中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
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专题10：
作文
-2023年上海十六区高三英语一模汇编
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1.宝山区
随着数字技术的广泛使用，现在，学校里有些老师喜欢给学生布置线上作业，也有一些老师仍然喜欢布置线下作业，还有一些老师喜欢布置线上和线下混合式作业。作为一名高三学生，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你关于作业方面的建议。邮件内容必须包括：
1.你觉得哪种作业形式更适合你们班级；
2.简单陈述你的理由，说明其利弊。
(文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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【答案】Dear Mr. Hu,
I’m writing to express my opinion about the online homework. With the scientific development, the Internet is developing rapidly. Online homework will become a trend. Therefore, I think that online homework can be more suitable for our Senior Three students.
The contents and forms of online homework are relatively rich, which not only can promote students to actively complete their homework, but also can greatly relieve the tense learning atmosphere. Besides, online homework can shorten the time of teachers’ correcting homework so that they can help us with important learning problems, because senior three students need more help from teachers. Although online homework also has drawbacks, such as computer time, I think we can control ourselves as teenagers.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给老师写一封邮件，提出你关于线上作业和线下作业更适合自己班级的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
适用：be suitable for → apply to
积极地：actively → positively
此外：Besides → What’s more
有用：be helpful to → be beneficial to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to express my opinion about the online homework.
拓展句：I’m writing to express my opinion about the online homework, which I think is useful to our study.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The contents and forms of online homework are relatively rich, which not only can promote students to actively complete their homework, but also can greatly relieve the tense learning atmosphere. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, online homework can shorten the time of teachers’ correcting homework so that they can help us with important learning problems, because senior three students need more help from teachers. (运用了so that引导的结果状语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
2.崇明区
假设你是中华中学高三学生徐晶，校团委为了帮助高三学生缓解学习压力，拟利用本月最后一个星期五下午开展一个高三年级减压活动，目前正在向全年级同学征求活动意见。你给校团委王老师写一封邮件，内容须包括：
你的建议；
你的理由。
注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。
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【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very glad to hear that our school is going to carry out an activity to help students relieve stress. I am writing to offer my advice.
I suggest that a fun game for all Senior Three students should be held on the school playground. Various sports games, fun and exciting, will attract lots of participation, among which Riding Pigs, Mud Wrestling and Chinese Rolling will be the most welcomed. The playground will be filled with the students’ laughter and cheers. Aiming to relieve the senior 3 students from pressure and get them a break from heavy school work, the activity will be a great success.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Xu Jing
【解析】
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给团委王老师写一封邮件，就最后一个周五开展的高三年级减压活动提出自己的建议，并陈述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
刺激的：exciting→thrilling
充满：be filled with→be full of
考虑：take...into consideration→take...into account
2.句型拓展
合并句子
原句：I am very glad to hear that our school is going to carry out an activity to help students relieve stress. I am writing to offer my advice.
拓展句：Hearing that our school is going to carry out an activity to help students relieve stress, I am writing to offer my advice.
3.奉贤区
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，你校学生会正在征集志愿者活动方案，请在以下三项活动中选择一项：一、深入社区宣传环保知识；二、担任“奉贤博物馆”义务讲解员；三、去孤儿院为孩子们上兴趣课。请你给学生会写封邮件，内容须包括：
1. 你的选择及理由
2. 你准备如何做
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam
Our school will hold a volunteer activity, which may be chosen from the following three programmes: publicizing knowledge of environmental protection to communities, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum and conducting interesting lessons to kids in the orphanage. In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students.
There are two reasons why I choose the second activity. To start with, it’s a valuable opportunity for students to have a better knowledge of the Fengxian Museum, during which they can broaden their horizons. Besides, it’s beneficial for students to improve their communication skills especially English speaking because there are many foreigners visiting it.
If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as one guide I will cherish the golden opportunity and make full preparations, such as searching materials on the Internet and asking teachers for help.
Sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会写封邮件在三个志愿者活动策划中选择某一项活动，并阐述选择的理由和要如何做。
【详解】1.词汇积累
项目：programme→project
除此之外：besides→moreover
珍惜：cherish→treasure
寻求某人的帮助：ask sb for help→seek sb’s help
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students.
