(共19张PPT)
演讲稿
写作指导
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演讲稿
常见内容
欢迎或欢送致辞
毕业致辞
就某个话题发表自己感想
(保护校园环境、关注青少年身体健康等)
竞选某个岗位如学生会主席等
演讲稿
写作重点
明确自己代表的身份 (我是谁)
明确听众的特点 (你是谁)
结构要完整:开场白、主题和结尾(讲什么)
语言要得体、有感染力 (怎么讲)
演讲稿
注意
称呼要合适:根据不同场合和听众选用得体的称呼,如“Ladies and gentlemen”“Dear friends”等;
结构要完整:一篇演讲稿要有开场白,主题和结尾三部分构成。在演讲稿中要做到开头引人入胜,主题扣人心弦,结尾掀起高潮,自始至终吸引听众。
语言要得体:在语言运用上要明确听的对象,做到语义明白流畅、通俗易懂。可使用一些常见的修辞手法来增强语言的感染力和说服力。
演讲稿
Para. 1 背景及原因(就某话题演讲)
Para. 2 紧扣主题展开论述
Para. 3 重申主题,呼吁或提出建议
框架
Some useful sentences:
It is a great honor for me, on behalf of our school, to deliver this speech about ...
I am honored / privileged to have this precious chance to speak here on such a special occasion.
Today I want to talk to you about a very important subject.
I’m definitely sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life.
The topic of my speech today is ...
Only in this way can we ...
Finally, I hope what is mentioned above might be beneficial to you.
Thank you for your attention / listening.
Para.1
自我介绍+身份
写作背景
写作目的:做演讲
第1段中需要有常规的套话:这是我的荣幸去做演讲…
I am Li Hua, a student from … / president of the Students’ Union.
It is my great honor to deliver a speech on … on behalf of …
备选
It is a great privilege for me to stand here, sharing my opinions about …
I am honored to have this precious chance to speak here on such a special occasion.
Para.2
总起:以下是我的观点
罗列要点(若无具体提示,3-4个为佳)
第2段中需要有感染力:倒装句、强调句
When it comes to sth./doing … , 主句
First and foremost, … Moreover, … Last but not least, …
It is + 强调部分 + that + 剩余部分
Not only … but also
Never will you regret if you …
Para.3
总结
希望、祝福或号召
套话:谢谢聆听
第3段中号召:祈使句 / Let’s do … together.
In short, I’m strongly believed that only if we … , can we …
Thank you for your listening!
备选
In short, I’d like to stress the importance of doing … That’s all I want to say about this point. Thank you for your attention!
General Structure
I’m Li Hua, a student from … It is my great honor to deliver a speech on … here.
When it comes to … , it is widely recognized that … First and foremost, … Additionally, … Last but not least, …
In short, I’d like to stress the importance of doing … again. And that’s all I want to say about this point. Thank you for your attention!
写作实战演练
写作训练1
假定你是李华,最近你校准备举办以“Exercise an Hour Every Day, Healthy Life for a Lifetime”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点:
你对这一主题的理解
你喜欢的运动项目及益处
号召同学们积极运动
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen! I’m Li Hua, a student in Senior One. It is my great honor to deliver a speech with a theme of Exercise an Hour Every Day, Healthy Life for a Lifetime here.
When it comes to this theme, I’d like to stress the importance of doing exercise as follows. First and foremost, as we all know, a person who keeps on taking exercise regularly will keep fit and live a happy life. In addition, as for me, I prefer playing badminton with my friends after school, which is not only beneficial to both my health and my mood, but also refreshes my mind after a long period of study. Last but not least, it is exercise that enables us to have a good body and life.
To sum up, only if we positively do exercise for an hour every day, can we gain a healthy life for a lifetime, so let’s take action right now. Thank you for your listening!
写作训练2
假定你是李华,请你写一份演讲稿,作为毕业生代表,在高考(the College Entrance Examination)前的毕业典礼上发言。
内容包括:
毕业的心情;
收获与感恩;
高考的决心。
范文:
I'm Li Hua and it's a great honour to make a speech on behalf of the graduates.
