Unit 8 When is your birthday? 段落编写学案 主题：介绍学校活动

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Unit 8段落编写 主题：介绍学校活动
第一部分：题目
段落编写
使用所给词语，编写一个意义相对完整的语段。提示词: English Day, have, must, come, busy
要求：1. 使用全部提示词，并在语段中用下划波浪线“~~~~~~~~~”标出提示词；
2. 语段具有一个相对合理的主题意义；
3. 词数：50-80。
第二部分：写作指导
话题分析 通过分析所给词语，由提示词English Day可知本篇写作要求介绍英语日。 写作时可以从活动项目和时间安排两个方面来介绍。写作时还需注意：活动安排要有序，可以按时间顺序写；文章结尾可写出对活动的感想。
主题 人与自我之生活与学习 子主题 多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活 字数 50-80
时态 一般现在时 人称 第一、二人称 注意事项 下划波浪线
第三部分：行文布局
开头 开篇点题 介绍具体什么活动，整体会是怎么样 Our English Day is on Friday. There are many fun things.
正文 介绍活动内容、时间及地点 1.早中晚有什么活动
2.活动在什么地点，什么人参加
3.活动会怎么样，是否有趣 → in the morning, an English speech contest, in the library
→ in the afternoon, an English singing show, in Classroom 201
→ in the evening, an English party, on the playground
→ We have a...on +具体日期
→ XXX活动 is on/ in+日期
结尾 总结 呼吁大家加入，畅想可能的感受 Come and join us. It will be great fun.
第四部分：经典错误剖析
错误句子 订正 错误原因（写序号） 错误原因一览
We have a two game 1.冠词使用错误或缺失
2.动词的固定搭配
3.拼写错误
4.人称代词和物主代词混乱
5.this用法混乱
6.缺少动词
7.主谓搭配不一致
8.（时间）介词搭配错误
I must to watch it
Do you want come to we English Day
I have lost of English books
The October is really busy
We have a English Day on September 1st
We have a interesting English Day
We have a buzy term
You can meet he
We have a lots of foods in this day
We have a English tast in the afternoon
Our English Day is in May first
I is very busy
It on October 25th
第五部分：好词好句积累
它从9点半到11点半 It's from 9:30 to 11:30. 我相信我们会玩得愉快 I'm sure we'll have a good time. 玩得开心 have a good time/ have fun/ enjoy oneself
我们有一个英语演讲比赛 We have an English speech contest. 多么忙碌的一天啊 What a busy day! 你的父母可以来我们学校 Your parents can come to our school
看唱歌展示一定很有趣 It must be interesting to watch the singing show. 这真是个忙碌的学期 This is a really busy term
在操场有一场英语派对 There is an English party on the playground. 这个学期我们为你们准备了一些有趣好玩的事情 We have some interesting and fun things for you this term
第六部分：范文学习
Hello, I'm Li Hua. Our English Day is on Friday. We have many fun things to do.
Can you speak English well In the morning we have an English speech contest in the library. It's from 9:30 to 11:30. In the afternoon we have an English singing show in Classroom 201. It must be interesting to watch the show. In the evening, we have an English party on the playground. Here we can watch English movies together and make many e and join in these activities. It's a busy day but I'm sure we'll have a good time.