2022届广东省部分市高三英语二模试题汇编：读后续写（含答案）
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2022届广东省部分市高三英语二模试题分类汇编
读后续写
2022届广东省佛山市高三普通高中4月教学质量检测二（二模）英语试题 （解析版）
第二节（满分 25 分）
47. 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mai Lin wasn’t doing well enough at school, or at least she wasn’t satisfied with herself. She wished she could do better.
“Let’s review the material we learned in the last unit,” the history teacher said. “Who can tell us what caused the War of 1812 ” Mai Lin sat at her desk, staring ahead. She hoped the teacher wouldn’t call her name. They hadn’t studied the War of 1812 at her old school and she didn’t know the answer.
“Alison ” the teacher asked instead. Oh, perfect, Mai Lin thought. Of course Alison would have the answer. She seemed to have all the answers. Alison was the most popular girl in school – always surrounded by millions of boyfriends, best friends, and others. She was like a brilliant sun.
Mai Lin hadn’t made one or two friends of her own so far. Her old school was small and low-key, but a shy person like Mai Lin had a chance there. This new school, however, seemed as big as an airport to Mai Lin, and it seemed very hard to get around in it. She still got lost sometimes in the school.
Mai Lin frowned (皱眉) as Alison answered the teacher’s question. Alison probably never got lost, Mai Lin thought to herself. You could probably put Alison down in the middle of a desert, and within five minutes she’d be able to tell you the best way to get home.
History class finally ended, and Mai Lin headed for the gym. The class had been playing basketball. Alison, who was as tall and thin and attractive as a tree, was very good at it. Beside her, Mai Lin felt like a very small and foolish ant. Today, however, the gym teacher pointed to a thick rope hanging from the ceiling and said, “Everybody! You’re going to climb this rope today.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hearing the teacher’s words, Mai Lin smiled.
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Mai Lin stepped forward and got close to the rope.
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2022届广东省茂名市高三级第二次综合测试（二模）英语试卷（解析版）
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A holiday in Penang is an annual affair for my family. My parents grew up in Penang and are very fond of Penang food. In December every year, we would drive up to the island to spend three days visiting their favorite food haunts（常去的地方）.
This year, we started our journey up north on a Friday morning. It took us six hours to reach our destination. We always stayed at one of the hotels in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was just a short walk from the hotel entrance and our rooms had a lovely view of the sea. We spent our first evening playing on the beach. After dinner, we returned to our rooms to play games. My parents had a rule for our holidays which was that we were to spend time doing things together. There was to be no TV and no Internet.
The next morning, we went to Bukit Bendera and then spent the rest of the afternoon in town visiting our favorite hawker stalls（小贩摊位）. As we were having tea at a coffee shop，we overheard people talking about an earthquake near Sumatera, an island in Indonesia. We headed back to the hotel and then went to the beach. We took a walk along the beach, picking up seashells along the way. Looking up, I saw the sun shining brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree trembling in the distance as it reflected the sun's rays. It never occurred to us that something awful would take place. Suddenly, I noticed a strange thing. The sea seemed to be leaving from the shore. I called my father to look at the curious occurrence. My father took one look and went pale. We saw a grey line in the distance moving towards the shore. It seemed to grow taller by the second.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.
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We waited a long time before going downstairs.
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2022届广东省深圳市高三第二次调研考试英语试题
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a hot September afternoon, Peter and his friend Isabel were on their way to the library. When they passed by Tubman park, Isabel suggested cutting through it to get to the library. As they entered the park, the sight of the swings （秋千） and the merry-go-round brought back a flood of memories of their childhood spent there. But now everything looked so old, sad, and dirty. Litter lay on the ground next to an overflowing trash bin. There were still young schoolchildren playing there but they had to avoid the trash that littered the playground. A little boy told them that the city took the other trash cans away and the remaining one never got emptied often.
As they headed toward the library, the two high school students wrinkled their forehead. In the library, they encountered Mrs. Evans, their kind-hearted fifth-grade teacher, retired yet still passionate. Mrs. Evans listened as Isabel and Peter eagerly explained what they'd seen. Finally, she recommended them to go to the City Hall to voice their concerns.
