外研版九年级上册Module 4 Home alone 同步作文讲解练习（含范文）

Module 4
Writing
话题分析
本模块以“Home alone”为话题，讲述了孩子与父母的关系，以及孩子独自在家的生活经历及感受，旨在强化学生独立自主的意识。学习了本模块化之后，学生应该学会用简单的状语从句来描述生活费中的一些经历。在命题角度上，一般提供一定的情景或喝喜酒词汇，学生可以选择自己记忆力深刻的经历，适当发挥，形成完整的文章。
常用表达
1. To make a timetable is necessary. 有必要制定一个作息时间表。
2. Get up on time every morning. 每天早上按时起床。
3. Watch TV for less than one hour. 每天看电视不能超过一小时。
4. Have three meals regularly. 三餐饭要有规律。
5. Remember to lock the door when going out. 外出时记得锁门。
6. Don’t open the door for strangers. 不要给陌生人开门。
7. I believe I would have a wonderful/great/good... time. 我相信我会玩得很开心。
【经典例题】
由于父母的溺爱，现在许多孩子基本不做学习以外的事情，导致缺乏独立生活的能力。请你根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立性。
Ways Things we can do
begin with our own things clean our own rooms …
help with housework cook…
learn actively learn by ourselves…
think about things by ourselves …
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2．须包含表格中的所有内容，并适当发挥；
3．80～100词。
【佳作欣赏】
As middle school students，it's very important for us to be independent.① What should we do to make us independent？②
First，③ let's begin with our own things.It's our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds.④ Second，③ help with housework.We can help cook or clean the house in our free time.Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves.⑤ Third，③ learn actively.We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time.⑥ Finally，③ think about things by ourselves.We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone.Don't always depend on others.
I think if we keep on doing these，we'll become more and more independent.⑦
【精彩点评】
①此句巧妙地借助“It is ＋ 形容词 ＋ for sb.to do sth.”这一句型点明了培养自己独立性的重要性，符合题目给出的语境，为下文论述如何培养自己的独立性作铺垫。as在此处作介词，意为“作为”，它的使用使人眼前一亮。
②疑问句的使用别具一格，同时起到了引领全篇的作用。“make sb.＋ 形容词”意为“使某人……”，将题设中的“培养”一词转化为make短语结构，准确又不累赘。
③文章涉及到自己的事情自己做、帮忙完成家务、积极主动学习和独立思考等方面，通过使用first、second、third和finally等副词，使文章条理清楚。
④该句使用高级结构“It is ＋名词＋ to do sth.” 承接上一句，详细地讲解了怎样开始做自己的事情。虽然句子较长，但句式结构简单明了，句意清晰。
⑤此句亮点频现：动名词形式作主语、teach sb.sth.(教某人某事)、how引导的宾语从句。
⑥短语by oneself(独自地)和on time(按时)用得别致、出彩，完全贴合主题“培养独立性”的要求。
⑦结尾句使用了if引导的条件状语从句、“keep on doing sth.”结构和“more and more ＋形容词”结构，使文章结构紧凑。本文最大的亮点是在句式使用上呈现出多样性，尤其是提建议的不同句型。此外，疑问句和祈使句的穿插、宾语从句和条件状语从句的使用，使得长短句相结合，文章读起来朗朗上口，富有余韵。
随堂讲练
假如你的父母出差不在家，你必须一个人在家待一两天。请根据以下提示，以“My first stay at home alone”为题，用英语写一篇介绍自己独自在家的经历的短文。
第一次独自留在家里的经历令我难忘。在我十二岁时，有一次父母都出差了，我独自在家生活了两天。第一天，我在他们离开不久后就起床了。在第一个晚上，我心里有点害怕，所以我打开所有的灯。我的卧室里整夜通明。为了第二天早上不起床晚，我在床附近设置三个闹钟分别在6：00，6：10和6：15响。第二天下午，我洗衣服和做饭。我为自己感到自豪，我想我长大了。
提示词：unforgettable难忘的；on business出差；feel proud of为……感到自豪。
注意：1. 所提供的信息必须用上。2. 条理清楚，语意连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。3. 不少于70个词。
写作模板
开篇点题 My first experience at home alone was unforgettable.
