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Dear Miss Zhou,
I am Jack from Class 10, Grade 9. I have some problems.
I’m a big fan of computer games. I love playing them so much that sometimes I forget when I should stop, then I find it hard to keep awake in class the next day. As a result, it has an influence on my study. I can’t get satisfactory marks in exams. Should I give it up
Also, I’m a bit fat and I can’t run fast, but I really hope to get full marks in the Senior High Entrance Examination of Sports.
Could you offer me some suggestions I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Jack
. He can neither ________ in class nor _________________
in exams because of __________________________.
. He hopes to ___________in the Senior High Entrance
Examination of sports, but he isn’t ____________.
Before writing: Finding out the problems
stay awake
get satisfactory marks
playing computer games too much
get full marks
good at PE
What problems does Jack have
Tips: Most of the time, there aren’t any sentences in the passage that can be used
directly as a reply. We need to summarize and then infer from the material.
A. Lots of homework
D. Few close friends
C. Not enough time for hobbies
B. Unsatisfactory marks
A survey:
E. Not being good at PE
Choose the top three problems that trouble you most
A. Lots of homework
D. Few close friends
C. Not enough time for hobbies
B. Unsatisfactory marks
The result:
E. Not being good at PE
The top three problems that trouble you most
Tips:
Why not …
Why don’t …
What/How about …
Perhaps … should ….
I think … had better…
I suggest that … should…
My suggestion is that … should…
……
Before writing: Thinking of proper suggestions
Sample:
A: …, many students in our class
have problems.
B: Yes, so they are. They say …
Can you offer some suggestions
A: well. First, I think they should …
Second, they … what other
suggestions do you have
B: Er, I think they had better …
A: I hope they think our advice is
worth taking.
My suggestion is that you should eat less and take more exercise. Practise running every day. If you still can’t run fast enough to get full marks, maybe you can swim instead.
I want to know whether you have worked hard enough or not. If not, I suggest that you should work as hard as you can. No pains, no gains. Success always belongs to those who are hard-working. If you have worked hard enough, don’t be upset. Keep trying, and you’ll be successful sooner or later.
I don’t think our homework is too much. You’d better try your best to finish some of it at school. You need to manage your time better. And if you feel sleepy in class, you can use some oil to keep you awake.
Lots of homework:
Not being good at PE:
Unsatisfactory marks:
My suggestions:
Dear Miss Zhou,
I am Jack from Class 10, Grade 9. I have some problems.
I’m a big fan of computer games. I love playing them so much that sometimes I forget when I should stop, then I find it hard to keep awake in class the next day. As a result, it has an influence on my study. I can’t get satisfactory marks in exams. Should I give it up
Also, I’m a bit fat and I can’t run fast, but I really hope to get full marks in the Senior High Entrance Examination of Sports.
Could you offer me some suggestions I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Jack
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While Writing:
Dear Jack,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.
I hope you think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Elsa
You said …
I suggest that you should …
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
Many students of your age have this problem.
Maybe you can …
You also worry about …
Why not …
What about …
Problem 1
Suggestions
Problem 2
Suggestions
Good handwriting
Correct spelling
Proper suggestions
Proper transitional words
and sentences
Correct structures
While Writing:
Good
writing
While Writing:
Dear Jack,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.
I hope you think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Elsa
You said …
I suggest that you should …
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
Many students of your age have this problem.
Maybe you can …
You also worry about …
Why not …
What about …
Problem 1
Suggestions
Problem 2
Suggestions
and you will feel happy, confident and powerful.
Make full use of your time,
work as hard as you can,
get on well with your parents,
Wish you success!
Dear Miss Zhou,
I am Jack from Class 10, Grade 9. I have some problems.
I’m a big fan of computer games. I love playing them so much that sometimes I forget when I should stop, then I find it hard to keep awake in class the next day. As a result, it has an influence on my study. I can’t get satisfactory marks in exams. Should I give it up
Also, I’m a bit fat and not good at PE. I can’t run fast, but I really
hope to get full marks in the Senior High Entrance Examination of Sports.
Could you offer me some suggestions I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Jack
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Useful expressions
Thank you for telling me about your problems.
You are unhappy with…
Many students of our age have this problem.
What/How about…
You also worry about…
You always feel sad/angry/stressed about …
Why don’t you /not…
I hope you think my advice/suggestions is /are worth taking.
Simon在学习和生活中遇到了一些问题。请你根据下面提供的信息,用英文写一篇80词左右的短文。
Simon’s problems:
1. 有时感到孤独,不善于交朋友。
2. 经常玩电脑游戏。
3. 英语成绩不好。
Advice:
1. 积极参加各种活动。常和老师、同学
交流。
2. 不要花太多时间玩电脑游戏,对学习
不利。
3. 认真听课,做笔记……
要求:
包含以上信息,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范。
I need silence when I’m studying. I don’t know where I can find a quiet place.
Why not tell your parents about the noise How about asking your family to turn the TV off while you are studying …
Kitty
Thanks for your valuable suggestions.
