2014届中考英语（人教版）复习方案：书面表达分类点拨课件（74页）

课件74张PPT。Part3 中考英语书面表达分类点拨　Part 3◆句型归纳一、写人记事类1．At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say
my English teacher is not only kind but also hard－
working.
＝It goes without saying that my English teacher is not
only kind but also hard－working.
2．I like my English teacher so much that I can't help
saying that she is the best person I have ever seen.
3．In life, it doesn't matter who you are, but whether
someone appreciates you for what you are, accepts you
and loves you unconditionally.
4．Without you, I wouldn't be the same one as I am now.Part 35．Friends are the persons who can share happiness and
sorrow with us.
6．Your forever friend gets you through the hard times,
the sad times and the confused times.
7．He not only led us to an appreciation of the English
language and literature, but also aroused our great
interest in exploring something deeper in this field.Part 3
8．There is no doubt that parents have given me a lot
since I was born.
9．I think it's necessary to do something to show my
gratitude.
10．These magic words touched my heart and I started to
love my…
11．I'm deeply moved by what Mike did.
12．I want to learn from him to help the person in need.Part 3假如你是李英，在即将毕业之际，你的英语老师Mr Smith要求你们每人给他写一封英语书信作为纪念，信的内容包括：
1. 你对Mr Smith的整体印象；
2．简述一次经历或一件事；
3．你的感受或愿望；
要求：书信内容不少于80词。◆ 实战演练Part 31．段落和要点
从题目要求和信的主要内容分析，可将此书信分为四段：第1段描述对英语老师的整体印象和表达对老师的感谢之情；第2段简述一次经历或一件事； 第3段表达感受或者愿望；第4段结尾，可以升华自己对老师的感情，进一步表达祝愿或者感谢之情。其中，第1、4段可略写。
2．时态
印象和愿望使用一般现在时，一次经历或者一件事使用一般过去时。【思路点拨】Part 31．For me, not only are you an excellent teacher, but also
a warm－hearted friend.
2．You came at the right time and told me not to give up,
but face it with a fearless heart.
3．After saying this, it was you that helped me practice
the speech over and over again.
4．I have to be honest and say, without your help, I
wouldn't be the same one as I am now.
5．And I am so thankful that I can't help saying this
again “Thank you very much”．
6．I am looking forward to seeing you enjoying teaching in
the school! 【经典句型】Part 3【自我展示】Dear Mr Smith，
How are you? It's a pity that I am leaving this school soon. At the moment I really want to say “Thank you very much”．
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Dear Mr Smith，
How are you? It's a pity that I am leaving this school soon. At the moment I really want to say “Thank you very much”．
For me, not only are you an excellent teacher, but also a warm－hearted friend. Do you remember the time I was facing an English speech competition alone and wanted to give up because of weakness? You came at the right time and told me not to give up, but face it with a fearless heart. After saying this, it was you that helped me practice the speech over and over again. Thanks to your help, I took the first place in the competition. Since then, we have become close friends. Part 3 I have to be honest and say, without your help, I wouldn't be the same one as I am now. And I am so thankful that I can't help saying this again “Thank you very much”．
Although you will no longer teach me, you will be the best teacher and friend in my heart forever.
I am looking forward to seeing you enjoying teaching in the school!
Best wishes，
Li YingPart 31．I am happy/glad to receive/get your letter and I am
sorry to hear that you…
2．Thank you for telling me about your problems/trouble.
3．I know＋题目中所述困难。
4．题目中所述困难，right?
5．提建议句型：
(1)Why not…？意为“为什么不……？”后接动词原形，是省略了主语的省略形式，完整句型为“Why don't you/they/we…？”如：
Why don't you go with me？＝Why not go with me?二、 困难建议类◆ 句型归纳Part 3(2)What about…？意为“……怎么样？”后可接名词、代词或动名词。如：
What about going out for a walk? I'm going to the park.What about you?
(3)…had better 意为“最好”，“还是……好”，后接动词原形。如：
You had better stay at home.
你最好待在家里。Part 3(4)用情态动词提建议
You should finish your homework as soon as possible.
你应该尽快完成作业。
You ought to go to the washroom before the film begins. 电影放映之前，你应该去一下洗手间。
You have to tell your parents before you go out and play. 你出去玩之前必须告诉你的父母。
You must buy a ticket to go into the cinema.
你必须买票进电影院。
(5)If I were you, I'd…意为“如果我是你，我将会……”，为虚拟语气句型。Part 36．The easiest way is to…
7．Doing…is the key to…
8．Don't forget to…
9．These are all my suggestions.
