高考英语专题复习：读后续写迟到的圣诞礼物Continuation Writing 课件(共16张PPT)
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(共16张PPT)
Continuation Writing
—Late Christmas Gift
-Made by Polly
-Made by Polly
-Made by Polly
My family moved from China to a small town in central Georgia, where my dad got a visa for his family and a job. I had just learned English, and from what little I could gather from my friends, Santa Claus would come down one's chimney and put toys in one's stocking on Christmas Eve! What a great country, I thought. After I looked up “stocking” in my Chinese English dictionary, I knew what I had to do and always expected that day.
Finally, the big day came. On that wonderful night，after everyone went to bed, I sneaked 偷偷out of bed, took my longest, cleanest knee sock and attached it to a nail 钉子already on the mantel(壁炉架). Obviously, the previous owners of this house were no strangers to Santa Claus. Gazing at the sock and imagining the delicately精致的 packed gift in it, I couldn't help giggling(咯咯笑). For the first time, I found it hard to fall asleep.
And for the first time, I woke up before everyone else in the early morning. Then I headed straight for the fireplace and was even ready for what to say after seeing the gift. However, what happened next was the least thing I wanted to mention. On the nail was the empty and lonely sock. I was hit by the reality of the empty sock and the biggest lie ever told. I tried my best to hold back my tears but failed. Bursting into tears, I quickly took down the sock and stuffed 塞 it in the back of a drawer.
Every December since then, the topic of Christmas memories would unavoidably come up, and I would amuse my friends with my poor little me story. I had to make it as funny as possible, or else I would cry once again. I didn't know whether any of my audience ever noticed the sparkling tears hidden in my eyes.
How could I know that Santa Claus was just late Nine years ago, on Christmas Eve, I heard a knock on the door when I was watching TV. Unwillingly, I dragged my feet and opened the door.
P1：As a new comer, I expect Christmas.
eager/anticipated
P2：I was fully prepared/ready to receive the gift.
excited/thrilled
P3：I got nothing and was really hurt.
disappointed
heartbroken , poor
P4：I forced a smile when mentioning it with friends.
P5：Santa was coming
unexpectedly.
unexpected/beyond expectation
depressed,______
Main idea & emotions
How do we understand the following sentences
What’s the author’s purpose of mentioning these sentences
“I didn't know whether any of my audience ever noticed the sparkling tears hidden in my eyes.”
Despite hiding tears, the author was sensitive and was hopeful that some friend might notice his unhappiness.
foreshadowing/hint
How could I know that Santa Claus was just late
Although Santa didn’t come down the chimney, he indeed/did come to the author finally.
Para.1 Outside the door stood an old man with a white beard and a red cap, holding a well packed box.
Para.2 Through tear-blurred eyes, I recognized the handwriting on the card.
What did the old man do and say
What was author’s response(do,think,say)
How did the author feel after receiving the gift
Give the box to the author. Blessings.
Open the box and found a card.
Moved and excited/ Memories flashed back/couldn’t even utter a word.
Shed tears/Tears blurred my eyes./ My eyes got misty. I couldn't contain my tears.
What was writing on the card？
Who wrote it Who was the old man
How did the author feel after knowing the truth
What’s the theme of the story
人与社会—人际关系—kindness
Family friends
reasons for being late /blessings
changed mind
Para.1 Outside the door stood an old man with a white beard and a red cap, holding a well packed box.
Para.2 Through tear- blurred eyes, I recognized the handwriting on the card.
draft
送上礼物
感到震惊
不知说啥
打开礼物
发现卡片
泪眼模糊
来自朋友
卡片写着
想法改变
坚信善良
Translate Polish
面带笑容，伸手递给我礼物，并说“给你的圣诞礼物”。
Wearing a radiant/bright smile, the man reached out his hands, passed the box to me and said, “A Christmas gift for you.”
我擦干眼泪，紧抱盒子，感到温暖。 【小情境1】表示"感到...情绪与情感"
I wiped my tears, held the box tightly and felt a surge/flush/wave of warmth.
送上礼物
The man gave the gift to me.
Tip 1 :增添细节（表情，伴随/分解动作）
Tip 2 :升级句式Doing sth, sb did 1,did 2 and did 3.
感到震惊，不知说啥
I was shocked at the unexpected guest and gift.
【小情境6】表示"不知道做..." 4. Sb was at a loss what to do.手足无措
Shocked at the unexpected guest and gift, I was at a loss what to say.
Shocked at the unexpected guest and gift, I could hardly utter a word.
We was rather exhausted but still rewarding.