拓展句：In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students, from which students can learn a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To start with, it’s a valuable opportunity for students to have a better knowledge of the Fengxian Museum, during which they can broaden their horizons.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as one guide, I will cherish the golden opportunity and make full preparations, such as searching materials on the Internet and asking teachers for help. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句和主将从现）
4.虹口区
明启中学拟举办一次摄影展。现就布展方式（校图书馆或校园网站）征集学生意见。假设你是王磊，请给学生会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件必须满足以下要求：
1. 简述你写邮件的目的及你对布展方式的选择；
2. 说明你的理由（从体验感、互动性或影响力等方面对这两种布展方式进行对比）。
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【答案】To whom it may concern:
I’ve learned that a photography exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting advice on the way of arrangement. I’m writing this letter to share my opinions with you. In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the photography exhibition in school library than on campus website. My reasons are as follows.
At first, the library of our school is spacious, which provides visitors with a comfortable environment for appreciating the exhibition, so they will have a nice experience. Besides, watching the exhibition at school library is more convenient for visitors to interact with others. Last but not least, a photography exhibition held on campus website has far less impact than that held in school library, because people may assume that holding a photography exhibition on website is just like a virtual activity. Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in school library.
Yours,
Wang Lei
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。明启中学拟举办一次摄影展，现就布展方式征集学生意见，要求考生给学生会写一封邮件表达自己的想法，内容要点包括：1. 简述你写邮件的目的及你对布展方式的选择；2. 说明你的理由（从体验感、互动性或影响力等方面对这两种布展方式进行对比）。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
建议：advice → suggestions
在我看来：In my opinion → As far as I am concerned
宽敞的：spacious → capacious
此外：Besides → What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the photography exhibition in school library than on campus website.
拓展句：I hold the belief that it is more advisable to hold the photography exhibition in school library than on campus website.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve learned that a photography exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting advice on the way of arrangement. (运用了that 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】At first, the library of our school is spacious, which provides visitors with a comfortable environment for appreciating the exhibition, so they will have a nice experience. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.黄浦区
假设你是明启中学学生李华，学校正在征求学生对云课堂的感受和建议。请发送一封邮件至校长信箱， 你的邮件内容须包括：
1.详细描述一节云课堂以及你的感受；
2.简单阐述你对云课堂的态度和建议。
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【答案】Dear sir,
Hearing that the school is asking students for their feelings and suggestions on cloud classes. Here are some of my feelings and suggestions.
Because of the epidemic, we can’t go to school. Therefore, the school provides students with cloud classes, so that we can not miss our studies even at home. When the course began, I could clearly see the teacher on the computer screen, as well as his carefully prepared courseware for us. I can hear the voice of the teacher very clearly through the headset, which is a feeling I can’t feel in the classroom.
Cloud Classroom provides a good solution for students who cannot be taught face to face by teachers for some reasons. However, cloud classes can’t let students and teachers interact well, and the teacher can’t know whether students learn well. These need to be improved.
I hope these suggestions can help the school improve the cloud classroom.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生发送一封邮件至校长信箱，阐述你对云课堂的感受和建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
因此：therefore→as a result
提供某人某物：provide sb. with sth.→offer sb. sth.
改善：improve→perfect/better
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Because of the epidemic, we can’t go to school.
拓展句：Because the epidemic broke out, we can’t go to school.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Therefore, the school provides students with cloud classes, so that we can not miss our studies even at home.(so that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]I can hear the voice of the teacher very clearly through the headset, which is a feeling I can’t feel in the classroom.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
6.嘉定区
假设你是光明中学的学生张华。你们学校拟开设劳动课程，现给出如下方案，学校委托学 生会征询大家的意见。
内容 高一：电器使用和维护 高二：植物种植与养护 高三：物品整理和收纳
时间 每学期最后两周，每周 2 整天
地点 理科实验专用教室
给学生会写一封邮件，内容须包括：
1) 你认为该方案中存在的问题；
2) 你的建议和理由。
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【答案】Dear Students’ Union,
I’m writing to put forward some advice on the labor course planned by you. It is of great benefit for us students to take a labor course with an intention of building up our body and learning more life skills.
However, according to the schedule, the content of the labor course, which I think is not appropriate for the senior 1 students, is supposed to be adjusted because they should be developed some basic skills of school life so that they can adapt to the independent school life quickly.
Furthermore, as far as the time given the labor course is concerned, it is not enough at all. In order to pay more attention to the labor course, students should be offered more time to experience more activities related to the labor course.
