机一降落，我们很快就上了飞机，兴奋而松了一口气。当我们安全地坐在直升机上时，我惊讶地发现这只熊终于撕掉了栅栏，向我们留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相机，拍摄了这个罕见的场景，我们被一只北极熊抢劫了！读后续写
三个的万能情感句
Part1：第一个情感万能句 - 1 -
Part2：第二个情感万能句 - 2 -
Part3：第三个情感万能句 - 3 -
Part 4：素材日积月累 - 4 -
Part1：第一个情感万能句
To one's +情绪名词，主句
这个句式，非常简单。属于入门级的情感描述句。主句是用来描述情绪产生的原因。首先我们来看例句：
To my surprise,Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.令我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
要想这个句子学好，必须积累情绪名词，比如：
【正态度】amazement惊奇, delight高兴, joy高兴, satisfaction满足，excitement兴奋,
【负态度】annoyance烦恼, disappointment失望, horror恐怖, shame,羞耻 sorrow悲伤,
【中性态度】puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔, relief欣慰, surprise/ amazement惊讶
下面我们把这个简单句型，进行升级。
【升级1】加强情绪的语气
比如我想要表达的是：非常令我吃惊的是，汤姆在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。你可以这样写：Much / Greatly to my surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
也就是在to前面加上much, greatly，或者在名词前面添加great这个形容词：
To my great surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级2】to the +情绪名词+ of sb（名词或者代词），比如我想要表达的是：
令他的父母感到吃惊的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。
To the surprise f his parents, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
这里把To my surprise改成了To the surprise f his parents ，本质上，是两种所有格的变换。
【升级3】情绪名词叠加使用。
比如我要表达：令他惊讶和高兴的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖
To his surprise and joy, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级4】：“to one’s +情绪名词”位置可变换
这个短语的位置可以句首，句中，句末。请看下面例句：
I，to my surprise, found that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest
Part2：第二个情感万能句
What+情绪动词+sb +was +that从句
What 主语从句描述情绪，that表语从句描述情绪产生的原因，在续写里通常可以表达故事发展情节。
【举例】
让我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
What surprised me was that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【归纳整理】
【高兴类】delight, please, excite, cheer, amuse, satisfy,
【生气类】annoy, upset【惊讶类】surprise, astonish, shock, amaze
,【害怕类】frighten, scare, terrify,
【失望类】depress, disappoint, discourage, bore
【忧虑类】worry, concern，
【其他类】puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impress
Part3：第三个情感万能句
sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.
这句话表示：“某人感到一股强烈的......在内心升腾、奔涌。”
这个万能句也可以用来描写情绪和心理，比句式结构比前两个句子要复杂，表现力也要更丰富。well up表示“涌出”，我们可以这样记忆：well表示“好”以外，还可以表示“井”。“涌出”是用到了“井”这个含义。surge表示“汹涌”。这个句子的亮点是后半句welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.，把情绪的描写形象化，具体化了。我们先来看两个例句：
举例：Jane感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Jane felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
举例2：Jane感到一股强烈的嫉妒，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.
（jealous嫉妒的，jealousy是“嫉妒”的名词形式。）
我们再来看看，这个句型还可以如何拓展升级。非常简单，就是加上非谓语动词，在不同的位置，发挥的作用不同。
升级一：句首可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。
举例：看到丈夫再跟一个漂亮的女孩聊天 ，Sunny感到一股强烈的恐惧在内心升腾，奔涌
Seeing his husband chatting with a beautiful girl , Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.
升级二：句尾可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生后的结果。
请看下面的例句：
简感到一种强烈的嫉妒感在她心中涌出来，把书扔向女孩。
Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her ,throwing the book at the girl.
Part4：素材日积月累
人物情绪描写之一：开心（通过心理、表情、动作来表达）
平庸版：He was happy.
进阶版:1. Her eyes shone/glittered/sparkled /twinkled with joy.
Her face lit up with pleasure.（容光焕发）
Her heart was pounding with excitement. （砰砰直跳）
Happiness/joy/pleasure/delight took hold of him.(极度开心)
She was overflowing with happiness/joy/pleasure/delight.(幸福洋溢)
He shed tears of joy.（流下开心的泪水）
例句：
1. His eyes twinkled with pleasure when he saw the news.
当他看到新闻，他的眼里闪耀着快乐。
He grinned with delight when he saw us.
当他看到我们，咧开嘴开心地笑了。
The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪耀。
I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.
我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。
He cast us a look/glance,with his face wearing a broad/wide/radiant/warm smile.
她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。
When his mother kissed him on the cheek,it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world.
当妈妈亲吻他的脸颊时，小婴儿开心极了。
人物情绪描写之二：伤心（心理、表情、动作）
平庸版：He was sad.
进阶表达：
不同的哭：cry 哭（泛指，哭出声） sob 呜咽，啜泣 wail 嚎啕大哭 weep 小声/无声流泪
burst into tears 放声大哭 fight back tears 抑制住泪水
be close to tears / be on the verge of tears 快要哭了 be in tears 含泪
Her eyes were wet with tears
例句：
He sighed with disappointment.
他失望地叹了口气。
He struggled to fight back his tears.
他试图控制住自己的泪水。
His eyes brimmed with tears of sorrow.
他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。
He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着，眼泪流下他的脸颊。
I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.
我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
I saw an old lady wailing with fist beating her chest in the street corner. 我看到一个老奶奶在街角捶胸痛哭。
When he embraced me with his arms open wide, I felt my throat choke with sob. 当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉得自己喉头哽咽。
Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly. 一听到这个坏消息，她就被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。读后续写：四点合围技术
在读后续写中，需要把情节进行场景化，服务主题，通俗点就是列提纲。很多同学的作文不是死于字数少，而是写的太多，恨不得把自己积累的句子都用上才放心，结果发现情节还没有开始，第一大段地空格都远远不够用了。
读后续写原文提供的两个段落的首句起到很关键的作用，在续写时，无论是时间的先后还是情节的发展，都要以这两句话作为内在逻辑关系的出发点。他们是很重要的续写提示，在很大程度上控制着情节的发展方向。分析续写所提供的两句话。
建议大家对段手语进行分析设问，紧密结合原文中五个W和一个H的逻辑顺序来设计续写的主要情节。
方法口诀：已知推未知，完善关系链和情节链
所谓已知是指续写时所提供的每段的首句话。所谓未知就是指我们需要续写的内容。推论的方法如下：
第一段 第一句 顺推 第二句 （根据所给的人物 要么展开语言、动作，要么描写心理、表情等等）
第二段 第一句 逆推 第一段尾句，过渡句
第二段 第一句 顺推 第二句（根据所给的人物 要么展开语言、动作，要么描写心理、表情等等）
第二段 尾句 总结或感慨。
【例1】以2016年10月为例
下面继续以2016年10月，浙江高考英语首考圈的续写原文为例。来说明续写情节的注意事项。
Step1：定四句
根据两个提示句，确定好四句。
读后续写第一段内容要与首句一致。题目提供的第一段首句尾but no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again。既然讲直升机不再来了，儿天又黑了。
那么预设的情节为Jane，又要在森林里过一夜了，所以续写第一段可以写他为过夜做准备，也可以写夜的阴森恐怖。
第一段 第一句：
可以：
Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. 简不得不独自呆在森林里度过另一个寒冷的夜晚。
Jane tried to find a shelter from the night cold. 简试图找一个躲避夜晚寒冷的地方。
Amid the dreadful darkness, strange sounds of different insects were heard. 在可怕的黑暗中，人们听到了不同昆虫的奇怪声音。
不可以：
Jane and Tom drove the car for three hours happily and went back home.（简和汤姆愉快地开了三个小时，然后回家了。）
迷路的gene和在银地的Tom突然一起开开心心的回家，两人不在一起，怎么可能？
Jane became satisfied with herself. (简对自己很满意。)
没有直升机继续来搜寻自己，天又黑了，Jane对自己很满意，这是多么大的思维中断和跳跃啊，分数当然也只能跳水了
续写第一段内容要与原文情节一致。续写第一段的情节内容，不仅要与已知的手续一致，也要与原文的情节内容一致，比如可以写Jane，独自一人在森林过夜时感到后悔，怪自己和丈夫为了一点小事而吵架
“If it weren't for that stupid quarrel. I wouldn't be trapped here.” She thought to herself , regretful tears clouding her eyes. “如果不是因为那场愚蠢的争吵的话。我不会被困在这里的。她心里想，后悔的泪水蒙蔽了眼睛。
第二段 第一句提示句：
续写第一段段尾要和第二段段首句内容一致，题目提供的第二段段首句尾。It was daybreak when Jane woke up。
根据第二段首句，以下是可以预设的第一段情节是：
She felt asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.
After quite a while Jane fell asleep.
In her dream. She met Tom who drove the helicopter to save her and th They hugged for a long time and make a promise to each other that they would never quarrel again for anything.
以上写法中的睡着做梦。的都与第二段首句醒来一致。尤其是第三种写法，通过梦境把前文因为吵架而走出而出走。几迷路后，后悔的心情都提及了，使得续写与原文高度融洽
四续写第二段内容要与第二段首句以及原文情节一致。题目提供的第二段首句尾it was daybreak when Jane woke up。那么后面顺理成章的可以写他醒来以后吃东西，继续想方设法让自己得救
She ate some berries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. 她吃了一些浆果，然后沿着小溪走着，希望能找到一个合适的地方来引导直升机。
She struggled to her feet and headed for the stream. After having some barriers and stream water Jane walked slowly to an open area to wait for her rescue.
她挣扎着站起来，向小溪走去。在遇到了一些障碍和水流后，简慢慢地走到一个开阔的区域，等待她的救援。
这里吃野果，喝溪水，去空旷的地方等待直升机救援等，情节与原文情节内容完全一致，总之只有深入解读文本，才能为成功的续写奠定基础
【例2】以8省联考试题为例
分析的目的是看是否有新的线索出现，或者是否有与旧的线索呼应的部分。以8省联考试题为例：
第一段 第一句：When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
第二段 第一句：After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
通过分析句子我们可以注意到：第一句给出了“是否吃午饭”的新情节，那么毫无疑问，第一段的展开应该是围绕午饭这个问题展开。第二句出现了“纸袋”的新线索，这是前面我们在理清文章脉络中所没有出现过的线索，而且出现的位置是二段首句，那么毫无疑问这个线索必须出现在我们所要续写的一段中，而且我们也需要考虑：这个纸袋是做什么用的呢？为什么我有了这个纸袋？谁给的？诸如此类的问题。
第一段 第一句：When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
顺推 第二句：我说没吃。 （为什么是没吃呢？这就是二段一句中出现的“纸袋”所暗示的答案）
第二段 第一句：After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
逆推 第一段尾句：他们一家上了车。
顺推 第二句：我看到袋子里有......
第二段 尾句：
世上还是有一些乐于助人的善良人的！！”（他们一家帮我修了车，还留了一个纸袋所引发的感慨“）
Step2：合围：完善关系链
所以，现在我们的任务就是将我们所推论出来的句子进行关系链的完善问题。这个过程可以是动作链的完善，也可以是心理历程的完善。以8省联考试题为例
（第一段 第二句）我说没吃-----他们给我张罗吃的-----我拒绝他们----但是没成功，留下了纸袋----（第一段 尾句）他们一家上了车
这样就构成了第一段一个较为完整的关系链的闭环。读后续写：脱离困境型
Part1：经典例文（玩具店遇险） 1
Part2：困境类场景描写 3
一、环境描写（恶劣） 3
二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎） 4
三、转机描写——描写声音传来或看见了什么 6
四、情绪描写（希望+努力） 7
五、脱险描写 7
六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴） 7
七、主旨描写 8
Part3：灵活应用 8
例1：瀑布遇险 8
例2：火灾救老人 9
例3：森林迷路脱险 12
Part1：经典例文（玩具店遇险）
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a Saturday afternoon. The color of the sky was changing, first light gray, then dark gray, and finally dark and dense. The wind was blowing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the strong wind. It began to rain cats and dogs. Soon, the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
On such a stormy afternoon, my mother took my five-year-old brother, Christopher, and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper. “So many toys,” the advertisement had
shouted in full and flashy color,“that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”
Christopher and I couldn't have been more excited. We ran across the parking lot, through the cold rain, as fast as our little legs could carry us. We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella, which never worked when she wanted it to. “Christine! Take care of your young brother!” Mother shouted at the top of her voice.
“Christine!I'm going to find the Lego section(乐高积木区)! There's a new pirate ship I want,
and I have four dollars! Maybe I can buy it!” Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly. I only
half heard him. I took a right turn and, to my wide-eyed delight, found myself in the midst of the Barbie(芭比) World.
I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside. I jumped at the noise, dropping the doll to the floor. The lights flickered(闪烁) once and went out, covering everything in a blanket of blackness. Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds, casting frightening shadows on my mind.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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“Oh no,” I thought, “Where's Christopher ”
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Paragraph 2:“Christine, I'm here.”
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答案
[写作提示]原文讲述“我”和弟弟以及妈妈去买玩具,结果“我”和弟弟刚进去玩具店没多久,由于雷电,商店停电,我们都看不到对方。根据第一段的段首句,本段应该是作者在黑暗中寻找弟弟的情景。在续写时,除了动作,还要注意心理描述。根据第二段的段首句可知,弟弟找到了“我”。此段应该描述姐弟俩相遇的情景。这里的描述应该有“劫后余生”的感觉。
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“Oh no,” I thought, “Where's Christopher ” Scared, I was frozen on the spot, overcome with
the need to see my brother, hug him and make certain he was all right. My stomach twisted and
turned inside. I ran up and down the aisles through the darkness, panic filling my small chest and
making it difficult to breathe. I knocked into displays of candy and tripped over toys, all the while
frantically calling my brother's name. Anxious as I was, I could barely see his figure. Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face, but I continued to run.
“哦，不，”我想，“克里斯托弗在哪里？”我当场冻僵了，需要见到我哥哥，拥抱他，确保他没事。我的胃扭曲了，转了进去。我在黑暗中跑来来跑去，恐慌充满了我的小胸部，呼吸困难。我一直在看糖果，被玩具绊倒
疯狂地叫着我哥哥的名字。虽然我很焦虑，但我几乎看不见他的身影。沮丧和恐惧的眼泪从我的脸上滴了下来，但我继续跑着。
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“Christine, I'm here.” Excitement took my breath away—there in the dark Lego aisle I found
Christopher. He was standing alone, perfectly still, hiding under the pirate ship set. I began to cry
out from relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly. He hugged me back, say-
ing, “I knew if I waited here, Christine, you would be able to find me.”Then, I took his hand in
mine and we went to find our mother, who must be desperately searching the store for us.
“克里斯汀，我在这里。“兴奋让我喘住了呼吸——在黑暗的乐高走廊里，我找到了克里斯托弗。他独自站着，完全不动，藏在海盗船下面。我开始欣慰地大叫起来，伸出双臂搂住他，紧紧地拥抱着他。他拥抱我，说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克里斯汀，你就能找到我。”然后，我抓住我的手，我们去找我们的母亲，她一定是拼命地在商店里找我们。
Part2：困境类场景描写
一、环境描写（恶劣）
——波涛汹涌：
1.As I floated on, a huge wave (一个巨浪) whistled (呼啸而来)and approached us.
2. The big wind roared through our ears (在耳边咆哮), and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther.
3. All my senses told me that a big wave was about to come.(即将来临)
4. A powerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wave was coming towards us. (靠近我们)
——鲨鱼的可怕：
It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her.
The shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of sharp teeth.
——陆地上的水：
Splashing raindrops hit the windshield frantically and the skies were overhung with a blanket of grey,.
雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。
The water kept rising, as if it would engulf me alive.
水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。
Unfortunately, the water poured in and crept upon my waist.
在水里行走（不可能rush, dash）
——推荐句型：
1. The wind blows/whistles/howls/picks up/whips through sth/sweeps across sth.
风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……
2. They were getting drenched by icy water.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。
3. The heavy rain was violently beating against the window.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。
4. The rain drummed on the roof of the building.雨不停地击打着房预。
5. The furious storm is grumbling outside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。
6. The icy wind started howling, stinging my face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
7. A flash of lightning lit up the whole sky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。
8. The sharp claps of thunder pierced the quiet night.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。
9. The bolt of lightning stabs the earth. 一道闪电划过天空。
10. 天空和海洋融为一体| the sky and the ocean melt into each other
二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）
——疲倦/寒冷
1. Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.
2. Time passing us, tiredness engulfed (包围了) us with my feet stiff/numb (僵硬/麻木)and shivering.
3.Exhausted as we were (尽管很累), we didn’t stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept swimming.
4. After what seemed a century, I felt extremely fatigued (非常累) while swimming hard to keep myself afloat(漂浮着的).
5. He was huddled into his coat, his face blue with cold.他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。
6. Fingers numbed by the chilly water, throat choked by icy wind, I felt on the verge of collapsing.
7. She clasped the baby to her bosom in the biting/cutting/piercing/sharp wind.在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。
8. The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife/needles.
寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。
9. Her teeth were chattering with cold.她冷得牙齿直打颤。
——害怕
1. I took a deep breath and swallowed hard (害怕地咽了口吐沫).
2. A chill feeling crept up her spine.
3. Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind, which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright (难以控制地发抖).
4. Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body.(在身体涌动)
5. As time ticked by, fear crept upon my heart(爬上我心头) and I could hardly tell how long I could plough on (前行).
6. The thought of hopelessness sent shivers down my spine(让我后脊背发凉).
7. I was flooded with a sense of horror(被恐惧感淹没).
8. Seeing this, I felt my fear growing/increasing(剧增) inside.
9. I felt a wave of anxiety(一阵焦虑) swept over my body (袭来).
10. Tears of frustration and horror gushing from my eyes, I felt I had sunk into hopelessness.
11. A sense of terror sweeping through my body, I shouted in panic, “Help! Help!”
12. The hairs on the back of my neck prickled with dread and I was drenched in sweat. （汗毛倒竖；湿透）
13. Swallowed by a wave of despair, I crossed my fingers, closed my eyes and prayed in a shivering voice.
14. Trembling like a leaf, the car was ready to be flooded away at any time, which refrained me from moving a single inch.
——描写挣扎努力
1. Tom looked thoughtful (若有所思)
2. “We need to think out a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head(绞尽脑汁)
3. ...,We swam tooth and nail(全力以赴地).
4. We spared no effort to(不遗余力地) to swim towards the shore.
5. We exchanged a determined look(互换了坚定的神情) , then ploughed on (继续前行) at an incredible speed(难以置信的速度).
三、转机描写——描写声音传来或看见了什么
1. A distant sound reached our ears.(传入耳朵)
2. Just then, my mind raced – why not call 911 and Joe
3. The sound of the boat echoed in our ears.(在我们耳内回响)
4. At that moment, a shrill whistle(汽笛声)ripped the air (划破天空).
5. When we were at a loss of what to do, there were rasping (刺耳的) shouts(喊叫声)rising from the distance (从远处升起).
6. Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out.
7. In sheer desperation(在绝望中), I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us in the distance.
8. After a long time, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help.
四、情绪描写（希望+努力）
——描写如释重负
1. As if clutching at straws, I dialed the number again and again.
2. Hearing the comforting news, I couldn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)
3. His words reignited the flame of hope in my heart
4. On hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气), grinning merrily at each other.
5.Smiling in relief (如释重负地微笑), I felt a rush of pride(感到一阵自豪).
6. Overjoyed(狂喜) to see a boat coming to our rescue, Tom and I breathed a sigh of relief(如释重负地松了口气)
7. Stiff from keeping in one position for hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies.
五、脱险描写
1.The boat finally reached us and took all of us back to the shore.船终于到达了我们身边，把我们所有人都带回了岸边。
2.Yelling at the top of his lung, Joe tried to soothe me and convince me that it was the best way to escape the danger.乔大声大叫，试图安慰我，让我相信这是逃离危险的最好方法。
六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）
1.When we pictured what the merry scene would be, relief lay in my heart and happiness was written on my face.当我们想象欢乐的场景是什么时，我心中有解脱，幸福写在我的脸上。
2.Sighing in relief, I couldn’t stop thinking about the whole event. I knew they would have died if they had been in the sea for any longer.我如释重负，不停地想整个事件。我知道如果他们再在海里，就会死了。
七、主旨描写
1. It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。
2. For the first time since…, one’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.这是...，的情绪第一次充分利用他，眼泪从他的脸颊上滴下来。
3. Only then did I realize that it was Joe who had been caring for me through thick and thin.
4. Sobbing in relief, I was overwhelmed by waves of guilt and remorse. I murmured sorry, reflecting that I should have taken his warning seriously.
5. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.
Part3：灵活应用
例1：瀑布遇险
It was last August. We were on vacation, having driven from our home in Washington, DC, to New Hampshire. We wouldn’t see friends or family—it would be just me, my husband, and our two kids out for a nice,safe, socially distanced week away.
We had hiked about half a mile to a popular spot called Diana’s Baths, near the town of North Conway, where the water falls off a series of flat boulders layered up the mountainside like an M.C. Escher drawing. The baths were full of families, so we made our way to one of the upper levels of rock to keep our distance.
Both where we sat and down below, the water cascaded and fell into small pools, where kids in swimsuits were splashing around. I watched as some younger parents nervously corralled their toddlers away from the rocks’ edges, feeling grateful that my husband and I were out of that stage— that our kids, at six and eight, could navigate their physical space with more confidence. Don’t get me wrong: I was still terrified as I saw my two boys jump between the slippery rocks. “No running,” I said again and again. “Stay away from all those edges.”
But I soon relaxed, and we were all having fun, splashing in the pools, my kids laughing as my husband dunked his head under the cold running water. Then, seconds later, every fear I’d ever had rose to the surface.
I turned and saw my son Wyatt sitting down between two boulders（大圆石） in a fast-moving stream. I yelled at him to get out. He yelled back something that I couldn’t hear, and then he disappeared over the edge.
My husband was already sprinting down the rocks. I finally looked. Wyatt was sitting up—he was alive. My biggest fear was erased.
While everyone else looked on from a distance, too afraid or unbothered to help, a lady with a mask didn’t hesitate. In fact, by the time I had climbed down the rocks and my husband had pulled Wyatt out of the water, she had already called 911.
Paragraph1:
She told me that she was a nurse. ___________________________________________
Paragraph2:
The rescue team came. ________________________________________
参考答案：
She told me that she was a nurse. She gave Wyatt a red, white, and blue striped towel to put under his head. She implored us to keep him still and on his back in case he had injured his spinal cord. I finally had the wherewithal to ask her name. “Lisa,” she said. “And I’m not leaving you.” She looked at me so deeply, as if she were trying to take every bit of energy, love, and strength in her body and push it out through the only part of her face I could see.
她告诉我她是一名护士。她给了怀亚特一条红、白、蓝条纹的毛巾放在他的头底下。她恳求我们让他保持不动，以防他伤了脊髓。我终于有了钱问她的名字了。“丽莎，”她说。“我不会离开你。她深深地看着我，仿佛她想把身体里的一切能量、爱和力量，从我唯一看到的脸推出去。
The rescue team came. They took Wyatt out of the park on a stretcher. An ambulance took us to the small local hospital where he was undergoing tests and scans. As soon as I knew that Wyatt was going to be OK, my thoughts fell to Lisa. If she had not stepped up, would someone else have done so Perhaps. But it was her. She was the one who went toward the unthinkable instead of turning away.
救援队来了。他们用担架把怀亚特带出了公园。一辆救护车把我们送到当地的小医院，他正在那里接受检查和扫描。我一知道怀亚特会没事，我的思绪就落到丽莎身上了。如果她没有站起来，还有其他人会这样做吗？也许吧。但那是她。她是那个走向不可想象的事情而不是转身离开的人。
例2：火灾救老人
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The event that stands out in Tom's memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old. He was at home with his elder sister Jane. Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud, but he soon realized this time it was different.
“Quick!Quick!Remove the motorcycles from the shop.” someone yelled.Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him. The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.
Jane, who had been playing the violin in her room, hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the door and along the corridor(走廊)through the smoke.
They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane suddenly stopped.She turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had no idea what she was doing, but he followed her.
Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them, who they called Makcik. Jane began banging on Makcik's door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them, Tom could see many of their neighbors—some still in their pyjamas—running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind.
“She would have run for safety like everyone else!” Tom cried. However, Jane refused to give up. “I know Makcik's still inside.” She said she was familiar with Makcik's daily routine and
was certain she would still be sleeping. She pounded against the door. “Go downstairs. Go now!
Go!”
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Tom noticed the flame was reaching up.
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Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.
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[写作提示] 这是一篇比较典型的具有正能量,而且故事性比较强的文章。文章讲述了在一次火灾中,Jane 和Tom不顾安危去救援一个邻居老人的故事。文章的第一部分叙述了两个孩子在大火中表现出的勇敢和善良。那么续写部分就应该延续这种故事情节和赞扬的态度。根据第一段的提示句,该段应该是对他们在敲门救邻居时火势蔓延的描述,当然更应该涉及两个孩子在这种情况下的表现。而第二段的提示句提示我们有其他的邻居来帮忙,那么应该是一个幸运的结尾。
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Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane's hand tightly. Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible. Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying.
汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。他被吓得冻僵了，深深地站在那里。他明白了形势的严重性，紧紧地握着简的手。他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛都在刺痛。时间似乎停滞不前，尽管他们可能在那里只有两三分钟。汤姆请求简尽快跑安全。简试图保护她的鼻子不受窒息的烟雾，并摇了摇头。她不停地敲敲门。汤姆突然哭了起来。
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Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. A sense of strength immediately re-
placed the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in
the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed,
unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom were very happy.
幸运的是，一些路过的邻居停下来提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻使简的心中充满了越来越强烈的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们，马克西克女士一定还在房间里。他们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然，马克西克正躺在床上，失去了知觉。她被带下楼，然后被紧急送往医院，最后苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气，简和汤姆也非常高兴。
高级语块 pound against猛敲 with all one's might竭尽全力
佳句背诵 Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot.
A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind.
例3：森林迷路脱险
Deep in the forest, my husband and I had fun climbing over and crawling under the downed trees that blocked the dirt path before us. It was May, yet we walked up a snow-covered hill. When we noticed our jeans were wet up to our knees, it did not dampen our spirits Not once did we say, “Let’s turn around.” This was our vacation, and we were on an adventure. Little did we know this was the beginning of many more surprises.
The trail was marked as an easy one-kilometer like yet we were already walking a long distance. Our lightheartedness stopped when we came out into a clearing and saw a parking lot without our rental car in it. As my eyes scanned the surroundings, nothing looked familiar. My heart raced. I realized we were lost in a national park that did not officially open for another week.
Usually, I am the calm one in the relationship, but my husband surprised me with his calmness. This did not comfort me; in fact, it heightened my fear. As we walked, I asked my husband to call for help, but there was no cell-phone signal in this isolated（偏僻的）area.
It was awfully quiet except for our footsteps hitting the road, and my heavy breathing. My husband suggested we conserve energy and walk slower. With each step on the road, my feet and thighs hurt while my mind raced with thoughts about people who got lost in the Canadian woods for days.
My vision sharpened. I noticed everything around me: the trees, rocks and snow. I thought we could eat the snow on the ground in case we needed water. For the first time in my life, I was ready and willing to get a ride, but we did not meet with a single car on the road. Silently, I prayed multiple times. We focused on each other, made joint decisions and connected through gratitude. We managed to stay on the main road and walked straight on.
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My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance.
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Just then, a friendly woman appeared, saying, “Hello.”
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【参考答案】
My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance. In no time we found ourselves heading for it. We were filled with hope and excitement to find such a building in the middle of nowhere. We climbed up the hill at a swinging pace as if all the pains were gone. As we approached, a sign came into sight, which read: Administration Office. However, it was not open for business. The empty hall made us nervous all at once. We stood there hopelessly, wondering what to do next.
Just then, a friendly woman appeared, saying, “Hello.” I could barely hold back my enthusiasm and blurted out, “We’re lost!” She comforted us and opened a room for us to take a break. Seeing we were cold and hungry, she treated us with hot chocolate. After studying the map, we figured out that our car was parked over three kilometers away. She offered us a ride back to our car and we accepted gladly. I felt relieved to see our rental car again. What a blessing to have such an unforgettable experience.读后续写：友情类
Part1：经典例文（朋友和解） 1
Part2：友情类故事构造“三步法” 4
第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突） 4
第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补） 5
第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜） 6
Part3：灵活应用 6
例1：三位好朋友与读书俱乐部 6
例2：陌生地方的新友情 9
例3：结识到新朋友 11
例4：我们的友谊 14
Part1：经典例文（朋友和解）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
“Want to go to the pool tomorrow ” Rosa asked Stephanie during recess. The pool at the YMCA was one of their favorite places, where they learnt and practiced swimming.
Rosa and Stephanie did everything together. They rode the school bus together. They sat together during lunch. They took dance lessons together and they even went to the same summer camp. Their classmates called them “twins”. They were best friends. Most of the time.
Sometimes, though, when Stephanie was with other friends, she ignored Rosa or treated her like a little kid, even though they were the same age. Rosa and Stephanie had played together since they were babies, but sometimes Stephanie didn't act like a friend.
Today was one of those times.
“Sorry. I’m already going to the pool,” Stephanie said. “Toni and Vanessa and I are going.” She gave a broad smile, but in Rosa’s eyes, it wasn’t her nice smile. Saying nothing more, she walked straight away to join Toni and Vanessa, and Rosa was left standing alone, with her face burned and an angry tension coming into her limbs.
After school, at dance class, Stephanie talked and giggled with the other dancers as they stretched in front of the mirror. When Rosa came in, Stephanie didn’t say hello to her, but just another smile. Rosa hesitated for a while about whether she should join them, but she still felt too upset.
Then she noticed Kiara, the new girl. Rosa joined her and began stretching, too. Kiara smiled and Rosa smiled back. The two girls began to talk. Rosa discovered that Kiara was not the quiet girl she had thought she was. Kiara talked a lot — about her little brother, about the tree house her uncle had built and even about swimming. “I love swimming,” Kiara said. “I will hold a pool part at the YMCA.Would you like to come ” “Yes. It’s awesome.” Rosa responded. She tried not to check the mirror to see if Stephanie had noticed. She hoped Stephanie felt left out.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After the dance class, when Rosa boarded the bus, Stephanie was waiting in their usual seat.
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When Rosa saw Stephanie in low spirits, her heart sank.
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【答案】After the dance lesson, when Rosa boarded the bus, Stephanie was waiting in their usual seat. Seeing Rosa, Stephanie quickly moved her backpack off the seat to make room for her. But Rosa walked past and slid into the empty seat next to Kiara. They were talking about the pool party when Stephanie went over. “Do you still want to go swimming tonight ” Stephanie asked. “I’m already going,” she said without looking up. “Kiara and I are going together.” Rosa smiled. Stephanie nodded and looked at her feet.
舞蹈课结束后，罗莎上车时，斯蒂芬妮在他们通常的座位上等着。看到罗莎，斯蒂芬妮迅速把背包从座位上移下来，为她腾出空间。但罗莎走了过去，滑进了基亚拉旁边的空座位上。当斯蒂芬妮过去的时候，他们正在谈论泳池派对。“你今晚还想去游泳吗？””斯蒂芬妮问。“我已经要走了，”她没有抬起头来地说。“基亚拉和我要一起去了。”罗莎笑着说。斯蒂芬妮点了点头，看着她的脚。
When Rosa saw Stephanie in low spirits, her heart sank. Getting even didn’t feel the way she had expected. She could walk away with her new friend and not look back. But when she saw Stephanie's watery eyes, her heart beat painfully. "Maybe we could all go together.” Rosa said. Stephanie’s face lit up. “I’m sorry for ignoring you. Thank you for your tolerance.” Stephanie said. Rosa gave her a hug and said, “I was too sensitive. Thank you for your tolerance, too.” The two girls smiled at each other, which was their nice smile.
