天津市河北区
2020-2022届(三年)高三二模英语试题分类汇编
书面表达
天津市河北区2022届高三二模英语试卷
第二节:书面表达(满分25分)
61. 假设你是晨光中学的李津。2022年北京冬奥会圆满结束了,苏翊鸣、谷爱凌等中国青少年选手表现优异,夺得多枚金牌。为号召同学们向优秀的同龄人学习,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Growing up along with Olympic Champions”为主题的英语征文活动。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)奥运冠军的共同点(追求梦想,全力以赴,永不言弃等);
(2)如何做学习或生活中的“冠军”?
注意:
(1)词数不少于100词;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Growing up along with Olympic Champions
Many teenage champions have stood out in the Beijing Winter Olympics.
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天津市河北区2021届高三二模英语试卷
第二节:书面表达(满分25分)
61.
假设你是晨光中学高三3班的李津,高中生活即将结束,在繁忙的学习之余,校 英语社团决定录制毕业纪念视频,邀请你作为学生代表用英语发表毕业感言,请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿:
(1)高中三年的收获,
(2)即将毕业的心情;
(3),你的感谢和决心……
注意:(1)词数100词左右J
(2)可适当增加细节;以使行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Good morning, dear friends My name is Li Jin.
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Thank you.
天津市河北区2020届高三二模英语试卷
第二节:书面表达(满分25分)
61.假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,近日你校英语社团的微信公众号准备在原有两个栏目(学校简介、学习生活)之上,增加一个新栏目。请你从以下三个备选栏目(职业规划、学生风采、校园文化)中挑选一个栏目,给公众号负责人Mr. Zhang写一封邮件进行推荐,并陈述你的理由。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
公众号 Official WeChat 职业规划Career Planning
学校简介 School Profile 学习生活Study Life
学生风采 Our Students 校园文化Campus Culture
Dear Mr. Zhang,
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Yours,
Li Jin
答案:
天津市河北区2022届高三二模英语试卷
【答案】Many teenage champions have stood out in the Beijing Winter Olympics. Their self-made accomplishments are an incredible source of inspiration for anyone who aspires to fulfillment in life.
The stories coming out of the champions have much in common. First, they go all out to be excellent, which is the universal quality that will pay off in the long-term. Besides, faced with one failure after another, they never give up, taking every setback in stride. In the course of the pursuit of our dreams, we also need goal to keep us moving forward as well as the resilience to deal with tress and failure.
A journey of 1,000 miles begins with one step. I have every ground to believe persistence and the longing for excellence will help us teenagers win through.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校英语社团组织的以“Growing up along with Olympic Champions”为主题的英语征文活动投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
突出、杰出:stand out→excelent
放弃:give up→quit
处理:deal with→cope with
坚持:persistence→insistence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, faced with one failure after another, they never give up, taking every setback in stride.
拓展句:Besides, when they are faced with one failure after another, they never give up, taking every setback in stride.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Their self-made accomplishments are an incredible source of inspiration for anyone who aspires to fulfillment in life.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】First, they go all out to be excellent, which is the universal quality that will pay off in the long-term. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及that引导的限制性定语从句)
天津市河北区2021届高三二模英语试卷
One possible version:
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. It's my great honor to share my feelings on graduation. It has been three years since I started my high school. At this moment, I cannot bear to part but I am also eager for my new life in university. During the three years, not only have I made some true friends who can share sorrows and joys with me, but also I have gained various knowledge.
Before leaving, I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to my teachers. It was they who patiently answered our endless questions. Besides, I owe many thanks to my dear classmates. Without their help and encouragement, I couldn't have overcome so many difficulties. Now I've been determined to lead a more meaningful life in university and I will live up to the expectations of my teachers and my parents.
Thank you.
天津市河北区2020届高三二模英语试卷
【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,
Delighted to know a new column will be added in our English Club’s Official WeChat Accounts, I’m writing to offer my recommendation to you.
Among the three columns “Career Planning”, “Our Students” and “Campus Culture”, I would like to choose “Career Planning” to be the one to be added, based on the original two columns “School Profile” and “Study Life”. I know that right now a large number of students still have absolutely no idea about what they truly want to become in the future, so it’s quite urgent and necessary to give students basic understanding of what different kinds of jobs are like and what kinds of qualities are required for different jobs. This may help us gain a better understanding of our strengths and weakness so that we can figure out our goals. To me, it’s much more meaningful than “Our Students” or “Campus Culture”.
I would be most grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,近日你校英语社团的微信公众号准备在原有两个栏目(学校简介、学习生活)之上,增加一个新栏目。请你从以下三个备选栏目(职业规划、学生风采、校园文化)中挑选一个栏目,给公众号负责人Mr. Zhang写一封邮件进行推荐,并陈述你的理由。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):Official WeChat(公众号);Career Planning (职业规划);School Profile(学校简介);Study Life(学习生活)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I know that right now a large number of students still have absolutely no idea about what they truly want to become in the future, so it’s quite urgent and necessary to give students basic understanding of what different kinds of jobs are like and what kinds of qualities are required for different jobs.运用宾语从句;I would be most grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。