Module 1 Feelings and impressions 主题作文讲练

外研版英语八（下）Module 1 Feelings and impressions 模块主题写作
整体感知
话题分析
本模块以“感觉和印象”为话题，学习对人物的外貌、性格特征的描述及谈论某人自身或对某事物的感觉和印象。具体到书面表达中，要求学生学会根据所学的语言知识描述某人，包括外貌、爱好、个性特征以及对人物的评价或印象等。
常用表达
1. I want/would like to tell/introduce my best friend, …, to you.
I want/would like to tell you sth. about my friend …
2. He/She is … years old. // He/She is about 1.67metres tall. //
She is pretty with two big eyes on her round face. // His/Her eyes are big.
He/She is quite tall, with short fair hair.// His/Her hair is short and fair and he/she has a big nose.
He/She always wears popular clothes. // He/She wears glasses. // He/She wears jeans and a T-shirt.
3. He/She is very kind. // He/She is kind to others. // He/She is helpful.
He/She often helps his classmates with the homework. // He/She also helps old woman cross the road.
He/She is generous to his/her friends, and he/she is willing to help all his/her friends when they need help.
He/She is generous to his/her friends. // He/She likes to share his/her things with his/her friends.
He/She has a sense of humour. // He/She can keep secrets for his/her friends.
4. His/Her hobbies are … // He/She likes/enjoys (doing) sth. // He/She good at …
5. I think he/she is a true friend.
6. 描述外貌的词有：tall, short, slim, thin, fat, well-built(体型匀称/健美的，结实的), overweight(超重的), medium(中等身材的), young, middle-aged(中年的), height(身高)。
7. 描述五官、发型、衣着的词有：round(圆的), square(方的), pale, big, large, small, bright, straight(直的), curly(卷曲的), smart, tidy。
8. 描述性格、品行的词有：careful, hard-working, worried, cheerful, active(积极的，活跃的), careless, helpful, dull, outgoing, gentle, friendly, energetic(精力充沛的), confident(自信的), selfish(自私的)。
实例分析
典型例题
假设你是李明，你的好朋友王英将要去英国。请根据下面的提示，给你的英国朋友Lucy写一封70词左右的信，向她介绍王英的基本情况，并希望她们能成为好朋友。
提示：1. 王英的年龄、外貌、性格和爱好；
2. 王英要去英国乔治·斯宾塞学校（George Spencer School）学习一年，她将乘飞机于8月1日下
午5:00到达伦敦希斯罗国际机场（London Heathrow International Airport）。
思路点拨
本文为提示性作文。写作时，首先应引出所要介绍的人物，然后具体介绍人物的外貌、性格、爱好等，最后写出自己的愿望。注意本文的时态应该用一般现在时和一般将来时。
步骤 构思 提纲
1 开门见山，引出人物 I want/would like to tell/introduce…
2 介绍人物外貌与性格特征和主要行为 She is… Her eyes are… Her hobbies are… She is going to study… She will arrive at…
3 表达愿望 I hope you two can become good friends.
连句成篇
Dear Lucy,
How is everything going I’d like to introduce my best friend, Wang Ying, to you.
She is 14 years old. Her eyes are big and she is very kind. Her hobbies are reading and singing. She is going to study at George Spencer School for one year. She will arrive at London Heathrow International Airport at 5:00 pm on 1st August. I hope you two can become good friends.
Yours,
Li Ming
范文欣赏
（一）在英语学习中，与北京阳光中学的同学朝夕相处，其中Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给我们留下了深刻的印象。请根据下面提示，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：Personality：helpful—help old woman cross the road；kind—work at the Helping Hands Club；
creative—creative a TV programme
点拨：人物介绍（年龄、外貌、身份、性格）→典型事例（性格、品质）→人物评价（喜爱、夸赞）
My friend Daniel
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses. He is good at playing computer games, but he dislikes sports. He has many good personal qualities. He is helpful. He often helps his classmates with the homework. He also helps old woman cross the road. He is kind to others. He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is creative. For example, he can create a TV programme. He is generous to his friends. He likes to share his things with them. So I want to be a person like Daniel from now on and get on well with everyone.
（二）假如你叫Lucy，请根据下面提示，给你的美国朋友Mary写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你的朋友Judy。
Judy有一双大眼睛，圆脸，长得很可爱。她对朋友很慷慨，总是在别人需要的时候帮助他们。她很有幽默感。与她在一起大家很开心。她会替朋友保守秘密，她是一个真正的朋友。
要求：语言流畅，条理清晰，书写工整，70词左右。
Dear Mary,
How are you I want to tell you something about my friend Judy. Judy is pretty with two big eyes on her round face. She is generous to her friends, and she is willing to help all her friends when they need help. She has a sense of humour. We are always very happy with her. She can keep secrets for her friends. I think she is a true friend.
Yours,
Lucy
自我展示
以My English friend为题，根据作文提示写一篇60词左右的短文。
1. Mike，16岁，1.67米，英国人，大鼻子，金黄的短发。
2. 喜欢穿流行的衣服；很受大家欢迎；是我们的好朋友。
3. 爱打篮球，爱拉小提琴，喜欢讲故事，让我们很快乐。
模块主题写作
My English friend
Mike is my best friend. He’s English and he’s 16 years old. He is about 1.67metres tall. His hair is short and fair and he has a big nose. He always wears popular clothes. He likes playing basketball and the violin. He also loves to tell us funny stories. He makes us very happy. He is our best friend, so we all like him.