I’ m deeply convinced that as long as you take my advice into account, this labor course will be interesting and rewarding.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给学校学生会写一封邮件，就学校拟开设劳动课程的方案提出问题，并给出建议和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提出：put forward →come up with
方案：schedule →plan
此外：furthermore → what’s more
考虑：take…into account →take…into consideration
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to put forward some advice on the labor course planned by you.
拓展句：I’m writing to put forward some advice on the labor course which is planned by you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is of great benefit for us students to take a labor course with an intention of building up our body, learning more life skills.（运用了it作形式主语，不定式短语作真正主语）
【高分句型2】However, according to the schedule, the content of the labor course, which I think is not appropriate for the senior 1, is supposed to be adjusted because they should be developed some basic skills of school life so that they can adapt to the independent school life.
（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，because引导的原因状语从句以及so that引导的目的状语从句）
7.金山区
假设你是光明中学高三学生李明。近期，年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，其中一个环节为“说说你的故事”，筹备组现面向本校全体高三学生征集真实故事案例。请给筹备组写一封邮件，内容须包括：
1) 你印象最深的一件事情；
2) 此事对你的启发和影响。
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【答案】
One possible version:
During the past three years in the Guangming senior high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of the most unforgettable things was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. In order to win the competition, we all went for it. During the week before the competition, we practised singing in our free time. Although it was a hard job, every participant took it seriously and did their best. Thanks to our effort, we won the first prize. Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy. The movement reminded me of an old saying-No pains, no gains. It was hard work, but during the course of preparation, we developed deep friendship, confidence as well as understanding!
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇开放作文。年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，其中一个环节是“说说你的故事”，要求考生给筹备组写一封邮件说说自己印象最深刻的一件事，以及此事对你的启发和影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
为了：in order to→in an effort to
困难的： hard→ tough
由于：thanks to→owing to
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句： Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy.
拓展句： When we heard the exciting news, we were all wild with joy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】One of the most unforgettable things was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. （运用了when引导的表语从句）
【高分句型2】Although it was a hard job,every participant took it seriously and did their best. （运用了although引导的让步状语从句）
8.静安区
你所居住的小区，虽地处闹市，但因建成较早，当年规划的300个停车位早已不能满足500户居民的停车需求。小区业委会(owners’ committee)现正就如何缓解小区停车难这一问题征求居民们意见。在小区公众号留言，谈谈你的看法。留言中包括：
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由。
(文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息)
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【答案】Dear owners’ committee,
As a resident of this community, I have the following suggestions on how to alleviate the parking problem in this community:
First, I think the community can scientifically and reasonably plan the parking spaces, number them, and guide the car owners to check the number. At the same time, we can also talk with residents in the community to reduce the public green space and increase the number of parking spaces. Second, we could seek help from the relevant departments, putting forward the proposal of building a large parking lot or three-dimensional parking building; Meanwhile, we can negotiate with the surrounding shops to implement the method of “dislocation parking” to relieve the tension of parking in the community. Third, I strongly recommend that public transportation and public bicycle travel should be advocated. By doing these not only can we could relieve the pressure of tight parking space，but also build up our bodies, which could be called win-win.
The above is my opinion,which I hope will be helpful to you.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给业主委员会写一封建议信，针对“小区停车难”问题提出自己的建议和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→ advice
首先：first → first and foremost
其次：second→ in addition
有益处：helpful→ beneficial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a resident of this community, I have the following suggestions on how to alleviate the parking problem in this community.
拓展句：As a resident of this community, I have the following suggestions on how we could do something to alleviate the parking problem in this community.
9.闵行区
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织来中国进行主题夏令营活动，每个学生可以从以下三个主题营中选择一个参加： 1.唐诗(Tang poems)学习夏令营;2.乒乓球训练营 ;3. 剪纸(paper-cutting)学习夏令营。Jim来信希望你能给他推荐一个。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你的建议; 2. 你的理由。
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【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad that you are going to take part in summer camps in China. Of the three themes, I suggest that you should choose to learn to play table tennis. My reasons are as follows.
In the beginning, it is easy to learn table tennis. Table tennis can help you build up your strength and make you become more energetic. What’s more, table tennis is popular among Chinese people. By participating in this table tennis training class, not only can you make some friends with the same interest but also you can get some professional guidance and improve your skills.