罗莎看到斯蒂芬妮情绪低落，心沉了。甚至没有像她预期的那样感觉到。她可以和她的新朋友一起走开，而不是回头看。但当她看到斯蒂芬妮流泪时，她的心痛苦地跳动着。“也许我们都可以一起去。”罗莎说。斯蒂芬妮的脸亮了起来。“我很抱歉忽视了你。谢谢你的宽容。”斯蒂芬妮说。罗莎给了她一个拥抱，并对她说：“我太敏感了。也感谢你的宽容。两个女孩互相微笑，这是她们美好的微笑。
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Rosa和Stephanie是从小到大的好朋友，但有时Stephanie表现得不像朋友，有一天Rosa问Stephanie要不要一起去基督教青年会的游泳池游泳，Stephanie说她去过了就不去了，这让Rosa很尴尬；之后在舞蹈课上Rosa结识了新来的女孩Kiara，Rosa邀请Kiara一起去游泳，想以此来报复Stephanie。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“舞蹈课结束后，Rosa登上公共汽车时，Stephanie正在她们平常的座位上等着。”可知，第一段可描写Stephanie为Rosa腾位置，但Rosa并未坐在Stephanie身旁，而是与Kiara坐在了一起，Stephanie问Rosa还去不去游泳，Rosa说她和Kiara一起去，Stephanie很失落。
②由第二段首句内容“当Rosa看到Stephanie情绪低落时，她的心一沉。”可知，第二段可描写看到失落的Stephanie，Rosa并没有报复的快感，Rosa邀请Stephanie一起去游泳，最后两个女孩和解，露出美丽的笑容。
2.续写线索：座位——问话——失落——释然——和好——笑容
3.词汇激活
行为类
①迅速移开背包：quickly moved her backpack off / swiftly moved her backpack off
②走过去：went over / walked over
③不回头：not look back / not turn her head
情绪类
①心跳得很痛苦：beat painfully / beat bitterly
②露出喜色：lit up / brightened up
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Seeing Rosa, Stephanie quickly moved her backpack off the seat to make room for her.（用了现在分词短语作状语）
[高分句型2]. The two girls smiled at each other, which was their nice smile.（用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
Part2：友情类故事构造“三步法”
第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突）
1、内疚
1. Overwhelmed by guilt（充满内疚）, Asad quickly picked up the wallet and strode to Fahad, “I found it over there, and I think it is yours. ”（2020.12山水联盟）
2. Murmuring in a low voice（小声地低语）, he dodged Asad’s shining eyes, somehow even not daring to look into them. （2020.12山水联盟）
3. She now could do nothing but feel the regret burning in her heart（感觉内疚在她心里燃烧）. （2021潍坊一模）
4. Ariana nodded, beginning to feel guilty（开始感到内疚）. （广东省高三年级上学期调研考试）
2、困难与帮助
1. Not knowing what to do（不知道该做什么) , he walked out of the classroom and sat on a bench in front of the canteen. （2020.12山水联盟）
2. “The best thing you can do for Ashley is to treat her with kindness and sympathy（用善意和同情对待她).”（广东省高三年级上学期调研考试）
3. When Ariana gave the lunch to Ashley, she saw tears well up in Ashley’s eyes（眼泪都流出来了).（广东省高三年级上学期调研考试）
3、破裂
1. Because these were the people I considered my friends. I broke down in front of her. She apologized. But I felt cheated on. I told her about my decision of not wanting to continue this friendship further（我不再继续这份友谊的决定). We both missed each other. But neither of us wanted to give the last try.（2021潍坊一模）
2. During the trip, we intentionally avoided each other（有意避开彼此). However, I couldn’t help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same. 10.（2021潍坊一模）
第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补）
1、原谅/和好
1. Blushed, she broke the silence（打破沉默), “I am sorry again. I didn’t mean to hurt you.” Tears streaming down, she continued, “I should have talked to you earlier.” I stood up and reached out to hug her（伸出手拥抱她), “I am sorry, too. I should have been more generous.” （2021潍坊一模）
2. But deep down, we both know all the argument is just about helping us to grow into a better individual（帮助我们成长为更好的个体)instead of enemies.（2021潍坊一模）
3. Therefore, we both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive（足够忍耐和勇敢去原谅). （2021潍坊一模）
2、开心描写
1. 得知我们将有一个晚餐，我非常激动。（浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试）
I’m thrilled to know that we’ll have dinner together.
2.他非常激动，露齿而笑。（浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试）
Excitement crept over his heart and made him grin from ear to ear.
这顿饭使我激动不已。想象一下我们将在机场畅饮。（浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试）
I’m buzzing for the dinner. Imagine, we’re going to drink freely at the airport.
第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜）
1. It was on that very day that Asad made his first friend in the new school, and he truly reckoned the value of sincerity and honesty（明白真诚和诚实的价值) in a relationship.（2020.12山水联盟）
2. So as soon as the plane landed I called him and said, “Luke, that was such a wonderful thing you did for me（那是你为我做的最美妙的事情) . Thank you.”（浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试）
3. 一个忠诚的朋友抵得上成千上万的亲戚。（浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试）
It dawned on me that one loyal friend is worth ten thousand relatives.
4. If we really value our friends and friendship, always cherish their presence and show willingness to maintain and nurture the relationship（愿意保持和培养这段关系).（2021潍坊一模）
Part3：灵活应用
例1：三位好朋友与读书俱乐部
It was lunchtime, Jerry, David, Tom, and I went to the dining hall to have lunch. I glanced across the busy cafeteria and saw the new student, Jack. He was holding his plate and waiting in lines.
David noticed him too. “Why’s the new kid dressed like the headmaster ” he asked. Tom and Jimmy laughed.
“Jack’s cool. He’s in my English and history classes,” I said. However, I kept the truth that Jack and I had become friends when we worked on a project together. We discovered that we were both enthusiastic readers something I would never admit to Jerry, David, Tom.
I saw that Jack was walking toward us. “Don’t do it,” I thought, but in seconds he was at our table. My friends raised their eyebrows. Jerry, David, Tom piled their backpacks on the table and chairs so that there was no space left for another person to sit down. David said. “I don’t think we have room.”
This awkward situation froze the air. I could feel Jack looking at me, but I stared at my lunch as if it contained precious pearls of wisdom instead of rice and beans. After a long, uncomfortable pause, Jack left. I should have spoken up for him, but I couldn’t walk away from my three friends, could I
Jack didn’t speak to me after that meeting. He was soon hanging around with another group of kids. A few months later, I saw an announcement about Jack being chosen to be president of the school book club. I was happy for Jack’s achievements, but I realized I had made a big mistake when I said nothing at the lunch table that day. Why was I so afraid that my friends might find out that I like to read
As I stared at the announcement. I knew I needed to apologize to Jack — even if he did not want to become my friend again. I thought that my three friends would not agree. I also thought that I risked losing them as well. However, I knew that I would lose myself if I did nothing.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the dismissal bell rang, I gathered up my books, took a deep breath, and went to find Jack.
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Jack nodded, and then mentioned my three Mends.
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【答案】As the dismissal bell rang, I gathered up my books, took a deep breath, and went to find Jack. A wave of uncertainty overwhelmed me. On the way to Jack’s classroom. I felt several butterflies still fluttering in my heart. However, urged by the strong desire to be a member of the reading club, I quickened my paces spontaneously. The classroom door opened. Here came Jack. Looking into his eyes, I made an apology, explaining that I wanted to join the school book club.
解雇铃响了，我收拾起书，深吸了一口气，去找杰克。一波不确定性淹没了我。在去杰克的教室的路上。我感到很不安。然而，在渴望成为阅读俱乐部成员的强烈愿望下，我自发地加快了步伐。教室的门开了。杰克来了。看着他的眼睛，我道歉了一下，解释说我想加入学校的读书俱乐部。
Jack nodded and then mentioned my three friends. With hesitation, I had no idea how to answer him. Seeing through my mind, Jack smiled and put forward a good idea. The next day, we were having lunch when Jack approached, holding a notice to recruit new members, saying that if someone wanted to join the club, he must take three other students to form a group. To my surprise, my friends were also interested in the book club. In a flash, Jack and I beamed to each other.
杰克点了点头，然后提到了我的三个朋友。我犹豫着，不知道该怎么回答他。透过我的脑海，杰克笑了笑，提出了一个好主意。第二天，我们在吃午饭时，杰克走过来，发出了招募新成员的通知，说如果有人想加入俱乐部，他必须带其他三个学生组成一个小组。令我惊讶的是，我的朋友们也对这个读书俱乐部很感兴趣。一瞬间，杰克和我互相笑了起来。
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和Jerry, David, Tom是好朋友，但是向他们隐瞒了和Jack在读书俱乐部成为了朋友的事情，某天中午Jack想要和他们坐在一起，但是被其他三个朋友粗鲁地拒绝了，作者也没有为Jack说话，之后Jack也没跟作者说话，作者意识到自己犯了错，需要向Jack道歉。最后作者鼓起勇气和Jack道了歉，取得了原谅，最后发现其他三个朋友也对读书俱乐部感兴趣。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“下课铃声响了，我收拾好课本，深吸一口气，去找杰克。”可知，第一段可描写作者去找杰克道歉时的心理活动，以及诉说想参加学校的读书俱乐部的愿望。
②由第二段首句内容“杰克点点头，然后提到了我的三个朋友”可知，第二段可描写杰克想到邀请作者其他三个朋友加入读书俱乐部的办法，解决了作者的困境，三个朋友也对俱乐部感兴趣。
2.续写线索：找杰克——感到不安——道歉——杰克邀请另外三个人加入俱乐部——另外三个朋友也感兴趣
3.词汇激活
行为类
走向：go to/ on the way to/ approach/ walk toward
提出：put forward/ come up with
道歉：make an apology / apologize
情绪类
惊讶：to one’s surprise / surprised
感兴趣：be interested in / show interest in
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Looking into his eyes, I made an apology, explaining that I wanted to join the school book club. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The next day, we were having lunch when Jack approached, holding a notice to recruit new members, saying that if someone wanted to join the club, he must take three other students to form a group. (运用了sb. be doing sth. when…句型)
例2：陌生地方的新友情
Lily was cleaning windows, and it was what she must do for her family's new Chinese restaurant. Everything had to be absolutely perfect: unique decorations, skillful employees, and delicious traditional food. Then customers would love the place, making the business a success.
Lily's family had just moved here from San Francisco, having bought a small restaurant, which was opened yesterday. She was new in the neighbor and had few friends. The first few days at her new school hadn't been easy, either. She found it hard to talk to people she didn't know and it seemed like the students hadn't even noticed her. She was eager for a friendship, though.
Lily shifted her vision to look outside the restaurant as a girl about her age, with abundant red hair, walked up the street. The girl paused to study the sign announcing their opening and then looked directly at Lily with a friendly smile. Lily smiled back shyly and lifted a hand, accidentally waving with the cleaning cloth. The girl smiled at her amusement and waved back happily.
Lily hesitated, not accustomed to starting friendship, but she felt courageous, so she opened the door. "Hello," she said, adding the first thing that entered her head, “do you like Chinese food ”
“I don't know, but I like to try new things," the girl remarked, and then she introduced herself as Gabriela.
Lily could not think of additional conversation until she had a sudden idea.
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The following day, Lily was doing her restaurant routine when she heard an unexpected knock.
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【答案】Lily could not think of additional conversation until she had a sudden idea. She ran into the kitchen and came back with a small package. “Some Chinese candy for you to try,” she explained. “If you enjoy it, I hope you’ll return and tell me.”“Excellent, I’ll see you around soon.” Gabriela headed down the street, glancing back with a cheerful wave. Lily spent the remaining afternoon hoping Gabriela really would return and not think Lily’s gift was strange.
莉莉突然有了一个想法，才想出再进行多的谈话。她跑进厨房，带着一个小包裹回来了。“一些中国糖果让你试试，”她解释说。“如果你喜欢，我希望你能回来告诉我。”“很好，我很快就会见到你。”加布里埃拉沿着街上走去，愉快地挥手回头看了一眼。莉莉花了剩下的下午，希望加布里埃拉真的会回来，而不会觉得莉莉的礼物很奇怪。
The following day, Lily was doing her restaurant routine when she heard unexpected knocking. It was Gabriela with a plate covered with plastic wrap. Lily grinned with enthusiasm and opened the door with an excited greeting.Gabriela presented the plate and said, “I brought biscuits made from my grandmother’s recipe to thank you for the delicious candy.”“Come in, and we can have some biscuits right now,” Lily stammered, happy inside.Lily was now positive that the restaurant would make a wondrous impression on the customers and that she was going to enjoy life here immensely.
第二天，莉莉在餐厅做例行公事时，她听到了意想不到的敲门声。那是加布里埃拉和一个覆盖着塑料包裹的盘子。莉莉热情地咧嘴一笑，兴奋地打招呼，打开了门。加布里埃拉递给盘子说：“我带了祖母食谱做的饼干，谢谢你提供的美味糖果。“进来，我们现在可以吃点饼干了，”莉莉结结巴巴地说，里面很开心。莉莉现在肯定，这家餐厅会给顾客留下深刻的印象，她将非常享受这里的生活。
【解析】
【分析】
续写应该围绕“陌生地的新友情”这一主题展开，需要充分挖掘文本中提供的信息，如中国餐馆、文化背景、Lily个性特点等，把握主人公情感的需求和变化。一次偶然的邂逅通过何种方式发展成为二次见面，由此带给女主人公什么样的感受，这是续写的落脚点。续写部分需要对话的支撑，但更需注重表情神态、心理活动等描写。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①第一段首句内容“直到她突然有了个主意，Lily才想出其他的谈话。”可知，第一段可描写Lily想办法与Gabriela建立谈话的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天，Lily正在餐馆里做她的例行公事时，突然听到一阵意外的敲门声。”可知，第二段可描写Gabriela再一次来访的目的，Lily成功地交到了朋友，且心理得到了满足和宽慰。
2.续写线索：取饼干——赠送——盼望、等待——反馈礼物——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①取饼干：run into/rush into the kitchen
②等待回应：spend the remaining afternoon doing/wait for the reply anxiously
情绪类
①积极：be positive/hold a positive attitude towards
②高兴：grinned with enthusiasm/be enthusiastic about her return
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Gabriela headed down the street, glancing back with a cheerful wave.(现在分词作伴随状语)
[高分句型2]. The following day, Lily was doing her restaurant routine when she heard unexpected knocking.(when引导的时间状语从句)
例3：结识到新朋友
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成 一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150 左右。
“Now, parents and students separate into two groups. You will be reunited at the end of the campus tour. ”
Groups of incoming freshmen happily left their parents upon hearing this announcement. I was less than thrilled about starting college, let alone leaving my mother's side to tour the campus with other freshmen；I felt a little anxious.
We followed the senior tour guide. The other freshmen chatted and made casual introductions as I dragged behind. How could I have believed I was ready for this ？ After all, it had only been a few months since I left the hospital. I was feeling better for the first time in years. But college. . . ？
My thinking was interrupted by a sweet female voice, "Hi, I'm Jennifer. " "I'm Lauren, "I replied. "Where do you prefer to live？ At home or on campus？ "she smiled. "I'm not sure, "I said. "You should live on campus！It will be a lot of fun！ "she said. Before I could reply, the tour guide announced it was time to create our schedules and select the courses we wanted to take.
We crowded into the Student Activity Center. Three seniors handed out thick course bulletins (课程公告)and forms that needed to be filled out. All around me, the sounds of turning papers and writing sounded like those given by an alarm clock. Others seemed to be moving through the process quickly but I hadn't even opened my course catalog (目 录).
"Focus, "I told myself. "Just read through the catalog and find the courses you like and a schedule that works. "Psychology A or B, Geology 101, English, History, sections 1, 2, 3. . . The list went on and on.
I panicked and almost started to cry. How was I supposed to know how to complete it？I was just relearning how to live in the real world, and they wanted me to make a schedule. How I wished someone could help me.
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Soon, other freshmen were handing in their forms.
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Then, I felt a warm hand on my shoulder.
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【答案】
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Soon, other freshmen were handing in their forms. Many of them rushed out to meet their parents. I couldn’t breathe and was feeling anxious. My head was pounding. Moments later, I was crying. And several students started to stare at me. One of the seniors in charge walked over to my table. “What’s the matter ” she asked impatiently. “I... I can’t do this!” I said. “All you have to do is make your schedule, just like everybody else,” she said, clearly annoyed.
很快，其他的新生也交出了他们的表格。他们中的许多人冲出去去见他们的父母。我无法呼吸，感到焦虑。我的头砰砰作响。过了一会儿，我哭了。有几个学生开始盯着我看。其中一位负责我的老人走到我的桌子旁。“怎么了？”她不耐烦地地问。“I...我不能这样做！””我说。“你所要做的就是像其他人一样安排日程安排，”她说，显然很恼火。
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Then, I felt a warm hand on my shoulder. I looked back and found Jennifer standing behind me. “Everything is alright,” she told the senior. “I’ll help her.” The senior walked away. “What’s wrong, sweetie ” Jennifer asked. Hearing Jennifer’s kind words, I cried even harder, saying, “It’s just too much!” Then Jennifer put her arm around me and said, “Let me instruct you.” She then guided me through the process step by step until I completed my schedule. Later, when saying goodbye, we made a promise to keep in touch.
然后，我感到一只温暖的手放在我的肩上。我回头一看，发现詹妮弗站在我身后。“一切都很好，”她告诉大四学生。“我会帮她的。那位老人走开了。“怎么了，亲爱的？””詹妮弗问。听到詹妮弗的好话，我哭得更厉害，说：“太多了！”然后詹妮弗搂住我说：“让我告诉你。”然后她一步一步地引导我完成这个过程，直到我完成日程安排。后来，当我们说再见时，我们承诺要保持联系。
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，本文讲述了作者的大学校园之旅，作者对开始上大学一点也不兴奋，更不用说校园之旅了，作者开始感到焦虑；途中，作者认识了珍妮弗，还没来得及和她说很多话，校园导游宣布开始选课，作者惊慌失措，几乎哭了起来，她很希望有个人能帮助她。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：很快，其他新生都在交表格，本段应该描述作者反应，作者感到焦虑，不知所措，一位年长的老师过来要求作者交表格，作者没有交出表格，那位老师很生气。第二段开头是：然后，我感到一只温暖的手放在我的肩膀上。本段应该描写詹妮弗帮助作者完成选课，作者和詹妮弗最后成了好友。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型，如：She then guided me through the process step by step until I completed my schedule.这句话运用了until引导的时间状语从句；本文也使用了一些固定词组，如rush out ; stare at; keep in touch等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
例4：我们的友谊
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.
Our friendship runs back to our college days when I first met Rishi. We had our own share “ first impression about each other. Mine was—she's a lovely, charming and full of life personality. Hers was—I look like an arrogant personality. I don't blame her for this. Many of my close friends had the same view when they first met me. Blame it on my bitch face and me being a shy person to some extent.
