外研版英语八(下)Module 6 Hobbies模块主题写作
整体感知
话题分析
本模块以“爱好”为话题,介绍了爱好对人们的影响及其重要作用。具体到书面表达中,要求同学们能够运用所学知识,介绍自己的业余爱好及原因,并且能叙述爱好给自己带来的益处或不良影响。
常用表达
1. My hobby is… // …is my favourite.
2. Hobbies can make me...// …can also help me…
3. I learned a lot from it.
4. I can enjoy myself from my hobbies. I love…
实例分析
典型例题
每个人都有自己的爱好。你的爱好是什么呢?请以“My hobby”为题,写一篇70词左右的短文,介绍自己的爱好,并且说明喜欢的原因。
思路点拨
本文为开放性作文。人们的爱好多种多样,如读书、绘画、唱歌、跳舞、体育运动等,写作时要选择自己最喜欢的进行描述。首先应该写出自己的爱好,然后介绍自己是如何喜欢上它的,并且说明喜欢的原因,最后可以用一句话结束文章,使其首尾呼应。
步骤 构思 提纲
1 开门见山,引出话题 Everyone has... I have…, but reading is my favourite...
2 描述爱好及原因 When I was . I learned a lot... As a result...
3 谈论对爱好的看法 I like reading best, because...
连句成篇
My hobby
Everyone has his own hobbies. I have many hobbies, but reading is my favourite all the time. It almost takes up all my free time. When I was seven years old, my mother gave me a book as my birthday present. I learned a lot from it. As a result, I was interested in reading. I like reading best, because it can not only bring me more useful things, but also teach me many skills of writing. Reading can also help me know a lot about the world. I can enjoy myself from my hobbies. I love reading.
范文欣赏
(一)请以“My hobby”为题写一篇短文,说说你的爱好是什么,你为什么喜欢它,以及它对你的学习和生活产生了什么样的影响。
要求:1. 语句通顺,合乎逻辑;2. 80词左右;3. 文中不能出现作者的真实信息。
My hobby
My hobby is doing sports. I used to be very weak. Now I’m strong because of doing sports. So I was interested in different kinds of sports, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. I kept doing sports at least half an hour a day. I was getting healthier and healthier.
When I feel tired, I do sports. It can make me relax and feel happy. Then I can study better. I think doing sports is really good hobby.
(二)根据中文提示和英文书信内容,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出,其字数不计入所完成的回信内。
假设你叫李明,是美国中学生Tom的笔友。请您根据他给你的电子邮件内容写一封回信。谈谈你的个人爱好情况及你对个人爱好的看法。
Dear Li Ming,I’d like to know what your hobby is. Do you spend much time on it My favourite hobby is collecting stamps. I’ve got a wonderful collection of them now. My father bought me the first stamp-album (集邮簿) when I was ten years old. I began to collect stamps from then on. It has brought me great enjoyment but it takes me a lot of time. Sometimes I forget to do my schoolwork. My mother wants me to stop it because she thinks it is bad for my study. What do you think about it Yours,Tom
Hi Tom,
It’s very nice to hear that you have a hobby of collecting stamps. I like doing sports and listening to music in my free time. But my real hobby is music. It takes me about half an hour to listen to it after I finish my homework every day. It makes me relaxed and happy. I think different people have different hobbies. Some hobbies are relaxing and others are creative. Anyway, hobbies can make us grow as a person, develop our interests and help us learn new skills. Sometimes they can bring us success. But we shouldn’t spend all our time on our favourite hobbies. There are many other interesting and important things to do in our life.
Yours,
Li Ming
(三)你在业余时间经常干什么?你的爱好是什么?这项爱好对你的生活有什么影响?请以“My hobby”为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,介绍一下你自己的爱好。
My hobby
Different people have different hobbies. Hobbies are important to us. They can make our life colourful.
I have many hobbies, such as collecting stamps, reading, swimming and fishing. Collecting stamps makes me learn more information about the world. Reading can makes me happy and excited. I can also learn more knowledge by reading books. Swimming makes me strong. When I’m tired, I often go fishing to relax.
These good hobbies can improve ourselves and make us grow as a person.
自我展示
根据下面表格中的信息,以丹尼斯的身份谈谈你的爱好。
Name Dennias
Hobby Surfing the Internet
Reason Funny and can get lots of information
How long For about two years
More information Send emails, enjoy music, chat with others and play computer games on the Internet
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯;2.可以适当地扩充内容;3.词数:80左右。
模块主题写作参考答案
My name is Dennias. I am 13 years old. I am a middle school student. I have many hobbies, such as playing football, swimming, skating, singing and so on. But I like surfing the Internet best. Because surfing the Internet can give me knowledge and make me happy. I became interested in surfing the Internet when I was 12. I usually surf the Internet at the weekend. I usually send emails, enjoy music, chat with others and play computer games on the Internet. But I don’t spend all my time on the Internet. I think it is bad for me. Surfing the Internet is my best friends. I can enjoy myself from it.