I hope you will enjoy your summer camp. I am looking forward to meeting you in China.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友吉姆回信，给他推荐一个夏令营活动主题，并介绍推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→pleased
参加：take part in→participate in
此外：what’s more→besides
希望：hope→wish
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In the beginning, it is easy to learn table tennis. Table tennis can help you build up your strength and make you become more energetic.
拓展句：In the beginning, it is easy to learn table tennis which can help you build up your strength and make you become more energetic.
10.普陀区
假设你是启明中学高三学生王华，你校学生会将组织一次“品上海”的活动，已在学校官网上发布方案，征求全体学生的意见。你需要写一封邮件，包含以下两点：
1. 提出你觉得需要改进的地方;
2. 需要改进的原因。
主题 品上海
时间 2023年1月2日上午7:00–下午18:00
路线 从人民广场坐旅游巴士前往青浦，参观“陈云故居”“朱家角古镇”“青西郊野公园”，然后返回人民广场。
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m really excited to hear that an activity named “Taste Shanghai” will be held from 7:00 am to 18:00 pm on January 2nd, 2023. However, there may be further improvement of the scheme you’ve posted on the campus website, as I’d like to point out.
First of all, as participants, we need to know where should we meet . In the mean time, we are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity. Only by doing so are you likely to make it a success. What’s more, in addition to visiting the “former Residence of Chen Yun”, “Zhujiajiao Ancient Town” and “Qingxi Suburban Wild Park”, I suggest that the activities of tasting special food and tasting special culture can be included. By appreciating the local culture, we can gain a deeper insight into the prosperity of our city.
I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校工作人员写一封信件，针对学生会即将组织的“品上海”的活动提出相关意见。内容包括：提出你觉得需要改进的地方，以及需要改进的原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold→launch
此外： what’s more→besides
建议：suggest→advise
希望：hope→expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： In the mean time, we are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity.
拓展句： In the mean time, we are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity, which is of great importance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, there may be further improvement of the scheme you’ve posted on the campus website, as I’d like to point out.（运用了省略引导词that/which引导的限制性定语从句，以及as引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success.（运用了that引导的宾语从句以及情态动词的被动语态
11.青浦区
假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，你校校刊上的“展望未来”栏目正在征文，请以“50年后的学校”为题写一篇文章投稿。你的稿件必须包括：
描述50年后的学校里的一个场景；谈谈现在的你置身其中的感受。
(注：文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。)
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【答案】Schools in 50 years
50 years later, the school uses robots to teach students, and students sit in a transparent classroom on all sides to learn. Besides, students’ performance in class and learning feedback are all conducted by AI equipment. The construction of the school is no longer what it is now. The school 50 years later is very intelligent, and students’ needs can be met in an instant. The school has only a few technicians and teachers who manage machinery and equipment, so it is so convenient.
Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later. It will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet. I will be shocked by all modern devices and intelligent functions. It’s great to feel the learning efficiency brought by the infinite power of modern science and technology, feel the friendship between classmates, and carefully taste the magic of knowledge.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“50年后的学校”为题为校刊上的“展望未来”栏目写一篇文章投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
用、利用：use→make use of
此外：besides→what’s more
智能的：intelligent→smart
震惊的：shocked→astonished
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later. It will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet.
拓展句：Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later, which will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 The construction of the school is no longer what it is now. (运用了what引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】The school has only a few technicians and teachers who manage machinery and equipment, so everything is so convenient. (运用了who引导定语从句)
12.松江区
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。你校计划请学生自己组建社团，你对此很有兴趣。请向学生会写一封申请邮件，内容必须包括：
1) 你计划组建的社团名称；
2) 组建该社团的目的或意义；
3) 该社团准备开展的一项活动。
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【答案】
Dear chairman,
I’m interested in our school’s plan to ask students to set up their own clubs. Therefore, I am writing to apply for the establishment of a Chinese Kung Fu Club, which is sure to attract many students who are interested in Chinese Kung Fu.
I set up the club with the purpose of serving all the students. The students will benefit a lot from this club. In the first place, the club will organize and arrange a series of activities and courses, which can help students to know, understand and learn Chinese kung Fu. Students can keep fit by performing Kung Fu, during which they can have a chance to appreciate the great charm of Chinese Kung Fu culture. In the second place, out of love for Chinese Kung Fu, students can make more friends, expanding their social circle and improving their social skills. Of course, there will be activities such as the training on how to perform Chinese Kung Fu open and they are free to all new members.
I hope you can approve of my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写一封申请信，申请自己计划组建的社团，讲述组建该社团的目的或意义，并介绍相应的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：set up→establish
吸引：attract→appeal to
目的：purpose→aim/goal
保持健康：keep fit→keep healthy
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I set up the club with the purpose of serving all the students. The students will benefit a lot from this club.
拓展句：I set up the club with the purpose of serving all the students, from which the students will benefit a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Therefore, I am writing to apply for the establishment of a Chinese Kung Fu Club, which is sure to attract many students who are interested in Chinese Kung Fu.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，而且从句中包含who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】In the second place, out of love for Chinese Kung Fu, students can make more friends, expanding their social circle and improving their social skills.（运用了现在分词作状语）
13.徐汇区
假定你是李华，你在香港读大学的朋友Terry最近想找份兼职，为暑假旅游筹集旅费。他对以下三份工作都有兴趣，难以抉择，因此发邮件征求你的意见。给Terry回复一封邮件，在邮件中你必须：
1) 推荐其中一份兼职；
2) 通过比较，说明你推荐该份兼职的理由。
服装销售助理 Fashion sales assistant ●时薪80元 ●工作时间：周六、周日(12：00—22：00) ●主要职责：主要处理客人查询及投诉
语言教师 Language teacher ●时薪150元 ●工作时间：周二、周四(19：00—21：00)周六(14：00—16：00) ●主要职责：主要辅导本地小学生学习英语
字幕翻译 Subtitle translator ●时薪200元 ●工作时间：无固定时间 ●主要职责：电影或电视节目的字幕翻译
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【答案】Dear Terry,
How delighted I am to have heard from you and I can identify with how hard you feel when facing the choices of part-time jobs to raise travel expenses for your summer vacation.
Comparing the three part-time jobs, I think the best choice is the second job as a language teacher to tutor local primary school students in learning English. First of all, the length of working time is not too long and you can make full use of your evening time. Though it can take up your two hours on Saturday, you can still have a full Sunday. What’s more, the hourly salary is relatively good and you can earn 900 yuan per week. Most importantly, through the teaching process and the interaction with the local pupils, this is a good chance for you to get the knowledge of local culture and customs, which is of great benefit to your study and your overall quality throughout the whole college life.
In summary, to be a language teacher is the best of all. I hope my opinion is useful to you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Terry回复一封邮件，推荐其中一份兼职并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
占据：take up → occupy
充分利用：make full use of → make the most of
机会：chance → opportunity
总之：In summary → All in all
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：How delighted I am to have heard from you and I can identify with how hard you feel when facing the choices of part-time jobs to raise travel expenses for your summer vacation.
拓展句：How delighted I am to have heard from you and I can identify with how hard you feel when you are facing the choices of part-time jobs to raise travel expenses for your summer vacation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Comparing the three part-time jobs, I think the best choice is the second job as a language teacher to tutor local primary school students in learning English. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Most importantly, through the teaching process and the interaction with the locals pupils, this is a good chance for you to get the knowledge of local culture and customs, which is of great benefit to your study and your overall quality throughout the whole college life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
14.浦东新区
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，目前担任学校社团负责人。近期，你校被评为社团明星学校，为了在报纸上分享你校社团情况，请你以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含：
1. 对你校社团进行分类；
2. 具体描述每一类社团的特色。
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【答案】 Clubs in My School
To enrich students’ life, our school organizes a variety of clubs in my school. Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful. Generally speaking, the clubs in my school can be classified into two types: sports club and art club.
Sports club are popular among students. There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest. So students there can make friends. Besides, they can not only play sports in free time, but also they can learn some sports skills.
Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art. Also, it provides students some knowledge about art. Meanwhile, students there can have the access to the instrument, such as piano, Erhu and so on.
All the students in my school like the clubs. So I think the clubs are very significant.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含：对你校社团进行分类；具体描述每一类社团的特色。
【详解】1.词汇积累
等等：and so on→and the like
此外：Besides→In addition
机会：chance→opportunity
同时：Meanwhile→At the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art.
拓展句：Art club which includes music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
15.杨浦区
假设你是明启中学学生李华，你校英语广播站计划在每周五中午开设名为“Talk and Talk”的栏目，目前正在招募主持人。请给广播站负责人 Mr. Li写一封信，应聘这一岗位。信中需包含以下内容：
1)应聘的理由;
2)专栏内容的策划。
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【答案】Dear Mr. Li,
I noticed in today’s school newspaper that you were looking for people to be a host of the program named “Talk and Talk”. So I’m writing to say I’d like to apply the position. Here is a brief introduction of myself.