The next day, Isabel and Peter went into the building of the City Hall but were met with an impatient officer. They were informed that the city couldn't help with their problem due to a tight budget. Discouraged, they left and turned to Mrs. Evans for help.
Under her guidance, they decided to ask Go Green, a non-profit organization whose goal is to protect the environment, for help. “This group is good at raising money for projects just like yours, ” said Mrs. Evans. She promised to arrange them to present their ideas to Go Green. Hearing this, their face lit up.
Two main tasks remained ahead: researching ways to clean up the park and preparing a convincing presentation. As Isabel was good at researching while Peter always had a talent for speaking, they cooperated quite well. Isabel learned from a science magazine that a new type of trash bin can squeeze the trash down without being emptied often, which saves time, money, and energy. Based on this, Peter practiced his presentation over and over again.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting.
After the meeting, Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news.
2022届广东省湛江市普通高考测试（二）英语试题
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 便之构成一篇完整的短文。
I could tell by her face that she was Very anxious. “Mrs. Lim, is there something
wrong ”I asked as 1 glanced at the wall lock. It was almost I am. Mrs. Lim was one of my neighbors who lived down the street with her old, sick husband. I immediately thought that Mrs. Lim needed help.
“It's my husband. I think he's having a heart attack. Can you help me ”she blurted out(脱口而出). Her eyes filled with tears. With lightning speed, I changed my clothes. Then, I followed Mrs. Lim to her house. The whole house was a little musty. As this was my first visit to the Lims' residence, I had a quick glance around the living room. There were wall panels covered with watercolor landscapes, carvings, and cross-stitch (十字绣) pieces. Along the hallway leading to the kitchen was Mr. Lim, sitting in an armchair. He appeared to be out of breath. With Mrs. Lim's help, I managed to carry him to the porch where their car was parked. When we finally managed to get him inside the car, I drove to the hospital.
We rushed him to the emergency and casualty ward (临时病室). The doctor on duty informed us that Mr. Lim had suffered a mild stroke. Mr. Lim was admitted to the intensive care unit (ICU). Mrs. Lim and I looked after him all night long. It was then that Mrs. Lim asked me to contact her son and convey the news. I never knew that Mr. and Mrs. Lim had children. I could not recall a time when they ever mentioned a. son. Itried to contact the son at the given address, but 1 was told that he had moved to another town with his wife and children. I could see the pain in Mrs. Lim's face as 1 told her the news.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As I was driving home, I told myself that I would call my own parents. Mr. Lim was discharged (准许离开) from the hospital after ten days.
2022届广东省梅州市高三4月总复习质检（二模）英语试题
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I didn't continue college after graduation. I moved out of my family. With little work experience, I served as a waitress. But during the five years' labor, I found myself burning calories running about only for a tip.
I had had enough so I moved to a smaller town hoping to pursue a college degree. I promised I would never serve people again-at least not in such way. It was time to serve myself. Luckily, I received a position as an after-school program tutor at a local middle school, with the added benefit of completing English education degree. I had the opportunity to go big! The kid would need me -a role model and a trustworthy friend, I believed.
But my first day was welcomed by the students' indifference (冷漠). The desks were messy and the whole room smelled of dirty gym socks. My excitement began to die down. I doubted whether the new job was a mistake. The playground activity was deafening while homework time was not much better. After my repeated persistence, they finally turned off the playground mode. But just a few minutes passed when I noticed two kids quarreling in the corner.
I supposed it was another little incident but one kid named Jeremy bothered me. He shouted at me for coming at him. And when I asked them to return to their seats, he slammed (用力摔) his backpack and grew mad as I tried to urge him to take the right attitude. "I don't like you, homework and this after-school program! All you guys do is yell at me. I'm never coming back." He walked out of the classroom, slamming the door.