In a couple of days, we'll say goodbye to our mother school and fight for our future in College Entrance Exam. Frankly speaking, it's really hard for me to put such feelings into exact words. But it has been truly a great journey with you guys, full of laughter, tears and glories. During the three years, our school has provided us with a great study place. We have learned a lot from our dear teachers, not only all kinds of knowledge but also the way to solve problems in life. Without teachers’ training,parents’ support and our own diligence, we couldn't have enjoyed our best time here.
Finally, please accept my heartfelt wishes for our mother school and our success in gaining admission to our ideal university. Thank you for your time.
升级版本:
Dear teachers and fellow students,
It's a great honor for me, on behalf of the graduates, to gain the precious opportunity to deliver this speech on such a special occasion.
How time flies! With the College Entrance Examination around the corner, scarcely could I conceal my feelings of excitement and I am also somewhat sorrowful.Words fail me to convey it accurately. Recalling the over past three years, I have obtained a lot beyond my initial expectations. Not only have I acquired well-round knowledge and skills, but also strengthen the spirit of competition and cooperation. Moreover, without the support of my friends. I couldn't stand the test of challenge.The long-lasting and heartwarming friendship is really an extra bonus, which drove me to carry on. What also affected me is my teacher's encouraging words when it comes to failure. It's a painful moment to bid farewell to this warm and uplifting family With a grateful and determined heart. it’ll not be long before our highlight comes.
升级版本:
I'm strongly convinced that only if we make joint efforts for the examination can we gain a happy ending. Finally success is in the bag. Thanks for your listening.
升级版本:
词语拓展:
beyond my initial expectations 超出我最初的预测
acquire well-round knowledge 获得全方位的知识
bid farewell to sb. / sth. 向... 道别
句式学习:
Words fail me to ... 难以言表
When it comes to sth. / doing ... 当谈到 ...
写作训练3
题目稍微变动,套路依旧不变:
(2021潮纪惠珠四校联考)
如果你是李华,下个月将在高中毕业典礼上代表全体学生发言,请你写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
毕业感谢;
表示感恩;
对大学生活的展望。(共22张PPT)
邀请信
写作指导
邀请信
常见内容
邀请朋友参加聚会等
代表学校邀请老师或不认识的人参加比赛、活动等
写作重点
1.邀请的对象(朋友或者老师、上级)
2.语言(亲近或者客气)
3.要让被邀请人有兴趣来,所以从ta的角度入手
Para. 1 写作目的,简要邀请
Para. 2 具体安排,补充细节
Para. 3 再次邀请,表达祝愿
框架
常用词汇:
1. 邀请 invite sb to do/sw.
2. 代表 on behalf of …
3. 举办 sth. will be held / sth. will take place
4. 目的 with the purpose of doing
5. 讲座 lecture / speech
6. 分享 share sth. with sb.
7. 介绍 introduce sth. to sb.
8. 大厅 hall
9. 开始 start 结束 end
10. 有意义的 meaningful
Some useful phrases
take a deep fancy to sth. 对…感兴趣
have a better understanding of sth. 对…有更好的了解
Never will you regret if you ... Para.3首句
in order to do = aiming to do 为了…(目的)
with the theme of 主题
experience more + n. in person 亲自体验更多的….
be lost in the pleasing atmosphere 沉浸在高兴的氛围里
play an important part in 起到重要的作用
常用句型:
1. I am writing to invite you to do/sw.
2. I wonder if you could come …
3. It’s my great honor to invite you to …
4. I hold the belief that you will benefit a lot from it.
5. We would look forward to your participation in the party.
6. Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make early arrangements.
7. If you need further information, please contact me at … (联系方式) before … (时间)
Para.1
寒暄或者自我介绍
写作背景:知道你对…感兴趣/在某方面是专家
目的:邀请你来参加聚会/当评委等
第1段中不需要有细节性的内容出现
How is everything going with you Knowing that you are deeply fascinated to …, so delighted am I that I’m writing to invite you to participate in …
I’m Li Hua, ...(身份). Knowing that you are expert at …, so honored am I that I’m writing to invite you to be a judge for …
Para.2
总起:以下是详细信息
罗列要点(介绍活动具体内容)
第2段中补充一些细节性内容(目的、结果、原因等)
Here are some further details concerning this activity below. To begin with, as scheduled, … In addition, ... Last but not least, ...