We became really close within a short period of time. Ours was group of four people divided into 2 each during our final year when we both chose advertising as our specialization and the other two journalism. Back then, I was a regular user of BBM messenger and hardly used Whatsapp.
On one specific occasion, we had really bad argument about a failed project. The usual blame game was on. We decided to put it past us and focus on our studies. During this time, she once handed me her phone to show me a picture. While I was going through that, I came across a message from a particular Whatsapp group that comprises of her and my other two friends. I asked her permission to view the group. She had a blank expression on her face. But she allowed me to go ahead.
I was in shock while going through their messages. Not really positive things were said about me in particular. It shook me. Because these were the people. I considered my friends. I broke down in front of her. She apologised. But I felt cheated on. I told her about my decision of not wanting to continue this friendship further. We both missed each other. But neither of us wanted to give the last try.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then came the Rajasthan IV trip which was our official last trip.
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It's been almost 7 years after graduation since we picked up our friendship.
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Then came the Rajasthan IV trip which was our official last trip. During the trip, we intentionally avoided each other. However, I couldn’t help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same. The embarrassment was heavy like a dark shadow. I was sitting alone with my head down when suddenly a figure approached. I looked up, surprised to find Rishi in front of me. Blushed, she broke the silence, “I am sorry again. I didn’t mean to hurt you.” Tears streaming down, she continued, “I should have talked to you earlier.” I stood up and reached out to hug her, “I am sorry, too. I should have been more generous.” At that moment, we both realized we were an indispensable part of each other’s life.
然后是拉贾斯坦邦四世之旅，这是我们的最后一次旅行。在旅途中，我们故意避开对方。然而，当她转过身来时，我忍不住看了她一眼，我也感觉到了同样的感觉。尴尬像个阴影。我正独自低着头坐着，突然有一个人影走近了。我抬起头来，惊讶地发现里希站在我面前。她脸色苍白，打破了沉默，“我又很抱歉了。我不是要伤害你。眼泪流下来，她继续说，“我应该早点和你谈谈。”我站起来，伸手拥抱她，“我也很抱歉。”我应该更慷慨一些。“在那一刻，我们都意识到我们是彼此生活中不可或缺的一部分。
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It's been almost 7 years after graduation since we picked up our friendship. Looking back, I am always grateful for her stepping up to make up with me. Till now, she has been one of the few people I can trust and count on. Our major offered us the same background so that we supported each other in our professional development. Of course, we had argument from time to time. But deep down, we both know all the argument is just about helping us to grow into a better individual instead of enemies. Therefore, we both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive. If we really value our friends and friendship, always cherish their presence and show willingness to maintain and nurture the relationship..
我们建立友谊已经将近7年了。现在回想起来，我总是很感激她站起来跟我化妆。到目前为止，她一直是我为数不多的一个能信任和指望的人之一。我们的专业提供了我们相同的背景，以便我们在专业发展中互相支持。当然，我们不时地会争论。但在内心深处，我们都知道，所有的争论都是为了帮助我们成长为一个更好的个体，而不是敌人。因此，我们都学会了宽容和勇敢，以永远原谅我们。如果我们真的珍惜我们的朋友和友谊，总是珍惜他们的存在，表现出维持和培养关系的意愿。读后续写：助人型20篇
第1篇 最后的心愿 1
第2篇 求职经验 4
第3篇 避难所 6
第4篇 夜遇老人 9
第5篇 丢失的戒指 12
第6篇 救出小孩 15
第7篇 一封信和七美元 17
第8篇 遇到好人 19
第9篇 简单的感谢 20
第10篇 创造爱，传递爱 20
第11篇 圣诞老人 20
第12篇 外科医生的信仰 20
第13篇 拍照 20
第14篇 五十个金币 20
第15篇 披萨店员工救人 20
第16篇 捐赠 20
第17篇 陌生人帮我修车 20
第18篇 特殊的驾车旅行 20
第19篇 归还雨伞 20
第20篇 善意的力量 20
第1篇 最后的心愿
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was responding to a call from a small brick flat in a quiet part of town. I assumed I was being sent to pick up some party-goers,or someone who had just had a fight with a lover,or a worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the industrial part of town.
When I arrived at 2：30 a.m., the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. Under such circumstances, many drivers just honk（按喇叭） once or twice,wait a minute,then drive away. But I had seen too many weak people who depended on taxis as their only means of transportation.
Unless a situation smelled of danger, I always went to the door.
This passenger might be someone who needs my assistance,I reasoned to myself. So I walked to the door and knocked. "Just a minute," answered a frail,elderly voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floor. After a long pause,the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbox hat ,like somebody out of a 1940s movie. By her side was a small nylon suitcase.
The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with sheets. There were no clocks on the walls, no equipment on the counters. In the corner was a cardboard box filled with photos and glassware.
"Would you carry my bag out to the car？" she said. I took the suitcase to the cab,then returned to assist the woman. She took my arm,and we walked slowly toward the cab.
She kept thanking me for my kindness. "It's nothing," I told her. "I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated."
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Having given me an address, a hospice , she asked. "Could you drive through downtown "
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We drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it…
参考范文：
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Having given me an address, a hospice , she asked. "Could you drive through downtown " Asked why we didn't take the shortest way, the small woman told me it was the last chance for her to visit the city. We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived. Besides, she asked me to slow in front of a particular building or corner and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. At last, she said she was tired and wanted to go to the hospice.
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we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it was a low building,where the old lady would live the rest of her life. Two nurses who must have been expecting her came out to the cab as soon as we pulled up. I opened the trunk and took the suitcase to the door and the woman was already seated in a wheelchair. When she asked how much she owed me, without thinking, I said nothing and bent to give her a bug . It was my assistance that helped one of weak people realize her wish.
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她给了我一个地址，一个收容所，她问。“你能开车穿过市中心吗？”当被问及为什么我们不走最短的路时，那个小女人告诉我，这是她去这个城市的最后一次机会。我们开车穿过她和她丈夫住过的社区。此外，她请我在某幢大楼或角落前放慢脚步，坐在那里盯着黑暗，什么也没说。最后，她说她累了，想去临终关怀医院。
第2段：
我们默默地驱车前往她给我的地址，那是一幢低矮的建筑，老太太将在那里度过余生。我们一停下车，一定在等着她，两名护士就上了驾驶室。我打开后备箱，把手提箱拿到门口，那个女人已经坐在轮椅了。当她问她欠我多少钱时，我什么也没说，心想给她一个虫子。是我的帮助，帮助一个弱者实现了她的愿望。
第2篇 求职经验
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a sunny Saturday afternoon, Matt went shopping with his family. They filled two shopping carts with lots of groceries that were enough for a whole week. Immersed in warm sunlight, they headed to the parking lot.
Suddenly, Matt caught sight of a strange man. Usually, it was common to find some homeless people outside a supermarket. At first sight, Matt thought he was just a homeless guy, but there was something different with him. He was sitting on a sleeping bag with multiple resumes neatly laid out, along with a sign that read “need work and food.” The old and poor clothes could not hide his optimism and eagerness. The sign aroused Matt’s curiosity. Matt asked if he could see his resume. The strange man hopped right up, handed one to Matt politely, and then started introducing all about his experience as if it were an interview. His name was Shawn. In fact, Shawn was a 52-year-old former cook. Matt, in his thirties, also a cook, found Shawn was a well-spoken, cool and friendly guy who knew exactly what he wanted and was going after it. Shawn’s eagerness deeply impressed Matt.
Accustomed to seeing homeless people ask for food and or money, Matt found it surprising to witness a homeless guy making efforts to find a job despite difficult circumstances. The man in front of him looked nothing like a beggar in depression. There was not even a trace of self-pity in his eyes. Shawn’s efforts reminded Matt his situations where he had nothing and had to bust his butt (努力) to get work and earn money. Right now and here, Shawn was doing what he had experienced, so Matt had a lot of respect for Shawn. Matt bought him a bottle of water and some sandwiches. Shawn took with shyness. Then, Matt took a picture of his resume to post on Facebook, not knowing if anything would come of it.
Soon, someone came across Shawn’s post and offered him a job as a cook at a small downtown restaurant.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Shawn was very excited and grateful for landing a new job.
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Together with Matt, Shawn decided to help more people like him.
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Shawn was very excited and grateful for landing a new job. So much did Shawn cherish this hard won opportunity that all his enthusiasm was clearly shown in his daily work. Carefully and professionally,the energetic cook studied and improved the menu, making great efforts to help the restaurant retain regular consumers through delicious cuisine. With his life seeing a trace of sunlight, Shawn increasingly thankful, but the poor days constantly reminded him homeless people living in misery and wanting for food like him. So, he contacted Matt and wanted to do more.
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Together with Matt, Shawn decided to help ore people like him. Inspired by this special way of job-hunting, they came up with the idea of helping more homeless people with skills to find a job through preparing resumes and practicing interviews. Driving from street to street, wherever they went and whomever they met, they shared their experience and planted seeds of dreams.For them, what brought them sense of achievement was not just gaining appreciation, but all the more so helping homeless people rebuild self-respect.
肖恩非常兴奋和感激找到了一份新工作。 肖恩非常珍惜这个来之不易的机会，他所有的热情都清楚地体现在他的日常工作中。 这位精力充沛的厨师仔细而专业地研究和改进了菜单，努力帮助餐厅通过美味的菜肴留住普通消费者。 随着他的生活看到一丝阳光，肖恩越来越感激，但贫穷的日子不断提醒他无家可归的人生活在痛苦和想要食物像他。 所以，他联系了马特，想做更多。
肖恩和马特一起决定帮助像他这样的人。 在这种特殊的求职方式的启发下，他们想出了一个想法，通过准备简历和实践面试，帮助更多有技能的无家可归者找到工作。 从一条街到一条街，无论他们去哪里，无论他们遇到谁，他们都分享他们的经验，播下梦想的种子。 对他们来说，给他们带来成就感的不仅仅是获得赞赏，更重要的是帮助无家可归的人重建自尊。
第3篇 避难所
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I got up at 4 am to receive a call from my daughter who needed my help to get home from the snowy mountain. After I helped her get a taxi, I noticed I was out of cigarettes, so I went to the gas station up the street to purchase some. There I saw a young man wrapped in a thin blanket, trying to keep out of the snow. I went in and bought my cigarettes.
As I walked out of the station, this young man asked me for a cigarette. I pulled out one, gave him and left. I just went forward a few steps and suddenly I realized that I should do something for him. I returned and asked him if he wanted a hot coffee. Obviously he couldn’t hide his eagerness to get one and said “yes, please”. Again I went in the station and bought him an extra large cup.
When I went back home, the pitiful look of the poor guy being out in the cold flashed before my eyes. Without hesitation I grabbed my warm coat and hurried to the guy. Helping him put on the coat, I told him there was a shelter nearby where he could ask for help. I asked him to promise me he would do it.
At about 6 o’clock, I got home. Seeing my daughter arrive safely and get ready for bed, I rested my heavy body on the sofa wondering about the guy at the gas station. So I made a call to the shelter and told the nice girl on the phone that there was a guy out in the cold. Told that they had one or two beds left, I quickly got into my car and drove to the gas station.
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2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After I finally drove the guy to the shelter, he was very grateful.
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Ten years later, I received a strange call.
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【答案】After I finally drove the guy to the shelter, he was very grateful. I helped him get settled in a shelter, bought him some food and necessities, and kept some money. After making sure he would make it through the winter, I drove away. I was so happy on the way because the poor guy was warm and cared for. Wish him a good life in the future. I didn't want him to repay me because it was just a piece of cake to me.
在我终于开车把那个人送到避难所后，他非常感激。我帮他在一个收容所定居下来，给他买了一些食物和必需品，还存了一些钱。在确保他能度过整个冬天后，我开车走了。我在路上很高兴，因为这个可怜的家伙很暖和，很受照顾。祝他未来生活得很好。我不想让他偿还我，因为这对我来说只是一块蛋糕。
Ten years later, I received a strange call. I didn't know the number, and I didn't recognize the sound. The man opposite said, "Do you remember me " I was embarrassed because I couldn't remember anything." You helped me through a cold winter ten years ago." He said. I had a light. "It's you. How have you been " I enthused. "I'm living a good life now and I don't have to be hungry and cold anymore." It's warm to think of that winter," he said，“Thank you for helping me and giving me hope. I have set up several shelters to help more people like me that winter, which I think is the best to repay your kindness. "
十年后，我接到了一个奇怪的电话。我不知道号码，也认不出声音。对面的人说，“你还记得我吗？”我很尴尬，因为我什么都不记得了。”十年前你帮我度过了一个寒冷的冬天。”他说。我有一盏灯。“这是你的意思。你现在怎么样了？”我很热情。“我现在过得很好，我不用再又饿又冷了。”想到那个冬天就很暖和，”他说，“谢谢你帮助我，给了我希望。那年冬天，我建立了几个避难所来帮助更多像我这样的人，我认为这是最好的办法来报答你的好意。”
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开。“我”在十年前的一个冬天遇到了一个饥寒交迫的人，感到非常同情，所以给了他很多帮助，帮他度过了那个寒冷的冬天。十年后“我”接到这个人的电话，了解到他现在过得很好。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在我最终开车送他去了收容所后，他非常感激我。”可知，第一段可描写作者帮他在收容所安置好，他非常感激。
②由第二段首句内容“十年后，我接到了一个奇怪的电话”可知，第二段可描写作者和这个人相谈甚欢，了解到这个人的近况并得知这个人建立了几个收容所来帮助更多的人。
2.续写线索：帮助安顿——回家——开心——接电话——相认——感谢——回报
3.词汇激活
行为类
①安顿好：get settled /settle down
②建立：set up /build
情绪类
①感谢：showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
②在意：mind doing/care about
【点睛】
[高分句型1] After making sure he would make it through the winter, I drove away.（动名词作宾语）
[高分句型2] I have set up several shelters to help more people like me that winter, which I think is the best to repay your kindness.（which引导的定语从句）
第4篇 夜遇老人
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Kent was a manager of a furniture agency. His establishment nearly went bankrupt (倒闭）because of the wrong decision he had made. He was so regretful and depressed that he planned to drive to a bar alone to release his emotions.
It was near midnight in an extremely cold winter, and the temperature was minus 9 degrees centigrade. There were few people in the street. Suddenly, a figure of an old madam entered his line of sight. She was standing sideways near a platform, dressed in a plain coat, dragging a suitcase, and holding a plastic bag in the other hand. The slight old lady was seemingly more than 80. She was trembling in cutting wind. Now she kept motioning Kent for a ride. Although Kent was somewhat angry about the old madam's disturbing，he wouldn't like to leave her in the cold night. He noticed she coughed violently and thought that she might be ill and really needed help. So he braked near her.
The madam said, "Would you please take me for a ride I can offer double fare. . . " Kent interrupted her, "I will charge you nothing! Come on!" The madam pointed to her luggage and said, "Could you put my suitcase into the car " Kent stepped out and put it in the trunk.
Kent proceeded to drive. He stopped at a petrol station where he wanted to purchase gallons of gasoline (汽油). During the interval they waited in a queue，the madam began her narration, "Could you please send me to the charity house in the suburbs I want to send them something. I had been given help there 50 years ago. The president and workers were all good guys." She burst into tears，"Now they've all passed away. The life was tough at that time, but we all loved and cared about each other. I've held a desire to be back there again for long." Kent realized the madam was recalling a section of the good missing days. A complicated feeling surrounded him, and he decided to cancel his plan and stay with the old madam.
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After a two-hour drive，they came to the gate of their destination.
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Hearing this, Kent lapsed into silence, because he knew the rest home was for patients with incurable diseases.
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After a two-hour drive, they carne to the gate of their destination. It was quiet and dark. The door of the charity house was closed and a weak light went through the guard room. Kent got off the car and rang the bell. An old doorkeeper came out. Making clear why they came, they were invited in. The old madam handed her suitcase over to the doorkeeper, inside it being clothes arid toys she collected. Then they looked round the house and left. On the way back, the old madam asked for another ride, "Please send me to the rest home in the town. sir."
开车两小时后，他们来到了目的地门口。那里安静而黑暗。慈善机构的门关着，一盏微弱的光线穿过警卫室。肯特下了车，按响了门铃。一个老守门员走了出来。弄清楚他们为什么要来，他们就被邀请进来了。老夫人把她的手提箱交给了看门人，里面是她收集的衣服和玩具。然后他们环顾四周的房子，离开了。在回来的路上，老太太要求再骑一次，“请把我送到城里其余的家里。先生。”
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Hearing this, Kent lapsed into silence, because he knew the rest home was for patients with incurable diseases. "I have been seriously ill for a long time and will soon die of lung cancer. I come out to say goodbye to my life. Now I will have no regrets before death. Thanks for your help!" The madam made an explanation calmly, with a bright smile on her face. Kent remained silent for a while. He was chewing over what the madam said, and glad that he could help her realize the last desire.
