人教版七年级下册Unit6 I'm watching TV. Section B 3a-3b Self check 课件(共23张PPT)

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Unit 6
I'm watching TV.
warming up
Question
在有限的时间内，如何写出满意的作文？
Share your good ideas
抄
改
连
扩
抓
审
书面
表达
书面表达六步法
1.“审”-审题
2.“抓”-抓要点
3.“扩”-扩展成句
4.“连”-连句成文
5.“改”-查错改错
6.“抄”-抄写
现在是晚上8:00，根据Mary提供的信息，请描述一下Mary一家的活动情况。
要 求：
1.运用现在进行时。
2.包括所有内容要点，可以适当发挥。
3.语句通顺、语法正确，60个词左右。
grandfather watch TV
father read a newspaper
mother do the dishes
Mary do her homework
Tom play computer games
审
1. 确定文体.
短文、书信、日记、便条、通知、 e-mail …
2. 确定人称.
第一人称、第二人称、第三人称…
3. 确定时态.
一般现在时、一般过去时、现在进行时…
审题
grandfather watch TV
father read a newspaper
mother do the dishes
Mary do her homework
Tom play computer games
现在是晚上8:00，根据Mary提供的信息，请描述一下Mary一家的活动情况。
要 求：1.运用现在进行时。2.包括所有内容要点，可以适当发挥。3.语句通顺、语法正确，60个词左右。
抓
watch TV
read a newspaper
do the dishes
do her homework
play computer games
要点
扩
watch TV
read a newspaper
do the dishes
do her homework
play computer games
主语+谓语+...
简单句
别忘记加标点哦！
注意动词的变化
扩句
Which one can you write
1.Mary is doing her homework.
2.Mary is doing her homework in her room.
3.Mary is doing her homework in her room.She is a good girl.
注意动词的变化，减少语法错误。
加上地点状语，表达更清楚 。
适当增加内容，句子更丰富。
Make sentences with the key words.
扩
用自己最熟悉的单词，最有把握的句型来造句。
1. grandfather---watch TV
2. father---read a newspaper
3. mother---do the dishes
4. Mary---do her homework
5. Tom---play computer games
PK Time!
1. watch TV
2. read a newspaper
3. do the dishes
4. do her homework
游戏时间，思维扩张
5. play computer games
用“总分总”的结构
Body
Ending
Concluding sentence 结论句
Supporting sentences支持句
Topic sentence 主题句
Beginning
连
成篇
1 表示罗列增加
first, second, third...
on the one hand, on the other hand,
what’s more, besides,
2 表示时间顺序
first,then, next, finally, at last, now, at present, later,
3 表示解释说明 for example, in fact, actually
4 表示并列关系 and， not only…but also…, both…and…
5 表示转折关系 but, or, however, while, though
6 表示概括归纳 in a word, in my opinion
常用连接词总结
连
成篇
口头作文-- Memory challenge!
（综合同学说的和自己想的句子，口头说一说作文。）
grandfather watch TV
father read a newspaper
mother do the dishes
Mary do her homework
Tom play computer games
1.文体格式是否正确规范．
2.字数是否达到要求，有无遗漏要点．
3.词语使用是否正确，有无语法或用词上的错误．
4.单词拼写，字母大小写是否有错，标点符号有无遗漏或错用．
5.时态是否正确，人称是否上下文一致．
修改标准
改
用你最漂亮最工整的英语书法，把这一节课里修改好的作文抄写在作业本上。
抄
书写规范, 卷面整洁。
抄
评分标准
主谓一致吗？
时态正确吗？
结构、过渡连贯自然吗？
大小写规范吗？
字数够吗？
1.内容
2.准确性
3.流畅性
要点齐全吗？
书面表达评分标准：
一档 10分 内容完整，语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚；书写规范，卷面整洁。
二档 8-9分 内容完整，语言有少量错误；行文连贯，表达基本清楚。
三档 5-7分 内容完整，语言有一些错误；行文不够连贯，表达不够清楚。
四档 3-4分 内容不完整，语言错误较多；只有个别句子可读。
五档 0-3分 只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词。
满分作文：
It’s 8:00 in the evening. Let’s have a look at what Mary’s family are doing!
Oh, look! Mary’s grandfather is watching TV.And her father is reading a newspaper in the sofa, he likes reading very much. Her mother is doing the dishes. Mary is a good girl, she is doing her homewok in her room. Where is Tom He is playing computer games.
How happy they are!
What have you learned from this lesson
书面表达六步法：
“审、抓、扩、连、改、抄”
Summary