Module 10 Australia 同步作文讲解练习（含答案）

Module 10
Writing
话题分析
本模块以“Australia”为话题，介绍了澳大利亚的历史、饮食和文化以及西方国家的文化风俗等。旅游是学生们感兴趣的话题，更是中考命题的热点，出题率比较高。该话题的常见命题形式：1. 描写一个地方，介绍给朋友；2. 描写自己的一次旅游经历等。通过本模块的学习，要求学生能够利用图片等资料介绍景点及自己的经历；能够运用简单的that引导的定语从句描述某次旅游经历；能够用短语等表明事情发生的先后顺序。
常用表达
1. It lies... 它位于……
2. The air is very fresh. 空气非常清新。
3. It has a population of... 它有……人口。
4. It has a history of... 它有……的历史。
5. First... On the first day... Then... The next day... After that... Finally... 首先……在第一天……然后……第二天……那之后……最后……
实例分析
典型例题
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack和他的家人要来中国旅行。请给他写一封100词左右的信向他介绍一下中国，并且给他推荐一些著名的景点。
参考词汇：travel agency
思路点拨
1. 体裁：书信；2. 人称：第一、第二、第三人称；3. 时态：一般现在时。
写作模板
引入正题 I’m glad to hear that...
具体介绍 China is a great country... the weather...the Great Wall...
表达希望 I’m looking forward to...
连句成篇
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear that you and your family are coming to visit China.
China is a great country with a very long history, so there are lots of places of interest here. It is the best time for you to visit China in autumn. Because the weather then is neither too cold nor too hot. When you come here, you can first go to Beijing and pay a visit to the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and the Bird’s Nest. After that you can travel with agencies to other famous places, such as Jiuzhaigou, Guilin and so on.
I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【好题在线】
假如你和你的家人在国庆期间一起游览了天马山。请你根据以下提示，将游览经历写成一篇英语短文。
提示：1.天马山空气清新，并以其优美的景色而著称，如瀑布、绿草、美丽的花朵等；
2．你和家人用了一个小时就爬上了山顶，并在山顶玩游戏、唱歌、野餐；
3．下午五点回到家，感觉累，但很开心。
要求：1.80～100词；
2．语句通顺，可适当发挥，不能逐词翻译。
【话题分析】
本模块的话题为“国家和国籍”。一般情况下涉及的内容都与旅游相关。旅游是同学们比较感兴趣的话题，同时也是内容比较简单的话题，所以出题的频率很高。其常见的命题形式有：1.描写一个地方，把它介绍给别人；2.描述自己曾经的一次旅游经历等。
【佳作欣赏】
During the holiday of National Day，my family and I went to Mount Tianma.① Mount Tianma is a famous place that has many beautiful views，such as waterfalls，green grass and nice flowers.② And the air in Mount Tianma is quite clear.
It took us an hour to climb up to the top.③ What a beautiful view we saw at the top！④ We played games，sang songs and then had a picnic there.⑤
We got home at about 5：00 pm.Although we felt tired，we had a great time.⑥ I hope I can go there again.
【精彩点评】
①此句以时间状语开头，非常自然而又简洁地回应了题设的要求，点明了国庆节期间和家人一起游览天马山这一经历，也奠定了后文中描写游览行程的时态基础。
②that引导的定语从句不但描绘了天马山优美的景色，而且使文章结构紧凑。此外，such as后所列举的例子使文章细节丰富，句子充实而有生机。
③“it takes sb.＋时间/金钱＋ to do sth.”是表示“花费时间/金钱做某事”的常用表达，用在此处十分恰当。
④本句使用了感叹句结构：“What ＋ a/an ＋ 形容词/副词＋名词的单数(＋主语＋谓语)！”。感叹句所表达出的强烈语气符合作者对天马山优美景色的赞叹，增加了文章的可读性。
⑤“played”、 “sang”、 “had”用词简单却贴切，三个动词短语的并列为读者展现了作者一家人玩游戏、唱歌、野餐的欢乐场景，极具画面感和感染力。
⑥although引导的让步状语从句不仅句式精彩，而且非常到位地表达了作者一家人虽然累却快乐的心情。
（一）
假如你叫李明，现在在新西兰留学。国内的朋友李华给你发来了电子邮件想了解一些新西兰的风俗习惯。请你根据提示给他回复一封邮件。
提示：1. 在新西兰人们谈论的话题通常是天气和体育运动；2. 在新西兰，许多家庭都有自己的花园。周末人们要么在花园里劳动，要么出去度假；3. 如果应邀到新西兰人家里做客，没有必要带贵重的礼物，给男主人带一盒巧克力或一瓶酒，给女主人带一束鲜花即可。
注意：1.词数为80左右；2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：新西兰New Zealand, 男主人：host, 女主人：hostess, 一束：a bunch of
To:lihua1992@.cn
From:liming1990@.cn
Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your email. You want to know something about the customs in New Zealand. OK, let me tell you some. First, the topics that people in New Zealand talk about are usually weather and sports. Secondly, many families in New Zealand have their own gardens. On weekends, people either work in their garden or go out for their holidays. Thirdly, if you are invented to a New Zealander’s home for dinner, you don’t need to take very expensive gifts. You can take a box of chocolate or a bottle of wine to the host, or a bunch of flowers to the hostess.
Best wishes!
Your friend,
Li Ming
（二）
小明喜欢旅游，他去过泰国（Thailand）。在一次报告中，小明向同学们介绍了泰国。要点包括：1. 泰国有许多花草树木，是一个美丽的国家；2. 一些泰国人讲英语，同他们交谈很容易；3. 泰国有中国食物；4. 泰国一年四季变化不大。
请以“A Beautiful Country—Thailand”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A Beautiful Country—Thailand
Good morning, dear friends. I am very glad to give a talk about Thailand. I like traveling and I have been to Thailand. Thailand is a beautiful country. There are a lot of trees, flowers and grass in Thailand. Some people in Thailand speak English, so it is easy to talk with them. What’s more, you can find Chinese food in this country. The temperature in Thailand is almost the same all year round, so you can choose to Thailand whenever you like. If you have a chance to visit Thailand, I’m sure you will like it.
That’s all. Thank you.
（三）
你们学校的外籍老师Miss Green 要到海南岛去度假，她向你（Zhang Ming）了解情况。请你为她写一段简要的介绍。
内容包括：1. 海南岛位于中国的南部，全年多雨炎热；2. 在海南岛的度假活动可以有：钓鱼、游泳、潜水、冲浪、欣赏美丽风光等；3. 提示她带上度假必备品：太阳镜、伞、太阳帽等；4. 词数：100左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
提示词：潜水dive；太阳帽 sunhat。
Dear Miss Green,
A trip to Hainan is the best choice for your summer holiday. Hainan Island is in the south part of our country. The weather there is pretty pleasant.
Haikou city is the capital of Hainan Province while it is also the biggest city on the island. There, you could either go visit the flower markets or enjoy the delicious seafood. There, you could find many beautiful beaches. People there love walking along the seaside or swimming in the sea, and you can go swimming, diving, surfing and so on.
On Hainan Island, you could enjoy bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful scenery. The sunshine there is very heavy, do not forget to bring your sunshine glasses, umbrella and sunshine hat. You will never forget that.
Zhang Ming
四
你上个月与父母去北京度假了。在北京游览了很多地方，包括紫禁城、颐和园和长城等，你被这个现代化的大都市的发展所震惊了。同时给你留下深刻印象的还有人们的友好以及一些人甚至会说英语。请你写一篇100词左右的短文介绍一下你的北京之行。
参考词汇：admire钦佩；the Forbidden City紫禁城；the Summer Palace颐和园；the Great Wall。
I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents last month and we stayed there for a week.
To my surprise, Beijing is such a modern city that my parents and I all admire the development of it. We visited many wonderful places there, such as the the Forbidden, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. What impresses me most is that the people there are very friendly and some of them can even speak English. But I still think that there are some problems of this city which I dislike. There are too many people and the traffic is too heavy. If there were fewer people and less traffic, it would be better.