四川省成都市
2020-2022届(三年)高三三诊英语试题分类汇编
应用文写作
四川省成都市2022届高三三诊英语试卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是高三学生李华,你的外国笔友Steve询问你的大学专业选择意向,请根据以下要点给他回一封邮件:
1.感谢对方关心;
2.你的选择及理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Steve,
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Yours,
Li Hua
四川省成都市2021届高三三诊英语试卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
52. 假如你校英语角正在征集与课外活动有关的短文。请根据以下要点介绍令你印象最深刻的一次课外活动。
1. 时间、地点;2. 活动过程;3. 你的感受。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
An Impressive After-school Activity
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四川省成都市2020届高三三诊英语试卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
52.假定你是李华。你之前在网上为你校交换生Jack预定了下周六晚上7:30的川剧演出, 现该演出被宣布取消,请给他写一封邮件,内容要点如下:
1 告知演出取消;
2. 后续事项处理;
3. 其它活动建议
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours
Li Hua
答案:
四川省成都市2022届高三三诊英语试卷
参考答案:
1.Dear Steve,
Thank you for caring about my major option.
With so many majors to choose from, I feel it important and challenging to make a decision. Everything taken into account, I would like to major in medicine at college. The reasons are listed as follows.
First, both my parents are medical workers, who have great influences on me. Besides, I do well in science in my study, which may contribute to the major. What’s more, it is doctors and nurses that heal the wounded and rescue the dying, especially during the pandemic, and I want to be one of them.
I will spare no effort to work for my ideal major and make my dream come true.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是高三学生李华,你的外国笔友Steve询问你的大学专业选择意向,请根据以下要点给他回一封邮件。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
重要的:important→significant
考虑在内:take... into account→take... into consideration
拯救:rescue→save
尤其:especially→particularly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With so many majors to choose from, I feel it important and challenging to make a decision.
拓展句:Because there are so many majors to choose from, I think making decisions is very important and challenging.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]First, both my parents are medical workers, who have great influences on me.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Besides, I do well in science in my study, which may contribute to the major.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
四川省成都市2021届高三三诊英语试卷
【52题答案】
【答案】Last Saturday, our class held a meaningful activity showing our sincere concern for the elderly in the nursing home. The moment we went there, all of us got started immediately. Some of us cleaned the rooms and windows carefully, some chatted with the elderly delightedly, and some even sang beautiful songs. This wonderful and happy moment lasted for more than four hours. At last, we left with full enjoyment and pride, promising more regular visits. Caring for others is a traditional virtue of our nation. If everyone loves others unconditionally, we can surely make our country a better place to live.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文,要求考生介绍令一次令人印象最深刻的课外活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真诚的:sincere→heartfelt
立即:immediately→right away
开心地:delightedly→happily
快乐:enjoyment→joy
2.句式拓展
运用非谓语动词
原句:Some of us cleaned the rooms and windows carefully, some chatted with the elderly delightfully, and some even sang beautiful songs.
拓展句:Some of us cleaned the rooms and windows carefully, some chatting with the elderly delightfully, and some even sang beautiful songs.
【点睛】[高分句型1] At last,we left with full enjoyment and pride, promising more regular visits. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Caring for others is a traditional virtue of our nation. (运用了动名词作主语)
四川省成都市2020届高三三诊英语试卷
【答案】One Possible Version:
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m. next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled. I know you have looked forward to watching it for a long time and it’s really a piece of pitiful news. But the thing is such. Later the opera will give the money back and then I will return it to you. Although the chance to watch the Sichuan Opera Performance has been missed, you still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in. For example, I can bring you to taste the traditional Sichuan hotpot and other tasty foods. And watching pandas is also a good idea.
Wish you an enjoyable experience in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,表达告知朋友预定的川剧演出被取消,并告知后续处理和活动建议。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为现在完成时、一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.告知川剧演出被取消
2.告知后续处理
3.提出活动建议
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be sorry to tell; look forward to; a pitiful news; give the money back; some other interesting and meaningful activities; the traditional Sichuan hotpot; watch pandas
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m. next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled.
2. I know you have looked forward to watching it for a long time and it’s really a pitiful news.
3. Later the opera will give the money back.
4. You still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in.
5. I can bring you to taste the traditional Sichuan hotpot and other tasty foods.
6. And watching pandas is also a good idea.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: although引导的让步状语从句Although the chance to watch the Sichuan Opera Performance has been missed, you still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in. that引导的宾语从句和省略that或者which的定语从句I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m. next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。