Module 4 Seeing the doctor主题作文讲练（含答案）

外研版英语八（下）Module 4 Seeing the doctor 模块主题写作
整体感知
话题分析
本模块以“健康”为主题，围绕这一话题，学习有关针对别人健康问题提出合理建议及表达自身健康问题的语言知识。具体到书面表达上，要求学生能够运用所学知识表达自己的身体状况，并且能根据别人的健康问题提出合理化建议。同时正确使用本模块的用法知识。
常用表达
1. I fell ill. // I don’t feel well.
2. I’ve got a stomach ache and my head hurts.
3. I’ve been ill for about three days!
4. You spend too much time in front of the computer.
5. It can be very harmful to your health.
6. Here is some advice for you to keep healthy.
7. It is easy for us to have an illness during the time.
8. The doctor said I needed more exercise.
9. I hope you’ll be better soon.
实例分析
典型例题
假如你是Tom，你在美国的朋友Tony生病了，请你写一封电子邮件，并告诉他做如下事情：see a doctor; eat healthy food; have more fruit and vegetables; get enough sleep; stay happy.
思路点拨
本题要求写一封电子邮件，首先要注意电子邮件的格式，写好开头称呼及句首引出语。写作时，可以先就Jack的现状进行简单描述，然后根据提示词语给Jack提出建议，最后表达对Jack的良好祝愿。本文应该用一般现在时来描述。
步骤 构思 提纲
1 开门见山，引出话题 I’m sorry to hear that you are ill.
2 提出建议 see a doctor; eat healthy food; have more fruit and vegetables; get enough sleep; stay happy
3 表达祝愿 I hope you’ll be better soon.
连句成篇
Dear Tony,
I’m sorry to hear you are ill. You had a fever and had a headache. You should see a doctor first. Then you drink more water, eat healthy food, and have more fruit and vegetables. You should get enough sleep and stay happy. You shouldn’t study when you are too tired. It’s not good for your health. I hope you’ll be better soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Tom
范文欣赏
（一）假如你叫Merry。你的朋友Linda近来发现自己在发胖。她写信告诉你，说她为此很着急。请你写信给她提些建议，如何控制自己的体重。建议至少包括如下几个方面：1．饮食方面；2运动方面；3．看医生，听从医生的建议。
Dear Linda,
I’m sorry to hear that you are putting on weight recently. Here are some advice for you to lose weight. You’d better not eat too much between meals. Don’t eat food which is high in sugar, fat and salt. Why not do some exercise every day It’s good for you to control your weigh. At the same, you can also go to see the doctor and ask him or her to give you some more advice. It’s better to follow the doctors’ advice. Don’t worry about yourself too much.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Mary
（二）假如你是Henry，昨天收到朋友杰克的来信。他在信中说他经常生病，不知道怎样才能保持健康。请你根据下列提示信息给杰克回一封信，告诉他一些保持健康的一些方法。
保持健康的方法：1. 每天有足够的睡眠；2. 饮食要均衡，多吃一些水果和蔬菜； 3. 饭前要洗手；4. 每天要坚持锻炼；5. 每天多喝水，在睡觉前喝一杯牛奶。
注意：1. 词数为80左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter. I am sorry to hear that you often get sick. Here I’d like to give you some advice on how to keep healthy. First, you should have enough sleep every day. Secondly, you should eat a balanced diet. You can eat more fruit and vegetables. Thirdly, you must wash your hands before you have meals. Fourthly, you should take enough exercise every day. Finally, you should drink more water and you can drink a glass of milk before you go to bed. I hope my advice will be useful to you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Henry
（三）假设你们班要召开“珍爱生命，远离垃圾食品”主题班会，请你以 Feed me better为话题写一篇发言稿。词数：80左右。要点提示： 1. 健康的重要性；2. 吃哪些食物、怎样吃更健康；3. 保持健康的其他方法。
As a student, I know I need a healthy body and mind. With the development of science, there are many kinds of food. But most of them are junk food. Typical meals include rice, dumplings, meat and vegetables. In my opinion, we should eat more green vegetables and a little meat. Too much meat contains too much fat which is bad for health.
I think three meals must be eaten on time. I’ll eat healthy food and take exercise every day. I hope you all follow me and we’ll keep healthy.
自我展示
请根据下列提示信息，以The Way to Keep Healthy为题，用英语写一篇短文。
三要 五不要
1. 多吃水果和蔬菜；2. 晚上睡眠不少于8小时；3. 多运动。 1. 不要吃含脂肪太多的食品；2. 不要喝太多的咖啡；3. 不要工作太劳累；4. 不吸烟；5. 不要吃太多的糖。
注意：短文需包括以上所有信息，可以适当发挥。
模块主题写作参考答案
The Way to Keep Healthy
It’s very important for us to keep healthy in our daily life. But how Here is some advice for you to follow.
You should have a healthy diet. It’s necessary to eat enough fresh fruit and vegetables, because our bodies need all kinds of vitamins every day. But don’t eat too much fat, such as cheese, butter, or anything too fatty. Too much sweet can be bad for your teeth. So you’d better not eat too much chocolate and drink too much coffee.
Good habits can help you keep healthy. Doing exercise is certainly a good way to make you healthy. Do not work or study too late at night. Remember smoking is not good for your health, so never smoke.