听到这话，肯特就沉默了，因为他知道养老院是给不治之症患者准备的。“我已经得了重病很长一段时间了，很快就会死于肺癌。我走出来是要和我的生活说再见了。现在我在死前就不会后悔了。谢谢你的帮助！”夫人平静地解释道，脸上挂着灿烂的微笑。肯特郡沉默了一会儿。他在嚼着夫人说的话，很高兴能帮助她实现最后的愿望。
【解析】
文章主要讲述了Kent在寒冷的夜晚遇到了一个老人，并同意带她郊区慈善机构的故事。
续写分为两段。第一段的开头是：两小时车程后，他们到达了目的地的大门。所以可以接着写：天色很暗，到处都很安静，大门里的建筑里透出了微弱的光。Kent下车给门卫说明情况后，门卫让他们进去。老人把装满衣服和玩具的箱子交给门卫。他们围着建筑四处转了一下，然后离开了。路上，女士要求Kent把她送到市里的疗养院。
第二段的开头是：听了女士的话Kent陷入了沉思，因为他知道疗养院是专门为那些有不治之症的病人准备的。看到Kent的样子，女士说:“我生了很严重病，已近是癌症晚期，很快就到生命的尽头了。今天我是去和从前的生活说再见的，现在，我没有遗憾了。非常感谢你。”女士说话的时候面带笑容，丝毫看不出悲伤。Kent此刻觉得很感激，感激他能有机会帮助这位女士实现最后的愿望。
续写时需注意情节要符合逻辑，基础时态为一般过去时。
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：The old madam handed her suitcase over to the doorkeeper, inside it being clothes arid toys she collected.中使用了独立主格；The madam made an explanation calmly, with a bright smile on her face.中使用了with复合结构；He was chewing over what the madam said, and glad that he could help her realize the last desire.中what引导宾语从句。这些表达的使用使文章色彩纷呈。
第5篇 丢失的戒指
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The first thing Eileen Korey noticed when she got into the car that Wednesday afternoon in early May was a small diamond ring in the tray(托盘)between the front seats. It hadn't been there before. Weeks earlier, she had taken the car in to have the airbag replaced. The car belonged to her daughter and son-in-law and she was helping them out. Now she was picking it up. That's when she saw the ring. Korey, 64, of Lake Oswego quickly contacted her daughter and son-in-law to ask if they were missing a diamond ring or if any of their friends had reported losing a ring. They both wrote back, saying they had no idea what she was talking about.
Korey took the ring to the service desk at the garage to ask if any women technicians might have left a ring in the car while they were working on it. The woman behind the counter said only men worked on the cars.
Korey asked if the desk clerk could get information from the guy who had replaced the airbag. Over a two-way radio(对讲机), Helbt said he'd placed the ring in the tray when it dropped to the car's floor after he opened up the steering column to replace the airbag. He was not sure how it got there.
She knew a friend who was a jeweler and stopped by to have her look at the ring to see if it was real. Her friend said the diamond, set in a white gold hand, was worth$1, 200 and Korey could easily sell it for $500. But she wouldn't sell it. After making sure the ring didn’t belong to anyone in her family—or anyone at the auto shop Korey tracked down the first owner of the car using paperwork she found in the glove box. Her detective work led her to a dealership in Beaverton, and the car's first owners：Daniel and Ashleigh Hannah. The Hannahs had purchased the small ring when they got engaged and were saving money to buy a house.
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One Sunday afternoon, they were driving to an event in their car but had to stop at the bank and use the ATM machine.
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The couple searched the parking lot and the car for hours. Nothing.
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One Sunday afternoon, they were driving to an event in their car but had to stop at the bank and use the ATM machine. Ashleigh, showing her husband where to turn, gestured wildly with her left hand and felt the ring slip off. However, when searching the car carefully, they weren't able to find it. They figured it fell out of the open driver's side window.
一个星期天日下午，他们当时开车去参加活动，但不得不在银行停下来使用自动取款机。阿什莉告诉丈夫去哪里转，用左手疯狂地做了个手势，感觉戒指掉了。然而，当他们仔细搜查汽车时，他们却找不到它。他们发现它从敞开的司机侧窗里掉了下来。
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The couple searched the parking lot and the car for hours. Nothing. Later, back at home, the Hannah has searched through the car for hours. Nothing. Years later, Daniel bought his wife a much larger engagement ring. Finally, this month Korey made contact with Daniel Hannah. They met, and as a reward for returning the ring, she simply asked that Daniel send her a photo of the moment he surprised his wife with her lost engagement ring. On Mother's Day, Ashleigh's son gave her the ring. It didn't fit and was much smaller than her replacement ring, but none of that mattered.
这对夫妇搜查了停车场和汽车好几个小时。没有什么内容。后来，回到家里，汉娜已经在车里搜索了好几个小时。没有什么内容。几年后，丹尼尔给妻子买了一枚更大的订婚戒指。最后，这个月，科瑞和丹尼尔·汉娜取得了联系。他们见面了，作为归还戒指的回报，她只是要求丹尼尔给她一张照片，这是他给妻子丢失的订婚戒指的那一刻。母亲节那天，阿什利的儿子把戒指给了她。它不合适，比她的替代戒指要小得多，但这些都不重要。
【解析】
文章讲述了Eileen Korey在车修理后发现里面有一枚戒指，但是问了她的女儿和女婿，以及修理店的员工，他们都说不是自己的。后来她问了车的第一个主人，才知道戒指是他们的。
续写分为两段。第一段的开头是：一个周末的下午，他们开车去参加一个活动，但当时需要在路边停下，去自动提款机上取钱。所以可以接着写：丈夫取好钱后，妻子Ashleigh Hannah挥手让他过来开车，因为动作太大，戒指从手指上滑落。但当时他们没有发现。第二段的开头是：夫妻两在停车场和车上找了很久。所以可以接着写：他们什么也没有发现。回到家后，他们又在车上仔细地找了几遍，结果是一样的。后来，他们不得不重新买一个订婚戒指。当Korey联系他们时，他们才知道原来戒指掉在车里了。见面时，Korey把戒指还给了Daniel，Daniel十分感激。他回家把戒指拿给妻子，虽然这个戒指比后来买的那个小得多，但是在Ashleigh看来两个都一样的珍贵。
续写时要注意时态，续写的内容要符合逻辑。范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：Ashleigh，showing her husband where to turn, gestured wildly with her left hand and felt the ring slip off．中使用了现在分词作状语；They met, and as a reward for returning the ring, she simply asked that Daniel send her a photo of the moment he surprised his wife with her lost engagement ring. 中that引导虚拟语气的宾语从句。这些表达的使用使文章色彩纷呈。
第6篇 救出小孩
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When his 13-year-old son came home late from school last week，John Morrissette figured he had just gone on “one of his usual walks”．It wasn’t until the next day that Morrissette found out his intellectually disabled boy, Michael, had been found in a Winnipeg garbage bin as temperatures dropped to －15°C.
Morrissette said his son had been beaten by two men，thrown in the Dumpster and left to freeze. He was found a few hours later by a woman who let him out. “I was very angry with the guys who would do this to my son,” Morrissette said in an interview Thursday. “You can see he’s a harmless child. He doesn’t talk much. He keeps to himself and two men have hurt him.”
The young teenager wasn’t seriously hurt, but Morrissette said he’s not letting him walk home alone anymore. The father’s faith in humanity is a little shaken. Morrissette said he couldn’t believe there are people out there who would pick on a young boy simply walking home from school. He’s only been able to get bits and pieces of what happened from Michael who is “too scared to talk about it”．
“We are sure we are living in a society that we all care about our children. But we feel so sad and angry with that. For the children like my son！We can’t help them We can’t protect them？” said the father.
Nicole Langlois, who works nearby, said that she heard weak cries for help as she walked past the large garbage container, but was not sure where they were coming from. So a few hours later she went back again to the garbage container and tried to find what happened. To her great surprise，she found the boy sleeping and covered with garbage. “All he kept saying was, ‘Help. They pushed me in here,’” Langlois said. “I kept trying to talk to him and ask him who he is and he didn’t talk back to me.” As soon as she helped him out, he ran away and headed for home a few blocks away.
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“Words can’t describe how grateful the family is to Langlois,” Morrissette said.
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The family contacted police, who are investigating.
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“Words can’t describe how grateful the family is to Langlois,” Morrissette said. “She’s my son’s angel,” he said. “I thank her every day. She is so kind that she rescued my son from the garbage container. And we have gained our faith in humanity again.” And the family decided not to let Michael walk home by himself because they are afraid the bad men hurt him again.
“语言无法描述这个家庭对朗洛伊斯有多感激，”莫里塞特说。“她是我儿子的天使，”他说。“我每天都要感谢她。她很善良，她把我儿子从垃圾桶里救了出来。我们再次对人类有了信心。全家人决定不让迈克尔独自走回家，因为他们担心坏人会再次伤害他。
The family contacted police，who are investigating. Michael is not able to talk to the police what happened to him or who did this to him. The family is appealing to anyone who might have seen something. The family are sure there are many kind people in our society, where people will take good care of all the children，whether they are intellectually disabled or not. The police said they would try their best to find the bad men carrying out such terrible actions and punish them.
这家人联系了正在调查的警方。迈克尔无法和警察谈论他发生了什么，也说谁对他做了。这个家庭吸引任何可能看到什么东西的人。这个家庭确信在我们的社会中有很多善良的人，人们会好好照顾所有的孩子，不管他们是否智障。警方表示，他们会尽力寻找那些实施如此可怕行为的坏人，并惩罚他们。
第7篇 一封信和七美元
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Three years seems like a long time to remember the name of a mere acquaintance. I have forgotten the name of an old lady, who was a customer on the paper routine my hometown when I was a twelve-year-old and shy boy. Yet it remains in my memory that she taught me a lesson in forgiveness that I shall never forget.
On a winter afternoon, a friend and I were throwing stones onto the roof of the old lady’s house from a spot near her backyard. The object of our play was to observe how the stones changed to missiles (导弹,发射物) as they rolled to the roof’s edge and shot out into the yard like comets falling from the sky. I found myself a perfectly smooth rock and threw it out. The stone was too smooth, however, so it slipped from my hand as I let it go and headed straight not for the roof but for a small window. At the sound of broken glass, we knew we were in trouble.
I was too scared about getting caught that first night to be concerned about the old lady with the broken window in winter. However, a few days later, when I was sure that I hadn’t been discovered, I started to feel guilty for her misfortune. She still greeted me with a smile each day when I gave her the paper, but I was no longer able to act comfortably in her presence.
I made up my mind that I would save my paper delivery money, and in three weeks I had the seven dollars that I calculated would cover the cost of her window. I put the money in an envelope with a note explaining that I was sorry for breaking her window and hoped that the seven dollars would cover the cost for repairing it.
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I waited until it was dark, snuck up (偷偷地走近) to the old lady’s house.
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After several cookies, I felt an envelope and pulled it out of the bag.
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I waited until it was dark, snuck up(偷偷地走近) to the old lady’s house. I put the letter through the letter shot in her door explaining that I was sorry for breaking her window. My soul felt comfortable. I could have the forgiveness of me, and could look straight into the old lady’ s kind eyes in the yard.The next day, I handed the old lady her paper and was able to return the warm smile that I was receiving from her. She thanked me for the paper and gave me a bag of cookies she had made herself. I thanked her and went on to eat the cookies as I continued my route.
我等到天黑，偷偷地（偷偷地走近）到老太太家。我把信放进她门里的信里，解释说我很抱歉打破了她的窗户。我的灵魂感到很舒服。我可以得到我的原谅，也可以直接看着院子里老太太善良的眼睛。第二天，我把纸递给了老太太，并回报了她那种温暖的微笑。她感谢我拿来的纸，并给了我一袋她自己做的饼干。我感谢了她，继续吃饼干一边吃。
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After several cookies, I felt an envelope and pulled it out of the bag. When I opened the envelope, I was surprised deeply. Inside were the seven dollars and a short note that said, “I’ m proud of you.”
吃了几块饼干后，我摸了摸一个信封，就把它从袋子里拿了出来。当我打开信封时，我感到非常惊讶。里面有七美元和一张简短的纸条，上面写着：“我为你感到骄傲。”
第8篇 遇到好人
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分）
Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents' home in Missouri for Christmas. I stopped at a gas station(加油站)about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas.
I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car. I stopped and wondered what I should do. A car pulled up behind me. It was the couple I had spoken to at the gas station. They said they would take me to my friend's .We chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card.
I wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me. Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them. Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful.
Years later, I drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morning. In late afternoon I returned to my car and found that I'd left the lights on all day, and the battery(电池)was dead. Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership - a shop selling cars - was right next door. I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me.
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After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it.
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I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me. I recognized him at once. the two salesmen were the older couple, and they were the owners of the Friendly Ford dealership. “ Hey, it’s you! you ever helped me, remember ” I said to them excitedly. Yeah, we do!” the old man laughed, we run the shop to help more people. you know, it makes our life so meaningful!”
我走进商店，其中一个推销员来找我。我立刻认出了他。这两名销售员是老夫妇，他们是友好的福特经销商的老板。“嘿，是你了！”你曾经帮助过我，记得吗？我兴奋地对他们说。是的，我们有！老人笑了，我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。你知道，这让我们的生活如此有意义！”
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After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it. they solved my trouble once again, but when I paid for it, they would not accept my money. they told me that when they ran the shop at first, no one had ever taken the time to write them and say thank you, but now they received more and more thank-you notes from people, which they were really happy about.
过了一会儿，他们很快就开了一辆小货车到我的车前，发动了它。他们再次解决了我的麻烦，但当我付钱时，他们不会接受我的钱。他们告诉我，当他们一开始经营商店的时候，没有人花时间写声谢谢，但现在他们收到了越来越多的感谢信，他们真的很高兴。
第9篇 简单的感谢
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分）
A Simple Thank
I have been in the teaching profession more than thirty years, and one of the best teachers I have ever known was Mr. Rowe. I was lucky enough to co-teach fourth grade with him.
Mr. Rowe had infinite patience and understanding and I learned so much from watching him. He could perform miracles, like the one her performed with Steven, one of the unhappiest kids I ever saw. Steven couldn’t stand school. He didn’t like being picked last for kickball. He didn’t like the kids who raised their hands and knew all the answers, and most importantly, he didn’t like himself.
The first day he walked into Mr. Rowe’s classroom, he ignored the other students, looking angry and annoyed, and slid into his chair, knocking a couple of textbook onto the floor.
Mr. Rowe walked over to him and touched Steven’s shoulder, but Steven pulled away. Nevertheless, Mr. Rowe welcomed him: "Hi, Steven. I’m happy you are in my class. We are gonna have a great year." Steven looked around the room as if Mr. Rowe must be mistaken. No teacher in his right mind would want Steven to be part of his classroom.
So, while Mr. Rowe seemed cheerful and relaxed that day of school, it seemed like Steven was angry and confused.
That day after classes, Mr. Rowe chose Steven to pitch the kickball at recess. "Hey, Steven," Mr. Rowe commented, "You are good at pitching. Let me show you my secret trick." Mr. Rowe taught Steven one of the tricks that not a single kid could perform. Steven learned fast and did quite well! Everyone cheered for him!
After the kickball, Steven sat as closer to Mr. Rowe in classes as he could. When a question was asked, Steven lit up; he knew the answer! He raised his hands. When he answered the question, his voice shook. However, he got the answer right! He said, with Mr. Rowe , his days of the fourth grade promised wonderful.
That is not to say that every day went smoothly, but it was evident that Steven grew to love Mr. Rowe more and more with each passing day.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Time passed quickly that year, and before we all knew it, it was the last day of school.
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Many years later, Mr. Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom, dressed in the Marine Corps(海军) uniform.
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Time passed quickly that year, and before we all knew it, it was the last day of school. Our school had a very special tradition on the last day. All the teachers filled the sidewalk, waving goodbye to the kids as the bused pilled out with their horns honking. But on that particular day, Steven walked slowly to the bus, his head down, tears in his eyes. He boarded the bus reluctantly, hesitated, and then ran back off the bus to hug Mr. Rowe. “I don’t want to leave you.” He sobbed. With red-rimmed eyes, Mr. Rowe comforted him, “I will miss you, too.”
那一年时间过得很快，我们还没意识到，那是学校的最后一天。我们学校在最后一天有一个非常特殊的传统。所有的老师都挤满了人行道，向孩子们挥手道别，车上按着喇叭。但就在那一天，史蒂文慢慢地走到公交车前，低着头，热泪盈眶。他不情愿地登上了巴士，犹豫了一下，然后跑回来拥抱罗先生。“我不想离开你。”他抽泣着。罗先生用红边的眼睛安慰他说，“我也会想念你的。”
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Many years later, Mr. Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom, dressed in the Marine Corps(海军) uniform. The young man stood tall and proud. It was Steven! Mr. Rowe and I couldn’t believe our eyes. He saluted and hugged Mr. Rowe tightly! “I have come back to school today just to say thanks to you!” It is my hope that every teacher is blessed with such an experience of a former student coming back to say, simply to say a very simple THANKS.