We arrived home safe and sound.
Exhausted but rewarding, we arrived home safe and sound.
Tip3主语补足语(说明主语伴随的情感状态)
他从视野中消失的那一刻，我解开了丝带，心怦怦直跳。
【小情境10】表示"一..., 就..." The moment/instant 从句, ...
【小情境2】表示"(因为紧张、害怕)心跳"
1. (thumping/pounding/beating/thudding)(wildly/loudly/hard)
感到心在胸中砰砰直跳
The moment he disappeared from view, I untied the ribbon with my heart thumping wildly.
打开礼物
Tip 4 :增添细节（动作具体化/时间状语/心理情感描写）
看到卡片(盒子里面有礼物，上面附着一张卡片)
Tip5: 全部倒装：地点adv./状语+谓语+主语
A teddy bear I had longed for with an attached card lay inside the box .
Inside the box lay a teddy bear I had longed for with an attached card.
（2020 浙江高考续写 Poppy）
一个金色毛茸茸的东西从箱子跳出来。
Then out of the box jumped a small golden woolen thing.
在山顶上有一座古塔。
On the top of the mountain stands an old tower.
【小情境3】表示"流泪"1. Tears blurred one's eyes. 2. One's eyes got misty.
__________, tears blurred my eyes/ my eyes got misty/
I couldn't contain my tears.
来自朋友
【小情境12】表示"转折"2. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句
______________, it turned out that it was a friend of mine and I later discovered that the man was her father.
____________________, she was one of the audience of my sad story.
Tip 6: 每句话前尽量都加过渡语
To my surprise
Apparently/Obviously,
Once again
【小情境12】表示"转折" but/instead
Christmas memories of this year wouldn't be a bitter joke. Instead, it was a miracle which witnessed a healed heart. So now I believe Santa Claus is real.
改变想法
This Santa Claus doesn't come down our chimneys , but I firmly believe that he does live inside good and thoughtful people who really listen to friends, and then plan deliberate acts of kindness.
坚信善良
Tip 7:联系伏笔，强调突出主题
Standard process in continuation writing
Step 1 : Read for main idea (each paragraph) & Emotion
Step 2 :Find the foreshadowing/hint
(theme)
Step 3 : Fix the key words in two given sentences
Step 4 :Ask 3-4 questions in each paragraph
Step 5 :write the possible plot in simple sentences
Step 6 :polish the writing
Tip 1 :增添细节（表情，伴随/分解动作）
Tip 2 :升级句式Doing sth, sb did 1,did 2 and did 3.
Tip 3 :主语补足语(说明主语伴随的情感状态)
Tip 4 :增添细节（动作具体化/时间状语/心理情感描写）
Tip5: 全部倒装：地点adv./状语+谓语+主语
Tip 6: 每句话前尽量都加过渡语
Tip 7:联系伏笔，强调突出主题(强调句，do强调谓语)
Summary of skills in continuation writing
Possible version:
Outside the door stood an old man with a white beard and a red cap, holding a well- packed box. Wearing a radiant smile, the man reached out his hands, passed the box to me and said, “A Christmas gift for you.” Shocked at the unexpected guest and gift, I was at a loss what to say. The moment he disappeared in the distance, I untied the ribbon with my heart thumping wildly. Inside the box lay a teddy bear I had longed for with an attached card. Once again, I couldn't contain my tears.
Through tear -blurred eyes, I recognized the handwriting on the card. It was a friend of mine and I later discovered that the man was her father. Apparently, she was one of the audience of my sad story. The card read, “Sorry, I'm late. Merry Christmas.” I wiped my tears, held the box tightly and felt a surge of warmth. Christmas memories of this year wouldn't be a bitter joke. Instead, it was a miracle which witnessed a healed heart. So now I believe Santa Claus is real. This Santa Claus doesn't come down our chimneys , but I firmly believe that he does live inside good and thoughtful people who really listen to friends, and then plan deliberate acts of kindness.
原文表达赏析积累
动作描写：
sneaked out of bed
gaze at the sock
couldn't help giggling(咯咯笑)
found it hard to fall asleep
headed straight for the fireplace
was even ready for what to say
was hit by the reality
tried my best to hold back my tears but failed
burst into tears
quickly took down the sock
stuffed it in the back of a drawer
the topic of Christmas memories would unavoidably come up
Unwillingly, I dragged my feet
sneak: I managed to sneak in through the back door while she wasn't looking.
gaze at：It is always a wonderful time to gaze at the morning beauty of nature.