Naturally, I was so frustrated (挫败的). I wondered why I am here. Most kids disrespected me! I paused to take a deep breath. Then suddenly I thought to myself, "You said you would never serve people again, but you don't understand what these kids really need." At that moment I remembered my middle school life. I always had a poor attitude, never did my schoolwork, repeatedly got into fights, and disrespected my elders.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Realizing I was not different, I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy. __________________________
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At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family life. ________________________________________
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答案：
2022届广东省佛山市高三普通高中4月教学质量检测二（二模）英语试题 （解析版）
【答案】Paragraph 1:
Hearing the teacher’s words, Mai Lin smiled. She knew what was coming. They’d done lots of physical fitness training at her old school and she was quite good at rope climbing. “Who’s first ” the teacher asked. “Alison ” To Mai Lin’s surprise, Alison turned as pale as the moon and shook her head. “She’s scared,” Mai Lin thought. “Perfect Alison was scared.” Suddenly Mai Lin heard her own voice saying, “I’ll do it.” Alison looked up at Mai Lin in great surprise, and all the other classmates seemed surprised, too. The teacher nodded and told Mai Lin to climb.
Paragraph 2:
Mai Lin stepped forward and got close to the rope. She appeared calm but was extremely excited. She climbed the rope very fast and reached the ceiling within what seemed a few seconds, effortlessly. As she reached the top, she glanced down at her fellow students below. Now it was Alison who appeared like a small ant. She saw Alison looking up, eyes wide with admiration. Mai Lin clung to the top of the rope for a moment longer and then headed down to join the class. Once she got on the ground, everybody cheered. Mai Lin knew she would be different from that day on.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了麦琳从一个不起眼的小学校转到一所新的很大的学校，看到优秀同学艾莉森的表现后，感到不自信。一天，体育课上老师要求大家攀爬绳子。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“听到老师的话，麦琳笑了。”可知，第一段可描写麦琳找到了自己擅长的项目并勇敢表现自己。
②由第二段首句内容“麦琳向前迈了一步，靠近了绳子。”可知，第二段可描写成功爬上绳子后，麦琳找回了自信。
2.续写线索：艾莉森感到害怕——麦琳毛遂自荐——成功爬上绳子——麦琳找回自信
3.词汇激活
行为类
①攀登：climb/scale
②向前走：step forward/walk forward
③紧握不放：cling to/hold onto/grasp
情绪类
①害怕的：scared/frightened
②吃惊的：surprised/shocked
【点睛】[高分句型1] She knew what was coming.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As she reached the top, she glanced down at her fellow students below.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
2022届广东省茂名市高三级第二次综合测试（二模）英语试卷（解析版）
【命题理由】历险脱困类是高考读后续写涉及的主题，也是高频考题，如2020年浙江卷高考的拍摄北极熊遇险;2018年的父子骑马迷路;2017年的骑车游玩遇狼脱险等等。此次命题紧贴生活实际和高考命题方向，灵感来源于河南郑州水灾，考生在作答同时，结合社会实际，同时引导考生思考海啸来临时的应对方法，达到德育和美育的目的。
【情节构思】对于历险脱困类题目，前文一般是险
情发生的一个铺垫，一般来说，续写的两段一般会有两种情况∶1. 两段都描写险情，着重从我们怎么应对险情和我们如何脱困进行描写;2. 第一段描写应对及脱困，第二段描写脱困以及感悟。综上所述，我们构思情节一般可以分三步走∶第一步，描写环境的恶劣和我们所面临的情况之凶险;第二步，脱困及转机描写，主要突出在困难中的所见所闻所感所想和我们为此做出的努力;第三步，成功脱困加升华主旨。切记，大部分情况下续写要贴合材料并且符合社会主义核心价值观，同时结合多种描写，这样的读后续写才能在考场上得高分。
【语篇类型】记叙文
【主题语境】人与自我——惊险海啸逃生【文章大意】作者一家喜欢去海滩度假，一次在海边散步时，作者发现了大海的异常，海啸发生了……
【写作指导】根据上文可知，作者一家在进行一年
一度的槟城之旅时，偶然听见有游客在谈论周围有发生地震，并且作者一家在海滩游玩时，发现了海滩的不同于往常之处——树在摇晃、海浪在向岸边翻滚。根据续写第一段开头语可知，本段续写应该围绕作者父亲看到风雨欲袭的场面后，想方设法带领全家人脱险，且结合
第二段的段首语可知，我们跑到了楼上等待海水退去。根据第二段的开头语可知，我们等到了海水退去，接下来应该描述海水退去后旅馆一片狼藉的景象和我们从中的感悟。
One possible version :
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel. He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us to keep climbing. We stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us. It had stopped rising. After some minutes, it began to drop.
