重庆市2020-2022届高三学业质量调研抽测(第二次)英语汇编:应用文写作(含答案)

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重庆市2020-2022届(三年)
高三学业质量调研抽测(第二次)英语试题分类汇编
应用文写作
重庆市2022届高三学业质量调研抽测(第二次)英语试题
第一节(满分15分)
46. “英雄航天员”王亚平十几年如一日刻苦训练,从不言弃,终于实现了自己的航天梦。你校《学生英文报》正在组织“向王亚平学习”的英语征文活动,请你向校报投稿。内容包括:
1. 她的优秀品质;
2. 如何向她学习。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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重庆市2021届高三学业质量调研抽测(第二次)英语试题
第一节(满分15分)
假如你是李华。你的新西兰朋友Mark在邮件中提到对中国历史很感兴趣,想请你给他介 绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Mark回信,内容包括:
1,你喜欢的历史人物是难;
2,该历史人物的主要贡献;
3,该历史人物对你的影响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
There are many famous people in Chinese history,
Yours,
Li Hua
重庆市2020届高三学业质量调研抽测(第二次)英语试题
第二节书面表达(满分25分)
52.假定你是李华,将代表你班参加学校英语俱乐部的演讲比赛。请以"What are we studying for "为题写一篇英语演讲稿,内容包括:
1.学习目的因人而异;
2.不同学习目的及原因;
3.你的学习目的及原因。
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear members,
I'm very glad to have the chance to speak on behalf of my class here.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you!
答案:
重庆市2022届高三学业质量调研抽测(第二次)英语试题
【答案】Possible version
The first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII, Wang Yaping deserves our highest respect for her persistence in the decade - long hard training. Never did she say never and ultimately she lived her space dream.
How can we learn from Wang Yaping, especially her perseverance and diligence When failing in exams, we should reflect on our weak points and do countless exercise rather than drown ourselves in sorrow or disappointment. Regarding difficulties we meet in our daily life, we should recover from low spirits and quickly regain calmness as Yaping Wang did. Hard work can pay off.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇说明文。要求考生写一篇关于介绍王亚平优秀品质以及如何向她学习文章参加学校《学生英文报》正在组织“向王亚平学习”的英语征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最终:ultimately→eventually
值得:deserve→be worth
而不是:rather than=instead of
悲伤:sorrow→sadness
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:When failing in exams, we should reflect on our weak points and do countless exercise rather than drown ourselves in sorrow or disappointment.
拓展句:When we are failing in exams, we should reflect on our weak points and do countless exercise instead of drowning ourselves in sorrow or disappointment.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
The first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII, Wang Yaping deserves our highest respect for her persistence in the decade - long hard training.(who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Never did she say never and ultimately she lived her space dream.(否定副词置于句首,使用部分倒装)
重庆市2021届高三学业质量调研抽测(第二次)英语试题
Possible version
Dear Mark,
There are many famous people in Chinese history, among of whom I like Lu Xun best. Lu Xun was a famous writer and fighter during the history who made a great contribution to the Chinese people. First, he wrote varieties of passages to teach people. Then, he got the people to know the world step by step. Finally, his great books taught people a lot.
He showed us that we should learn and master knowledge to protect ourselves. I will remember him and take him as my light in my life.
Yours,
Li Hua
重庆市2020届高三学业质量调研抽测(第二次)英语试题
【答案】Dear members,
I'm very glad to have the chance to speak on behalf of my class here. What are we studying for Different people may have different answers to this question. People may study for money, social status or the illustration of their ancestors.
In fact each learning goal illustrates its own aim of life. For those above, they study mostly for their own benefits. But can they really reach their goals if they study only for themselves
Maybe you'll ask what I am studying for. To tell the truth, I'm studying for "the rise of China".
I want to be a Lu Xun because I want to help those who are well in health but ill in mind to build up a better China.
That's all, Thank you!
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于演讲稿。要求学生以"What are we studying for "为题写一篇英语演讲稿,并注意演讲内容要包含:学习目的因人而异;不同学习目的及原因;你的学习目的及原因等三面方面。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:演讲稿
时态:文章应该为一般现在时
结构:总-分-总。
开头:首先说明自己的演讲主题。
正文:针对演讲的主题分析要说明的问题。
结尾:针对问题发出呼吁、号召、建议、决心等。最后致谢。
要求:演讲内容包含:1.学习目的因人而异;
2.不同学习目的及原因;
3.你的学习目的及原因;
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
on behalf of, answer to the question, social status, learning goal, as is known to all, build up ,however, as far as I am concerned,for one thing,for another, therefore,give a speech, in a word,It’s my great honor…,different opinions,to tell the truth, the aim of…, what I want to stress is that…,that’s all
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm very glad to have the chance to speak on behalf of my class here.
2. What are we studying for
3. Different people may have different answers to this question.
4. In fact each learning goal illustrates its own aim of life.
5. They study mostly for their own benefits.
6. To tell the truth, I'm studying for "the rise of China".
7. I want to be a Lu Xun because I want to help those who are well in health but ill in mind to build up a better China.
8. That's all, Thank you!
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词和表观点词)
1.表观点意见:As is known to all, As far as I am concerned, to tell the truth, for one thing…, for another…, In my opinion,in fact
2.表转折关系: However,but
3.表因果关系:therefore,because
4.表总结关系: That’s all. In a word
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。演讲稿是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一种文体,它是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿,一般由三部分组成称呼语、正文和结束语。正文部分应该针对演讲主题阐述要说明的问题。语言上演讲稿以简单句为主要的表达形式。作者在范文中使用很多简单句来论述观点如“Different people may have different answers to this question.”,“In fact each learning goal illustrates its own aim of life.”等。使用了较为高级的句式,如who引导的定语从句I want to be a Lu Xun because I want to help those who are well in health but ill in mind to build up a better China.if引导的条件状语从句But can they really reach their goals if they study only for themselves 。高级句式的使用彰显了作者对语言的良好驾驭能力。