(共18张PPT)
B2 unit2
Be sporty,be healthy
主题作文
主讲人:杜杜
假如你是李华,疫情期间,你的美国笔友 Eric 想知道如何通过加强体育锻炼增强体质。请你给 Eric写信,告诉他正确锻炼的方法及好处。
注意:
(1)词数 80 左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作大纲
首 段:寒暄+写信背景 (你的朋友想知道如何增强体质)+写信目的(给他一些建议)
中间段:1.正确锻炼的方法
2.正确锻炼的好处
尾 段:重提主题 +表达期待
首段
PART 02
我知道你很想知道如何在疫情期间增强免疫系统,我迫不及待地想知道与你分享我对这件事的个人建议和考虑。
the epidemic/ ep dem k /n.流行病,传染病;
在疫情期间during the epidemic
增强免疫系统strengthen your immune system
首 段:寒暄+写信背景 (你的朋友想知道疫情期间如何增强体质)+写信目的(给他一些建议)
have a try
我知道你很想知道如何在疫情期间增强免疫系统,我迫不及待地想知道与你分享我对这件事的个人建议和考虑。
Knowing that you are eager to know how to strengthen your immune system during the epidemic , I can't wait to
share with you my personal suggestions and considerations on this matter.
首 段:寒暄+写信背景 (你的朋友想知道疫情期间如何增强体质)+写信目的(给他一些建议)
中间段
PART 03
1.做一些有氧运动,比如慢跑和游泳(I suggest that...)
I suggest that you should take some aerobic exercise, such as jogging and swimming.
扩充句子
... , which can improve the function of your heart and lungs.
... , in which case , you can improve the function of your heart and lungs.
中间段:1.正确锻炼的方法
2.正确锻炼的好处
1.做一些有氧运动,比如慢跑和游泳
用其他的句式翻译句子
My suggestion is that you (should) take some aerobic exercise, such as jogging and swimming, which can improve the function of your heart and lungs.
It is advisable that you (should) take some aerobic exercise, such as jogging and swimming, which can improve the function of your heart and lungs.
2.家里进行引体向上的训练
有利于发展你的肌肉力量,对你的心理健康也有好处。
Tips
a pull-up training引体向上的训练
develop your muscle strength发展你的肌肉力量
mental health心理健康
中间段:1.正确锻炼的方法
2.正确锻炼的好处
have a try
2.家里进行引体向上的训练
有利于发展你的肌肉力量,对你的心理健康也有好处。
Having a pull-up training at home will be good for developing your muscle strength and be of beneft to your mental health.
短语替换
=Having a pull-up training at home will be helpful to develop your muscle strength ...
=...and be beneficial to your mental health.
中间段:1.正确锻炼的方法
2.正确锻炼的好处
2.家里进行引体向上的训练
有利于发展你的肌肉力量,对你的心理健康也有好处。
用其他的句式翻译句子
用not only...but also句式改写
You are supposed to have a pull-up training at home.
Not only will you develop your muscle strength, but also you will benefit your mental health.
用定语从句改写
You are supposed to have a pull-up training at home ,which will be good for developing your muscle strength and be of beneft to your mental health.
3.只有足够的运动才能增进健康,预防疾病。
Only by enough exercise can you improve health and prevent diseases.
当副词 only 位于句首并修饰介词短语、副词和状状语从句等时,句子发生部分倒装,常见情况有:
1.only + 副词:only then/only now
2.only + 介词短语: only in this way/only by working together/only with your help
3.only + 状语从句: only when .... /only if .../ only after ...
中间段:1.正确锻炼的方法
2.正确锻炼的好处
尾段
PART 04
希望我以上的建议能够对你有用/得到采纳,同时我相信所有的困难都能够对你有用/被妥善解决。
Tips
settle / set. l/解決,結束
adopt/ d pt/接受;採用;採納
Hopefully, my suggestions can be beneficial to you/adopted, and I believe all the difficulties can be settled properly.
Hopefully, my suggestions can be beneficial to you/adopted, and I stick to the belief that all the difficulties can be settled properly.
尾 段:重提主题 +表达期待
我告诉你的所有这些类型的锻炼都是有效的,只要你有规律的作息。我希望这些建议对你有帮助。
All these types of exercise I tell you will work if you have a regular routine.
I hope these suggestions are helpful to you.
更贴合题意
Sample
PART 05
Dear Eric,
Knowing that you are eager to know how to strengthen your immune system during the epidemic , I can't wait to share with you my personal suggestions and considerations on this matter.
To begin with , it is advisable that you take some aerobic exercise, such as jogging and swimming, which can improve the function of your heart and lungs.In addition, having a pull-up training at home will be good for developing your muscle strength and be of beneft to your mental health.Only by enough exercise can you improve health and prevent diseases.
All these types of exercise I tell you will work if you have a regular routine.I hope these suggestions are helpful to you.
Yours
Li Hua