课件16张PPT。 Write a topic composition
——by using an outline and linking words What can we do on the Internet?What bad things are there on the Internet?How do you use the Internet in a right way?We can …There are …In my opinion, we should ….Free talk
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. Compare
(比较)TopicOn the InternetBeginning Body
正文Ending Most students…Key sentence2Key sentence1However,…In my opinion, Only in this way, First of all…also… Besides
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Different people have different ideas about ….Supporting sentences learn… fromlisten to…, enjoy …make…more convenientunhealthy …, make … lose … stat away from, make good use of help… a lot Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.Linking words (连接词)Ending BeginningCan you retell the composition according to the outline?
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(复述)Writing strategy: It is helpful to make an outline before writing.
写作前制定提纲对写作是有帮助的。TopicOn the InternetBeginning Body
正文Ending Most students…Key sentence2Key sentence1However,…In my opinion, Only in this way, First of all…also… BesidesDifferent people have different ideas about ….Supporting sentences learn… fromlisten to…, enjoy …make…more convenientunhealthy …, make … lose … stat away from, make good use of help… a lotRecently we held a discussion about whether the students should use mobile phones at school or not. Some of us think mobile phones should be used at school. First of all, we can surf the Internet for information we need. With mobile phones, we can ____ play games for fun in our free time. __________, we can call our parents easily. ________, some other students don’t think so. Some students send messages to their friends on mobile phones in class. It’s bad for their study. _______________, we can use the school public phones if necessary. ________, keeping a mobile phone costs money.
In my opinion, it’s not a good idea to use mobile phones at school. If we do that, we will concentrate more on our mobile phones than our studies.Complete the composition with the linking words given.Practice 1What’s moreHoweveralsoOn the other handBesidesFirst of all…also… What’s moreRecently we held a discussion about whether the students should use mobile phones at school or not. Some of us think mobile phones should be used at school. First of all, we can surf the Internet for information we need. With mobile phones, we can also play games for fun in our free time. What’s more, we can call our parents easily. However, some other students don’t think so. Some students send messages on mobile phones in class. On the other hand, we can use the school public phones if necessary. Besides, keeping a mobile phone costs money.
In my opinion, it’s not a good idea to use mobile phones at school. If we do that, we will concentrate more on our mobile phones than our studies.Practice2Make an outline for the composition.TopicOn mobile phonesBeginning Body
正文Ending Some of us…Key sentence2Key sentence1However,In my opinion, it’s not a good idea…If we do that, …Besides, …whether the students should use ….Supporting sentences surf the Internetplay games call… easilysend messages use…On the one handOn the other handcost money班长在主题班会课上组织大家讨论“九年级学生是否可以看电视?”,请你根据表格内容写一篇英文发言稿,陈述同学们的观点及理由,并附上你的观点及理由。Write Topic: Can students in Grade Nine watch TV?Body
正文Ending ( ) Beginning … ,we held a discussion about if we ….Activity 1: Write an outlineWrite Writing suggestion2: While you are writing the composition, use some linking words correctly to make it more fluent. In our theme class meeting, we held a discussion if we students in Grade 9 can watch TV. Some of us think that ________________
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__________________________________________________________Activity 2: Write a compositionHomework Share your composition with your classmates and try to improve it!In our theme class meeting, we held a discussion about if we students in Grade 9 can watch TV. Some of us think that we can watch TV at home although we are in Grade Nine. Watching TV can make us relaxed after a day’s hard work. What’s more, it can help me learn a lot and open up our eyes to the outside world. However, some other students disagree. They think watching TV is a waste of time and it has a bad influence on our study. They also think it is bad for our eyes if we watch TV too often.
In my opinion, we can watch TV on weekends, but not on weekdays. We should spend enough time on our study. On the other hand, we also need to relax!While you are making an outline, write down some verbs and phrasal verbs you will use in your composition.Writing suggestions:While you are writing the composition, use some linking words correctly to make it more fluent.On the Internet
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students agree that the Internet is a useful tool in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet, such as reading different kinds of books and learning foreign languages by ourselves. Secondly, we can listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Finally, the Internet makes our life more convenient because we can do some shopping and chat with friends on it.
However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. Besides, some students are cheated while they are surfing the Internet.
In my opinion, we should make good use of it and stay away from the unhealthy websites. Only in this way, the Internet can help us students a lot.
“中学生是否可以在校使用手机?” 你班就此话题进行了讨论。 请你根据以下记录表写一篇短文,陈述讨论结果,并发表你的观点。班长打算在主题班会课上组织大家讨论“九年级学生是否可以看电视?”,请你根据表格内容及自己的体验写一篇英文发言稿。(提示词:达成共识:have an agreement)Write TopicOn watching TVBeginning Body
正文Ending ( )( )We have an agreement that…It’s a good question to….Key sentence2______________________
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