Para.3
再次邀请:希望接受邀请
期待来信
简要即可
In a word, it is such a golden chance for you that you can’t miss it. Therefore, I sincerely hope that you can accept my invitation. Looking forward to your coming.
To sum up, I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. If you could come, please reply me before ____ (时间). Looking forward to your arrival.
General structure 1:
I am Li Hua, a student of ___ . As there will be a _____(活动) held in _____ (地点), I wonder if I have the honor to invite you there with me.
Here are some further details below. First and foremost, ... In addition, … (Besides, …) Last but not least, …
To sum up, I am extremely sure that this ___ will be more fantastic than you can expect. And I would appreciate it if you can accept my invitation. Looking forward to your arrival.
General structure 2:
How is everything going with you Knowing that there will be a _____(活动) held in _____ (地点), so glad am I that I’d like to invite you to join me.
Para. 2
In a word, I would appreciate it if you can accept my invitation. If you can come, please reply me before ____ (时间). Looking forward to your arrival.
1.写作演示
假设你是李华,你的好友Linda对中国传统文化很感兴趣,因此你写信邀请她参加关于孔子和儒学思想的讲座,内容如下:
1. 活动时间:5月20日
2. 活动地点:学校学术报告厅
活动内容:孔子简介、代表作、其影响
由Miss Li主讲
整合关键信息点:
Para 1:
1. 你的好友Linda———寒暄
2. 由于她对中国传统文化有兴趣———你知道
3. 写信邀请她参加关于孔子和儒学思想的讲座
Para 2:
1. 活动时间:on May 20th
活动地点: in the Lecture Hall of my school
活动内容:孔子简介(educator / thinker)
代表作
影响(play an important part in)
Para 3:
诚挚邀请
告知时间
期待回复
Para 1:
1. 你的好友Linda———寒暄
2. 由于她对中国传统文化有兴趣———你知道
3. 写信邀请她参加关于孔子和儒学思想的讲座
How is everything going with you Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture, so delighted am I that I can’t wait to invite you to attend a lecture about Confucius and his thoughts.
Para 2:
1. 活动时间: on May 20th
活动地点: in the Lecture Hall of my school
活动内容: 孔子简介(educator / thinker)
代表作
影响(play an important part in)
Here are some further details below. Above all, the lecture will take place in the Lecture Hall of our school on Jan. 20th. In addition, Miss Li will share with us not only Confucius, who is an excellent educator and a thinker in China, but also one of his representative works called Spring and Autumn Annals. Last but not least, through this lecture, we will have a better understanding of Confucius by learning his great influence and achievements to Chinese history.
To sum up, I am extremely sure that this lecture will attract you very much. Therefore, I sincerely hope that you can accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply.
Para 3:
诚挚邀请
告知时间
期待回复
2.写作训练
写作要求
你是潮实学生会主席李华,想邀请汕头大学任教的外教Miss Smith担任你校即将到来的英语演讲比赛的评委老师,相关信息如下:
时间: 1月15日,下午2点到5点;
地点: 501教室
演讲主题: 人与自然
联系电话: 4487665(共19张PPT)
申请信
写作指导
申请信
一、通常包括3部分内容:
1. 表明写作目的;
2. 补充一些个人条件或者解释申请原因;
3. 希望得到对方的批准。
申请信
二、重点:
1. 能够使用正确的语气;
2. 能给出恰当的理由。
常用句型:
1. I’m writing to apply for this position.
2. I think I am qualified for …
3. I will be much grateful/thankful if you can give
me the chance/ opportunity.
4. If you need to know more about me, please
contact me.
5. I will not let you down if you can give me a
further interview.
6. Thank you for considering my application.
7. I hope I can be accepted as a member of your
(camp/company…)
8. try my best in study / in the job
personality skill
be suitable for (this position)
enrich my school life/ my experience/ knowledge
be familiar with sth.
be fond of / be good at
widen my horizons
have a good knowledge of
have a good command of …/have a gift for …
take part in / join in
easy-going out-going independent kind
communicate with others
get along well with
win … prize in … contest
General structure:
I am Li Hua, a student of … Middle School. Learning that you want … from the (newspaper/ad),so interested am I that I’d like to apply for this (position/job/chance).
