四川省乐山市2020-2022届（三年）高三三诊英语试题汇编：应用文写作(含答案)

四川省乐山市
2020-2022届（三年）高三三诊英语试题分类汇编
应用文写作
四川省乐山市2020届高三三诊英语试卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
52.假定你是李华，你所在的班明天英语课前有一个简短的演讲。请你写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 演讲的主题；
2. 健康生活习惯的重要性；
3. 2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四川省乐山市2021届高三三诊英语试卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
72. 假定你是李华，上周六你校组织参观了野生动物园。请就此给校英语报写一篇征文，内容包括：
1.参观的时间和地点；
2.参观的过程和感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Visit to the Wildlife Park
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四川省乐山市2022届高三三诊英语试卷
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华, 外教 Anna 听说你校要举办中国虎年文化艺术节, 发邮件向你询问有关情况, 请你回复邮件, 内容包括：
1. 时间、地点;
2. 活动内容;
3. 欢迎 Anna参加。
注意∶
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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答案：
四川省乐山市2020届高三三诊英语试卷
【答案】Hello, everyone!
I’m glad to stand here to share with you my ideas about healthy living habits. In my eyes healthy living habits can keep us fit, protect us from getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.
So we may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avoid eating too many snack foods. Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health. When you arrive home from public place, please wash the hands, especially before touching your own eyes, nose or mouth. And when you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.
Wish you all the best. Thank you!
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 演讲的主题；
2. 健康生活习惯的重要性；
3. 2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
share with; healthy living habits; keep sb fit; protect…from; energy; fresh fruits; avoid doing; take exercise; regularly; wash the hands; sneeze; cough; good manner; handkerchief; cover.
第三步：连词成句
I’m glad to stand here to share with you my ideas about healthy living habits.
In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, protect us from getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.
We may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avoid eating too many snack foods.
Taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health.
When you arrive home from public place, please wash the hands, especially before touching your own eyes, nose or mouth.
When you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.
Wish you all the best. Thank you!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者使用了复合句，比如And when you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.这句话运用了it作形式主语， that引导真正的主语从句。此外Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health.使用了动名词做主语。范文里还使用了一些较好的词和词组，如keep sb fit, regularly; protect…from等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
四川省乐山市2021届高三三诊英语试卷
【答案】Last Saturday, my school organized a visit to the wildlife park. I've learnt a lot. First, we went to see the wolves, which were kept outdoor. In case of being hurt, we sat in a jeep. Then we met some lovely deers and squirrels. They were so friendly that we couldn't help feeding and playing with them. After saying good-bye to those lovely things, we watched a wonderful animal performance, applauding and cheering for the funny and great behaviors of the animals. Finally, we visited the display of those endangered animals, realizing that if we don't stop polluting nature and killing the lives, we will lose more.
四川省乐山市2022届高三三诊英语试卷
One Possible Version:
Dear Anna,
Very glad to know that you're interested in the coming culture and art festival for the Chinese year of the tiger. Details are as follows.
The festival themed "tiger" will be open in front of the Academic Hall at 8:00 am on July 7th, lasting three days in the summer time. Festival activities are rich and colorful, including traditional Chinese painting and calligraphy exhibitions. An art teacher with students will draw a big tiger together on the spot. What will particularly attract audiences is that some students dressed as tigers will give wonderful performances.
You're welcome to the festival, from which you will surely get a better understanding of the Chinese tiger culture while enjoying yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua (121 words)