10．I hope my advice can help you.
11．I am sure everything will be fine.
12．I am looking forward to hearing from you again!
13．It's quite common for us. Take me for example, I used
to have the same problems and I went over them.Part 3Dear Sally，
I'm very glad to enter my school. I enjoy the life here except for the school lunch. I prefer hamburgers, ice creams and potato chips, but we are not allowed to order them according to the school rules. I usually have little lunch and I often feel tired and can't follow the teachers in the afternoon classes. What should I do? Do you have any good ideas? Please write to me as soon as possible.
Yours，
Betty◆ 实战演练Part 3建议类作文一般可以分为四个部分：
第一、 表达已收到来信并了解了对方的问题，并表示理解或者同情。
第二、 简述对方的困难(难承上启下)，一般可以在I know之后直接抄写对方来信中所述困难，或者在直接抄写对方来信中所述困难之后加“right？”。假如你叫Sally, 是Betty的笔友，你收到了她的来信。请你给她写一封回信，针对她的问题谈谈你的看法，并给出可行的建议。【思路点拨】Part 3 第三、 提出建议。针对具体问题使用提建议句型提出可操作的、正面的三到四条建议。万能建议：在学校发生的问题和老师谈；在家发生的问题和父母谈；朋友吵架和朋友谈。建议与建议之间要有层次，可使用first, second, third, all in all 或者 to begin with, what's more, besides, in a word 等。
第四、 表达希望你的建议有帮助，或者希望收到对方的来信或者好消息。Part 31．I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in school
lunch. Here is some advice. I hope it will work out
well.
2．Though it is quite common for students to complain
the school lunch, you should not let your feeling
get in your way of being healthy.
3．If I were you, I'd like to have a face－to－face
talk with my teacher.【经典句型】Part 34．At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say
that fast food is not only bad for your health, but
also nutritiously－unbalanced.
5．The reason why your school doesn't allow you to eat
hamburgers is that teachers worry about your health.
6．I am sure things will turn out to be fine.
7．Looking forward to your next letter.
Dear Betty,
I have read your letter.___________________ _______________ ____
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Yours truly，
SallyPart 3【自我展示】One possible version：
Dear Betty，
I have read your letter. I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in school lunch. Here is some advice. I hope it will work out well.
First of all, you'd better try your best to eat more lunch. That will bring you more energy. And you won't feel tired in the afternoon classes. Then, though it is quite common for students to complain the school lunch, you should not let your feeling get in your way of being healthy. Finally, if I were you, I'd like to have a face－to－face talk with my teacher.Part 3 At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say that fast food is not only bad for your health, but also nutritiously－unbalanced. Worst of all, those hamburgers will be the same old hamburgers as you have had a million times before. But the school lunch is healthier. In addition, the reason why your school doesn't allow you to eat hamburgers is that teachers worry about your health.
These are all the things that I want to say. I am sure things will turn out to be fine. Looking forward to your next letter.
Yours truly，
SallyPart 31．…is located in…
2．…lies in the north/south/east/west of…
3．You can take a bus/train/a plane to enjoy…
4．…is famous/well－known for its…
5．If you are interested in…/If you prefer…， you
can…
6．Only if you come to…yourself, can you experience
its charm.
7．For your next vacation, why not consider
visiting…？Part 3三、 地点描写类◆ 句型归纳8．If you come to…， you should never miss…
9．In a word，…is a place worth visiting.
10．We have a beautiful playground with lots of
trees around it.
11．Great changes have taken place since about
thirty years ago.
12．Beijing, the capital of China, is famous for its
long history and splendid culture.
13．Beijing duck is one of the most delicious foods,
which you should never miss.
14．Beijing is a lovely place where the people are
friendly and warm－hearted.Part 3假设你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并谈谈你的感受。
Hi! Liu Jing，
My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself. He says the bus service in Beijing is very good now, and people can go to anywhere by bus. Is he right? Can you tell me something more about it?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
Tony Part 3◆ 实战演练1．要点：开头和结尾已给出，剩下部分重点介绍北京的公
交服务和自己的感受。
2．时态：一般现在时；人称：第三人称、第一人称。
Part 3【思路点拨】【经典句型】1．The bus service in Beijing is so wonderful that I
believe he will have a great time traveling around
Beijing by bus.
2．Besides, special seats are offered on buses. People
do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus
and the tickets are cheap.Part 33．I am sure your grandpa will have a happy time to take
a bus in Beijing!