许多年后，当一个英俊的年轻人穿着海军陆战队（海军）的制服走进我们的教室时，罗先生和我感到很惊讶。年轻人骄傲地站着。那是史蒂文！Mr.罗和我简直不敢相信我们的眼睛。他向他敬礼，紧紧地拥抱着罗先生！“我今天回到学校只是为了对你说谢谢！”我希望每个老师都有这样的学生回来说，只是说一句非常简单的谢谢。
第10篇 创造爱，传递爱
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分）
It was a hot and wet day in July.I was driving to the local grocery store because the heat had made my bananas go from yellow to brown overnight.My air conditioner in my car was on high，but it still wasn’t cooling me down. Suddenly, the car in front of me signaled that it was pulling off.I pressed on the brakes and slowed down. Out of the corner of my eye I saw several teenagers standing in the summer sun.They weren’t playing, killing time, or hanging around though.They weren’t drinking，smoking, chatting, or looking at their cell phones.They were working on a porch(走廊)．
I recognized them immediately as one of the church work camps. For more years than I can remember these young men and women have volunteered their spring and summer vacations to come here and help repair the homes of poor people. I smiled when I saw them there sweating and working hard to do some good in this world.While the news headlineswere so full of murder，hate，and violence in our society，these young people were doing their best to share some love and light with others.In my heart and mind I heard the words once again：“I was hungry and you gave me food；I was a stranger and you welcomed me；I was naked(裸体的) and you gave me clothing；I was sick and you took care of me.”
There is so much good we can do in this life.There are so many people we can help.There is so much love we can share.And as long as there is life，there is more to do.Whether it is repairing a house，sharing a smile，offering a hug，adopting a dog，visiting the sick，giving to charity(慈善)，praying for others，sharing a kind word，or doing any act of goodness，every single thing we do is precious in the eyes of people.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Nowadays loving each other is a good deed and common in the society.
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Choose to love，and you will help others.
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【答案】Nowadays loving each other is a good deed and common in the society. Choose to love，and you will have joy.Therefore，learning from what the young men and women have done，I take part in the church work camps on weekends，no matter how cold or hot it is.What the teenagers have done sets an example to me and changes my mind.Whenever I meet the people in need，I rush to help them.如今，彼此相爱是一件好事，在社会中也很普遍。选择爱，你就会有快乐。因此，从年轻男女所做的学习，我在周末参加教堂的劳改营，不管天气多冷多热。青少年们所做的事情为我树立了榜样，也改变了我的主意。每当我遇到需要帮助的人时，我就会急于帮助他们。
Choose to love, and you will help others. How do you want to experience life？Will you be more kind？Begin with yourself. Realize that you are powerful and can create love. Take care of your thoughts and feelings and make sure they can reflect the positive aspects of you.You can then devote this love to people and places around you.Your love becomes the love other people feel.Be an angel and choose to live freely and joyfully. In this way, the society we live in will be better and better.选择去爱，你就会帮助别人。你想如何体验生活？你会更友善吗？从你自己开始。意识到你是强大的，可以创造爱。照顾好你的思想和感觉，并确保它们能反映出你的积极方面。然后你就可以把这种爱奉献给你周围的人和地方。你的爱变成了别人所感受到的爱。做一个天使，选择自由和快乐地生活。这样，我们所生活的社会就会越来越好。
第11篇 圣诞老人
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分）
I remember my first Christmas adventure with Grandma.I was just a kid.
I went to town on my bike to visit her on the day when my big sister told me，“There is no Santa Claus，and even dummies know that！”
My grandma always told the truth，always.I fled to her that day because I knew she would stand on my side.
Hearing my story，Grandma was ready for me.“No Santa Claus？” she snorted.“Ridiculous! Don't believe it.Such rumors have been going around for years，and it makes me mad，plain mad！Now，put on your coat，and let's go.”
“Go Go where，Grandma？” I asked.We drove to Kerby's General Store.As we walked through its doors，Grandma handed me ten dollars.That was a bundle in those days.“Take the money”，she said，“and buy something for someone who needs it.” Then she went away and waited in the car.
I was only eight years old.I'd often gone shopping with my mother，but never had I shopped for anything all by myself.The store seemed big and crowded，full of people scrambling(抢夺) to finish their Christmas shopping.
For a few moments I just stood there，confused，holding that ten dollar bill，wondering what to buy and who on earth to buy it for.Then I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker.He was a kid with bad breath and messy hair.Bobby Decker didn't have a coat.I knew that because he never went out to play during the winter.His mother always wrote a note，telling the teacher that he had a cough，but all we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn't have a cough; he didn't have a good coat.Yes，I would buy Bobby Decker a coat!
My eyes were fixed on a red coat which looked real warm and he would like that.
“Is this a Christmas present for someone？” the lady behind the counter asked kindly，as I laid my ten dollars down.“Yes，Ma'am，” I replied shyly.“It's for Bobby.”
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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That evening，Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper and ribbons.Grandma drove me through the crowded street and finally we arrived at Bobby Decker's home.Grandma told me to knock at the door.I laid down the present，knocked at the door three times and quickly ran away to hide behind the tree nearby.Soon Bobby Decker came out，looking around. He found the present and happily took it home.
那天晚上，奶奶帮我用圣诞纸和缎带裹好外套。奶奶开车送我穿过拥挤的街道，最后我们到达了鲍比·德克尔的家。奶奶叫我去敲门。我放下礼物，敲了三次门，然后迅速跑开，躲在附近的树后面。不久，鲍比·德克尔出来了，环顾四周。他找到了礼物，并很高兴地把它带回家了。
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Fifty years hasn't reduced the excitement of those moments.I still remember holding my breath when seeing Bobby Decker came out to pick up his present.We waited until he went back.It was not until then that I realized that Santa Claus was among us.He did exist.It was ridiculous to think there was no Santa Claus in the world.I often tell this story to my children，telling them Santa visits us during Christmas time，when people should show kindness to others.
五十年来并没有减少那些时刻的兴奋感。我还记得，当我看到鲍比·德克尔出来拿起礼物时，我屏住了呼吸。我们一直等到他回来。直到那时，我才意识到圣诞老人就在我们中间。他确实存在。一想到世界上没有圣诞老人就太荒谬了。我经常把这个故事告诉我的孩子们，告诉他们圣诞老人在圣诞节来看我们，那时人们应该对别人表示友善。
第12篇 外科医生的信仰
阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Michelle was 5 years old when she heard her mom and dad talking about her little brother Jack, only an infant (婴儿). He was very sick and they were completely out of money. Only a very costly operation could save Jack, but there was no one to whom they could turn for the money needed. She heard her daddy say to her tearful mom, “Only a miracle can save him now.”
Hearing the words, Michelle went to her bedroom and took all the coins from her little money box. After counting the coins three times, she slipped out of the room and made her way to the drug store 6 blocks away…
She waited for a long time before the pharmacist (药剂师) turned around and asked her, “What do you want ”
“Well, it’s about my brother,” Michelle answered, “He’s really sick. And I want to buy a miracle.”
“I beg your pardon ” said the pharmacist.
“His name is Jack. And he has something very bad growing inside his body. And my daddy says only a miracle can save him now. So how much does a miracle cost ”
“We don’t sell miracles here, little girl. I am sorry, but I can’t help you.” the pharmacist said.
“Listen, I have the money to pay for it.” With these words, Michelle poured out all the coins from her pocket.
At this time, a well-dressed man behind Michelle stooped down stairs and asked the little girl, “I am selling the miracle you want. Tell me how much money you have.”
“One dollar and eleven cents,” Michelle answered in a low voice, “That’s all the money I have. But I can get some more if I need to.”
“Well,” smiled the man, “a dollar and eleven cents. The exact price of a miracle for your little brother. Show me the place where your brother lives.”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好。
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Holding the man’s hand firmly, Michelle took him home.
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When asked why he chose to help the family, the man detailed.
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Holding the man’s hand firmly, Michelle took him home. The little girl walked in such a hurry that she even forgot to introduce herself to the man. Her parents were too surprised to believe their eyes. That well-dressed man turned out to be a surgeon, specializing in neural surgery. Later, the little brother was taken away. The operation was completed with payment of one dollar and eleven cents. And it wasn’t long before Jack was home again and doing well! Michelle was more than happy. Now she knew the exact price of a miracle: one dollar and eleven cents, plus the faith of a little girl.
米歇尔紧紧地握着那个男人的手，把他带回家了。小女孩走得很匆忙，甚至忘记向那个男人介绍自己。她的父母太惊讶了，不敢相信他们的眼睛。那个衣着考究的男人原来是一名专攻神经外科的外科医生。后来，这个小弟弟被带走了。手术完成时只支付了1美元11美分。没过多久，杰克就回家了，做得很好！米歇尔非常高兴。现在她知道了一个奇迹的确切价格：一美元十一美分，再加上一个小女孩的信仰。
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When asked why he chose to help the family, the man detailed. “When I was young myself, I was once in the same situation as the little baby. The little girl reminded me of my own sister. It was she who saved my life. Deeply impressed by her innocence, I was determined to help the family out of trouble. It doesn’t matter how much money she actually had with her. What matters is her faith, a faith in the existence of miracles.”、
当被问及为什么选择帮助这个家庭时，这名男子详细说。“在我自己年轻的时候，我曾经和那个小婴儿处于同样的处境。这个小女孩让我想起了我自己的妹妹。是她救了我的命。我对她的天真印象深刻，我决心帮助家人摆脱麻烦。不管她到底有多少钱。重要的是她的信仰，一种对奇迹存在的信仰。”
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，一个小女孩听到父母说弟弟病重，只有“奇迹”才能救弟弟，便把自己存的钱拿了出来，偷偷到药店为弟弟买“奇迹”。小女孩感人的一幕正好被一名医生看到，这位医生为小女孩的弟弟做了手术。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“米歇尔紧紧地握着他的手，把他带回家”可知，第一段可医生被米歇尔带回家后发生的故事。
②由第二段首句内容“当被问到为什么他选择帮助这个家庭时，他详细地说了出来”可知，第二段可描写医生为什么会帮助他们。
2.续写线索：回家——帮助——疑问——解释——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①走路：walk
②相信：believe
③完成：complete
④帮助：help
情绪类
①非常高兴：be more than happy
②决定：be determined to
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The little girl walked in such a hurry that she even forgot to introduce herself to the man.(由such…that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2] And it wasn’t long before Jack was home again and doing well!(由before引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型3] When asked why he chose to help the family, the man detailed. (由why引导的宾语从句及状语从句的省略句)
第13篇 拍照
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a photographer running a studio in the inner city. We are well known for our children's portraits (肖像)，and we range from high-end portraits for modelling jobs to fun sibling photos and birth announcements. We do a bit of everything； as such, we are extremely busy, and it states on our website that we do not accept walk-ins. We are usually booked up six months in advance. One day, ten minutes before closing, a mum walked in with a young girl around six or seven behind her. I internally sighed.
The mother said："Hello. I know you're closing soon, but I have a special favour to ask.”
At that point the little girl peeked around her mother's legs and I was lost for words. Under her thick winter coat and hat, she was skinny with huge dark circles under her eyes. From what I could tell, she had no hair, and a tube taped to her cheek that fed into her nose. It was immediately clear this kid was very, very sick.
The mother said again, nearly teary. " My daughter saw one of your photos taped to the wall at the hospital. She really loves unicorns (独角兽)and the photo had a girl photoshopped onto a horse. I know you're booked up, and it's months before the next appointment, but…”
At that point she actually started crying. I realised that our next available appointment was probably way too far away for this particular kid. The little girl squeezed her mother's hand. I am a very big guy with a beard, but I'm not ashamed to say I needed a minute before I spoke.
I smiled and said with the softest voice I had ever had ： ” Ahh, that's just for regular customers I I've been waiting all day to take a photo of someone as beautiful as you! What's your name, sweetheart "
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
I locked the front door and invited them to the changing room,
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The mother thanked me over and over and came up front, holding out her credit card. .
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【答案】I locked the front door and invited them to the changing room. I spent the next three hours taking photos of this kid in every princess costume I have in my closet. She was the sweetest, most well-behaved kid I had ever worked with. Once we were done, she lay on the couch in my office and fell asleep while I loaded up the photos for her mum to see and choose the ones she liked best.
我锁上了前门，邀请他们去更衣室。在接下来的三个小时里，我给这个穿着我衣橱里所有公主衣服的孩子拍照。她是和我共事过的最可爱、最乖的孩子。我们完成后，她躺在我办公室的沙发上睡着了，我把照片装起来给她妈妈看并选择她最喜欢的。
The other thanked me over and over and came up front, holding out her credit card. I refused to accept it, say: “I feel very honored to take a photo of such a lovely angel. I’m not taking money for this, but I hope you can allow me to put one of her photos in our showcase, because she has the most beautiful and warmest smile. Many years later that photo of a sick little girl on a giant pink unicorn is still in a frame in my shop, always reminding me to show kindness to those who really need it.
另一个一遍又一遍地感谢我，走到前面，拿出她的信用卡。我拒绝接受，他说：“我感到很荣幸能给这么一个可爱的天使拍张照片。我不是在为此赚钱，但我希望你能让我把她的一张照片放在我们的展示柜中，因为她有最美丽、最温暖的微笑。许多年后，一张生病的小女孩戴着一只巨大的粉色独角兽的照片还在我的商店里，总是提醒我对那些真正需要它的人表示善意。
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一名摄影师，在市中心经营一家工作室，生意火爆，顾客不预约，就不接受其摄影订单。一天，一个妈妈带着生病的女儿来到作者店里，想要作者给女儿拍一张有独角兽的照片。虽然妈妈没预约，但作者答应给小女孩拍照片。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我锁上前门，邀请她们去更衣室。”可知，第一段可描写作者帮助小女孩拍了很多照片，拍完后，小女孩累得睡着了，作者让她妈妈选择最好的照片。
②由第二段首句内容“另一个人一遍又一遍地感谢我，然后走到前面，拿出她的信用卡。”可知，第二段可描写作者拒绝接受钱，但希望放一张小女孩的照片在店里，这张照片提醒作者要对那些真正需要照片的人表示友好。
2.续写线索：拍照——选照片——拒绝钱——请求——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拍照：taking photos / taking pictures
②睡着了：fell asleep / fell into a sleep
③拒绝：refused / rejected
情绪类
①感到荣幸：feel very honored to / feel a great honor to
②笑容：smile / smiling expression
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. She was the sweetest, most well-behaved kid I had ever worked with.（先行词是the sweetest, most well-behaved kid，用了省略that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]. Many years later that photo of a sick little girl on a giant pink unicorn is still in a frame in my shop, always reminding me to show kindness to those who really need it.（用了现在分词短语作状语，用了who引导的定语从句）
第14篇 五十个金币
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Long, long ago, in a little village lived a humble(谦虚的) man named Ashwin. He went about making ends meet by pulling a rickshaw(人力 车) and transporting passengers from one destination to another. Times were hard and he had to take the responsibility for supporting his family.
One day, while returning from work, a man who looked like a wealthy person coming from the city stopped his rickshaw. He quickly told Ashwin the place he wanted to visit. His car had broken down and he desperately needed to get to the mentioned address urgently. After an uneventful ride, they reached the destination, and the passenger paid the fare.
Ashwin, on returning home, found to his surprise that his passenger just then had dropped a small bag in his rickshaw. On opening it, he found 50 gold coins in it. He showed it to his family who couldn’t believe their luck. His wife said with joy, “Thank goodness. Now we find a solution to our problems.”
That night, Ashwin couldn’t sleep. His conscience(良心) kept troubling him. At the crack of dawn, he woke his wife up. He said, “Lalita, I think it’s wrong to keep someone else’s gold coins. I am going to search for the man and hand over the coins to him.” Lalita was shocked and cried, but Ashwin stuck to his word. He tried hard to find the man, but nothing seemed to work.
Eventually when he was about to give up, he saw that wealthy passenger. Ashwin ran to him and thrust(塞) the bag in his hand, “Sir, you left this bag in my rickshaw. I have been looking for you since then and I am so relieved to find you. Please take this,” he said.
注意:1.续写词数应为150字左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1;
The man was surprised.
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Paragraph 2:
Ashwin’s children then got educated and did well.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
The man was surprised. He was touched by Ashwin’s conscience and said he wanted to meet his family. Ashwin took the man home and introduced him to his family. The man looked at the poor condition of Ashwin’s house and his children and told Ashwin that he would like to help his family. Ashwin refused, but the man was insistent and said, “I would like to take the responsibility for educating your children.” Ashwin could not refuse the assistance since he wanted the children to become someone important. He agreed to send them to the city.
那人感到很惊讶。他被阿什温的良心感动了，说他想见见他的家人。阿什温把他带回家，并把他介绍给了他的家人。这名男子看着阿什温的房子和孩子们的恶劣状况，告诉阿什温，他想帮助他的家人。阿什温拒绝了，但这名男子坚持说：“我想承担教育你的孩子的责任。”阿什温不能拒绝这些帮助，因为他希望孩子们成为一个重要的人。他同意把他们送到城里去。
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Ashwin’s children then got educated and did well. Each vacation they went home to visit their parents. Ashwin often reminded them, “Never do anything at the cost of someone else.” The children remembered the advice and followed it. Years later, they became successful. When the poor man’s children had children of their own, they often told them the story about the small bag with 50 gold coins.