First of all, I am an outgoing person with strong cooperation ability. Secondly, I am very good at English. I can speak fluent spoken English. Finally, and I think this is the most important point, I have relevant experience as a presenter, which will greatly assist me in this position.
Of course, I have my own ideas about “Talk and Talk”. In my opinion, we can invite and interview some excellent students to set a good example for students.
Sincerely, if this position is offered to me, I will devote all my wisdom and efforts to it. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语广播站写一封申请信，应聘“Talk and Talk”的栏目的主持人。信中包括以下内容：应聘的理由；专栏内容的策划。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：first of all→first and foremost
此外：secondly→ what’s more
我认为：I think→as far as I am concerned
喜欢：sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Of course, I have my own ideas about “Talk and Talk”. In my opinion, we can invite and interview some excellent students to set a good example for students.
拓展句：Of course, I have my own ideas about “Talk and Talk” that we can invite and interview some excellent students to set a good example for students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I noticed in today’s school newspaper that you were looking for people to be a host of the program named “Talk and Talk”.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 I have relevant experience as a presenter, which will greatly assist me in this position.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
16.长宁区
假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。学校为了帮助学生减压，拟从以下三种形式中选择其一：午睡三十分钟，设立“音乐角”和开设瑜伽 (Yoga) 课程。现听取全校学生的意见。请给负责的王老师写封邮件，内容须包括：
1)你的选择；
2)你的理由。
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【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,
I chose the music corner as my first choice for relieving the stress from studies. It’s an honor to share my opinion about music with you.
Music makes great difference to our life. Music can not only make us relaxed and refreshed whenever we are tired, but it can stimulate us when we are confronted with difficulties. Besides, music enables us to gain insight into other cultures.
As for me, I prefer pop music and classical music. I am always in good mood as long as I play pop music. When I have a hard time dealing with stress, I choose peaceful and beautiful classical music, which calms me down and improves my mood. In conclusion, music plays an important role in my life.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。学校为了帮助学生减压， 拟从以下三种形式中选择其一： 午睡三十分钟，设立“音乐角”和开设瑜伽 (Yoga) 课程。现听取全校学生的意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
疲劳的：be tired →be worn out
面对：be confronted with→ be faced with
此外：besides → what’s more
总之：in conclusion →all in all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It’s an honor to be here to share my opinion about music with you.
拓展句：It’s an honor that I can share my opinion about music with you here.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I have a hard time dealing with stress, I choose peaceful and beautiful classical music, which calms me down and improves me mood.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I am always in good mood as long as I play pop music.（运用了as long as 引导的条件状语从句）
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1.宝山区
随着数字技术的广泛使用，现在，学校里有些老师喜欢给学生布置线上作业，也有一些老师仍然喜欢布置线下作业，还有一些老师喜欢布置线上和线下混合式作业。作为一名高三学生，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你关于作业方面的建议。邮件内容必须包括：
1.你觉得哪种作业形式更适合你们班级；
2.简单陈述你的理由，说明其利弊。
(文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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2.崇明区