描述过程 In the morning, I got up... In the afternoon, I washed clothes... In the evening, ...
感受 I really felt proud of myself and thought I had grown up.
思路点拨
1. 体裁：记叙文；2. 人称：第一人称；3. 时态：一般过去时。
【答案】
My first stay at home alone
My first experience at home alone was unforgettable. When I was twelve, once both of my parents were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. I kept the light on in my bedroom the whole night. In order not to get up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms at 6: 00, 6: 10, and 6: 15. In order to show that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes and cooked dinner the second afternoon, though I could wait for Mother to do it.
I really felt proud of myself and thought I had grown up.
随堂练习
一
张勇的父母要去北京出差，他独自在家度过两周。张勇的父母走之前给他制定了一些规则。请依据以下提示写一篇英语短文（可以适当发挥）。
提示：1. 每天按时起床、吃三餐饭和睡觉；2. 上学不要迟到；3. 看电视不要超过一小时三餐饭；4. 认真完成作业；5. 不要给陌生人开门，记得锁门。
【答案】
My parents had to go to Beijing on business. They had to leave me alone at home for two weeks. Although they worried about me, they had no choice. Before they left, they made some rulers for me.
1. Get up, have three meals and go to bed on time every day.
2. Don’t be late for school.
3. Don’t watch TV for more than one hour.
4. Finish your homework carefully.
5. Don’t open the door for strangers. Remember to lock the door.
At first, I was happy without them. Because I would be free. But I found it hard for me to look after myself. I couldn’t cook dinner or wash clothes. And I felt lonely. Later I tried to learn to do the things my self. I was worried and happy during the two weeks.
二
由于父母的溺爱，现在许多孩子基本不做学习以外的事情，导致独立生活能力不强。请你根据下面表格的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立性。
Ways Things we can do
begin with our own things clean our own rooms, ...
help with housework cook, ...
learn actively learn by ourselves
think about things by ourselves ...
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2. 必须包含表格中所有内容，并做适当发挥；3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4. 词数70左右。（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
As middle school students, it’s very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make us independent First,
I think if we keep on doing these, we’ll become more and more independent.
【答案】
As middle school students, it’s very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make us independent First, let’s begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.
I think if we keep on doing these, we’ll become more and more independent.
三
林飞是一哥中学生，他的父母对他要求很严格，经常命令他做这做那，林飞对此感到厌倦，他希望父母能让他一个人独立生活。上周日，这样的机会到了……请根据以上提示，发挥你的想象，以Home alone为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍以下林飞的这次经历。
【答案】
Home alone
Lin Fei is a middle school student. His parents are very strict with him. He has a lot of things to do every day. His parents also want him to take part in all kinds of out of school activities. As time goes on, Lin Fei feels bored with his parents’ order. How he wishes that his parents would leave him alone. Last Sunday, his wish came true. He was happy when his parents went away on buiness, though he soon found that he couldn’t do simple things. He forgot his homework. He went to school with an empty stomach. He burnt his food and broke his father’s cup. Lin Fei had to learn to do tasks like cooking and tidying up. He realized being home alone was not always perfect.
四
假如今天是10月11日，星期六，父母去上海出差，你一个人在家。请根据下面提示，以Home alone for the first time为题，写一篇70词左右的英文日记，记录你今天的生活。可适当发挥。
上午 整理自己的房间，洗了自己的衣服
中午 做了一顿简单的午餐
下午 做作业，看电视。
【答案】
Saturday, October 11 Sunny
Home alone for the first time
My parents have gone to Shanghai on business, so I stay at home alone. In the morning, I tidied up my bedroom and washed my clothes. At noon, I cooked for the first time. It was a very simple delicious lunch. In the afternoon, I did my homework first, and then watched TV.
Although I’ve never stayed at home alone before, I’m doing very well. I’m really proud of myself!