阿什温的孩子们接受了教育，做得很好。每次度假，他们都会回家看望父母。阿什温经常提醒他们，“永远不要以牺牲别人为代价去做任何事情。”孩子们想起了这个建议，并遵循了它。几年后，他们取得了成功。当穷人的孩子有了自己的孩子时，他们经常向他们讲述这个装着50个金币的小包的故事。
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写。本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了贫穷的Ashwin以拉人力车为生，一天一个有钱人乘他的车去某地时，把一个装有50个金币的包忘在了车上。妻子想把这些金币据为己有，但Ashwin的良心过意不去，他决定去寻找失主。就在多次寻找无果，准备放弃时，Ashwin看到了这个有钱人，并把包还给他。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这个人很吃惊”可知，第一段可描写他被Ashwin的良知感动了，准备登门道谢。看到他们贫穷的生活后，有钱人准备给他们提供帮助。但被善良的Ashwin拒绝了。在有钱人的再三坚持下，Ashwin终于同意他帮助自己的孩子接受良好的教育。
②由第二段首句内容“Ashwin的孩子们得到了很好的教育，并且学习很好”可知，第二段可描写Ashwin经常教育孩子，孩子们也谨记父亲教诲，并把他的事迹讲给子孙后代听。
2.续写线索：吃惊——发现Ashwin生活贫困——提供帮助——拒绝——提出负责孩子教育——同意——孩子学成归来——经常教育孩子——孩子以父亲为榜样
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助：help/do sb. a favor/ offer help to sb.
②拒绝 ：refuse/decline
③拜访：visit/ pay a visit to
④遵守：follow/ observe/ respect
情绪类
①感动：touch/move
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The man looked at the poor condition of Ashwin’s house and his children and told Ashwin that he would like to help his family. 句中使用that引导宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Ashwin could not refuse the assistance since he wanted the children to become someone important.句中使用since引导原因状语从句。
[高分句型3] When the poor man’s children had children of their own, they often told them the story about the small bag with 50 gold coins.句中when引导时间状语从句。
第15篇 披萨店员工救人
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
When the employees at the Domino’s pizza place in Salem, Oregon, hadn’t received any order from Kirk Alexander for more than 2 weeks, they knew something wasn’t right. Kirk was a loyal customer and the staff all knew him. So it was natural that they got worried when they had no news about him. Their concern saved his life.
Sarah Fuller, the general manager at the Domino’s branch, said that Kirk, who was 48 years old, had been a loyal customer since 2009. “He orders every day, or every other day,” Sarah said.
Normally, his order came up on the screen because he ordered online. So we saw it came across the screen and we were thinking, “Oh, Kirk’s order.” After a few days without a single order, Sarah and the staff started to worry.
A few Domino’s drivers had mentioned that they hadn’t seen his order come across their screen in a while. Sarah checked the system and saw that no order had come in 11 days. So they decided to investigate.
Sarah decided to send Tracy Hamblen, a deliver driver, to Kirk’s place. When he got there, he immediately knew something was wrong. While the lights and TV were on, Kirk did not come to the door. Additionally, his phone went directly to voicemail. So Tracy immediately called 911.
Para.1:
When the police arrived at the place,
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Para.2:
A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital.
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【答案】Para1: When the police arrived at the place, they heard a cry for help from the inside of the house. Inside, they found Kirk, who was in need of immediate medical help. Due to the quick actions of Tracy, Kirk is in stable condition at the Salem Hospital. The Domino’s employees received a lot of praise online for their unbelievable thoughtfulness. But they said that it was just part of their job and they were just doing their job.
当警察到达那个地方时，他们听到了来自房子里的呼救声。在里面，他们发现了需要立即得到医疗帮助的柯克。由于特蕾西的快速行动，柯克在塞勒姆医院的情况很稳定。多米美牌的员工难以置信的体贴在网上受到了很多赞扬。但他们说，这只是他们工作的一部分，他们只是在做自己的工作。
Para2: A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital. He came to the Domino’s personally with some homemade cookies to say thank--you to Sarah and the Domino’s staff. The Domino’s mentioned that “Caring for customers should not be taken at face value. We should remember that the customers determine the success of our company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives, small or big.” Kirk’s story has made this pizza shop even more popular in the community, and it has received more orders ever since.
几天后，柯克出院了。读后续写：助人型
Part1：经典例文（披萨店员工救人） 1
Part2：助人类故事构造三部曲 4
第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境） 4
第二步：助人过程呈现（（想到办法+动作链） 5
第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华） 5
Part3：助人场景描写 7
一、帮助他人之后 7
二、发生水灾之后 8
三、发生误解之后 9
四、发生火灾之后 9
五、感受善良之后 10
六、感受幸福之后 11
七、发生误解之后 12
八、获得勇气 13
九、获得自信 13
十、接收礼物之后 14
十一、老师的帮助 15
十二、陌生人的帮助 17
Part4：灵活应用 18
例1：老夫妇帮助我 18
例2：帮助老妇人 19
Part5：高考真题再现 22
真题1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】 22
真题2：买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】 24
Part1：经典例文（披萨店员工救人）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
When the employees at the Domino’s pizza place in Salem, Oregon, hadn’t received any order from Kirk Alexander for more than 2 weeks, they knew something wasn’t right. Kirk was a loyal customer and the staff all knew him. So it was natural that they got worried when they had no news about him. Their concern saved his life.
Sarah Fuller, the general manager at the Domino’s branch, said that Kirk, who was 48 years old, had been a loyal customer since 2009. “He orders every day, or every other day,” Sarah said.
Normally, his order came up on the screen because he ordered online. So we saw it came across the screen and we were thinking, “Oh, Kirk’s order.” After a few days without a single order, Sarah and the staff started to worry.
A few Domino’s drivers had mentioned that they hadn’t seen his order come across their screen in a while. Sarah checked the system and saw that no order had come in 11 days. So they decided to investigate.
Sarah decided to send Tracy Hamblen, a deliver driver, to Kirk’s place. When he got there, he immediately knew something was wrong. While the lights and TV were on, Kirk did not come to the door. Additionally, his phone went directly to voicemail. So Tracy immediately called 911.
Para.1:
When the police arrived at the place,
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Para.2:
A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital.
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【答案】Para1: When the police arrived at the place, they heard a cry for help from the inside of the house. Inside, they found Kirk, who was in need of immediate medical help. Due to the quick actions of Tracy, Kirk is in stable condition at the Salem Hospital. The Domino’s employees received a lot of praise online for their unbelievable thoughtfulness. But they said that it was just part of their job and they were just doing their job.
当警察到达现场时，他们听到了来自房子内部的呼救声。在里面，他们发现了需要立即得到医疗帮助的柯克。由于特蕾西的快速行动，柯克在塞勒姆医院的情况很稳定。多米美乐的员工令人难以置信的体贴在网上得到了很多赞扬。但他们说，这只是他们工作的一部分，他们只是在做他们的工作。
Para2: A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital. He came to the Domino’s personally with some homemade cookies to say thank--you to Sarah and the Domino’s staff. The Domino’s mentioned that “Caring for customers should not be taken at face value. We should remember that the customers determine the success of our company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives, small or big.” Kirk’s story has made this pizza shop even more popular in the community, and it has received more orders ever since.
几天后，柯克出院了。他亲自带着一些自制的饼干来到多米诺餐厅，对莎拉和多米诺餐厅的工作人员说声谢谢。多米美乐提到“照顾客户不应该是表面价值。”我们应该记住，客户决定了我们公司的成功，反过来我们也可以对他们的生活产生影响，无论大小。柯克的故事让这家披萨店在社区中更受欢迎，此后它收到了更多的订单。
【解析】
【分析】
文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个披萨店的员工，细心地发现近期没有收到来自老顾客Kirk的订单，于是派人前去查看，发现Kirk生病并及时报警就医，确保了Kirk的安全。员工的善举为披萨店赢得了更多的称赞和订单。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当警察赶到现场时，”可知，第一段可描写警察将Kirk送到医院的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“几天后，Kirk出院了。”可知，第二段可描写Kirk出院后去披萨店感谢员工们拯救了他的生命以及该披萨店因为善意举动而为自己赢得更多的订单和顾客。
续写线索：呼救——成功被救助——感谢——店员表达观点——披萨店更受欢迎
3.词汇激活
行为类
①大声求救：cry for help /shout for help /scream for help
②受到赞扬：received a lot of praise / be praised greatly
③照顾，护理： caring for/taking care of/
情绪类
①.感谢：say thank--you / express appreciation / show appreciation /show his gratitude/be grateful
②.体贴：thoughtfulness /being considerate
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Inside, they found Kirk, who was in need of immediate medical help.(由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词Kirk。)
[高分句型2]. We should remember that the customers determine the success of our company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives, small or big.(that引导宾语从句作remember的宾语。)
Part2：助人类故事构造三部曲
第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）
（1）消极情绪
典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）
1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一阵...
2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb
因...颤抖
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
（2）进一步细节描写
典型是：流泪；心里想……
流泪：
1. Tears blurred one's eyes.
2. One's eyes got misty.
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
困难处境
As the economy was in decline(经济衰退), some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet (使收支平衡). （2020.7高考山东卷）
There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床), his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. （2020.7高考山东卷）
But one day, a hurricane hit the area (台风袭击当地) where he lived, completely destroying his home (完全摧毁他的家) . （2021广州2月联考）
第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）
（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法
典型：某人想到/明白...; 有了主意
1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句
2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind
3. One's mind began to race
（2）动作链
Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子（锯子），从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的杰克顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。【八省联考】
第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）
（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ...
2. for an instant/moment一瞬间
（2）有了结果
1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句
2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，...
3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
（3）感谢
Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三）
Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her. （2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测（二模）英语试题）
（4）感动
1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. （2020.7高考山东卷）
2. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.（2021广州2月联考）
3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. （2021年1月八省联考）
4. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀). （2021年1月八省联考）
5. Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.（2021年1月八省联考）
（5）升华
It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.（2020.7高考山东卷）
Everyone was happy and sweet, exposing their sets of white teeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7高考山东卷）
I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”（2021年1月八省联考）
From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family offered me.（2021年1月八省联考）
5. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（会有很大不同）.
Part3：助人场景描写
一、帮助他人之后
I just looked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day we met.Kyle had planned to kill himself over the weekend. He talked of how he had cleaned out his locker so his Mom wouldn’t have to do it later and was carrying his stuff home. Meanwhile,I found he looked hard at me and gave me a little smile."Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me from doing the unspeakable,I heard the gasp go through the crowd as this handsome, popular boy told us all about his weakest moment. When his eyes caught mine,I was able to see tears shimmered in his smiling eyes.
我只是难以置信地看着我的朋友，他讲述了我们第一天见面的故事。 凯尔计划周末消遣。 他谈到了他是如何清理他的储物柜的，这样他的妈妈就不用再做了，然后把他的东西带回家了。 同时，我发现他狠狠地看着我，给了我一个小小的微笑。 “谢天谢地，我得救了。 我的朋友不让我做那些无法形容的事，我听到人群中的喘息声，就像这个英俊、受欢迎的男孩告诉我们他最脆弱的时刻一样。 当他的眼睛抓住我的眼睛时，我能看到他微笑的眼睛里闪烁着泪水。
I smiled back in tears. Not until that moment did I realize what big difference one small gesture had made to him. I even saw his Mom and Dad looking at me and smiling that same grateful smile. It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions. With one small gesture we can change a person's life. For better or for worse.
我笑着。直到那一刻，我才意识到一个小小的手势对他产生了多么大的不同。我甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我，也带着同样感激的微笑。我意识到，我们永远不应该低估我们行动的力量。只要用一个小小的手势，我们就可以改变一个人的生活。为好或坏。
二、发生水灾之后
The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn't dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while,one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。
Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walkupright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance."Lights! I see lights!" Jason shouted out.For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason's emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。
三、发生误解之后
As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise. At that moment, in her sight came the packet of cookies, which had beenjust bought by her, unopened at all. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her.A sudden rush of shy blood filling the face, she instinctively look around with the hope of finding the very man to make an apology.
当她伸手拿行李时，她惊讶地喘了一口气。就在这时，她看到了她刚买的一包饼干，根本没有打开。她感到羞愧，感觉自己像个小偷，终于明白了这些饼干不是她的，而是属于坐在她旁边的男人，他平静地提出和她分享他的最后一块饼干。脸上突然涌满了害羞的鲜血，她本能地环顾四周，希望能找到那个男人来道歉。
Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. He was just looking up and met her eyes,also with a smile on his face.The woman was at an absolute loss but gave the man a nervous laugh in return. Witha quite open mouth, she was unable to say any apology to him. Murmuring "Sorry, sorry..It was I myself who was the real cookie thief." After a while, she fell asleep on her seat with the plane flying steadily. The next day, when she arrived at her new company, the biggest surprise was waiting for her.
令人惊讶的是，她发现那个男人就坐在她身后。 他只是抬头看了看她的眼睛，脸上也带着微笑。 女人完全不知所措，但却给了男人一声紧张的笑声作为回报。 她张开嘴，不能向他道歉。 “对不起，对不起。。 真正偷饼的是我自己。” 过了一会儿，她在座位上睡着了，飞机平稳地飞着。 第二天，当她来到她的新公司时，最大的惊喜就是在等她。
四、发生火灾之后
Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane′s hand tightly. By then, both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying.
汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。 他吓得僵住了，站在原地。 他明白形势的严重性，紧紧地握住简的手。 到那时，他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。 时间似乎静止不动，虽然他们可能只在那里两三分钟。 汤姆恳求简尽快跑过去寻求安全。 简想保护她的鼻子免受呛人的烟雾，摇了摇头。 她不停地敲门。 汤姆突然哭了起来。
Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed,unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom's joy was immense.
幸运的是，一些邻居路过时停下来，并提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻取代了简心中日益增加的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们，马克奇克女士一定还在房间里。他们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然，马克西克正躺在床上，失去了知觉。她被带下楼，然后被紧急送往医院，终于苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气，简和汤姆非常高兴。
五、感受善良之后
Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said,"Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket." The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going on,he looked straight into my dad's eyes, took my dad's hand in both of his, squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied,"Thank you, thankyou, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。
That day my father andI went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.We didn't go to the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did so, Dad said,"My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasn't begging fora handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young." He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory."We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others.We didn't go to the circus tonight, but we didn't go without. Now, who wants an ice cream 。
那天，我和我父亲回到我们的车里，没有任何票就开车回家了。 那天晚上我们没有去马戏团，当我问爸爸为什么这么做时，爸爸说：“我的孩子，对一个父亲来说，这是一个绝望、令人心碎和尴尬的情况。 他当然不是乞求施舍，但他让我想起了我年轻时的父亲。” 他停顿了一会儿，仿佛在记忆中徘徊。 我们应该珍惜从生活中获得的东西，抓住一切机会帮助别人。 我们今晚没有去马戏团，但我们没有去。 谁要冰淇淋？。
六、感受幸福之后
The driver responded,"It must feel good to be taken care of and protected like you are every day."Confused by what the driver talked about,she asked, "What do you mean " The driver answered, "Every morning in the past week,a fine looking gentleman ina military uniform has been standing across the street watching you getting off the bus.He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches until you enter your office building.Then he blows you a kiss,gives you a lite salute and walks away. You are one lucky lady.'
司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”
Tears of happiness poured down Susan's cheeks. She stood motionlessly facing the opposite side of the street as if gazing at someone. Although she couldn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thought she was actually lucky, for he had given her a gift more powerful than sight,a gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little worried, he saw his wife break into a radiant smile and blow a kiss to his direction. Finally she found back herself blind but attractive and confident as she used to be.
司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”
七、发生误解之后
A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it.He felt a wave of anger swept over him. "Where is my wallet " he yelled. The black-haired girl glanced up from her reading, with a confused look on her face. Dannis stood up,glared at her and shouted,"You stole my wallet!" The crowds began to gossip.The girl turned deadly pale,looking so restless that words failed her.A strange silence hung in the air. Abruptly, she leaped from the seat.
她旁边的一个座位空着，丹尼斯坐着。 他感到一阵愤怒席卷了他。 “我的钱包呢？” 他大叫。 黑发女孩从阅读中抬起头来，脸上露出困惑的神色。 丹尼斯站起来，瞪了她一眼，喊道：“你偷了我的钱包！” 人群开始闲聊起来。 那女孩脸色惨白，神情不安，言语使她失望。 一种奇怪的沉默挂在空中。 她突然从座位上跳了起来。
The girl ran and Dannis ran after her. After a while, Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm.At exactly that moment,a policeman approached them and asked about what happened.Dannis hastened to explain it while the girl frowned with a shake of her head. After further enquiries, the policeman took out a wallet and handed it to Dannis, adding that someone had found it in the toilet. What a mistake he had made! Overwhelmed by guilt, Dannis made an apology to the girl.