We waited a long time before going downstairs. Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecogniz-able hotel gate. There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere. Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to Penang was deeply impressed in my mind.
2022届广东省深圳市高三第二次调研考试英语试题
读后续写：A. 龚露老师原创这篇文章命题新颖，通过讲2个孩子为公园筹集资金购买一种新的垃圾桶，分工协作，成功说服了一个NGO同意为他们公园买新的垃圾桶。这个读后续写集齐了友谊，克服困难，环保等综合方面的话题，还是比较有难度的。
A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting. Heart racing, palms sweating and throat tightening, he dragged his shaky legs onto the stage. But at the thought of the messy Tubman Park, the hard work he and Isabel poured into their presentation as well as Mrs. Evans' encouraging eyes, Peter quickly regained his composure and calmly explained the plight Tubman Park was currently trapped in. Logically and systematically, Peter brought the new trash cans to the judgers' attention and then articulated(说清楚) how they worked, why they were more cost-effective (物有所值的) and worth introducing. His persuasive and inspiring speech won constant approving nods from the panel of judders(评审团).
After the meeting, Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news. Go Green agreed to buy the new trash cans for Tubman Park! Hoping up and down(蹦蹦跳跳) , hardly could the two friends contain their raptures and they simply could not wait to break the good news to Mrs. Evans. On hearing the results, the retired teacher shed(洒下) tears of joy and pride. Never in her life had she witnessed two high school kids achieved such a feat(壮举). Now, equipped with the intelligent and efficient trash cans, Tubman Park returned to its former cleanness, tranquility(宁静) and merriness. Thanks to such kind individuals as Peter, Isabel and Mrs. Evans, Tubman Park, an earlier heaven (天堂) for kids, was finally restored and recreated.
B. 官方范文
A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting. He could feel nothing but his hands shaking and heart pounding. “You’ll be great, Peter,” Isabel encouraged him. Just then, Peter heard his name being announced. It was time to present! Peter took a deep breath and then went on the stage. “Tubman Park needs a new kind of trash can,” Peter explained, pointing to a poster of a trash can. Then Peter explained the working principle of the trash can in detail. The judges nodded as they listened, seeming interested in the project.
After the meeting, Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news. Go Green had agreed to buy new trash cans for the park! Hearing the inspiring news, they both leaped into the air with joy. Peter barely had time to savor the moment before Isabel started sharing the news with Mrs. Evans and showing their gratitude to her. Learning the result, Mrs. Evans smiled through misty eyes. “I know you can do it! Tubman Park is sure to become one that is clean and green again!” Never before had Peter and Isabel been so proud of themselves.
2022届广东省湛江市普通高考测试（二）英语试题
第二节∶参考范文∶
As/was driving home,1 told myself that / would call my own parents. I had not contacted them for almost a month and my conscience bit me. I had always thought that I had so much work to do and couldn’t spare enough time to visit them. They had devoted most of their time to looking after me for a good part of their lives. I was sobbing terribly all the way home, ashamed of my neglect. Maybe they were suffering from the same scene as my neighbors.
Mr. Lim was discharged（准许离开） from the hospital after ten days. He made a speedy recovery. Apart from his unclear speech, he appeared healthy and happy a month after the incident. I didn’t know whether they had contacted with their son, but what I took from the incident helped me a lot. The incident has helped me to know what is important to me. It has also made me realize that when we give a helping hand to those who need our assistance, the world will be a better place to live in.
2022届广东省梅州市高三4月总复习质检（二模）英语试题
Realizing I was not different,I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy. He was wandering aimlessly. I approached and said with encouragement, “Hey, I’m sorry that you feel like being called out. If you don’t understand your homework, I can help.” I also shared with him my experience. Jeremy just stood in silence, staring off blankly at the wall, and eventually I was informed that his parents recently lost jobs and the family was experiencing a lot of frustration. “I’m sorry.” He said quietly.
At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family life. I comforted him that hard times would go, led him back and helped him with his homework. Later, I reported the situation to school, which soon took charity work to help Jeremy. Jeremy was fresh mentally and physically. He studied hard and showed friendliness all the time. I was just glad that I got to be part of something larger that helps to make peoples’ lives better. And I finally understood why I was there - to serve these kids and to help them get through the hard times.