Here is my personal information in detail. / I think I am qualified because of the reasons below. First and foremost, ... Additionally, … Meanwhile, … Last but not least, …
All in all, I would appreciate it if you could give me this precious chance. Thank you for reading my letter. Looking forward to your further reply.
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,得知某英语报社招聘兼职记者,你有意应聘,请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐申请信。
1. 表示有兴趣;
2. 说明优势:知识面广,英语水平高,合作精神,
相关经历;
3. 希望得到回复。
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
I am Li Hua, a student of Xin Hua Middle School.
Therefore,so interested am I to apply for this position.
I’ve known that you want several part-time English reporters from the newspaper.
Para. 1
Para. 2
I think I am qualified because of the reasons below.
First of all, as a student, I’ve read a lot, which widens my horizon / enriches my knowledge.
Additionally, I have learnt English for over 8 years, so that I have a good command of English.
Meanwhile, because I am easy-going, I always have a sense of duty and cooperation.
Last but not least, I used to work as a reporter in my school newspaper, so I think I am experienced.
Para. 3
All in all, I would appreciate it if you could give me this precious chance. Thank you for considering my application and I will not let you disappoint. Looking forward to your further reply.
Possible verson:
I am Li Hua, a student of Xin Hua Middle School. I’ve known that you want several part-time English reporters from the newspaper. Therefore,so interested am I to apply for this position.
I think I am qualified because of the reasons below. First of all, as a student, I’ve read a lot, which widens my horizon / enriches my knowledge. Additionally, I have learnt English for over 8 years, so that I have a good command of English. Meanwhile, because I am easy-going, I always have a sense of duty and cooperation. Last but not least,
I used to work as a reporter in my school newspaper, so I think I am experienced.
All in all, I would appreciate it if you could give me this precious chance. Thank you for considering my application and I will not let you disappoint. Looking forward to your further reply.
整合关键信息点:
Para 1:
1. 你校下个月讲组织学生代表团前往英国The Willink School参观交流 + 学校面向全体学生挑选合适人选
2. 有兴趣
3. 写申请
Para 2:
1. 自我介绍(性格、爱好、英语能力)
2. 参加意图(介绍中国优秀传统文化 + 了解英国文化)
Para 3:
希望批准
Para 1:
1. 你校下个月讲组织学生代表团前往英国The Willink School参观交流 + 学校面向全体学生挑选合适人选
2. 有兴趣
3. 写申请
I am Li Hua, a student in our school. I’ve heard that you will choose some suitable students as a group to visit The Willink School next month. Therefore,so interested am I to apply for this chance.
Para 2:
1. 自我介绍(性格、爱好、英语能力)
2. 参加意图(介绍中国优秀传统文化 + 了解英国文化)
Here are some further details. Firstly, as an outgoing and easy-going student, I always get along well with others. Secondly, I have many hobbies, such as reading, travelling and so on. Thirdly, because I have a good command of English, I can express myself fluently. Lastly, I not only want to introduce our great Chinese traditional culture to the British students through this visit, but also have a better understanding of British Culture.
Para 3:
希望批准
All in all, I sincerely hope that you can give me this precious chance for study. Thank you for considering my application. Looking forward to your further reply.
1. 有兴趣+申请
2. 相关个人信息 或 胜任原因
3. 希望批准+回复
写作训练
英国某教育机构寒假期间在伦敦举办国际高中生交流活动(international high school students’ exchange project),现征集参加人员。假定你是高中生李华,对此感兴趣,请根据以下写作要点用英语给活动的负责人写一封申请信。
要点如下:
1. 表示对该活动的兴趣;
2. 简要介绍你具有的能力。
Dear Director,
I have heard that you’re holding the international high school students’ exchange project and I’m writing to apply for it.
I’m Li Hua, a high school student in China, absorbed in English literature and antique landscape. Having studied English for more than 10 years, I do a lot of reading, as well as giving English speeches, which equips me with better spoken English and communicative skills. What’s more, it’s often the case that with the cooperation with my classmates, I do better in my task and acquire skills of getting on well with others. It will contribute if I’m given an opportunity. I’m looking forward to working with students from various backgrounds and build up a bridge between different cultures.
I will appreciate it if you could give me a chance. Eagerly, I’m waiting for your reply.
Li Hua