You’re welcome.
Millie
Simon
Kitty
Daniel
Amy
Sandy
Can you offer some advice
What are their problems
Millie
Simon
He doesn’t have enough time to do his homework.
She doesn’t get enough sleep.
I suggest that she should plan her day carefully.
I think that she had better do her homework quickly and go
to bed early.
Kitty
It is too noisy at her home. She is almost driven mad
by the noise.
… listen carefully in class
… finish part of the homework at school
… go over lessons first, then do exercises
… communicate with her parents/ neighbours.
… go to the library to study
Daniel
Sandy
Amy
He doesn’t have any close friends. Sometimes, he feels lonely.
Sometimes she gets low marks in exams. She feels sad.
Her parents work all day. They don’t have time for her.
… try to be confident to talk to others.
… not keep the worries to himself.
… learn to share problems with his friends.
… get enough preparations for the exams.
… work harder and don’t be nervous while taking exams.
… have a talk with her parents to let them know she hopes
they can be with her a lot.
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2
3
4
5
1.I often get low marks. I’m always scolded by my parents. I think they
only care about my marks.
2.The homework is too much for me. I have to stay up late to finish it all. As a
result, I can’t stay awake the next day.
3. The math problems are too difficult for me to work out. Though I’ve
tried my best, I still can’t make progress in it.
4. I can’t remember the English words well. I often make spelling mistakes.
5. I’m overweight (too fat). I can’t run very fast. I’m not good at PE,
either. But I really hope to get full marks in the coming senior high
school entrance examination of sports performance.
Our classmates’ problems:
1.I often get low marks. I’m always scolded by my
parents. I think they only care about my marks.
I want to know whether you have worked hard enough or not.
If not, I suggest that you should work as hard as you can.
No pain, no gain.
Success always belongs to those who are hard-working.
If you have worked hard enough, I think you can have a talk with your parents to let them know you’ve tried your best.
I think they won’t blame you any more.
Don’t be upset.
Keep trying.
2.The homework is too much for me. I have to stay up
late to finish it all. As a result, I can’t stay awake
the next day.
I don’t think our homework is too much.
You’d better try your best to finish some of it at school. You need to manage your time better.
And if you feel sleepy in class, you can use some oil to keep you awake.
3. The math problems are too difficult for me to work
out. Though I’ve tried my best, I still can’t make
progress in it.
I think you can ask your friends or teacher for help when you have difficulty working out the math problems. And you should do more exercises.
Don’t lose heart.
Rome wasn’t built in one day.
4. I can’t remember the English words well. I often make
spelling mistakes.
I think you should pay more attention to your pronunciation.
If you can pronounce the words properly, you can surely spell
them correctly.
Form the habit of reading English every day.
Practice makes perfect.
1. I think you can have a talk with your parents to let
them know you hope they can be with you a lot.
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F. Little communication with parents
Please offer some suggestions:
Problem:
2. … send text messages to them.
Suggestions:
3. …Plan a day out at weekends
5. I’m overweight (too fat). I can’t run very fast. I’m
not good at PE, either. But I really hope to get full
marks in the coming senior high school entrance
examination of sports performance.
My suggestion is that you should eat less, especially meat and something sweet.
Take more exercise.
Practise running every day.
If you still can’t run fast enough to get full marks, maybe you can choose to swim.
Good luck to you!
Dear Miss Zhou,
I am Guo Jia Ming from Class 10, Grade 9. I have some problems, and I don’t know how
I should deal with them.
First, I always stay up late to do my homework, so I can’t get enough sleep and I feel tired
that makes my parents very angry.
Second, I love watching American TV series. It takes up too much of my time. And if I begin the first part, I won’t stop watching until the end. I know it will influence my study,
in class the next day. Day after day, I fall behind other classmates. I often get low marks and
but I really like watching them.
Third, I’m a bit fat, and I’m not good at sports. I can’t run fast, but I really want to get full marks in the Senior High Entrance
Examination of Sports.
Could you offer me some suggestions I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Guo Jia Ming
A. Not getting enough sleep.
B. Not having enough time to do homework
C. Too noisy at home
D. Not having any close friends and feeling lonely
E. Getting low marks in exams
F. No communication with parents
A survey:
G. Not good at maths
H. Making spelling mistakes in English tests
I. Not being able to get full marks in PE
Choosing the top three problems that trouble you
Problems:
B. Getting low marks in exams and being blamed by parents
work harder and don’t be
nervous while taking exams.
Suggestions: I suggest that you should get enough preparations for the
exams
I think that you had better
Please offer some suggestions:
Problem:
I want to know whether you have worked hard enough or not. If not, I suggest that you should work as hard as you can. No pain, no gain. Success always belongs to those who are hard-working. If you have worked hard enough, I think you can have a talk with your parents to let them know you’ve tried your best. Don’t be upset. Keep trying.
Dear Miss Zhou,
I am Guo Jia Ming from Class 10, Grade 9. I have some problems, and I don’t know how
I should deal with them.