读后续写
2022届广东省佛山市高三普通高中4月教学质量检测二（二模）英语试题 （解析版）
第二节（满分 25 分）
47. 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mai Lin wasn’t doing well enough at school, or at least she wasn’t satisfied with herself. She wished she could do better.
“Let’s review the material we learned in the last unit,” the history teacher said. “Who can tell us what caused the War of 1812 ” Mai Lin sat at her desk, staring ahead. She hoped the teacher wouldn’t call her name. They hadn’t studied the War of 1812 at her old school and she didn’t know the answer.
“Alison ” the teacher asked instead. Oh, perfect, Mai Lin thought. Of course Alison would have the answer. She seemed to have all the answers. Alison was the most popular girl in school – always surrounded by millions of boyfriends, best friends, and others. She was like a brilliant sun.
Mai Lin hadn’t made one or two friends of her own so far. Her old school was small and low-key, but a shy person like Mai Lin had a chance there. This new school, however, seemed as big as an airport to Mai Lin, and it seemed very hard to get around in it. She still got lost sometimes in the school.
Mai Lin frowned (皱眉) as Alison answered the teacher’s question. Alison probably never got lost, Mai Lin thought to herself. You could probably put Alison down in the middle of a desert, and within five minutes she’d be able to tell you the best way to get home.
History class finally ended, and Mai Lin headed for the gym. The class had been playing basketball. Alison, who was as tall and thin and attractive as a tree, was very good at it. Beside her, Mai Lin felt like a very small and foolish ant. Today, however, the gym teacher pointed to a thick rope hanging from the ceiling and said, “Everybody! You’re going to climb this rope today.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hearing the teacher’s words, Mai Lin smiled.
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Mai Lin stepped forward and got close to the rope.
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2022届广东省茂名市高三级第二次综合测试（二模）英语试卷（解析版）
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A holiday in Penang is an annual affair for my family. My parents grew up in Penang and are very fond of Penang food. In December every year, we would drive up to the island to spend three days visiting their favorite food haunts（常去的地方）.
This year, we started our journey up north on a Friday morning. It took us six hours to reach our destination. We always stayed at one of the hotels in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was just a short walk from the hotel entrance and our rooms had a lovely view of the sea. We spent our first evening playing on the beach. After dinner, we returned to our rooms to play games. My parents had a rule for our holidays which was that we were to spend time doing things together. There was to be no TV and no Internet.
The next morning, we went to Bukit Bendera and then spent the rest of the afternoon in town visiting our favorite hawker stalls（小贩摊位）. As we were having tea at a coffee shop，we overheard people talking about an earthquake near Sumatera, an island in Indonesia. We headed back to the hotel and then went to the beach. We took a walk along the beach, picking up seashells along the way. Looking up, I saw the sun shining brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree trembling in the distance as it reflected the sun's rays. It never occurred to us that something awful would take place. Suddenly, I noticed a strange thing. The sea seemed to be leaving from the shore. I called my father to look at the curious occurrence. My father took one look and went pale. We saw a grey line in the distance moving towards the shore. It seemed to grow taller by the second.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.
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We waited a long time before going downstairs.
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2022届广东省深圳市高三第二次调研考试英语试题
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a hot September afternoon, Peter and his friend Isabel were on their way to the library. When they passed by Tubman park, Isabel suggested cutting through it to get to the library. As they entered the park, the sight of the swings （秋千） and the merry-go-round brought back a flood of memories of their childhood spent there. But now everything looked so old, sad, and dirty. Litter lay on the ground next to an overflowing trash bin. There were still young schoolchildren playing there but they had to avoid the trash that littered the playground. A little boy told them that the city took the other trash cans away and the remaining one never got emptied often.
As they headed toward the library, the two high school students wrinkled their forehead. In the library, they encountered Mrs. Evans, their kind-hearted fifth-grade teacher, retired yet still passionate. Mrs. Evans listened as Isabel and Peter eagerly explained what they'd seen. Finally, she recommended them to go to the City Hall to voice their concerns.
The next day, Isabel and Peter went into the building of the City Hall but were met with an impatient officer. They were informed that the city couldn't help with their problem due to a tight budget. Discouraged, they left and turned to Mrs. Evans for help.
