8下Module 8 Time off 主题作文讲练

外研版英语八（下）Module 8 Time off模块主题写作
整体感知
话题分析
本模块以“游记”为话题，介绍旅游休假的经历。具体到书面表达中，要求同学们能够运用所学知识来描述自己旅行的起因、经过及感受等。
常用表达
1. It’s famous for… It’s one of the…
2. It’s about…square kilometers.
3. It’s in the east/west/south/north of…
4. You can enjoy…
5. You can go there by… and it takes you about…
实例分析
典型例题
你喜欢旅游吗 我们的祖国地大物博, 有着很多让人流连忘返的美丽景观。你去过的那些地方中, 你最喜欢哪里
请你用英语写一篇80个词左右的短文, 介绍一处给你留下深刻印象的自然景观或旅游胜地, 题目自拟。
思路点拨
本题要求向别人介绍一处给自己留下深刻印象的自然景观或旅游胜地，所以文章体裁应该用记叙文；人称应该用第三人称；时态应该用一般过去时和一般现在时。文章可分为三部分：第一部分引出话题；第二部分具体介绍自然景观或旅游胜地；第三部分总结评论。
步骤 构思 提纲
1 开篇点题 There are many places of interest in Beijing.
2 描述景点 My favourite one is the Great Wall… It is… When we…
3 总结评论 The Great Wall is the pride of our nation.
连句成篇
Visiting the Great Wall
There are many places of interest in Beijing. And my favourite one is the Great Wall. It is about six or seven metres high and four or five metres wide. It has a long history of 2, 500 years. It was built by the Ancient Chinese working people.
When we stood on it, we saw around. There were mountains around it. It looked like a huge dragon. It’s so famous that many people coming from every part of the world visit it. The Great Wall is the pride of our nation.
范文欣赏
（一）请根据下表框中所提供的信息写一篇以 A trip to Kunming 为题的短文。70词左右。
main points Details
place Kunming
time last summer Fresh air and nice weather
people my parents and I
experience places of interest the stone Forest; the Dianchi Lake; the Black Dragon Pool
activities taking photos and going shopping
feelings excited and happy enjoy the trip and hoping to visit it again
A visit to Kunming
Last summer, my parents and I went a trip to Kunming. The air was fresh and the weather was nice there. We visited many places of interest, such as the stone Forest, the Dianchi Lake, the Black Dragon Pool and the Golden Temple. I really enjoyed beautiful views and we took a lot of photos there. We also went shopping there and bought many gifts for our friends and relatives. We were so excited and happy about the trip. I hope to visit Kunming again.
（二）假设你上周去了珠海，根据提示写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下游玩的过程及感受70词左右。
提示：1. 上周日早上8点在学校集合，老师带领我们乘车去珠海玩。
2. 我们在沙滩上玩，在海水里游泳，还去海洋公园(the Sea Par)看了动物表演。
3. 在珠海待了两天，过得很愉快。
Last Sunday, our teacher took us to Zhuhai for a trip by train. We met at eight in the morning in our school and we got there at about ten. We played on the beach and swam in the sea. We saw some beautiful fishes and some wonderful animal shows in the Sea Park. I also bought some gifts with my pocket money for my parents. We took many photos. We stayed in Zhuhai for two days and we had a wonderful time there. And I hope to go there again.
（三）假设上周你们去了青岛。请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下游玩的过程及感受。可适当拓展，70词左右。
提示：1. 上周日和朋友李轩乘火车到青岛；2. 首先参观了青岛的动物世界（Ocean In motion），在这里既体验到了惊险刺激的游戏，又在芭迪熊餐厅（Buddy Bear Restaurant）品味了美餐；3. 然后来到青岛海滩游玩，并和外国游客留影；4. 青岛是一个有趣的地方，还想再去一次。
Last Sunday I took a train to Qingdao with my friend, Li Xuan. At first we visited Ocean In Motion. It was wonderful! We not only enjoyed exciting games, but also tasted delicious food in Buddy Bear Restaurant. Then we went to the beach. And we took photos with some foreigners. Qingdao is an interesting place and I want to go there again.
自我展示
根据中英文提示，写一篇内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于80词的短文。
假如你是大明，上周六你和父母去颐和园游玩，请你向同学们介绍一下颐和园和你们的游玩经历及感受。开头已给出。
Distance (距离) twenty kilometers from the centre of the city
Size covers (覆盖) 2.9 square kilometers
Famous Tourist Spot(旅游景点) the Longevity Hill (万寿山)
提示词：lovely park, drive, find, decide, climb up to, view, foreigners, I hope…
My parents and I spent some time off in the Summer Palace last Saturday.
新外研版英语八（下）Module 8 Time off
模块主题写作
My parents and I spent some time off in the Summer Palace last Saturday. It is a lovely park in the west of Beijing. It’s only twenty kilometers from the center of the city. It covers 2.9 square kilometers. One of the famous tourist spot is the Longevity Hill. My father drove us to the park that morning and it took us about 2 hours. We found that there were many people in the park. So we decided to climb up to the top of the Longevity Hill. When we got there, we had a clear view of the whole park. There we met a few foreigners. They said that they liked Beijing very much. I was really proud of our city when I heard that. I hope our city will become more and more beautiful and people all over the world will come to visit it every year.