4．At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and
say taking a bus is wonderful because it is not only
comfortable but also good for the environment.
5．It is a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus
in Beijing.【自我展示】
Hi! Tony，
I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.
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If you have more questions, please feel free to ask me.
Yours，
Liu JingPart 3One possible version：
Hi! Tony，
I am glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.
Your grandpa is right. The bus service in Beijing is so wonderful that I believe he will have a great time traveling around Beijing by bus. First of all, there are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can even take you to a small village. Besides, special seats are offered on buses. People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap. What's more, the drivers and workers on the bus are friendly to everyone. I am sure your grandpa will have a happy time to take a bus in Beijing!Part 3 At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say taking a bus is wonderful because it is not only comfortable but also good for the environment. So it is a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus in Beijing.
If you have more questions, please feel free to ask me.
Yours，
Liu JingPart 31．Rich or poor, young or old, we all have our own
hobbies. So do I. I'm crazy about playing the guitar.
2．In my school, I have got encouragement from my
teachers as well as knowledge.
3．It's our duty to obey the school rules and in return
the rules keep us from dangers and distractions.
4．I will never forget the days that I have spent here.
5．I have learned a lot that way.Part 3四、 校园生活类◆ 句型归纳根据中英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、词数不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已经给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。信中不得出现真实校名及姓名。Part 36．I not only have all kinds of classes, but also take
part in colorful activities after class, such as…
7．My school life is so wonderful that…◆ 实战演练假如你叫李力，是英国中学生大卫的笔友。你收到了他的来信，请你给他写一封回信，回答他的问题，并就这些问题谈谈你的认识和对学校生活的感受。
Hi！Li Li，
My teacher asks me to write a composition about school life in China. I want to know something about it. I hear your teachers are very strict with you. Is that true? How long do you have to stay at school every day? And do you have a lot of homework to do after class? How do you like your school life?
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
DavidPart 3
1．段落：根据内容除去书信开头结尾，建议主要写两个部分：校
园生活(以信中提到问题为主)和自我感受。
2．人称：第一人称。
3．提示：内容要积极向上，特别是对待作业多少这类敏感问题。Part 3【思路点拨】
1．First of all, the teachers are strict with us because
they want to give us a chance to touch our dream.
2．Whatever I do today is for tomorrow.
3．As for my school life, it is my school that gives me a
colorful life.
4．Not only does it provide us with different clubs in
order to set us free from studying but also gives us
self－confidence from the competitions it holds.
5．All in all, I enjoy every bit of my school life,
deeply in my heart.Part 3【经典句型】Part 3【自我展示】 ________________________________________________
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One possible version：
Hi! David,
I am glad to get your letter and I'd like to tell you everything.
First of all, the teachers are strict with us because they want to give us a chance to touch our dream. Second, it takes us more than 9 hours to stay at school and we do have lots of homework. Speaking of this, I have to be honest and say that I do enjoy it because I know whatever I do today is for tomorrow.
Part 3 As for my school life, it is my school that gives me a colorful life. Not only does it provide us with different clubs in order to set us free from studying but also gives us self－confidence from the competitions it holds. What's more, I always enjoy the beautiful flowers in our school because it can light up my soul and tell me what real life is. All in all, I enjoy every bit of my school life, deeply in my heart.

Yours，
Li LiPart 3五、 图表类
1．As is shown in the chart，…
2．The chart shows that about 60% of the students…
3．From the information above, it can be shown/seen
that…
4．Through the above analysis/information…
5．All things considered, we can see that…
6．Every coin has two sides.Part 3◆ 句型归纳6．Every coin has two sides.
7．There are many reasons why I prefer doing…and the
main reason is that…， another reason is that…
8．20%…like/prefer/dislike…， and
40%…like/prefer/dislike…
9．Some…， some…， others…， a few…， several…，
most…
10．We did a survey about…Here are the results.Part 3Part 3某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。
请根据图表1提供的信息描述中学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中每个数据反映的情况写出你的一个看法。
要求：不少于60词。
生词：图表chart ◆ 实战演练建议分四个部分：
第一部分交代图表来源；
第二部分具体介绍图表；
第三部分根据题目要求针对图表2中每个数据反映的情况写出你的一个看法；
第四部分总结全文。Part 3【思路点拨】1．It goes without saying that it is important for
middle school students to have good activities after
class.