Under her guidance, they decided to ask Go Green, a non-profit organization whose goal is to protect the environment, for help. “This group is good at raising money for projects just like yours, ” said Mrs. Evans. She promised to arrange them to present their ideas to Go Green. Hearing this, their face lit up.
Two main tasks remained ahead: researching ways to clean up the park and preparing a convincing presentation. As Isabel was good at researching while Peter always had a talent for speaking, they cooperated quite well. Isabel learned from a science magazine that a new type of trash bin can squeeze the trash down without being emptied often, which saves time, money, and energy. Based on this, Peter practiced his presentation over and over again.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting.
After the meeting, Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news.
2022届广东省湛江市普通高考测试（二）英语试题
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 便之构成一篇完整的短文。
I could tell by her face that she was Very anxious. “Mrs. Lim, is there something
wrong ”I asked as 1 glanced at the wall lock. It was almost I am. Mrs. Lim was one of my neighbors who lived down the street with her old, sick husband. I immediately thought that Mrs. Lim needed help.
“It's my husband. I think he's having a heart attack. Can you help me ”she blurted out(脱口而出). Her eyes filled with tears. With lightning speed, I changed my clothes. Then, I followed Mrs. Lim to her house. The whole house was a little musty. As this was my first visit to the Lims' residence, I had a quick glance around the living room. There were wall panels covered with watercolor landscapes, carvings, and cross-stitch (十字绣) pieces. Along the hallway leading to the kitchen was Mr. Lim, sitting in an armchair. He appeared to be out of breath. With Mrs. Lim's help, I managed to carry him to the porch where their car was parked. When we finally managed to get him inside the car, I drove to the hospital.
We rushed him to the emergency and casualty ward (临时病室). The doctor on duty informed us that Mr. Lim had suffered a mild stroke. Mr. Lim was admitted to the intensive care unit (ICU). Mrs. Lim and I looked after him all night long. It was then that Mrs. Lim asked me to contact her son and convey the news. I never knew that Mr. and Mrs. Lim had children. I could not recall a time when they ever mentioned a. son. Itried to contact the son at the given address, but 1 was told that he had moved to another town with his wife and children. I could see the pain in Mrs. Lim's face as 1 told her the news.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As I was driving home, I told myself that I would call my own parents. Mr. Lim was discharged (准许离开) from the hospital after ten days.
2022届广东省梅州市高三4月总复习质检（二模）英语试题
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I didn't continue college after graduation. I moved out of my family. With little work experience, I served as a waitress. But during the five years' labor, I found myself burning calories running about only for a tip.
I had had enough so I moved to a smaller town hoping to pursue a college degree. I promised I would never serve people again-at least not in such way. It was time to serve myself. Luckily, I received a position as an after-school program tutor at a local middle school, with the added benefit of completing English education degree. I had the opportunity to go big! The kid would need me -a role model and a trustworthy friend, I believed.
But my first day was welcomed by the students' indifference (冷漠). The desks were messy and the whole room smelled of dirty gym socks. My excitement began to die down. I doubted whether the new job was a mistake. The playground activity was deafening while homework time was not much better. After my repeated persistence, they finally turned off the playground mode. But just a few minutes passed when I noticed two kids quarreling in the corner.
I supposed it was another little incident but one kid named Jeremy bothered me. He shouted at me for coming at him. And when I asked them to return to their seats, he slammed (用力摔) his backpack and grew mad as I tried to urge him to take the right attitude. "I don't like you, homework and this after-school program! All you guys do is yell at me. I'm never coming back." He walked out of the classroom, slamming the door.
