2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错（24份）

2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在此处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。　　
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
As a senior three student, it won’t take long after I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow student.
Firstly, I’d like to show my appreciation to those stand by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help or advice, my life will be different. Secondly, it’s high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Thirdly, I’ve made my mind to make every effort to study, so hard work is the key to a success. Finally I want to express my hope which all the young fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man.
2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据）.When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him the receipt Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
If you are learned English, it is not enough only to keep in mind the rule of grammar. Try to read stories in English and speaking in English wherever you can. When you have learned to use the language, you are sure not fail in the test. A few days before exam, you should go to bed early. Don’t stay up late at night study. Before you understand the exactly meaning of each question, we should not pick up your pen to write. When you have finished your paper, to be sure to read over your answers, correct mistakes you could see and make sure that you haven’t missed anything.
4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the members of a family ，no matter where far away they are ，will try to get together in that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October 1621. In 1620， the group of Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts. They were looking for a freely place to live in as they chose. So they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved death. The next spring ，they began farming. With the help of local Indians ，they learned to be plant corn and raise animals. In the fall ，the fields produced a good harvest. Filling with joy and thanks to God ，they held a celebration. In 1863，it became a national holiday.
5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）花掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第1处起）不计分。
A few years before, Jack and I had a quarrel over score in a football match. From then on, we didn’t speak to each other any longer.
One day, when I was standing by a tree read, a ball flew to me and I kicked it back with looking at the player, but while I put up my head, I found it was Jack. Seen him, I was feeling very embarrassed. However, he was smiled to me, so I smiled either. Then we began to make up.
This way the walls between us were torn down with a smile but we become good friends again.
6.
假设你叫李华，是新浪微博（sina microblog）的一名实名注册用户。最近你在网上看了一部经典的电影《阿甘正传》（Forrest Gump），觉得很值得一看，并在微博中向广大博友推荐该部影片。
观看影片：《阿甘正传》；出品年份：1994年；主演：Tom Hanks，获六项奥斯卡大奖
内容介绍：阿甘（Forrest Gump）用乐观的态度，面对生活中不确定的因素带来的各种挑战和困难
推荐理由：1、树立了一个好榜样，激励我们勇敢面对挑战，永不放弃,对我们高三学生很有指导意义；
2、观看英文影片有利于提高我们英语的听说水平，帮助我们了解更多的外国文化。
建议：博友们介绍几部自己最欣赏的电影，相互交流
【写作内容】 根据以上内容要点，用英语写一篇微博推荐该影片，写作要点：
1. 向大家推荐这部制作于1994年的经典影片； 2. 推荐的理由；3. 向博友们建议。
参考词汇： 奥斯卡Oscar
【写作要求】 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 开头已为你写好。
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1.
As a senior three student, it won’t take long after I graduate. Now, I have much to share
before
with my fellow student.
students
Firstly, I’d like to show my appreciation to those∧stand by me all the way, teachers,
who或standing
parents and friends included. Without their help or advice, my life will be different. Secondly,
would
it’s high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. I firm believe
me firmly
that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Thirdly, I’ve made∧my mind to
up
make every effort to study, so hard work is the key to a success. Finally I want to express my
for/as/because/since
hope which all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man. that
2.
Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt (收据). When she
went
got there, she ∧ refused.The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him
was/ got unless
the receipt.Thinking it was no way out, Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two
there
shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at
guards 删掉
it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman
carefully which embarrassed the
came up in time and she was allowed to go.
3.1.learned-----learning
2.rule---rules
3.speaking---speak
4.not∧to
5.the∧exam
6.study----studying
7.exactly---exact
8.we---you
9.第一个to去掉
10.could--can
4.
Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the
holidays
members of a family，no matter where far away they are，will try to get together
how
in that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October 1621. In 1620，the
on或删除in took a
group of Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts. They were looking for a freely place to
free
live in as they chose. So they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved∧death.
But to
The next spring，they began farming. With the help of local Indians，they learned to
be plant corn and raise animals. In the fall ，the fields produced a good harvest. Filling
Filled
with joy and thanks to God ，they held a celebration. In 1863，it became a national holiday.
5.第一处：before改为ago。第二处：score改为a score。第三处：longer改为more。第四处：read改为reading。第五处： with改为without。第六处：while改为when。第七处：Seen改为Seeing。第八处：第一个smiled改为smiling。第九处：either改为too。第十处：but改为and。
6.
Dear bloggers，
I am glad to share one of my favorite movies, Forest Gump, with you. The film Forest Gump, made in 1994, was starred by a famous actor Tom Hanks and finally won six Oscar prizes. In the movie, Mr. Gump sets us a good example to face challenges bravely and never to give up, which is instructive to us Senior 3 students. Besides, watching English movies is good to improve our listening and speaking skills in English and it can also help us learn more foreign culture. My dear bloggers, I suggest we each recommend several movies so that we can share our favourite.
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The day before yesterday, I went to the bookstore where is near our school to buy a reference book. It was　Saturday, so there was many people. Under the help of the shop assistants, I quickly got the book I needed. I was　about to leave while I found someone trying to steal a man’s money. Although I was nervous, but I tried to think of a way to help. Suddenly, a good idea occurred me. I stepped on the man’s foot on purposes. As expected, the man’s scream gives the thief a fright, who quickly walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude to him.
2.短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Last Sunday I witness a traffic accident on my way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went loud crash. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away. I went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. Luckily, they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance. As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast. It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.
3.

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My friend Dick was seven years old, and her sister Katherine was five. One day their mother
take them to their aunt’s to play while she went to the city buy some new clothes. They played
for a hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely cake and a knife
and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece to your sister. But remembering
to do it like a gentleman.” “How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the
bigger one piece to the other person,” answered his aunt. Dick thought up this for a few seconds.
Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine. ”
4.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
We’ve seen 3D movies, games, TVs and so on. Have you ever heard 3D newspaper before? Yes, that’s why the Belgian newspaper, La Derniere Heure, decided to do for its readers. This is Europe’s first 3D newspaper. It took the team two month to make the 3D newspaper. They were printed 115,000 copies of the special edition of La Derniere Heure. It was more than the usual number of printed copies. Each of these newspapers come with a pair of free 3D glasses. All the images or ads in the newspaper are in 3D and the text is as usually. Readers can get the best result by hold the paper 50cm away from the eyes. Although the first 3D newspaper is very popular, they have no plans to continuing with it if it costs too much.
5.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分lO分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：l每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改lO处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Bobby was a dog that went every moming to a baker's shop to fetch twelve bread roll for its owner. However. when Bobby returned back one day, it had only eleven rolls. Bobby's owner wants to know what had happened, but he followed Bobby to the baker's shop the next day Instead taking the road home as usually. Bobby took another road and went up to a farm. There was a poorer little dog with a broken leg. Bobby was offered the roll to the little dog. The owner was very proud of Bobby and rewarded itself a nice big bone. Later, the owner's family never grew tired of tell everybody how kind and clever Bobby was
6.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
An old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, a bottle of whisky in his hand. On the wall was a fly he took for a nail. The moment he tried to hang the bottle on it, they fell and broke. When the landlady discovered what had been happened, she decided to do him favor. The next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the “fly” had been. Before the old man came back, the smell of the whisky reminded him the accident. Looking at the spot what he thought the “fly” was again, he was so angry that he slapped it with all his strengths. On hearing the loud cry, the landlady rushed in. To her surprise, the poor old man was sitting on the floor with his teeth clenched(咬紧) and the palm of his hand bleed.
试卷答案
1.
略
2.Last Sunday I witness a traffic accident on my way home. I was wandering down the
witnessed
sidewalk while there went ∧ loud crash. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten
when a
meters far away. I went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the
badly trapped
taxis. Luckily, they were rescued on time for people came to help them and called an
in
ambulance. As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that
It
they drove too fast. It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.
safety themselves
略
3.
My friend Dick was seven years old, and her sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take
his took
them to their aunt’s to play while she went to the city ^ buy some new clothes. They played for a hour,
to an
and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said, “Dick,
nice
cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece to your sister. But remembering to do it
pieces remember
like a gentleman.” “How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one piece to the
other person,” answered his aunt. Dick thought up this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to
about
his sister but said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine.”
and
略
4.1、heard 之后加of 2、why ---- what 3、month --- months
4、去掉they 之后were 5、come --- comes 6、or --- and 7、usually ---usual
8、hold --- holding 9、continuing --- continue 10、 if---because
5.
6.An old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, a bottle of whisky in his
came
hand. On the wall was a fly he took for a nail. The moment he tried to hang the bottle on it, they
it
fell and broke. When the landlady discovered what had been happened, she decided to do him
去掉 been
∧ favor. The next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the
a exactly
“fly” had been. Before the old man came back, the smell of the whisky reminded him ∧the
When of
accident. Looking at the spot what he thought the “fly” was again, he was so angry that he slapped
where
it with all his strengths. On hearing the loud cry, the landlady rushed in. To her surprise, the poor
strength
old man was sitting on the floor with his teeth clenched (咬紧) and the palm of his hand bleed.
Bleeding
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.
Dear Editor,
I’m the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do. For example,
when I ride my bike, my parents won’t let me to ride by myself. They are afraid I might
fall off my bike and hurt myself. They are taking great trouble to support a bike, with
my mother even carried a first-aid box. I’m not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not
let me ride alone?”Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything
for his children. This does no good on them. Too many love from parents may prevent
children from independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children do that they should do alone.
2.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Li. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So I had to move apart. Mr. Li now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His new apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Li doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.
3.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 没处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day, I was invited my friend Sam’s home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there. It was two month since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn’t know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill. Until then I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose. He went up to Bill and greeted him warmly, smiled at him. He looked very happily and talked with me excitedly. That night, we had a great fun together.
4.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
例如：It was very nice to get invitation to spend ?∧ ?weekend with you．Luckily I was? completely
???????????????????????????????????????? the am
free then, so I’ll to? say “yes”．I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in? Friday evening．
? on
As the world enters the 21st century, the development in science and technology will bring us much more hopes and chances we’ve never imagined before. People are hoping have a peaceful and highly developed world. To catch up with the new development and to be success in the new century，the young generation was required to have different kind of skills and abilities, such like the computer science and an English language. Otherwise one will be left behind. Young people would study even hard at school and prepare for themselves mentally and physically to meet the challenge of the new century.
5.短文改错（共10个错误；每个错误1分，满分10分）
共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'd like to tell you something about the problem of pollution we are facing to. As we know, the factory beside our school gave off heavy smoke all day long. Very loudly noises hurt our ears. Rubbish and waste are thrown here or there. It also sends out polluting water and poisonous gas. All this has done great harms to the health and study of the teachers and students. But as time goes on, a little has done to change the situation. I don't think you can study well after the problem is solved. We do hope you'll help and support us.
6.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
请你修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So we had to moved apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.
试卷答案
1.1.worried→worry前加are 2.去掉to 3.the→ a 4.carried→ carrying 5.angry→ angrily 6.his→ their 7.family→ families 8.many→ much 9.on→ to 10.that→ what
2.Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Li. He and I used to living
live
next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old
that
building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make
was
room for a main street. So I had to move apart. Mr. Li now lives in the suburbs near a
we
beautiful park. His new apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it
bigger
took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Li doesn’t seem to
takes However
worry about the long distance. He says that ∧ new subway line is to be built in a
a
few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.
years
3.
【小题1】Invited后面加to
【小题2】surprising 改成surprised
【小题3】month改成months
【小题4】how改成what
【小题5】but改成and
【小题6】realize改成realized
【小题7】He改成I
【小题8】Smile改成smiling
【小题9】Happily改成happy
【小题10】去掉a
考点：考查短文改错
4.1. much—many， 2 hoping 后加 to， 3.success——successful， 4.kind—kinds， 5. was–is，
6. like---as ， 7.an——the， 8.would---should/must， 9.hard---harder， 10. for去掉
5.I'd like to tell you something about the problem of pollution we are facing to. As we know, the
factory beside our school gave off heavy smoke all day long. Very loudly noises hurt our ears.
gives loud
Rubbish and waste are thrown here or there. It also sends out polluting water and poisonous gas.
and polluted
All this has done great harms to the health and study of the teachers and students. But as time goes
harm
on, a little has done to change the situation. I don't think you can study well after the problem is
been we before/ untile
solved. We do hope you'll help and support us.
6.
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
This morning I was riding a bicycle on my way to school while suddenly a shower of heavy rain began to pour down. The wind is blowing hard and the road became very slippery. Just then I saw an elderly woman walking with difficult in the street. She was on her way back to home after shopping, carried a large basket full of vegetables. Suddenly she fell down in the mud. And she was very worn out that she couldn’t get up. Seeing this, I immediate rode over to her and tried my best to support her up. Then I helped picking up the vegetables, and put them into her baskets. After that, I took off my raincoat, put on her and took her home.
2.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
3.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I'm writing to tell you about a shocked incident that happened in Beijing Zoo in the afternoon of Feb 23rd.
I was visiting the zoo that afternoon while I heard bears roaring terribly. I hurried to the place where the bears lived at. I saw the black bear badly injured and one of them roll on the ground painfully. It was hurt too serious to move a foot. The people around was shocked, angry and blaming the wrongdoer. I learned that was a student from a famous university in Beijing who caused the trouble. He pulled sulfur and acid onto the bears or pretending to feed them.
What an shame! Animals are our friends and something must be done to prevent them from being injured.
Sincerely Yours
Li Hua
4.短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As summer vacation are coming soon, my classmates are trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When they came here, I will show them around my university and the city just as well. I have decided to buy them some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My parents have done a lot for me, but I think it is high time that I did anything special to express my thanks.
5.短文改错（共10 分）
Some Americans judge success on the length of his vacations. The man who gets a month’s vacation each year consider himself more successful than the man gets two weeks. Many people want to be teachers because it are teachers who can get three-month vacation every year. Some college teachers who teach the three classes consider themselves less successful than that who teach only one or two, or none in all. In short, the less work Americans do, the less successful they consider themselves.
6.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在错误的地方增加、删除或改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear Editor,
I’m the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do. For example, when I ride my bike, my parents won’t let me to ride it by myself. They are afraid I might fall off my bike and hurt me. They are taking great trouble to support a bike, with my mother even carrying a first-aid box. I’m not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not let me ride alone?” Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything for our children. This do no good to them. Too many love from parents may prevent children from being independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children do that they should do alone.
Lucy
试卷答案
1.
2.
3.短文改错：Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you about a shocked incident that happened in Beijing
shocking
Zoo in the afternoon of Feb 23rd.
on
I was visiting the zoo that afternoon while I heard bears roaring terribly. I
when
hurried to the place where the bears lived at. I saw the black bear badly injured
which bears
and one of them roll on the ground painfully. It was hurt too serious to
rolling seriously
move a foot. The people around was shocked, angry and blaming the wrongdoer.
were
I learned that ^was a student from a famous university in
加 it
Beijing who caused the trouble. He pulled sulfur and acid onto the bears or
去掉or
pretending to feed them.
What an shame! Animals are our friends and something must be done to
a
prevent them from being injured.
Sincerely Yours
Li Hua
4.As summer vacation are coming soon, my classmates are 56. is
trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But 57.hard
I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from 58. mind
home for∧ first time in my life. My parents have agreed 59.the
to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When 60.visit
they came here, I will show them around my university 61. come
and the city just as well. I have decided to buy them 62. just
some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My 63.surprise
parents have done a lot for me, but I think it is high time 64.and
that I did anything special to express my thanks. 65.something
5.on-by his-their consider-considers the man-the man who/gets--getting are-is
get-get a 删去the that-those in- at less-more
6.worried---worry/are， let me to---去掉to， hurt me –hurt myself a bike --the bike， say angry--- say angrily， family---families our children ---us/their children, do no good---does, many love ---much， that they should ---what they should
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错 （共10小题，每题1分，满分10 分 ，注意答题规范）
Mr. Smith is an old man . He has a dog or a small car . He likes playing cards .Yesterday afternoon when he played cars for three hours in his friend house . It was getting dark, so he left there in the hurry and jumped into a car . His dog followed him , but it jumped into other car . “Come here ! What a fool !” Mr .Smith shouted at it .But the dog still stayed here . Mr . Smtih want to start the car , but the key didn’t turn . Then he looked the car again .It was not his . He was in the wrong car ! And the dog was in the right one . Realized that , Mr , Smith laughed
2.
A boy who was cleaning the shoes in the street said to a young man passed by,“Let me clean your boots. It just spends you only a penny.”But the man refused. Then the boy told him that he will clean his boots for nothing. The man agreed, and soon one of the boot shone brightly. Then he put the other boot on the box, and the boy refused to clean it if he was paid two pence for his work. The young man refused pay anything and went away. But the well-cleaning boot made the dirty one so bad that he could not walk on. He returned back and gave the boy two pence.
3.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分。
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I
the
was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in
am on
Friday.

“Will you come up with to my flat?” ask the spider to the fly. “At present it’s so pleasant to look up from so high. Because the clear sky it’s possible to see building such as theatres and hotels by the sea. So won’t you please make use of this chance to look?” The fly agreed immediate without the second thought. So as soon as she went up with a step so light that day, the spider caught and ate her and her was never see again.
4.下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave in
studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up
a company and researching the computer software. An old saying go: “Interest
is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this?idea. I began to be crazy about
English when I was a little girl. I got particular interested in?foreign cultures
or customs. To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day. It seemed
to be?the best “meal” of a day. As a result, I always did very well in English
exam.?Interest is the key to success.
5.短文改错（共10小题；毎小题1分，满分10分）?下面短文有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾）.并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉， 修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
?Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, 1 had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
6.短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
下面是一段文章，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles away from our farmhouse. Do you
want to know why we move last week? Dad had lost his job last year. As Mom
explained, he was lucky to find other one. His new job meant I had to say goodbye
to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make
matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow
is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
Please remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and
my best friend. Good night.
Yours,
Rosemary
试卷答案
1.or --- and ; 去掉when ; friend – friend’s ; the – a ; other – another ;stay here – stay there
want—wanted ; looked 后加上at ; And – but ; Realized – Realizing
2.
1. 将第一个the去掉 2. passed→passing 3. spends→costs 4. will→would5. boot→boots 6. and→but 7. if → unless 8. 在pay前加to 9. well-cleaning→well-cleaned 10. returned→turned或将back去掉
略
3.
4.1, richest 前加 the
2. gave in 改为 up
3．That 改为which
4. research 改为researched 或 去掉 and
5. go 改为goes
6. particular 改为 particularly
7. or 改为and
8. me 改为 my
9. in 去掉
10. exam改为exams
5.Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident
ago Unfortunately
and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents,
weeks
so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because
but would me
I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them
far
interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew ∧ truth. I still think
interesting the
that it was the right thing to do.
6.Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles away from our farmhouse. Do you
want to know why we move last week? Dad had lost his job last year. As Mom
moved
explained, he was lucky to find other one. His new job meant I had to say goodbye
another
to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make
classmates and
matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow
worse
is∧first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
the/my tired asleep
Please remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and
are
my best friend. Good night.
Yours,
Rosemary
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错 （共10小题，每题1分，满分10 分 ，注意答题规范）
Mr. Smith is an old man . He has a dog or a small car . He likes playing cards .Yesterday afternoon when he played cars for three hours in his friend house . It was getting dark, so he left there in the hurry and jumped into a car . His dog followed him , but it jumped into other car . “Come here ! What a fool !” Mr .Smith shouted at it .But the dog still stayed here . Mr . Smtih want to start the car , but the key didn’t turn . Then he looked the car again .It was not his . He was in the wrong car ! And the dog was in the right one . Realized that , Mr , Smith laughed
2.
A boy who was cleaning the shoes in the street said to a young man passed by,“Let me clean your boots. It just spends you only a penny.”But the man refused. Then the boy told him that he will clean his boots for nothing. The man agreed, and soon one of the boot shone brightly. Then he put the other boot on the box, and the boy refused to clean it if he was paid two pence for his work. The young man refused pay anything and went away. But the well-cleaning boot made the dirty one so bad that he could not walk on. He returned back and gave the boy two pence.
3.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分。
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I
the
was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in
am on
Friday.

“Will you come up with to my flat?” ask the spider to the fly. “At present it’s so pleasant to look up from so high. Because the clear sky it’s possible to see building such as theatres and hotels by the sea. So won’t you please make use of this chance to look?” The fly agreed immediate without the second thought. So as soon as she went up with a step so light that day, the spider caught and ate her and her was never see again.
4.下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave in
studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up
a company and researching the computer software. An old saying go: “Interest
is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this?idea. I began to be crazy about
English when I was a little girl. I got particular interested in?foreign cultures
or customs. To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day. It seemed
to be?the best “meal” of a day. As a result, I always did very well in English
exam.?Interest is the key to success.
5.短文改错（共10小题；毎小题1分，满分10分）?下面短文有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾）.并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉， 修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
?Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, 1 had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
6.短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
下面是一段文章，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles away from our farmhouse. Do you
want to know why we move last week? Dad had lost his job last year. As Mom
explained, he was lucky to find other one. His new job meant I had to say goodbye
to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make
matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow
is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
Please remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and
my best friend. Good night.
Yours,
Rosemary
试卷答案
1.or --- and ; 去掉when ; friend – friend’s ; the – a ; other – another ;stay here – stay there
want—wanted ; looked 后加上at ; And – but ; Realized – Realizing
2.
1. 将第一个the去掉 2. passed→passing 3. spends→costs 4. will→would5. boot→boots 6. and→but 7. if → unless 8. 在pay前加to 9. well-cleaning→well-cleaned 10. returned→turned或将back去掉
略
3.
4.1, richest 前加 the
2. gave in 改为 up
3．That 改为which
4. research 改为researched 或 去掉 and
5. go 改为goes
6. particular 改为 particularly
7. or 改为and
8. me 改为 my
9. in 去掉
10. exam改为exams
5.Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident
ago Unfortunately
and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents,
weeks
so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because
but would me
I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them
far
interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew ∧ truth. I still think
interesting the
that it was the right thing to do.
6.Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles away from our farmhouse. Do you
want to know why we move last week? Dad had lost his job last year. As Mom
moved
explained, he was lucky to find other one. His new job meant I had to say goodbye
another
to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make
classmates and
matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow
worse
is∧first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
the/my tired asleep
Please remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and
are
my best friend. Good night.
Yours,
Rosemary
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错（每小题1分，共10分）
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went shopping in the center of the city yesterday afternoon. It was six o’clock before I was going home by bus. The bus was full of passenger, all of whom kept silent. A mother with her little son were sitting nearby. All of a sudden, the son cried loudly. The mother tries to do what she could make him stop crying. However, the son went on crying. After a long time, a man sitting next to the mother said angrily, “Why don’t you give the child what she wants.” The mother answered quiet, “I would if I could, and what he wants is your hat.” Hearing of this, all the passengers burst into laughter.


2.书面表达（满分15分）
成功源于坚持不懈的努力。然而在生活中，有时候努力了，你也有可能达不到预期的目标。请用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，通过记叙你生活中这样的亲身经历或描述他人的故事，来谈谈你对成功的理解。
3.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
4.短文改错（满分15分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
5.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
Family is a most important part in my father’s life. He usually helps my mother do housework if he has any free time. Although he is a busy businessman, but he spends a lot of his free time hang out with my brother and me. He always supports my education. He sent me to the best schools and allow me to study abroad when I was 18. And he always listens to my idea even though they are stupid sometime. My father has a warm heart, whom is famous in our community. Most of my neighbors know my father because his kindness. Every time he sees the homeless in the street, he stops to give him some money. At weekends, he provides free rides for old people of our community.
6.短文改错 （共10处，每处1分，共10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday, mom and I went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. When we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. There were so many of them that it
spent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. Finally, under the help of the shop assistant,
he selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. Immediately, we returned back home to show it
to my grandpa. Seeing it, he was very happy and couldn’t wait to put on. But we were annoying
to find something was wrong with the zipper. Hurriedly, I took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem To my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose another one patiently. Stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smiling contently. How delighted I was!
试卷答案
1.
2.Possible version:
Version 1:
There is no doubt that everyone hopes to be successful. However, this doesn’t always happen as expected. For example, I can still remember the sports meet in the middle school, in which I took part in the 800-meter race. At first, I thought I could not finish such a long distance for I had no talent for sports. But I decided to practice running every day. Months of hard work rewarded me with the third place. Although I was not the first one, I finished the race. To me this was a success.
Personally, process is more important than result. As long as we have done our utmost in the process, we won’t feel sorry for ourselves though the result is not so satisfactory.
Version 2:
Success, as is known, results from constant efforts. However, not everyone can achieve desired success. Take my friend, Alex, for example, who has been dreaming of being a writer when he was only 15. After numerous attempts, his writings still couldn’t be published. Now he is a worker and yet he keeps on writing in his spare time. Though he can’t reach his aim, he never loses heart.
In my view, failure as well as success is part of our life. No matter how hard we try, sometimes we may still fail, but we can learn something from failure. In fact, failure doesn’t mean we lose everything. Only when we face failure properly can we understand the real meaning of success.
3.1. with改成on 2. so 去掉 3. have 改成has 4. healthy改成health 5. which 改成what
6. pay后面加a 7. her改成his 8. step 改成stepped 9. picture 改成pictures 10 many改成much
4.
5.1. a — the 2. any — some 3. but删除 4. hang — hanging
5. allow — allowed 6. idea — ideas 7. sometime — sometimes
8. whom — which 9. because ^ of 10. him — them
6.
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。?
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。?
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。?
注意： 1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；?
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last year, I was addicted with playing computer games. I found it hard to breaking away from the bad habit. My teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again. I tried hard, but I found it uselessly. The moment my fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable. Because I was determined to forget the games, I still could not concentrate on the lessons giving in classes.
Fortunately, psychological advisor in our school came to know this. He talks with me about his problem. At last, he offered his advices on how to get rid of the addiction. Now I can manage to control myself.
2.短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
When my father bought me a computer as a birthday gift in last year, I felt very exciting. As we all know, computers are getting more and more usefully now. Much information can be stored in them. We can also learn that has lately happened in the world on the internet. In the past, people have to do the work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers can do instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some exercises on my computer. Then it will correct them and tell me right answers. In this way it is very convenient for me to prepare the exam than before. The computer has become my real friend.
3.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面恒文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线．并在该词F面写土修改后的词
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从1l处起）不计分。
Today is Mother's Day. I love mother so much that I've done many things for him. In the morning,I buy some flowers with my pocket money and put Them in a vase.the moming,　in the afternoon,I went to buy some vegetable and cooked. simple but delicious dinner　for my fancily. After the meal, I gave mother a card what I made myself and said
'Happy Mother's Day" to her. Then I told her to pay more attention on her health and
net overwork . I also promised m help her to do some housework from today on. Heard the words, mother was moved to tests. Today is a specially day, warm but meaningfW.
4.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
On May 25, 1944, Roosevelt was re-elected the President of the United 76.______
States for the four time. A journalist interviewed him and asked, “How 77. ______
do you feel now?” Roosevelt smiled without answering any words, and 78._______
treated the journalist with three small sandwiches. The journalist failed 79. ______
to understand Roosevelt’s point, but felt honor, so he picked 80. _______
up the sandwich to eat. What he wasn’t hungry, he managed to 81. _______
finish all three sandwiches. Roosevelt picked up the 4th sandwich and 82. ______
asked him to eat it as well. The journalist looked embarrassing. 83. _______
So Roosevelt said, “I think I don’t need answer the question you’ve 84. _______
risen, for you have had your own experience now.” 85. _______
5.短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Sir,
How are you? As an exchange student, I am writing to
tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next
term, as I found it inconvenient to share a room with others.
My roommate often holds parties at night, made much noise.
Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me
a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If
you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the
only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the
same building and as near to the school campus as possible.
I would be thankfully if you could do me the favor.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
66. ________________
67. ________________
68. ________________
69. ________________
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73. ________________
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75. ________________
6.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend / weekend with you．Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”．I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday
on
evening．
Harvey had eight umbrellas but they were all broken．He decided have them repaired．He took the
umbrellas to the shop and left them here．The shopkeeper said, “They’ll be ready tomorrow．”
That evening Harvey went home from a office by bus．He sat next to an old woman．She had an
umbrella on the floor between the seat．When the bus reached his stop, he picked up her umbrella
and standing up．“Hey!” the woman said, “That umbrella belonged to me．” “I’m so sorry．”
Harvey said, giving it to him．“Please excuse me by taking your umbrella by mistake．” The next
day he was collected the umbrellas and got on the bus and saw the same woman．As he sat down,
she said, “You have certain had a successful day!”
试卷答案
1.Last year, I was addicted with playing computer games. I found it hard to breaking away from the bad habit.
to break
My teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again. I
tried hard, but I found it uselessly. The moment my fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable.
useless
Because I was determined to forget the games, I still could not concentrate on the lessons giving in classes.
Although/Though given
Fortunately, ∧psychological advisor in our school came to know this. He talks with me about his problem.
a talked
my
At last, he offered his advices on how to get rid of the addiction. Now I can manage to control myself.
advice
略
2.
略
3.
略
4.
略
5.66. 正确 67. 去掉in 68. found-find 69. made-making
70. that-which 71. attentions-attention 72. he-you 73. is后加to
74. and-but 75. thankfully-thankful
略
6.Harvey had eight umbrellas but they were all broken．He decided∧ have them repaired．He took
to
the umbrellas to the shop and left them here．The shopkeeper said, “They’ll be ready tomorrow．”
there
That evening Harvey went home from a office by bus．He sat next to an old woman．She had an
the
umbrella on the floor between the seat．When the bus reached his stop, he picked up her umbrella
seats
and standing up “Hey!” the woman said, “That umbrella belonged to me．” “I’m so sorry．”Harvey
stood belongs
said, giving it to him．“Please excuse me by taking your umbrella by mistake．The next day he was
her for
collected the umbrellas and got on the bus and saw the same woman．As he sat down, she said,
“You have certain had a successful day!”
certainly
略
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.
2.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文　中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As students, all of us will be faced a problem after passed the college
entrance examination. Should we choose a good major and a good university first?
Here are some different ideas. Some more prefer to choose a major first so they can
learn that they are interested in. In this way they can put their hearts into study and 　
got their favorite jobs in the future. Other believe that the environment is important
to one’s develop and that graduates from key universities are more likely to find
good jobs. As long as I’m concerned, the best choice is a good university if we can’t
obtain all.
3.短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
People often have troubles getting used to a new culture. They are usually curious when they first arrive a foreign country. Therefore, if they stay for a long time, they may start to feel different stages of culture shock. They can feel alone or sad because he can’t deal with the local people. How quick people get used to culture differences may be depend on the way they learn. That’s a problem if they can’t speak the language. On other hand, some can study the situation and make good guesses about the culture. When they finally began to understand some of the language and make some new friends, they will gradually enjoy themselves and feel satisfying.
4.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
例如：It was very nice to get invitation to spend ?∧ ?weekend with you. Luckily
???????????????????????????????????????? the
I was?completely free now, so I’ll to?say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at
? am
?around 8 pm in? Friday evening.
???????????? on
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
5.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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Dear Mr. Black，k*s@5%u
I’m very thank to yk*s@5%uou for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get help from you in my English learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I’ve promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much that I find difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy preparing for my examinations in present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Ying
6.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Under the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult work. Just clicking your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn't step out the room. It seems easy and quick. And there's always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from that you want, or the size is either too small nor too big. If you want to be different, you'd better not to buy clothes online. Once you put up the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people in the street wearing the same clothes like you.
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1.第一句：去掉that
第二句：towns
第三句：particular
第四句：which改成where
第五句：were改成are
第六句：have与child之间加a
第七句：with water 改成 of water
第八句：taught
第九句：without
第十句：himself
2.
3.troubles改为trouble;
arrive后加in 或at;
Therefore改为However;
alone改为lonely, he改为they;
quick改为quickly, may be depend on中删去be；
other前加the;
began改为begin, satisfying改为satisfied.
4.Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited ∧ a bus to come at a stop. 30
for
minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner
passed?????????????????????????????????????????????????? foot
5.Dear Mr. Black，
I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of
thankful coming dreaming
seeing you again so that I can get help from you in my English learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your
But
place in this summer. I’ve promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She
who
misses me too much that I find ∧ difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy preparing for my examinations in
so it at
present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you.
plan
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Ying
6. the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult . Just  your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn't step out  the room. It seems easy and quick.  there's always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from  you want, or the size is either too small  too big. If you want to be different, you'd better not to（去掉） buy clothes online. Once you put  the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people in the street wearing the same clothes  you
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell, and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”
2.下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A young man called Low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011． He suggests living a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air． For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something． While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light． Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving． Some people think what he is doing is just a show． No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us． As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior． Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life．
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m writing to invite you to visit China and spending the summer vacation with me. I have made wonderful plan for it. First, we can go to Qingdao, there it is cool and mild, and have funs at the seaside. Then we were to participate in a Taiji camp in the Wudang Mountains. You are curious about Chinese Kongfu, but I believe this is a good chance to learn it. Last of all, I have also been longed to take you to the countryside. We can stay there for a few days and visit to some relatives of me. I hope this plan suits you good and I am looking forward to your coming.
4.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。　　
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Today, at the local convenience store that I work, an elderly man with a guide
dog come in. He went to the shelf where there were all kind of greeting cards to choose one for his wife. He picked up a card, held it up extreme close to his face, and struggled read it. Just as I was about to walk over to help him, I found the little girl, who was about ten years old, asked him that he needed help. Before heard his answer, she started to read him almost every single greeting card out loud until when the elderly man smiled. He said, “That’s perfect! His wife will love that one!”
5.假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Mrs Smith was unable to fall sleeping at night and was tired during the day to do anything, even the simple things that she used to enjoy doing. She had headaches more often, it prevented her from reading or watched TV. The more she thought about her conditions, the more worse she felt. At last she went to see her doctor, whom she had known for year. The doctor listened to his heart and said, “There is nothing serious wrong with you, and I accept the fact that you don’t feel well. Now, I will give you some pills that will help. Come tomorrow morning and tell me how you felt. ”
6.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I just came back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the
students from different country to visit the UK from Feb. 16 to 28. We paid a visit
to a good many of places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much
about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked
Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful,
but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited
thing for me in Britain was that I make a lot of friends there.
试卷答案
1.
Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now
1. touching
listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going
from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all
2. because 3.himself
his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog
sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the
4.去掉was
people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell,
5.so
and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted
6.too
them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of
7.the
coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the
plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he
8.on 9.didn’t
petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when
10.gently
it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”
2.
A young man called Low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011． He suggests
became
living a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help
reducing carbon dioxide in the air．For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the
reduce he
street or uses the blank side to write something．While he is watching TV, he always turns
and
up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light．Therefore, he goes to work
down Besides
by bike instead of driving．Some people think what he is doing is just a show．No one can
live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us．As far as I am concerned,
simple inventions
I am strongly in support∧his and his behavior．Although what he is doing has no huge
of
effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life．
删除
3.
I’m writing to invite you to visit China and spending the summer
spend
vacation with me. I have made∧wonderful plan for it. First, we can
a
go to Qingdao, there it is cool and mild, and have funs at the seaside.
where fun
Then we were to participate in a Taiji camp in the Wudang Mountains.
are
You are curious about Chinese Kongfu, but I believe this is a good
so/and
chance to learn it. Last of all, I have also been longed to take you to
longing
the countryside. We can stay there for a few days and visit to some relatives
删除
of me. I hope this plan suits you good and I am looking
mine well
forward to your coming.
4.
Today, at the local convenience store that I work, an elderly man with a guide
where
dog come in. He went to the shelf where there were all kind of greeting cards to
came kinds
choose one for his wife. He picked up a card, held it up extreme close to his face,
extremely
and struggled∧read it. Just as I was about to walk over to help him, I found the
to a
little girl, who was about ten years old, asked him that he needed help. Before heard
whether/if hearing
his answer, she started to read him almost every single greeting card out loud until when
the elderly man smiled. He said, “That’s perfect! His wife will love that one!”
My
5.1 sleeping- asleep 2 was tired--- was too tired 3 it—which
4 watched---watching 5 the more worse--- the worse
6 year—years 7 his—her 8 serious---seriously
9 and--- but 10 felt ---feel
6.
just came back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the
lucky
students from different country to visit the UK from Feb. 16 to 28. We paid a visit
countries
to a good many of places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much
and
about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked
which
Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful,
many
but it was∧pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited
a we exciting
thing for me in Britain was that I make a lot of friends there.
made
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
This morning I got up early and went to school as usually, only to find there were nobody in the classroom because it is Sunday. “How a bad memory I have!” I couldn’t help laughing. Stand in front of the school gate, I began to wonder what to do next. Suddenly a good idea occurs to me. “Why not get together with some good friends for a picnic in such a fine weather?” I immediately telephoned some of my best friends, but they all agreed to join me. About two hours late, we finally arrived a pleasant park with trees and flowers here and there. We really enjoyed us greatly.
2.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Iric ,
I’m glad to accept your letter . After the college entrance 76. ________________
examination , I will have long summer holiday. I would like 77. ________________
to plan my holiday as follow . 78. ________________
First of all , I’d like to take a driving course because of driving 79.________________
is considered to be a necessary skill in modern society . Beside , 80. _______________
I would like to become a volunteer teacher in a rural area so 81. _______________
that I can put that I have learned to good use by teaching kids . 82. _______________
To tell the truth , I eager to make a long journey to some 83. _______________
distant places and explore new cultures , and I don’t have to 84. _______________
travel at my parents expense . 85. _______________
3.
31. Using social-networking site has been a terrible dream for me.Over a year ago，I had learned something about Super Girl Jane Chang's private life from a entertainer who had access to what was not shared with others.I wrote it on my MySpace page，meant to share it only between my friends.However，much to my surprise，I found it my post soon appeared on major entertainment websites，such as tom.com，caused a lot of fierce argument.
Fortunately，the person who made his article known didn't use my real name.Nevertheless，I would have been overcome by fans with uncontrollable emotion or considered trustworthy by my source.
4.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分） （请在答题纸上作答，否则无效）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. in Friday evening.
on
Last Saturday, mom and I went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. When we got to a big
store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. There were so many of them that it
spent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. Finally, under the help of the shop assistant,
he selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. Immediately, we returned back home to show it
to my grandpa. Seeing it, he was very happy and couldn’t wait to put on. But we were annoying
to find something was wrong with the zipper. Hurriedly, I took it back to the store and explained
the shop assistant the problem To my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose another
one patiently. Stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smiling
contently. How delighted I was!
5.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
I’m good at singing. I’ve been interested in music and dreamed of become a singer ever since my childhood. My parents began to teach me children’s songs until I was only three. After I started school I had more chances to enjoy various song, such as folk songs and popular songs, and practicing singing a lot. I like singing English songs as well, which greatly benefits me in my learning of English.
Practice makes perfectly. I have made great progress in singing and my efforts have paid for. Last year, I take part in a talent show and won prize.I think everyone is unique and has our advantages in some respects. I know my singing skills still need to be improved. But I’m confidence that I will serve our society with my songs in the future.
6.短文改错 （共10分,每小题1分，满分10分）
该自我介绍中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Sunday afternoon, I was shopping in the market while I met with one of my old friend,
Wang Li. She was working as a employee there. We have not seen each other for ten years. We talked happily the past times when we studied together. She told me that she had married with a man in her village and lived a poor life. And she was very regretfully that she hadn’t studied hard at
school. She then told me to value the precious time but tried to go to college to achieve her dream.
When I returned home that day, I thought a lot and promised that I would live in to my parents’
expectations.
试卷答案
1.改错:1.usually-usual 2.were-was 3.how-what 4. stand-standing 5. occurs-occurred 6.such a把a去掉 7.but-and 8.late- later 9. arrived∧at 10. us-ourselves
2.76. accept—receive 77. 加 a 78. follows 79. 去 of 80. Besides 81. √ 82. that --- what 83. 加 am 84. and --- but 85. parents’
3.31.【答案】Using social-networking  has been a terrible dream for me.Over a year ago，I had　 learned something about Super Girl Jane Chang's private life from  entertainer who had access to what was not shared with others.I wrote it on my MySpace page， to share it only  my friends.However，much to my surprise，I found  my post soon appeared on major entertainment websites，such as tom.com， caused a lot of fierce argument.
Fortunately，the person who made  article known didn't use my real name.，I would have been overcome by fans with uncontrollable emotion or considered  by my source.
4.
5.1.become 改为becoming 2.until 改为 when 3. Various song 改为Various songs
4.practicing 改为practiced 5.perfectly 改为perfect 6.paid for
改为pay off 7.take part in 改为 took part in
8.prize 前加 a 9.our 改为 his 或者her 10.confidence 改为confident
6.
略
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断。如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出所缺的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Are the years you spent at school best years of your life? 76.
Personally , I found most lesson rather uninteresting. We had to 77.
sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what the teachers 78.
were saying. They were used to write on the blackboard and ask 79.
us difficult questions. We also had to do piles of homework , and 80.
hand it on time. We had to wear school uniforms and obey lots of 81.
rules. I left school as soon as I can and started work. I read books 82.
at the public library , and late I decided to attend college. Now 83.
I really enjoy study because I’m growing old and know what I 84.
want it. When I was at school , I was just the wrong age! 85. ____
2.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿),并在其下面写出该 加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（︳）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday my husband received a letter from a lady who had been her student in middle school .She wrote it so she wanted to thank him for the greatly influence he had on her life.
She wrote , “You were the teacher who helped me discovering my talent for maths .Before you taught us,I had nevet thought I will love it . To my surprise ,you magically showed the beauty of maths for me .Gradually my interest in it was increased. Thanks to your teaching ,I made continuous progresses in maths ,and finally made my mind to study it as my major in university . Now I am an accountant of the big company.you played an important part. Thank you !”
3.短文改错
Last week I bought an English dictionary in a bookstore near my home. So when I
came home and read carefully I found that several page of the dictionary had been
missing. Worse still, the misprints spread everywhere the dictionary and serious
affected my reading. I went to a store to ask for a replacement. But to my surprised, the
staff of the bookstore turn down my request rudely and even denied the poor quality of
the dictionary. It goes without saying what a high standard of service is needed in
today’s society. However, to my regret, businessmen are fail to achieve this standard.
The quality of the staff needs improve.
4.请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There is no doubt whether scores are important for students. So today when I see the score,
90, on my test paper, my happiness was beyond words. I believed Mom was sure to praise for
me. On getting home, I raised a test paper before her and said proudly, “Mom, look at my
score!” Mom had a look at them. Surprisingly, she said calm, “Good, but I hope you can find out
the reason that ten points were taken away.” Heard the words, I stared in amazement for a while.
But since then I understand that it is important whether we have got high scores. It is whether
we know what we have learned or haven’t that really matter.
5.下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
????????? 2. 只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起） 不计分。???
Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate. However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best for it. I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determine who you are.
6.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 没处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day, I was invited my friend Sam’s home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there. It was two month since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn’t know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill. Until then I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose. He went up to Bill and greeted him warmly, smiled at him. He looked very happily and talked with me excitedly. That night, we had a great fun together.
试卷答案
1.76. best前加the 77. lesson改为lessons 78. paid改为pay
79.去掉used前的were 80. √ 81.on前加in 82. can改为could
83. late改为later 84. study改为studying 85. 去掉want后的it
2.1. student前的her改为his 2. so改为because / as / for
3. influence前的greatly改为great 4. discovering改为discover
5. will改为would 6. me前的for改为to
7. 去掉increased前的was / 把increased改为increasing
解析：本句的主语interest (兴趣) 是自然增加的，不能用被动语态。
8. progresses改为progress 9. made后加up
10. big前的the改为an
3.1.so—but, 2.page—pages, 3.in the dictionary, 4.serious—seriously, 5.a—the, 6.surprised—surprise, 7.turn—turned, 8.what—that, 9.are/, 10.improve—improving
4.
There is no doubt whether scores are important for students. So today when I see the score,
that saw
90, on my test paper, my happiness was beyond words. I believed Mom was sure to praise for
me. On getting home, I raised a test paper before her and said proudly, “Mom, look at my
the
score!” Mom had a look at them. Surprisingly, she said calm, “Good, but I hope you can find out
it calmly
the reason that ten points were taken away.” Heard the words, I stared in amazement for a while.
why Hearing
But since then I understand that it is ∧ important whether we have got high scores. It is whether
not
we know what we have learned or haven’t that really matter.
matters
5.1.disappointing—disappointed 2.find—found
3.However—Besides或Also或 Moreover 4.for—of
5.hardly—hard 6.teachers 前加my或the
7.student—students 8.what—which
9.去掉but后的that 10.determine—determines
6.
The other day, I was invited∧my friend Sam’s home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when
to surprised
I saw Bill there. It was two month since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn’t
months
know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask me to
what and
make up with Bill. Until then I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose. He went up
realized I
to Bill and greeted him warmly, smiled at him. He looked very happily and talked with me
smiling happy
excitedly. That night, we had a great fun together.
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错(满分10分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不记分。
Dear Mr.Black，
I'm very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation.I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get more help from you in my English learning.And I'm afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer.I've promised my grandmother，she lives in the country，to spend this summer with her.She misses me too much that I find difficult to refuse her request.I'm busy with preparing for my examinations at present.I planned to visit you in winter if it's convenient to you.
Best wishes.
Yours truly，
Li Ying
2.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been
thinking about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finished
your studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our
country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company in
our city hope to hire people like you. For other reason I think it will be too more convenient for
you to look after your parents as they are getting old. And this is only my point of view. It is up
to you to make right choice.
3.
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realized my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
4.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加删除或修改某个单词.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉.
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在改词下面写上修改后的词.
注意: 1. 每次错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Ralph,
I’m a college student and I’ll graduating in half a year. I’m very confused about my future, because find an ideal job is so difficult. At the moment, my parents want me to be a teacher, and I don’t like that idea. During my holiday break, I work part-time as a tour guide in my hometown. I liked a job very much. But my parents didn’t agree to me. They thought the work was difficulty, even though one could make a lot of money. That is the most important to me is that being a tour guide won’t take me far from home. I always consider what your parents say, but it’s hard for me to make a decision. Could you give me some advices?
John
5.短文改错:（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
文中共有10处错误，涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧ )，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ＼ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
My parents have decided to taking me to Britain for a visit．I am excited,
hoping to make good use this opportunity．Firstly, I will talk to native
speaker as much as I can to improve my English．Secondly, there were many
attractions that interests me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football,
which it is popular in England, is my favorite sport．I have been dreaming of
watching a living football match there but now the dream will come true.
My friend Alice lives in London．I will probable meet her. However I do, I
am sure I will have a good time．
6.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
I was angry about the act of dishonesty in the exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good student or I’ve never cheated. I once wrote the answer in my hand for a history test but , unlucky, was caught by my teacher. Because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at once. I thought cheat would help me keep my straight A’s. Little did I know that I was hurting not only herself but also my teacher. From this lesson I know teacher want students to succeed by learning on their own and do the best they can, not by cheating.
试卷答案
1.
略
2.
略
3.
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited ∧ a bus to come at a stop. 30
for
minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner
passed foot
had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught
than
it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize
the another did
my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now,
possibly
whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
losing
略
4.1. graduating→ graduate 2. find→ finding 3. and→ but
4. work→ worked 5. a job→ the job 6. to?with 7. difficulty→difficult
8. That→ What 9. your→ my 10. advices-advice
略
5.1. taking → take 2. use后加of 3. speaker → speakers
4.?were → are 5. interests → interest 6. 去掉it
7. living → live 8. but → and 9. probable → probably
10. However → Whatever
略
6.
略
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently, as the development of the Internet, there is a kind of language calling Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed with English letters. The other day our class had a discussion about if we should welcome the Web Language.
Forty percent of the students think it ridiculous. They argue that it does no good to help people communicate, nor is it useful for learning English. Besides, it’ll make Chinese more standard and pure, finally ruining our mother tongue. However, 69% of our class is fond of it. They think it is simple, convenience and helpful in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language more interesting.
Personally, it’s not good habit to use the Web language. It may be popular, but you may also make yourself be misunderstood.
2.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Sports and games are very useful for character training. In their lessons at the school, boys and girls may learn about such virtues like unselfishness, courage, discipline and love of one’s country. So what is learned in books cannot have the same deep effect on child’s character as what is learned by experience. As most of the pupils’ time is spent in classes study lessons, the ordinary day school can’t give many practical training for their lives in the future. So it is how the pupils do in the spare time that really prepare them to take their places in society as citizens when they grow up. Unless each of them learns to work for his team, and not for himself on the football field, he will later find it naturally to work for the good of his country instead only for his own benefit.
3.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When l was in high school, I had an awful experience．At that time l was so brave and outgoing as the others．Because of that, a boy name Big Tom would do all kinds of bad things to me．I was scaring to see him．
So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited me to dine out．I agreed．We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went well．By the end of that night, Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me．Now we have become close friends．
In our life, everyone may make mistakes．What counts most are that we have the courage to correct them．
4.
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day I happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. I found it prettily good.
One who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. Sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what we’re doing. We should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. What’s more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. When facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. In that case we are possible to neglect the details. So we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.
5.短文改错
This morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. At the noon we had a picnic on the grass. I eat too much, so I couldn’t finish my sandwich. As I didn’t know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advices. She pointed at the notice, that said, “ No litter.” And she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. Just then I saw an elephant coming slow towards us. Suddenly an idea came into her mind. I could feed the elephant by my sandwich and I did so in the end. Seen this, my sister smiled and said, “What clever you are!”
6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.
This family made deep impression on me. There were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money. Their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of us standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, held hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another performances where that they would see that night. Everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before.
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1.
Recently, as （改为with）the development of the Internet, there is a kind of language calling （改为called）Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed with English letters. The other day our class had a discussion about if （改为whether）we should welcome the Web Language.
Forty percent of the students think it ridiculous. They argue that it does no good to help （改为helping）people communicate, nor is it useful for learning English. Besides, it’ll make Chinese more （改为less） standard and pure, finally ruining our mother tongue. However, 69% of our class is （改为are）fond of it. They think it is simple, (convenience)convenient and helpful in expressing them（改为themselves）. What’s more, it may make the language more interesting.
Personally, it’s not＾（加a）good habit to use the Web language. It may be popular, but you may also make yourself be （去be）misunderstood.
2.1. at 后删the，在学校用at school
2. like 改为 as, such 和as 连用
3. So 改为But，前后句是转折关系
4. study改为 studying，spend some time doing sth.
5. many 改为 much, training 不可数用much 修饰
6. how改为what，do 后需要宾语用what
7. prepare改为 prepares，prepare的主语是一件事情用单数
8. Unless改为 If，句子意思应该是“如果每个人学会为团队工作。。。。”
9. naturally 改为 natural, find+it+形容词
10. instead 后加of， instead是副词，不能直接接宾语
3.
When I was in high school, I had an awful experience. At that time I was∧
not
so brave and outgoing as the others. Because of that, a boy name Big Tom
named
would do all kinds of bad things to me. I was scaring to see him.
scared
So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited
But invite
me to dine out. I agreed. We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went
everything
well. By the end of that night, Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me.
At had
Now we have become close friends.
In our life, everyone may make mistakes. What counts most are that we
is
have the courage to correct them.
4.
The other day I happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. I found it prettily good.
happened pretty
One who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. Sometimes it is the
attention
details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what we’re doing. We should
去掉in
form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. What’s more, we
because
should learn to keep∧balance of quantity and quality. When facing with lots of work, the faster
the faced或把with去掉
we do them , the more mistakes we usually make .In that case we are possible to neglect the
it likely
details. So we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no
which
importance.
5.第一处： 去掉第二个the 第二处： eat—ate
第三处： advices---advice 第四处： that---which
第五处： throw前加 to 第六处： slow---slowly
第七处： her---my 第八处： by---with/on
第九处： seen---seeing 第十处： What---How
6.
Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for
the circus. Finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.
between
This family made∧ deep impression on me. There were eight children, both probably
a all
under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money. Their clothes was not
were
expensive, and they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of us standing in line,
but them
two-by-two behind their parents, held hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns,
holding
elephants and another performances where that they would see that night .Everyone could
other 删除where
sense they have never been to the circus before.
had
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错（共10个错误；每个错误1分，满分10分）
共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'd like to tell you something about the problem of pollution we are facing to. As we know, the factory beside our school gave off heavy smoke all day long. Very loudly noises hurt our ears. Rubbish and waste are thrown here or there. It also sends out polluting water and poisonous gas. All this has done great harms to the health and study of the teachers and students. But as time goes on, a little has done to change the situation. I don't think you can study well after the problem is solved. We do hope you'll help and support us.
2.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
请你修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So we had to moved apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.
3.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, travelling can be an excited experience. Let me give you some advices that you have to pay attention. You can find out more about your destination by surf the internet before you set out. You needn’t take too many cash. Since it can be very convenient to pay in cash, using cheques is much more reliable. In additional, it will be wise of you to take an umbrella in case of it should rain. And if you are to travel abroad, you’d better understand the cultural diversity. Keep this in mind that being polite in foreign countries can help you had a wonderful trip.
4.短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分
On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members of “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Think it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it on rice and water. The lucky birds recovered soon. When it was time for the bird fly away, they felt pity but were very delighted. I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respect for nature. Only by changing the way that we treat the environment can we get along good with it.
5.短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.
6.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文　中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As students, all of us will be faced a problem after passed the college
entrance examination. Should we choose a good major and a good university first?
Here are some different ideas. Some more prefer to choose a major first so they can
learn that they are interested in. In this way they can put their hearts into study and 　
got their favorite jobs in the future. Other believe that the environment is important
to one’s develop and that graduates from key universities are more likely to find
good jobs. As long as I’m concerned, the best choice is a good university if we can’t
obtain all.
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1.I'd like to tell you something about the problem of pollution we are facing to. As we know, the
factory beside our school gave off heavy smoke all day long. Very loudly noises hurt our ears.
gives loud
Rubbish and waste are thrown here or there. It also sends out polluting water and poisonous gas.
and polluted
All this has done great harms to the health and study of the teachers and students. But as time goes
harm
on, a little has done to change the situation. I don't think you can study well after the problem is
been we before/ untile
solved. We do hope you'll help and support us.
2.
3.改错：1: excited-exciting 2: advices-advice 3.attention 后面加 to
4: surf-surfing 5.many-much 6. Since—Though 7. additional-addition 8.in case of去掉of 9. this-it 10. had-have
4.was---were catch---caught out---up Think---Thinking to home---home
but---and birds---bird fly---to fly him---them good---well
5.第一句：去掉that
第二句：towns
第三句：particular
第四句：which改成where
第五句：were改成are
第六句：have与child之间加a
第七句：with water 改成 of water
第八句：taught
第九句：without
第十句：himself
6.
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分） （请在答题纸上作答，否则无效）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. in Friday evening.
on
Last Saturday, mom and I went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. When we got to a big
store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. There were so many of them that it
spent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. Finally, under the help of the shop assistant,
he selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. Immediately, we returned back home to show it
to my grandpa. Seeing it, he was very happy and couldn’t wait to put on. But we were annoying
to find something was wrong with the zipper. Hurriedly, I took it back to the store and explained
the shop assistant the problem To my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose another
one patiently. Stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smiling
contently. How delighted I was!
2.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
I’m good at singing. I’ve been interested in music and dreamed of become a singer ever since my childhood. My parents began to teach me children’s songs until I was only three. After I started school I had more chances to enjoy various song, such as folk songs and popular songs, and practicing singing a lot. I like singing English songs as well, which greatly benefits me in my learning of English.
Practice makes perfectly. I have made great progress in singing and my efforts have paid for. Last year, I take part in a talent show and won prize.I think everyone is unique and has our advantages in some respects. I know my singing skills still need to be improved. But I’m confidence that I will serve our society with my songs in the future.
3.短文改错 （共10分,每小题1分，满分10分）
该自我介绍中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Sunday afternoon, I was shopping in the market while I met with one of my old friend,
Wang Li. She was working as a employee there. We have not seen each other for ten years. We talked happily the past times when we studied together. She told me that she had married with a man in her village and lived a poor life. And she was very regretfully that she hadn’t studied hard at
school. She then told me to value the precious time but tried to go to college to achieve her dream.
When I returned home that day, I thought a lot and promised that I would live in to my parents’
expectations.
4.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nearly 90 percent of the young people in our country use the Internet, but about half of them use them every day. They visit chat rooms and sending e-mails. More and more scientists has begun to wonder: Is the Internet good or bad for kid? Some of them think what it is impossible to answer that question because the Internet has so much things. What’s more, recently studies show the online world can be helpful at some ways and dangerous as well. It can be both an educational resource and hiding place for bad people.
5.短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
试题在答题纸上
第四节 书法展示：请用手写印刷体抄写下面短文（5分）
Recently, recycling textbooks has been put into practice in some provinces. As far as I am concerned, it is a good way which will benefit both society and us students.
For one thing, it is good news to students from poor families who can’t afford textbooks. For another, recycling textbooks can save natural resources. We are cutting down too many trees every day. In the long run, it helps to develop the students’ environmental awareness. What’s more, students may learn to share and work with others through recycling textbooks.
To sum up, I consider recycling textbooks useful and helpful.
6.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加.删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8p.m. in Friday
on
evening.
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
试卷答案
1.
2.1.become 改为becoming 2.until 改为 when 3. Various song 改为Various songs
4.practicing 改为practiced 5.perfectly 改为perfect 6.paid for
改为pay off 7.take part in 改为 took part in
8.prize 前加 a 9.our 改为 his 或者her 10.confidence 改为confident
3.
略
4.
略
5.Dear Brad,
I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s
asked
in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our  a Compared
parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house
harder
is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns
expensive
a house and a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love,
However houses
and I doubt how long it will last.
As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are
us
making great efforts∧ live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future.
to
Li Hua
略
6.
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2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the members of a family ，no matter where far away they are ，will try to get together in that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October 1621. In 1620， the group of Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts. They were looking for a freely place to live in as they chose. So they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved death. The next spring ，they began farming. With the help of local Indians ，they learned to be plant corn and raise animals. In the fall ，the fields produced a good harvest. Filling with joy and thanks to God ，they held a celebration. In 1863，it became a national holiday.
2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）花掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第1处起）不计分。
A few years before, Jack and I had a quarrel over score in a football match. From then on, we didn’t speak to each other any longer.
One day, when I was standing by a tree read, a ball flew to me and I kicked it back with looking at the player, but while I put up my head, I found it was Jack. Seen him, I was feeling very embarrassed. However, he was smiled to me, so I smiled either. Then we began to make up.
This way the walls between us were torn down with a smile but we become good friends again.
3.
假设你叫李华，是新浪微博（sina microblog）的一名实名注册用户。最近你在网上看了一部经典的电影《阿甘正传》（Forrest Gump），觉得很值得一看，并在微博中向广大博友推荐该部影片。
观看影片：《阿甘正传》；出品年份：1994年；主演：Tom Hanks，获六项奥斯卡大奖
内容介绍：阿甘（Forrest Gump）用乐观的态度，面对生活中不确定的因素带来的各种挑战和困难
推荐理由：1、树立了一个好榜样，激励我们勇敢面对挑战，永不放弃,对我们高三学生很有指导意义；
2、观看英文影片有利于提高我们英语的听说水平，帮助我们了解更多的外国文化。
建议：博友们介绍几部自己最欣赏的电影，相互交流
【写作内容】 根据以上内容要点，用英语写一篇微博推荐该影片，写作要点：
1. 向大家推荐这部制作于1994年的经典影片； 2. 推荐的理由；3. 向博友们建议。
参考词汇： 奥斯卡Oscar
【写作要求】 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 开头已为你写好。
4.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（√)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(／)划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分．
Last summer , I had a unforgettable experience. It happened on my uncle’s farm which there are many flowers. In a Saturday morning, we heard a great noise coming outside. Looking out the window, I saw a mass of bees flown above the farm. There were too many bees that the whole farm seemed dark.We were very frightening. For some moments, the bees advanced our house. My uncle were draggedme into the back room which was very dark. We covered us with a blanket, shaking with fear. A few hours later,we came out of the back room and found the bees had flown away.
5.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Once there lived a boy was very fond of reading. But he was so poor to buy any books. So she had to borrow them from a rich man lived far away. The boy always tried hard to finish read the books and returned it to the owner within the given time. So the rich man was willing to lend him any of the books he wanted. In this way he read a lot of and late became a well-known writer of his time. So, the rich man's son who don't like to study remained a man with little knowledge.
6.下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realized my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
试卷答案
1.
Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the
holidays
members of a family，no matter where far away they are，will try to get together
how
in that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October 1621. In 1620，the
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group of Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts. They were looking for a freely place to
free
live in as they chose. So they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved∧death.
But to
The next spring，they began farming. With the help of local Indians，they learned to
be plant corn and raise animals. In the fall ，the fields produced a good harvest. Filling
Filled
with joy and thanks to God ，they held a celebration. In 1863，it became a national holiday.
2.第一处：before改为ago。第二处：score改为a score。第三处：longer改为more。第四处：read改为reading。第五处： with改为without。第六处：while改为when。第七处：Seen改为Seeing。第八处：第一个smiled改为smiling。第九处：either改为too。第十处：but改为and。
3.
Dear bloggers，
I am glad to share one of my favorite movies, Forest Gump, with you. The film Forest Gump, made in 1994, was starred by a famous actor Tom Hanks and finally won six Oscar prizes. In the movie, Mr. Gump sets us a good example to face challenges bravely and never to give up, which is instructive to us Senior 3 students. Besides, watching English movies is good to improve our listening and speaking skills in English and it can also help us learn more foreign culture. My dear bloggers, I suggest we each recommend several movies so that we can share our favourite.
4.
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many flowers. In a Saturday morning, we heard a great noise coming outside. Looking out∧the
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window,I saw a mass of bees flown above the farm. There were too many bees that the whole farm
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seemed dark.We were very frightening. For some moments, the bees advanced∧our house. My
frightened towards/on
uncle were dragged me into the back room which was very dark. We covered us with a blanket,
去掉 ourselves
shaking with fear. A few hours later,we came out of the back room and found the bees had flown
away.
5.
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always tried hard to finish read the books and returned it to the owner within the given
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later However
son who don't like to study remained a man with little knowledge.
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6.
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2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.
请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two week ago. I have been thinking
about a question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after finish your studies
abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is bad needed nowadays in our country. It will be
quite easy for you find a good job. In fact, I knew a few big companies in our city hope
to hire people like you. For another one reason, I think it will be more convenient for you to
look after your parents but they are getting old. But this is only my point of view. It is up for
you to make a right choice.
2.短文改错
Dear Brad ,
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school . I feel uneasily recently . At home I
feel like prisoner . I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet . The only thing I have to
do it is studying . Every time I got a low mark , my parents will scold me sharply . There's a
generation gap among my parents and me , but it's always difficult to communicate . Life are
supposed to be colorful and wonderful , isn't it ? How should I devote all my time and energy
to the study so as to entering a good university ? I am very unhappy and lost . I need your help .
Best wishes ,
Li Ping
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waiting, he helps the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful.
4.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起计分。
I went shopping with my wife. We have a lot of things to buy. We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop. An hour late, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door. So we asked policeman for help. It was glad to help us. A few minute later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angrily. ‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car. What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.
5.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I was chosen to play the leading role in the play，that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl，I used to be quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encourage me to do so. Now I have changed great. In class，I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes. No pains，no gains. Now I am always brave enough overcome the difficulty in my heart and have changed in a lively girl. So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face but only in this way can we make progresses.
6.
短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加﹑删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计。
There is no doubt whether scores are important for students. So today when I saw the score, 90, on my math test paper, my happinesses was beyond words. I believed Mom was sure to praise for me. On getting home, I raised the test paper before her and said proud, “ Mom, look at my score!” Mom had a look at them. Surprisingly, she said calmly, “Good, but I hope you can find out the reason that ten points were taken away.” Heard the words, I stared amazement. Then I realized that it is not important whether we had got high scores. It is whether we know what we have learned or haven’t that really matter.
试卷答案
1.
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two week ago. I have been thinking
weeks
about a question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after finish your studies
the finishing
abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is bad needed nowadays in our country. It will be
what badly
quite easy for you ∧ find a good job. In fact, I knew a few big companies in our city hope
to know
to hire people like you. For another one reason, I think it will be more convenient for you to
look after your parents but they are getting old. But this is only my point of view. It is up for
as to
you to make a right choice.
2.1. grades---grade 2.uneasily---uneasy 3. prisoner前加a
4. 去掉it 5. got---get 6. among---between
7. but---so/and 8.are---is 9. How----Why 10.entering---enter
3.
Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he
so
could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to a big gardening company, knowing as
known
Green Fingers, for the interview. Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the
an who
garden, ∧looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the company, he
was或looked
found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job.
idea
While waiting, he helps the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily,
helped Luckily
he was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he
because
believed was helpful.
4.1 have ---- had
2 删去 the
3 after ---later
4 a policeman
5 it ---- he
6 minute --- minutes
7 how ----what
8 surprising----surprised
9 speak----- say
10 whath后加 do
5.
I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I was chosen to play the
called
leading role in the play，that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl，I used to be quite
which
afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encourage me
去掉 encouraged
to do so. Now I have changed great. In class，I am often the first one to stand up
greatly
and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes. No pains，no gains.
make
Now I am always brave enough∧overcome the difficulty in my heart and have
to
changed in a lively girl. So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of
into
losing face but only in this way can we make progresses.
and progress
6.1.whether—if或 / 2. happinesses —happiness 3. for me---me 4. proud—proudly 5. look at them—look at it 6. the reason that –the reason why 7. Heard—Hearing 8. amazement---in amazement 9. had got—have got 10. matter--matters
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.
假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换批改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the morning, I had a
dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because the water supply had cut off. The
water had come back in the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock.
After a short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class. After
a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got to home. Some work had been
done but some hadn't. I must review all my subject such as the Sciences, the
Humanities, which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as well. That's
terribly! Especially when there was no water.
2.文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改词均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
This morning I was about to leave for school then suddenly I heard my name called． She was Mother． “ John, puts on more clothes, and you’ll catch cold． It is so cold outside．” “ I don’t think it is cold today,” I said impatiently, ran away before she could say a word． Seated in front of the classroom, I was listening to my teacher careful． However, it was not yet nine o’clock when it was started to snow． I began to shake with cold． After all, a thin jacket is poor protection of the cold weather． I caught a bad cold． If only I had followed Mother’s advices!
3.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school． I feel uneasily recently． At home I feel
like prisoner． I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet． The only thing I have to do it is studying．Every time I got a low mark，my parents will blame me sharply． There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’s always difficult to communicate．Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university? I am very unhappy and lost． I need your help．
Best wishes，
Li Ping
4.
文中有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members of “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Think it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it on rice and water. The lucky bird recovered soon. When it was time for the bird to fly away, they felt pity but were very delightful. I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respects for nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.
5.短文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词;
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
I went to the wildlife park together with parents last Sunday. There were lots of visitors who standing before the ticket window. We waited long time and bought three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated to my parents. I had a hard time look for them, but I had no luck. Wander in the park, I felt lonely without any companions. Bad still, I had no money, but I had to walk home covering as much as 5 kilometers.
6.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of a lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．
试卷答案
1.1. On→In 2. have→had 3. 在cut前加上been 4. after→until 5. the→a 6. tired→tiring 7. 去掉to 8. subject→subjects 9. 正确 10. terribly→ terrible
2.
leave for school then suddenly… then改成when
She was Mother． She 改成It
…puts on more clothes… puts 改成put
…and you’ll catch cold… and 改成or
…ran away before she… ran改成running或者前加and
Seated in front of… front 前加the
…to my teacher careful． careful 改成carefully
…when it was started to… 去掉was
…protection of the cold weather of改成against或from
…followed Mother’s advices ! advices改成advice
3.
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school．I feel uneasily recently． At home I feel
grade uneasy
like∧prisoner．I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet．The only thing I have to do it is
a
studying．Every time I got a low mark，my parents will blame me sharply．There’s a generation gap
get
among my parents and me, but it’s always difficult to communicate．Life are supposed to be
between so/and is
colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as
Why
to entering a good university? I am very unhappy and lost． I need your help．
enter
Best wishes,
Li Ping
4.
was 改为 were;
catch 改为 caught;
out 改为 up;
Think 改为 Thinking
to 去掉
but 改为and
delightful 改为delighted
him 改为 them
respects 改为 respect
which 前加in；或把which 改成that；或把which 去掉
5.
I went to the wildlife park together with∧parents last Sunday. There were lots of visitors who
my 或其后加were
standing before the ticket window. We waited∧long time and bought three tickets. In the Tiger
a
Mountain of the park, I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my
eager frightening
steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated to my parents. I had a hard time look for
from looking
them, but I had no luck. Wander in the park, I felt lonely without any companions. Bad still, I
Wandering Worse
had no money, but I had to walk home, covering as much as 5 kilometers.
so
6.
Great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses,

which lie on the north of a lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious
lay a seriously
polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on
which Worse
the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal∧good soil．Now poor house have been
of houses
replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers
used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his
plough their
spare time boating and fishing．
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became worse. Now I know I was wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.
2.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Looking at the map of the world, and we can see that three quarters of the earth are covered by water. However, we are short of water, it sounds strange to you. But it is true. You see, 97% of the total water in the world is sea water, which is so salt that man can drink it. So only 3% of the water can be drunk or used for man. And the drinkable water comes from rivers, lakes and underground. Man even can’t use them completely, because the water contains icebergs and glaciers. All what is the worst is that water in some parts has been polluted or is being polluted. How can we drink? So something must be done to protect water from polluted.
3.短文改错
One day a child was playing with a vase in great value. He careless put his hand into it. Hard as he tried, he could not pull it out. His father tried his best, too, but their efforts were in a vain. They were thinking of breaking the vase whenever the father said,“now , my son, why have one more try? open your hand or hold your fingers straight as you saw I doing, and then pull.”to his surprise, the child says, “I can’t hold my fingers straight like that, because I don’t want to drop my penny.” Thousand of us sometimes are so busy hold on to the world’s worthless penny that we cannot achieve liberation.
4.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Health is more important than wealth．Good health makes it is possible for us to enjoy our life
and achieve what we hope in our career．To keep fit, firstly, it is much important for us to take more
fruits and vegetable because they provide vitamins．And we should keep a balancing diet and avoid
food what is rich in sugar and fat．Secondly, we'd better exercise every day to make our bodies as
strongly as possible．Beside, we should avoid too much work pressure．Finally, we should get rid of
bad habits that damaged our health, such as drinking and smoking．If we stick to the advice given
up, we will lead a healthy life．
5.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误和修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Steve was ten years old. He was a very good pupil, nor did he like doing his homework. When he did his homework, he always made a lot of mistake.
One day, his maths teacher went over Steve’s homework, see all his answers were right. He was very surprised instead being pleased. He asked Steve to explain what has happened, “ You have got all your answers correctly this time, Steve. Did anyone help you?”
As the matter of fact, Steve’s mother often helped him with her lessons. And that evening, she was not able to because she wasn’t in. So Steve answered, “ No, sir, my mother was busy last night, so I had to do the homework all for myself.”
6.
英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题。否则不给分。
It was snowing heavily Monday morning. Li Hua was at the bus stop, waited for Bus No.601 to go to school. After the while, the bus came and she got on it. There are many passengers in the bus. Some were talking but some were looking out of the windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. The driver turned around and said, “Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off and help push the bus.” When we heard this, Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus. They worked hardly together, pushing the bus slowly backward. Soon the bus was running again. All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.
试卷答案
1.
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in
when
greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until
great had
the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I
walking
still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates.
and
As∧result, the hurt in my foot became worse. Now I know I was wrong.
a am
We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can
their
not help others in return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily
with
and peacefully.
2.1. and --- / 2. are --- is 3. it --- which 4. salt --- salty 5. can --- can’t / ^ not
6. for--by 7. them --- it 8. what --- that 9. drink ^it 10. from ^ being
3.
1.第一句：in→of
2.第二句：careless→carelessly
3.第四句：去掉a
4.第五句：whenever→when
5.第五句：why与 have之间加 not
6.第六句：or→and
7. 第六句：I→me
8.第七句：says→said
9.第八句：thousand→thousands
10.第九句：hold→holding
4.
Health is more important than wealth．Good health makes it is possible for us to enjoy our life
and achieve what we hope∧in our career．To keep fit, firstly, it is much important for us to take
for very
more fruits and vegetable because they provide vitamins．And we should keep a balancing diet and
vegetables balanced
avoid food what is rich in sugar and fat．Secondly, we'd better exercise every day to make our
that/which
bodies as strongly as possible．Beside, we should avoid too much work pressure．Finally, we should
strong Besides
get rid of bad habits that damaged our health, such as drinking and smoking．If we stick to the
damage
advice given up, we will lead a healthy life．
above
5.
Steve was ten years old. He was∧a very good pupil, nor did he like doing his homework. When
not
he did his homework, he always made a lot of mistake.
mistakes
One day, his maths teacher went over Steve’s homework, see all his answers were right. He was
seeing
very surprised instead∧being pleased. He asked Steve to explain what has happened, “ You have
of had
got all your answers correctly this time, Steve. Did anyone help you?”
correct
As the matter of fact, Steve’s mother often helped him with her lessons. And that evening, she
a his But
was not able to because she wasn’t in. So Steve answered, “ No, sir, my mother was busy last night,
so I had to do the homework all for myself.”
by/ for
6.
It was snowing heavily∧Monday morning. Li Hua was at the bus stop, waited for Bus No.601 to
on waiting
go to school. After the while, the bus came and she got on it. There are many passengers in the bus.
a were
Some were talking but some were looking out of the windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. The
while
driver turned around and said, “Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off and help push
the bus.” When we heard this, Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus. They worked hardly
they passengers hard
together, pushing the bus slowly backward. Soon the bus was running again. All the passengers
forward
were smiling and the sun was shining.
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love,
Fiona
2.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
Last Sunday I witnessed a traffic accident on our way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went loud crash. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away. I went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. Luckily, they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance. As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast. It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.
3.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.
4.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分
The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. Can you guess that what we did there? Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer task. They reached the park at nine o'clock. The whole class divided into three groups. Group One planted trees and water flowers. Group Two picked up litter leaving by the tourists and cleaned all the benches. The group which I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's Playground. All of us worked hardly. Before noon we finished working. Each of us fell a little bit tired, so we were happy because we had done a good deed.
5.短文改错
I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again
and again, I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the
center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as
soon as we went into the store. It looked so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The
shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle. He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan,
that was too high for me. I just couldn’t afford such an expensive one. Then I choose
another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not so it was much better than the old one.
6.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could
also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred
yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of
the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers
after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month
after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was
when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
试卷答案
1.第一句：have----had
第二句：for----of
第三句：Unfortunate----Unfortunately
第四句：第一个for----as; mile----miles
第五句：unless-----until/till
第六句：here----there; as 后加a
第七句：They---We; 去掉to
2.
Last Sunday I witnessed a traffic accident on our way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk
my
while there went ∧ loud crash. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away.
when a
I went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. Luckily, they were
badly trapped
rescued on time for people came to help them and called an ambulance. As was clear that the taxi
in It
drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast. It reflected their lack of
concern for the safe of both others and them.
safety themselves
3.
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at
makes to
relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I
movies
can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the
the What
winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me ∧ go out. They
differently to
are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside,
fall Besides
they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To
kept
get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.
4.
The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. Can you
I
guess that what we did there? Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer labour. They
We
reached the park at nine o'clock. The whole class∧divided into three groups. Group One
was
planted trees and water flowers. Group Two picked up litter leaving by the tourists and cleaned
watered left
all the benches. The group which I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's Playground.
equipment
All of us worked hardly. Before noon we finished working. Each of us fell a little bit tired, so we
hard felt but
were happy because we had done a good deed.
5.1 real ---really 2 decided 后加to 3 locating –located
4 The –A 5 shopkeepers –shopkeeper 6 for 去掉
7 that –which 8 choose –chose 9 him –me 10 so –but
6.
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One
friends one
day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father∧the money.
which for
But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I
I
went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a
when
month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to
later gave
school on my own bicycle.
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加﹑删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend ,he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
2.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When we had our class, our psychology teacher would take any liquid medicine from a tiny bottle. This touched the whole classes. We thought that he should ask for leave and stayed at home for a rest, so he came to each class on time. Therefore, all of us studied psychology hard than we did any other subject. In the end of that term, we told him that how much we appreciated him. We were so worrying about her health that we asked him what disease he got and what medicine he took. With satisfied smile, he said, “I’m quite all right and it’s a bottle of tea.
3.短文改错（共10小题；满分10分；改动第11处不计分）
In the past, teachers always kept on to explaining the points in class. Our students just listened and take notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the teachers or ourselves. After class, we enjoy different kind of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read that we are interested in. We can go to the library and surf the Internet for variously kinds of information. In my opinion, exploring study does not help us learn much, but also make us to enjoy study and become masters of study.
4.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
5.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The way of communication in people’s life has changed a lot of in recent years. In the past, people keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or use the public telephone. But now almost everyone have a mobile phone. People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people have easy access the Internet, it enables them to send and accept e-mails whenever they like. With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficiently. It used to take them several days to hear from each other, and now it takes only several minutes, even if we are in two different continents.
6.短文改错
I went to the Summer Palace last week. At the gate I happen to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years. After that, we went boating in a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write each other in the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very gladly to have a chance to practice my oral English.
试卷答案
1.
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to
buying
Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for∧ long
there a
holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized
and
that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had
in
was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my
were luggage
friend ,he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
friend’s felt
2.
When we had our class, our psychology teacher would take any liquid
some
medicine from a tiny bottle. This touched the whole classes. We thought that he
class
should ask for a leave and stayed at home for a rest, so he came to each class on
stay but
time. Therefore, all of us studied psychology hard than we did any other subject.
harder
In the end of that term, we told that how much we appreciated him. We were so
At
worrying about her health that we asked him what disease he got and what
worried his
medicine he took. With ∧ satisfied smile, he said, “I’m quite all right and it’s a
a
bottle of tea.”
3.1 kept on to – kept on 2 our students – we students
3 take notes – took notes 4 raising – raised
5 kind of activities – kinds of activities 6 read that – read what
7 and surf – or surf 8 variously – various
9 not help – not only help 10 to enjoy – enjoy
略
4.
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old
deeply
man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and
knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people
worse directions/all 改any
around rush to pick the money up when the old man stood there, not know what to do.
rushed knowing
Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked∧. The old man counted the
up
money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of
missing /lost
nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
our that
5.
1. a lot of中的of去掉 2. keep—kept
3. use—using 4. have—has
5. access后加to 6. it—which
7. accept—receive 8. efficiently—efficient
9. and—but 10. we—they
6.
1. happen—happened 2. America—American
3. him—them 4. travel—travelling
5. with去掉 6. been去掉
7. in—on 8. address—addresses
9. wirte后加to 10. gladly—glad
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hot, but all was quiet．Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window．As I ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fall．When I come back into the house, it was raining more harder and harder．Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house．When I ran out to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．
2.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
No body language can be much attractive than smiling． Not only can beautiful smile make ourselves happy, but also it make others feel delighted．Smiling is very powerful that it gives people great courage to face and defeat disasters．A little boy calling Lang Zheng, for example, impressed and encouraged a great many of people when a serious earthquake hit Wen Chuan． Right after he is rescued by the soldiers from the ruin, he saluted and smiled to them． His smile was like sunshine and warmed people were trapped．n the disaster, It is safe to say that without smile our life would be colorless and hard．Try it but everything will be different!

3.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This autumn, my class went to the seaside to go camping. We arrived at a sandy beach with a well view of the sea and mountains. We set up our tents on the sandy beach. When night fell, we started a fire to give we light and kept us warm. All my classmates sat around them, talking, singing and laughing. Several hours late, Robert and I went back the tent to have the chat. We stayed up all night. We found that we two had a lot of in common. The fire and stars saw ourhappy and friendship. What I wished time would stop at the moment!
4.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mr. Black，
We're very gladly to have received your money and some reading materials. Thank you
very much.
We had been studying hard since we came back to school. Under the help of our teachers
and classmates, we have made great progress on our studies. So we often praised and
encouraged by our teachers and parents. We have made up our minds to study hard than before
to learn every subject well in order to be admitted to key university in the future.
We're looking forward to see you, but we have no chance to go to the Nanjing ourselves. So
we hope you can post us a photo of your soon.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
5.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
6.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
When we learn English, we always find we have difficulties in remembering the names of the months. Therefore, if we know something about the history of the months, possibly it won’t be very harder for us to remember them. The following is one of example. January named after God Janus. He was a strange god because he has two faces. He could look in two directions. He could look forward or backward at the same time. He was the god of endings and beginnings. January is the month on which one looks forward to the New Year and it’s also a period of time how people think about the past year.
Now can you share with us the stories about rest of the months?
试卷答案
1.
76．a 改为the 77．sudden改为suddenly 78．but改为and
79．out后加of 80．it改为them 81．drop改为drops
82．come改为came 83．more改为much或去掉 84．that改为what
85．broke改为broken
2.
No body language can be much attractive than smiling. Not only can ∧beautiful
more a
smile make ourselves happy, but also it make others feel delighted. Smiling is
makes
very powerful that it gives people great courage to face and defeat disasters. A little
so
boy calling Lang Zheng, for example, impressed and encouraged a great many of
called
people when a serious earthquake hit Wen Chuan. Right after he is rescued by the soldiers
was
from the ruin, he saluted and smiled to them. His smile was like sunshine and warmed
ruins
people∧were trapped in the disaster. It is safe to say that without smile our life would be
who或去掉were
colorless and hard. Try it but everything will be different!
and
3.
This autumn, my class went to the seaside to go camping. We arrived at a sandy beach with a well view of the sea and mountains. We set up our tents on the sandy beach. When night fell, we
good
started a fire to give we light and kept us warm. All my classmates sat around them, talking, singing
us keep it
and laughing. Several hours late, Robert and I went back ∧the tent to have the chat. We stayed up
later to a
all night. We found that we two had a lot of in common. The fire and stars saw our happy and
of去掉 happiness
friendship. What I wished time would stop at the moment!
How
4.
1. gladly改为glad 2. had 改为have 3. Under 改为With
4. on 改为in 5. we∧often 加are 6. hard 改为harder
7. university 改为universities 8. see 改为seeing
9. 去掉the 10. your 改为yours
5.
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.
visited
It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
and/so
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free
comfortable was
high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also
shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable
with taken
prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
dishes
It is such∧great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
a mine
1．visit→visited　根据时间状语last month可知本句时态是一般过去时，故动词用过去式。
2．but→and/so　前后文是承接或因果关系，故连词用and或so。
3．to去掉　anywhere是指地点的副词，其前不用介词。
4．comfortably→comfortable　修饰名词double-room应用形容词。
5．were→was　what引导主语从句，其谓语动词应用单数形式，故系动词were改为was。
6．for→with　动词share与介词with构成搭配，意思是“和某人分享”。
7．taking→taken　take与所修饰词photos是逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词作后置定语。
8．dish→dishes　由several修饰，名词应用复数。
9．such后加a　such修饰的hotel是可数名词单数，需加不定冠词a。
10．me→mine　双重所有格的构成是“of ＋名词性物主代词或名词所有格”。
6.
When we learn English, we always find we have difficulties in remembering the names of the
difficulty
months. Therefore, if we know something about the history of the months, possibly it won’t be
However
very harder for us to remember them. The following is one of example. January ∧named after
hard was
God Janus. He was a strange god because he has two faces. He could look in two directions. He
had
could look forward or backward at the same time. He was the god of endings and beginnings.
and
January is the month on which one looks forward to the New Year and it’s also a period of time
in
how people think about the past year.
when
Now can you share with us the stories about∧ rest of the months?
the
2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错
1.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意；1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词，
2．只允许修改10处错误，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is known to all that nothing is much precious than time. A famous saying goes, “Time is money”, which shows that time is invaluable. When time is gone, it will never return back. But it is pity that some people didn’t make full use of their time. They spend a lot of time sleep, chatting or playing computer game. They don’t realize that wasting time is actual equal to killing themselves. We always regret not having made great achievements. However, to be successful, they should first form the habit of being on time. Don’t put down what can be done today until tomorrow. Being lazy will eventually lead to failure.
2.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night. A car hit a motorbike. The motorbike driver badly hurt and sent to hospital. After a while, the traffic police came. Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth. The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control. At last he was taken to the police station. All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.
Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu. It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.
3.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Internet shopping is new way of shopping. It offers shoppers a number of benefits . The most importantly advantage is convenience. You can shop as you like as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day, but you do not have to queue with other shopper. Secondly, it is easy to find what you were looking for on the internet. Finally, it is often cheap to buy goods through the internet than in stores .
There are disadvantages too. The main disadvantage is that you can’t actually see the products what you are buying or check their quality. Also quite a little people will miss the opportunity to talk about friends while shopping . Besides, some people are worried about paying for goods use credit cards.
4.短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
My school life is very interesting but meaningful. I usually get up at a quarter past six. After I wash his face, I read English for about half an hour. I think what it is a good habit. I always go to school by bike, to eat lunch at school and have a short sleep in the classroom. On the afternoon school is over at 5 o’clock. After school, we often play basketball or do some other sport on the playground happy. I went home at about five forty. Have had supper, I watch TV for while, and then I do my homework. I go to bed at about 9:30.
5.短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1. 5分, 满分15分)
　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to class of foreign adult students.
After placing quite a number of everyday objects on a table, and he asked them to
give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth and the students
seemed interested in the work unless my friend turned to an Italian student and
said, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss.
Seeing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn’t heard him clearly. However,
he repeated, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian then kissed him on both cheek.
6.下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Get a good education is more important today than ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments through tax income. Students in Canada taught in English and in French. The rests of Canadian children attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees paying by parents. By law, children must attend the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different levels in the Canadian education system. The first was called Elementary Schools, which includes kindergartens through grade 7 or 8.
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1.改错It is known to all that nothing is much precious than time. A famous saying goes,
more
“ Time is money”, which shows that time is invaluable. When time is gone, it will never
return back. But it is∧pity that some people didn`t make full use of their time. They spend a
划掉back a don`t
lot of time sleep, chatting or playing computer game. They don`t realize that wasting time is
sleeping games
actual equal to killing themselves. We always regret not having made great achievements.
actually They
However, to be successful, they should first form the habit of being on time. Don`t put down
Therefore Off
2.【小题1】第二个on 去掉
【小题2】badly前加was
【小题3】Under With
【小题4】a the
【小题5】drinking drunk
【小题6】think thought
【小题7】Which As
【小题8】lose前加to
【小题9】accident accidents
【小题10】prevent prevented或加should
3.1. a 2.important 3.and 4.shoppers 5.are 6.cheaper 7. that/ 去what 8. few 9.With/to 10.using
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4.My school life is very interesting but meaningful. I usually get up at a quarter
and
past six. After I wash his face, I read English for about half an hour. I think what it is a
my that或删去what
good habit. I always go to school by bike, to eat lunch at school and have a short sleep in the classroom. On the afternoon school is over at 5 o’clock. After school, we often
In
play basketball or do some other sport on the playground happy. I went home at about sports happily go
five forty. Have had supper, I watch TV for ∧while, and then I do my homework. I Having a
go to bed at about 9:30.
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5.A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to ∧ class of foreign adult
giving a
students. After placing quite a number of everyday objects on a table, and he asked them
and
to give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth and the
him smoothly
students seemed interested in the work unless my friend turned to an Italian student
until
and said, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss.
surprised
Seeing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn’t heard him clearly. However , he
thought therefore
repeated, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian then kissed him on both cheek .
cheeks
略
6.1.Get-- Getting 2.mostly-- most 3.found --founded 4. in Canada∧-are 5.rests- rest
6.that –which 7.paying-- paid 8. the school 9.was –is 10.includes--include