2．According to the survey，…
3．Some…， some…， others…
4．Seeing the result, I have to be honest and say…
5．As we all know, nothing is more important than having
a healthy body.Part 3【经典句型】6．As far as I am concerned, fitting as much time as
possible doing exercise can result in my healthy body.
7．In my opinion, whatever you think, no matter what you
like to do, you need to get your daily life balanced.
Only if you do this, can you live a healthy and happy
life.Part 3___________________________________________________
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It goes without saying that it is important for middle school students to have good activities after class. A school did a survey about students' after－class activities last week.
According to the survey, some students spend time doing housework and playing sports, some students play computer games and listen to music in their spare time, others enjoy watching TV much. However, it takes most of their time every day to do their homework.Part 3 Seeing the result, I have to be honest and say students should spend much more time doing exercise. As we all know, nothing is more important than having a healthy body. And sports can give us more chances to breathe the fresh air. As far as I am concerned, fitting as much time as possible doing exercise can result in my healthy body.
In my opinion, whatever you think, no matter what you like to do, you need to get your daily life balanced. Only if you do this, can you live a healthy and happy life.Part 31．It's a good choice to go to Beijing on vacation.
2．Although it's far from here, it's really worth paying
a visit.
3．Being a volunteer is great!
4．Not only do I feel good about helping other people,
but I get to spend time doing what I love to do.
5．It's meaningful to be a volunteer.
6．Not only can we give love to the others, but also we
can make the living place better.Part 3六、 假期计划类(计划、游记)◆ 句型归纳7．Only if everyone is willing to…can this world be a
better place to live in.
8．In my opinion, volunteer work is so great because of
its wonderful influence on people.
9．The more commitments we make, the more satisfied we
will be.
10．The society will be full of love and more and more
wonderful if everyone can do it.
11．In a word, if we give others a hand when they need
help, the world will be better and better.Part 3在即将到来的暑假，学校志愿者协会要招募新成员，请在敬老院和儿童医院中任选其一做志愿者。
要求：
1．去哪个地方做志愿者；
2．说明原因；
3．能做什么事情；
4．对志愿者工作的感受和体会。
选用以下的提示词语，并结合自己的实际适当增加细节。
Places: Children's Hospital/No.5 Old People's Home
Reasons: love kids, like helping, learning, reading,
playing…
Activities: clean, wash, sing, dance, tell stories…Part 3◆ 实战演练建议分四个部分：
第一部分简要叙述自己的选择，任选其一；
第二部分说明具体做法；
第三部分阐述原因和体会；
第四部分发出倡议，升华情感。Part 3【思路点拨】
1．I plan to…
2．The reason why I'd love to volunteer to help the old
people at No.5 Old People's Home is that I think a
home is built with love, and I do hope to make them
feel like being home there.
3．In my opinion, volunteering is not only interesting,
but also makes me feel good about helping others, and
I really enjoy the feeling.
4．As a saying goes “I have two hands. One is for
helping myself, the other is for helping others.”Part 3【经典句型】______________________________________________________
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Dear chairman，
I am Li Hua, a student from Class Five, Grade Three. I know that you want new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them.
I plan to volunteer at No. 5 Old People's Home.
The reason why I'd love to volunteer to help the old people at No.5 Old People's Home is that I think a home is built with love, and I do hope to make them feel like being home there.
Part 3 There are many things that I can do for them, like cleaning the room, washing the dishes and providing them with some interesting shows, because I can not only sing well, but also dance well.
As a saying goes “I have two hands. One is for helping myself, the other is for helping others.” In my opinion, volunteering is not only interesting, but also makes me feel good about helping others, and I really enjoy the feeling. It's so good that I want to start volunteering from now on.Part 31．As the saying goes: “Early to bed and early to rise
make a man healthy, wealthy and wise.”
2．I do believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can
make a big difference.
3．It's also a good idea to encourage my friends and
family members to join me!
4．I think it's a great shame to waste water while
millions are in great need of water.
5．I believe our life will become better and better if we
can do these things.Part 3七、 热点话题类◆ 句型归纳6．It's time for us to raise people's environmental
awareness and take actions.
7．Pollution is one of the most serious environmental
problems in the world.
8．The more exercise you do, the less junk food you eat,
the healthier you will become.
9．Good habits play an important part in keeping healthy.
10．Prevention is better than cure.
11．As long as we look after our health, we can prevent
the H7N9 flu.