First, I always stay up late to do my homework, so I can’t get enough sleep and I feel tired
that makes my parents very angry.
Second, I love watching American TV series. It takes up too much of my time. And if I begin the first part, I won’t stop watching until the end. I know it will influence my study,
in class the next day. Day after day, I fall behind other classmates. I often get low marks
and
but I really like watching them.
Third, I’m a bit fat, and I’m not good at sports. I can’t run fast, but I really want to get full marks in the Senior High Entrance
Examination of Sports.
Could you offer me some suggestions I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Guo Jia Ming
A. Not having enough time to do homework and not
getting enough sleep.
C. Too noisy at home
D. Not having any close friends and feeling lonely
B. Getting low marks in exams and being blamed by parents
E. No communication with parents because of their busy
work
The result:
F. Not being good at maths
G. Making spelling mistakes in English tests
H. Not being able to get full marks in PE
The top three problems that trouble you most
1. I think you should pay more attention to your
pronunciation. If you can pronounce the words
properly, you can surely spell them correctly.
2. Form the habit of reading English every day.
3. Practice makes perfect.
…
G. Making spelling mistakes in English tests
Please offer some suggestions:
Problem:
Suggestions:
1. why not communicate with her parents/ neighbours
2. … go to the library
C. Too noisy at home
Please offer some suggestions:
Problem:
…
Suggestions:
1. I think you can ask your friends or teacher for help
when you have difficulty working out the math problems.
2. …do more exercises.
3. Don’t lose heart.
4. Rome wasn’t built in one day.
…
F. Not being good at maths
Please offer some suggestions:
Problem:
Suggestions:
Dear Miss Zhou,
I am Jack from Class 10, Grade 9. I have some problems, and I don’t know how
I should deal with them.
First, I always stay up late to do my homework, so I can’t get enough sleep and I feel tired
that makes my parents very angry.
Second, I love watching American drama series. It takes up too much of my time. And if I begin the first part, I won’t stop watching until the end. I know it will influence my study,
in class the next day. Day after day, I fall behind other classmates. I often get low marks
and
but I really like watching them.
Third, I’m a bit fat, and I’m not good at sports. I can’t run fast, but I really want to get full marks in the Senior High Entrance
Examination of Sports.
Could you offer me some suggestions I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Jack
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Dear Miss Zhou,
I am Jack from Class 10, Grade 9. I have some problems.
I’m a big fan of computer games. I love playing them so much that sometimes I forget when I should stop, then I find it hard to keep awake in class the next day. As a result, it has an influence on my study. I can’t get high marks in exams. Should I give it up
Also, I’m a bit fat and not good at PE. I can’t run fast, but I really
hope to get full marks in the Senior High Entrance Examination of Sports.
Could you offer me some suggestions I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Jack
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Few close friends
Little communication
with parents
· Try to be confident to talk to others.
· Dot keep the worries to yourself.
· Learn to share problems with your friends.
· Have a talk with your parents
· Try to understand each other
· Care about each other
Suggestions:
Problems:
A. Lots of homework
Suggestions: 1.I suggest that you should plan your day carefully.
2.I think that you had better do your homework quickly
and go to bed early.
3. … listen carefully in class
4. … finish part of the homework at school
5. … go over lessons first, then do exercises
Please offer some suggestions:
Problem:
…
B. Unsatisfactory marks
work harder and don’t be
nervous while taking exams.
Suggestions: 1. I suggest that you should get enough preparations for
the exams.
2. I think that you had better
Please offer some suggestions:
Problem:
3. Don’t be upset.
Keep trying.
No pains, no gains.
Success always belongs to those who are hard-working.
C. Not enough time for hobbies
Suggestions: 1.I suggest that you should choose the hobby according
to the time you have
2. … plan your time better
Please offer some suggestions:
Problem:
2. … not keep the worries to himself
1. … try to be confident to talk to others.
D. Few close friends
Please offer some suggestions:
Problem:
Suggestions:
3. …learn to share problems with his friends.
1. My suggestion is that you should eat less.
2. Take more exercise.
3. Practise running every day.
4. If you still can’t run fast enough to get full
marks, maybe you can choose to swim.
Good luck to you!
E. Not being good at PE
Please offer some suggestions:
Problem:
Suggestions:
Lots of homework
· Listen carefully in class
· Finish part of the homework at school
· Go over lessons first, then do exercises
· Plan your day carefully.
· Get enough preparations for the exams.
· Don’t be nervous while taking exams
· Don’t be upset.
· Keep trying.
· Work harder
· No pains, no gains.
· Success always belongs to those who are
hard-working.
Suggestions:
Problems:
Unsatisfactory marks
Not enough time for hobbies
· Manage your time better
· Choose the hobby according to the time you
have
Few close friends
Not being good at PE
· Try to be confident to talk to others.
· Dot keep the worries to yourself.
· Learn to share problems with your friends.
· Eat less and take more exercise.
· Practise running every day
· Try your best
· Practice makes perfect
Suggestions:
Problems: