Module 8 Sports life 同步作文讲解练习

Module 8
Writing
话题分析
本模块以“Sports life”为话题，谈论了运动比赛与运动员刘翔。运动与健康是常见的作文话题。该话题的命题形式很多，一般以叙述性或介绍性的文章为主，如介绍一种运动、一场比赛、一名体育明星或作一次有关体育的调查报告等，内容较简单。通过本模块的学习，学生应能够描写自己喜欢一种运动、一场比赛、一名体育明星或作一次有关体育的调查报告，并且指出喜欢的原因、运动带来的好处等，学生可以尝试用被动语态的句子来描写。
常用表达
1. He is one of the most famous... 他是最著名的……之一。
2. He is very...and he likes... 他非常……他喜欢……
3. He was born in... 他出生于……
4. When he was a child, he was interested in... 当他是一个小孩时，他就对……感兴趣。
5. He is very popular with... 他非常受……欢迎。
实例分析
典型例题
2014年1月25日，李娜获得澳网公开赛女子单打冠军，这是她继2011年法网登顶后再次夺得大满贯赛冠军，也是亚洲人首度夺得澳网单打冠军。假设你是王平，你的英国笔友玛丽给你发来一封邮件，想进一步了解李娜。下面是李娜的基本资料，请根据这些资料给玛丽回邮件，向她介绍李娜。
1. 李娜1982年2月26日出生于湖北省武汉市；
2. 六岁时，在父亲的影响下，开始练习打羽毛球；
3. 1997年，加入国家网球队。2002年底，在华中科技大学学习；
4. 李娜是中国最伟大的网球运动员，我们为她感到骄傲。
要求：1. 语句通顺，语意连贯；2. 用上所有提示内容；3. 邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4. 不少于60个词。
提示词：Australian Open singles title澳大利亚网球公开赛单打冠军，Grand Slam大满贯
思路点拨
1. 体裁：记叙文；2. 人称：第三人称；3. 时态：一般过去时。
写作模板
开篇点题 As you know, Li Na is a Chinese professional tennis player. She won the 2014 Australian Open women’s singles title on January 25, 2014...
描述事迹 Li Na was born on February 26, 1982, in Wuhan, Hubei, China. At the age of six, Li Na started playing badminton...
总结评价 Li Na is the greatest Chinese tennis player and we are proud of her because of her good performance.
连句成篇
Dear Mary,
As you know, Li Na is a Chinese professional tennis player. She won the 2014 Australian Open women’s singles title on January 25, 2014 and became the champion to win a Grand Slam again after she had already won the 2011 French Open women’s singles title. She becomes the first player from an Asian country to win the Australian Open singles title.
Li Na was born on February 26, 1982, in Wuhan, Hubei, China. At the age of six, Li Na started playing badminton, following her father’s footsteps. She joined China’s National Tennis Team in 1997. At the end of 2002, she studied at Huazhong University of Science and Technology.
Li Na is the greatest Chinese tennis player and we are proud of her because of her good performance.
Yours,
Wang Ping
【好题在线】
足球是世界上最受欢迎的运动之一。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80～100词的英语短文。
提示：1.足球在1900年巴黎奥运会上被正式列入比赛项目；
2．足球比赛要求男子队员年龄在23岁以下(每队可有三人超过23岁)；
3．女子足球在1996年进入奥运会，参赛队员至少16岁。
【话题分析】
本模块的话题为“运动和比赛”，其命题形式很多，一般以叙述性或介绍性的文章为主，例如：1.描述一种你最喜欢的运动；2.介绍学校或班级同学参加的运动种类；3.介绍现在流行的运动种类；4.介绍你最喜欢的运动员等。
【佳作欣赏】
Football is one of the most popular games in the world.① Football became an Olympic sport in 1900 in Paris Olympic Games.The men players are usually 23 or younger，but for each team three players can be older than 23.② Women's football was included in the Olympic Games for the first time in 1996.③ Women footballers must be at least 16.④ That is to say，women footballers can join the Olympic Games when they are 16.⑤
【精彩点评】
①开篇点题，简明扼要。“one of ＋ 形容词最高级 ＋名词的复数”意为“最……之一”，这一结构点明了足球的地位。
②副词usually尽管简单常见，此处却使用得准确恰当，为后面but所叙述的内容留有余地。此句接连使用比较级older和younger，使句子结构对称，朗朗上口。
③这句话写得很漂亮，前面写了男子足球，此句转入女子足球，使得文章内容更加完整充实。“include” 一词吸人眼球，避免了与前文中的“become”重复；一般过去时的被动语态是一大亮点；“for the first time(首次)”提升了文章的档次。
④“footballer”是“football”的派生词，相当于football player，此处使用footballer不仅避免了重复，还使句子结构更加简单凝练，读起来一气呵成。at least意为“至少”，此处也可以改写成“be older than”。本文最大的特点就是词汇丰富多变，避免了重复乏味，读起来趣味盎然。
⑤that's to say意为“也就是说”，这一连接词使文章过渡合理自然，浑然一体。
范文欣赏
（一）
假如昨天你们学校举行了运动会，比赛项目有跳远、跳高、400米极力赛、女子800米赛跑等。你们班表现很好，韩丽获得了女子800米赛跑的第一名，并且你们班在男子400米接力赛中也得了第一。
请你根据以上提示写一篇80词左右的日记。日记应包括所有的提示内容，可以适当增加细节。开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：relay lace 接力赛
July 16th, 2018 Wednesday Sunny
Yesterday our school held a sports meeting on the playground. There were many kinds of events in it, such as the long jump, the high jump, the 400-metre relay lace and the girls’ 800-metre race. Our class did well in the sports meeting. In the girls’ 800-metre race, Han Li from our class won the first prize. And our class beat other class in the boys’ the 400-metre relay lace. Our P.E. teacher was very pleased with us. We were very happy, too.
（二）
请以“身体运动和健康（Physical Exercise and Health）”为题写一篇短文，100词左右，短文包括以下要点：1. 身体运动增加血液循环；2. 身体运动使肌肉发达；3. 身体运动增进食欲并利于消化。
Physical Exercise and Health
Physical exercise increases the circulation of the blood. During exercise a man’s heart beats violently, whenever a muscle works it becomes warm, that is, more blood goes there. The heart forces blood into the muscles as quickly as possible. Exercise compels the body to use more oxygen and a larger quantity of waste matter is expelled from the body. This makes the constitution more healthy.
Physical exercise develops the muscles. Many a sportsman has big arms and legs, which are better adapted to hard work. The more a muscle is used, the harder and larger it becomes.
Physical exercise increases the appetite and favours digestion. A man who takes exercise needs more blood he uses. New blood requires food to keep it pure.
（三）
中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。某英文报“学生习作”专栏正在就“学生适当的放松方式（The Proper Way(s) for Students to Relax）”这一话题进行征文。假设你是初三（3）班的班长，最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行了调查。请根据表格提供的调查信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿。
对 象 初三（3）班
人 数 60人（男：31人；女：29人）
常用放松方式 1. 看电视（30人）2. 玩电脑游戏（12人）3. 听音乐（8人）4. 进行体育锻炼（5人）5. 没有时间放松（5人）
你的观点 哪一种（些）放松方式是适当的？为什么？
注意：1.短文包括对调查相关信息的介绍和你自己的观点；2.词数：80-100。题目和开头已为你写好，不记入总词数。
The Proper Way(s) for Students to Relax
I am the monitor of Class3, Grade 3. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. Recently I have made a survey of ways of relaxing in my class. Half of the students like watching TV to relax themselves. 12 of them like to play computer games while 8 of them enjoy listening to music. 5 students think doing sports is a good way to relax and another five think they are too busy to relax.
In my opinion, taking exercise is a proper way because it can relax our brains and eyes. Besides, it can help to improve our health. So I often play basketball after class. It’s really helpful to both my health and study.
四
请根据下列表格，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，简要介绍一下足球巨星梅西（Messi）。
1987.6.24 出生于阿根廷(Argentina) 2000 进入巴塞罗那俱乐部(Barcelona)
1992 开始为英格兰多里俱乐部(Grandoli)踢球 2008 参加北京奥运会；随阿根廷国奥队夺得金牌
1995~2000 为纽卡斯尔老伙计俱乐部(Newell’s Old Boys)踢球 2014 带领阿根廷队进入2014世界杯(the FIFA 2014 World Cup)决赛(the final)；获得金球奖(the Golden Ball)
Messi is one of the greatest football stars in the world. He was born on 24 June 1987 in Argentina. At the age of five, he started to football for Grandoli. In 1995, he joined the Newell’s Old Boys and played there for five years. In 2000, he joined Barcelona. Eight years later, Messi won a gold medal with the Argentina football team at the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. In the FIFA 2014 World Cup, Messi led Argentina to the final and he received the Golden Ball.