12．Only if we pay more attention to our health can we
beat the H7N9 flu and make our life better. Part 3近年来，环境问题日益严重，旱涝灾害频繁出现，日益恶劣的环境问题摆在我们面前。在日常生活中，你通常怎样保护环境？此外，你建议身边的人应该做些什么？大家这样做有什么意义？请你以“We Only Have One Earth”为题写一篇文章。
参考词汇： important, environment, necessary, save, plantPart 3◆ 实战演练建议分三个部分：
第一部分简要描写环境日益恶化的现状；
第二部分详细描写自己在保护环境方面的具体做法，做法和做
法之间要有层次；
第三部分表达自己的观点并倡议大家尽全力解决环境问题。Part 3【思路点拨】1．It is clear that the environment has been destroyed
so much that the society needs a huge “wake－up”call.
2．It is our duty to…
3．As for saving energy and water, I think it is a good
way to…
4．I think every drop of water is valuable.Part 3【经典句型】5．In my opinion, the truth always hurts but the reality
is what it is——Saving the environment can't be
waited any more. I urge all of the people to not only
face but also solve the environmental problems with
their best.
6．Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves.
7．As we all know, we only have one earth. Part 3______________________________________________________
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We Only Have One Earth
Nowadays, there were more and more disasters happening around the world, tsunami, earthquake and drought, for instance. It is clear that the environment has been destroyed so much that the society needs a huge “wake－up ”call. It is our duty to try our best to stop the environment from getting worse.
First of all, some of the small things help make the world cleaner. It's useful to go to school by bus instead of driving cars. Besides, going shopping without plastic bags is able to decrease the “white pollution”．Part 3 As for saving energy and water, I think it is a good way to turn off the light when you leave the room and turn off the water when you don't use it. Also, recycling paper or other recycled materials is easy, and it is important for protecting the environment.
During my 15－year life, I often carry my own bag while going shopping in order to refuse using plastic bags. And although I have very short hair, I turn off the shower when I am washing hair because I think
every drop of water is valuable.
Part 3 In my opinion, the truth always hurts but the reality is what it is—Saving the environment can't be waited any more. I urge all of the people to not only face but also solve the environmental problems with their best.
Finally, I think we are supposed to realize that protecting the environment is protecting ourselves. As we all know, we only have one earth.Part 31．We have a discussion about…
2．Opinions are quite different on this question.
3．Others have different opinions.
4．Every coin has two sides.
5．It's necessary for us to…
6．Students' opinions differ from one to another.
7．However, I don't quite agree with…Part 3八、 正反观点类◆ 句型归纳8．I think doing…and doing…are good ways because they
can help us…
9．Another way to…is that we are supposed to…
10．As long as we can…well, we can…better!
11．Only if…， can we…
12．The suitable ones are best.
13．Nobody can deny that…
14．I don't think teenagers should be allowed to…Part 3人们对于学生网上交友持有不同的意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。
pros:
1．make friends
2．express what you want to say freely
3．be good for…
cons:
1．a waste of time 2．spend much time on line
3．get cheated easily
your opinion:
In my opinion/I think…/I agree that…
注意： 1.词数60以上(开头不计入总词数);
2．短文必须包括所列要点，可根据内容分段表达；
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Part 3◆ 实战演练1．时态： 正反论一般使用一般现在时。
2．写作步骤： 提出问题——阐述不同观点——逐项对比。如果
题目要求说出自己的观点，可以加上自己的观点并说明理由。Part 3【思路点拨】1．Some students think we should…， but others don't
think so.
2．Some students are in favor of making friends on line
because they think we can express what we want to say
freely.
3．However, others have different ideas.
4．The biggest reason why they dislike it is that we
will get cheated easily.
5．We should put our hearts into study, not into making
friends on line.Part 3【经典句型】尽量能用一些以下句型：
Some students think…/Some students are in favor
of…/Some students prefer/would like to…
Others think…/Others are against…/Others
hate/dislike…
However…/Besides…/What's more…
In my opinion…Part 3 Our class have had a discussion about if we should make friends on line. Some students think__ _ _____ __
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Part 3【自我展示】One possible version：
Our class have had a discussion about if we should make friends on line. Some students think we should, but others don't think so.
Some students are in favor of making friends on line because they think we can express what we want to say freely. Besides, they think it is good for our body and mind to communicate with our friends on line.
Part 3 However, others have different ideas. They dislike making friends on line because they think it is a waste of time and we shouldn't spend much time on line. The biggest reason why they dislike it is that we will get cheated easily.
In my opinion, we shouldn't make friends on line. We should put our hearts into study, not into making friends on line. What's more, we may get cheated.
This is just my opinion. What is your opinion?Part 3