Naturally, I was so frustrated (挫败的). I wondered why I am here. Most kids disrespected me! I paused to take a deep breath. Then suddenly I thought to myself, "You said you would never serve people again, but you don't understand what these kids really need." At that moment I remembered my middle school life. I always had a poor attitude, never did my schoolwork, repeatedly got into fights, and disrespected my elders.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Realizing I was not different, I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy. __________________________
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At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family life. ________________________________________
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答案：
2022届广东省佛山市高三普通高中4月教学质量检测二（二模）英语试题 （解析版）
【答案】Paragraph 1:
Hearing the teacher’s words, Mai Lin smiled. She knew what was coming. They’d done lots of physical fitness training at her old school and she was quite good at rope climbing. “Who’s first ” the teacher asked. “Alison ” To Mai Lin’s surprise, Alison turned as pale as the moon and shook her head. “She’s scared,” Mai Lin thought. “Perfect Alison was scared.” Suddenly Mai Lin heard her own voice saying, “I’ll do it.” Alison looked up at Mai Lin in great surprise, and all the other classmates seemed surprised, too. The teacher nodded and told Mai Lin to climb.
Paragraph 2:
Mai Lin stepped forward and got close to the rope. She appeared calm but was extremely excited. She climbed the rope very fast and reached the ceiling within what seemed a few seconds, effortlessly. As she reached the top, she glanced down at her fellow students below. Now it was Alison who appeared like a small ant. She saw Alison looking up, eyes wide with admiration. Mai Lin clung to the top of the rope for a moment longer and then headed down to join the class. Once she got on the ground, everybody cheered. Mai Lin knew she would be different from that day on.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了麦琳从一个不起眼的小学校转到一所新的很大的学校，看到优秀同学艾莉森的表现后，感到不自信。一天，体育课上老师要求大家攀爬绳子。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“听到老师的话，麦琳笑了。”可知，第一段可描写麦琳找到了自己擅长的项目并勇敢表现自己。
②由第二段首句内容“麦琳向前迈了一步，靠近了绳子。”可知，第二段可描写成功爬上绳子后，麦琳找回了自信。
2.续写线索：艾莉森感到害怕——麦琳毛遂自荐——成功爬上绳子——麦琳找回自信
3.词汇激活
行为类
①攀登：climb/scale
②向前走：step forward/walk forward
③紧握不放：cling to/hold onto/grasp
情绪类
①害怕的：scared/frightened
②吃惊的：surprised/shocked
【点睛】[高分句型1] She knew what was coming.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As she reached the top, she glanced down at her fellow students below.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
2022届广东省茂名市高三级第二次综合测试（二模）英语试卷（解析版）
【命题理由】历险脱困类是高考读后续写涉及的主题，也是高频考题，如2020年浙江卷高考的拍摄北极熊遇险;2018年的父子骑马迷路;2017年的骑车游玩遇狼脱险等等。此次命题紧贴生活实际和高考命题方向，灵感来源于河南郑州水灾，考生在作答同时，结合社会实际，同时引导考生思考海啸来临时的应对方法，达到德育和美育的目的。
【情节构思】对于历险脱困类题目，前文一般是险
情发生的一个铺垫，一般来说，续写的两段一般会有两种情况∶1. 两段都描写险情，着重从我们怎么应对险情和我们如何脱困进行描写;2. 第一段描写应对及脱困，第二段描写脱困以及感悟。综上所述，我们构思情节一般可以分三步走∶第一步，描写环境的恶劣和我们所面临的情况之凶险;第二步，脱困及转机描写，主要突出在困难中的所见所闻所感所想和我们为此做出的努力;第三步，成功脱困加升华主旨。切记，大部分情况下续写要贴合材料并且符合社会主义核心价值观，同时结合多种描写，这样的读后续写才能在考场上得高分。
【语篇类型】记叙文
【主题语境】人与自我——惊险海啸逃生【文章大意】作者一家喜欢去海滩度假，一次在海边散步时，作者发现了大海的异常，海啸发生了……
【写作指导】根据上文可知，作者一家在进行一年
一度的槟城之旅时，偶然听见有游客在谈论周围有发生地震，并且作者一家在海滩游玩时，发现了海滩的不同于往常之处——树在摇晃、海浪在向岸边翻滚。根据续写第一段开头语可知，本段续写应该围绕作者父亲看到风雨欲袭的场面后，想方设法带领全家人脱险，且结合
第二段的段首语可知，我们跑到了楼上等待海水退去。根据第二段的开头语可知，我们等到了海水退去，接下来应该描述海水退去后旅馆一片狼藉的景象和我们从中的感悟。
One possible version :
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel. He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us to keep climbing. We stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us. It had stopped rising. After some minutes, it began to drop.