假设你是中华中学高三学生徐晶，校团委为了帮助高三学生缓解学习压力，拟利用本月最后一个星期五下午开展一个高三年级减压活动，目前正在向全年级同学征求活动意见。你给校团委王老师写一封邮件，内容须包括：
你的建议；
你的理由。
注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。
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3.奉贤区
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，你校学生会正在征集志愿者活动方案，请在以下三项活动中选择一项：一、深入社区宣传环保知识；二、担任“奉贤博物馆”义务讲解员；三、去孤儿院为孩子们上兴趣课。请你给学生会写封邮件，内容须包括：
1. 你的选择及理由
2. 你准备如何做
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4.虹口区
明启中学拟举办一次摄影展。现就布展方式（校图书馆或校园网站）征集学生意见。假设你是王磊，请给学生会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件必须满足以下要求：
1. 简述你写邮件的目的及你对布展方式的选择；
2. 说明你的理由（从体验感、互动性或影响力等方面对这两种布展方式进行对比）。
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5.黄浦区
假设你是明启中学学生李华，学校正在征求学生对云课堂的感受和建议。请发送一封邮件至校长信箱， 你的邮件内容须包括：
1.详细描述一节云课堂以及你的感受；
2.简单阐述你对云课堂的态度和建议。
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6.嘉定区
假设你是光明中学的学生张华。你们学校拟开设劳动课程，现给出如下方案，学校委托学 生会征询大家的意见。
内容 高一：电器使用和维护 高二：植物种植与养护 高三：物品整理和收纳
时间 每学期最后两周，每周 2 整天
地点 理科实验专用教室
给学生会写一封邮件，内容须包括：
1) 你认为该方案中存在的问题；
2) 你的建议和理由。
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7.金山区
假设你是光明中学高三学生李明。近期，年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，其中一个环节为“说说你的故事”，筹备组现面向本校全体高三学生征集真实故事案例。请给筹备组写一封邮件，内容须包括：
1) 你印象最深的一件事情；
2) 此事对你的启发和影响。
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8.静安区
你所居住的小区，虽地处闹市，但因建成较早，当年规划的300个停车位早已不能满足500户居民的停车需求。小区业委会(owners’ committee)现正就如何缓解小区停车难这一问题征求居民们意见。在小区公众号留言，谈谈你的看法。留言中包括：
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由。
(文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息)
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9.闵行区
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织来中国进行主题夏令营活动，每个学生可以从以下三个主题营中选择一个参加： 1.唐诗(Tang poems)学习夏令营;2.乒乓球训练营 ;3. 剪纸(paper-cutting)学习夏令营。Jim来信希望你能给他推荐一个。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你的建议; 2. 你的理由。
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10.普陀区
假设你是启明中学高三学生王华，你校学生会将组织一次“品上海”的活动，已在学校官网上发布方案，征求全体学生的意见。你需要写一封邮件，包含以下两点：
1. 提出你觉得需要改进的地方;
2. 需要改进的原因。
主题 品上海
时间 2023年1月2日上午7:00–下午18:00
路线 从人民广场坐旅游巴士前往青浦，参观“陈云故居”“朱家角古镇”“青西郊野公园”，然后返回人民广场。
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11.青浦区
假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，你校校刊上的“展望未来”栏目正在征文，请以“50年后的学校”为题写一篇文章投稿。你的稿件必须包括：
描述50年后的学校里的一个场景；谈谈现在的你置身其中的感受。
(注：文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。)
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12.松江区
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。你校计划请学生自己组建社团，你对此很有兴趣。请向学生会写一封申请邮件，内容必须包括：
1) 你计划组建的社团名称；
2) 组建该社团的目的或意义；
3) 该社团准备开展的一项活动。
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13.徐汇区
假定你是李华，你在香港读大学的朋友Terry最近想找份兼职，为暑假旅游筹集旅费。他对以下三份工作都有兴趣，难以抉择，因此发邮件征求你的意见。给Terry回复一封邮件，在邮件中你必须：
1) 推荐其中一份兼职；
2) 通过比较，说明你推荐该份兼职的理由。
服装销售助理 Fashion sales assistant ●时薪80元 ●工作时间：周六、周日(12：00—22：00) ●主要职责：主要处理客人查询及投诉
语言教师 Language teacher ●时薪150元 ●工作时间：周二、周四(19：00—21：00)周六(14：00—16：00) ●主要职责：主要辅导本地小学生学习英语
字幕翻译 Subtitle translator ●时薪200元 ●工作时间：无固定时间 ●主要职责：电影或电视节目的字幕翻译
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14.浦东新区
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，目前担任学校社团负责人。近期，你校被评为社团明星学校，为了在报纸上分享你校社团情况，请你以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含：
1. 对你校社团进行分类；
2. 具体描述每一类社团的特色。
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15.杨浦区
假设你是明启中学学生李华，你校英语广播站计划在每周五中午开设名为“Talk and Talk”的栏目，目前正在招募主持人。请给广播站负责人 Mr. Li写一封信，应聘这一岗位。信中需包含以下内容：
1)应聘的理由;
2)专栏内容的策划。
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16.长宁区
假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。学校为了帮助学生减压，拟从以下三种形式中选择其一：午睡三十分钟，设立“音乐角”和开设瑜伽 (Yoga) 课程。现听取全校学生的意见。请给负责的王老师写封邮件，内容须包括：
1)你的选择；
2)你的理由。
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