8下Module 9 Friendship 主题作文讲练

外研版英语八（下）Module 9 Friendship模块主题写作
整体感知
话题分析
本模块以“friendship(友谊)”为话题，讨论了拥有朋友的重要性及怎样询求建议或帮助解决朋友之间出现的问题。具体到书面表达中要求同学们能够运用所学的知识介绍自己的朋友或友谊，并能就朋友间出现的问题提出合理化建议。
常用表达
1. We’ve been friends for five years. 我们成为朋友5年了。
2. I have a problem with my friends. 我和我最好的朋友之间有问题了。
3. She refused to listen. 她拒绝听。
4. She doesn’t like me to see my friends. 她不喜欢我见我其他的朋友。
5. Try to find out whether she feels lonely without you. 试着去发现没有你，她是否会感到孤单。
6. It made me feel happy, lively and warm. 它让我感到幸福，有活力并且温暖。
实例分析
典型例题
你的好朋友李大伟转到了一所新学校, 面对陌生的环境, 他感到很不适应。因此他给你写了一封信, 征求你的意见。假设你是玲玲, 请用英语给他回一封信, 帮助他解决这一问题。词数: 70个左右。
Dear Lingling, I have a problem in the new school. I often feel lonely and worried. I have no close friends and I don’t know how to get on well with my classmates. What should I do Yours, Li Dawei
思路点拨
来信一开始就点出了自己的困惑，接着说出了自己困惑的原因，很明显，解决困惑是回信的重点。针对“如何与同学融洽相处”可以提出一些建议，如be friendly to them，try to help them等。最后，用一些总结性的话语结束全文。本文是说明文，用第二人称，一般现在时的来写作。
步骤 构思 提纲
1 开篇点题 Glad to receive your letter. In your letter, you said... ’ll give you some advice...
2 提出建议 First, you should be friendly to others. Second... Third...
3 结束语 If you do so, I believe that you’ll have more friends. ...
连句成篇
Dear Dawei,
Glad to receive your letter. In your letter, you said that you felt lonely and worried at your new school. Don’t worry about it. I’ll give you some advice on making friends.
First, you should be friendly to others. Try to make friends with your classmates whether you are at school or not. Second, you should try to help them when they are in trouble. Third, please give everyone a smile every day. In fact, everyone likes a smiling face.
If you do so, I believe that you’ll have more friends. Now do you know what you should do
Best wishes.
Yours,
Lingling
范文欣赏
（一）每个人都需要朋友，友情是一种很美妙的东西，可以让你在失落的时候变得高兴起来，可以让你走出苦海，去迎接新的人生。它就像一种你无法说出，又可以感到快乐无比的东西。只有拥有真正朋友的人，才能感受到它真正的美好之处。请你结合本模块所学内容以及你个人的感受，谈谈如何交朋友，如何获得友情。请以“How to make friends”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
How to make friends
It’s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time. It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests.
Don’t be afraid to show people what you are really good at. Talk about the things you like and do best.
Look at people in the eyes when you talk to them.
Be a good listener. Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself.
Be friendly to a lot of people. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed. That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends.
（二）假设你叫王芳，在平时的学习和生活中，你的好朋友刘丽给了你许多帮助，请你用英语给你的好朋友刘丽写几句感谢和祝福的话语。(桂林市2008年中考作文)
要求：1. 书写工整，卷面整洁；2. 写5句完整的句子；3. 文中不得出现人名和地名。
Dear Liu Li,
Thank you for helping me with my study. And thanks for looking after me when I was ill. Wish you happy and healthy forever. Wish you success! Good luck to you! Everything goes well.
Best wishes!
Wang Fang
（三）在初中的学习和生活中，你一定和同学们结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下列英语提示，写一篇不少于70词的英语短文，讲述你们之间的友谊。请不要使用真实的姓名和校名。
提示：1. Tell us who your best friend is. 2. What makes you get on well with him/her 3. One forgettable thing that happened between you two.
Among all my friends, I like Li Hua best. I regard her as my best friend because she is always helpful and friendly. What she attracts me is that she likes music, too. Whenever we have time, we listen to pop music together. Last month we went to a concert. The concert was wonderful. It makes us very excited. That day was one of the happiest days we had together.
自我展示
假如某英语报社举办有关朋友和友谊的征文，请你根据以下提示，发表自己的看法，写一篇70词左右的短文投给该报社。
提示：1. 每个人都需要朋友，没有朋友的人生就像失去了阳光。2. 朋友是可以分享快乐和痛苦的人。3. 朋友之间需要帮助。
新外研版英语八（下）Module 9 Friendship
模块主题写作
Friendship is very important in everyone’s life. Everyone needs good friends. People may feel lonely without friends. Life without is just like without sunshine. I think a friend can share both your happiness and sadness with you. They will come to you when you really need their help. You can believe them and tell your feelings to them. Wish everyone have a good friend.