女孩跑了，丹尼斯追了她。 过了一会儿，丹尼斯终于抓住了她的手臂。 就在这时，一个警察走近他们，问他们发生了什么事。 丹尼斯急忙解释，而女孩皱着眉头摇了摇头。 经过进一步的询问，警察拿出一个钱包递给丹尼斯，并补充说有人在厕所里发现了它。 他犯了什么错误！ 由于内疚，丹尼斯向女孩道歉。
八、获得勇气
The boy started running again to give the kite lift.The wind on the kite was at once strong and swift, carrying him up high into the air.Closing his eyes tight, he trembled all over in panic,not daring to look down.But with the boy's inspiring words in mind, he got up his nerve and managed to keep the balance and let his fear go.As the wind carried him upward, he slowly opened his eyes, only to see the whole town from a brand-new dimension!"Give more string, please. More! he yelled to the boy excitedly. With courage,he made a great dance in the air, making other kids cheering wildly
那男孩又开始跑去放风筝了。风筝上的风立刻强烈而迅速，把他从高空吹到空中。他紧紧地闭上眼睛，惊恐得浑身发抖，不敢低头看。但考虑到男孩鼓舞人心的话，他鼓起了勇气，设法保持平衡，释放了他的恐惧。当风带着他向上走时，他慢慢地睁开眼睛，却从一个全新的维度看到了整个城镇！“请再多写信吧。请了解更多信息！他兴奋地对那男孩大喊大叫。他鼓着勇气在空中跳了一场舞，让其他孩子疯狂地欢呼
The kite felt peaceful and delighted and new. With other kites flying around, he floated, twirled,stretched his wings and waved his rag tail, a broad smile spreading on his face. The higher he went, the greater the view. Seeing the scared, timid kite now dancing confidently, the boy was touched, believing that the kite had learned a new lesson--the best way to defeat fear is to face it bravely and optimistically.
风筝感到平静、快乐和新鲜事物。其他风筝四处飞着，他漂浮着，旋转着，展开翅膀，摇着破尾巴，脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。他走得越高，视野就越大。看到害怕的、胆小的风筝现在自信地跳舞，男孩被感动了，相信风筝已经吸取了新的教训——战胜恐惧的最好方法是勇敢而乐观地面对它。
九、获得自信
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.Jenny didn't answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic No one could understand. No one could believe. "But I saw you wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech. Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.
每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“可是我昨天看到你戴着它，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn't think properly. All round her, a sea of faces was watching.She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes.Jenny took a deep breath."I'm going to talk about swimming…." Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.
沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。 珍妮慢慢地走到前面。 她无法正常思考。 她的四周，一片面海在看着。 她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点也不神奇。 突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。 珍妮深吸了一口气。 “我要谈谈游泳的事...。” 十分钟后全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。 珍妮笑了，因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。
十、接收礼物之后
I was stopped by my mother's eager,joyful look."Let's see what it is, honey. Hurry and open it."It was a blow dryer. Though this may seem but a simple gift, to me it was so much more. Being an eleven-year-old girl, I was stunned.In my world, where receiving lately outweighed giving, my mom's act of selflessness was incomprehensible. It was a huge act Tears filled my eyes and I thought in disbelief about how much my mom must love me to give up her Christmas so-could have a few more presents.
我被我母亲急切而快乐的目光拦住了。“让我们看看那是什么事吧，亲爱的。赶快打开它。“那是一个吹风机。虽然这似乎只是一份简单的礼物，但对我来说，它更多了。作为一个11岁的女孩，我惊呆了。在我的世界里，最近接受的东西超过了付出，我妈妈的无私行为是不可理解的。这是一个巨大的表演，眼泪充满了我的眼睛，我不相信我妈妈一定是多么爱我才能放弃她的圣诞节，所以可以再有几份礼物。
I have always remembered that Christmas fondly: It had such an impact on me. As an adult with children in my life whom I adore, I can now understand my mom's actions.I see actually, she was not ""giving up her Christmas" as I had thought, but was finding an even greater joy in her Christmas because giving truly is better than receiving. My mom's simple act meant the world to me. Whenever I look back on my mom's giving, I will choose to give in my life.
我一直深情地记得那个圣诞节：它对我有如此的影响。 作为一个在我的生活中有孩子的成年人，我现在可以理解我妈妈的行为。 实际上，我知道，她并没有像我想的那样“放弃她的圣诞节”，而是在她的圣诞节中找到了更大的乐趣，因为真正的给予比接受更好。 我妈妈的简单行为对我来说意味着世界。 每当我回首妈妈的付出，我都会选择在我的生命中付出。
十一、老师的帮助
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Jenny didn't answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic No one could understand. No one could believe. "But I saw you wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech.Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.
每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“但我昨天看见你戴着它，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn't think properly.All round her,a sea of faces was watching. She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes. Jenny took a deep breath."I'm going to talk about swimming…" Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech.Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.
沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。 珍妮慢慢地走到前面。 她无法正常思考。 她的四周，一片面海在看着。 她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点也不神奇。 突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。 珍妮深深地吸了一口气。 十分钟后，全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。 珍妮笑了，因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。
2.
Time passed quickly that year, and before we all knew it, it was the last day of school.Our school had a very special tradition on the last day. All the teachers filled the sidewalk, waving goodbye to the kids as the buses pulled out with their horns honking.But on that particular day,Steven walked slowly to the bus, his head down, tears in his eyes.He boarded the bus reluctantly,hesitated,and then ran back off the bus to hug Mr. Rowe."I don′t want to leave you." He sobbed with red-rimmed eyes. Mr. Rowe comforted him,"I will miss you, too."
那一年时间过得很快，我们还没意识到，那是学校的最后一天。我们学校在最后一天有一个非常特殊的传统。所有的老师都挤满了人行道，向孩子们挥手道别，车上按着喇叭离开。但就在那一天，史蒂文慢慢地走到公交车前，低着头，热泪盈眶。他不情愿地登上了巴士，犹豫了一下，然后跑回来拥抱Mr。罗伊。“我不想离开你。”他用红边缘的眼睛抽泣着。Mr.罗安慰他，“我也会想念你。”
Many years later, Mr. Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom, dressed in the Marine Corps uniform. The young man stood tall and proud.It was Steven! Mr. Rowe and I couldn't believe our eyes. He saluted and hugged Mr. Rowe tightly! "I have come back to school today just to say thanks to you!"It is my hope that every teacher is blessed with such an experience of a former student coming back to say, simply to say a very simple word of THANKS.
许多年后，当一个穿着海军陆战队制服的英俊年轻人走进我们的教室时，罗先生和我感到惊讶。 那个年轻人站得高高的，很骄傲。 是史蒂文！ 我和罗先生简直不敢相信我们的眼睛。 他敬礼，紧紧地拥抱罗先生！ “我今天回到学校只是为了感谢你！ “我希望每一位老师都有这样的经历，一位以前的学生回来说，简单地说一个非常简单的“谢谢。
十二、陌生人的帮助
I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent.We both looked up. It was exactly the young man in the photo but looked much stronger. The woman said something to him, looking at us smiling."Need some Mg "he asked.It's amazing he was speaking very good English! George and I looked at each other, eyes lit up."Yes, and we were wondering if you could have one of our tyres changed." "Follow me!" he said, sounding like sort of an order.
当我听到帐篷外的脚步声时，我想说什么。 我们都抬起头来。 照片上的正是那个年轻人，但看上去更强壮。 女人对他说了些什么，看着我们微笑。 ”“需要镁吗？ ”他问道。 他说的英语很好真是太棒了！ 乔治和我互相看了一眼，眼睛亮了起来。 “是的，我们想知道你们是否可以换一个轮胎。” “跟我来！” 他说，听起来像是命令。
We got up and together walked back to the car. The man grabbed the wheel with one hand and a spanner with the other. With an outburst of shout, the tyre was oosened up."You just need a bit of effort. Haha!" George and I stood there dumbfounded watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart. The knot that had been tired up by the pain in my foot, the cold soaking rain and the stubborn flat tyre was loosened up too,in the warm tea from the woman, the heroic shout of the man, the mountain view in the distance and the joy of being alel to set off again.
我们站起来，一起走回到车里。那个人用一只手抓住轮子，另一只手抓住扳手。大叫一声，轮胎亮了。“你只需要付出一点努力。哈哈哈！”我和乔治呆地站在那里看着他完成整个工作，感激和钦佩在我心中涌动。我脚的疼痛、冰冷的雨和顽固的平轮胎也松开了，在女人温暖的茶里，男人的英雄呐喊，远处的山景，还有比加莱尔再次出发的喜悦。
Part4：灵活应用
例1：老夫妇帮助我
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分）
Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents' home in Missouri for Christmas. I stopped at a gas station(加油站)about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas.
I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car. I stopped and wondered what I should do. A car pulled up behind me. It was the couple I had spoken to at the gas station. They said they would take me to my friend's .We chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card.
I wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me. Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them. Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful.
Years later, I drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morning. In late afternoon I returned to my car and found that I'd left the lights on all day, and the battery(电池)was dead. Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership - a shop selling cars - was right next door. I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me.
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After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it.
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I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me. I recognized him at once. the two salesmen were the older couple, and they were the owners of the Friendly Ford dealership. “ Hey, it’s you! you ever helped me, remember ” I said to them excitedly. Yeah, we do!” the old man laughed, we run the shop to help more people. you know, it makes our life so meaningful!”
我走进商店，其中一个推销员来找我。我立刻认出了他。这两名销售员是老夫妇，他们是友好的福特经销商的老板。“嘿，是你！”你曾经帮助过我，记得吗？我兴奋地对他们说。是的，老人笑了，我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。你知道，这让我们的生活如此有意义！”
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After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it. they solved my trouble once again, but when I paid for it, they would not accept my money. they told me that when they ran the shop at first, no one had ever taken the time to write them and say thank you, but now they received more and more thank-you notes from people, which they were really happy about.
过了一会儿，他们很快就开了一辆小货车到我的车前，发动了它。他们再次解决了我的麻烦，但当我付钱时，他们不会接受我的钱。他们告诉我，当他们一开始经营商店的时候，没有人花时间写声谢谢，但现在他们收到了越来越多的感谢信，他们真的很高兴。
例2：帮助老妇人
“Hurry, Marcus!” Millie called to her brother. Marcus caught up just as the school bus arrived. The doors opened and they got their first look at the new bus driver, Mr. Cross. There was no smile on his face. He just nodded at them as they climbed the steps. Millie wondered if he ever smiled. “I miss our old driver,” she whispered.
The bus traveled two more blocks, then stopped in front of a house with no one in sight. “Hey, we don’t usually stop here,” whispered Millie. Mr. Cross opened the bus doors.
Millie waited to see who would get on, but nobody did. Still, Mr. Cross nodded his head, the way he had when she and Marcus boarded the bus. Then he closed the doors.
“Did you see that ” Millie said. “He just opened the doors and nodded at someone, but nobody got on!” Marcus agreed. “That was strange.” The bus continued on the route, and the usual kids got on. Mr. Cross nodded at each one.
During school that day, Millie kept thinking back to what had happened that morning. It didn't make sense. At the end of the day, when she and Marcus got on the bus to go home, Marcus said, “I think I figured it out. He probably stopped to pick up a ghost kid!”
“A ghost kid ” Millie gulped (倒吸气).
“Maybe Mr. Cross can see ghosts,” Marcus said.
“No,” said Millie. “That’s silly.” But as they rode home, Millie thought about it. What else could it be Why else would he open the doors
The next two days, the same thing happened. The bus stopped and the doors opened. Smileless, Mr. Cross nodded, and the doors closed. Millie began to panic. This time she decided Marcus was right. “Who is this ghost kid What if he’s sitting next to us ” They gathered courage to find out the truth.
On Friday morning, the bus stopped at that house again. Their hearts raced.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
When Mr. Cross opened the doors and nodded to nobody, they went forward to him.
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Hearing the story, in relief, they decided to visit the house and see what can be done.
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【答案】
When Mr. Cross opened the doors and nodded to nobody, they went forward to him. Millie said, “Excuse me, Mr. Cross, who gets on at this stop every morning ” Mr. Cross replied, “I am afraid that there are some misunderstandings between us. I have an old friend who lives in the old house at the end of this block. Every day at this time, she will wave at me in front of the house. I can also see her in the distance and know that she is healthy and safe. I am so tall that I have to nod my head to look outside. ”
克罗斯先生开门，没有向任何人点点头，他们就向他走去。米莉说：“对不起，克罗斯先生，他每天早上都会在这里停留？”克罗斯先生回答说：“恐怕我们之间有些误解。”我有一个老朋友住在这个街区尽头的老房子里。每天在这个时候，她都会在房子前向我挥手。我也可以在远处看到她，我知道她很健康，很安全。我太高了，我得点头才能看外面。”
Hearing the story, in relief, they decided to visit the house and see what can be done. As approaching the house, they saw an old woman sitting on a chair with a dog next to her. They introduced themselves to this old woman. From then on, they often came to help the old woman with some housework on weekends. With the generous help of Millie and Marcus, the old woman no longer felt lonely. She often told them some old stories and they became good friends.
克罗斯先生开门，没有向任何人点点头，他们就向他走去。米莉说：“对不起，克罗斯先生，他每天早上都会在这里停留？”克罗斯先生回答说：“恐怕我们之间有些误解。”我有一个老朋友住在这个街区尽头的老房子里。每天在这个时候，她都会在房子前向我挥手。我也可以在远处看到她，我知道她很健康，很安全。我太高了，我得点头才能看外面。”
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。米莉和她的弟弟马库斯乘坐的校车换了司机，新司机开车每次过两个街区都会停下来，并没有任何人上车，司机都会点一下头。米莉和马库斯既害怕又纳闷。终于有一天，他们决心弄清楚这件事情。
【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，米莉和她的弟弟乘坐的校车换了司机，新司机叫克罗斯，他们觉得新司机很陌生，脸上没有笑容。更令他们害怕的是，校车每次过两个街区，克罗斯先生就会把车停下来，并没有任何人上车，但是司机都会点一下头。他们很诧异，弟弟马库斯猜测说，克罗斯先生在那一站接上来的是“鬼孩子”，米莉并不这么想，但是也很害怕。接下来的几天都是这样，他们忍不住了。终于有一天，他们鼓起勇气，决心把这个事情弄明白。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当克罗斯先生打开门，对着无人的地方点头示意时，他们向他走去……因此，接下来应该续写，司机克罗斯先生是怎样把这个事情跟米莉姐弟解释清楚的。原来是一场误会，克罗斯先生有一位老朋友就住在这附近，这位老朋友是个老妇人，年龄大了，自己孤独的住在这里。每次到车到这的时候，老妇人都会出来和他挥挥手，他也能从远处看看她，看到老朋友是健康的、安全的，他就放心了。
第二段开头是：听到这个故事，他们松了一口气，决定去这个房子看看能做些什么……本段续写他们认识了住在房子里的老妇人，并且经常在周末的时候来帮助老人做家务，他们也成了很好的朋友。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：wave at，in front of，in the distance，no longer等高级词汇；定语从句I have an old friend who lives in the old house at the end of this block；结果状语从句I am so tall that I have to nod my head to look outside；运用了With the generous help of...的with复合结构等高级句式。
Part5：高考真题再现
真题1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.
注意：
续写词数应为150左右；
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
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When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.Hearing what she said, I realized that I didn’t have lunch.To be honest, after working hard for several hours, I was so hungry. Feeling a bit embarrassed, I replied: “no!”The girl said with a smile, “Come on! Join us.The Mexicon sandwich is delicious!” With moved tears rolling around my eyes, I took the sandwich.After eating it like wolf, I felt that it was the tasty sandwich that I had ever had.While dining, I talked about my trouble and feelings and they shared their interesting stories in the life.Then, the girl’s mother had another sandwich and some fruit place din a paper bag and handed it to me,saying gently: “Keep it and have it later! We had to go now.” I showed my heartfelt gratitude to them and saw them disappear in my sight.
After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag. What surprised me a lot was that there was a sandwich,fruit and the bill given by me.Holding the paper bag tightly, I stood still, a warm current rising in my heart.How grateful was I to the family helping me. Although most of people I met on the road were indifferent, there were still some people like this family who was so helpful and thoughtful.From then on, I placed a jack and some common tools in my car.When meeting people in need on the road ,I would try my best to help them like the family.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.
真题2：买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.
“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don’t see what he can do.”
After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”
“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”
For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成) .”
The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.
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With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.
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One possible version:
When Mrs. Meredith heard of the idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and ordered a household popcorn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, together with her three children, paid another visit to the family and told them about the popcorn plan. Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered to Mrs. Meredith’s doorstep. And it wasn’t long before they got the hang of using the machine to make popcorn.
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Although it was a hard time and things were tight for everybody, Bernard’s business worked out quite well. He carried the popcorn on his small bike, going from door to door to sell it. People were surprised to see such a little, poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors, but eventually almost all of them would buy a bag or two. It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. (续写词数：164)