学生习作评析
Reading plots
climax(高潮）
ending
KNOWN
UNKNOWN
Continuation Writing
—Late Christmas Gift
-Made by Polly
-Made by Polly
-Made by Polly
My family moved from China to a small town in central Georgia, where my dad got a visa for his family and a job. I had just learned English, and from what little I could gather from my friends, Santa Claus would come down one's chimney and put toys in one's stocking on Christmas Eve! What a great country, I thought. After I looked up “stocking” in my Chinese English dictionary, I knew what I had to do and always expected that day.
Finally, the big day came. On that wonderful night，after everyone went to bed, I sneaked 偷偷out of bed, took my longest, cleanest knee sock and attached it to a nail 钉子already on the mantel(壁炉架). Obviously, the previous owners of this house were no strangers to Santa Claus. Gazing at the sock and imagining the delicately精致的 packed gift in it, I couldn't help giggling(咯咯笑). For the first time, I found it hard to fall asleep.
And for the first time, I woke up before everyone else in the early morning. Then I headed straight for the fireplace and was even ready for what to say after seeing the gift. However, what happened next was the least thing I wanted to mention. On the nail was the empty and lonely sock. I was hit by the reality of the empty sock and the biggest lie ever told. I tried my best to hold back my tears but failed. Bursting into tears, I quickly took down the sock and stuffed 塞 it in the back of a drawer.
Every December since then, the topic of Christmas memories would unavoidably come up, and I would amuse my friends with my poor little me story. I had to make it as funny as possible, or else I would cry once again. I didn't know whether any of my audience ever noticed the sparkling tears hidden in my eyes.
How could I know that Santa Claus was just late Nine years ago, on Christmas Eve, I heard a knock on the door when I was watching TV. Unwillingly, I dragged my feet and opened the door.
P1：As a new comer, I expect Christmas.
eager/anticipated
P2：I was fully prepared/ready to receive the gift.
excited/thrilled
P3：I got nothing and was really hurt.
disappointed
heartbroken , poor
P4：I forced a smile when mentioning it with friends.
P5：Santa was coming
unexpectedly.
unexpected/beyond expectation
depressed,______
Main idea & emotions
How do we understand the following sentences
What’s the author’s purpose of mentioning these sentences
“I didn't know whether any of my audience ever noticed the sparkling tears hidden in my eyes.”
Despite hiding tears, the author was sensitive and was hopeful that some friend might notice his unhappiness.
foreshadowing/hint
How could I know that Santa Claus was just late
Although Santa didn’t come down the chimney, he indeed/did come to the author finally.
Para.1 Outside the door stood an old man with a white beard and a red cap, holding a well packed box.
Para.2 Through tear-blurred eyes, I recognized the handwriting on the card.
What did the old man do and say
What was author’s response(do,think,say)
How did the author feel after receiving the gift
Give the box to the author. Blessings.
Open the box and found a card.
Moved and excited/ Memories flashed back/couldn’t even utter a word.
Shed tears/Tears blurred my eyes./ My eyes got misty. I couldn't contain my tears.
What was writing on the card？
Who wrote it Who was the old man
How did the author feel after knowing the truth
What’s the theme of the story
人与社会—人际关系—kindness
Family friends
reasons for being late /blessings
changed mind
Para.1 Outside the door stood an old man with a white beard and a red cap, holding a well packed box.
Para.2 Through tear- blurred eyes, I recognized the handwriting on the card.
draft
送上礼物
感到震惊
不知说啥
打开礼物
发现卡片
泪眼模糊
来自朋友
卡片写着
想法改变
坚信善良
Translate Polish
面带笑容，伸手递给我礼物，并说“给你的圣诞礼物”。
Wearing a radiant/bright smile, the man reached out his hands, passed the box to me and said, “A Christmas gift for you.”
我擦干眼泪，紧抱盒子，感到温暖。 【小情境1】表示"感到...情绪与情感"
I wiped my tears, held the box tightly and felt a surge/flush/wave of warmth.
送上礼物
The man gave the gift to me.
Tip 1 :增添细节（表情，伴随/分解动作）
Tip 2 :升级句式Doing sth, sb did 1,did 2 and did 3.
感到震惊，不知说啥
I was shocked at the unexpected guest and gift.
【小情境6】表示"不知道做..." 4. Sb was at a loss what to do.手足无措
Shocked at the unexpected guest and gift, I was at a loss what to say.
Shocked at the unexpected guest and gift, I could hardly utter a word.
We was rather exhausted but still rewarding.
We arrived home safe and sound.