We waited a long time before going downstairs. Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecogniz-able hotel gate. There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere. Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to Penang was deeply impressed in my mind.
2022届广东省深圳市高三第二次调研考试英语试题
读后续写：A. 龚露老师原创这篇文章命题新颖，通过讲2个孩子为公园筹集资金购买一种新的垃圾桶，分工协作，成功说服了一个NGO同意为他们公园买新的垃圾桶。这个读后续写集齐了友谊，克服困难，环保等综合方面的话题，还是比较有难度的。
A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting. Heart racing, palms sweating and throat tightening, he dragged his shaky legs onto the stage. But at the thought of the messy Tubman Park, the hard work he and Isabel poured into their presentation as well as Mrs. Evans' encouraging eyes, Peter quickly regained his composure and calmly explained the plight Tubman Park was currently trapped in. Logically and systematically, Peter brought the new trash cans to the judgers' attention and then articulated(说清楚) how they worked, why they were more cost-effective (物有所值的) and worth introducing. His persuasive and inspiring speech won constant approving nods from the panel of judders(评审团).
After the meeting, Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news. Go Green agreed to buy the new trash cans for Tubman Park! Hoping up and down(蹦蹦跳跳) , hardly could the two friends contain their raptures and they simply could not wait to break the good news to Mrs. Evans. On hearing the results, the retired teacher shed(洒下) tears of joy and pride. Never in her life had she witnessed two high school kids achieved such a feat(壮举). Now, equipped with the intelligent and efficient trash cans, Tubman Park returned to its former cleanness, tranquility(宁静) and merriness. Thanks to such kind individuals as Peter, Isabel and Mrs. Evans, Tubman Park, an earlier heaven (天堂) for kids, was finally restored and recreated.
B. 官方范文
A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting. He could feel nothing but his hands shaking and heart pounding. “You’ll be great, Peter,” Isabel encouraged him. Just then, Peter heard his name being announced. It was time to present! Peter took a deep breath and then went on the stage. “Tubman Park needs a new kind of trash can,” Peter explained, pointing to a poster of a trash can. Then Peter explained the working principle of the trash can in detail. The judges nodded as they listened, seeming interested in the project.
After the meeting, Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news. Go Green had agreed to buy new trash cans for the park! Hearing the inspiring news, they both leaped into the air with joy. Peter barely had time to savor the moment before Isabel started sharing the news with Mrs. Evans and showing their gratitude to her. Learning the result, Mrs. Evans smiled through misty eyes. “I know you can do it! Tubman Park is sure to become one that is clean and green again!” Never before had Peter and Isabel been so proud of themselves.
2022届广东省湛江市普通高考测试（二）英语试题
第二节∶参考范文∶
As/was driving home,1 told myself that / would call my own parents. I had not contacted them for almost a month and my conscience bit me. I had always thought that I had so much work to do and couldn’t spare enough time to visit them. They had devoted most of their time to looking after me for a good part of their lives. I was sobbing terribly all the way home, ashamed of my neglect. Maybe they were suffering from the same scene as my neighbors.
Mr. Lim was discharged（准许离开） from the hospital after ten days. He made a speedy recovery. Apart from his unclear speech, he appeared healthy and happy a month after the incident. I didn’t know whether they had contacted with their son, but what I took from the incident helped me a lot. The incident has helped me to know what is important to me. It has also made me realize that when we give a helping hand to those who need our assistance, the world will be a better place to live in.
2022届广东省梅州市高三4月总复习质检（二模）英语试题
Realizing I was not different,I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy. He was wandering aimlessly. I approached and said with encouragement, “Hey, I’m sorry that you feel like being called out. If you don’t understand your homework, I can help.” I also shared with him my experience. Jeremy just stood in silence, staring off blankly at the wall, and eventually I was informed that his parents recently lost jobs and the family was experiencing a lot of frustration. “I’m sorry.” He said quietly.
At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family life. I comforted him that hard times would go, led him back and helped him with his homework. Later, I reported the situation to school, which soon took charity work to help Jeremy. Jeremy was fresh mentally and physically. He studied hard and showed friendliness all the time. I was just glad that I got to be part of something larger that helps to make peoples’ lives better. And I finally understood why I was there - to serve these kids and to help them get through the hard times.