安徽省蚌埠市2020-2022届高三四模英语试卷汇编
应用文写作专题
安徽省蚌埠市2022届高三四模英语试题
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
52. 为了引领学生积极乐观地面对高考结果,某英语报社将于6月下旬出版一期专刊,现面向广大高中毕业生征文。请你以“My resolution for the future”为题,写一篇短文向报社投稿,内容包括:
1.简要介绍对高考的态度;
2.描述对未来的期许与打算。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
My resolution for the future
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安徽省蚌埠市2021届高三四模英语试题
第二节书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,你校举行了一次慈善义卖活动。你的新西兰朋友Tom对此很感兴趣,他发来 邮件,询问相关情况。请用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括:
1.活动情况;
2.你的感想。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:慈善义卖charity sale
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Dear Tom,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
)
安徽省蚌埠市2020届高三四模英语试题
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
52. 假定你是李华,你校中国功夫俱乐部(Chinese Kung Fu Club)将面向国际学生招收新成员。请你用英语写一篇招募新成员的启事,内容包括:
1.本俱乐部历史;
2.参加本俱乐部的益处;
3.本俱乐部的联系方式(邮箱chinesekungfu@)。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear international students,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考答案:
安徽省蚌埠市2022届高三四模英语试题
【52题答案】
【答案】One possible version:
My resolution for the future
The college entrance examination is very important for everyone in our country, but I don’t think it can decide my future. Therefore, even if I fail in it, I won’t stop pursuing my dream.
I’ll always remain honest, because honesty is a virtue, which can help me live in harmony with others. In addition, whatever I do in the future, I’ll make great efforts to achieve my goals.
Simply put, be honest and hardworking, and not only can I live a colorful and meaningful life but also I can make contributions to my country.
安徽省蚌埠市2021届高三四模英语试题
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
Dear Tom,
I' m pleased to know that you' re interested in the charity sale held in our school. I' m writing to tell you something about it.
The activity was held on March 20, 2021 on the sports ground. Many items of good quality were sold at the charity sale, such as clothes, books and so on. The money raised was donated to poor students for their education.
We Chinese are renowned in the world for our many virtues, one of which is our generosity to those in need. It's our duty to help the poor students. I find it meaningful to organize such a charity sale.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
安徽省蚌埠市2020届高三四模英语试题
【答案】Dear international students,
Welcome to the Chinese Kung Fu Club! The club was set up 3 years ago with the purpose of serving all the students. Many wonderful activities have been organized and arranged in our club.
Participating in our club will benefit you a lot. You can keep fit by performing Kung Fu, during which you can have a chance to appreciate the great charm of Chinese Kung Fu culture. Besides, You can also make a lot of Chinese friends. The training on how to perform Chinese Kung Fu is open and free to all new members.
Anyone who is interested in Chinese Kung Fu is welcome. Please contact us at chinesekungfu@. Look forward to your participation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则中国功夫俱乐部招新启示,面向国际学生招收新成员。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 本俱乐部历史;
2. 参加本俱乐部的益处;
3. 本俱乐部的联系方式(邮箱chinesekungfu@)。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
set up;with the purpose of doing sth.;participate in;have a chance to do sth.;be interested in
第三步:连词成句
1. The club was set up 3 years ago with the purpose of serving all the students.
2. Participating in our club will benefit you a lot.
3. during which you can have a chance to appreciate the great charm of Chinese Kung Fu culture.
4. Anyone who is interested in Chinese Kung Fu is welcome.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,结构严谨,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如Anyone who is interested in Chinese Kung Fu is welcome这句话中用了who引导的限制性定语从句;使用了非常好的短语,如set up,with the purpose of doing sth.,participate in,be interested in等,为文章增色不少;并注意了句子的衔接,如Besides。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。