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Unit 8 Our dreams
(Writing time)
译林版 六年级下
译林版《英语》六下Unit8
My dream
(Writing time)
A tradition
Write down your dream, keep it at school.
help sick people
Let’s guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
wear a white coat
busy and careful
doctor
keep people safe
Let’s guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
wear uniforms
helpful and brave
policeman
work in the kitchen
Let’s guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
wear a tall white hat
make nice food for people
cook
care about children
Let’s guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
give many lessons
kind and patient
teacher
save people from fire
Let’s guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
wear uniforms
strong and brave
fireman
fly in the sky
Let’s guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
wear uniforms
healthy and cool
pilot
Let’s guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
work at home
read and think a lot
write stories for people
writer
Mary wants to write down her dream,
but her arm is broken.
Let’s ask!
My dream
根据话题 my dream, 向Mary提问。
A survey about ’s dream
Q1.What’s your dream
A survey about ’s dream
Q2.Why do you want to be...
A survey about ’s dream
Q3.What will you do to make your dream come true
Compare and find
对照范文，找出不同之处，发现使
习作更为合理的方法。
My dream
I have a dream.
I want to be a great doctor like Zhong Nanshan because I want to help sick people. I also want to have a good life , so my family will be happy and proud.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard and go to college. Doctors work hard, so I will do sports and keep healthy.
Being a doctor is not easy, but I will never give up.
Think and discuss
小组讨论：一篇优秀习作的标准。
What makes a good writing about My dream
Make and talk
先根据清单制作Y型图，再组内交流my dream。
可使用以下句型交流哦！
I have...
I want to be...because/so...
To ..., I will...
Read and write
根据Y型图，写一写自己的梦想。
My dream
beginning
why
how
ending
I have a dream.
I want to be a great doctor like Zhong Nanshan
because I want to help sick people. I also want to
have a good life, so my family will be happy and proud.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard and go to college. Doctors work hard, so I will do sports and keep healthy.
Being a doctor is not easy, but I will never give up.
what
Correct and grade
根据评分表，同桌交换批改并评定等级。
Writing Score Sheet (评分表)
序号 评价标准 符合加
1 Covering what,why & how(覆盖所有要点)
2 Making a good Y map (绘制合理的Y型图)
3 Explaining with because, so & to (运用说理式表达)
4 Giving an example (举例子)
5 Using discriptive words(使用修饰词)
6 Adding a beginning & an ending (添加开头结尾)
7 Writing carefully and correctly(认真规范地书写)
等级 A：6~7 ； B：3~5 ； C：3 以下
等 级_______________ 批阅人________________
Give an example
I want to be a popular writer
____________.
给出具体的例子
I want to be a famous scientist
____________.
Give an example
给出具体的例子
Explain with BECAUSE,SO &TO
补充原因
Some students are very naughty(调皮的)，
so I will______________________.
To________________________，
I will learn from famous teachers .
补充对策
补充目的
I want to be a teacher because ________________________.
Explain with BECAUSE,SO &TO
补充原因
I want to be a cool policeman
because________________.
Bad people are very dangerous(危险的)， so I will______________________.
To_________________________，
I will study hard and go to police school.
补充对策
补充目的
仔细观察Y型图，分析习作与范文中梦想与理由、努力方向的匹配情况。
习作
范文
Dream
great doctor
great teacher
famous
basketball
player
popular
actor
great writer
great writer
walk in space
change the
world
bring people
nice music
make people
healthy
make country
strong
Compare and find
对照范文，找出不同之处，发现写出优秀习作的方法。
My dream
I want to be a great doctor like Zhong nanshan.
Because I want to help sick people. I also want to make big monkey so my family will be happy.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard and go to college. I will also do sports because it’s a hard work.
This is my dream. I will never give up.
help sick people
have a easy life
eat a lot and get strong
study hard and go to college
doctor
Why？
How？
What？
Why？
How？
What？
I want to be a________teacher.
kind
popular
patient 耐心的
caring 有爱心的
Use discriptive words
加入修饰性词语
Use discriptive words
I want to be a______policeman.
加入修饰性词语
brave
cool
helpful 乐于助人的
I will read many books.
I will have many lessons.
I will read many books and have many lessons.
and
Combine sentences
用and合并下列句子
Combine sentences
Being a pianist is not easy.
I will never give up.
but
Being a pianist is not easy, but I will never give up.
用but合并下列句子
Think and discuss
小组讨论：一篇优秀习作的标准。
What makes a good writing about My dream
Combining sentences (合并句子)
Explaining why (阐释原因)
Taking an example (举例子)
Using discriptive words(使用修饰词)
Adding an ending (添加结尾)
Covering what,why and how(覆盖所有要点)
Writing carefully and correctly(认真规范地书写)
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
My dream
I have a dream.
I want to be a great doctor like Zhong nanshan because I want to help sick people. I also want to have a good life so my family will be happy and proud.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard and go to college. Doctors work hard, so I will do sports and keep healthy.
Being a doctor is not easy, but I will never give up.
Writing Score Sheet (评分表)
序号 评价标准 符合加
1 Covering what,why & how(覆盖所有要点)
2 Making a good Y map (绘制合理的Y型图)
3 Expaining with because, so & to (运用说理式表达)
4 Taking an example (举例子)
5 Using discriptive words(使用修饰词)
6 Adding a beginning & ending (添加开头结尾)
7 Writing carefully and correctly(认真规范地书写)
等级 A：6~7 ； B：3~5 ； C：3 以下
等 级_______________ 批阅人________________
Taking an example
Using discriptive words
Adding a beginning & an ending
Covering what,why & how
Writing carefully and correctly
Expaining with because, so & to
Making a good Y map
Lawyers are clever and careful,
so I will___________________.
Reason things out
补充对策
Reason things out
补充原因
I want to be a kind teacher because ____________________________.
To ______________________,
I will keep young and beautiful.
补充目的
Explain with TO
My dream
I have a dream.
I want to be a great doctor like Zhong Nanshan because I want to help sick people. I also want to have a good life, so my family will be happy and proud.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard and go to college. Doctors work hard, so I will do sports and keep healthy.
Being a doctor is not easy, but I will never give up.
A tradition
Write down your dream, keep it at school.
谢谢
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