Exhausted but rewarding, we arrived home safe and sound.
Tip3主语补足语(说明主语伴随的情感状态)
他从视野中消失的那一刻，我解开了丝带，心怦怦直跳。
【小情境10】表示"一..., 就..." The moment/instant 从句, ...
【小情境2】表示"(因为紧张、害怕)心跳"
1. (thumping/pounding/beating/thudding)(wildly/loudly/hard)
感到心在胸中砰砰直跳
The moment he disappeared from view, I untied the ribbon with my heart thumping wildly.
打开礼物
Tip 4 :增添细节（动作具体化/时间状语/心理情感描写）
看到卡片(盒子里面有礼物，上面附着一张卡片)
Tip5: 全部倒装：地点adv./状语+谓语+主语
A teddy bear I had longed for with an attached card lay inside the box .
Inside the box lay a teddy bear I had longed for with an attached card.
（2020 浙江高考续写 Poppy）
一个金色毛茸茸的东西从箱子跳出来。
Then out of the box jumped a small golden woolen thing.
在山顶上有一座古塔。
On the top of the mountain stands an old tower.
【小情境3】表示"流泪"1. Tears blurred one's eyes. 2. One's eyes got misty.
__________, tears blurred my eyes/ my eyes got misty/
I couldn't contain my tears.
来自朋友
【小情境12】表示"转折"2. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句
______________, it turned out that it was a friend of mine and I later discovered that the man was her father.
____________________, she was one of the audience of my sad story.
Tip 6: 每句话前尽量都加过渡语
To my surprise
Apparently/Obviously,
Once again
【小情境12】表示"转折" but/instead
Christmas memories of this year wouldn't be a bitter joke. Instead, it was a miracle which witnessed a healed heart. So now I believe Santa Claus is real.
改变想法
This Santa Claus doesn't come down our chimneys , but I firmly believe that he does live inside good and thoughtful people who really listen to friends, and then plan deliberate acts of kindness.
坚信善良
Tip 7:联系伏笔，强调突出主题
Standard process in continuation writing
Step 1 : Read for main idea (each paragraph) & Emotion
Step 2 :Find the foreshadowing/hint
(theme)
Step 3 : Fix the key words in two given sentences
Step 4 :Ask 3-4 questions in each paragraph
Step 5 :write the possible plot in simple sentences
Step 6 :polish the writing
Tip 1 :增添细节（表情，伴随/分解动作）
Tip 2 :升级句式Doing sth, sb did 1,did 2 and did 3.
Tip 3 :主语补足语(说明主语伴随的情感状态)
Tip 4 :增添细节（动作具体化/时间状语/心理情感描写）
Tip5: 全部倒装：地点adv./状语+谓语+主语
Tip 6: 每句话前尽量都加过渡语
Tip 7:联系伏笔，强调突出主题(强调句，do强调谓语)
Summary of skills in continuation writing
Possible version:
Outside the door stood an old man with a white beard and a red cap, holding a well- packed box. Wearing a radiant smile, the man reached out his hands, passed the box to me and said, “A Christmas gift for you.” Shocked at the unexpected guest and gift, I was at a loss what to say. The moment he disappeared in the distance, I untied the ribbon with my heart thumping wildly. Inside the box lay a teddy bear I had longed for with an attached card. Once again, I couldn't contain my tears.
Through tear -blurred eyes, I recognized the handwriting on the card. It was a friend of mine and I later discovered that the man was her father. Apparently, she was one of the audience of my sad story. The card read, “Sorry, I'm late. Merry Christmas.” I wiped my tears, held the box tightly and felt a surge of warmth. Christmas memories of this year wouldn't be a bitter joke. Instead, it was a miracle which witnessed a healed heart. So now I believe Santa Claus is real. This Santa Claus doesn't come down our chimneys , but I firmly believe that he does live inside good and thoughtful people who really listen to friends, and then plan deliberate acts of kindness.
原文表达赏析积累
动作描写：
sneaked out of bed
gaze at the sock
couldn't help giggling(咯咯笑)
found it hard to fall asleep
headed straight for the fireplace
was even ready for what to say
was hit by the reality
tried my best to hold back my tears but failed
burst into tears
quickly took down the sock
stuffed it in the back of a drawer
the topic of Christmas memories would unavoidably come up
Unwillingly, I dragged my feet
sneak: I managed to sneak in through the back door while she wasn't looking.
gaze at：It is always a wonderful time to gaze at the morning beauty of nature.
学生习作评析
Reading plots
climax(高潮）
ending
KNOWN
UNKNOWN